General:
- Orz at the timing finders, nice job.
- 00:35:680 (6) - New combo, it feels pretty long while playing.
- 00:45:522 (1) - It'd look much better if you add a repetition, de-stack from (1,2) and remove the new combo o.o
- There aren't spinners here. I suggest introducing one to prevent ties.
- Nice job, but you could've included some more custom claps till the end of the 1st chorus, as Kotori did. It'd sound pretty good =)
- 00:33:752 (4) - Add whistle to the repetition.
- 00:35:680 (2) - Add whistle at the beginning of the slider.
- 00:36:537 (3) - ^