hihi~!
all suggestions~
[Overall]add 'OP' and/or 'Opening' to tags
no[Kotori]This is the only difficulty that ends differently from the previous. Maybe end on 01:23:792? and add finish at that point as well?
[Insane]mm i think OD 7 fits better imo since kotori's is harder. But it's your choice of course~
no00:11:966 (4,5,6) - Because earlier there were jumps bigger than this spacing so I missed it first play through. Mm.. maybe New Combo on 4 so it's more distinct? and then NC here: 00:12:501 (6)
no, there is no spacing change00:24:501 (4) - and New combo here to separate from the previous rhythm
no00:31:359 (2) - imo NC here instead
no00:38:037 (2,3) - mm with AR 8, can't tell if it's a slider first or circle first. Maybe dont' stack?
no, that's quite easy to tell00:57:951 (1) - remove NC
no01:11:022 (2,3) - maybe dont' stack the slider (3) cause it's hard to read
no01:23:444 (1) - remove NC?
no[Hard]I suggest making combos a bit shorter in this perhaps?
no, they are generally based on lyrics and some are for patterns00:10:787 (1,2) - but I don't think this short combo is necessary so remove NC?
for pattern00:45:522 (1) - mm maybe dont' stack the tiny slider at the same spot. just because it's so small it's hard to see when the hit 300 is there:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/144814 it's already there for a while before the first 300 burst[Normal]00:09:073 (2) - maybe repeat this once and add a circle at 00:09:716?
noreally really good mapset
and the song's cute :3