I'll be modding top-to-bottom, Scarlet, Lunatic and Hard. I don't understand Easy/Normal (and even to an extent Hard) mapping, so I can't be much of a help there.
M4M!
Blue for personal taste/minor aesthetic.
Red for something I see as a bad problem.
Orange for a small problem.
Lacks a some polish, will take some time to get ranked, I imagine. Best of luck, though!
M4M!
Blue for personal taste/minor aesthetic.
Red for something I see as a bad problem.
Orange for a small problem.
General: The mp3 sounds bad, it's too low quality. I think you should see if you can find a better one.
00:11:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't see any reason for this not to be a regular hexagon.
00:15:095 (1) - Why is this just a spinner? There's some nicely-mappable stuff in the background, I think.
00:19:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think http://puu.sh/inFzR.jpg would look nicer and flow a little better.
00:20:883 (5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see any reason for this not to be a regular pentagon.
00:30:176 (6,7,8) - Try moving these one grid to the right
01:12:975 (9) - I don't see why you would put a circle here.
01:13:220 (1,2) - This sounds like it should be a slider or something, anything but a double basically.
01:45:685 (1) - until 01:54:816 (1) - This is not timed right. I don't know where it goes wrong or how, exactly, but it is not correct.
01:59:218 (2) - Try moving this to (276, 236)
02:00:522 (2) - Try moving it to somewhere around (196, 272)
02:03:457 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - These flow really awkwardly. Maybe move the last triple a bit further away or the 7 a bit more to the left?
02:41:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - Angle-y stream in the middle of a bunch of curves, looks weird.
02:42:751 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make this a perfect square?
02:45:359 (3,4,5) - Try making it a perfect triangle.
That's all.
00:26:588 (5,6) - Try replacing these with 120 and 240 degree rotations of 00:26:262 (4) -
00:28:789 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Looks bad. Try making it more evenly-rounded, and less angle-y
00:36:208 (2,4) - Why not just go all the way and make the sliderstart/end stack perfectly?
01:13:383 (5) - Sounds like there's a circle missing right after this.
01:35:230 (1) - EVERYTHING from here on isn't snapped on the timeline.
01:40:202 (6) - There's no drum in the background here.
02:06:045 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - This last curve kinda messes this up, try making it more evenly rounded.
02:09:224 (6) - No drum here.
Rest looks fine from here on.
00:31:642 (4,6) - I think these look ugly overlapping like they do.
00:52:513 (7) - Move to (192, 132) for some more perfect consistency.
01:14:035 (9) - Try moving it down to (62,252)
01:19:415 (6,7,8) - Sounds bad, there should be a circle at 01:19:496
02:05:087 (5) - Doesn't sound like two 1/4ths fit, in the background.
02:39:652 (3) - Awkwardly close, looks like it's 1/4th away.
02:44:869 (3) - ^
Looks fine, for the rest!
Scarlet
Overall, I'd say that the SV is too high and that the streams are, on average, ugly. It'll be hard to get it ranked, I think.00:11:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't see any reason for this not to be a regular hexagon.
00:15:095 (1) - Why is this just a spinner? There's some nicely-mappable stuff in the background, I think.
00:19:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think http://puu.sh/inFzR.jpg would look nicer and flow a little better.
00:20:883 (5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see any reason for this not to be a regular pentagon.
00:30:176 (6,7,8) - Try moving these one grid to the right
01:12:975 (9) - I don't see why you would put a circle here.
01:13:220 (1,2) - This sounds like it should be a slider or something, anything but a double basically.
01:45:685 (1) - until 01:54:816 (1) - This is not timed right. I don't know where it goes wrong or how, exactly, but it is not correct.
01:59:218 (2) - Try moving this to (276, 236)
02:00:522 (2) - Try moving it to somewhere around (196, 272)
02:03:457 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - These flow really awkwardly. Maybe move the last triple a bit further away or the 7 a bit more to the left?
02:41:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - Angle-y stream in the middle of a bunch of curves, looks weird.
02:42:751 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make this a perfect square?
02:45:359 (3,4,5) - Try making it a perfect triangle.
That's all.
Lunatic
I'd say this has the same overall problems as Scarlet, with the SV and streams.00:26:588 (5,6) - Try replacing these with 120 and 240 degree rotations of 00:26:262 (4) -
00:28:789 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Looks bad. Try making it more evenly-rounded, and less angle-y
00:36:208 (2,4) - Why not just go all the way and make the sliderstart/end stack perfectly?
01:13:383 (5) - Sounds like there's a circle missing right after this.
01:35:230 (1) - EVERYTHING from here on isn't snapped on the timeline.
01:40:202 (6) - There's no drum in the background here.
02:06:045 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - This last curve kinda messes this up, try making it more evenly rounded.
02:09:224 (6) - No drum here.
Rest looks fine from here on.
Hard
00:11:923 (3,4) - Try moving it to somewhere like (232, 164)00:31:642 (4,6) - I think these look ugly overlapping like they do.
00:52:513 (7) - Move to (192, 132) for some more perfect consistency.
01:14:035 (9) - Try moving it down to (62,252)
01:19:415 (6,7,8) - Sounds bad, there should be a circle at 01:19:496
02:05:087 (5) - Doesn't sound like two 1/4ths fit, in the background.
02:39:652 (3) - Awkwardly close, looks like it's 1/4th away.
02:44:869 (3) - ^
Looks fine, for the rest!
Lacks a some polish, will take some time to get ranked, I imagine. Best of luck, though!