00:15:526 (1) - most intense part of the song starts here and you aren't giving us a hdash?? sad
00:21:289 (3,1) - oh god this flow sucks and i don't even know how to express what do i feel. please change this so it flows better (you can even add antiflow here)
00:38:238 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - change it maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13716795/2708
01:42:644 (5,6,7,1,2) - imo this whole part should be changed like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13722814/0ad4 , at least the reverse slider should be put here 01:43:322 and be shorter, also put here 01:43:153 another slider