Amadeus (TV Size)

00:08:407 (2) - you can make c shape like more clean and playable

00:09:424 (3,1,2) - this pattern is so hard for a cup, you can try this https://imgur.com/a/1Fn0YkQ

00:17:899 (2) - x:200?

00:18:238 (1) - making this a c shaped slider gives this a little bit more movement

00:18:916 - I'd move this slider a little closer to 00:18:238 (1) - and make it diagonal. Then flip 00:19:594 (1) - to the left and put 00:19:933 (2) - in the same spot as the sliderhead of 00:19:594 (1) - for a cleaner pattern there.

00:19:594 (1,2) - Same thing at #1140552. you can make a C shape because is more clean and playlable

00:19:594 (1,2) - I think this is a bit overmapped to be a cup :d

00:19:594 (1,2,3) - you want to keep a low density on a cup but here you've overmapped, a simple hit circle instead of (2) and a bit more distance to 3 will fix this and honestly make it more fun for newer players

00:22:305 (1,2) - This can be interpretad as a dash:d

00:24:678 (2) - x:152?

00:26:373 (1,2) - nerf this distance is sooo hardd

00:27:390 (2,2) - This should be approached since it can be interpreted as dash

00:32:644 (3) - this is very ambiguous and lazy, you should try other pattern, because the player only can stay still and catch it :d

00:32:644 (2) - the player stays very still, I recommend changing the pattern shape

00:40:950 (3) - You can move this to x:340 to prevent the player from being still

00:42:644 (3) - flip this and put it in the same spot for better flow

00:50:950 (2,1) - bit far here especially for a direction change, reduce distance to about 1-1.1x ds

00:52:814 (2) - You should move this slider off screen, because the player can be very still

00:55:865 (2,1,2) - nerf aaaaa

00:57:221 (3,1) - the "e/i" sound here starts on 00:57:390 - . If youre mapping vocals here you should make 00:57:221 (3) - a single note and start 00:57:560 (1) - on 00:57:390 -

00:57:560 (1) - feels very weird to have this follow the piano when you follow the sounds on 00:57:899 - and 00:58:238 - for the rest of the map

i'd change this up to follow those 2 sounds

00:58:407 (2,3) - this feels really uncomfortable and would be multiplied for newer players, maybe don't force a slight antiflow and ctrl+g the notes

01:01:628 (1,2,3) - This section don't have movement, is so ambiguos :d

01:01:628 (1,2) - another case where you can get better flow by flipping these, the inverse shape of the slider feels really weird for new players to play most of the time

try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13916225/89b8

01:04:339 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - too much consistent 1/2 usage in cup

simplify this rhythm and reduce density

for future reference, usually above 6 1/2 notes in a row at a medium range bpm (like 160-180) is starting to get a bit much for a cup, but is sometimes ok

01:07:051 (1,2,3,4) - the 1/2 density with the wiggle movement would cause issues for cup players, https://i.imgur.com/n78J7UJ.jpg either angle the sliders up like this, or replace the sliders with 1/1 hitcircles (this area is relatively dense already)

01:10:102 (1,1) - too far spacing, reduce

01:14:339 (3,4) - nerf the distance

01:18:407 (2,1) - this distance is sooo much :(

01:18:407 (2,1,2) - alot of direction changes here, a fix would be to make 01:18:407 (2) - horizontal left, and 01:19:255 (1) - repeat right like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13916243/3f34

much easier to play and flows better

01:30:102 (1,2,3,4) - a similar issue to #1169438 you're asking a lot from newer players

01:35:356 (1,2) - same at #1162433

01:35:695 (2,2) - streams like this usually feel really weird in a cup, I suggest going for streams shaped like a C. They play much smoother and easier for cup players and dont have as many wiggly movements

screenshot for reference https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13916260/8b25

01:37:051 (2) - maybe move it slightly closer to (1), the hold walk feels a little daunting

01:42:305 (2) - make this a new combo, so it's not above 8

01:42:983 (1) - You can make this in C shape for variety owo

01:42:983 (1,1) - unrankable spinner

needs atleast 250ms gap between note and spinner for cup difficulty