1. Easy (1.4 stars, 113 notes)
2. Hard (3.07 stars, 252 notes)
3. Insane (3.84 stars, 339 notes)
4. Normal (2.02 stars, 155 notes)
5. SupaSoni (4.68 stars, 386 notes)

1. Airtist: すーぱーそに子
   Romanised Airtist: Super Sonico
   Title: すぱそにっ♥
   Romanised Title: Supa Soni
   http://puu.sh/8YVqi.jpg

1. 00:14:233 (1,2) - blanket correctly
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:19:966 (3,1) - blanket check
3. 00:36:781 (3,2) - how about stack?
4. 01:19:584 (2,1) - blanket?
5. 01:21:113 (2) - for smoother cursor moving, x:384 y:212 is better

1. I feel a little difficult. I suggest to decrease SliderVelocity or DistanceSpacing
2. for normal-diff, you should conform DS as far as possible, for example, 00:18:819 (2,3) - is not good
3. 00:26:272 (1) - I prefer only 1 circle
   
4. 00:56:272 (2,2) - avoid overlap

1. 00:10:316 (6,7) - symmetric sliders are better
2. 00:25:316 (4) - end at 00:25:507
3. 00:28:374 (1) - remove NC
4. 01:08:501 (6) - end at 01:08:692

1. 00:28:374 (1) - remove NC
2. I suggest to decrease DS of stream like 00:31:813 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - . it's so hard to play
3. 01:05:061 (2) - end at 01:05:253
4. 01:10:794 (1,2) - stack correctly

1. 00:20:539 (7,8) - this jump is necessary?
2. 00:23:214 (6,7,8) - just a suggetion
   
3. 00:40:985 (2) - x:438 y:132 (make symmetric with 00:40:221 (6) - )
4. 01:09:647 (6) - x:285 y:192
5. 01:10:221- add a note
6. 01:23:405 (2,3) - a little confusing. I prefer the same shape as 01:24:934 (7,8) -

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. Airtist: すーぱーそに子
   Romanised Airtist: Super Sonico
   Title: すぱそにっ♥
   Romanised Title: Supa Soni
   http://puu.sh/8YVqi.jpg

[Easy]

1. 00:14:233 (1,2) - blanket correctly
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:19:966 (3,1) - blanket check
3. 00:36:781 (3,2) - how about stack?
4. 01:19:584 (2,1) - blanket?
5. 01:21:113 (2) - for smoother cursor moving, x:384 y:212 is better

[Normal]

1. I feel a little difficult. I suggest to decrease SliderVelocity or DistanceSpacing
2. for normal-diff, you should conform DS as far as possible, for example, 00:18:819 (2,3) - is not good
3. 00:26:272 (1) - I prefer only 1 circle
   
4. 00:56:272 (2,2) - avoid overlap

[Insane]

1. 00:10:316 (6,7) - symmetric sliders are better
2. 00:25:316 (4) - end at 00:25:507
3. 00:28:374 (1) - remove NC
4. 01:08:501 (6) - end at 01:08:692

[Extra]

1. 00:28:374 (1) - remove NC
2. I suggest to decrease DS of stream like 00:31:813 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - . it's so hard to play
3. 01:05:061 (2) - end at 01:05:253
4. 01:10:794 (1,2) - stack correctly

[Yuzu's Hard]

1. 00:20:539 (7,8) - this jump is necessary?
2. 00:23:214 (6,7,8) - just a suggetion
   
3. 00:40:985 (2) - x:438 y:132 (make symmetric with 00:40:221 (6) - )
4. 01:09:647 (6) - x:285 y:192
5. 01:10:221- add a note
6. 01:23:405 (2,3) - a little confusing. I prefer the same shape as 01:24:934 (7,8) -

cute, Sonico<3
~Good Luck~

-Maruk- wrote:

Hi~

Insane
HP+1
OD+1
About that i dont know. the extra is hp6 / od7. i dont know how it will affect the diff scaling. Insane will become hp7/od7... will think about it though


00:08:119 (9) -NC ~ added nc+whistle here instead: 00:07:737 (8) - as it should be, to be the same a the previous hitsounds. ( i did a mistake it seems
01:21:495 (9) -^ X i am using claps every 2 downbeats so wont add here
00:08:979 (13) -Go to 00:09:074 (13) X i assumed you mean to move the whistle to the other note . will keep it as it is sounds better to me, 2 whistles on doubles
00:15:093 (5) -^X same here ^
01:22:355 (13) -^ X and here ^
01:28:565 (2) -^X
01:08:501 (6) -Try it ~ tried it but using 1st the slider sounds better coz you hear her prolonging the word a bit. aded a note here: 01:09:074


Nice song

RenzMichael wrote:

[General]

Colours O
Combo1 : 247,187,121
Combo2 : 229,229,229
Combo3 : 253,168,198
Combo4 : 159,177,251

-6 ms O oops

[Normal]

all i need to say here is, distances are very high.. consider reducing.X 1.0x ds should be ok. the song bpm is 157. you got plenty of time to move, and its normal.. will give it to some people that can play normal maps and as em how it feels to make sure then

[Insane]

00:08:119 (9) - NC O since it has been suggested 2ce

00:19:584 (5) - i suggest to make these 2 circle X didn;t really understand what you mean these. the 2 previous or the slider?

00:22:641 (3) - dist check O = Changed actually the distance was ok the positioning was the issue. fixed

00:32:577 (1,2) - to many whistle i guess. irritatingO removed the whistles from 2 previous notes and left only on the reverse sliders.

00:38:692 (1,2) - ^ O same here ^

00:47:100 (7,8) - doesnt suit sound.. O you are riight. 00:47:386 - is empty. remaped that part.

01:21:495 (9) - NC O

[Extra]

youre killing me,, too fast stream speed..

00:17:291 (1,2,3,4) - the slider stream seems to pointless. O changed to 1/2 notes

00:23:405 (1,2,3,4) - ^ O changed to 1/2 notes

00:34:488 (1) - the pause in stream is awkward X :S no way.

00:40:603 (1,2) - refer to mod1 ~ 00:40:890 - there is a beat here. i changed the 1st one to 1/2 note and kept the other kick slider.

01:11:176 (2,3) - trying to be skystar? this doesnt suit.. O be skystar? ooh pls. it suits 100%, lister @25% here: 01:11:463 -

01:16:526 (7) - nc O it already has

I hope this get ranked.. Thank you .

RenzMichael wrote:

[Yuzu Hard]

00:14:425 (1) - useless spinner i guess Remapped it~

00:54:170 (7,1) - swap nc Kinda~

00:57:418 (8,1) - ^ Kinda~

Also messed around with a bit of NC's

Gaia wrote:

Wassap

[Yuzu's Hard]
You have a number of long combos, I recommend a NC at around 6-7 It should hardly ever go into double digits really I'll review them later.
00:20:539 (7,8) - keep the distance between these 2 the same as 00:20:348 (6,7) - and 00:20:730 (8,9) - It's intended, a bit of DS increase for the small jump
00:23:788 (8,9) - Distance ^
00:43:278 (8) - bracket ?
00:47:100 (1) - ^ ?
00:57:418 (8,9) - Distance Also intended as a jump
01:05:444 (3) - bracket http://puu.sh/9OBbe/a0f907adbc.jpg ?
01:06:399 (5,6,7,8) - distance Again, another jump...
01:09:647 (6) - http://puu.sh/9OBl7/730ea30800.jpg for flow & looks No fix~
01:15:189 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/9OBrt/8f7868e196.jpg ^same reason slight change
01:18:246 (7) - I feel is unnecessary I don't see anything wrong with that section

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64679
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5921
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Super Sonitsu (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:すぱそにっ♥ (TV Size)
Artist:Ayano Yamamoto
ArtistUnicode:山本 彩乃
Creator:Ntasuto
Version:Yuzu's Hard
Source:Super Sonico The Animation
Tags:そにアニ anime opening yuzu- Super Sonico Nitroplus
BeatmapID:412816
BeatmapSetID:170167

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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Gaia wrote:

Wassap

[General]
- Snap your kiai times! O changed the offset from previous mod and forgot about this oops

[Easy]
Nothing much to say here, but I think a DS of 0.8x and a SV of 0.8 is more suitable for an easy difficultyX but what you say its irrelevant . on a 280bpm song the DS/SV you suggested would be impossible to make an easy map. and 157bpm its not that fast.

[Normal]
00:10:412 (2,3,4) - (+ several other places) These may be kinda tricky, maybe set them up like at 00:13:469 (2,3) - with a slider?X is it rly hard to singletap 3 notes 157 bpm for normal ? OD 4 so even if you are late you should get 300.
00:27:227 (3) - bracket for the looks O blanket you mean ? :S . made it better anyways
00:29:329 (4) - NC O dat new combo
00:29:520 (1) - no NC O ^
00:29:520 (1,2,3) - put them closer so the numbers all line up ~didnt put close but adjusted the last reverser slider so they are diagonally lined up. ( use a slider and you will see they are aligned
00:35:635 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9OAnb/017b0a606d.jpg for better flow into the 3rd sliderX to do that i will have to break the flow from the note before slider (1) . the flow as it is is ok coz they are 1/1 notes and its very easy
00:44:425 (2) - bracket http://puu.sh/9OAvb/73ef8026fd.jpg X:| i cant do that. the blanket's shape is bassed on the object you want to blanket. if i make it like in the pic it wont make sense
00:51:686 (3) - ^Xnot intended for blanket
01:22:259 (3) - ^X ^ still made a small adjustment here;P

[Insane]
00:08:883 (12,13) - (and few other places) Doesn't really match with the music, 1 circle is enoughXit fits remove the 2 notes and listen to the beat @25%
00:07:737 (8) - NC otherwise you have a 14 combo O damn, you noticed.
00:15:762 (1) - Emphasize this note, maybe add a clap? Xi;d rather keep my 1 clap every 2 down beats constant
00:24:934 (3) - more bracket O much better now
00:27:227 (6) - ^ X b-b-but distance. cant do more
00:31:049 (1) - ^ O made it better

[Extra]
These streams are too far apart imo lol i can bare survive :p
Also a SV of 2 lol I think 1.7 ish is good enough for extra
ALSO! http://puu.sh/9ODkQ/c8c3304159.png your SV change from 1x to 1.5x a quite fast. It's do-able but I think 1x to 1.25 is better X it does change but but it starts @ that point also . so there should not be an issue. about the 1.25. its too slow for me

00:13:845 (8) - BracketX not intended to be a blanket
00:21:106 (5) - ^X
00:34:864 (3) - Ctrl + G for flow~Xi like the flow as it is. making those small changes from left to right.
00:40:788 (2) - I think a circle is more suitable than a slider hereXthere are 2 beats here. i cant ignore 1 and put a circle
00:48:431 (1,2,3,4) - same as Insane, 1 is sufficient imo X well these 2 2ble beats exist . i cant ignore em and use single notes. but since they are a bit hard to hit i added them only to insane and extra


So err after I modded your Insane I noticed you updated your map LOL I hope that doesn't affect my mod that much tho~ Just ignore if u already dealt with it anyway good luck and hope to see this ranked one day! THAAAAAAANKS

xLoupGarou wrote:

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue



*Mp3 --> OK good :3


*BG --> OK good here also

Nyan~MOD

[Easy]
Nothing ^^

[Normal]
00:30:278 Ctrl + G O
01:20:724 Improve O Improved with a nice blanket

That's All
GL . Thanks a lot

1. 01:28:177 - it really feels like there should be something clickable here as well to follow up with what you have previously 01:27:603 (1,2) -
   on a side note, the difficulty is extremely inconsistent
2. 00:43:272 (1,3) - why not blanket o-o looks better
3. 00:48:431 (1,2,3,4) - bad rhythm, nothing in the music really suggests this rhythm and a strong beat is on 00:48:622 -
4. 01:22:348 (5) - a bit weary of this, it's super overmapped which, if you didn't know is unrankable now
   01:28:463 (5) - same goes to similar parts too

• 
  oh this may also apply to any of your other diffs, but ncing is weird and inconsistent, a good NC pattern for beginners is simply NC every downbeat (big white tick)

1. 00:04:196 (6) - as a general rule of thumb, in a stream pattern, you would want all kicksliders to start on either a red or white tick as they are the stronger beats. starting on a blue tick is not good rhythmically.
2. 00:17:858 (8,9) - why the decrease in spacing? if anything it should be spaced out more since (9) is a stronger sound
3. 00:48:431 (1,2,3,4) - same issue as in extra
4. 00:52:826 (3) - get rid of 2 repeats and add another kickslider (1/4 slider) in at 00:53:208 - the downbeat really needs something clickable

1. 00:18:622 - there should be something here
2. 00:18:813 - there should be something clickable on the downbeat
3. 00:22:444 (2,3,4) - passive sliders don't really work here the strong beat is on the tail but a slider gives more emphasis on the head
4. 00:35:820 (1,2,3,4) - wow you really like passive sliders ._.
5. 00:57:412 (2,3) - i don't think (3) has a strong enough sound to support such a big jump
   just the passive sliders that bother me .-.

1. 00:29:514 (2,3,4) - inconsistent distance snap which is kinda unacceptable in normal diff just ctrl g 00:30:278 (3) - for a simple fix
2. 00:46:329 (2) - arrange like this for a better wave?
   
   SPOILER

   

Kibbleru wrote:

[Extra]

1. 01:28:177 - it really feels like there should be something clickable here as well to follow up with what you have previously 01:27:603 (1,2) - X but the 2 kick slider and 3rd slider are following the lyrics( more like the syllables) . SU(kick slider) PER(kick slider) SONI(1/2 slider).
   
   on a side note, the difficulty is extremely inconsistent T^T
2. 00:43:272 (1,3) - why not blanket o-o looks betterO
3. 00:48:431 (1,2,3,4) - bad rhythm, nothing in the music really suggests this rhythm and a strong beat is on 00:48:622 - O i am going deaf 100% there is no beat here: 00:48:718 (3) fixxed
4. 01:22:348 (5) - a bit weary of this, it's super overmapped which, if you didn't know is unrankable now~ its not really overmapped. actually the part from 01:22:253 - 01:23:017 consists of 1/4 beats ( a soft whistling). however i cant say you are wrong co you cat hear that very loud . so i decided instead of removing these 1/4 notes to add one 1/2 note nxt to them and change em to triples to completelly follow the lyrics ("let's") which i am wondering why i didn't in the first place :/
   01:28:463 (5) - same goes to similar parts too ^

im not too sure how im suppose to mod extra

[Insane]

• 
  oh this may also apply to any of your other diffs, but ncing is weird and inconsistent, a good NC pattern for beginners is simply NC every downbeat (big white tick)O NC = New Combo or Normal Clap ? one day we will settle well i checked both . new combo was all over the place, dunno what happened. maybe forgot to change after i changed something. wasnt intentional

1. 00:04:196 (6) - as a general rule of thumb, in a stream pattern, you would want all kicksliders to start on either a red or white tick as they are the stronger beats. starting on a blue tick is not good rhythmically.X i didn't put the kickslider just to fill the stream there but to go along with the vocals/rhythm and in this case it is good rhythmically ( just slow to 25% that part and listen)
2. 00:17:858 (8,9) - why the decrease in spacing? if anything it should be spaced out more since (9) is a stronger soundO oops? increased the spacing to match the previous notes
3. 00:48:431 (1,2,3,4) - same issue as in extra O fixezd
4. 00:52:826 (3) - get rid of 2 repeats and add another kickslider (1/4 slider) in at 00:53:208 - the downbeat really needs something clickableO :O indeed !. done, also did the same for these 2 identical parts: 00:55:884 (3) and 00:58:941 (3)

[Normal]

1. 00:29:514 (2,3,4) - inconsistent distance snap which is kinda unacceptable in normal diff just ctrl g 00:30:278 (3) - for a simple fix O RIP xLoupGarou Mod 2014-2014 . i guess consistency is also important
2. 00:46:329 (2) - arrange like this for a better wave? ~ mm kinda did ? more like the same shape, with better curves and blanket on 00:47:858 (3) - tail.
   
   SPOILER

   

Kibbleru wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:18:622 - there should be something here
2. 00:18:813 - there should be something clickable on the downbeat
3. 00:22:444 (2,3,4) - passive sliders don't really work here the strong beat is on the tail but a slider gives more emphasis on the head
4. 00:35:820 (1,2,3,4) - wow you really like passive sliders ._.
5. 00:57:412 (2,3) - i don't think (3) has a strong enough sound to support such a big jump
   just the passive sliders that bother me .-.

All fixed~
i love u kibb <3

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340,100,89132,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Let's do this.


[General]
Everything seems fine except the "anime" in tags. Not sure though. O


[Easy]
AR -1 X
First off, like we said there are a few ways you can make the map easier to fit Easy criteria. That's what this Easy mod will be about basically.
00:03:527 (1,2) - This could turn to 1 slider instead of slider + circle. Same applies to all combos that match this later.X nuuu :'(
00:15:756 (1,2) - You could make this whole thing two 2/1 sliders without any reverse. It would actually match the rhythm more this way.X actually it could fit one 3/1 and one 2/1 but i prefer it this way , didn't ant to break down this beat here: 00:17:285 - so i made it part of the reverse slider.
00:18:813 (2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This section has a lot of circles. Consider merging some of these circles into sliders.Omerged one ok ?
00:31:043 (2) - You could just skip the reverse and make a nice 2/1 slider downwards.O holly sheet. indeed O.O
00:32:189 (1,2) - Circle + slider instead of slider + circle.O
00:38:304 (1,2) - ^O
00:53:591 (2,3) - Circle at (2) and slider starting from the end of (2) and ending at the end of slider (3).X
01:03:909 (3,4) - Slider instead.Xthere are 3 sliders before already with vocals that fit but at that part there aren't any so to emphasize the 2 beats i put 2 notes with whistles. a slider would stop the player from feeling these 2 separate hits
01:07:348 (1) - Circle + 1/1 slider.X meh ? prefer it like dis
That's all for Easy.


[Normal]
Try DS 0.8 actually. 1.00 looks kinda ugly. RIP normal diff feelings. not about the looks, its about what's inside
00:20:533 (2) - Circle + slider.X there is already a 1/2 note before .. if i do that it will increase the difficult a bit.
00:23:782 (4,5,6) - Reverse slider.X same case as easy. i emphasize these 3 notes as i feel the need to keep em separate.
00:33:718 (1,2) - One slider.X wanna keep it constant sr
00:39:833 (1,2) - Same. X ^ same
00:44:419 (2) - Circles would fit better here.O yup
00:46:329 (2) - u.u | ?-( . _ .)-?
00:47:667 (2) - This is unnecessary. It's too insignificant to be in this Normal imo.O ok
00:58:177 (3,1) - Slider from (3) to start of (1) then circle at end of (1).X o.O rly dood ? check again the rhythm there .
01:10:024 (2,3) - Two 1/2 sliders.X i like dis reversu slideru :3
01:12:699 (2,3,4) - One reverse slider.X same reason as i said before. emphasizing powar and single powar
01:29:132 (4) - NC for the lolz. O LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLzZ
That's it for Normal.


[Insane]
OD +1 X OD/HP stays same for all diffs.
What up with the x1.50 SV in the beginning and the end? It's not worth such an increase.X wurf it :3. well i feels the songs starts dynamically so i didnt want to start sow and speed up later. song is not so long and is full of energy from the beginning
00:03:909 (3,4,5,6) - The slider is absolutely useless it's plain overmapping. Remove the slider and just leave a circle in its place. This goes for all patterns similar.X overmapping ? if you listen to the vocals you can hear them at that art and there is also a beat there. changing the slider to 1/1 single note makes these parts very awkward.
00:08:113 (9,10,11) - Remove the slider and make cute jumps?
Also NC at (9) emmm already changed ? magic
00:08:973 (13) - REMOVE! Yes caps!X NO. cappis. there is a beat there as i mentioned on a mod reply before and the vocals end here. 00:09:068 - so i added a triplet that matches the vocals !
00:15:087 (5) - ^X ^same
00:26:266 (1,2,3) - NC at (3) instead. ~ nuuu.. 2 combo on insane ? looks ugly , removed NC from here 00:27:985 (1)
00:26:457 (3,4,5) - Two sliders.X ..it matches the rhythm 100% as it is now
00:42:508 (4,5) - Swap places of these sliders.X meh
00:46:138 (3,4) - Redundant much?Xthere is a beat there.. get rekt.
00:46:329 (5) - NC~ ===> i got no idea waht happened to the combos there. fixed em anyways.
00:49:387 (3) - NC~ ^
00:49:960 (1,2,3) - NC at (3) instead.~ ^
00:54:546 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove the 1/4 and make cute jump?X i dun wanna break the pasterns there.
00:53:399 (1,3) - Remove NC from (1) start it at (3).X NO :/
00:56:457 (1,2,3) - SameX ^
00:58:177 (1) - Remove NCX ^
00:59:514 (1,3) - Remove NC from (1) start it at (3)X ^
01:01:234 (1,3) - SameX ^
01:02:380 (1,3) - SameX ^
01:21:489 (9) - NC^O:roll: something is going on with my NC !
01:22:348 (13) - Disappear!!!!
01:27:603 (8) - NCO T^T NC Y U DO DIS ?
01:28:368 (1) - Remove NCO
01:29:132 (4) - NC for lulz. O lulZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZz


[Extra]
HP +1X
AR +somethingX
OD +1 or moreX DIff Setups stays as it is.
The x1.50 again don't stand. . X same for dis .
00:26:457 (3,4,5) - Two sliders.X No. the reason ? this: 00:27:985 (1) . this note is the reason i chose that timing there
I'm not mentioning the NCs they're fucked up.
00:32:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I say remap the stream it looks ugly. | probably will. need to figure out the design :/
00:38:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same. | ^
00:49:960 (1,2,3) - This triple does not exist in the music. Get rid of it.X 25% and listen!
00:50:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - The x1.50 is dumb here there's no way you can read it since there is nothing that readies you for it.X you need preparation to single tap 157bpm o.O?
01:12:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - This can definitely look prettier. Go symmetry on the y axis as well.O made small jumps that come bac kto one point. ( dunno how you call em ) dis :

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Extra has many flaws Insane has so I didn't mention them here.


Welp, I like the song
Take these things into consideration please and let me know if you don't understand any of the things I proposed. See ya in the game

[-Sophie-] wrote:

From #modspam
[Insane]
00:08:877 (4,5,6) - I don't this sounds right with the current hitsound, maybe change the hitsoundO actually it used to be ok with Normal, but i changed it to soft on that part. seem to not sound that good :/ changed it back to normal
00:11:552 (3,4,5,6) - This sounds off timed. 3,4,5 seems like it dosen't flow well into 6 for some reason (May wanna check all patterns like this)X they are ok. just listen the vocals @ 25% speed. they are spot it
00:14:227 - 00:15:374 - I dunno, this part sounds off timed, maybe change how it works?X i dont hear anything being off, or maybe i dont know exactly what is off, but it sounds pretty ok to me , nothing wrong.
00:24:546 (1,2) - Sounds very off on the pattern, also seems timed wrongX o.O wut? they are totally ok .
00:25:692 (5) - Put this slider under 00:25:310 (4) to flow easierX it will break the flow if i do that. as it is now after (3) if follows an anti-clockwise flow .
00:32:189 (4,5,6,7,1) - This stream area sounds WAYYYYYY offX nu its not
00:32:954 - Why the whistle sounds? Why not keep it as 00:33:718 (4) X this particular part took me some time to hitsound it properly and make it sound unique and good. the whistles are too match a bit the music so they don't make a huge contrast and the finishing hitclaps are for the finale
00:33:336 (3) - ^ X ^
00:38:304 (4,5,6,7,1) - This stream area sounds WAYYYYYY offX its not >.<
00:39:068 (2) - Why the whistle sounds? Why not keep it as 00:39:833 (4) X said above
00:39:450 (3) - Your reverse arrow has as a weird whistle sound, try to keep the same sound the whole slider way~ actually it should be there but i dont know why the head of (3) did not have one. all of my other similar parts have same hitsounding.
00:44:419 (4,5,6) - I don't think this stream should be hear, sounds off X how can something sound off if it is part of the song ?, i am keeping this part coz i cant just leave it empty. doesnt feel right and doesnt match the diff. triplet is the only simple and good way i could map that part.
00:48:527 - Remove this note, sounds weird with it hereX already changed that part a lot of time, and explain of my previous mod replies why i changed it each time. that note has a beat so it stays
00:49:960 (3,4,5,6) - Fill in the note here between 5 and 6, flows better X why overmap so make a flow ? there is not beat there plus the flow is fine there :/
00:52:826 (3) - I don't get the concept of this reverse slider X is to not fill the whole map with streams and make the player's life easier. these parts are split 50-50. stream>RS>stream>RS Balance !
00:54:833 - Remove this note, flows better imo X nope . there is a beat at that part and it contain a hitsound also that is required there.
00:59:514 - Remove this slider and move 00:59:514 (1) - closer to 00:58:941 (3) - EX ; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1838385X why change 1 part of the whole map that follows a specific pastern throughout the whole map ? will keep it as it is. look fine .
I'm actaully 2 lazy to mod the other diff, so Goodluck!

I am even lazier , took me 20 days to reply thanks a lot ^^

kamisamaaa wrote:

..... I found I forgot to mod this..really sorry ntasuto>.<

some suggestions:

1. about insane diff and ex diff. actually they have same rhythm. ex diff is just have a bigger distance, difficult placement with a easy and sparse rhythm(even like a hard diff). thats why your EX diff looks a little strange.
   maybe you can try to follow the drun in Ex diff instead follow the vocal.
   for example:you can add note at 00:07:444 here because here have a little drum sound.
   00:09:450 here you can add a 1/4 slider. something like this, try to follow the drum.

[*]about placement, actually the purpose of placement is to express the music.
for example:

• 00:15:756 (1,2,3,4) - 00:18:813 (3,4,5,6) - 00:21:871 (1,2,3,4) - 00:24:928 (3,4,5,6) - these four pattern. NO.1 and NO.3 is same rhythm, NO.2 and NO.4 is same. O X agree and disagree a bit. 1/3 are the same but 2/4 are not coz the last beat of No4 end on a downbeat ,1/2 less that the other 3 pasterns . but i get whatt you mean
  Frist, NO.1 and NO.3 the music is same(just become lower) at every slider. NO.1's pattern is fit the music,but NO.3's pattern is a little strange---O changed the patern to follow a kinda similar one with No1 : http://puu.sh/aLulA/30ea9b3fc2.png---. because opposite direction slider cant express the feel of music. actually NO.2's pattern should used on NO'3.
  Second, the music on NO.2 is not the same on four sliders, why you use this pattern? maybe you can try something like thisO how about dis ? http://puu.sh/aLuPn/17ef6ccd24.png (not a good pattern butfit the music better >.< the NO.4 is fit the music really good).

another example:00:23:399 (5,6,7,8) - because of the music, maybe set the 00:23:973 (8) - on 195|150 feel better.
[*]about hitsound, a little sinple. you need another hitsound to follow the Bass Drum

thats all
(you know my English is really suack...so if you cant understand what I say just told me in-game >.<) OK will get you in game i know
/me run

1. something I want to point out here, the normal and alot more so the hard have problems with passive sliders ( starting on red tick, ending on white) this can work in songs where this fits, but here it is not the case.

• Pretty nice diff, just some minor clean ups with the patterns here. mostly nazi stuff and some rhythm suggestions.

1. Nazi: 00:04:673 (2,1) - fix blanket by moving the third anchor of 1 slightly to the right.
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2. 00:08:877 (2,1) - same deal here. a good way to check these is to ctrl+g the 2 and use its approach circle to make sure they are perfect. like this :
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3. ^ 00:14:227 (1,2) -
4. 00:15:756 (1) - try to move 1 to x 121 y 190, minor tweak, but I think it makes this part look a little better.
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5. 00:15:756 (1,2) - again, check blanket. here's another example of using the approach circle to check these.
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6. 00:10:788 (2,1) - ^ check blanket.
7. 00:23:017 (2,1) - ^ also, dont forget to copy and paste the slider to 00:24:546 (1) - once you fix it here.
8. 00:37:348 (5,1) - ^
9. 00:45:183 (6,1) - ^
10. 01:05:820 (2,3) - ^
11. 01:06:202 (3,1) - ^
12. 01:25:693 (2,1) - ^
13. 00:27:221 (5) - i see you are going to symmetry here, but this just feels kind of strange because you have an important downbeat at the tail of this slider that in my opinion should be ckicled. what I suggest you do is something like this ( and pay attention to Nc:
    
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14. 00:39:451 (3) - move to x 177 y 119 for perfect blanket with 2.
15. 00:53:591 (2) - in my opinion, this rhythm is more enjoyable to play here. try it
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16. if you take above suggestion, change 00:56:648 (2) - as well.
17. 00:59:705 (2) - ^
18. 01:03:145 (2) - move to x 314 y 57 and adjust following notes slightly. this is for better blanket with 1.
19. 01:23:017 (1,2,1) - move this whole pattern up, so that the head of 1 is on the same axis as the tail of 01:21:489 (1) - it looks nicer this way :p
    
    Lots of clean up needed on blankets, but other than that it looked good.

• this whole map needs alot of work as far as the aesthetics go. it looks a little chaotic as it is. and there some issues with passive sliders ( sliders that start on red ticks and end on white.)

1. same problem with blankets as with easy, but some of these are more tricky due to spacing, but still doable. 00:03:909 (2,3) - for example, do this, it makes the map look better I will only point out this one, since I dont want this to be a wall of text, find the rest with this example.
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2. 00:08:113 (1,2,3) - this is some really bad flow for players of this skill level in my opinion, you should so something like this:
   
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3. 00:13:654 (3) - this passive slider feels very strange here, you should just delete the circle before this, and make this a 1/1 slider.
4. 00:14:227 (1,2,3) - again, bad flow here, but I really cant think of anything, try to improve this yourself
5. 00:17:285 (3) - this looks pretty ugly, you should give this slider less of a curve, maybe something like this:
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6. 00:26:266 (1) - again, this passive slider just doesnt fit here. it feels strange when playing. not to mention the downbeat is on its tail. just use 1/1 rhythm here with the white lines.
7. 00:27:985 (4,1) - switch NCs
8. 00:28:559 (2) - listen to the music carefully, the beat here doesnt really need to have its own circle. in normal diffs, you want to use circles to highlight important vocals and beats in the music, there is nothing like that here, just delete it.
9. 00:50:915 (1,2,3) - again, really bad flow here.
10. 01:21:489 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 01:27:030 (3) - again, weird passive slider, just use 1/1 like i suggested before.
    
    this one needs alot of work. hopefully some of this points you in the right direction.

• as with normal, there's problems with passive sliders in this diff that you should really consider fixing. ( passive slider meaning starts on red tick, ends on white. )

1. 00:04:196 (3) - you should just move this circle to the next white line. a rhythm like this isnt really fun to play, specially in a hard diff. as an alternative, you can leave this be, and add a 1/2 slider on the white line after this circle, removing the circle on the red line.
2. 00:05:438 (2,3,4,5) - in my opinion, if you are going to have these 4 note streams in hard, you should either stack them, or reduce the spacing more than what it is right now. also, see second suggestion from above for 00:05:724 (5) -
3. 00:06:393 (1) - weird passive slider with the tail on the downbeat. if you followed the above suggestion, fixing this is easy, just move this slider back 1/2.
4. 00:08:877 (5,6) - another problem with passive slider here, if you are trying to match vocals, this should be a 1/1 slider.
5. 00:10:597 (6) - same as above.
6. 00:12:126 (6) - ^
7. 00:12:508 (1) - ^
8. 00:18:431 (5) - make this a 1/2 so that the beat at 00:18:813 - is clickable, this sounds and plays more fun, imo
9. 00:19:005 (1,2) - more passive sliders.
10. 00:20:915 (4,5) - ^ anyway, going to stop pointing these out, im sure you get it.
11. 00:46:712 - no reason for a gap this big in a hard, at least add a circle at this time for the drum beat.
12. 00:55:119 (7) - i suggest you just make this a circle, and place something where the tail of this is.
    this diff as a whole needs alot of work with rhythms in my opinion, I already pointed out some examples of problems, maybe this will help you get on the right track. you will have to remap a large portion of this diff.
    

• I am really no good at modding insanes. but this diff feels ALOT better and is more fun than the hard just because its not filled with the unfitting passive sliders. Just try to fix up some of the blankets with the examples I gave you in normal and easy. my mapping style is far too different from yours to be able to offer anything useful here without trying to impose my own things on you, so im going to leave it at this.

Melophobia wrote:

JMQ Stuff. Sorry for the delay! :<

Title: Supa Soni
Artist: Yamamoto Ayano
Source: SUPER SONICO THE ANIMATION
Additionally you should remove the space in unicode artist, we don't use it.

Otherwise look fine in my eyes, good luck!

1. 00:04:196 (4) - i found many of this like 00:07:253 (4) - 、00:10:310 (4) - also use 0.6 ds,suggest you also set 0.6 ds here
2. 00:05:724 (4) - ^
3. 00:08:877 delete this green line and set the 00:08:877 (3,4) - placement 1.0 ds again
4. 01:03:431 add a circle here,very catch the rhythm
5. 01:22:253 (3) - also keep this 1.0 ds

Sellenite wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:04:196 (4) - i found many of this like 00:07:253 (4) - 、00:10:310 (4) - also use 0.6 ds,suggest you also set 0.6 ds here O fixed. don;t know why i did that . not intended. Actually 00:07:253 (4) - 、00:10:310 (4) already have 0.6ds, but some other similar indeed dont. fixed em
2. 00:05:724 (4) - ^ O ^fixed
3. 00:08:877 delete this green line and set the 00:08:877 (3,4) - placement 1.0 ds againO done. it was actually an unnecessary inherit, mb.
4. 01:03:431 add a circle here,very catch the rhythmO done
5. 01:22:253 (3) - also keep this 1.0 dsO oops

btw pls SupaSoni diff 00:40:024 (6) - ctrl+g !! @.@ X sorry but i want to keep it this way to be the same as 00:33:909 (6)
fun map,good luck! Thank you

kamisamaaa wrote:

Mod Info

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Important things. You should consider
3. Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix

[hard]
00:18:049 (4) - here has no clap but 00:24:164 (4) - this one with clap. these two should be same imo. O fixed, alsos added clap to the other diffs coz i seem to have missed this clap.. oops
01:10:788 (1) - add finish on the head[/color] O this also is mb, don't know why i didn't place a finish since i have one here: 01:04:673 (1) ( same goes for the rest of the diffs too.)
00:03:527 (1) - add finishO
00:09:641 (1) - add finishO
00:21:871 (1) - add finish on the headO and again. omg. i must be deaf or smth T^T. thanks for noticing kami. others diff included again [ any further/previous hitsound change i make/made is also applied to the other diffs for obvious reasons ^^ )
00:55:501 (1) - add finish O
00:58:559 (1) - add finishO
01:01:616 (2) - add finish on the head to make your map sound much more exciting.O
01:05:438 (3) - ^O
01:07:731 (2) - ^O also removed whistle
01:08:495 (4) - ^O^
01:11:552 (3) - ^O
01:13:845 (3) - ^O
01:14:610 (5) - ^O

Damn these finishes make such big difference and sound so much better *o*

just a quick hitsound mod >.<
hope you can rank this ~ Thanks a lot :3 i will, never give up xD

1. fine

1. 00:15:756 (1) - here is fixed blanket.
2. 00:27:985 (3,1) - swap NC better. start new music 00:27:985 - here
3. 00:37:157 (5,1) - same (^)

1. Normal setting is high. i think HP/OD -1 better diff spread.
2. 00:18:431 (1,2) - swap NC please.
3. 00:23:399 (3,4,5,6) - not sure this patten. change please.
4. 00:28:368 (1) - don't understand this NC
5. 00:33:718 (1) - head and tall delete clap
6. 00:34:100 (2) - whistle
7. 01:12:317 (1,2,3,4) - warning this patten.

1. 00:17:667 (2) - add clap?
2. 00:23:782 (2) - same (^)
3. 00:25:310 (3) - this jump is high
4. 00:27:030 - Don't need this clap
5. 00:28:368 (1) - Delete NC
6. 00:39:833 (1,2) - (2) note delete after (1) slider one add repeat better.
   

1. 00:08:877 (4,5) - not sure this distance far. please fixed this.
2. 00:14:992 (4,5) - same (^)
3. 00:28:368 (1) - Delete NC
4. 01:22:253 (4,5) - same 00:08:877 (4,5) -this

1. 00:17:667 (3) - no clap?
2. well.. patten is very warning imo... sbmall change patten please. for example 01:05:055 (2,3) - 01:19:100 (6,7,8) - 01:27:603 (1,2,3) -

HabiHolic wrote:

[General]

1. fine

[Easy]

1. 00:15:756 (1) - here is fixed blanket.O
2. 00:27:985 (3,1) - swap NC better. start new music 00:27:985 - hereO
3. 00:37:157 (5,1) - same (^)O

[Normal]

1. Normal setting is high. i think HP/OD -1 better diff spread.O
2. 00:18:431 (1,2) - swap NC please.O
3. 00:23:399 (3,4,5,6) - not sure this patten. change please.O
4. 00:28:368 (1) - don't understand this NC X its for this beat . 00:27:985 (1) i NC this beat on each diff coz i feel like its a standalone beat ( ending of that part) and then start a new NC on the next note.
5. 00:33:718 (1) - head and tall delete clap O
6. 00:34:100 (2) - whistleO
7. 01:12:317 (1,2,3,4) - warning this patten.X its kiai time and i want it to be a bit harder. single taping 3 notes @ 157 bm its not hard at all for normal, and it fits that part well.

[Hard]

1. 00:17:667 (2) - add clap?O
2. 00:23:782 (2) - same (^)O
3. 00:25:310 (3) - this jump is highO changed so the spacing is the same as the rest of the diff.
4. 00:27:030 - Don't need this clapO
5. 00:28:368 (1) - Delete NC X explained before why i NC
6. 00:39:833 (1,2) - (2) note delete after (1) slider one add repeat better. X will keep it coz it fits well and keep the consistency . its similar to these 00:38:304 (1,2,1,2) -
   

[Insane]

1. 00:08:877 (4,5) - not sure this distance far. please fixed this.O
2. 00:14:992 (4,5) - same (^)O
3. 00:28:368 (1) - Delete NC X same as before
4. 01:22:253 (4,5) - same 00:08:877 (4,5) -thisO

[SupaSoni]

1. 00:17:667 (3) - no clap? O added
2. well.. patten is very warning imo... sbmall change patten please. for example 01:05:055 (2,3) - 01:19:100 (6,7,8) - 01:27:603 (1,2,3) - O changed the pattern on 01:05:055 (2,3) to fit the 2 similar parts after . the other 2 seem to be prety ok coz this the hardest diff and as you can see i use some big spacing at these parts of the song.

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:11:170 (1) - Avoid slider shape with a red anchor like this in Easy diff, especially when the length after red anchor is too short which affect playability for beginners O made it longer
2. 00:15:756 (1) - Adjust 00:14:227 (1,2,1) and make 00:15:756 (1)' head stack 00:13:845 (2) to be more tidyO
3. 00:17:285 - I would suggest a clickable object here when this is a downbeatX i cant cut the reverse slider there to put the downbeat ntoe. in order to do it i would have to split the slider into 2 x 1/1 sliders then put the note which will make the part boring since the previous beat was mapped with 2 x 1/1 sliders and anything else doesnt rly fit. will keep it.
4. 00:23:399 (1) - Del NCO oops.
5. 00:24:928 - Same as 00:17:285O
6. 00:28:368 (1) - Del NCO
7. 00:32:189 (1) - Place this lower for a more circular flow after 00:31:043 (2) O
8. 00:33:336 (3) - 00:38:686 (3,4) - 00:47:858 (3,4) - Whistle in slider body is kinda loud, adding in head and tail separately will be fine, there are more sliders like this so I am not going to point out allO got it
9. 00:45:565 (1) - Same as mentioned about downbeat, also 00:45:947 has strong vocal so I think you cannot skip it O remapped that part and emphasized the vocals
10. 00:52:444 (1) - If you managed to curve this slider up then place 00:53:591 (2) above, the current flow is weirdO
11. 01:13:845 - This beat is really strong, you can't miss itO
12. 01:15:374 - Downbeat as well Xi will keep this as it is since i am following the vocals. it fits well and dont rly have to have a clickable note there.

[Normal]

1. Generally 1.0x for this is a bit large, 0.8-0.9x would fit O
2. 00:15:756 (1,2) - I don't really suggest to use this pattern in a Normal diff, it is quite hard to read X i don't think it looks so hard. the player can easily see the start and end of slider (1) and then see the next slider (2) and the ar is the optimal value so slider 1 can disappear and the player can see ( if not already figured out the obvious) the end of slider (2)
3. 00:18:813 (1,2) - ^ X ^
4. 00:21:871 (1,2) - ^ X ^
5. 00:28:368 (1) - Del NCO
6. 00:29:514 (2) - NC here instead of 00:29:323 (1) - X can't do that :/ the i can't split the lyrics with the NC. Where she says "omoi > o= 00:29:323 (1) - and moi = 00:29:514 (2) - . it will be very awkwrd if i NC there
7. 01:07:731 - Yea here as well, like Easy, about downbeat same as easy.X and here following vocals

[Hard]

1. 00:28:368 (1) - Del NCO
2. 00:32:189 (1) - ^X 00:32:189 (1,2) - 00:32:954 (1,2) - and 00:32:954 (1,2,1,2) - are pairs. cant use different combo color !
3. 00:32:571 (2) - NC instead of 00:32:954 (1) X reason above
4. 00:35:437 (1,2) - Switch NC X cant split them coz of vocals. and i did the same NCing on insane and SupaSoni and you didnt say anything :/ will leave them as it is.

[Insane]

1. 00:28:368 (1) - Del NCO
2. 00:31:043 (1,2) - The jump here is too large while it doesn't match the soft music hereO fixed.

[SupaSoni]

1. 00:07:253 (6,7) - This two sliders seems overcurved, which is quite untidyO straightened them a bit . hope they look tidier now
2. 00:28:368 (1) - Del NCO

Good luck Thanks !

1. maybe use some custom hitsound instead of default hitsound might be good
2. somehow the nc feel a bit inconsistent at some part , would be good to nc every downbeat (big white tick) for consistent nc

1. 00:07:253 (6,7,8) - this rhythm sound better imo
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2. 00:17:858 (4,5) - why the sudden lower in spacing when music still sound normal , increase spacing here would be good it make spacing a bit consistent with the song
3. 01:05:055 (2,3) - the 1/4 spacing here looks a lots like 1/2 spacing here 01:04:673 (1,2) - which may make the players really confused here , would be better to reduce 1/4 spacing there a bit so it can be a bit not so confuse
4. 01:08:495 (6,7) - similiar to what I said above
5. 01:14:227 (4,5) - ^

1. 01:09:641 (2,3) - I think swap place of these two notes will make flow here 01:09:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice

1. 01:24:164 (5) - I think if you place this right after (4)'s tail it make the flow a bit better imo ,try place it at x220 y0
2. 01:25:693 (5) - similiar to what I said above
   
   [normal]
   
   1. 00:10:406 (2,3,4) - I think three 1/2 circles in a row tend to be a bit hard for player at this level so I think you can use rhythm like 1/2 slider and 1 circle or just one 1/2 reverse slider instead ( apply this the others similiar rhythm too )
   2. 00:28:368 (2,3) - minor inconsistent in spacing
   3. 00:46:712 - sound a bit weird to ignore this snare , try this rhythm instead ?
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   4. 00:46:329 (2) - nc this instead of 00:45:565 (1) - (it's a downbeat)
   5. 01:09:259 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm sound a bit better
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   [easy]
   
   1. 00:41:743 (2,3,1) - should focus more on some strong snare here , it sound weird when you don't map them , try this rhythm ?
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   2. 00:52:444 (1) - I think this shape looks better lol
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   3. 01:07:731 - ignore this strong beat make the rhythm sound really weird , try this rhythm instead
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   4. 01:24:546 (1) - not a good slider shape here , something like this would looks a bit better
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CelsiusLK wrote:

m4m as requested

[general]

1. maybe use some custom hitsound instead of default hitsound might be good the default ones fit perfectly imo with the song and since hitsounding is not my expertise i don't want to mess with it
2. somehow the nc feel a bit inconsistent at some part , would be good to nc every downbeat (big white tick) for consistent nc i am NCing with the lyrics not every downbeat.

[supasoni]

1. 00:07:253 (6,7,8) - this rhythm sound better imoX i mapper the vocals
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2. 00:17:858 (4,5) - why the sudden lower in spacing when music still sound normal , increase spacing here would be good it make spacing a bit consistent with the songO i did it for the stack ? D: fixxed.
3. 01:05:055 (2,3) - the 1/4 spacing here looks a lots like 1/2 spacing here 01:04:673 (1,2) - which may make the players really confused here , would be better to reduce 1/4 spacing there a bit so it can be a bit not so confuseO fixed
4. 01:08:495 (6,7) - similiar to what I said aboveO ^
5. 01:14:227 (4,5) - ^O^

[insane]

1. 01:09:641 (2,3) - I think swap place of these two notes will make flow here 01:09:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - niceO indeed !

[hard]

1. 01:24:164 (5) - I think if you place this right after (4)'s tail it make the flow a bit better imo ,try place it at x220 y0 Xi don't wanna put the notes up there coz the spacing will drastically change. i try to keep the diff between x1.0 and x1.2. also x220/y0 is out of boundaries the flow shold be ok since the slider is not that fast and its like having a slider similar to (4) with a sharp end pointing down
2. 01:25:693 (5) - similiar to what I said above X ^
   
   [normal]
   
   1. 00:10:406 (2,3,4) - I think three 1/2 circles in a row tend to be a bit hard for player at this level so I think you can use rhythm like 1/2 slider and 1 circle or just one 1/2 reverse slider instead ( apply this the others similiar rhythm too )O ok. done
   2. 00:28:368 (2,3) - minor inconsistent in spacingO fixed
   3. 00:46:712 - sound a bit weird to ignore this snare , try this rhythm instead ?X i mapped the vocals.
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   4. 00:46:329 (2) - nc this instead of 00:45:565 (1) - (it's a downbeat) X as said in the beggining of the mod i NC with the lyrics
   5. 01:09:259 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm sound a bit betterXmmm i like it more this way :3
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   [easy]
   
   1. 00:41:743 (2,3,1) - should focus more on some strong snare here , it sound weird when you don't map them , try this rhythm ? 00:42:508 (3) -O done
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   2. 00:52:444 (1) - I think this shape looks better lolXnu. i want to blanket (4) T^T cant blanket without curve
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   3. 01:07:731 - ignore this strong beat make the rhythm sound really weird , try this rhythm insteadO fixed
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   4. 01:24:546 (1) - not a good slider shape here , something like this would looks a bit better~ FOR THE GLORY OF SA.. i mean blankets. changed the slider end ugly curve, should look much better !
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map can be polished a bit more here
I suggest you to take a look at some ranked map so you may get some ideas here

good luck thanks

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

Edit: Eh, you seem kind of adamant on your choice of NCs, but I'll keep what I noted prior just in case. You can ignore what I crossed out if you want.

Easy
- 00:11:170 (1) - Minor: This blanket needs slight adjustment since the latter part of this curve is closer to hitcircle 2 than you want it to be.O fied
- 00:34:482 (1,2) - Minor: You could try to make 2 parallel with the straight part of 1. At the moment it's very slightly off. Overlapping them can help get the right angle before you move it into the right place.O omg it should've been paralleled D: fixxed
- 00:55:501 (1) - Minor: Another blanket that could do with slight adjustment.Ofixxed
- 01:12:317 (3) - Using two slider points to build the curve in this slider makes it look unusual and uneven. I would try to remove one of the slider points to try and make the curve look as smooth as possible.O indeed. i guess i had something else in mind when shaping it and kinda failed

Normal
- 00:24:928 (2) - Put the New Combo on this slider for consistency and for the downbeat.
- 00:26:457 (4) - NC here since you've put one on every 1 measure for this section already.
- 00:29:514 (2) - NC should be here for the downbeat.
- 00:46:329 (2) - NC should be here since this is a more significant note in the music.
- 01:20:342 (2,3) - This isn't really a flow I would recommend for a Normal difficulty, since you're asking the player to come back in roughly the same direction along the slider. I don't think it's that much of an issue but it's just an opinion of mine.O can kinda agree to this . changed it so it follows a curved flow that goes right and up instead of sharply up.

Hard
- 00:29:514 (2) - Similar thing as Normal; I think the NC is better suited on here.
- 00:48:431 (2) - Slightly uneven spacing through these (Prev1.23|Next1.15)O Grid mapping issues xD . fixxed
- 00:52:826 (3,1) - I found this rhythm kind of awkward to read at first, since the repeater slider is 1/1 (ending on a white tick), and then the NC slider 00:53:399 (1) starts on a red tick. I initially thought the repeater slider had only one repeat and then the next slider started on the next white tick. I would recommend using a rhythm that's a bit easier to follow. This is just a suggestion, but you can do whatever. Same applies for the next few times you use this rhythm.X i cant rly do anything about that. forcing a different rhythm on something instead of mapping the song just for the sake of the player is not something i am going to do . the part there has 5 notes stream. i cant split them in 1 then after 1/2 3x notes. The rhythm changes. you are supposed to have something that is equal there. 5x1/4 or 3x1/2 but the patern you suggested doesnt rly fit. Its not that hard imo and it can be easily anticipated. wrote a lot stuff coz

Example

Insane
- 00:08:877 (4,5) - I'd say that if you're using this rhythm, I'd overlap the slider ontop of 5 so that the timing is easier to read, since blue tick rhythms usually overlap eachother. At the moment I read it as there only going to be one repeat instead of two.O true. changed
- 00:14:992 (4,5) - Similar thing here.O done
- 00:44:419 (4,5,6) - I don't think a triple would be suitable here since I personally don't hear anything significant on the blue tick.Owell there is a slight chaged in the beat you can hear that can kinda justify it but i guess you are right. replaced with slider..
- 00:46:329 (5) - NC here since this is a signficant note and a downbeat.
- 00:50:342 (6,7) - Not too sure about this rhythm. It acts like a double-tap, and the slider repeats twice, so the timing can be sligtly confusing to read. It's up to you though, it might be fine..O i am prety sure its fine coz the spacing used for the 1/4 distance is the same as all of my 1/4 spacing so the player should know that its a 1/4 timing distance from the slider. anyways. changed it to kick slidier+ 1x1/4 reverse slider rearanged it and should play better now .
- 00:51:680 (5) - Minor: This blanket could be improved. Look at the approach circle from [00:51:202]. .OD: ewwww. now its prety
- 01:04:291 (5,1) - Minor: Because of how these two notes are stacked, the game automatically offsets 5 and so slighty ruins the look of the straight line stream you have going. You can fix this by either nudging 01:03:909 (1,2,3,4,5) 4 to the left, or 01:04:673 (1) 4 to the right. .O :O holy mother's of observations. fixxed

- 01:16:903 (1,2,3) - I would make these jumps all a similar length, since the notes in the music have similar impact (and definitely not decreasing like the jumps are currently representing).Owell. not going to tell you that you are wrong but was just wondering why you didnt mention it at the start of your insane mod since i am doing the same at the beggining of the map. :/ well , just wanted to kinda "give power" to the vocals there and emphasize them but meh. will keep it same for the sake of insane :/. will fix the jumps so they are similarly spaced
- 01:19:960 (1,2,3) - Same thing here. O and here.

Supa Soni
- OD8 should be plenty high already, but you can keep it if you really want.X will keep it. plays fine
- 00:03:527 - The Slider Velocity you have for ths starting section feels unecessarily fast. Firstly, I don't personally feel the music suggests using a faster SV here, and secondly it is the start of the map and players would have difficulty adjusting to this SV when the BPM of the song is fairly low..X the SV is higher because the beggining like the end of the song is powerful unlike the middle of the song. also if i lower the sv the jumps will make no sense coz slider's will be slower and jums will be big . wont match the speed of you doing the jumps and sliders .
- 00:03:527 (1,2,3) - Similar thing to what I said in Insane; keep these jumps at a similar length since the notes they're on carry a similar level of impact. Same thing goes for the next few rhythms..X yeah but this is the "extra" diff and i rly wanna keep the emphasis on the vocals each 2 1st notes. the notes are consistently spaced and it plays well. ( had people testplay and had no issues about these jumps )
- 00:35:629 (2) - NC should be here for the downbeat.
- 00:40:215 (7) - I personally feel that thing note could be placed in a better spot than directly behind the kick slider, so that the flow is a little smoother.You could try placing it slightly above it's current position (might be tricky because of the field wall) or try something completely different. .X meh. want to keep the zigzag movement here.

Example

- 00:41:743 (2) - As before; I'd put the NC here.
- 00:41:743 (2,3,4,5) - Doing on from this, I feel like you could do something more interesting than a repetitive pattern of having the exact same slider going in the exact same direction through all four of these. O done
- 00:48:622 (3,4) - I would not say there is anything in the music at all that would indicate using such a large jump here. O xD oops?
- 01:08:495 (6,7) - I personally don't like this overlap. the head of 7 is almost completely obstructed and can arguably be difficult to read, and in general doesn't look very good aesthetically. O true rotated the (6) a bit more so (7) is outside more and adjusted it again then so half is outside. should be prettier? :/
- 01:16:903 (1,2,3) - As before about equalling these jumps. Also about the SV that I don't feel is suitable for this section of the music..X and same as at the beggining . :/

Good luck. thanks

1. disable widescreen support and letterbox during breaks from all diff

1. 00:32:285 (2,4) - remove this? imo it can more natural for the stream
2. 00:38:399 (2,4) - same
3. 00:46:138 (3,4,1) - bad flow between 00:46:138 (3,4) - and 00:46:329 (1) - , try this placcement
   
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   [img]http://puu.sh/mQuLJ/b0a253334e.jpg/img]
4. 00:49:960 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - they are little confues, follow vocal will more fit
   
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   [img]http://puu.sh/mQur7/b04d97f480.jpg/img]
5. 00:50:915 (1,2,3,4) - hard to expain, but i feel it's good for here
   
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   [img]http://puu.sh/mQuxY/ffe60d7704.jpg/img]
6. 00:52:826 (3) - stream should be start at 00:53:017 -
   
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7. 00:55:884 (3) - 00:58:941 (3) - similar thing here
8. 01:08:113 (5,6) - imo too close, they look so crowding
9. 01:09:641 (2,3) - how about ctrl+g :3

1. rhythm thing same as hardest diff

1. ar+0.5
2. 00:52:826 (3) - same as hardest diff
   
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3. 01:15:183 (1) - try take apart them
   
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4. 01:18:049 (5,1) - i think ds between them is too small, will confues player

1. 00:15:756 (1,2) - i don't recommend put overlap like this in normal/easy diff
2. 00:46:329 (2) - bad look imo
   
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Rizia wrote:

[General]

1. disable widescreen support and letterbox during breaks from all diffO

[SupaSoni]

1. 00:32:285 (2,4) - remove this? imo it can more natural for the streamO
2. 00:38:399 (2,4) - sameO^
3. 00:46:138 (3,4,1) - bad flow between 00:46:138 (3,4) - and 00:46:329 (1) - , try this placcement O
   
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   [img]http://puu.sh/mQuLJ/b0a253334e.jpg/img]
4. 00:49:960 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - they are little confues, follow vocal will more fit O yeah true. feels better
   
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   [img]http://puu.sh/mQur7/b04d97f480.jpg/img]
5. 00:50:915 (1,2,3,4) - hard to expain, but i feel it's good for here O yep
   
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   [img]http://puu.sh/mQuxY/ffe60d7704.jpg/img]
6. 00:52:826 (3) - stream should be start at 00:53:017 - O
   
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7. 00:55:884 (3) - 00:58:941 (3) - similar thing hereO ^
8. 01:08:113 (5,6) - imo too close, they look so crowdingO increased space between blanket
9. 01:09:641 (2,3) - how about ctrl+g :3~ emm if i do the flow feels kinda weird. i curved the slider instead so it flows better towardss (2)

[Insane]

1. rhythm thing same as hardest diff[
   O applied same changes
   /list]
   
   [Hard]
   
   1. ar+0.5O
   2. 00:52:826 (3) - same as hardest diffO
      
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   3. 01:15:183 (1) - try take apart them O done
      
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   4. 01:18:049 (5,1) - i think ds between them is too small, will confues playerO increased it
   [Normal]
   
   1. 00:15:756 (1,2) - i don't recommend put overlap like this in normal/easy diff O fixxed
   2. 00:46:329 (2) - bad look imoO its not bad. its called "ART" fixxed xD
      
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good luck

1. 00:27:985 - start at here, recommend use soft hitsound (use green line to change), then add normal sampleset on these note like 00:28:368 (2) - 00:29:132 - 00:29:896 - 00:30:661 - , clap on 00:28:750 - 00:29:514 - 00:30:278 - 00:31:043 - is unnecessary.
2. hitsound suggests appropriate from 00:27:985 - to 00:50:724 -
3. whistle on stream(00:32:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) is good, keep it
4. and 00:32:571 (1,1) - 00:38:686 (1,1) - remove clap

Rizia wrote:

[SupaSoni]
00:15:756 - whistle
00:16:520 - whistle
00:17:285 (1) - whistle
00:18:049 - remove clap, add whistle
00:18:431 (1) - clap
00:18:813 - whistle
00:19:578 - whistle
00:20:342 - whistle
00:20:342 (1,2,3) - whistle
00:21:106 - whistle
00:21:871 - whistle
00:22:635 - whistle
00:23:399 - whistle
00:24:164 - remove clap, add whistle
00:24:546 (1) - clap
00:24:928 - whistle
00:25:692 - whistle
00:26:266 (1,2) - whistle
00:26:648 - whistle
00:27:221 - whistle
00:27:603 - remove all, change to drum clap
00:56:266 (6) - remove whistle
01:00:661 - whistle
01:01:043 (5) - whistle

1. 00:27:985 - start at here, recommend use soft hitsound (use green line to change), then add normal sampleset on these note like 00:28:368 (2) - 00:29:132 - 00:29:896 - 00:30:661 - , clap on 00:28:750 - 00:29:514 - 00:30:278 - 00:31:043 - is unnecessary.
2. hitsound suggests appropriate from 00:27:985 - to 00:50:724 -
3. whistle on stream(00:32:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) is good, keep it
4. and 00:32:571 (1,1) - 00:38:686 (1,1) - remove clap

also all hitsound suggest are appropriate on other diff too

1. Sv diffrent from easy -> normal kinda big imo, so is sv between Insane -> Supasoni, it's not very comfortable when the sv jumps to big between difficulties
2. Kinda questionable on the usement of slider multiplier start from Hard, Insane, and Supasonic. Usually people use a faster slider on kiai part, but in this case you use fast slider on non kiai part
3. On all diff, I guess you can make new combo on every white big tick, for some reason your current new combo sequence kinda random from my point of view

1. 00:40:788 (2,3) - The spacing kinda too big imo for a part which is still calm and not that fast, my sugestion you can reduce the spacing a bit like you did on 00:33:718 (5,6,7) -
2. 00:57:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not really comfortable with the shape during testplay, imo might result a bad flow with 00:58:177 (6) - . Maybe you can try something like this http://puu.sh/n8LiC/a5fea058cb.jpg or something else that can improve the flows there?
3. 01:14:610 (1) - The placement a bit odd imo, especially the overlapping between 01:14:227 (4) - . Maybe you can try something like this http://puu.sh/n8Lyf/2c9506d634.jpg or something else with less awkward overlapping
4. 01:20:342 (3,4,5,6) - I prefer placement like this http://puu.sh/n8LEO/78252e2d45.jpg it'll make the movement less too sharp and a bit reducing the jump between 01:20:629 (6,7) -

1. 01:12:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure why spacing so low on those, yet the other part use a larger spacing on kiai

1. 00:50:055 (3) - Delete? kinda make the whole rhythm here 00:49:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confusing during testplay or you can change the triplet here
2. 00:49:960 (2,3,4) - with 1/4 slider + reverse so it'll less confusing
3. 01:15:183 (7) - Better spacing that more, kinda too close or you can keep it follow the regular spacing
4. 01:20:342 (3) - I prefer something like this http://puu.sh/n8NyM/c7609492ca.jpg so the flow on this one 01:20:342 (3,4) - less weird to play

1. 00:24:928 (2,3) - Just personal preference, maybe you can make both of them something like this http://puu.sh/n8NOQ/8073ef9f5a.jpg imo they looks nicer than your current one
2. 01:12:699 (2,1) - Blanket them better http://puu.sh/n8NUj/e3e368177b.jpg

1. 01:28:368 (2) - You can try ctrl+g that and move this 01:29:132 (1) - to x:308 y:144? for better circular flow http://puu.sh/n8O8j/707cb94197.jpg
2. Also my other concern is the slidertick sound is louder than any clickable beat e.g. 00:03:909 - and etc. I think you should lower the volume on those sliderticks, so they will more reasonable to be played

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello as requested
Sugestion,

General

1. Sv diffrent from easy -> normal kinda big imo, so is sv between Insane -> Supasoni, it's not very comfortable when the sv jumps to big between difficultiesX well that's how i want the maps to be played. the star rating on each map is within the RC and their diff scale evenly so i don't think that is an issue. the reason behin easy being so low its coz i used 1.00sv at first but the star rating went off the easy star rating so i had to tone it down. and the supasoni diff is higher than it should be coz its the hardest difficulty and the sv is what makes that diff so special.
2. Kinda questionable on the usement of slider multiplier start from Hard, Insane, and Supasonic. Usually people use a faster slider on kiai part, but in this case you use fast slider on non kiai part. X yeah i understand your logic but the thing is that the song starts powerfully without any slow intro to get you in. its just "hits" you right as it begins . so i wanted to keep that "feeling" with the map.
3. On all diff, I guess you can make new combo on every white big tick, for some reason your current new combo sequence kinda random from my point of viewO been told before. however some of them cant be simply be put on big white ticks coz they more or less make no sense to the map/rhythm or pattern. will fix as many as possible even though i already been thought the NC revamp process. . .

Supasoni

1. 00:40:788 (2,3) - The spacing kinda too big imo for a part which is still calm and not that fast, my sugestion you can reduce the spacing a bit like you did on 00:33:718 (5,6,7) - O these parts are not simmilar:/ . probably talking about this. but yeah reduced the spacing
2. 00:57:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not really comfortable with the shape during testplay, imo might result a bad flow with 00:58:177 (6) - . Maybe you can try something like this http://puu.sh/n8LiC/a5fea058cb.jpg or something else that can improve the flows there? O
3. 01:14:610 (1) - The placement a bit odd imo, especially the overlapping between 01:14:227 (4) - . Maybe you can try something like this http://puu.sh/n8Lyf/2c9506d634.jpg or something else with less awkward overlappingO got rid of the overlapping.
4. 01:20:342 (3,4,5,6) - I prefer placement like this http://puu.sh/n8LEO/78252e2d45.jpg it'll make the movement less too sharp and a bit reducing the jump between 01:20:629 (6,7) -O done

Insane

1. 01:12:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure why spacing so low on those, yet the other part use a larger spacing on kiaiO ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ fixxed

Hard

1. 00:50:055 (3) - Delete? kinda make the whole rhythm here 00:49:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confusing during testplay or you can change the triplet here
2. 00:49:960 (2,3,4) - with 1/4 slider + reverse so it'll less confusingO indeed much better
3. 01:15:183 (7) - Better spacing that more, kinda too close or you can keep it follow the regular spacingO that is an "oops" moment i swear. fixxed
4. 01:20:342 (3) - I prefer something like this http://puu.sh/n8NyM/c7609492ca.jpg so the flow on this one 01:20:342 (3,4) - less weird to playO done

Normal

1. 00:24:928 (2,3) - Just personal preference, maybe you can make both of them something like this http://puu.sh/n8NOQ/8073ef9f5a.jpg imo they looks nicer than your current one O yeah look pretier :3
2. 01:12:699 (2,1) - Blanket them better http://puu.sh/n8NUj/e3e368177b.jpgO :O omg fixxed

Easy

1. 01:28:368 (2) - You can try ctrl+g that and move this 01:29:132 (1) - to x:308 y:144? for better circular flow http://puu.sh/n8O8j/707cb94197.jpg X don't rly wanna follow a circular flow there. like it the way it is
2. Also my other concern is the slidertick sound is louder than any clickable beat e.g. 00:03:909 - and etc. I think you should lower the volume on those sliderticks, so they will more reasonable to be played O about that thanks for mentioning , was trying to figure out what was more optimal so will decrease it.

You can disagree with my mod, I hope that help. Goodluck! thaaanks