Amadeus (TV Size)

00:01:967 (1,1) - this flow is awkward, I would place this on the left side instead at ~x:89 to make a bigger movement and have a good flow

00:02:983 (1,2,3) - Those walks are really rough I strong suggest to reduce those to a 1.0x~ distance. We are still in the intro so making strong walks is something you should avoid

00:05:695 (1,2,3) - Bit strange to make the walk between 00:05:695 (1,2) - stronger then 00:06:034 (2,3) - , 00:06:373 (3) - is a pretty unique sound and should have more emphasizing

00:06:373 (3,1) - The violin sound at 00:07:221 - is really gentle so making this a much easier walk is highly recommended, while you keep the jump between 00:07:221 (1,2) -

00:10:102 (1) - Bit strange to put antiflow on this slider the sound isn't strong at all or special so making it flow good would make much more sense

00:12:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - wrong snapping

(1) - 00:12:772
(2) - 00:12:814
(3) - 00:12:941
(4) - 00:13:005
(5) - 00:13:068

00:13:238 (1,2,3,4) - correct snapping but ugly. consider resnapping notes with ds 1.8-2.0x

00:14:170 (1,2) - Why is this a hyperdash? The strong sound is at 00:14:509 (3) - which you made a normal jump instead. Making 00:14:170 (1,2) - a normal jump would be good enough for this kind of drum

00:14:509 (3,4) - (3) is at x:0 which is ~not~ unrankable but still can't be done

00:14:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could you make it more vertical, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14068841/e7fb

00:15:521 (1,2) - high distance, reduce

00:16:034 (1,2,3,4) - Bit strange what you follow here, it would make much more sense to follow the drums in this section like you did in the other parts as well, this way you stay way more consistent all around the map and this way you can emphasize the downbeats propperly because you are skipping the one at 00:16:882 - for example

00:17:390 (1) - I would end this on 00:17:729 - instead this way you can emphasize the strong drum at 00:17:899 - with a 1/2 slider

00:17:560 (2,3) - Intentional edge dash? The sound on (3) isn't that relevant, so you can reduce the distance between those two objects

00:18:238 (1) - There shouldn't be a clap on the drum isn't strong so no hitsound should be fine

00:18:916 - I don't see a reason to not map this drum here, its pretty strong and skipping this in an overdose is a but strange imo

00:19:085 (1,2,3) - No reason to put a double hdash here, the sound isn't strong at all if you would compare it to the sound at 00:18:577 (2,3) - for example. I suggest keeping this just as a normal jump

00:20:102 (2) - If you're trying to follow the guitar + piano then ending this at 00:20:272 - and adding a circle at 00:20:441 - to emphasize this sound would make much more sense

00:20:611 (3,4,1) - Consider reducing the distance (3,4), without cancelling the hyperdash (4,5). A rather unexpected edge dash followed by a hyperdash is an easy spot to get random misses

00:20:950 (1,2) - I don't like the flow on this sliders, maybe curved them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13936580/601f

00:23:492 (3,1) - It's odd not to have a hyperdash between those objects, considering this section is kind of intense before the calm part starts. For example, you can move the head of (1) more to the left and create a vertical slider

00:24:848 (1) - Instead of putting a spinner here placing a circle to add a jump would make much more sense, the sound at 00:24:848 - is pretty strong and short and the spinning sound you can hear at which starts at 00:25:526 - is very minimal and should be ignored imo

00:24:848 (7) - Since the instrument just stops playing at the exact moment the slider ends, you can decrease the volume on 00:25:187 - so the hitsound accomodates better to the (lack of) music

so this 00:26:373 (1) - whole section to 00:32:983 (3) - had no hyperdashes and then 00:32:983 (3) - is a hyperdash that emphasizes literal nothing

00:26:882 (2,3) - Current flow isn't the best between those two objects. You can try shaping those sliders like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14084132/7e1c to have a more natural movement. Also tried to increase a bit the distance (2,3) to about 1,5-1,6x

00:27:390 (3) - This should be a slider because you are follow focals here and you can clearly hear it still until 00:27:560 -

00:27:729 (1,2) - Why is this walk so far, there is nothing strong to emphasize at all so keeping a walk of around 1.0x~ would play much nicer

00:27:983 (2,3) - not ugly but not cute either distance between objects. don't forget that ctb has aesthetics too :)

00:29:933 (1,2) - Missing jump for the vocal?

00:30:272 (3,1) - Intentional antiflow between those objects? Since it's a rather calm section, I'd try curving the slider the other way around (first vertical, then horizontal). You can also add a hyperdash between (3,1) as you did in other similar spots in this section where the new stanza starts

00:31:628 (2,1) - That high-pitched vocal would deserve a hyperdash added between those objects

00:32:305 (3,1,2,3) - Having 4 times the same distance plays very strange to me 00:32:644 (1,2) - This could be made into a hyperdash because 00:32:814 - is a stronger vocal

00:38:577 (1) - Overmap this should only be a circle, the buzzing sound you can hear is very short and is better expressed with a single circle imo

00:40:780 (3) - Bit strange to put a 1/2 slider here because you miss the opportunity to emphasize the strong sound and vocal at 00:40:950 -

00:41:119 (4,1) - Following partially #1251320 you can also add a hyperdash there. If you do so, try to adjust the new distance 00:41:289 (1,2) - since that'd become a quite tight jump

00:42:305 (3,4) - Why is this a hyper? the sound is very minimal and not special at all so this should be a walk imo

00:42:475 (4,1) - Edge dash should be a hyper imo so increase the distance here

00:44:339 (3) - Could add a jump here 00:44:509 - for the vocal and the drum

00:45:356 (1,2) - The sound at 00:45:611 (2) - is very minimal and not strong so making making this fully walkable is much better, This way you make The sound at 00:45:695 (3) - much more important

00:45:865 (1,2,3,4) - Putting this many jumps make it feel play very strange, it would make much more sense to put only a jump at 00:46:204 (2,3) - for the strong vocal

00:48:068 (1) - cymbal no hdash i guess you can fix that

00:48:407 (2,1) - Could add a hyperdash here for the strong drum sound which is pretty unique in this section

00:49:085 (3,1) - Missing hyperdash, the vocal is very strong at 00:49:255 (1) - so adding a hdash here is a must

00:49:255 (1,1) - No need to put a edge jump here, the vocal at 00:49:763 - isn't that strong so putting a normal jump here should be good enough

00:49:763 (1,2,3) - I'd avoid such stairs if there are edge dashes involved, especially referring to the jump (1,2), as they're quite tight to perform. Try to reduce the distances between those sliders a bit more

00:50:441 (3,1) - Missing hyper for the downbeat

00:50:780 (1,2) - Why is this a hyper, there is a no need to put a hyper on this sound, the drum isn't that special and there is no vocal which at this point

00:51:289 (3) - Bit strang to ignore the strong drum sound at 00:51:458 - you mapped similar sounds like this at 00:50:102 (2) - and 00:48:746 (1) -

00:51:967 (2) - I would not map this as a long slider because you are missing the opportunity to map sounds like:

00:52:305 - The strong drum
00:52:644 - The calm piano hit
00:52:814 - And the strong drum

00:52:983 (1,2,3) - A straight line of notes to map the vocals seems to be a bit underwhelming. Try introducing a higher distance (2,3) or a direction change

00:54:678 (1) - Why is this a repeat slider? You can clearly hear a different kind of sound at the downbeat at 00:54:848 - which should be emphasized with a jump

00:54:678 (1,1) - Strong vocal at 00:55:187 (1) - should have a hyperdash

00:56:204 (4,5) - There is no reason to put the hyperdash on the strong jump at 00:56:373 (5) - it should be placed on the strong downbeat at 00:56:204 (4) - which has vocal drum and piano

00:56:543 (6) - I would made this into a 1/2 slider, this way you can emphasize the strong drum at 00:56:543 (6) - with a hyper or jump

00:57:390 (2) - Bit strange to map all this as a long slider, would make much more sense to do the following

00:57:560 - Create a hdash for the downbeat
00:57:899 - Put a hdash for the strong drum
00:58:068 - Add a jump for the strong piano
00:58:238 - ^ but for the strong drum

00:57:390 (2) - The slider end isn't really properly timed on that 1/6 snap divisor. Maybe the ms difference to simplify this beat to the 1/1 divisor 00:57:560 - is quite noticeable, so better try to end it at the 1/8 snap divisor 00:57:602 - instead

00:59:424 (1) - I would end this slider on 00:59:763 - this way you can emphasize the strong drum at 00:59:933 -

01:00:780 (1,2) - No need to add this kind of intense jumps, the vocal is pretty calm and the strong vocal at 01:01:119 (3) - feels very unemphasized right now. Using this kind of pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13753531/ec99 would play much better

01:01:119 (3,4) - high distance, may be considered as edge dash

01:06:712 (3) - should be a hdash and probably just rotate it

01:08:746 should belong to provious combo
01:09:424,01:09:763 i will delete these 2 to make a little break

01:08:746 (1,2,3,1) - Such a low movement kills the flow a lot, I highly suggest to keep a 0.8x distance between at least.

01:08:746 (1) - no need for a hitsound on a slider end

01:10:102 (1,2,3) - Why are those notes so far apart from each other. 01:10:102 (1,2) - is a edge dash and 01:10:441 (2,3) - is a hyperdash which should all be walkable because the start of the kiai at 01:10:611 (3,1) - feels very unemphasized because you put so many intense jumps on the calm part

01:10:950 (1,2) - Edge dash should be reduced

01:11:288 (2,3) - This should be a hyperdash because the drum is very strong and should be emphasized more

01:11:797 (1) - You miss the opportunity to map the strong drum at 01:12:136 - with this repeat slider, I highly suggest to remove the repeat and add a jump for 01:12:136 -

01:12:644 (2,4) - Bit strange to ignore the drum at 01:12:814 - and 01:13:492 - with those slider, they are definitely worth a jump

01:14:339 (3,4) - Could add a hyper for the strong vocal at 01:14:678 -

01:14:678 (4,1) - Missing hyper for the downbeat at 01:15:017 (1) -

01:15:017 (1,2) - This shouldn't be a hyper, I know the drum is strong but the vocal here is not strong at all and should play much better as a normal jump.

01:15:695 (4,5,6) - Those jumps are very harsh and 01:16:034 (5,6) - is even a edge dash, I highly suggest to reduce the distance here