02:05:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is subjective, of course, but as if it were worth just making 1/2 sliders. Because the rhythm on the red ticks is not very distinguishable against the background of the vocals. Unlike this part: 02:16:035 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
01:33:643 (3,4,5,6) - I wouldn't build this part that way. Try to arrange and build some kind of jump
For example: