General:
-- What is the bloody mess skin? If it's important include it with the map!
-- .mp3 is pretty low quality, find a better one?
-- Offset 16,996, though it's hard to tell with current quality.
-- I think normal hitsounds work more.
-- Best sizes for BG ~ 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768.
Joker:
-- Recheck your spacing on this difficulty, it's not constant and at times confusing.
-- Quite a lot of gaps between beats, consider using sliders instead.
01:07:426 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing~?
01:08:948 (x) - Note.
01:10:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Compare spacings.
01:23:079 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
01:31:775 (4,1) - Stacking.
01:37:862 (3) - ^
Ace:
-- End kiai in the same place as the others.
00:27:424 (6) - New combo.
00:49:598 (3) - Clap, following your pattern.
00:54:816 (6) - ^ ?
00:57:316 (5,6,7,8) - I'd avoid this in a normal.
01:30:903 (4) - Put at the end of the slider like 01:32:642 (2,3) -
Queen:
-- Overall difficulty +2-3
-- Add a spinner.
-- Add some claps, all I hear is whistle and the occasional finish D:
-- Preferred skin isn't set to bloody mess... whatever that skin is.
00:29:816 (7,8) - Stacking. Use x0.0 (look at it in game)
00:36:555 (5,6,7) - Stack this?
00:57:317 (6,7,8,9) - Spacing is confusing here due to low OD.
00:58:730 (1,2,3) - ^
01:09:165 (6,7,8) - Stacking.
01:13:948 (8,1) - ^
01:15:687 (4,5) - ^
01:21:992 (x) - Note.
01:24:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sliders or something might be better here, the spacing is hard to read with the current OD.
01:40:471 (1) - Remove new combo.
In general the patterns could do with a little more work, but it's okay.
Killer Queen:
-- The 1/4 spacing here is too wide making it uncomfortable to play. You might want to consider reducing the spacing/distance snap on your streams etc. (example: 00:50:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and many more)
00:21:772 (7,8,9) - I get the impression that this stack was thrown into the stream just to fit a pattern. It doesn't play that well =/
00:25:359 (8,9) - Similar thing ^
00:25:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Things like this are really messy, the way it all overlaps.
00:27:424 (13,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange rhythm. I'd expect notes at 00:27:859 and 00:28:294
00:35:903 (5,6) - Stacking fail?
00:40:468 (8) - Random x0.5 =/
00:55:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - It's messy and is uncomfortable to play as a result. Try to avoid overlapping the same areas over and over, if you highlight some of your combo's you'll see that they tend to be clustered in the same place.
01:35:033 (10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Another example of cluster.
1/4 is too sparse, too clustered, too much overlapping makes it play badly (imo).
Keep working on it ^_^