This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, December 9, 2017 at 12:28:52 AM

Artist: Foreground Eclipse
Title: Calm Eyes Fixed On Me, Screaming
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Merami Meramipop Melodic Death Metal Screaming Rock Tears Will Become Melodies Tonight Calm Frozen Hands
BPM: 184
Filesize: 4714kb
Play Time: 03:52
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.47 stars, 147 notes)
2. Hard (3.63 stars, 551 notes)
3. Lunatic (4.96 stars, 806 notes)
4. Normal (2.18 stars, 308 notes)
5. Screaming Eyes (5.3 stars, 953 notes)

Download: Foreground Eclipse - Calm Eyes Fixed On Me, Screaming
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Let's try to get this map ranked!!! Second revive! (Currently in need of BNs) THIRD REVIVE!!

I love foreground eclipse soooo

2Hu Always!

Thanks to modders/playtesters:
- Monstrata
- UndeadCapulet
- pkk <--- My love
- _ Hatsune Miku
- AyDJay <--- Honorary Scrub
- Ringating
- [ Way ]
- DropPopCandy
- DahplA
- Ant
- XiMerx
- Repr1se
- Kanzaki
- Raizoken
- Morbon
- -Mo-
- LawL4Ever
- MokouSmoke

Mods: 17

Hope you guys enjoyed!

op

No Dap wrote:

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wtf are you doing here mom

pkk wrote:

No Dap wrote:

op

wtf are you doing here mom

What are you both doing here? Scrubs

Hi reydar~ for M4M~ good luck!!

[General]

I don't know if this mapset can pass under the "approved" category... You might need to make an Easy/Normal difficulty because this song is under 5 minutes in length.

Extra and Lunatic are very similar in style... Both employ a lot of 3-stacks, 5 streams, and the scream parts are very similar with their use of 3/4 sliders... Also their difficulties are 0.08 apart which should be a concern. Consider increasing the difficulty of Extra, or lowering the difficulty of Lunatic because currently, they are too similar.

[Extra]

Consider adding more jump patterns to this difficulty.

00:11:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perfect hexagon pattern? 5, 6, slightly off.
00:28:220 (1,2) - Equally space with rest of stream
00:28:627 (2,3,4,5) - ^Fix spacing too.
00:32:133 (8) - Ctrl+J this and reposition. Better flow.
00:39:307 (5) - How about making this slider two circles? There are two notes sung in the vocals, and also two drumbeats.
00:45:339 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't think this overlap is necessary. Consider another pattern for the second stream?
00:46:970 (3) - Move to 256||202, looks better imo.
00:47:948 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You could try and have these streams blanket 7 a bit better imo.
01:01:644 (1) - This is extra so I would recommend mapping this... You can use streams, repeat sliders etc... I think a spinner doesn't really do this scream part justice.
01:03:600 - + 01:03:926 - Potential for a screen-wide jump here.
01:11:752 (6,7,1) - Potential for jumps here imo.
01:17:377 (8,9) - Why are 8 and 9 stacked :S
01:45:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why are these notes spaced like that...
01:47:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ I don't think you're using the right time-snap This sounds like 1/3 Beat Snap Division, not not 3/8
02:06:535 (1,2,3) - Consider remapping this part.. . 02:06:535 (1,2) - These notes are held vocally so you should use slider here and 02:06:861 (3) - THere are audible drum beats that you can map with circles instead of repeat slider.
02:16:318 (13) - Nice repeat arrow. Dunno if rankable tho xD
02:38:818 (5) - You could add a repeating slider here to continue mapping the empty section following this note. Repeat slider works well here too imo
02:44:035 (4) - ^
02:46:807 - Map something here
03:19:741 - Circle here instead
03:19:905 - Add circle/slider here. This is a big note, so don't map it with a slider-end.
03:20:231 - ^
03:20:557 - ^
03:30:665 (8,9) - No blanket?
03:50:231 (1) - You could definitely map something here instead of using spinner.

[Lunatic]

00:12:405 (5) - Make this two circles instead? Could also add a circle at 00:12:731 - . And maybe make this pattern a triangle? idk.
00:36:209 (2,4) - Stack perfectly.
00:59:035 (1,2,3) - Could blanket these better.
01:01:644 (1) - Same as Extra, You could map this part instead of masking it with a spinner.
01:23:818 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like you could fill up the empty blue-tick gaps here since there is already sufficient triplet buildup from before.
01:45:339 (1) - Remove NC.
01:45:665 - 01:56:100 - This part is a different rhythm than your Extra. (1/4 vs 1/3)
01:57:405 (5) - Make this a slider.
01:57:731 (6) - Take out repeat and begin this slider at 01:58:057 -
02:06:535 (1,2,3) - Same as Extra^
02:30:991 (5) - Add repeat slider instead of circle, same as Extra.
02:33:600 (5) - ^ (Repeat slider here plays especially well here)
02:36:372 - Map a note here? or make 02:36:209 (5) - a slider instead?
02:38:818 (5) - Repeat slider.
02:41:589 - Add note.
02:44:035 (5) - Repeat slider.
02:46:807 - note.
03:34:578 (1) - I think you can map something here too, There are audible drumbeats that can lead the player into the next section of the song.
03:41:100 (5,6,7,1,2) - Try and not have them overlap so much.
03:45:013 (3,1) - ^
03:50:231 - Map this part. You can use triplets here to build up to the stream at the end.

M4M~


Good luck on getting it ranked!

monstrata wrote:

Hi reydar~ for M4M~ good luck!!

[General]

I don't know if this mapset can pass under the "approved" category... You might need to make an Easy/Normal difficulty because this song is under 5 minutes in length.

Extra and Lunatic are very similar in style... Both employ a lot of 3-stacks, 5 streams, and the scream parts are very similar with their use of 3/4 sliders... Also their difficulties are 0.08 apart which should be a concern. Consider increasing the difficulty of Extra, or lowering the difficulty of Lunatic because currently, they are too similar.

[Extra]

Consider adding more jump patterns to this difficulty.

00:11:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perfect hexagon pattern? 5, 6, slightly off.Done
00:28:220 (1,2) - Equally space with rest of stream Done
00:28:627 (2,3,4,5) - ^Fix spacing too. Done
00:32:133 (8) - Ctrl+J this and reposition. Better flow. Done
00:39:307 (5) - How about making this slider two circles? There are two notes sung in the vocals, and also two drumbeats.Good idea, I did that
00:45:339 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't think this overlap is necessary. Consider another pattern for the second stream? I think this works, can you confirm?
00:46:970 (3) - Move to 256||202, looks better imo.Personally I don't think so. That's just me though ^^
00:47:948 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You could try and have these streams blanket 7 a bit better imo. Done
01:01:644 (1) - This is extra so I would recommend mapping this... You can use streams, repeat sliders etc... I think a spinner doesn't really do this scream part justice. Done
01:03:600 - + 01:03:926 - Potential for a screen-wide jump here. Done
01:11:752 (6,7,1) - Potential for jumps here imo. Gotcha
01:17:377 (8,9) - Why are 8 and 9 stacked :S Originally they were to kinda map the change in the background (bass drum was used)...now they look wierd I fixed though
01:45:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why are these notes spaced like that... Reduced the distance spacing between the notes to make it a bit more playable
01:47:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ I don't think you're using the right time-snap This sounds like 1/3 Beat Snap Division, not not 3/8 I'm using 1/8 since nothing else really fits into the rhythm in this part
02:06:535 (1,2,3) - Consider remapping this part.. . 02:06:535 (1,2) - These notes are held vocally so you should use slider here and 02:06:861 (3) - THere are audible drum beats that you can map with circles instead of repeat slider. Personally I like this part, if more people talk about it then I'll change it.
02:16:318 (13) - Nice repeat arrow. Dunno if rankable tho xD Lol I reduced the spacing between the notes...maybe that'll make it a bit MORE rankable?
02:38:818 (5) - You could add a repeating slider here to continue mapping the empty section following this note. Repeat slider works well here too imo I kind of did this on purpose because the background doesn't have anything special...like I said if this is pointed out more I'll change though <3
02:44:035 (4) - ^ ^
02:46:807 - Map something here Done
03:19:741 - Circle here instead Done
03:19:905 - Add circleslider here. This is a big note, so don't map it with a slider-end. Done
03:20:231 - ^ Done
03:20:557 - ^ Done
03:30:665 (8,9) - No blanket? Fixed
03:50:231 (1) - You could definitely map something here instead of using spinner. Done

[Lunatic]

00:12:405 (5) - Make this two circles instead? Could also add a circle at 00:12:731 - . And maybe make this pattern a triangle? idk. Done beisdes the extra circle. It doesn't fit.
00:36:209 (2,4) - Stack perfectly. Done
00:59:035 (1,2,3) - Could blanket these better. I think I did this right...?
01:01:644 (1) - Same as Extra, You could map this part instead of masking it with a spinner. Done
01:23:818 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like you could fill up the empty blue-tick gaps here since there is already sufficient triplet buildup from before.Done. It was kinda wierd though but I added hitsounds which made it nicer.
01:45:339 (1) - Remove NC. Sorry I'm not familiar with some terms...NC?
01:45:665 - 01:56:100 - This part is a different rhythm than your Extra. (1/4 vs 1/3)
01:57:405 (5) - Make this a slider.
01:57:731 (6) - Take out repeat and begin this slider at 01:58:057 - That was intended. The rhythm is easier to play on lunatic and then there is the extra version. Both work imo but if a lot more people point that out I'll change.
02:06:535 (1,2,3) - Same as Extra^ Decided to make this a bit easier than extra since they're both sort of mapped the same. This'll probably bring the difficulty gap a tad bigger from the two.
02:30:991 (5) - Add repeat slider instead of circle, same as Extra. I'm confused because it doesn't make it play good imo...if I'm even doing it right. Can you provide some form of image showing what you mean?
02:33:600 (5) - ^ (Repeat slider here plays especially well here) Same thing....idk
02:36:372 - Map a note here? or make 02:36:209 (5) - a slider instead? I think this is fine...that should belong in extra. Keeping it like that in lunatic is what I think works xD
02:38:818 (5) - Repeat slider. Still don't know what you mean...
02:41:589 - Add note. Belongs in extra...
02:44:035 (5) - Repeat slider. I'm going to keep this part the same. It just works better with me I feel.
02:46:807 - note. ...belongs in extra
03:34:578 (1) - I think you can map something here too, There are audible drumbeats that can lead the player into the next section of the song. Done
03:41:100 (5,6,7,1,2) - Try and not have them overlap so much. Done
03:45:013 (3,1) - ^ Done
03:50:231 - Map this part. You can use triplets here to build up to the stream at the end.Done

For Lunatic, good mod but a lot of things were things I'd like to keep rather than change. Some things would catch people off guard playing lunatic if they can't play extra. Like if they wanted that they should play extra xD. Everything else did help indeed...now to fix extra xD
Thanks for your mod on extra. Definitely helped a lot. If you don't mind I'd like you to kind of check on my map again and see if I did things right. I'll start on your mod as soon as I can! Thanks

NC = new combo, like start a new combo here, or remove the nc xD

At school atm, will check your changes when I get home since you asked me to confirm some stuff xD

As requested

Fixed your timing for you, just copy and paste this into the TimingPoints section in your .osu file:

You might need to resnap your objects after, just ask if you need help.

Also the section from 01:45:665 - to 01:54:633 - is actually 1/6 if you listen to the drums



Fun map, have fun mapping!

UndeadCapulet wrote:

M4M~

SPOILER

[General]

Your hitsounds are really loud ;-; Fluctuate around 50-60%. Fixed

Audio bit rate is above 192kbps, which is unrankable. Fixed

You may also wanna shave off some difficulty in the Lunatic for difficulty spread purposes, or make your Extra harder. Did that already

Also, where''s your kiai? :c Changed

[Extra]

00:21:698 Make the slider more horizontal so the cursor movement feels more natural. Pretty sure I did what you meant lol
00:34:578 Enlarge this gap to emphasize the single drum more. Done
01:17:377 Why are 8 and 9 stacked .-. Also there's still a beat on the blue tick so why not just lead the stream into the slider? Well I meant to make them stacked because of the double bass at the end of the stream, but oh well it felt weird. I also made it end in a slider like you said
01:35:883 I don't know if I'm just weird, but ctrl+G'ing this slider makes more sense. Let the momentum from the stream carry over into the cursor placement on the slider after skipping down to 6. I can see what you mean. It took a bit for me to understand that
01:43:057 Smooth out this curve. Done
01:45:013 Missing clap? Done
01:45:665 Pretty sure this isn't the right time snap o.O I will fix this...soon when I can. Right now busy so trying to finish your mod really quickly
01:54:796 (1,2) Clap clap? Done
02:12:894 The start of 9 and the bend in 11 is pretty cramped, move 11 up a bit. Done
02:15:665 This part loses a lot of the impact of the drums since it's just two repeating sliders. I suggest to change it to four 1/2 sliders or some 1/2 sliders and some circles. Done
02:43:220 These sliders are really weird. Something like http://puu.sh/f81nF/9e1f8d8c4a.jpg makes more sense. Done
02:48:437 Yeah... this is really off, too .-. I know, I fixed

I don't have much to say for the last bit of the map, aside from it being kind of easy. But since there's not much left in the song I guess that's not a big deal

[Lunatic]

00:10:122 Why is this two notes when it was a slider in the Extra? Changed to a slider
00:13:546 Clean up this curve, it looks a little jagged since it's only two circles and a slider. Fixed
00:41:100 Is there supposed to be a whistle here? It doesn't happen anywhere else. WHOOPS Thanks
01:00:991 Try to mirror the flow of slider 4 with the stream. I think I did this right
01:24:796 Stack this triplet so this part isn't so convoluted. Probably the previous triplet as well; that way it'll match up with 02:16:155. I changed this part anyway due to "monstrata's" mod.
03:08:491 This slider has a corner on the left side (doesn't flow smoothly) and looks really awkward. Changed to a straight slider
03:52:187 You might consider taking out this stream to balance out the spread and replace it with a spinner or something. That is, if you opt to make the Lunatic easier instead of having the Extra be harder. Thanks for the suggestion, this works out well

Good luck on getting it ranked!

Thanks a lot for modding my map <3. I just got around to updating it with your changes! Just saying I have not forgotten to mod your map. Just have been really busy as of late, I literally just got on osu for two seconds to check this mod out...and make the corrections needed. Tomorrow I doubt I will even be home. But saturday I can spend some time modding probably. Or tomorrow if I get home. Thanks for the mod though and be patient.

Forgot to mention that you need to disable widescreen support and letterbox, since those options are only for if your map has a storyboard.

pkk wrote:

As requested

Fixed your timing for you, just copy and paste this into the TimingPoints section in your .osu file:

copy code

14,326.086956521739,4,1,0,100,1,0
2296,326.086956521739,4,1,0,100,1,0
10122,326.086956521739,4,1,0,100,1,0
12404,326.086956521739,4,1,0,100,1,0
25122,326.086956521739,4,1,0,100,1,0
32948,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
64252,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,100,0,0
74687,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
90013,326.086956521739,4,1,0,100,1,0
116100,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,100,0,0
126535,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
148709,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
185231,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,100,0,0
200882,326.086956521739,3,1,0,100,1,0
216453,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

Thanks for this suggestion but...a lot of things needed to be changed (at least on extra) so I did those changes.

You might need to resnap your objects after, just ask if you need help. Only for Lunatic

Also the section from 01:45:665 - to 01:54:633 - is actually 1/6 if you listen to the drums Yeah I got that, and fixed

Lunatic

1. 00:41:915 (4) - try moving this to x 157 y 195, that way the tail of the slider makes a blanket with your previous slider. Done
   
2. 01:21:046 (4) - most of the time the strong beats in the music land on the white ticks, and usually circles or the start of sliders are used to emphasize these strong beats. It will sound better here if you have the slider start on a white tick, so you can either move it to 01:20:883 - or 01:21:209 - in this case Done
   
3. 01:22:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - might be confusing to the player if you only put 1 clap on the first triplet, 2 claps on second and then suddenly three on the third. imo it sounds better to have the clap only on the first note of each triplet I put one on the first two but the third one called for two...that's what the snare drum has so it works here.
   
4. 01:23:818 - the stream here is a bit long, I really liked how you did it in your extra diff with the triplets I changed it. Just lmk if the notes are bunched up too close, I can spread them out.
   
5. 01:50:231 (4) - you can try something like this to help it flow better: Done!
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
6. 01:54:470 (6) - this will flow well into the next slider if you ctrl+g Done
   
7. 02:07:676 (6,8) - if possible, try to avoid tiny overlaps like this so it will look nicer. You can do this instead: Done!
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Another overlap you can avoid is at 02:44:688 (10,2) - Done!
   
8. 02:48:600 (1,2,3,4) - should be snapped to 1/6: I did this
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   You can either put a repeat on the last slider or use a circle to map the finish sound at 02:49:578 - I did this without even looking at your mod
   
   Nice diff! The 5 note mini streams are fun to play

THANKS Really appreciate you taking the time to mod my map

Extra

1. 02:00:502 (2) - you can move this to x 173 y 233 so the sliders don't overlap. Same with 01:41:100 (3,5) - and 03:17:948 (4,1) - , try to avoid the overlap Done
   
2. 02:16:318 (13) - lol, you should remove the last slider point (not the red one) because it's making the repeat arrow point up instead of back towards the start of the slider ...I think this slider is removed (idk, because your timing notes are different from mine)
   
3. 02:48:437 - to 02:49:578 - try this rhythm instead (should be 1/6 snap): Did it
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Putting a circle at 02:49:578 - will map the finish sound in the music (don't forget to add a finish hitsound!) Got it
   
4. 03:53:165 (13) - imo it sounds better without the clap since it sounds out of place. The finish hitsound alone is good enough

Done!

Fun map, have fun mapping!

Thanks a lot for this mod. I really think it helped my map out tremendously...especially the timing which is fixed. I ended up extending your offset a tad bit though because I felt that would just fix it...felt weird without it. BUT THANKS ANYWAY <3

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

M4M

General ===

the map use storyBoard? (if u are not use storyboard ,Trun off) Thought I actually turned it off...guess not for all difficulties




I really don't know what this means...how would I fix this?
Humm.. ?

Hard (now is WIP?)

00:46:970 (5) - this note move between 00:46:644 (3) and 00:46:970 (5) this note ? I changed this a little bit
01:04:905 (2) - this slider, change to Like this type http://puu.sh/fgrVt/e45c4f6a6d.jpg ,( But you choice) I think it's better this way

Then this diff is now WIP.. So.. no much problem..

Thanks for the help :3 <3

Extra

00:32:459 (9) - ctrl+< 2 Times ? Did this, it plays out nicer...I just might need to fix it a tad though
00:48:437 (7) - Ctrl+> 1 Time ? Thinking I will keep this the same
Put on 00:50:231 (1) this note on 00:49:415 (3) - this note I think I will keep it the same here, but thanks for the suggestion
02:49:524 (5) - add Finish sound Did this
03:06:861 (5) - ^ Did this
03:22:187 (4) - ctrl+> 1 Time and move little Right side I would do this but it just kind of copies the part directly afterwards.

Lunatic

02:42:249 (1) - this note put on between 02:42:413 (2) , 02:42:413 (2) this note (is better ) Done
02:47:467 (1) - put on 02:47:630 (2) - this note ? Done

Extreme Diff !

i cant Search out problem in this diif

Thanks a lot for the mod...a few tips for future mods though.

1. Please try to improve your English when modding other English mapper's maps...it was kind of hard to understand what you were saying some of the time (do forgive me if I miss-interpret what you have said)
   
2. Try to give a lot of suggestions that the mapper can try. A mod is not simply picking out what definitely looks wrong. It's about giving the mapper ideas to fix his/her map. You're not telling them to do stuff, you're asking them.

Overall thanks a lot. I did use a good amount of things you have suggested. Ontop of all that, I will begin to mod your map fairly soon when I have time. Thanks a whole lot!

<3

- AyDJay - wrote:

<3

Gtfo

bg and mp3 mod

the bg is 1296x768 but the original is large enough to have it be 1366x768 (16:9) with a little cropping. also the current bg has plenty of noticeable compression artifacts. I also made a second version that is just flipped horizontally, so the character isn't covered as much during song select.I also got you a new mp3, since your current one is kinda low quality (most audible on the cymbals).
here's the mp3 (new offset needed)

no kds

Ringating wrote:

bg and mp3 mod

the bg is 1296x768 but the original is large enough to have it be 1366x768 (16:9) with a little cropping. also the current bg has plenty of noticeable compression artifacts.

new bg

I also made a second version that is just flipped horizontally, so the character isn't covered as much during song select.

flipped

I also got you a new mp3, since your current one is kinda low quality (most audible on the cymbals).
here's the mp3 (new offset needed)

no kds

Okay thank you. I'm not on my pc at the moment but I'll take a look at it as soon as I can

Hello fren :]
M4M?

Solid set, but I didn't take a look at Scarlet since I can't pass it. I didn't mod Hard either because I have no clue what to look for in a Hard .-.
Lunatic was super fun! Good luck on rank~!

[ Way ] wrote:

Hello fren :]
M4M?

[General]
Looks like AiMod really doesn't like you :[
Just make sure the red timing points are the exact same throughout all the diffs, and the preview point in Scarlet is the same as the others.
Add kiai time to Easy/Normal/Hard

[Easy]
Correct me if i'm wrong, but aren't Easies are supposed to have constant distance snap? Even if it isn't right, I feel the DS is too high, even with the lowered SV. Having 1.0 SV with 0.8 DS constantly throughout the diff will also allow for more appealing patterns, because right now I feel like this diff is super, super rough. Personally, I think remapping with the aforementioned SV/DS, and using easier, simpler patterns would be best. Feel free not to listen to me though, just a shitty suggestion, I know remapping 4 minutes of an Easy is super tedious.

Sorry for no mod here :[

[Normal]
Have a simple DS throughout the song on Normals pls. Stick with your 1.3 on parts that sound alike, instead of 1.5>1.6>1.7>1.3. Personally, I don't like the DS being so large in the beginning.
01:06:873 (1) - Repeat and delete the 2?
01:14:699 (1) - Whoa what's even going on in this entire section¿¿ Super awkward to tap to, I'm assuming it's a resnapping error since one note was on a blue tick. I'm gonna point it out and let you handle this because I don't know what you wanted this part to sound like. If it's not an error, then I suggest remapping the whole part from 01:14:699 (1) - to 01:21:547 (4) -
01:22:606 (1) - End the spinner on 01:25:133
01:35:252 (1,2,3) - Change these back to 1.3 DS pls
02:06:556 (1) - I think this feels and sounds better: http://puu.sh/gxYzr.jpg
I'd use this pattern everywhere the nice lady sings like this part. Right now It's realllly awkward.
Right now this is a bit weird, and newer players will have a tough time http://puu.sh/gxZYl.jpg
03:18:948 (1) - End the spinner at 03:20:252 to make enough recovery time for the player to hit the next note.
03:34:585 (1) - End the spinner at 03:35:890
03:49:259 (7,8,9) - I'd suggest this: http://puu.sh/gxWTA.jpg
03:50:237 (1) - End the spinner at 03:51:542

[Lunatic]
Christ, AiMod just had a coronary, fix those unsnapped notes mister
00:14:686 (7) - Put a circle on the big white tick? I'd like to see the player tap this slider instead of keeping the button held through the slider, since it's a big note.
00:22:349 (5,6) - Why is slider->stream 1.16 DS, but the stream stays at 1.0 DS? Looks sloppy and awkward. Move the stream back to 1.0 DS
00:25:284 (1) - The onslaught of red tick sliders starting here is really weird to play. PLEASE make a few of them start on white ticks :[
00:33:437 (6) - Move this up a little for better flow
01:00:012 (4) - It'd be cool if this had equal DS before and after. Just aesthetic, not THAT important.
01:08:165 (2,3) - 1.16 DS compared to ~1.0 in the rest of this part. OCD I guess, sorry.
01:17:377 (6) - Remove just the 6? Stream feels a bit too long.
01:20:882 (3) - Ugly overlap with the previous slider
01:41:588 (9) - Ugly overlap with 7, plus it bothers me that this one isn't curved like the other.
02:31:317 (6,7,8,9,10) - Tone down the squiggles a bit maybe?
02:48:599 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is in 1/3 time brother, not 1/8
03:05:230 (1) - This is supposed to be a 1/1 slider I assume
03:36:864 (2) - End this on the red tick instead of a 1/8 tick?
03:52:190 (1) - Circle where the spinner starts, then move the spinner start to the blue tick?

Really weird how the editor put the 3/4 sections back into 4/4 time after the green timing points which don't affect time signature. Unless my computer is just such trash that it did that itself.

Solid set, but I didn't take a look at Scarlet since I can't pass it. I didn't mod Hard either because I have no clue what to look for in a Hard .-.
Lunatic was super fun! Good luck on rank~!

Thanks a ton. Can't take a look at your mod right now but will when I can. Thanks (by take a look I mean implement stuff)

Oh hey cool you finally finished the set! I'll edit this post with my mod of the other diffs as well as a recheck of everything else once you've made changes based on Way's mod so there isn't any redundancy.

From your M4M queue - I like Touhou and I like metal so it makes perfect sense to mod this Some of these suggestions may have been brought up by the previous modder (I didn't read that you hadn't applied yet, my fault), so apologies if I'm repeating stuff.

General Comments:

1. Widescreen Support enabled in Easy and Normal diffs - this can be turned off since you don't have a SB
2. Audio preview time for Scarlet diff is at 01:03:926 but for all other difficulties it's at 01:01:655. I personally think it sounds better at 01:01:655, but either is fine, so just ensure these are consistent for all diffs
3. You have a lot of unsnapped objects across all diffs, presumably from when you made a SV change, changed an offset or something similar. These are all in AImod so I won't comment on them from now on
4. Why do Easy, Normal and Hard diffs have no kiai timed sections? I'm fine with your choice of kiai on Lunatic and Scarlet, so just copy across the timing points do the same for the other diffs please.
5. All your hitsounds are set to 50%, which feels a little bland. Try to increase the volume of a few important/dramatic parts of the music such as kiai sections and choruses, but don't go overboard or you wont be able to hear the music. Try 65-70% in these areas, and maybe only 35-40% in really quiet sections that are mapped (i.e. quiet but not breaks)

Timing Comments:
There were getting to be too many and it was clogging up General, so I decided to move them down here.

1. One of the previous modders mentioned uninherited timing point conflicts - where your red timing points aren't the same across all difficulties, likely from when you changed an offset at some point and they snapped weirdly. There are a few of these you need to change so I'll post about them in their respective difficulties, but long story short is that everything is correct for Normal (at least it sounds that way to me) so I would ensure all of your timing points match up to what you have in that diff. You can manually change the offset in the timing setup menu.
2. The first and third timing points denote a change to 7/4 time signature, so you should make this clear in the timing setup menu so you don't get flooded with "why so many red points at the start of the song that don't do anything? o_O" comments.
3. After the 3rd timing point, the song stays in 7/4 until just before the spinner (at 00:14:686 I believe) so you should move the 4th timing point (denoting a return to 4/4) to here.
4. There is a 7/4 section at 00:20:230 until what is currently your 5th timing point, meaning you need include another timing point here.
5. 7/4 starts again briefly at 00:30:339 and lasts until 00:32:948.
6. 7/4 starts again at 01:25:121 and lasts until what is currently your 6th timing point.
7. The section beginning at 03:36:538 is timed in 6/4, and this lasts until 03:50:233 so you'll need some more timing points here.

Sorry I couldn't give more feedback on the Lunatic and Scarlet diffs, but hopefully you can make use of the timing suggestions and my comments on the other three diffs. If you need me to explain anything here or want to chat about things in more detail, please don't hesitate to contact me via pm ingame or send me a message on here.

Best of luck and you can have a star too (:

Just an update quickly. Really busy with school and SATs so I have little to no time to actually fully map. The best I can do is fix AiMods at the meantime. But after that I can start working on mods and then give you guys some in return, sorry for the wait.

(I will try to input the MP3 as provided by Ringating as soon as I can, preferably when everything else is completed due to offset change)

On the topic of a bunch of unsnapped objects: For some reason, when changing time I forgot to take note of the millions of unsnapped notes apologies for that. They are all being taken care of as we speak.

[ Scarlet Red ] wrote:

[ Way ] wrote:

Hello fren :]
M4M?

[General]
Looks like AiMod really doesn't like you :[ I fixed everything AiMod related!
Just make sure the red timing points are the exact same throughout all the diffs, and the preview point in Scarlet is the same as the others.
Add kiai time to Easy/Normal/Hard I changed this throughout everything

[Easy]
Correct me if i'm wrong, but aren't Easies are supposed to have constant distance snap? Even if it isn't right, I feel the DS is too high, even with the lowered SV. Having 1.0 SV with 0.8 DS constantly throughout the diff will also allow for more appealing patterns, because right now I feel like this diff is super, super rough. Personally, I think remapping with the aforementioned SV/DS, and using easier, simpler patterns would be best. Feel free not to listen to me though, just a shitty suggestion, I know remapping 4 minutes of an Easy is super tedious. I'll consider this change, but I am unsure if it'll be implemented.

Sorry for no mod here :[

[Normal]
Have a simple DS throughout the song on Normals pls. Stick with your 1.3 on parts that sound alike, instead of 1.5>1.6>1.7>1.3. Personally, I don't like the DS being so large in the beginning. As of now I will leave the DS suggestions until a future update.
01:06:873 (1) - Repeat and delete the 2? Done
01:14:699 (1) - Whoa what's even going on in this entire section¿¿ Super awkward to tap to, I'm assuming it's a resnapping error since one note was on a blue tick. I'm gonna point it out and let you handle this because I don't know what you wanted this part to sound like. If it's not an error, then I suggest remapping the whole part from 01:14:699 (1) - to 01:21:547 (4) - I think I fixed what you were talking about?
01:22:606 (1) - End the spinner on 01:25:133 Done.
01:35:252 (1,2,3) - Change these back to 1.3 DS pls Done
02:06:556 (1) - I think this feels and sounds better: http://puu.sh/gxYzr.jpg I think that just makes it easy-mode. Just my opinion ^^
I'd use this pattern everywhere the nice lady sings like this part. Right now It's realllly awkward. I mean I can see where you're coming from but idk.
Right now this is a bit weird, and newer players will have a tough time http://puu.sh/gxZYl.jpg Which part..?
03:18:948 (1) - End the spinner at 03:20:252 to make enough recovery time for the player to hit the next note. That makes it way too easy
03:34:585 (1) - End the spinner at 03:35:890 Still too easy and it doesn't flow right. Idk, this isn't suppose to be an easy normal. It's supposed to be even challenging for newer players coming out of that stage.
03:49:259 (7,8,9) - I'd suggest this: http://puu.sh/gxWTA.jpg
03:50:237 (1) - End the spinner at 03:51:542 I did this one, though.

[Lunatic]
Christ, AiMod just had a coronary, fix those unsnapped notes mister Shhhhh. We didn't see that.
00:14:686 (7) - Put a circle on the big white tick? I'd like to see the player tap this slider instead of keeping the button held through the slider, since it's a big note. Done
00:22:349 (5,6) - Why is slider->stream 1.16 DS, but the stream stays at 1.0 DS? Looks sloppy and awkward. Move the stream back to 1.0 DS Done
00:25:284 (1) - The onslaught of red tick sliders starting here is really weird to play. PLEASE make a few of them start on white ticks :[ I think I fixed? Idk
00:33:437 (6) - Move this up a little for better flow Fixed
01:00:012 (4) - It'd be cool if this had equal DS before and after. Just aesthetic, not THAT important. I actually added this ^^
01:08:165 (2,3) - 1.16 DS compared to ~1.0 in the rest of this part. OCD I guess, sorry. The map does that purposefully. Irritating, I have a bit of OCD too with that.
01:17:377 (6) - Remove just the 6? Stream feels a bit too long. The background beat has more bass drums so I decided to map em all
01:20:882 (3) - Ugly overlap with the previous slider Fixed
01:41:588 (9) - Ugly overlap with 7, plus it bothers me that this one isn't curved like the other. Done
02:31:317 (6,7,8,9,10) - Tone down the squiggles a bit maybe? But I like dem squiggles
02:48:599 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is in 1/3 time brother, not 1/8 I just did this for lunatic...timing doesn't matter much because it's played precisely the way I want it to be.
03:05:230 (1) - This is supposed to be a 1/1 slider I assume Fixed!
03:36:864 (2) - End this on the red tick instead of a 1/8 tick? Done
03:52:190 (1) - Circle where the spinner starts, then move the spinner start to the blue tick?

Really weird how the editor put the 3/4 sections back into 4/4 time after the green timing points which don't affect time signature. Unless my computer is just such trash that it did that itself.

Solid set, but I didn't take a look at Scarlet since I can't pass it. I didn't mod Hard either because I have no clue what to look for in a Hard .-.
Lunatic was super fun! Good luck on rank~!

Thanks a ton. Can't take a look at your mod right now but will when I can. Thanks (by take a look I mean implement stuff)

For Easy mode: The DS's I will work on when I can. That being later on.
For Normal mode: Lots of things to make it easier. DS's will be worked on but I aimed normal mode to be stepping stone from normal Normal players to Hard. Thanks for the suggestions but I won't use some of them.
For Lunatic: Liked your ideas but felt some of them were a bit irrelevant for what I was going for. Thanks a lot for helping tho!

Your mod will come when there is time on my hands. Was able to this quickly tho.

Thought I'd help give some input on how to improve~! Still fairly new to modding so I apologise if I'm bad at it.
I couldn't give much more advice for the Scarlet difficulty as I'm not too familiar with how 5+ star maps should be mapped, but I tried giving all the input I could. Good luck with getting ranked!

dististik wrote:

Thought I'd help give some input on how to improve~! Still fairly new to modding so I apologise if I'm bad at it.

Easy

1. 00:11:434 (2) - NC Done
2. 00:19:903 (2,1) - Increase the distance between these two Done
3. 00:48:600 (6) - NC Done
4. 00:53:817 (1) - This spinner and the break after it feel like a HUGE waste of rhythm and feels like an awful place to put a spinner. I suggest removing the spinner at the very least and mapping parts of Teto's screams here to make it feel lesrt awkwardly bland. Thanks for the suggestion, done.
5. 01:22:839 (1) - Start this spinner when Merami starts the long note at 01:23:817 rather than where you have it now, as it's current placing feels extremely off. Done
6. 03:07:206 (2,3) - Increase the distance between these two Done
7. 03:36:860 (1,2) - These two are off time Done .

Normal

1. 01:22:594 (1) - Same problem with this spinner as there was with the one in the Easy difficulty. Done
2. 01:50:250 (6,7) - Make this a repeating slider rather than two separate ones, like this. Done!
3. 03:20:874 (1,2,3) - This section is off time.

Fixed

Hard

1. Before anything else, I suggest slowing the AR down to seven. No, sorry. I prefer AR8 hards, not AR7... never AR7
2. 00:26:263 (9) - NC Done
3. 00:36:453 (5) - Delete this circle Done
4. 00:46:888 (4) - Delete this circle Done
5. 01:07:350 (2,3,4,5) - This batch of notes feels incredibly awkward. Try changing this up a bit. Unsure how to change this much but I added a slider in.
6. 01:12:730 (4,5,6,7,8) - Make this a triple stack. Done
7. 01:13:219 (9) - Extend the length of this slider. Done
8. 03:19:027 (2) - This slider is off time. Back it up on the timeline by a quarter beat. I put it where it should be put.

Lunatic

1. The difficulty gap from Hard to Lunatic is too wide. I suggest either getting a GD to help bridge the gap or making another difficulty yourself to do so. I don't think so but if anyone wants to make a GD I'd be happy to)
2. 01:24:958 (9) - NC Done
3. 03:05:230 (1) - This slider is too short by a quarter beat. No its not?
4. 03:36:533 (1,2) - Make the first slider a repeating slider and delete the second. I like it the way it is right now

Scarlet

1. While I understand that the map is supposed to be hard, I suggest lowering the HP. As of now missing a note could become extremely frustrating and cause too many fails.
2. End the second Kiai time sooner Don't see how this affects my map but thank you....

I couldn't give much more advice for the Scarlet difficulty as I'm not too familiar with how 5+ star maps should be mapped, but I tried giving all the input I could. Good luck with getting ranked!

Thanks for the mod. You did have some nice input but there were things I wasn't sure about. But overall thanks for the support

My pleasure! This was one of my first mods so sorry if it came out bad~ Glad I could help either way

dististik wrote:

My pleasure! This was one of my first mods so sorry if it came out bad~ Glad I could help either way

Aha dw. Thanks it definitely helped. Also apologies for the delay... I had some personal issues and quit osu for so many months aha

M4M ^_^

Hi M4M
My map in case you don't find my post in your Q https://osu.ppy.sh/s/322414
Let's start~

[Easy]

[Normal]

[Hard]

I think I'll end my mod here o-o
Good luck...

I'll be modding top-to-bottom, Scarlet, Lunatic and Hard. I don't understand Easy/Normal (and even to an extent Hard) mapping, so I can't be much of a help there.

M4M!

Blue for personal taste/minor aesthetic.
Red for something I see as a bad problem.
Orange for a small problem.


Lacks a some polish, will take some time to get ranked, I imagine. Best of luck, though!

DahplA wrote:

M4M ^_^

Scarlet

1. 00:10:130 (1) - Don't you think 2 circles works better here, so it better emphasizes the claps Done
2. 00:12:405 (7) - Maybe here as well. This one, not so much because you don't want too much circles here. Yeah I'll keep it a slider
3. 00:21:535 (9,1) - There's quite a large jump here for a semi-calm part. I think the jump should be on 1. Also there's a huge jump back as well onto 00:22:187 (1) - Fixed the jumps
4. 00:26:589 (7,9) - Slider overlaps here. Doesn't look too good. Fixed
5. 00:27:894 (1) - Random NC? Didn't catch that, thanks
6. 01:06:861 How come the SV changes midway through kiai, and not at the start. It would make sense especially considering the song tones down at this part, so lowering the SV from the start would show that. Then it would be way too easy and not even be able to be Extra... sorry
7. 01:09:795 And then it speeds up? I think you're using SVs to show vocal change, but I think it's better to have the SV change throughout the whole kiai, rather than just one part. If more people tell me it's that big of an issue I'll fix it. Currently I've been getting praise for this chorus... sorry
8. 01:45:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I know...it's a lot of notes, but the whole thing in general I don't think flows well. It goes around in a circle maneuver for it's entire duration, and some of the sliders overlap weirdly. I think this needs to be reworked to some extent I'll take a look at it but I might keep it...
9. 02:18:495 Unsnapped kiai, not to mention, why is kiai over here in the first place and not on 02:18:293 Doneeee

Lunatic

1. Unless I'm mistaken, only the hardest difficulty can have custom difficulty name. May I ask if you even know what "Lunatic" is for? Not to be rude but it's the equivalent of "Insane" for Touhou songs. So therefore it isn't a custom name. Just wanted to let you know...
2. 00:10:130 (1) - Same as Scarlet Not for this difficulty because it's supposed to be easier.
3. 00:44:034 (7,8) - These two sliders are very close compared to other spacings
4. 01:04:252 To elaborate, you've done a good job of lowering the SV here, but Scarlet difficulty also needs to change No...
5. 01:35:230 Are these snapped to the 1/16? No, just off
6. 02:03:762 (6,1,2) - I think the NC should go on 6. It kinda looks awkward having it where it is right now. Done
7. 03:52:104 (1) - This spinner is an anticlimactic way of ending the song, don't you think? A stream works well here. Done!

Hard

1. 00:30:990 (2) - This curve can be improved Fixed!
3. 01:17:214 (9) - This pattern flows onto the blue tick. I think something like this is better
   
   SPOILER

   [img]puu.sh/imU9l/c9cee505d1.PNG[/img]
   Confused..
4. 01:19:578 (7,8) - ^ Still confused..
5. 01:45:685 It's strange how you left out this 1/6 stream in Lunatic, but added it on Hard. It should be the other way around. 1/6 is difficult for players at these ranks to play. It's easier to play in hard than lunatic because of the overflow of reverse sliders.... that's just me tho
6. 02:11:446 (8,9) - Same as before Confused still...

Normal

1. You have to make sure the map has consistent distance spacing. Done
2. 00:11:923 (2) - Fix this overlap. An overlap is meant to be here
3. 00:30:665 (1) - You need to leave at least two beats worth of space for spinner recovery in Normal Done
4. 00:53:817 I think you should put a note here, because it's the downbeat Done
5. 01:12:078 Why is there a break mid-kiai? This part can easily be mapped. Done
6. 01:06:514 The notes are pushed back here Fixed
7. 01:23:817 (1) - This spinner should end on the downbeat Done
8. 02:03:946 Again. Done

Easy

1. Needs consistent distance spacing again. Done
2. 01:04:252 (1) - Fix blanket Done
3. 01:06:861 Explanation as to why kiai is only 4 seconds here? Done
4. 01:12:078 Break? It's easy...
5. 01:18:600 (4) - Blanket It's not meant to be a blanket
6. There's a lot of unnecessary breaks in this difficulty. You should keep your breaks consistent. While I'm at it, also kiai's need to be consistent The breaks are fine in my opinion...

Thanks for the mod it definitely did help me... I'll work on your mod when I can... right now I'm busy, but thanks again.

Ant wrote:

I'll be modding top-to-bottom, Scarlet, Lunatic and Hard. I don't understand Easy/Normal (and even to an extent Hard) mapping, so I can't be much of a help there.

M4M!

Blue for personal taste/minor aesthetic.
Red for something I see as a bad problem.
Orange for a small problem.

General: The mp3 sounds bad, it's too low quality. I think you should see if you can find a better one. I'll try, no guarantee though

Scarlet

Overall, I'd say that the SV is too high and that the streams are, on average, ugly. It'll be hard to get it ranked, I think. Personally I like the SV but if it's that much of an issue to people I'll change.. and as for streams I'll try to fix. Thanks

00:11:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't see any reason for this not to be a regular hexagon. Think I fixed it up
00:15:095 (1) - Why is this just a spinner? There's some nicely-mappable stuff in the background, I think. Definitely not a great mapped part I just did but... it'll do for now. I'll probably need mods on that specific part anyway
00:19:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think http://puu.sh/inFzR.jpg would look nicer and flow a little better. Done
00:20:883 (5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see any reason for this not to be a regular pentagon. Pentagon* And I'm kinda confused...? Idk, it looks like a pentagon.
00:30:176 (6,7,8) - Try moving these one grid to the right Done
01:12:975 (9) - I don't see why you would put a circle here. Confused? It works fine...?
01:13:220 (1,2) - This sounds like it should be a slider or something, anything but a double basically. Done, thanks
01:45:685 (1) - until 01:54:816 (1) - This is not timed right. I don't know where it goes wrong or how, exactly, but it is not correct. It's because I had to add a timing pointing directly on the first note... since it was originally changed previously during the map
01:59:218 (2) - Try moving this to (276, 236) Done
02:00:522 (2) - Try moving it to somewhere around (196, 272) Done
02:03:457 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - These flow really awkwardly. Maybe move the last triple a bit further away or the 7 a bit more to the left? Think I made it better
02:41:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - Angle-y stream in the middle of a bunch of curves, looks weird. Fixed
02:42:751 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make this a perfect square? Done
02:45:359 (3,4,5) - Try making it a perfect triangle. Done!
That's all.

Lunatic

I'd say this has the same overall problems as Scarlet, with the SV and streams. Maybe I'll lower the sv here, but I would need to have a lot of time on my hands for that... time I do not have now xD.

00:26:588 (5,6) - Try replacing these with 120 and 240 degree rotations of 00:26:262 (4) - Looks great
00:28:789 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Looks bad. Try making it more evenly-rounded, and less angle-y Done
00:36:208 (2,4) - Why not just go all the way and make the sliderstart/end stack perfectly? They do
01:13:383 (5) - Sounds like there's a circle missing right after this. Yup fixed
01:35:230 (1) - EVERYTHING from here on isn't snapped on the timeline. Fixed, idk how that happened
01:40:202 (6) - There's no drum in the background here. Deleting this ruins flow
02:06:045 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - This last curve kinda messes this up, try making it more evenly rounded. Done
02:09:224 (6) - No drum here. Ruins flow
Rest looks fine from here on.

Hard

00:11:923 (3,4) - Try moving it to somewhere like (232, 164) Done
00:31:642 (4,6) - I think these look ugly overlapping like they do. Fixed
00:52:513 (7) - Move to (192, 132) for some more perfect consistency. Done
01:14:035 (9) - Try moving it down to (62,252) Done
01:19:415 (6,7,8) - Sounds bad, there should be a circle at 01:19:496 Done
02:05:087 (5) - Doesn't sound like two 1/4ths fit, in the background. In my opinion I can see it working
02:39:652 (3) - Awkwardly close, looks like it's 1/4th away. Fixed
02:44:869 (3) - ^ Done!
Looks fine, for the rest!

Lacks a some polish, will take some time to get ranked, I imagine. Best of luck, though!

I understand where you're going... but hey. Nothing's impossible ^^. Yeah I know I gotta fix some streams and maybe SV on lunatic but I like fast SV on Scarlet so let's keep that for now... and if it really is a problem amongst most, then let's fix it. Anyway I liked your mod, very very helpful and you weren't actually rude, just constructive. I can't stand rude modders... anyway. Here's your kudosu. And I'll get to workin on your map when I can.

Hello M4M!

Your timing points and uninherited points are a bit screwed up.

Apply this to all difficulty
Start of Kiai - 01:04:276 , 01:56:119 , 03:36:534
End of Kiai - 01:25:145 , 02:16:988 , 03:53:164

[Scarlet]

1. 00:13:553 - 00:24:803 is unsnapped
2. 00:28:487 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - I don't think breaking a stream like that would be nice. A curved stream flowing into (1) looks better
3. 00:31:504 (6,7,8,9) - You emphasised on (7) by having huge DS jump but not 8>9? You should have the same DS leading to 9 as well since (7,9) is the same
4. 00:32:483 (10,11,1) - There is no point in reducing DS, I would stack (1) with (10)
5. 00:35:418 (7) - Inconsistent DS
6. 00:47:972 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - No blanketed nicely (like I imagined a slider on (2,3,4,5,6) and it doesn't seem to blanket with (7)
7. 01:07:862 (4,1) - In terms of vocal, they are the same. I recommend replacing (4,5) with just a slider
8. 01:38:347 (1,2) - Inconsistent DS
9. 01:41:445 (4,5,6,7) - ? I recommend just emphasising on (5,7) because now it plays kinda weird
10. 02:06:880 (3) - Would be cool if this slider is inside the stream circle
11. 02:09:163 (5,6) - Blanket?... o.o
12. 02:10:630 (10) - Consistent DS would be better since previously you did it as well, and this circle is not unordinary
13. 03:31:315 (10) - Move 3rd slider point to 392,168 to perfect blanket

[Lunatic]

1. 00:36:697 (4) - Slider end's not fully stacked

Lol can't find much. It's up to you if you want to mod 1 difficulty of my map. GL for rank!
edit no kudosu ty

XiMerx wrote:

Hello M4M!

Your timing points and uninherited points are a bit screwed up.

Apply this to all difficulty
Start of Kiai - 01:04:276 , 01:56:119 , 03:36:534
End of Kiai - 01:25:145 , 02:16:988 , 03:53:164

[Scarlet]

1. 00:13:553 - 00:24:803 is unsnapped Fixed
2. 00:28:487 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - I don't think breaking a stream like that would be nice. A curved stream flowing into (1) looks better Done
3. 00:31:504 (6,7,8,9) - You emphasised on (7) by having huge DS jump but not 8>9? You should have the same DS leading to 9 as well since (7,9) is the same I didn't purely mean to emphasize it... I did it for symmetrical purposes.
4. 00:32:483 (10,11,1) - There is no point in reducing DS, I would stack (1) with (10) Done
5. 00:35:418 (7) - Inconsistent DS Fixed
6. 00:47:972 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - No blanketed nicely (like I imagined a slider on (2,3,4,5,6) and it doesn't seem to blanket with (7) It looks remotely fine... I don't know how I could possibly fix it any better.
7. 01:07:862 (4,1) - In terms of vocal, they are the same. I recommend replacing (4,5) with just a slider Confused?
8. 01:38:347 (1,2) - Inconsistent DS Fixed
9. 01:41:445 (4,5,6,7) - ? I recommend just emphasising on (5,7) because now it plays kinda weird I just moved 6 a bit more to the middle because I was confused
10. 02:06:880 (3) - Would be cool if this slider is inside the stream circle Again... confused? What part of the circle do you mean?
11. 02:09:163 (5,6) - Blanket?... o.o Fixed
12. 02:10:630 (10) - Consistent DS would be better since previously you did it as well, and this circle is not unordinary Fixed...?
13. 03:31:315 (10) - Move 3rd slider point to 392,168 to perfect blanket

Done... I think

[Lunatic]

1. 00:36:697 (4) - Slider end's not fully stacked

Fixed

Lol can't find much. It's up to you if you want to mod 1 difficulty of my map. GL for rank!
edit no kudosu ty

Thanks for the mod. Some things were useful whereas others I thought were unnecessary. Thanks again tho. I gave you kudosu.

Hello. From your mod queue M4M.

Scarlet
00:44:548 (4) - Move the red point to x:444,y:308
00:46:994 (3) - Move the red point to x:280,y:152
01:17:400 (8,10) - The stream could flow better without these. I'm not sure myself. Can't decide. :p
01:46:989 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest making these into a curve. 1/3 is hard enough by itself.
01:48:129 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above.

Lunatic
03:09:161 (1) - Move the red point to x: 320 y: 108

Hard
01:24:982 (10) - Consider making this a circle.
02:06:880 (2) - Move the red point to x:312, y:288
03:06:228 (3) - Move the red point to x:128 y: 196

Nothing to point out in Normal and Easy.

Overall thoughts: This will be better than the current ranked version. Good luck!

Hello from my queue.

Scarlet :



Lunatic :



Hard :

Repr1se wrote:

Hello. From your mod queue M4M.

Scarlet
00:44:548 (4) - Move the red point to x:444,y:308 Done
00:46:994 (3) - Move the red point to x:280,y:152 Done
01:17:400 (8,10) - The stream could flow better without these. I'm not sure myself. Can't decide. :p Someone originally pointed out that I should actually add those notes. Heh. So yeah xD. I'll keep them for now, and if more people say something then I'll take em out
01:46:989 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest making these into a curve. 1/3 is hard enough by itself. Done, thanks
01:48:129 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above. Triied to see what I could do... but it may have changed the part afterwards for the worse I'm unsure.. thanks tho

Lunatic
03:09:161 (1) - Move the red point to x: 320 y: 108 Done

Hard
01:24:982 (10) - Consider making this a circle. Done
02:06:880 (2) - Move the red point to x:312, y:288 Done
03:06:228 (3) - Move the red point to x:128 y: 196 Done

Nothing to point out in Normal and Easy.

Overall thoughts: This will be better than the current ranked version. Good luck!

Thanks for the mod added a lot of what you suggested into the map... also thanks for the compliment I hate the ranked version and wanted to do better haha.

-Kanzaki wrote:

Hello from my queue.

Scarlet :

1. The difficulty name should be adapted to the song so it has to be something about the song or extra. I suppose... changed
   
2. 00:23:001 (6) - 00:25:146 (3) - 00:31:667 (7) - 03:52:675 (1) - NC All changed
   
3. 02:05:249 (9) - add circle for gameplay maybe. Doesn't flow with the song imo
   
4. 02:49:597 (5) - that 5 should be at this time. Done
   
5. 01:16:830 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - change this part because as i can see you follow the drum but it is not right like this try this 01:16:830 (9,10,11) - triple 01:17:156 (12) -circle 01:17:319 (1,2,3,4,1) - 5 stream last one is slider --> http://puu.sh/iIc1x/5e1ffaf4db.jpg I erased 2 notes and played it... it actually plays nicely (it does use your rhythm thank you)
   
6. 01:25:553 (1) - add spin maybe it ends at 01:26:450 Done!
   
7. 02:28:728 (1) - remove NC Done I don't know how I missed that
   
8. 02:31:174 (6) - you add circle at here but you dont add circle at 02:33:782 (6) - so do the same thing for both. The way the background sounds, it fits perfectly if you listen... one part needs it the other doesn't call for one etc etc. That's the way I hear it...
   
9. 02:31:174 (6,6,6,6,6,6,6) - all of these acctualy same dont do the samething for all of them i suggest you to dont put anything to those points. Read last comment
   

Lunatic :

1. 01:12:102 (8) - 02:06:064 (9) - 03:52:676 (7) - 03:51:045 (6) - NC Confused with the last two NC's so I puit one on the (7)
   
2. 01:16:830 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Same suggestion -- change this part because as i can see you follow the drum but it is not right like this try this 01:16:830 (9,10,11) - triple 01:17:156 (12) -circle 01:17:319 (1,2,3,4,1) - 5 stream last one is slider --> http://puu.sh/iIc1x/5e1ffaf4db.jpg Done I think...
   
3. 01:19:439 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ listen carefully Think I fixed it idk...
   
4. 01:25:553 (1) - spin Done
   

Hard :

1. Map the first break time pls. Done
   
2. 01:19:439 (6,7,8,9) - this part is a little bit hard to read for hard stack 6,7,8 and change the way of the sliders. http://puu.sh/iId3T/509b990d28.jpg I changed the stack but I didn't change the sliders they look cool the way they are.
   
3. 01:45:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - at this part the drum never stops dont give spaces like this add something to 01:46:826 (5,5,5) - and all other empty spots 01:50:250 (3,4,5,6,1) - maybe use these for all part. Um... I feel because it's hard I don't think this is necessary?
   
4. 02:30:685 (10,11,9,10,10,11,9,10,8,9,8,9,8,9) - 03:46:316 (7) - 03:49:251 (7) - NC Done
   
5. 03:41:099 (5) - move it a little bit down to not overlap. Done!
   
   

Done thanks for the mod

from m4m q

Screaming Eyes:

00:20:556 (4) - ctrl+g
00:35:581 (8) - new combo
00:36:069 (1) - no new combo
00:38:189 (8) - 00:38:679 (1) - ^
00:40:798 (9) - 00:41:287 (1) - ^
00:43:896 (1) - ^
there are lots more of that, reasoning for this is because new bar starts right here and it fits the music more imo
00:51:884 (1,2,3) - maybe something like this?
01:08:678 (2) - maybe this?
01:13:243 (1) - make it reverse
01:36:391 (9,10,11) - this
01:47:424 (6,1) - this
02:33:945 (6) - 02:39:163 (6) - 02:44:379 (6) - new combo

Lunatic:

00:53:271 (2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3341989
01:12:102 (1,2,3) - 01:12:755 (1,2,3) - stack those
01:19:928 - i think you missed a note right here...
01:50:576 (5,6,7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3342000
02:33:944 (6) - 02:36:553 (6) - 02:39:162 (6) - 02:41:771 (6) - new combo
03:36:045 (8,9,10) - ctrl+h

im not into easier diffs, sorry

Hello, M4M here
Mostly I can mod extra\extra+ diffs because of my skill level, I'm noob at easy diffs sry
Also my english sux
[General]
I don't really like mapping songs, which already have ranked maps. But ranked map of this song isn't very good, so i hope this one will beat that

1. I can't understand the idea of first two red lines
2. Move the actual first offset from 10176 to 10156 or even earlier, idk. Looks like two first hits have some early offest like 10136 or 10126, then next circles goes with another one. Also you can steal timing from ranked mapset =_=
3. Any plans of getting better 192 mp3?

[Screaming eyes]

1. OD + 0,5? HP - 1?
2. 00:17:947 (12,13) - how about this placement? http://puu.sh/iMUCJ/e2007fc429.jpg
3. 00:21:697 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/iMUIP/cb2e09fa69.jpg
4. 00:22:186 (1) - copy the form of previous?
5. 00:25:472 (2) - a bit more far away from (1)
6. 00:28:487 (3,4,5,6,1) - reduce DS a bit, hard to read the stack right after
7. 00:41:776 (3) - 2 diff types of sliders in one pattern isn't ok for me, mb change? or at least make this : http://puu.sh/iMUSW/a1788e900a.jpg
8. 00:52:210 (3) - overlapped by stream
9. 00:54:167 (3) - ^
10. 00:58:569 (12) - how about this? http://puu.sh/iMV0E/a465f4a7ac.jpg
11. 01:06:395 (4,5,6,7,1) - too close as the whole kiai, don't be shy: it's an extra
12. 01:32:804 (1) - holy shit this glitch
13. 01:45:684 (1) - very hard, while the rest of the map is easy. DS is too high and SV as well. as for me, I have to sigletap this
14. 01:56:118 (1) - this kiai is too compressed too
15. 02:16:174 (1,2,3,4) - fix the form? http://puu.sh/iMVfo/7dbae7e58e.jpg
16. 02:46:826 (6,1,2,3) - well, it looks ugly now http://puu.sh/iMViR/7b5a7254af.jpg how about some balance in spacing?
17. 03:06:228 (3) - how about this triangle? http://puu.sh/iMVqr/b47182bd07.jpg
18. 03:20:739 (6) - pls balance between (5) and (1)
19. 03:39:141 (5,6,7) - still too compressed
    
    New Combos

    1. 00:15:175 (9) - NC
    2. 00:17:620 (12) - ^
    3. 00:18:599 (1) - remove
    4. 00:22:186 (1) - mistake?
    5. 00:35:907 (12) - NC
    6. 00:36:885 (1) - remove
    7. 00:38:189 (13) - NC
    8. 00:38:679 (1) - remove
    9. 00:41:124 (13) - NC
    10. 00:43:896 (1) - remove
    11. 01:47:641 (1) - ^
    12. 01:50:847 (6) - NC
    13. 01:51:500 (1) - remove
    14. 01:52:260 (10) - NC
    15. 01:53:347 (1) - remove
    16. 01:53:456 (1) - NC
    17. 02:33:293 (1) - remove
    18. 02:33:945 (13) - NC
    19. 02:34:434 (1) - remove
    20. 02:38:510 (1) - ^
    21. 02:39:162 (13) - NC
    22. 02:39:652 (1) - NC
    23. 02:43:727 (1) - same logic as before
    24. 03:05:250 (1) 03:05:576 (1) - ? it's a mistake, right?

    ^ just some suggestions
    [Lunatic]
    
    1. HP -2 or -1.5, 7 is TOO rude (in my mapset i'm using 6 for my 5.5 star diff)
    2. 00:17:621 - slider here or smth?
    3. 00:21:208 (7) - why this one is so far away? Move a bit closer?
    4. 00:26:613 (5) - ^
    5. 00:28:813 (4) and the whole streams\mini-streams at the diff - they are almost the same if not the same as in extra diff, while playing i had a thought, that it was the same map :\ how about reducing the difficulty of it, by adding some 1\4 sliders and repeats? Even changing DS will make it better.
    6. 00:42:428 (5,6) - move closer?
    7. 01:12:102 (1,2,3,4) - even for Insane diff it's still too compressed
    8. 01:13:407 (5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/iMXYc/96e9cf9eeb.jpg or at least just move it more far away
    9. 01:19:928 - add circle
    10. 01:20:254 (1) - ctrl+j and move it to 216 332, will look like this http://puu.sh/iMY50/ec9f3d2131.jpg
    11. 01:45:684 (1) from here and till the end of 1\3 part - i'd reccomend to remap this or somehow add the 1\3 sliders or easy streams
    12. 01:56:771 (2) - stack with 01:55:467 (1) and move 01:57:097 (3,4,5) - like here http://puu.sh/iMYjt/5b977712d6.jpg ?
    13. 02:14:053 (8) - overlapped by (6)
    14. 02:15:031 (4,5) - they aren't look as the same, but i think they are supposed to (?)
    15. 03:08:510 (8) - too close
    16. 03:25:448 (8,9) - too far away
    17. 03:26:589 (1,2,3) - this one was so sudden for me after that almost silent part, that i broke my ss here
    18. 03:27:893 (8) - ctrl+j + rotate +45°?
    19. 03:41:099 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/iMYFs/2de71f38f1.jpg ?
    And about NC's here - if you understood my logic, you can apply them here as you wish.
    [Hard]
    
    1. 00:11:923 (3,4,5) - seriously? 4.6 jump to the bottom right corner
    2. 00:18:599 (1) - http://puu.sh/iMZ3a/7d820c8b66.jpg ?
    3. 00:43:407 (2,3,4,5) - not a beautiful diamond, move (5)+(6) to 356, 196 and (4) to 384, 112
    4. 00:48:624 (2) - ctrl+g?
    5. 00:51:233 (2) - http://puu.sh/iMZgH/eb81416826.jpg it's nice when slider path coincides with followpoints
    6. 00:51:885 (3,4,5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/iMZk2/7ad89c496a.jpg
    7. 00:57:754 (4) - move to 276, 248
    8. 00:59:059 (1) - overlapped by 00:57:754 (4) -
    9. 01:01:097 (6) - you can make triangle here
    10. 01:13:243 (7) - too close for this pause
    11. 01:16:341 (6) - overlapped by 01:15:526 (3) -
    12. 01:25:145 (11) - you can add spiner instead, which ends at 01:26:450
    13. 01:52:206 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+j all of them and place to the same spot
    14. 02:00:522 (7) - stack end of this with (3)?
    15. 02:05:413 (6,7,8,9,10) - i think this is too hard for [Hard]
    16. 03:10:141 (3) - stack with 03:08:021 (3,4) ?
    17. 03:14:054 (3) - stack with 03:12:424 (5) ?
    18. 03:21:860 (3) - stack with 03:20:249 (5) ?
    19. 03:34:251 (6) - how about http://puu.sh/iMZL2/4d79ee3474.jpg ?
        NCs are still on the same beats for me.
    That's all for now

nvm doublepost del this

Raikozen wrote:

from m4m q

Screaming Eyes:

00:20:556 (4) - ctrl+g Done
00:35:581 (8) - new combo Doone
00:36:069 (1) - no new combo Same
00:38:189 (8) - 00:38:679 (1) - ^ I think I did all of these
00:40:798 (9) - 00:41:287 (1) - ^ ^
00:43:896 (1) - ^ ^
there are lots more of that, reasoning for this is because new bar starts right here and it fits the music more imo Did all of them I think
00:51:884 (1,2,3) - maybe something like this? Yeah done
01:08:678 (2) - maybe this? Done
01:13:243 (1) - make it reverse Done
01:36:391 (9,10,11) - this Done
01:47:424 (6,1) - this Done
02:33:945 (6) - 02:39:163 (6) - 02:44:379 (6) - new combo Done

Lunatic:

00:53:271 (2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3341989 Done
01:12:102 (1,2,3) - 01:12:755 (1,2,3) - stack those No reason to stack them
01:19:928 - i think you missed a note right here... Mhm fixed
01:50:576 (5,6,7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3342000 Done
02:33:944 (6) - 02:36:553 (6) - 02:39:162 (6) - 02:41:771 (6) - new combo Done
03:36:045 (8,9,10) - ctrl+h Done

im not into easier diffs, sorry

Thanks for the mod and it's okay you only had one diffi to mod anyway.

Time to revive and continue working on this map. Hoping to get a rank soon enough! Let's do this!

Hello, M4M from your queue.

General
- Those uninherited timing changes at the start feel kind of confusing to play, especially on the easier levels. I'm not really sure what to do about them though, and all I can suggest is asking someone a bit mroe experienced with weird timings.

Easy
- I feel that the general spacing of every note is pretty large for an Easy. If it were me, I'd tone it down, although doing that takes quite a lot of reworking.
- 00:25:472 (6) - New combo here since the current combo already spans over a lot of measures, and this is right after an uninherited point.
- 00:38:189 (6) - Same thing here. I personally wouldn't recommend spanning any combo over 4 measures for this song.
- 00:47:972 (5) - Is there a reason you've got a jump here on an Easy difficulty? Easy diffs should be very basic with almost perfectly consistent spacing so that beginner players can pick up the game easily.
- 01:06:885 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing through these.
- 01:14:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do you think it's possible to mix up the rhythm you hve here rather than just using 2/1 sliders repetitively?
- 01:19:928 (5) - New combo here since the current one is fairly long.
- 01:36:554 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing (these are too close).
- 01:40:467 (4) - New combo should be here instead of 01:41:772 (1) since this is the hypermeasure (every 4 measures).
- 01:44:380 (1) - Up to you whether you want to break this combo up with a NC or not, but if you do, I'd put it at 01:43:076 (3) instead.
- 02:44:380 (7) - New combo here for consistency.
- 03:09:163 (3) - New combo here to break up the current combo.
- 03:14:054 (5) - And here (if you want, just NC on this one and you can ignore the other two).
- 03:16:989 (7) - And here.
- 03:34:577 (1,1) - I'd say there's too little recovery time after the spinner for beginner players to handle. For an Easy, the rule of thumb is one whole measure.
- 03:46:968 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
- 03:50:229 (1,1) - As before; not enough recovery time.

Normal
- 00:19:414 (2,3) - Might aswell make this a blanket.
- 00:25:146 (2) - Put the NC here since this is where you have the uninherited timing change.
- 00:31:666 (2,3) - I'd personally say that this rhythm is a bit confusing for beginner players to read. I'd try something else (perhaps a single reverse slider?).
- 00:38:188 (3) - NC should be here for the downbeat (large white tick).
- 00:40:797 (3) - As above.
- 00:48:623 (3) - As above.
- 00:51:232 (3) - As above.
- 01:12:427 (7) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 01:13:079 (9,10) - This kind of rhythm is feel is poor polarity and is kind of difficult to read for beginner players.
- 01:15:362 (2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't match the music in my opinion. The vocal notes are on the white ticks, while there is nothing significant on the red tick.
- 01:17:991 (2,3) - What are these notes supposed to follow? It looks like you have them snapped to the 1/16 grey tick, which is incredibly unintuitive to play and most likely unrankable.
- 01:20:579 (2,3,4) - As before about this rhythm. It comes up again a few times, so I won't mention this again (unless you want me to point out all of these for you).
- 01:22:536 (5) - NC here for consistency.
- 01:51:554 (2) - Missing clap.
- 01:53:511 (6) - NC here for consistency.
- 02:04:272 (8) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 03:18:946 (1,1) - Similar to Easy; there's not enough recovery time here. For Normal, I'd aim for atleast half a measure.
- 03:24:795 (7) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 03:26:914 (1,2) - You miss the downbeats here (which has a clear vocal note) to place this on the red tick. This is very unintuitive to play I'd say.
- 03:32:621 (7) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 03:42:729 (1) - Nc here for consistency.
- 03:48:599 (5) - As above.

Hard
- 00:12:404 (5) - NC here for the uninherited point.
- 00:25:310 (4) - NC should be here since this is the first note after the uninherited point.
- 00:35:581 (2) - NC should be on these beats for the downbeat.
- 01:06:232 (6,7,1) - I'd try to keep an even spacing through these.
- 01:16:993 (8,9) - This doesn't seem to play too well nor match the music very well either. What you have now leads to a weird polarity into 01:17:645 (1) so it's not too intuitive to play. I hear the drums start on 01:17:319 rather than 01:16:993 too.
- 01:18:950 (5) - Kind of an unusual slider. I'd try to keep a regular shape for this.
- 01:19:847 (9) - The drums end on 01:19:928 , so I don't think this should go beyond onto the blue tick after it. Plus I feel that a harder ntoe on the downbeat would be suitable since that's where the new line in the vocals is.
- 01:40:467 (2) - New combo should be here for the downbeat.
- 02:05:087 (5,6) - Kind of poor polarity, and difficult to follow. There is a cymbal crash on 02:05:249 which you can place a note on.
- 02:11:690 (9) - As before.
- 02:48:619 (8) - New combo here since you switch to 1/3 here.
- 03:17:967 (3,2) - Minor: These are slightly overlapping, which I would try to avoid.

Lunatic
- 00:12:404 (5) - NC for uninherited point.
- 00:22:838 (9) - NC should be here for the downbeat.
- 00:27:754 (10) - As above.
- 00:30:363 (13) - As above.
- 00:35:580 (6) - As in Hard; the NC should be on these notes for the downbeat.
- 01:10:146 (3,4) - Minor: You could make a double blanket with these.
- 01:20:743 (2,3) - I wouldn't consider this very good flow, since you're asking the player to almost go back the way they came during the slider. I'd personally flip this.
- 01:54:815 (1,2) - Is such a close spacing neccessary for these? It makes these look like they belong to the 1/3 combo previously.
- 02:01:988 (2,3) - Minor: These could be a double blanket.
- 02:09:977 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing through these.
- 03:16:336 (8) - Another unusual looking sldier. If you want to use this sort of shape, try placing the grey slider point in the middle of the curve so that it looks smoother. - 03:24:796 (7) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 03:28:709 (2) - NC should be here for the downbeat.
- 03:32:622 (9) - NC to break up the combo.

Screaming Eyes
- 00:11:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could use the Create Polygon Circles (CPC) feature (Ctrl+Shift+D) here for a more regular looking hexagon.
- 00:12:404 (7) - NC for the uninherited point.
- 00:20:882 (5,6,7,8,9) - CPC for a more regular looking pentagon.
- 00:35:907 (1) - A NC doesn't feel necessary here.
- 00:40:146 (3,4,5,6,7) - Kind of an unusual shape for a stream. I'd keep the shape smooth so that's it's a bit more intuitive to play.
- 00:41:124 (1) - As before about the NC.
- 01:14:221 (7,8,9,10,11) - As before about the stream shape.
- 01:37:614 (6) - This seems to be very confusing. This is spaced evenly from 5 and 7, yet it is 1/4 beat after 5 and 1/2 before 7. The way you've spaced this doesn't represent that at all. Plus I wouldn't really recommend missing the red ick at 01:37:696 since I'd say I can hear a note on this.
- 01:45:685 (1,2,3) - I'd use a slider on either one of these so the player can ease into the 1/3 rhythm easier, rather than be expected to tap 1/3 without any warning.
- 01:51:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Consider using a smoother flow? The back and forth flow you have here is pretty demanding especially since you have it on 1/3 already.
- 01:58:727 (1,2) - This is an unusual rhythm. I don't see the reason wy you're using the blue and purple ticks respectively. I'd say you might aswell extend these to the white ticks so that they're more intuitive to play.
- 02:00:032 (1,2) - Same thing here.
- 03:22:838 (6) - NC here for consistency.
- 03:26:751 (7) - And here.
- 03:30:664 (8) - NC should be here so it goes every 2 measures.
- 03:32:621 (4) - As above.

Good luck.

Nevermind for some reason my entire osu glitches and your whole modifications are gone... okay osu!

Ctrl+S is your friend >.<

-Mo- wrote:

Ctrl+S is your friend >.<

See I kept doing that... and it still reverted my changes...idk

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, M4M from your queue.

General
- Those uninherited timing changes at the start feel kind of confusing to play, especially on the easier levels. I'm not really sure what to do about them though, and all I can suggest is asking someone a bit mroe experienced with weird timings.

Easy
- I feel that the general spacing of every note is pretty large for an Easy. If it were me, I'd tone it down, although doing that takes quite a lot of reworking.
- 00:25:472 (6) - New combo here since the current combo already spans over a lot of measures, and this is right after an uninherited point.
- 00:38:189 (6) - Same thing here. I personally wouldn't recommend spanning any combo over 4 measures for this song.
- 00:47:972 (5) - Is there a reason you've got a jump here on an Easy difficulty? Easy diffs should be very basic with almost perfectly consistent spacing so that beginner players can pick up the game easily.
- 01:06:885 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing through these.
- 01:14:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do you think it's possible to mix up the rhythm you hve here rather than just using 2/1 sliders repetitively?
- 01:19:928 (5) - New combo here since the current one is fairly long.
- 01:36:554 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing (these are too close).
- 01:40:467 (4) - New combo should be here instead of 01:41:772 (1) since this is the hypermeasure (every 4 measures).
- 01:44:380 (1) - Up to you whether you want to break this combo up with a NC or not, but if you do, I'd put it at 01:43:076 (3) instead.
- 02:44:380 (7) - New combo here for consistency.
- 03:09:163 (3) - New combo here to break up the current combo.
- 03:14:054 (5) - And here (if you want, just NC on this one and you can ignore the other two).
- 03:16:989 (7) - And here.
- 03:34:577 (1,1) - I'd say there's too little recovery time after the spinner for beginner players to handle. For an Easy, the rule of thumb is one whole measure.
- 03:46:968 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
- 03:50:229 (1,1) - As before; not enough recovery time.

Normal
- 00:19:414 (2,3) - Might aswell make this a blanket.
- 00:25:146 (2) - Put the NC here since this is where you have the uninherited timing change.
- 00:31:666 (2,3) - I'd personally say that this rhythm is a bit confusing for beginner players to read. I'd try something else (perhaps a single reverse slider?).
- 00:38:188 (3) - NC should be here for the downbeat (large white tick).
- 00:40:797 (3) - As above.
- 00:48:623 (3) - As above.
- 00:51:232 (3) - As above.
- 01:12:427 (7) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 01:13:079 (9,10) - This kind of rhythm is feel is poor polarity and is kind of difficult to read for beginner players.
- 01:15:362 (2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't match the music in my opinion. The vocal notes are on the white ticks, while there is nothing significant on the red tick.
- 01:17:991 (2,3) - What are these notes supposed to follow? It looks like you have them snapped to the 1/16 grey tick, which is incredibly unintuitive to play and most likely unrankable.
- 01:20:579 (2,3,4) - As before about this rhythm. It comes up again a few times, so I won't mention this again (unless you want me to point out all of these for you).
- 01:22:536 (5) - NC here for consistency.
- 01:51:554 (2) - Missing clap.
- 01:53:511 (6) - NC here for consistency.
- 02:04:272 (8) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 03:18:946 (1,1) - Similar to Easy; there's not enough recovery time here. For Normal, I'd aim for atleast half a measure.
- 03:24:795 (7) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 03:26:914 (1,2) - You miss the downbeats here (which has a clear vocal note) to place this on the red tick. This is very unintuitive to play I'd say.
- 03:32:621 (7) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 03:42:729 (1) - Nc here for consistency.
- 03:48:599 (5) - As above.

Hard
- 00:12:404 (5) - NC here for the uninherited point.
- 00:25:310 (4) - NC should be here since this is the first note after the uninherited point.
- 00:35:581 (2) - NC should be on these beats for the downbeat.
- 01:06:232 (6,7,1) - I'd try to keep an even spacing through these.
- 01:16:993 (8,9) - This doesn't seem to play too well nor match the music very well either. What you have now leads to a weird polarity into 01:17:645 (1) so it's not too intuitive to play. I hear the drums start on 01:17:319 rather than 01:16:993 too.
- 01:18:950 (5) - Kind of an unusual slider. I'd try to keep a regular shape for this.
- 01:19:847 (9) - The drums end on 01:19:928 , so I don't think this should go beyond onto the blue tick after it. Plus I feel that a harder ntoe on the downbeat would be suitable since that's where the new line in the vocals is.
- 01:40:467 (2) - New combo should be here for the downbeat.
- 02:05:087 (5,6) - Kind of poor polarity, and difficult to follow. There is a cymbal crash on 02:05:249 which you can place a note on.
- 02:11:690 (9) - As before.
- 02:48:619 (8) - New combo here since you switch to 1/3 here.
- 03:17:967 (3,2) - Minor: These are slightly overlapping, which I would try to avoid.

Lunatic
- 00:12:404 (5) - NC for uninherited point.
- 00:22:838 (9) - NC should be here for the downbeat.
- 00:27:754 (10) - As above.
- 00:30:363 (13) - As above.
- 00:35:580 (6) - As in Hard; the NC should be on these notes for the downbeat.
- 01:10:146 (3,4) - Minor: You could make a double blanket with these.
- 01:20:743 (2,3) - I wouldn't consider this very good flow, since you're asking the player to almost go back the way they came during the slider. I'd personally flip this.
- 01:54:815 (1,2) - Is such a close spacing neccessary for these? It makes these look like they belong to the 1/3 combo previously.
- 02:01:988 (2,3) - Minor: These could be a double blanket.
- 02:09:977 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing through these.
- 03:16:336 (8) - Another unusual looking sldier. If you want to use this sort of shape, try placing the grey slider point in the middle of the curve so that it looks smoother.

Example

- 03:24:796 (7) - NC to break up the current combo.
- 03:28:709 (2) - NC should be here for the downbeat.
- 03:32:622 (9) - NC to break up the combo.

Screaming Eyes
- 00:11:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could use the Create Polygon Circles (CPC) feature (Ctrl+Shift+D) here for a more regular looking hexagon.
- 00:12:404 (7) - NC for the uninherited point.
- 00:20:882 (5,6,7,8,9) - CPC for a more regular looking pentagon.
- 00:35:907 (1) - A NC doesn't feel necessary here.
- 00:40:146 (3,4,5,6,7) - Kind of an unusual shape for a stream. I'd keep the shape smooth so that's it's a bit more intuitive to play.
- 00:41:124 (1) - As before about the NC.
- 01:14:221 (7,8,9,10,11) - As before about the stream shape.
- 01:37:614 (6) - This seems to be very confusing. This is spaced evenly from 5 and 7, yet it is 1/4 beat after 5 and 1/2 before 7. The way you've spaced this doesn't represent that at all. Plus I wouldn't really recommend missing the red ick at 01:37:696 since I'd say I can hear a note on this.
- 01:45:685 (1,2,3) - I'd use a slider on either one of these so the player can ease into the 1/3 rhythm easier, rather than be expected to tap 1/3 without any warning.
- 01:51:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Consider using a smoother flow? The back and forth flow you have here is pretty demanding especially since you have it on 1/3 already.
- 01:58:727 (1,2) - This is an unusual rhythm. I don't see the reason wy you're using the blue and purple ticks respectively. I'd say you might aswell extend these to the white ticks so that they're more intuitive to play.
- 02:00:032 (1,2) - Same thing here.
- 03:22:838 (6) - NC here for consistency.
- 03:26:751 (7) - And here.
- 03:30:664 (8) - NC should be here so it goes every 2 measures.
- 03:32:621 (4) - As above.

Good luck.

Almost done with implimenting Screaming Eyes but one thing I wanna mention: A couple of the things that you pointed me out on were me making mistakes. They weren't intentional. So thanks for pointing them out but it seemed like you thought I did them intentional because to me, I'd have to be retarded to make some of these mistakes (really the purple ticks mess up and that (6) jump right after the stream without a spacing in time... both were stupid mess ups but I don't think it was me messing up it was the map itself glitching... weird...)

[ Scarlet Red ] wrote:

Almost done with implimenting Screaming Eyes but one thing I wanna mention: A couple of the things that you pointed me out on were me making mistakes. They weren't intentional. So thanks for pointing them out but it seemed like you thought I did them intentional because to me, I'd have to be retarded to make some of these mistakes (really the purple ticks mess up and that (6) jump right after the stream without a spacing in time... both were stupid mess ups but I don't think it was me messing up it was the map itself glitching... weird...)

No worries. I didn't mean to come off as rudely presumptuous so I apologise if I did.

M4M from your queue. I kind of lack experience but I hope this will still be useful

Anything regarding the looks is entirely subjective and merely a suggestion in case you agree with me.

Hi there, m4m from your queue
a lot of stuff is just suggestions

[Overall]

1. 03:05:249 - doesn't really affect anything, but 3/4 rhythm actually starts at 03:05:249 -
2. Difficulty spread needs some fixing imo. The gap between normal, hard, and insane is quite large while there isn't much difference between insane and extra

[Easy]

1. 1.3 DS seems a little high, no?
2. In general, I think you can improve the placement of your notes/sliders by incorporating more symmetry/blanketing/patterns to make everything look more organized
3. AiMod found some things
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:25:472 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - you're ending all the strong downbeats with sliders which isn't good. These need clickable objects for better emphasis. Suggest add a note at 00:25:472 and move the start of 00:25:472 (1,2,3,4,1,2) to 00:25:798 - also, 00:29:711 (3) - should be a normal 1/1 slider starting at 00:29:711 to match your previous rhythms and emphasize the right beats
5. 00:36:232 (4) - I think this would look nicer if end of slider (3) and slider (4) made a straight line
6. 00:40:145 (3) - make this flatter for better flow from (2) and blanketing, etc...
7. 00:59:059 (1) - better flow if you blanket (2) imo
8. 01:06:885 (3) - make less curved for better flow from (2). if you do this, I think you can have a nicer visual by making 01:08:189 (5) the same shape as (3)
9. 01:10:798 (2) - ctrl+c ,ctrl+v and ctrl+j are your friends
10. 01:58:728 (4,5) - you can probably use some fancier sliders here to make things interesting for beginner players
11. 02:09:163 (3,4,1) - clean this up by using ctrl+c,, ctrl+v, and ctr+shift+r with 120 degrees to make a perfect triangle with the three slider heads
12. 02:43:076 (5,6,1) - ^ etc...
13. 03:15:032 (2) - maybe bend slider the other way (move ctrl point to (368, 164) ) for better flow
14. 03:18:946 (2,1) - huge SV change for easy diff... I'd consider keeping SV=1.0x throughout and increase the mapping intensity by incorporating 2/1 sliders on downbeats
15. idk if it's just my computer, but for some reason osu decides to switch to 4/4 meter here without a timing point. Just a heads up that this is still 3/4 meter and I think its better to remap the rhythms in this section to reflect that
16. possible blanket stuff if you care - 00:44:711 (2,3) - 01:10:798 (2,3) - 01:35:250 (1,2) - 02:07:859 (2,3) -

[Normal]

1. check AiMod again for errors
2. Normal is not yet the difficulty to start ignoring DS for beat intensity and blanketing purposes, save that for hard diff
3. 00:11:460 (1,2,3) - DS please...
4. 00:13:708 (1,2,3) - stick to one DS, its normal diff
5. 00:18:925 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 00:28:732 - you can add note here and start spinner on downbeat
7. 01:14:710 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm in this section doesn't follow the song, please stick to 1/1 rhythm
8. 01:40:467 (1) - this might be nicer as a 2/1 slider or 1/1 with repeat to add some more diversity to your rhythms here
9. 02:02:641 (4,5,6,7) - rhythm suggestion to follow vocals and make downbeat clickable:
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:04:923 (3) - add a repeat to end slider on downbeat
11. 02:06:554 (1,2,3,4,5) - same problem with awkward rhythm and not following song
12. 03:05:250 (1) - same comment about SV as easy diff
13. 03:38:816 (1,2,3,4) - downbeats here need something clickable imo. maybe try this instead:
    SPOILER

    
14. 03:49:577 (4) - needs more emphasis since its a strong beat imo. maybe try this (also follows guitar better): [
    SPOILER

    img]http://puu.sh/kdtji/1333474d05.jpg[/img]
15. possible blanket stuff if you care - 00:25:797 (2,3,4) - (sorry, i didn't pay much attention to slider stuff on this diff)

[Hard]

1. 00:13:545 (1) - just use a circle at 00:13:708 - you're missing a strong downbeat and the instruments start here anyways
2. 00:22:838 - needs a note here
3. start 1/4 repeat sliders at 00:28:406 - and use 2 repeats on each one so clickable objects feel like 1/1 rhythm
4. 00:34:928 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:37:537 (1) - move NC to 00:38:189 (2) - most of your NCs start on downbeats and I would keep it that way in this section
6. 00:53:841 (1) - I think the guitar is still 1/1 rhythm here, etc...
7. 01:13:080 - missing a note? also your DS is off here
8. 02:04:598 (4) - maybe use one repeat instead and add a note at 02:03:130 (6) -
9. 02:31:010 - needs something clickable here imo, maybe just use a repeat slider and a note?
10. 03:11:119 (1,2,3,4) and 03:15:848 (3,4) - consider stacking here to stay consistent
11. 03:36:534 - once you change the meter to 3/4, maybe use NCs on downbeats to emphasize them

[Insane]

1. 00:13:626 (2) - move to (80, 180) for better flow
2. 00:20:311 (2,3) - move to (296,72) and reposition 00:20:230 (1,2,3) - for better flow
3. 00:26:287 (4,5,6) - spacing feels too large, also skipping downbeats again
4. 00:29:303 (11,1,2) - DS mistake?
5. 00:36:069 (1) - flow here seems somewhat interrupted by NC, so maybe move NC to 00:35:580 (6) -
6. 01:00:362 (5) - maybe blanket 00:59:384 (2) -
7. 01:25:064 (2) - remove? I think it sounds better
8. 02:03:782 (1) - change to two notes to make downbeat clickable
9. 03:32:622 (9,10) - flow here is randomly jerky. ctrl+j 03:33:274 (10) would be better
10. 03:35:800 (6,7) - move down so that it flows from slider

[Extra]

1. 00:46:504 - fill in some of this space with notes. there's too many gaps here
2. 00:51:722 - ^
3. 00:52:536 (9,10) - maybe 1/2 sliders instead
4. 01:01:504 - add note
5. 01:07:374 (2) - maybe triplet here?
6. 01:13:080 (10,1,1) and 01:13:895 (5,6,7) - your spacings here are quite small compared to 01:12:428 (4,5,6) - i'd bump them up a bit to match
7. 01:15:851 (6,7) - ctrl+g to emphasize downbeat
8. 01:18:460 (4,5) - ^ , etc... you miss a lot of downbeats in this section that need clickable objects
9. 01:39:489 (6) - It would look neater to stack end of slider (6) with end of slider (4)
10. 01:43:565 (1,2) - flow is unexpectedly sharp here, maybe something like this to make it smoother:
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:51:011 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - notes feel scrunched here
12. 02:05:249 - add note?
13. 02:06:553 - The rhythm patterns here felt somewhat strange. If each measure is broken up into 8 beats, The vocals always fall on beats 1, 4, and 7, so it would be nice to emphasize those beats with clickable objects along with any DS/flow changes imo
14. 02:28:727 - The difficulty in this section feels very similar to that of your lunatic diff. To help with spread, it might be nice to make the lunatic diff easier here by not adding so many 5 note streams

Hope that helps and good luck!

Praying for the revival !

Text : Issue that I found and that I think that should be fixed (still feel free to refuse them)
Text : Suggestion/Minor Issue/Question

[Screaming Eyes]

HP-1? AR+0.2?

1. 00:28:814 (7,1) - Stack them properly I guess
2. 00:32:646 (5,1) - This jump feels a bit weird, as you go in opposite direction.
3. 00:34:929 (2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+J and replace where it was?
4. 00:39:086 (9) - I hear it on nothing, and I feel it breaks the flow of single tap 1/2 (Proof : you didn't do it for the next patterns)
5. 01:01:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make it a whole stream? (Screams + 1/4 drums allows it)
6. 01:06:232 (3) - Move to x:364 y:328?
7. 02:12:912 (9) - Move the "red point of the slider" to x:60 y:332?
8. 02:33:619 (12,1) - There's a 1/4 guitar there, map it as a reverse? (Few more instances of this)

[Lunatic]
OD +0.5/1?

1. 00:30:281 (12) - Move it to x:236 y:36?
2. 02:33:618 (5,1) - Same as for the Screaming Eyes diff

[Hard]

CS-0.3?

I hope this was helpful >.<

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