wow i used to use color for my mods lmao
govinds another heh
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2) - could shift to 1 because 1's pretty blank
00:17:010 (17010|2,17610|3) - could put in same column because PR
00:48:295 (48295|2) - idk mang doesnt seem legit to have LN here to follow the vocals, feel like a note is enough to convey the impact of it. aft all i didnt really find any of these LNs anywher ele except for things like 00:51:038 (51038|2) -
01:15:895 - note plis
01:24:124 - maybe? note
01:50:352 (110352|1) - to 1, pretty bare there again
yup thats it weeeee
00:15:381 - piano here
00:17:095 (17095|3,17610|0) - idk these seem like theyre following the piano to me so
00:20:867 - dk why is this ignored
00:22:238 - beginner has a note here welp, guessing youre transiting into the drummy section so id recommend removing the note over in beginner
00:35:952 (35952|2,36295|1,36638|2,36981|1) - meh. move 00:36:981 (36981|1) - to 1 perhaps
00:40:410 (40410|3,40752|3) - you never really did stack them like this
00:56:524 (56524|1,56695|3,56867|1,57038|3,57210|1,57381|3,57552|1,57724|3,57895|1,58067|3,58238|1) - is this intentional w e w
01:07:495 (67495|1,67667|0,67838|1,68010|0,68181|1) - never really had this in this chorus too
01:14:524 - 01:17:267 - 01:20:010 - are these gaps intentional
01:18:810 (78810|0,78981|1,79152|0,79324|1) - feels like you can do something other than this here
01:27:038 (87038|2,87381|0,87381|1,87724|3,88067|2,88067|1,88410|2,88410|0,88752|1,88752|3) - maybe you could just continue the stream on from 01:26:010 (86010|1,86181|3,86352|1,86524|3,86695|2,86867|1) - and not have the LNs here that are pretty jarring as its kinda steps down its intensity even though the guitar solos ongoing
01:26:010 (86010|1,86181|3,86352|1,86524|3,86695|2,86867|1) - move any of these somewhere else idk
01:32:867 (92867|2,92867|1,93210|0) - arent these supposed to stack
01:34:238 (94238|3,94238|1,94581|0) - yeah stack just like 01:31:495 (91495|3,91838|3)
01:45:895 (105895|1,106067|0,106238|1,106410|0,106581|1) - same thing as above
01:52:752 (112752|2,112924|3,113095|2,113267|3,113438|2) - maybe you could keep these as [1][4] things? for hand balance
01:58:581 (118581|2) - the snarey thingy isnt too obvious until 01:58:752 - so you might wanna consider removing this
will just point out ghosties i guess, wont go too much into ahhh pls delete mode nom
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3,18124|0) - PR things again
00:25:152 (25152|2,25324|2) - maybe dont stack these
00:32:438 (32438|0,32781|2) - might be ghosties, theres that slight ssssssssssssss sound that can cover for it if you want that
00:33:810 (33810|1,33981|1,34152|1,34324|1) - welp
00:43:152 (43152|0,43324|1) - since youve been stacking them before the chord (see: 00:37:495 (37495|1,37667|1,37667|3,37752|0,38695|1,38781|2,38867|1,38867|0) - ) and then chose to invert that fact over the the front of the chord (see: 00:41:781 (41781|2,41781|3,41867|1,41952|3) - ) id rather you stack them
00:44:352 (44352|0,44524|0,44524|3,44610|1,44695|3) - welp choose one side or the other i guess
00:45:210 - double?
00:46:067 (46067|2) - to 4, 00:45:724 (45724|2,45895|2,46067|2) - maybe not a great idea to carry them stacks over
00:51:552 (51552|2,51724|1,51724|3,52238|2,52410|1,52410|3) - consistency pls with 00:52:924 (52924|2,53095|1,53095|2,53610|2,53781|2,53781|1) -
00:55:667 (55667|2,55838|3,56010|2,56181|3,56352|2,56524|3,56695|2,56867|3,57038|2,57210|3,57381|2,57552|3,57724|2,57895|3,58067|2,58238|3,58410|2,58581|3,58752|2,58924|3,59095|2,59267|3,59438|2) - -insert spy meme here-
yeah tbh fam better to use those stacking things to allow for more breathing space so to speak, since youve used the LNs and now only have 3 columns to spare
<later insert>
i think you should have the stacky chorus at the end, and have the middle section be 01:40:752 (100752|1,100924|2,101095|3,101095|0,101267|2,101438|0,101610|2,101781|3,101781|0,101952|2,102124|3) - these things. reason being intensity and whatnot, so yeah.
00:55:324 (55324|0,55495|3) - crtl-h thanks
00:59:438 (59438|2,59610|2) - pretty sure this hasnt came out before here
01:01:495 (61495|2,61667|2) - maybe you could have the stacks follow the twangy sound in the music
01:03:552 (63552|3,63724|3) - could be just me whining like a baby but yeah i dont really appreciate these
01:03:895 (63895|1,64067|2,64238|1,64410|2,64581|1,64752|2,64924|1) - same thing with the staks
yeah whole chorus same thing, nothing else
01:18:124 (78124|0,78295|1) - why arent these doubles, 01:17:438 (77438|0,77438|2,77610|0,77610|3,77781|2,77781|1,77952|3,77952|0) - have piano notes and are doubles
01:14:524 - 01:20:010 - 01:17:267 - idk the reason behind the choice of ignoring this tbh
01:22:752 (82752|0,82752|2) - idk if this is doubled intentionally, i get that 01:22:238 (82238|0,82238|3,83610|2,83610|3) - might be doubles because of vocals but that double doesnt have a vocal line and any drum thing for that matter
01:32:867 (92867|1,93038|0,93210|1,93381|0,93552|1,93724|0,93895|1,94067|0,94238|1,94410|3,94581|2,94752|3,94924|2) - not really balanced are they
01:47:781 (107781|3,107781|2,107952|1,107952|0,108295|3,108295|0,108467|1,108638|0,108638|2) - make consistent with 01:01:152 (61152|0,61152|2,61324|1,61324|3,61495|2,61667|2,61667|0,61838|1,62010|0,62010|2) - and the suggestions i made above (if you accepted them of course haha kms)
01:59:181 - 01:59:524 - some drum thing here
00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3,18124|0) - PR hehe
00:33:210 (33210|3,33381|3,33552|3,33724|3,33895|3,34067|3,34238|3,34410|3,34581|3,34752|3,34924|3) - mate what
welp the chorus has a likely ghostie on the 2 blue tick of each 1/1 zzzzzzzzz
i dont really know whether or not you can find a BN willing to go with this, maybe there are a handful but yeah you know how hard it is to get any BN to check your map
personally, i think the ghosties are really fine, good even, esp. in complementing the chorus
01:11:781 (71781|3,71781|0,72981|1,72981|2,73067|0,73067|3,73152|1,73152|2,73238|3,73238|0,73324|2,73324|1) - idk why but i like this a lot
01:13:495 (73495|2) - maybe move this to 4
01:15:724 (75724|2,75895|3,75895|2,76067|2,76067|3,76238|3) - nom
01:17:610 (77610|3,77610|2,77695|1,77695|0,77781|2,77781|3,78124|0,78124|1,78210|3,78210|2,78295|0,78295|1,78467|3,78467|0,78552|2,78552|1,78638|3,78638|0) - sounds seem too light to warrant jumpthrills, maybe you could keep the claps as jumps but others seem kinda meh in a sense
01:14:524 - 01:17:267 - 01:20:010 - same as before, dk why you jumped over this
01:23:095 (83095|2,83095|3,83181|0,83181|1,83267|2,83267|3) - same as before, doesnt seem too impactful to be a jumpthrill tbh
01:28:152 (88152|2,88324|2,88495|2,88667|2) - gae tbh
01:34:152 (94152|3) - to 01:33:981 -
01:34:324 - 01:34:667 - note here
01:34:838 (94838|0) - move to 01:35:010 -
01:38:181 (98181|1,98352|2) - seems like ghosties, same as hyper
01:40:238 (100238|1) - to 3/4, 01:40:238 (100238|1,100410|1,100581|1,100752|1,100924|1) - nom
01:47:781 (107781|1,107781|3,107952|0,107952|2,108124|1,108295|2,108295|1,108295|0) - make consistent with 01:01:152 (61152|3,61152|2,61324|1,61324|0,61495|2,61495|3,61581|1,61667|3,61667|0,61667|2,61838|1,61838|2) -
02:00:638 (120638|1,120724|2,120810|1) - make these like alternate hands, i.e. [1][4][1] then [3][2][3] smth like that, right now it thrills kinda are weird because 02:00:295 (120295|0,120467|0,120638|1,120810|1) - nom
dk if this is kdsable, maybe it is
good luck with rank, if you need a recheck just call me again idm too much
govinds another heh
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Beginner
00:10:752 (10752|2,11267|1,11781|2) - you could do this for PR things00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2) - could shift to 1 because 1's pretty blank
00:17:010 (17010|2,17610|3) - could put in same column because PR
00:48:295 (48295|2) - idk mang doesnt seem legit to have LN here to follow the vocals, feel like a note is enough to convey the impact of it. aft all i didnt really find any of these LNs anywher ele except for things like 00:51:038 (51038|2) -
01:15:895 - note plis
01:24:124 - maybe? note
01:50:352 (110352|1) - to 1, pretty bare there again
yup thats it weeeee
Normal
00:04:581 (4581|1) - throughout section from start till 00:12:981 (12981|2,12981|3) - youve followed the piano except for this part00:15:381 - piano here
00:17:095 (17095|3,17610|0) - idk these seem like theyre following the piano to me so
00:20:867 - dk why is this ignored
00:22:238 - beginner has a note here welp, guessing youre transiting into the drummy section so id recommend removing the note over in beginner
00:35:952 (35952|2,36295|1,36638|2,36981|1) - meh. move 00:36:981 (36981|1) - to 1 perhaps
00:40:410 (40410|3,40752|3) - you never really did stack them like this
00:56:524 (56524|1,56695|3,56867|1,57038|3,57210|1,57381|3,57552|1,57724|3,57895|1,58067|3,58238|1) - is this intentional w e w
01:07:495 (67495|1,67667|0,67838|1,68010|0,68181|1) - never really had this in this chorus too
01:14:524 - 01:17:267 - 01:20:010 - are these gaps intentional
01:18:810 (78810|0,78981|1,79152|0,79324|1) - feels like you can do something other than this here
01:27:038 (87038|2,87381|0,87381|1,87724|3,88067|2,88067|1,88410|2,88410|0,88752|1,88752|3) - maybe you could just continue the stream on from 01:26:010 (86010|1,86181|3,86352|1,86524|3,86695|2,86867|1) - and not have the LNs here that are pretty jarring as its kinda steps down its intensity even though the guitar solos ongoing
01:26:010 (86010|1,86181|3,86352|1,86524|3,86695|2,86867|1) - move any of these somewhere else idk
01:32:867 (92867|2,92867|1,93210|0) - arent these supposed to stack
01:34:238 (94238|3,94238|1,94581|0) - yeah stack just like 01:31:495 (91495|3,91838|3)
01:45:895 (105895|1,106067|0,106238|1,106410|0,106581|1) - same thing as above
01:52:752 (112752|2,112924|3,113095|2,113267|3,113438|2) - maybe you could keep these as [1][4] things? for hand balance
01:58:581 (118581|2) - the snarey thingy isnt too obvious until 01:58:752 - so you might wanna consider removing this
will just point out ghosties i guess, wont go too much into ahhh pls delete mode nom
Hard
00:15:381 -00:20:867 - dk why youre ignoring this tbh00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3,18124|0) - PR things again
00:25:152 (25152|2,25324|2) - maybe dont stack these
00:32:438 (32438|0,32781|2) - might be ghosties, theres that slight ssssssssssssss sound that can cover for it if you want that
00:33:810 (33810|1,33981|1,34152|1,34324|1) - welp
00:43:152 (43152|0,43324|1) - since youve been stacking them before the chord (see: 00:37:495 (37495|1,37667|1,37667|3,37752|0,38695|1,38781|2,38867|1,38867|0) - ) and then chose to invert that fact over the the front of the chord (see: 00:41:781 (41781|2,41781|3,41867|1,41952|3) - ) id rather you stack them
00:44:352 (44352|0,44524|0,44524|3,44610|1,44695|3) - welp choose one side or the other i guess
00:45:210 - double?
00:46:067 (46067|2) - to 4, 00:45:724 (45724|2,45895|2,46067|2) - maybe not a great idea to carry them stacks over
00:51:552 (51552|2,51724|1,51724|3,52238|2,52410|1,52410|3) - consistency pls with 00:52:924 (52924|2,53095|1,53095|2,53610|2,53781|2,53781|1) -
00:55:667 (55667|2,55838|3,56010|2,56181|3,56352|2,56524|3,56695|2,56867|3,57038|2,57210|3,57381|2,57552|3,57724|2,57895|3,58067|2,58238|3,58410|2,58581|3,58752|2,58924|3,59095|2,59267|3,59438|2) - -insert spy meme here-
yeah tbh fam better to use those stacking things to allow for more breathing space so to speak, since youve used the LNs and now only have 3 columns to spare
<later insert>
i think you should have the stacky chorus at the end, and have the middle section be 01:40:752 (100752|1,100924|2,101095|3,101095|0,101267|2,101438|0,101610|2,101781|3,101781|0,101952|2,102124|3) - these things. reason being intensity and whatnot, so yeah.
00:55:324 (55324|0,55495|3) - crtl-h thanks
00:59:438 (59438|2,59610|2) - pretty sure this hasnt came out before here
just a something suggestion
id say the stacks right beside the notes are --fine-- since song is 175 but it doesnt really make this diff a little un-DTable tbh (i just suck at jacks heh)
01:01:495 (61495|2,61667|2) - maybe you could have the stacks follow the twangy sound in the music
01:03:552 (63552|3,63724|3) - could be just me whining like a baby but yeah i dont really appreciate these
01:03:895 (63895|1,64067|2,64238|1,64410|2,64581|1,64752|2,64924|1) - same thing with the staks
yeah whole chorus same thing, nothing else
01:18:124 (78124|0,78295|1) - why arent these doubles, 01:17:438 (77438|0,77438|2,77610|0,77610|3,77781|2,77781|1,77952|3,77952|0) - have piano notes and are doubles
01:14:524 - 01:20:010 - 01:17:267 - idk the reason behind the choice of ignoring this tbh
01:22:752 (82752|0,82752|2) - idk if this is doubled intentionally, i get that 01:22:238 (82238|0,82238|3,83610|2,83610|3) - might be doubles because of vocals but that double doesnt have a vocal line and any drum thing for that matter
01:32:867 (92867|1,93038|0,93210|1,93381|0,93552|1,93724|0,93895|1,94067|0,94238|1,94410|3,94581|2,94752|3,94924|2) - not really balanced are they
suggestion
01:38:181 (98181|1,98352|2) - most likely ghosties also could you make 01:32:352 (92352|3,92524|2,92695|3,92867|2) - lead into this thrilly thing better
01:47:781 (107781|3,107781|2,107952|1,107952|0,108295|3,108295|0,108467|1,108638|0,108638|2) - make consistent with 01:01:152 (61152|0,61152|2,61324|1,61324|3,61495|2,61667|2,61667|0,61838|1,62010|0,62010|2) - and the suggestions i made above (if you accepted them of course haha kms)
01:59:181 - 01:59:524 - some drum thing here
Another
00:11:867 (11867|2,12210|1) - 00:12:552 (12552|3) - same thing from hyper, couldddd be ghost notes00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3,17610|3,18124|0) - PR hehe
00:33:210 (33210|3,33381|3,33552|3,33724|3,33895|3,34067|3,34238|3,34410|3,34581|3,34752|3,34924|3) - mate what
welp the chorus has a likely ghostie on the 2 blue tick of each 1/1 zzzzzzzzz
i dont really know whether or not you can find a BN willing to go with this, maybe there are a handful but yeah you know how hard it is to get any BN to check your map
personally, i think the ghosties are really fine, good even, esp. in complementing the chorus
some suggestions i guess
you could have the triple notes kinda leading towards a certain direction to at least differentiate the chorus from the other sections
could also have claps be triples and make this section a 1/2, but thats retarded
or you could just make everything as dense as possible and have the claps and the 00:52:752 (52752|0,52752|2,52752|3) - whatever this is into triples
i know these suggestions might be retar but yeah idk what other patterns other than a stream now tbh
sorry if it kinda destroys the stream thing, but yeah ranking criteria :V
ok i wont really mention anything more about the chorus from now on, maybe you could think about it or smthyou could have the triple notes kinda leading towards a certain direction to at least differentiate the chorus from the other sections
could also have claps be triples and make this section a 1/2, but thats retarded
or you could just make everything as dense as possible and have the claps and the 00:52:752 (52752|0,52752|2,52752|3) - whatever this is into triples
i know these suggestions might be retar but yeah idk what other patterns other than a stream now tbh
sorry if it kinda destroys the stream thing, but yeah ranking criteria :V
01:11:781 (71781|3,71781|0,72981|1,72981|2,73067|0,73067|3,73152|1,73152|2,73238|3,73238|0,73324|2,73324|1) - idk why but i like this a lot
01:13:495 (73495|2) - maybe move this to 4
01:15:724 (75724|2,75895|3,75895|2,76067|2,76067|3,76238|3) - nom
01:17:610 (77610|3,77610|2,77695|1,77695|0,77781|2,77781|3,78124|0,78124|1,78210|3,78210|2,78295|0,78295|1,78467|3,78467|0,78552|2,78552|1,78638|3,78638|0) - sounds seem too light to warrant jumpthrills, maybe you could keep the claps as jumps but others seem kinda meh in a sense
01:14:524 - 01:17:267 - 01:20:010 - same as before, dk why you jumped over this
01:23:095 (83095|2,83095|3,83181|0,83181|1,83267|2,83267|3) - same as before, doesnt seem too impactful to be a jumpthrill tbh
01:28:152 (88152|2,88324|2,88495|2,88667|2) - gae tbh
01:34:152 (94152|3) - to 01:33:981 -
01:34:324 - 01:34:667 - note here
01:34:838 (94838|0) - move to 01:35:010 -
01:38:181 (98181|1,98352|2) - seems like ghosties, same as hyper
01:40:238 (100238|1) - to 3/4, 01:40:238 (100238|1,100410|1,100581|1,100752|1,100924|1) - nom
01:47:781 (107781|1,107781|3,107952|0,107952|2,108124|1,108295|2,108295|1,108295|0) - make consistent with 01:01:152 (61152|3,61152|2,61324|1,61324|0,61495|2,61495|3,61581|1,61667|3,61667|0,61667|2,61838|1,61838|2) -
02:00:638 (120638|1,120724|2,120810|1) - make these like alternate hands, i.e. [1][4][1] then [3][2][3] smth like that, right now it thrills kinda are weird because 02:00:295 (120295|0,120467|0,120638|1,120810|1) - nom
dk if this is kdsable, maybe it is
good luck with rank, if you need a recheck just call me again idm too much