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First of all I want to say I've never ever modded before and i'm not very experienced with what you "should" and should not have in a beatmap, but i'll try to point out some places you could change in the song.


00:02:159->00:02:325
I think they are too close to each other, distance snapping isn't followed. I think it feels a little bit awkward.

00:20:825->00:21:159
I think the notes are too close. It might ruin the flow a bit.

00:46:159->00:46:325->00:46:492
Jumps here are smaller compared to the notes before. This feels uncomfortable. Try to have the same space whole all six notes.

00:56:825
This note shouldn't be stacked according to me. I don't know if other like to have a sudden stack in a "jump-combo" but I don't like it. Try to move the note a bit

00:59:159->00:59:325
Even though it looks symmetric which is satisfying , I don't believe you should have that much of a jump. You have the same space between the notes in the whole combo. That doesn't feel good, try to move the notes after 00:59:325 or make 00:59:325 closer to 00:59:159.


Those adjustments are not crucial for the beatmap but they might give that extra feel. Otherwise, nice beatmap, hope it gets ranked sometime.

Stealthwave wrote:

First of all I want to say I've never ever modded before and i'm not very experienced with what you "should" and should not have in a beatmap, but i'll try to point out some places you could change in the song.

Thanks for the feedback! I was actually messing around with the beatmap for the past few days and I didn't like some of the stuff myself, so I did change it, but I'll take into consideration what you said as well

Stealthwave wrote:

00:02:159->00:02:325
I think they are too close to each other, distance snapping isn't followed. I think it feels a little bit awkward.

Were you referring to the 1-->2, the 3-->4, or the 4-->5? I'm not entirely sure. Either way, I changed the notes from 00:02:325-->00:02:659 to something that hopefully flows better.

Stealthwave wrote:

00:20:825->00:21:159
I think the notes are too close. It might ruin the flow a bit.

I ended up reversing the start and end position of the slider at 00:21:159, so hopefully it feels better now.

Stealthwave wrote:

00:46:159->00:46:325->00:46:492
Jumps here are smaller compared to the notes before. This feels uncomfortable. Try to have the same space whole all six notes.

I ended up changing the jump to something that's hopefully more comfortable.

Stealthwave wrote:

00:56:825
This note shouldn't be stacked according to me. I don't know if other like to have a sudden stack in a "jump-combo" but I don't like it. Try to move the note a bit

There's still a stack in the jump-combo, but I changed it so that "4" is on stacked with "5" instead of being stacked with "3".

Stealthwave wrote:

00:59:159->00:59:325
Even though it looks symmetric which is satisfying , I don't believe you should have that much of a jump. You have the same space between the notes in the whole combo. That doesn't feel good, try to move the notes after 00:59:325 or make 00:59:325 closer to 00:59:159.

I ended up moving the note in question closer to the center of the map. Hopefully it flows better?

Stealthwave wrote:

Those adjustments are not crucial for the beatmap but they might give that extra feel. Otherwise, nice beatmap, hope it gets ranked sometime.

Well, here's to hoping

Nice! The beatmap feels better now about the "flow".

I believe there should be more colours, either more gradiations of yellow or maybe add another color, light blue for example(A bright color ofcourse )

Next thing to work with is the hitsounds, that is a must have in a beatmap. I would suggest mainly using "soft-whistle" and "soft-normal" and sometimes add a louder sound like a crash or a whistle.

This beatmap will need more difficulties in the future. I might be able to help if you want to .

You might want to check out my beatmap as well.

Good luck!!!

PS: Quick question. By giving me a Kudosu will you also get one?

Stealthwave wrote:

Nice! The beatmap feels better now about the "flow".

I believe there should be more colours, either more gradiations of yellow or maybe add another color, light blue for example(A bright color ofcourse )

Next thing to work with is the hitsounds, that is a must have in a beatmap. I would suggest mainly using "soft-whistle" and "soft-normal" and sometimes add a louder sound like a crash or a whistle.

This beatmap will need more difficulties in the future. I might be able to help if you want to .

You might want to check out my beatmap as well.

Good luck!!!

PS: Quick question. By giving me a Kudosu will you also get one?

Glad to hear that it flows better, it's still something I'm working on

I am planning on doing more difficulties; I have some ideas on what I want to do but nothing solid yet.

I'll definitely check out your beatmap when I have the time!

Also, to answer your question, no I don't get kudosu for giving you one.

i love this song <3

Great Beatmap!! Keep on doing what you doing~ :3

Hii!

The map is sugoii,, got something to mod tho!

General
nothing :3

Easy
00:04:849 (1) - the spinner is waaayy too short and fast for easy mode
00:03:682 (3) - make the slider this long.. till 00:04:515
00:04:682 - and begin the spinner here till 00:05:932
01:26:849 (2) - delete this one and add the spinner start here from 01:27:015 (1) so it should be this: spinner start: 01:26:849 (1) - spinner end: 01:27:682 -
also change the offset from the spinner ^^ to 0.50

Normal
same with the spinner at easy make it longer
00:04:849 (1) - make this spinner longer till 00:05:849
00:34:849 (4) - add a slider here till 00:35:015 - goes nice with the rythm.

Hard
00:16:682 (5,6) - 00:16:849 - 2 notes here.. the long slider makes it boring and doesn't nicely flow with the rythm :^
00:19:515 - 1 note here :_:
00:26:682 (4,5,6) - add these here :3
00:31:349 - 1 note here,,
00:43:224 (3,4) - set this up like this.. the previous one didn't sound nice..

Insane
nuthing to add atm

Riyujin wrote:

Hii!

The map is sugoii,, got something to mod tho!

Thanks for the mod!

Riyujin wrote:

Easy
00:04:849 (1) - the spinner is waaayy too short and fast for easy mode
00:03:682 (3) - make the slider this long.. till 00:04:515
00:04:682 - and begin the spinner here till 00:05:932
01:26:849 (2) - delete this one and add the spinner start here from 01:27:015 (1) so it should be this: spinner start: 01:26:849 (1) - spinner end: 01:27:682 -
also change the offset from the spinner ^^ to 0.50

Thanks for the tip on the spinners! I was playing around with it and I agree, they need to be longer than what they currently are
I changed the speed of the slider at 00:03:682 (3) so that it goes to 00:04:349 instead of 00:04:515, and I added a note at 00:04:682; it felt a little odd having a slider end at 00:04:515 in my opinion
Moved the last spinner at the end like you suggested, and it definitely feels better

Riyujin wrote:

Normal
same with the spinner at easy make it longer
00:04:849 (1) - make this spinner longer till 00:05:849
00:34:849 (4) - add a slider here till 00:35:015 - goes nice with the rythm.

Adjusted the spinner at the beginning to be longer
Adjusted the note at 00:34:849 so that it's a slider now, and it definitely flows better; thanks for the suggestion

Riyujin wrote:

Hard
00:16:682 (5,6) - 00:16:849 - 2 notes here.. the long slider makes it boring and doesn't nicely flow with the rythm :^
00:19:515 - 1 note here :_:
00:26:682 (4,5,6) - add these here :3
00:31:349 - 1 note here,,
00:43:224 (3,4) - set this up like this.. the previous one didn't sound nice..

I agree with you with the slider at 00:16:682 being too long, and I did separate it into two notes; however, I used a slider at 00:16:515 for the second note instead
Added a note at 00:19:515; it feels better
Confused by what you meant by "add these here", but I turned the note at 00:26:682 into a slider and got rid of the (5); this feels better than having two separate notes in my opinion
Added the note at 00:31:349 and the maps feels like it flows better
Have to disagree with you on the note at 00:43:224; I think it feels fine and moving the note forward by a couple milliseconds doesn't really change that much in my opinion

Overall, thanks for your suggestions; really helped me out with figuring out how to better map easy, normal and hard maps
I find them more difficult to map compared to insane maps lol

Hello! From my queue
This anime is <3 (but going to wait until season 2 is done before I watch)

General

1. There is still a lot of work to be done, but you probably know that
2. The offset is way too early, and I highly suggest changing it to somewhere around 1036
3. No hitsounds (read the queue description, might be able to help you out a bit)
4. Please give a bit more variety tot he combo colors. They help the player reading the map but also gives a more colorful and pleasant experience when playing. Take a darker yellow and some other colors (this yellow blends quite a lot with the backgroud)
5. There is no kiai, you might want to add it where the chorus is (starting from 00:49:035 (1) - lasting until 01:10:369 (1) - )
6. The background image is 1109x768, which is rankable but it's better to use a 1366x768 image. Also the audio file is 128 kbps. Same problem: quality is fine, but if you manage to find a higher quality one it is always appreciated.

Insane

1. I think you did a good job on the use of object, rhythm wise. However, the spacing was quite often confusing and there are a lot of overlaps that look terrible. I will try to help you out a bit
   
2. Regarding spacing, the patterns you choose are okay, though sometimes a bit weird. At some places (00:08:869 (1) - for example) you did a good job emphasizing a new downbeat, but most of the time you stick very close to the distance snap.
   
3. Things like these are confusing 00:18:702 (5,6,7) - because of the gap on the timeline, so consider either moving 6 and 7 more apart (In this case it is better to stick to the distance snap, because otherwise you will cause reading issues), or making 6 a slider/doing something similar to this 00:29:535 (5) - . The latter sounds the best to me and it also makes more sense than making an awkward gap like that. There Same with 00:21:535 (7,8) - 01:04:202 (7,8) - 01:06:535 (5) - 01:14:702 (5,6) -
   
4. 00:30:035 (6,1) - Also here you are creating an awkward gap, and since there is a new downbeat spacing like this would be extremely confusing in most cases. Consider making 6 a slider/2 circles in order to solve this, though there are a lot more possibilities. Same issue here 00:32:702 (6,1) - 00:43:035 (4,5,6,1,2) -
   
5. 00:43:035 (4,5,6) - Another issu with spacing. Most people will simply miss here because you cannot expect the 3/4 gap here. There are several techniques to do this with circles and still make it readable, however a more simple solution would be using a return slider. Testplay the map yourself, don't you think it is confusing as well?
   
6. Don't throw around with the slider velocities like that A lot of people use a slightly higher velocity (notice, slightly) in the chorus, but keep it quite consistent throughout the rest of the map. These changes 01:18:202 (1) - 00:56:035 (5) - do not really make sense, but they are also waaay too much. A lot of people will at least get a slider release here because it's suddenly very slow. There is also no reason for the speed up at the end. The SV change here 00:38:869 (4) - does make sense, but is a little overdone. Something like x0.75 would probably fit a lot better.
   
7. 00:02:202 (1) - Blankets are fun, however, do them a little more properly. This is an example, but there are a lot more
8. 00:12:035 (2,3,4) - I don't think this needs explanation. Overlaps like these do not look very visually appealing. move the objects more apart, and reposition them if you don't want them to go out of the grid. Same issue here 00:20:869 (4,6) - 00:21:369 (6,8) - 00:26:202 (5,1) - 00:26:869 (1,1) - 00:32:202 (5,1) - 00:46:285 (8,1,6) - 00:52:035 (2,4) - 00:53:535 (3,4) - 01:10:369 (1,2,3,5,7,8) - . Especially veeery slight overlaps look bad
9. 00:13:369 (6) - A return slider does not really fit imo, consider using a circle followed by a slider, since the first trumpet note is rather short so it will emphasize the instrument a lot better. Same here 01:25:869 (4) - . The trumpet plays 2 notes, so a circle followed by a slider would make more sense so you can represent both in the map.
10. 00:27:285 (2,3,4,5,6) - There is no stream in the music, so you're really overmapping here. Listen to the music and map what you can hear, not what you can't. Sometimes a triple is fine in my opinion, but an entire stream like this not. Same issue here 00:37:952 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:46:119 (6,7,8) -
11. 01:05:535 (2) - Pretty much every off-beat slider you used was fine, since the slider head represented a starting sound in the music (mostly vocal). However, there is not reason to use it here, since the voice starts on the slider end, which would better be a starting slider or a circle so you can tap it.
12. 01:27:702 (1) - The sound you can hear in the music is 1/6 and not 1/4 like the current one.

Phew that really took some time to explain. There are basically the same issues in the easier difficulties, and spacing becomes really important then. If you are not sure, using the distance snap will help you avoid the above problems. Especially in normals and easies using the distance snap is very important, or it will become unreadable for most starters. Also keep enough space between a spinner and the next object after the the spinner (looking at the easy and normal >.>)

About hitsounding

First of all I noticed how you selected every object and changed the sampleset to soft. However you can use the green lines (inherited points) to do this instead. It is a lot easier that way.
Hitsounding is not as hard as you might think. The best thing to do is to listen closely to the music. Can you hear a cymbal or something? use a finish. Can you hear a drum snare like here 00:06:682 (2) - Slider end of 00:07:015 (4) - Slider end of 00:07:849 (6) - 00:08:682 (8) - ,...? Use a clap to represent it

If you want help regarding this, PM me in game instead, this way I can be a lot more useful than posting a 6516565 sentences long text. Pretty much every more experienced mapper knows how to do this, and there are several that are happy to help you out as well, like most BNs.

Good luck with the mapset!

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! From my queue
This anime is <3 (but going to wait until season 2 is done before I watch)

This anime is indeed very <3
Spoilers: so far, the second season is even more moe than the first one (not really a spoiler)

edit: now with comments! woo look at that all fancy

A Mystery wrote:

There is still a lot of work to be done, but you probably know that
The offset is way too early, and I highly suggest changing it to somewhere around 1036
No hitsounds (read the queue description, might be able to help you out a bit)
Please give a bit more variety tot he combo colors. They help the player reading the map but also gives a more colorful and pleasant experience when playing. Take a darker yellow and some other colors (this yellow blends quite a lot with the backgroud)
There is no kiai, you might want to add it where the chorus is (starting from 00:49:035 (1) - lasting until 01:10:369 (1) - )
The background image is 1109x768, which is rankable but it's better to use a 1366x768 image. Also the audio file is 128 kbps. Same problem: quality is fine, but if you manage to find a higher quality one it is always appreciated.

- Ahh, I had a feeling I had the offset off. I was running it through multiple times and I kept changing the offset since it didn't feel right. although it doesn't really matter anymore because the audio has been changed lol
- I was originally planning to go with dark yellow, orange, blue, and a darkish green colour, but since the show is literally based around blonde hair I decided to use multiple shades of yellow. I'll probably switch back to my original plan though
- Kiai is definitely planned, but I wanted to make sure everything else was good before I added it in
- Fun fact: the original size of the background is 4Kx5K or something like that; guessing osu! resized it or something? Anyways, I replaced the background with the same background that's 1366x768
- Regarding audio, I replaced it with a 256 version edit: converted it into 192kbps version. Hope it's better for the ears

A Mystery wrote:

I think you did a good job on the use of object, rhythm wise. However, the spacing was quite often confusing and there are a lot of overlaps that look terrible. I will try to help you out a bit

Well, at least my rhythm was okay

A Mystery wrote:

Regarding spacing, the patterns you choose are okay, though sometimes a bit weird. At some places (00:08:869 (1) - for example) you did a good job emphasizing a new downbeat, but most of the time you stick very close to the distance snap.

- I was playing around with the distance snap, and as a result ended up completely redesigning the insane for the most part again, lol. Hopefully it feels better now?

A Mystery wrote:

Things like these are confusing 00:18:702 (5,6,7) - because of the gap on the timeline, so consider either moving 6 and 7 more apart (In this case it is better to stick to the distance snap, because otherwise you will cause reading issues), or making 6 a slider/doing something similar to this 00:29:535 (5) - . The latter sounds the best to me and it also makes more sense than making an awkward gap like that. There Same with 00:21:535 (7,8) - 01:04:202 (7,8) - 01:06:535 (5) - 01:14:702 (5,6) -

- Fixed most of these gaps using the slider example you gave

A Mystery wrote:

00:30:035 (6,1) - Also here you are creating an awkward gap, and since there is a new downbeat spacing like this would be extremely confusing in most cases. Consider making 6 a slider/2 circles in order to solve this, though there are a lot more possibilities. Same issue here 00:32:702 (6,1) - 00:43:035 (4,5,6,1,2) -

- In these cases I made the gap bigger between the notes

A Mystery wrote:

00:43:035 (4,5,6) - Another issu with spacing. Most people will simply miss here because you cannot expect the 3/4 gap here. There are several techniques to do this with circles and still make it readable, however a more simple solution would be using a return slider. Testplay the map yourself, don't you think it is confusing as well?

- I've had it like this for a while now, and I personally don't find it that confusing, but I understand what you mean by it not being too readable, so I adjusted it quite significantly along with the rest of the map lol. I'll probably change the (4-5-6) into a return slider if other modders continue to see this as an issue

A Mystery wrote:

Don't throw around with the slider velocities like that A lot of people use a slightly higher velocity (notice, slightly) in the chorus, but keep it quite consistent throughout the rest of the map. These changes 01:18:202 (1) - 00:56:035 (5) - do not really make sense, but they are also waaay too much. A lot of people will at least get a slider release here because it's suddenly very slow. There is also no reason for the speed up at the end. The SV change here 00:38:869 (4) - does make sense, but is a little overdone. Something like x0.75 would probably fit a lot better.

- Yes, because drastic SV changes are the devil
- Seriously though, I readjusted all of the SVs with your suggestions in mind. the x0.75 does work better than the x0.50 after testing it for quite some time, and I got rid of the x1.25 and replaced it with a x1.1. Also made it so that it is x1.1 only during the chorus and x.075 only during the buildup to the chorus.

A Mystery wrote:

00:02:202 (1) - Blankets are fun, however, do them a little more properly. This is an example, but there are a lot more

- Readjusted all the blankets so that they hopefully are more proper this time around. There are probably still some issues, but I think they're better than before

A Mystery wrote:

00:12:035 (2,3,4) - I don't think this needs explanation. Overlaps like these do not look very visually appealing. move the objects more apart, and reposition them if you don't want them to go out of the grid. Same issue here 00:20:869 (4,6) - 00:21:369 (6,8) - 00:26:202 (5,1) - 00:26:869 (1,1) - 00:32:202 (5,1) - 00:46:285 (8,1,6) - 00:52:035 (2,4) - 00:53:535 (3,4) - 01:10:369 (1,2,3,5,7,8) - . Especially veeery slight overlaps look bad

- Ended up re-positioning most of the map anyways, so I think there are far less overlaps now

A Mystery wrote:

00:13:369 (6) - A return slider does not really fit imo, consider using a circle followed by a slider, since the first trumpet note is rather short so it will emphasize the instrument a lot better. Same here 01:25:869 (4) - . The trumpet plays 2 notes, so a circle followed by a slider would make more sense so you can represent both in the map.

- I agree, circle followed by slider fits the flow of the map more than a return slider

A Mystery wrote:

00:27:285 (2,3,4,5,6) - There is no stream in the music, so you're really overmapping here. Listen to the music and map what you can hear, not what you can't. Sometimes a triple is fine in my opinion, but an entire stream like this not. Same issue here 00:37:952 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:46:119 (6,7,8) -

- got rid of all the streams; I was planning on getting rid of them anyways because it didn't really fit after more testing why I thought this was a good idea in the first place I don't know

A Mystery wrote:

01:05:535 (2) - Pretty much every off-beat slider you used was fine, since the slider head represented a starting sound in the music (mostly vocal). However, there is not reason to use it here, since the voice starts on the slider end, which would better be a starting slider or a circle so you can tap it.

- I ended up changing the returning slider at the beginning of this combo into a circle-circle-slider, so the voice starts on a circle now instead of a slider end

A Mystery wrote:

01:27:702 (1) - The sound you can hear in the music is 1/6 and not 1/4 like the current one.

- Tinkered around with 1/6 and 1/4 and I agree

A Mystery wrote:

Phew that really took some time to explain. There are basically the same issues in the easier difficulties, and spacing becomes really important then. If you are not sure, using the distance snap will help you avoid the above problems. Especially in normals and easies using the distance snap is very important, or it will become unreadable for most starters. Also keep enough space between a spinner and the next object after the the spinner (looking at the easy and normal >.>)

- I'm definitely going to revisit the easy/normal/hard maps and probably end up remapping them entirely or adjusting the distance snap to make it more intuitive and beginner-friendly

A Mystery wrote:

About hitsounding

First of all I noticed how you selected every object and changed the sampleset to soft. However you can use the green lines (inherited points) to do this instead. It is a lot easier that way.
Hitsounding is not as hard as you might think. The best thing to do is to listen closely to the music. Can you hear a cymbal or something? use a finish. Can you hear a drum snare like here 00:06:682 (2) - Slider end of 00:07:015 (4) - Slider end of 00:07:849 (6) - 00:08:682 (8) - ,...? Use a clap to represent it

If you want help regarding this, PM me in game instead, this way I can be a lot more useful than posting a 6516565 sentences long text. Pretty much every more experienced mapper knows how to do this, and there are several that are happy to help you out as well, like most BNs.

Good luck with the mapset!

There's an easier way to assign all the sounds to soft without my having to select all the objects!? i hate myself right now lol Anyways, thanks for the tips on how to hitsound. Thanks for all your tips and suggestions!

edit: I have not uploaded these changes yet. I will probably do so in the evening tonight or tomorrow morning since I plan on revisiting the other difficulties as well second edit: changes for insane and easy have been uploaded

Insane

• 00:04:349 (3,4) - ctrl+g cuz flow
  00:02:182 (1) - less curved so better blanket
  00:14:182 (1) - ^
  00:15:515 (1) - ^
  00:31:182 (4) - ctrl+g
  00:32:015 (4) - nudge down a little bit so it actually arcs from slider 1 to slider 5
  00:32:682 (6) - might wanna snap with 4 if follow ^
  00:44:182 (4) - for this you can either rotate by -28 degrees, from that point or move to x280 y140. why? because slider track position makes it look ugly
  00:44:849 (1) - ctrl+g for circular flow
  00:47:015 (5,6,7) - larger jumps?
  01:20:182 (5) - rotate by -13 degrees. same reason as the last rotate mod
  01:24:849 (1) - less curved for better blanket
  01:26:849 (8) - fix by moving to x208 y192. you cant be doing this on purpose right D:
  01:27:682 (1) - if follow above mod, move to x280 y172 and second sliderpoint from sliderstart to x316 y188.

AM I HELPFUL YET

OMG THE SPOILERS NO nah I knew that it was going to be

Doormat wrote:

- Regarding audio, I replaced it with a 256 version. Hope it's better for the ears

According to the ranking criteria 192 kbps is the maximum allowed, so if you can, convert the better version you have now, to this.
Also on a side note, the green lines you used are somewhere random between 2 notes, but it will affect the object you place it on as well, so it's better to move them to a certain white/red tick because the last thing you want is unsnapped kiai, etc. The kiai starts on the downbeat and ends on that as well iirc, so make sure the inherited points are set right there.

EDIT: I will try to provide you with an mp3 if I'm able to this afternoon, since I'm not sure if there's not a better sound-quality version of it, but doesn't sound at its best atm (yes I do care about that)

Don't kd this post

edit: now with comments!

small notice: I ended up redesigning most of the insane map, but I still took into consideration your comments when redesigning it, so that hopefully the flow feels better

Anxient wrote:

[00:04:349 (3,4) - ctrl+g cuz flow

- The jump here is less crazy now

Anxient wrote:

00:02:182 (1) - less curved so better blanket
00:14:182 (1) - ^
00:15:515 (1) - ^

- I ended up redesigning most of the blankets

Anxient wrote:

00:31:182 (4) - ctrl+g

- I ended up changing this pattern entirely but I think the new pattern has a better flow

Anxient wrote:

00:32:015 (4) - nudge down a little bit so it actually arcs from slider 1 to slider 5
00:32:682 (6) - might wanna snap with 4 if follow ^

- Lo and behold, another pattern I ended up completely changing (sorry)
- However, the new pattern follows the same rhythm as the previous pattern (it's literally just in a different place now) but the arc is more defined this time around

Anxient wrote:

00:44:182 (4) - for this you can either rotate by -28 degrees, from that point or move to x280 y140. why? because slider track position makes it look ugly
00:44:849 (1) - ctrl+g for circular flow

- Ended up making this pattern similar to the pattern at 00:04:849, so it's less ugly now (also the flow is now circular)

Anxient wrote:

00:47:015 (5,6,7) - larger jumps?

- I made the jump less convoluted (hopefully) and it's slightly larger now

Anxient wrote:

01:20:182 (5) - rotate by -13 degrees. same reason as the last rotate mod

- Ended up changing this pattern (is this a surprise by now?) but I think the new pattern looks more appealing

Anxient wrote:

01:24:849 (1) - less curved for better blanket

- Like I said before, most blankets were redone

Anxient wrote:

01:26:849 (8) - fix by moving to x208 y192. you cant be doing this on purpose right D:

- I swear I'm not doing this on purpose I didn't even notice that x208 y192 would make the slider look more appealing. Even though this part has been slightly changed so that the ending repeat slider is now inside the circle instead, it's more centered than previously, so thanks for that tip!

Anxient wrote:

01:27:682 (1) - if follow above mod, move to x280 y172 and second sliderpoint from sliderstart to x316 y188.

- Ended up doing the above

Anxient wrote:

AM I HELPFUL YET

YES THIS IS VERY HELPFUL.

edit: beatmap has not been updated with these changes yet. I plan on revisiting the easier difficulties and adjusting them as well before I upload the new changes. Will probably be up by this evening or tomorrow morning second edit: easy and insane remaps have been uploaded

I feel that this beatmap has the potential to be ranked, don't give up!

hi~from your m4m queue
I'm a new modder so what I discussed below are just suggestions Feel free to ignore them if you think they're useless

[Easy]
01:04:045 (6) - better do not use 1/2 sliders in an easy diff
01:26:879 (1) - I think it should stop at here 01:27:879

[Normal]
Regarding hitsounds:using 100%N is too noisy ;w; try to use soft and turn down the volume
00:11:379 (6,1) - ds inconsistency---I'm not sure whether it's allowed in a normal diff
00:19:712 (1,2) - potential blanket
01:02:379 (1) - rhythm inconsistency with former sentence
01:26:879 (1) - I think it should stop at here 01:27:879

[Hard]
00:15:545 (6) - didn't stack well
00:43:295 (5,6) - rhythm a bit difficult,try to avoid this
00:53:879 (5) - move to 00:53:712 -
01:00:379 (2,3,4,5) - not beautiful enough, you can make it either straighter or smoothier
01:04:712 - add a note?
01:23:545 (1,2) - potential blanket
01:26:879 (1) - I think it should stop at here 01:27:879


[Insane]
00:46:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - please do not put all these notes at the same position less overlap will make it more beautiful
00:53:879 (9) - strange, move it to 00:53:712 - and add a note at 00:54:212 -
00:54:379 (1,2) - improve blanket
00:56:045 (5) - extend it to 1/1 by adding a reverse arrow (like 00:55:045 (3) )
And pay more attention on flow
Good Luck!

salinqi wrote:

hi~from your m4m queue
I'm a new modder so what I discussed below are just suggestions Feel free to ignore them if you think they're useless

Hey, thanks for the mod!

salinqi wrote:

[Easy]
01:04:045 (6) - better do not use 1/2 sliders in an easy diff
01:26:879 (1) - I think it should stop at here 01:27:879

- The 1/2 slider only shows up once on the entire map, so I don't really think it's that big of a deal.
- The spinner at 1:26:879(1) does seem a bit too long though. Ended up making it shorter. Did the same for Normal and Hard.

salinqi wrote:

[Normal]
Regarding hitsounds:using 100%N is too noisy ;w; try to use soft and turn down the volume
00:11:379 (6,1) - ds inconsistency---I'm not sure whether it's allowed in a normal diff
00:19:712 (1,2) - potential blanket
01:02:379 (1) - rhythm inconsistency with former sentence
01:26:879 (1) - I think it should stop at here 01:27:879

- awawawawawa I thought I had the hitsounds set to soft ;w; how embarrassing Fixed the hitsounds though
- the ds inconsistency at 00:11:379(6, 1) was intentional to emphasize the new combo/downbeat. If other modders find it to be an issue I'll fix it, but for now it'll be left alone.
- fixed the blanket at 00:19:712(1, 2)
- I ended up moving the note at 00:59:712(1) closer to 00:59:545(7) because the distance between the two felt pretty big.
- I don't find the rhythm to be inconsistent at 01:02:379. Granted that it feels oddly slow compared to the previous combo, so this will be considered, especially if another modder points it out as well.

salinqi wrote:

[Hard]
00:15:545 (6) - didn't stack well
00:43:295 (5,6) - rhythm a bit difficult,try to avoid this
00:53:879 (5) - move to 00:53:712 -
01:00:379 (2,3,4,5) - not beautiful enough, you can make it either straighter or smoothier
01:04:712 - add a note?
01:23:545 (1,2) - potential blanket
01:26:879 (1) - I think it should stop at here 01:27:879

- Ended up moving the slider at 00:15:545(6) so that it no longer stacks.
- The rhythm at 00:43:295(5, 6) is intentional, so it will be left the same.
- Ended up moving the slider at 00:53:879(5) so that it stacks with 00:53:712(4); thanks for that idea!
- I feel that moving the slider from 00:53:879(5) to 00:53:712 will make the flow of the map there seem off, so I left this alone.
- Made the pattern at 01:00:379(2, 3, 4, 5) more straight.
- Added a slider at 01:04:712
- Blanketed 01:23:545(1) around 01:24:045(2). Thanks for the idea!
- Also changed the notes at 01:24:379(4, 5, 6) so that it's less difficult.

salinqi wrote:

[Insane]
00:46:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - please do not put all these notes at the same position less overlap will make it more beautiful
00:53:879 (9) - strange, move it to 00:53:712 - and add a note at 00:54:212 -
00:54:379 (1,2) - improve blanket
00:56:045 (5) - extend it to 1/1 by adding a reverse arrow (like 00:55:045 (3) )
And pay more attention on flow

- Thanks for the suggestion at 00:46:379! Made it so that it's a star jump instead of triangle jump.
- It sounds off if I move the slider to 00:53:712 and add a note at 00:54:212 in my opinion. However, I ended up moving the slider to 00:53:545 and added a slider at 00:54:045
- The slider at 00:54:379(1) was never intended to blanket 00:54:879(2), so I left it as is
- Made the slider at 00:56:045(5) into a reverse slider and it does feel better!
- Also, I think the flow is fine, but there's always room for improvement

salinqi wrote:

Good Luck!

Heheh, thanks! Good luck with your map too

Hello~
From my Queue~
I'm sorry If the mod display doesn't looks beautiful because I want to go faster . I hope the mods still beautiful though xD

I won't say anything same twice

Let's gooo





This is what I can do for you .-.
Please, your map is fine but you must keep notice that you must using consistence distance snap on Normal and Easy . It's fine on Hard but you must put 1/1 pattern with a better distance and you must not put it on the same distance as 1/2 pattern . Keep remember my word . I think it will be useful sometimes
Good Luck~

NewIpas wrote:

Hello~
From my Queue~
I'm sorry If the mod display doesn't looks beautiful because I want to go faster . I hope the mods still beautiful though xD

I won't say anything same twice

Let's gooo

Easy

1. 00:05:712 (8,1) - Check distance snap between these
2. 00:11:045 (6,1) - Same as above
   
3. Okay, I will throw you something .-.
   I guess your Easy have too many inconsistency of Distance snap . Please, use distance snap carefully since this diff directed to beginner players . You know that beginner will confused because of inconsistency distance snap . Try to remap your Easy since there's too many of Inconsistency of distance snap
   With this, I can't mod your Easy

Normal

1. Same as Easy, you have too many inconsistency of distance snap . Since this is Normal and directed to advanced player but still have low reflects, they will go confused too though

First of all, thanks for the mod and the star! I'll definitely tinker around with the distance snap in the easier difficulties, as well as play around with your suggestions in the Hard/Insane difficulties.

NewIpas wrote:

Hard

1. 00:12:045 (2,3,4,5) - Make a longer distance between these notes since these all use 1/1 slider without 1/2 pattern
2. 00:16:879 - The strong beat appears at here so you must put 00:17:045 (1) - on it and delete 00:16:879 (9) - also you move that clap on (9) to head of slider (1)
3. 01:26:879 - Put a note here so you can start spinner at 01:27:045 - since you must clarified the strong beat before it starts to disappear into a spinner head that doesn't have any sounds

- made the distance between the notes at 00:12:045(2, 3, 4, 5) longer
- deleted the note at 00:16:879(9) since it did feel redundant
- added a note at 01:26:879 and moved the spinner; this does feel better

NewIpas wrote:

Insane

1. 00:10:629 (6) - Delete this . I think it's overmapped
2. 00:26:212 (4,7) - This overlap still visible and looks bad too though . Move (4) to somewhere to avoid this
3. 00:29:295 (7) - Delete . Overmapped
4. 00:31:962 (7) - ^
5. 01:26:879 (4) - Move this to somewhere . I think it's off-screen . You could put 01:27:712 (1) - to another place to avoid overlap . If you still want to put it on the center of slider (4), please don't make an overlap

- moved the notes around 00:26:212 so (4) and (7) no longer overlap
- I don't think the notes at 00:29:295(7) and 00:31:962(7) are an issue, but if other modders point it out I'll definitely reconsider
- rotated the slider at 01:26:879(4) so that it's no longer off-screen

NewIpas wrote:

This is what I can do for you .-.
Please, your map is fine but you must keep notice that you must using consistence distance snap on Normal and Easy . It's fine on Hard but you must put 1/1 pattern with a better distance and you must not put it on the same distance as 1/2 pattern . Keep remember my word . I think it will be useful sometimes
Good Luck~

Hey, every little bit counts. Thanks again for the tips on distance for easier difficulties

imaikiseta wrote:

Thanks for the mod! Really appreciate the help

imaikiseta wrote:

• 
  About the Kiai, I was thinking:
  End Kiai here 00:59:379 or 00:59:045
  Start Kiai again here 00:59:712

- Took your suggestion for the kiai time short break. Thanks!

imaikiseta wrote:

Insane

00:18:879 (8) - Fix this end properly
Before

After

00:29:212 (6,7,8) - I don't think triplets should be here, the beat nor the singing isn't fast at that time. All I can think of is another slider and maybe position it like this:

00:47:212 (6) - Better flow if this circle was up here

00:59:212 (11) - Ctrl+G
01:03:545 (5) - Improper ends like this bothers me a lot, fix it?

01:11:712 (6) - Maybe make this circle go on top of 01:11:879 (7)

- Fixed the slider at 00:18:879(8)
- Got rid of the triplet at 00:29:212(6, 7, 8) and replaced it with a slider
- I did move the six to your suggested area and it definitely feels better than before
- I don't think the slider at 00:59:212 needs to be reversed, so this was left alone
- And another end that I didn't notice thanks for pointing it out! fixed
- Did not take your suggestion at 01:11:712(6), but I did change the flow slightly so that the circle comes before the slider instead

imaikiseta wrote:

Hard

00:16:879 (9) - Better flow if the circle was over here

00:26:045 (3) - Maybe this should go on top of 00:26:212 (4)
00:31:378 (3) - Remove and put 00:31:545 (4) in place
^^00:31:879 - Add a circle
00:41:712 - Missing a beat/clap here, maybe change the mapping a little bit

- Ended up deleting the note at 00:16:879
- Ended up moving 00:26:045(3) and 00:26:712(5) so that they stack on top of their respective sliders
- Took your suggestion at 00:31:378(3). Thanks!
- I think the beat at 00:41:712 is fine as it is

imaikiseta wrote:

Normal

00:32:212 (4,5) - I would consider doing something different like:
Remove them both
^^00:32:212 - Add a slider ending 00:32:545

00:29:545 (4,5) - ^^
01:00:379 (2,3,4) - I don't recommend doing this so much, maybe change in to a medium slider with reverse
01:13:045 (1,2) - Replace for a slider
01:24:879 (4) - End the slider here instead?

- Made 00:32:212 a slider ending and added a circle at 00:32:712; same thing for 00:29:545
- The setup at 01:00:379(2, 3, 4) seems fine to me, but if another modder points it out I'll definitely fix this!
- I don't feel like a slider is necessary for replacing 01:13:045(1, 2)
- Regarding 01:24:879(4), what do you mean by "end the slider here instead"? I'm a little confused..

imaikiseta wrote:

Easy

00:41:045 (1) - Maybe Ctrl+G? That's a pretty huge jump for easy diff players
00:47:379 (1) - Spinner should start here
01:03:713 (5,6) - About this, you should probably change it. Maybe do this:
Remove both of them
^^01:03:712 - Add a slider ending 01:04:045 then add reverse

- Reversed the slider at 00:41:045(1)
- The spinner already does start at 00:47:379....?
- Ahh, somebody else has pointed out the pattern at 01:03:712(5, 6). Ended up changing it so that a 1/1 slider starts at 01:03:712

Again, thanks for your tips and suggestions, hopefully the map feels better to play now

Hello, from my queue.

Thank you for modding Slit last time :3!

[General]

1. Disable countdown in all diffs? Cuz it's not working at all lol.
2. In all diffs, I think you can add some whistle in the period before 00:06:212 (1) -
3. The default clap sounds really annoy me. You can try use default hitnormal sound as clap sound. Download here http://puu.sh/hmbH2/eeb25a1440.wav

[Easy]

1. 00:01:046 (1) - try a whistle?
2. 00:11:045 (6,1) - well, you need to make the spacing consistent in Easy diff. Spacing errors are unrankable issues in Easy diff :3 You can press alt while adjusting your spacing~~
3. 00:22:379 (1) - ^, I would not point the spacing problems~You can fix them yourselves
4. 00:41:045 (1) - why is this slider twisted to the opposite direction at the beginning?
   del the slider knot here
5. 00:49:045 (1) - According to current ranking criteria, you need to remain at least 2 beats after a spinner. So basically my suggestion is change the spinner into a long slider.
6. 01:26:879 (1) - try a whistle?

[Normal]

1. Basically in a Normal, you are still required to follow the consistent spacing. So I'm not going to point them out in very details~~I think you can adjust them yourselves.
2. 00:49:045 (1) - spinner issue similarly in Easy diff
3. 00:51:712 (4) - I think maybe you can try avoid overlap with 00:50:712 (2) - , for example:
   
4. 01:10:879 (2) - stack on 01:09:045 (6) - ?
5. 01:26:879 (1) - whistle?

[Hard]

1. 00:12:379 (3) - from here I think the rhythm would be better if
   
2. 00:23:045 (2) - Try ctrl+g?
3. 00:36:879 (4) - ^
4. 00:37:879 (6) - ^, if you done the last one.
   See the invisible circle in the flow?

[Insane]

1. 00:12:879 (4) - stack perfectly with 00:11:545 (1) -
2. 01:06:879 (9) - CTRL+G would be better imo
3. The flow can be improved, but already a good job as a first map :3 Good Luck!

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hello, from my queue.

Thank you for modding Slit last time :3!

Thanks for the mod, and no problem! Hope I was of use to you

Megurine Luka wrote:

[General]

1. Disable countdown in all diffs? Cuz it's not working at all lol.
2. In all diffs, I think you can add some whistle in the period before 00:06:212 (1) -
3. The default clap sounds really annoy me. You can try use default hitnormal sound as clap sound. Download here http://puu.sh/hmbH2/eeb25a1440.wav

- awawawawawa I didn't even notice the countdown Got rid of it
- Thanks for the custom hitsounds! I didn't really like the default hitsounds myself, and was about to go change them. This saves me some time looking

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:01:046 (1) - try a whistle?
2. 00:11:045 (6,1) - well, you need to make the spacing consistent in Easy diff. Spacing errors are unrankable issues in Easy diff :3 You can press alt while adjusting your spacing~~
3. 00:22:379 (1) - ^, I would not point the spacing problems~You can fix them yourselves
4. 00:41:045 (1) - why is this slider twisted to the opposite direction at the beginning?
   del the slider knot here
5. 00:49:045 (1) - According to current ranking criteria, you need to remain at least 2 beats after a spinner. So basically my suggestion is change the spinner into a long slider.
6. 01:26:879 (1) - try a whistle?

- Yeah, another modder pointed out that distance snapping needed to be consistent for all combos in Easy/Normal difficulties. I was going to remap them later today, but I'll take into consideration your comments as well when redesigning them

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Normal]

1. Basically in a Normal, you are still required to follow the consistent spacing. So I'm not going to point them out in very details~~I think you can adjust them yourselves.
2. 00:49:045 (1) - spinner issue similarly in Easy diff
3. 00:51:712 (4) - I think maybe you can try avoid overlap with 00:50:712 (2) - , for example:
   
4. 01:10:879 (2) - stack on 01:09:045 (6) - ?
5. 01:26:879 (1) - whistle?

- Remapping Normal so that spacing will be more consistent

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:12:379 (3) - from here I think the rhythm would be better if
   
2. 00:23:045 (2) - Try ctrl+g?
3. 00:36:879 (4) - ^
4. 00:37:879 (6) - ^, if you done the last one.
   See the invisible circle in the flow?

- The rhythm you suggested at 00:12:379(3) does flow better. Fixed it
- I don't want to make the distance between the (2) and (3) too long though, so I left the note at 00:23:045(2) as is
- Took your suggestion at 00:36:879(4) and 00:37:879(6)

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:12:879 (4) - stack perfectly with 00:11:545 (1) -
2. 01:06:879 (9) - CTRL+G would be better imo
3. The flow can be improved, but already a good job as a first map :3 Good Luck!

- awawawa I didn't notice that the (4) was off centre fixed
- Took your suggestion at 01:06:879(9); ended up also reversing the slider at 01:07:379(10)
- aww shucks thanks for the compliment But like you said, there's always room for improvement that and I want to try and make this map as perfect as I possibly can

Notice: updated the hard and insane maps; easy and normal difficulties will probably be remapped and uploaded later tonight. Hitsounds also have yet to be changed because I'm too lazy to put the hitsounds into the song folder as of this posting

Hello!

[General]
blanketing issues across mapset. seek and destroy!

[Easy]

• 00:01:046 (1) - The slider isn't symmetrical (slightly bugs me). Can clearly be seen when you ctrl+h it. Try with these points
  [list:1337]1w - x:124 y:148
  2r - x:180 y:120
  3w - x:256 y:152
  4r - x:332 y:120
  5w - x:388 y:148

00:03:712 (1) - if you do the above mod, replace via. copy/paste and ctrl+j and remove repeat
00:06:712 -> 00:17:045 What is this? 2008 mapping? Try be more creative like adding sliders instead of all these circles (Like map the clarinet/saxophone/whatever that brass instrument is)
00:58:379 (5) - I don't think 4 flows very well to 5 (the shapes are not related via blanketing/stacking/etc. what i recommend is the following--
00:58:379 (5) - shorten to 00:59:045 and...
00:59:712 - add a circle beat (and NC). I feel as though the beginning of the second run-through in the chorus should be clickable
01:01:045 - try this rhythm here because of the same reason as mentioned above
01:02:379 - if you do the previous mod, NC here. or else NC at 01:03:045 (8) - but it'll feels a little bit weird
01:10:379 (5) - NC
01:13:045 (7) - NC
01:15:545 (3) - remove NC
01:16:712 (1) - NC
01:16:712 (1) - (insert rant on 2008)[Normal]
(I hate modding normals because it's between hard and easy. please excuse the lack of non-nc remarks)

• 00:03:712 (5) - NC
  00:08:879 (5) - NC
  00:14:212 (1) - NC
  00:19:711 (6) - NC (because different vocals)
  00:25:045 (6) - NC (Emphasis on white tick)
  00:33:045 (1) - NC (emphasis on instruments)
  00:41:045 (6) - NC (different vocals)
  00:46:379 (6) - NC (emphasis on vocals)
  00:51:712 (1) - NC ^
  00:57:045 (1) - NC ^
  01:02:379 (5) - NC ^
  01:07:712 (1) - NC ^
  01:13:545 (1) - NC ^
  01:18:212 (5) - NC ^
  01:23:545 (1) - NC ^
  also, check AiMod regarding object end snap at 00:20:377 (maybe it's just me)

[Hard]

• 00:03:045 (4) - Try this maybe? It solves the object distance clash at 00:04:379 (2)
  SPOILER

  http://puu.sh/hnU0n/8d984ebf1d.png
  00:43:545 (6) - maybe move this closer to 00:43:712 (1) ? The equal distance between objects before could confuse people when they're not the same rhythm
  01:17:545 (7) - maybe blanket this with circle 4 in same combo

I'm still not confident in modding hard/insanes...

If you can, can you please mod this map?

good luck``

From your Queue~
And this is one anime I like this season

[General]
[Insane]
[Hard]
[Normal]
[Easy]
For all diff: All offset -16

Good luck

Random mod
General

1. Please remove the commas from tags, this will not allow people to look for more than just one tag.
2. Because 'Rhodanthe*' seems to be used only for this anime, so it is not very famous, you should include names of singers in tags:
   西明日香 (romanised Nishi Asuka)
   田中真奈美 (romanised Tanaka Manami)
   種田梨沙 (romanised Taneda Risa)
   内山夕実 (romanised Uchiyama Yumi)
   東山奈央 (romanised Touyama Nao)
3. You might want to use custom hitsound for the clap, because it currently feels a bit out of place when there is loud clap, while music contains a simple snare. I think this one fits really well.
4. I think there should be a better mp3 available, try to look for it, because it sounds like some parts are a bit distorted and start is really low volume.
5. Muting soft-sliderslide with this file would be quite good, because you are sometimes using 100% volume, which makes the sliderslide do a lot of noise, so muting it is probably the easiest way to fix this.

Easy

1. You have to use hitsounds. In case of this map, it is enough to use grumd's hitsound copier and hitsound the notes which are missing, they were not many, so it is just few minutes of work.
2. 00:05:879 (4) - Move this slider somewhere else, you might do something like screenshot below. The problem is the slider is hidden under previous slider which is not so cool on easy difficulty, because the player will barely react to this, especially when he has only something about 350ms to react
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:27:712 - You start to break new combo consistency and sensibility here and you make the combo lengths inconsistent. That will result in messed up HP gain, which is especially important on low diffs. Previously you used NC on each 3rd downbeat, but while it still fits music to be used like before, you just started to use them variably.

Normal

1. Same issue with hitsounds as Easy
2. Difficulty is very high considering it is only Normal. I recommend to decrease AR and OD by 1 and then increase the combo count. Currently the combos are long 7-10, which is really inappropriate for normal. Try to keep them under 6, I recommend each 3rd downbeat.
3. 00:18:379 (3,4,5,8,9,10) - These two patterns are very annoying. Rhythmically it is fine, but it doesn't fit with the pattern. It is all overlapped and focused on one place so the approach circles will be mixed together and someone who is able to play only Normal will just simply miss there because he will get lost in this. I hope you might understand what I mean. I suggest to remake them so every part of it is perfectly visible in natural way without overlaps and other traps or you might use a bit different rhythm, but that's up to you.
4. 00:27:045 (9,10,1) - This might be also problem for newbies, because he is most likely not gonna expect a circle between two sliders stacked together, so make it just simple and remove the circle and move the slider somewhere else, or make this with regular distance snap.
5. 00:19:711 (6) - Slider ends on 00:20:377, but it must end on 00:20:379, because current position is out of timing point, this might have been caused by offset change.

Hard

1. You should decrease the AR by 1, because you have Insane diff and it will fix the spread a bit. The problem here is Insane has 9 AR, while it is definitely wrong, when it is quite a chilling map, just doesn't fit the song nor map, then you should decrease AR of Insane to 8 so it is a bit more sensible and whole settings should be fine.
2. 00:13:379 (5,6) - I don't know if you know it, but be aware that this kind of pattern is often considered as unrankable unless it plays extremelly well, what it doesn't there.
3. To be honest, as a hard it is pretty fine, balanced and so on, but just go through the difficulty and fix the antijumps. You are sometimes using the same distances for 1/2 notes and 1/1, which makes player click earlier than they are supposed to.

Insane

1. As I reasoned in Hard diff, reduce the AR to 8.
2. 00:07:047 (3) - The slider is on 00:07:047 while it must be on 00:07:045, because it would not be snapped to the timing.
3. 00:24:545 - The clap doesn't fit there very much because the snare is on 00:24:712 in real. If you used the custom hitsound provided in General, try to find all missing snares. That would increase the map's quality a lot. Those are for example 00:29:379 - 00:30:045 and more.
4. 00:48:712 - Reduce the volume, it is currently ideal for ear-bleed. Whistle spam is not really cool on that high volume.

Conclusion: Needs some improvement

If I consider you are a newbie, the map is pretty okay. You should care more about perfection, spread and what was really missing there, hitsounds. It would not take a long to make this actually rankable so feel free to ask me anything, I'll be glad to help you if you need something. Also have my star and good luck~! :3

I don't know whether you took a look at a mod above, but just wanted to say current offset is fine if you didn't already change it

awawawa so many mods so little time ;w;

Thanks for the mods you guys! Really appreciate it Unfortunately I don't exactly have time right now to check out your suggestions (and to those in my M4M queue, don't worry I will mod your maps, but it'll probably be in the next day or so). I'll play around with your suggestions tonight and get reply back as soon as possible!

Hi! for M4M - Sorry for my poor English and modding skill
Insane

Hard

Normal

Easy

Get a little star from me , good luck .
My map
:
t/322130

come on! i have seen the progress.

[ Rizen ] wrote:

Hello!

Hello! Thanks for the mod Will be taking a look at your beatmap soon!

[ Rizen ] wrote:

[General]
blanketing issues across mapset. seek and destroy!

Affirmative- will be taking a look at what needs to be fixed, but there'll probably still be blanketing issues for a while. I want to put priority on fixing the map first before focusing on blankets

[ Rizen ] wrote:

[Easy]

• 00:01:046 (1) - The slider isn't symmetrical (slightly bugs me). Can clearly be seen when you ctrl+h it. Try with these points
  [list:1337]1w - x:124 y:148
  2r - x:180 y:120
  3w - x:256 y:152
  4r - x:332 y:120
  5w - x:388 y:148

00:03:712 (1) - if you do the above mod, replace via. copy/paste and ctrl+j and remove repeat
00:06:712 -> 00:17:045 What is this? 2008 mapping? Try be more creative like adding sliders instead of all these circles (Like map the clarinet/saxophone/whatever that brass instrument is)
00:58:379 (5) - I don't think 4 flows very well to 5 (the shapes are not related via blanketing/stacking/etc. what i recommend is the following--
00:58:379 (5) - shorten to 00:59:045 and...
00:59:712 - add a circle beat (and NC). I feel as though the beginning of the second run-through in the chorus should be clickable
01:01:045 - try this rhythm here

SPOILER

because of the same reason as mentioned above
01:02:379 - if you do the previous mod, NC here. or else NC at 01:03:045 (8) - but it'll feels a little bit weird
01:10:379 (5) - NC
01:13:045 (7) - NC
01:15:545 (3) - remove NC
01:16:712 (1) - NC
01:16:712 (1) - (insert rant on 2008)

- dat 2008 mapping tho. Seriously though, I didn't like it myself after giving it more testing once again things I don't know why I put in the map lol Ended up changing this part up by adding in some sliders. Hopefully it no longer feels like a "product of 2008"
- thanks for the suggestion with the first slider! fixed
- great idea at 01:01:045! hope you don't mind that I stole this pattern lol
- ended up remapping a lot of this difficulty based on the critique of the other modders as well

[ Rizen ] wrote:

[Normal]
(I hate modding normals because it's between hard and easy. please excuse the lack of non-nc remarks)

• 00:03:712 (5) - NC
  00:08:879 (5) - NC
  00:14:212 (1) - NC
  00:19:711 (6) - NC (because different vocals)
  00:25:045 (6) - NC (Emphasis on white tick)
  00:33:045 (1) - NC (emphasis on instruments)
  00:41:045 (6) - NC (different vocals)
  00:46:379 (6) - NC (emphasis on vocals)
  00:51:712 (1) - NC ^
  00:57:045 (1) - NC ^
  01:02:379 (5) - NC ^
  01:07:712 (1) - NC ^
  01:13:545 (1) - NC ^
  01:18:212 (5) - NC ^
  01:23:545 (1) - NC ^
  also, check AiMod regarding object end snap at 00:20:377 (maybe it's just me)

- fixed all the NCs, and you were right regarding the end snap 00:20:377. Turns out it was 0.002 seconds off are you bloody serious

[ Rizen ] wrote:

[Hard]

• 00:03:045 (4) - Try this maybe? It solves the object distance clash at 00:04:379 (2)
  SPOILER

  http://puu.sh/hnU0n/8d984ebf1d.png
  00:43:545 (6) - maybe move this closer to 00:43:712 (1) ? The equal distance between objects before could confuse people when they're not the same rhythm
  01:17:545 (7) - maybe blanket this with circle 4 in same combo

edit: worked on hard on April 26, 2015. here's what I did:
- didn't do exactly what you suggested at 00:03:045, but I fixed the distance clash
- fixed the distances around 00:43:545
- fixed the blanket at 01:17:545

[ Rizen ] wrote:

I'm still not confident in modding hard/insanes...

If you can, can you please mod this map?

good luck``

Nah don't worry about it, you did the best you can and that still helps me out a lot
I'll be taking a look at your map soon, but thanks again!

m1223961117 wrote:

From your Queue~
And this is one anime I like this season

Thanks for the mod! I'll be returning the favour later today

m1223961117 wrote:

[General]

1. For all diff: add finish
   00:11:545 - 00:08:879 - 00:14:212 - 00:15:545 - 00:16:212 -
   00:17:045 - 00:30:379 - 00:33:045 - 00:46:379 - 00:47:545 -
   00:54:379 - 00:57:045 - 00:58:212 - 01:05:045 - 01:07:712 -
   01:08:879 - 01:10:379 - 01:13:045 - 01:15:045 - 01:18:212 -
   01:20:879 - 01:23:545 - 01:24:879 - 01:25:545 - 01:26:379 -
   01:26:879 -
2. Volume for all diff:
   00:01:046 - 50%
   00:06:212 - 70%
   00:17:045 - 60%
   00:38:379 - 50%
   00:46:379 - 60%
   00:47:545 - 70% (to kiai end)
   01:10:379 - 50%
   01:15:545 - 60%
   

- Thanks for the tips on the hitsounds! I had a feeling the hitsounds were a little bit too loud, and I didn't want to spam the beatmap with finishes, but your placements for them make sense in a way that it doesn't feel like it's being spammed fixed

m1223961117 wrote:

[Insane]

• 
  00:16:962 - add circle
  00:46:295 - ^
  00:48:712 (5) - too loud, suggest you can remove whistle
  00:59:045 - to 00:59:545 - change to like this?? follow drum?? http://puu.sh/hnZ12/63b7763256.jpg
  01:09:545 (10,11) - ^, http://puu.sh/hnZ3v/5d13dbbf95.jpg

edit 2: worked on insane on April 27, 2015. here's what I did:
- I don't think the notes at 00:16:962 and 00:46:295 are necessary
- removed the whistle at 00:48:712
- I like the pattern at 00:59:045, so I'll stick with it for now. If somebody else points out that I should change this pattern, I'll refer to yours
- there are no streams in this song, so I didn't include your suggestion at 01:09:545

m1223961117 wrote:

[Hard]

• 
  00:04:879 (5) - http://puu.sh/hnZ7n/d5d1857a47.jpg
  00:05:545 (6) - ^
  00:12:379 (3) - change 1/2 slider+ a circle??
  00:13:712 - add circle
  00:16:879 - ^
  00:17:045 (1,2) - hope you like this: http://puu.sh/hnZho/dbce8bc97d.jpg
  00:18:379 (4) - follow voice and drum. and this reverse slider not follow anything: http://puu.sh/hnZnw/70a74de94c.jpg
  00:19:712 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - same rhythm. If you change 00:17:045 (1,2) -
  00:38:879 (4) - change this?? http://puu.sh/hnZtW/3297ecd530.jpg
  00:40:379 - add circle
  00:41:545 (2) - same url]http://puu.sh/hnZ7n/d5d1857a47.jpg[/url]
  01:05:045 (1,2,3) - I can't understand what you follow ??
  01:17:545 (7,1) - too far

edit: worked on hard on April 26, 2015. here's what I did:
- took your suggestion at 00:04:879 and 00:05:545
- took your suggestion at 00:12:379
- I don't feel a circle is necessary at 00:13:712, but I changed the note at 00:16:712 into a 1/2 slider so there's a beat on 00:16:879
- did a slight variation of what you suggested at 00:17:045 and 00:19:712
- took your suggestion at 00:38:879 and it flows a lot better (:
- I don't feel a note is needed at 00:40:379
- took suggestion at 00:41:545
- changed the pattern at 01:05:045 so that it follows the vocals now
- made the note at 01:17:545 closer

m1223961117 wrote:

[Normal]

1. Why all notes use 0.75x...no sense. Change to 1.0x

Woops, must've been something I overlooked. fixed

m1223961117 wrote:

[Easy]

• 
  01:22:712 (3,4) - combine a slider

fixed

m1223961117 wrote:

For all diff: All offset -16

I think the current offset is fine as it is, so I'm going to leave it as is. If other people think that it may be off, however, I'll change it

m1223961117 wrote:

Good luck

Heheh, thanks!

Wafu wrote:

Random mod

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. Please remove the commas from tags, this will not allow people to look for more than just one tag.
2. Because 'Rhodanthe*' seems to be used only for this anime, so it is not very famous, you should include names of singers in tags:
   西明日香 (romanised Nishi Asuka)
   田中真奈美 (romanised Tanaka Manami)
   種田梨沙 (romanised Taneda Risa)
   内山夕実 (romanised Uchiyama Yumi)
   東山奈央 (romanised Touyama Nao)
3. You might want to use custom hitsound for the clap, because it currently feels a bit out of place when there is loud clap, while music contains a simple snare. I think this one fits really well.
4. I think there should be a better mp3 available, try to look for it, because it sounds like some parts are a bit distorted and start is really low volume.
5. Muting soft-sliderslide with this file would be quite good, because you are sometimes using 100% volume, which makes the sliderslide do a lot of noise, so muting it is probably the easiest way to fix this.

- awawawa thanks for the random mod ;w;
- fixed the tags
- I'm still playing around with custom hitsounds another modder provided me, but thanks for providing some custom hitsounds! I'll probably be taking switching between them and seeing which one suits the map more
- I changed the volume sliders based on some other modder's feedback, but thanks for the custom soft-sliderslide! I was actually looking for a mute one myself..

Wafu wrote:

Easy

1. You have to use hitsounds. In case of this map, it is enough to use grumd's hitsound copier and hitsound the notes which are missing, they were not many, so it is just few minutes of work.
2. 00:05:879 (4) - Move this slider somewhere else, you might do something like screenshot below. The problem is the slider is hidden under previous slider which is not so cool on easy difficulty, because the player will barely react to this, especially when he has only something about 350ms to react
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:27:712 - You start to break new combo consistency and sensibility here and you make the combo lengths inconsistent. That will result in messed up HP gain, which is especially important on low diffs. Previously you used NC on each 3rd downbeat, but while it still fits music to be used like before, you just started to use them variably.

- did what you recommended at 00:05:879, but as a result of it the distance snap got all screwy and I ended up having to remap quite a bit of the easy difficulty. I think it's a lot better than what it was before though
- fixed all the NC issues

Wafu wrote:

Normal

1. Same issue with hitsounds as Easy
2. Difficulty is very high considering it is only Normal. I recommend to decrease AR and OD by 1 and then increase the combo count. Currently the combos are long 7-10, which is really inappropriate for normal. Try to keep them under 6, I recommend each 3rd downbeat.
3. 00:18:379 (3,4,5,8,9,10) - These two patterns are very annoying. Rhythmically it is fine, but it doesn't fit with the pattern. It is all overlapped and focused on one place so the approach circles will be mixed together and someone who is able to play only Normal will just simply miss there because he will get lost in this. I hope you might understand what I mean. I suggest to remake them so every part of it is perfectly visible in natural way without overlaps and other traps or you might use a bit different rhythm, but that's up to you.
4. 00:27:045 (9,10,1) - This might be also problem for newbies, because he is most likely not gonna expect a circle between two sliders stacked together, so make it just simple and remove the circle and move the slider somewhere else, or make this with regular distance snap.
5. 00:19:711 (6) - Slider ends on 00:20:377, but it must end on 00:20:379, because current position is out of timing point, this might have been caused by offset change.

- decreased AR and OD to 4 and 4 respectively
- fixed all combos so they're no longer ridiculously long
- fixed the patterns at 00:18:379(3,4,5,8,9,10) based on another modder's feedback
- spread out the notes at 00:27:045
- I didn't even notice the 0.002 second offset change at 00:19:711(6) fixed

Wafu wrote:

Hard

1. You should decrease the AR by 1, because you have Insane diff and it will fix the spread a bit. The problem here is Insane has 9 AR, while it is definitely wrong, when it is quite a chilling map, just doesn't fit the song nor map, then you should decrease AR of Insane to 8 so it is a bit more sensible and whole settings should be fine.
2. 00:13:379 (5,6) - I don't know if you know it, but be aware that this kind of pattern is often considered as unrankable unless it plays extremelly well, what it doesn't there.
3. To be honest, as a hard it is pretty fine, balanced and so on, but just go through the difficulty and fix the antijumps. You are sometimes using the same distances for 1/2 notes and 1/1, which makes player click earlier than they are supposed to.

edit: worked on hard on April 26, 2015. here's what I did:
- lowered AR like you said and it feels better than before
- fixed the pattern at 00:13:379(5, 6)
- fixed a lot of the distance issues that you mentioned, and as a result a lot of the map ended up getting redesigned (I find remapping everything based on feedback is easier than just fixing single things what is wrong with me)

Wafu wrote:

Insane

1. As I reasoned in Hard diff, reduce the AR to 8.
2. 00:07:047 (3) - The slider is on 00:07:047 while it must be on 00:07:045, because it would not be snapped to the timing.
3. 00:24:545 - The clap doesn't fit there very much because the snare is on 00:24:712 in real. If you used the custom hitsound provided in General, try to find all missing snares. That would increase the map's quality a lot. Those are for example 00:29:379 - 00:30:045 and more.
4. 00:48:712 - Reduce the volume, it is currently ideal for ear-bleed. Whistle spam is not really cool on that high volume.

Conclusion: Needs some improvement

edit 2: worked on insane on April 27, 2015. here's what I did:
- reduced AR to 8
- fixed the offset issue at at 00:07:045
- removed the whistle at 00:48:712
- I'll work on finding the snares after some more testing on my end

Wafu wrote:

If I consider you are a newbie, the map is pretty okay. You should care more about perfection, spread and what was really missing there, hitsounds. It would not take a long to make this actually rankable so feel free to ask me anything, I'll be glad to help you if you need something. Also have my star and good luck~! :3

I don't know whether you took a look at a mod above, but just wanted to say current offset is fine if you didn't already change it

Awawawawa you're too kind- Thanks for your help and I'll definitely get back to you on your offer! Thanks for the star too waaaa totally did not expect this

saisee2010 wrote:

Hi! for M4M - Sorry for my poor English and modding skill

Hey there, thanks for the mod! Don't worry about your English, it's fine

saisee2010 wrote:

Insane

SPOILER

00:01:379 (2) - Can you move it to 428/284 , it's better blanket .
00:03:712 (1,2) - better pattern if you blanket them together
00:48:045 (2,3,4) - I think 00:48:045 (2) - move to 168/120
00:48:212 (3) - move to 256/196
00:48:379 (4) - move to 324/120
01:01:712 (8) - 348/272 for better blanket
01:13:045 (1,2,3,4) - I think 01:14:045 (3) - shouldn't stack with 01:13:045 (1) - It isn't a good pattern imo.

edit 2: worked on insane on April 27, 2015. here's what I did:
- fixed the blankets at 00:01:379 and 01:01:712
- the pattern at 00:03:712 was not intended to be blanketed, but I'll consider it if another modder points it out
- I did move the notes at 00:48:045, but not to your suggested areas. I also prefer them to be stacked together
- I think the pattern at 01:13:045 is fine

saisee2010 wrote:

Hard

SPOILER

AR-1
00:11:545 (1,3,4) - improve blanket
00:13:879 (6) - move to 186/50 not good to stack like them.
00:49:712 (3) - ctrl+H
01:20:545 (8) - slider end stack with 01:21:379 (2)
01:26:879 (6) - 384/88 - triangle pattern

edit: worked on hard on April 26, 2015. here's what I did:
- changed AR
- made the slider at 00:11:545 no longer a blanket
- 00:13:879(6) is no longer stacked, but I did not move them to your suggested spot
- I moved around the notes at 00:49:712, hopefully it feels better now
- made the slider end at 01:20:545(8) stack with 01:21:379(2). Thanks for the suggestion!

saisee2010 wrote:

Normal

SPOILER

Your DS is good for now but some slider like 00:18:379 (3,4) - 00:21:045 (8,9) , They aren't good pattern and hard to read by beginner
00:18:379 (3,4) - delete 00:18:879 (4) - and add reverse slider 00:18:379 (3) is better.
00:21:045 (7,8,9) - delete 00:21:545 (8) - add reverse slider 00:21:045 (7) and place 00:22:045 (8) stack this 00:20:712 (6)
00:48:045 (8,9,10) - change them to reverse slider , 3 stack notes aren't good imo.
.
.
add NC 00:03:712 - 00:08:879 - 00:14:212 - 00:19:711 - 00:22:379 - 00:25:045 - 00:33:045 - 00:41:045 - 00:46:379 - 00:51:712 - 00:57:045 - 01:02:379 - 01:07:712 - 01:12:379 - 01:18:212 - 01:23:545 - (some NC I'm not sure you can ignore if it doesn't fit for you.)
.
.
.
And Hitsound , same as other modders. Zzz

- fixed the issues at 00:18:379 and 00:21:045
- I left the 3 stacked notes at 00:48:045 as it is because I don't think it makes that much of a difference. If another modder points this out as well, I'll consider changing it, but for now it'll stay as it is
- fixed all NC issues

saisee2010 wrote:

Easy

SPOILER

I think pattern from 00:06:712 to 00:16:712 isn't good imo , add some slider in this pattern could be better .
00:57:045 (3,4) - Ctrl+G them?
00:57:045 (3) - NC
01:00:379 (6) - NC
01:03:045 (8) - NC
01:10:379 (5) - NC
.
.
.
And Hitsound , same as Normal. Zzz

- I ended up changing a lot of the easy difficulty, but still took into consideration what you said.
- changes some of the notes to sliders from 00:06: to 00:16:712
- pattern at 00:57:045 was changed entirely
- fixed the NC issues

saisee2010 wrote:

Get a little star from me , good luck .
My map
:
t/322130

Awawawa thanks for the star
I'll be checking your map out later today!

from my q

[general]

1. uncheck widescreen support , this is use for sb
2. soft-hitclap is unused if you want to use it you need to change sampleset to softcustom-1
   SPOILER

   
3. kiai inconsistent

   AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Kiai
   Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   
   - [Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:045, ends on 00:59:045
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:712, ends on 01:10:295
   
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:045, ends on 00:59:045
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:712, ends on 01:10:379
   
   - [Insane] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:045, ends on 00:59:045
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:712, ends on 01:10:379
   
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:045, ends on 00:59:045
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:712, ends on 01:10:295

   You need to make sure kiai is consistent on every diffs if you map fullset by yourself

4. AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:07:047 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).

5. Also lots of unsnapped thing in normal that need to fix
   unsnapped things in normal

   AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:01:046 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:02:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:03:712 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:05:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:05:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:05:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:06:212 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:07:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:07:712 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:08:879 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:10:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:13:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:13:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:14:212 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:15:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:15:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:17:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:18:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:19:712 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:21:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:21:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:23:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:24:212 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:25:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:27:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:29:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:30:379 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:33:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:35:712 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:37:545 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:39:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:43:045 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:45:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:47:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:47:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:49:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:53:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:53:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:55:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:57:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:57:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:58:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:01:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   01:01:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:03:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:07:045 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:09:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:09:545 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:14:379 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:15:545 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:17:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   01:17:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:18:212 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:19:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:20:879 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:22:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:23:545 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:24:879 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

[insane]

1. 00:04:045 (2) - ctrl+g this would make flow here 00:03:712 (1,2,3) - nice imo , it's ok to jumps here 00:04:045 (2,3) -
2. 00:14:212 (1,2) - flow here is kinda awkward , the bent in flow here is somehow make flow here awkward would be better if you swap place of these 00:14:712 (2,3) - notes it would give nice transition flow from slider 00:14:212 (1) - to 00:14:712 (2) - also you might need to re-adjust next notes if you make change here
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:31:879 (6) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 00:31:545 (5,6,7) - nice imo , it's ok to jumps here 00:31:879 (6,7) -
4. 00:43:045 (9) - nc for change in spacing here
5. 00:54:379 (1) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 00:54:045 (9,1,2) - nice imo
6. 01:02:712 (2,3) - swap place of these notes would make flow here 01:02:712 (2,3,4) - nice imo , it's ok to jumps here 01:02:879 (3,4) - since 01:03:045 (4) - sound pretty emphasized would the map looks intresting to play
7. 01:16:879 (5) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 01:16:379 (4,5,6) - nice imo
   
   I think flow in this diff can be improved a bit

[hard]

1. 00:07:379 - missing clap
2. 00:28:711 (2,3) - I think stacking would emphasis beat here really well
3. 00:31:879 (4,5,6) - I think antijumps might be too hard for hard diff
4. 00:42:712 (5,6,7) - I guess this is really hard to read for hard diff , try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:45:045 (4,6) - these place so close , space them a bit so the pattern here looks cleaner
6. 00:47:045 (2,3,4,5) -I think antijumps might be too hard for hard diff
7. 00:48:045 (1,2,3) - jumps here might be too big for hard , I'd try to keep ds lower than 2.1x when making jumps in hard
8. 00:53:545 (4,5) - this is pretty hard to read for hard diff , consider stacking them or spacing them more
9. 01:22:045 - missing clap
   
   spacing can be improved here , try to make sure spacing is easy to read , antijumps or big jumps is rarely use in hard diff imo

[normal]

• you missing clap a lots here , probably because some unsnapped things I mention in general so resnap everything then try to copy hitsound from other diffs to this diff again

1. 00:05:045 (3) - multi-reverse slider is too hard for normal diff , try this rhythm instead
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:48:045 (3,4,5) - this is too hard for normal imo , try rhis
   SPOILER

   
   
   I think you can add more 1/2 note here a bit

[easy]

1. 00:07:379 - missing clap
2. 00:24:712 - ^
3. 00:30:045 - mising clap
   01:01:045 (3,4) - stacking is hard to read for beginners , spacing them
4. 01:05:045 (1) - multi-reverse slider is too hard for beginners , try this rhythm instead
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:22:712 (3,1) - 1/2 spacing is hard for beginners , try to make rhythm here a bit more simple , try this
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:25:879 (3,1) - stacking is hard to read for beginners , spacing them

good luck

CelsiusLK wrote:

from my q

Thanks for the mod! (I completely forgot to log on osu the past few days, so sorry for the late kd). Will post updates later edit: finally got the chance to sit down and take a look at your suggestions sorry it took so long

CelsiusLK wrote:

[general]

1. uncheck widescreen support , this is use for sb
2. soft-hitclap is unused if you want to use it you need to change sampleset to softcustom-1
   SPOILER

   
3. kiai inconsistent

   AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Kiai
   Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   
   - [Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:045, ends on 00:59:045
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:712, ends on 01:10:295
   
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:045, ends on 00:59:045
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:712, ends on 01:10:379
   
   - [Insane] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:045, ends on 00:59:045
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:712, ends on 01:10:379
   
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:045, ends on 00:59:045
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:712, ends on 01:10:295

   You need to make sure kiai is consistent on every diffs if you map fullset by yourself

4. AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:07:047 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).

5. Also lots of unsnapped thing in normal that need to fix
   unsnapped things in normal

   AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:01:046 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:02:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:03:712 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:05:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:05:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:05:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:06:212 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:07:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:07:712 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:08:879 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:10:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:13:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:13:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:14:212 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:15:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:15:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:17:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:18:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:19:712 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:21:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:21:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:23:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:24:212 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:25:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:27:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:29:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:30:379 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:33:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:35:712 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:37:545 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:39:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:43:045 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:45:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:47:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:47:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:49:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:53:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:53:045 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:55:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:57:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   00:57:045 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   00:58:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:01:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   01:01:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:03:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:07:045 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:09:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:09:545 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:14:379 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:15:545 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:17:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   01:17:045 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:18:212 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:19:045 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:20:879 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:22:379 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:23:545 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:24:879 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

- I disabled WS support
- fixed kiai time on all difficulties
- awawawawa I don't know what happened when I was mapping normal, but for some reason everything was unsnapped? I definitely will fix this at a later time

CelsiusLK wrote:

[insane]

1. 00:04:045 (2) - ctrl+g this would make flow here 00:03:712 (1,2,3) - nice imo , it's ok to jumps here 00:04:045 (2,3) -
2. 00:14:212 (1,2) - flow here is kinda awkward , the bent in flow here is somehow make flow here awkward would be better if you swap place of these 00:14:712 (2,3) - notes it would give nice transition flow from slider 00:14:212 (1) - to 00:14:712 (2) - also you might need to re-adjust next notes if you make change here
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:31:879 (6) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 00:31:545 (5,6,7) - nice imo , it's ok to jumps here 00:31:879 (6,7) -
4. 00:43:045 (9) - nc for change in spacing here
5. 00:54:379 (1) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 00:54:045 (9,1,2) - nice imo
6. 01:02:712 (2,3) - swap place of these notes would make flow here 01:02:712 (2,3,4) - nice imo , it's ok to jumps here 01:02:879 (3,4) - since 01:03:045 (4) - sound pretty emphasized would the map looks intresting to play
7. 01:16:879 (5) - ctrl+g this and it would make flow here 01:16:379 (4,5,6) - nice imo
   
   I think flow in this diff can be improved a bit

- well I think this diff can be improved a lot LOL. After not having played it for a while, it just feels very off compared to the other difficulties. Will probably end up redesigning this difficulty

CelsiusLK wrote:

[hard]

1. 00:07:379 - missing clap
2. 00:28:711 (2,3) - I think stacking would emphasis beat here really well
3. 00:31:879 (4,5,6) - I think antijumps might be too hard for hard diff
4. 00:42:712 (5,6,7) - I guess this is really hard to read for hard diff , try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:45:045 (4,6) - these place so close , space them a bit so the pattern here looks cleaner
6. 00:47:045 (2,3,4,5) -I think antijumps might be too hard for hard diff
7. 00:48:045 (1,2,3) - jumps here might be too big for hard , I'd try to keep ds lower than 2.1x when making jumps in hard
8. 00:53:545 (4,5) - this is pretty hard to read for hard diff , consider stacking them or spacing them more
9. 01:22:045 - missing clap
   
   spacing can be improved here , try to make sure spacing is easy to read , antijumps or big jumps is rarely use in hard diff imo

- will fix all hitsound issues at a later date because I'm lazy and would rather focus on getting a good flow first
- took your suggestion at 00:28:711
- revised the antijump at 00:31:879 by deleting a note (4)
- I think the rhythm at 00:42:712 is fine, but I can see what you mean by it being too difficult. will consider if somebody else points this out
- fixed the distance issue at 00:45:045
- the antijump at 00:47:045 seems fine to me
- I think you're right about the jump. Ended up making it smaller
- stacked the (4) and (5) at 00:53:545

CelsiusLK wrote:

[normal]

• you missing clap a lots here , probably because some unsnapped things I mention in general so resnap everything then try to copy hitsound from other diffs to this diff again

1. 00:05:045 (3) - multi-reverse slider is too hard for normal diff , try this rhythm instead
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:48:045 (3,4,5) - this is too hard for normal imo , try rhis
   SPOILER

   
   
   I think you can add more 1/2 note here a bit

- will fix all hitsound issues at a later date because I'm lazy and would rather focus on getting a good flow first
- will focus on snapping everything at a later date. weird though; I could've sworn everything was snapped when I mapped it
- I don't think the multireverse slider is that big of a problem. It's 1/1, so it's not like it's terribly fast
- took your suggestion at 00:48:045 and made it into a reverse slider

CelsiusLK wrote:

[easy]

1. 00:07:379 - missing clap
2. 00:24:712 - ^
3. 00:30:045 - mising clap
   01:01:045 (3,4) - stacking is hard to read for beginners , spacing them
4. 01:05:045 (1) - multi-reverse slider is too hard for beginners , try this rhythm instead
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:22:712 (3,1) - 1/2 spacing is hard for beginners , try to make rhythm here a bit more simple , try this
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:25:879 (3,1) - stacking is hard to read for beginners , spacing them

- will fix all hitsound issues at a later date because I'm lazy and would rather focus on getting a good flow first
- took your suggestion at 01:01:045; they no longer stack
- I don't think the multireverse slider is that big of a problem. It's 2/1, which I feel is a good pace for beginners. however, I see what you mean, and if another modder points this out I'll change it
- tried out your suggestion at 01:22:712, but I don't think it's that much of an improvement. I'll keep a note on this though, and will probably change it in the future after playing around with it some more
- took your suggestion at 01:25:879; they no longer stack

CelsiusLK wrote:

good luck

Thanks! Aiming for ranked is tough

Greetings. I can't mod diffs below 4 stars so hope this will be helpful enough

General

You have a custom soft hitclap hitsound that you are not using

Insane

00:03:045 (9,10,11) - imo makes this consistant (either two sliders or 4 notes)
00:07:045 (3) - not snapped on white tick
00:10:629 (6) - there's no sound on this tripple but I guess a bit of overmap is ok
00:16:712 (4,5) - move these a bit down so that the 5 can overlap on the 00:15:545 (1) - ?
00:22:879 (3) - split into two circles?
00:31:879 (6) - ^
00:32:212 (7,8) - rather make 8 return slider that starts on 00:32:545 and 7 slider which ends at 00:32:379
00:43:045 (9) - 1/4 slider or a 1/2 slider that ends into 00:43:295 (10) -
00:43:379 add a note that stacks on 00:43:295 (10) -
00:44:045 (3,6) - I'm guessing these were suppose to overlap
00:46:879 (4,2) - these too
00:55:045 (3) - this might be better if split in circles
00:58:879 (10,11) - there's beats on blue ticks in this part that are ignored
00:58:545 (9) - maybe split this into two circles aswell
00:59:712 (1) - slider?
01:00:379 (3) - split
01:02:712 (2) - I have a feeling this note needs to be emphasised more.
01:07:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - note exactly sure why the 2nd part spacing is so small compared to the 1st part. I mean I hear the same beat?
01:14:379 (4) - if you mapped on vocal here then ok but beat is strong here too
01:15:379 (6) - it's empty beat, if you didn't want to leave this clear, just make the slider reverse arrow 01:14:712 (5) -
01:19:962 (6) - same as 00:10:629 (6) -
01:27:712 (1,2,3) - aren't there suppose to be 4 of these?

Good luck

Hi M4M please
General

Strategas wrote:

You have a custom soft hitclap hitsound that you are not using

Slidertick could be custom hitclap too
Soooo many hitsounds problem i'm too lazy to mod all your hitsounds

Easy

00:06:712 (1) - at the reverse add hitclap
00:17:045 (1) - you shoud use a shorter slider with reverse and add clap at the reverse 00:18:712 - slidertick here would be hitclap sound (soft-slidertick sound but use the same as (soft-hitclap)
00:18:379 (3) - better use hitwhistle
00:20:045 - add slidertick that sound as hitclap
00:24:712 (4) - add hitclap here
00:25:045 (1) - better use shorter slider or add slidertick hitsounds
00:30:045 (3) - add hitclap here
00:32:045 (2) - add hitclap here
00:35:712 (1) - use shorter slider or add slidertick hitsounds
00:38:379 (1) - ^
00:40:045 (2,3) - don't stack them
00:41:045 (1) - use shorter slider or add slidertick hitsounds
00:43:045 (3) - use a short reverse slider with hitclap at reverse
00:44:712 (2,3,4,1) - stacking aren't beautiful
00:46:379 (1) - use shorter slider
00:51:712 (1) - ^
00:53:379 (2,3) - no stack
01:01:045 (3,4) - ^
01:04:712 (4) - need hitclap
01:22:712 (3,1) - no!! not for beginners
01:26:379 (1) - move it further

Normal

Go check your hitsounds you for got so much
00:06:712 - 00:08:379 - missing a lot of hitclaps
00:09:379 - 00:10:045 - ^
00:14:712 - 00:15:712 - ^^
00:16:545 - missing hitclap between slider
00:25:045 - 00:26:045 - missing a lot of hitclaps
00:53:379 - hitclap here
00:55:379 - ^
01:01:379 - ^^
and a lot at last part

Hard

Check your hitsounds
00:18:045 - need a note
00:23:879 (3,4) - overlap is not good
00:53:879 (5) - move further

Insane

The only difficult that has less hitsound problems
Check just a little hitsound
01:25:379 (5) - need hitclap

Good luck

Strategas wrote:

Greetings. I can't mod diffs below 4 stars so hope this will be helpful enough

General

You have a custom soft hitclap hitsound that you are not using

Insane

00:03:045 (9,10,11) - imo makes this consistant (either two sliders or 4 notes)
00:07:045 (3) - not snapped on white tick
00:10:629 (6) - there's no sound on this tripple but I guess a bit of overmap is ok
00:16:712 (4,5) - move these a bit down so that the 5 can overlap on the 00:15:545 (1) - ?
00:22:879 (3) - split into two circles?
00:31:879 (6) - ^
00:32:212 (7,8) - rather make 8 return slider that starts on 00:32:545 and 7 slider which ends at 00:32:379
00:43:045 (9) - 1/4 slider or a 1/2 slider that ends into 00:43:295 (10) -
00:43:379 add a note that stacks on 00:43:295 (10) -
00:44:045 (3,6) - I'm guessing these were suppose to overlap
00:46:879 (4,2) - these too
00:55:045 (3) - this might be better if split in circles
00:58:879 (10,11) - there's beats on blue ticks in this part that are ignored
00:58:545 (9) - maybe split this into two circles aswell
00:59:712 (1) - slider?
01:00:379 (3) - split
01:02:712 (2) - I have a feeling this note needs to be emphasised more.
01:07:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - note exactly sure why the 2nd part spacing is so small compared to the 1st part. I mean I hear the same beat?
01:14:379 (4) - if you mapped on vocal here then ok but beat is strong here too
01:15:379 (6) - it's empty beat, if you didn't want to leave this clear, just make the slider reverse arrow 01:14:712 (5) -
01:19:962 (6) - same as 00:10:629 (6) -
01:27:712 (1,2,3) - aren't there suppose to be 4 of these?

Good luck

Thanks for the mod!
- will fix the hitsounds at a later date; I want to focus on the flow of the song first
- I was actually planning on redesigning most of the Insane map because I didn't really like some of the patterns I used. I'll take into consideration your suggestions when redesigning though!

giantzarz wrote:

Hi M4M please
General

Strategas wrote:

You have a custom soft hitclap hitsound that you are not using

Slidertick could be custom hitclap too
Soooo many hitsounds problem i'm too lazy to mod all your hitsounds

- yeah, this must've slipped my mind LOL. will fix at a later date

giantzarz wrote:

Easy

00:06:712 (1) - at the reverse add hitclap
00:17:045 (1) - you shoud use a shorter slider with reverse and add clap at the reverse

like this

00:18:712 - slidertick here would be hitclap sound (soft-slidertick sound but use the same as (soft-hitclap)
00:18:379 (3) - better use hitwhistle
00:20:045 - add slidertick that sound as hitclap
00:24:712 (4) - add hitclap here
00:25:045 (1) - better use shorter slider or add slidertick hitsounds
00:30:045 (3) - add hitclap here
00:32:045 (2) - add hitclap here
00:35:712 (1) - use shorter slider or add slidertick hitsounds
00:38:379 (1) - ^
00:40:045 (2,3) - don't stack them
00:41:045 (1) - use shorter slider or add slidertick hitsounds
00:43:045 (3) - use a short reverse slider with hitclap at reverse
00:44:712 (2,3,4,1) - stacking aren't beautiful
00:46:379 (1) - use shorter slider
00:51:712 (1) - ^
00:53:379 (2,3) - no stack
01:01:045 (3,4) - ^
01:04:712 (4) - need hitclap
01:22:712 (3,1) - no!! not for beginners
01:26:379 (1) - move it further

- will fix hitsounds at a later date
- I think the slider at 00:17:045 is fine as it is
- I think the slider at 00:35:712 is fine, but I can understand what you mean by making it shorter. I'll play around with this some more and get back to you. same with the slider at 00:41:045
- fixed the stacking issue at 00:40:045 and 00:44:712
- I think the slider at 00:43:045 is fine
- I think the slider at 00:46:379 is fine
- ^^ at 00:51:712
- fixed the stack at 00:53:379
- fixed the stack at 01:01:045
- will need to play around with the notes at 01:22:712 to make it more beginner-friendly
- fixed the stack at 01:25:379

giantzarz wrote:

Normal

Go check your hitsounds you for got so much
00:06:712 - 00:08:379 - missing a lot of hitclaps
00:09:379 - 00:10:045 - ^
00:14:712 - 00:15:712 - ^^
00:16:545 - missing hitclap between slider
00:25:045 - 00:26:045 - missing a lot of hitclaps
00:53:379 - hitclap here
00:55:379 - ^
01:01:379 - ^^
and a lot at last part

- will fix hitsounds at a later date

giantzarz wrote:

Hard

Check your hitsounds
00:18:045 - need a note
00:23:879 (3,4) - overlap is not good
00:53:879 (5) - move further

- added a note at 00:18:045
- fixed the overlap at 00:23:879
- took somebody else's suggestion at 00:53:879. hopefully it feels better?

giantzarz wrote:

Insane

The only difficult that has less hitsound problems
Check just a little hitsound
01:25:379 (5) - need hitclap

hey at least I got one of these right LOL
- I was planning on redesigning this one because while I like the flow, I don't like the patterns

giantzarz wrote:

Good luck

Thanks I'll be checking out your map soon

Hey c: From my queue
Sorry for the wait

General

I love your blankets

Insane

I would recommend using a higher ar, maybe 8.3 as right now some of the patterns are too hard to read
00:40:712 (11) - It looks kinda ugly with this slider stacked under 00:40:212 (10) , maybe you could try moving it to x:387 y:175 for a blanket?
00:48:212 (10) - This note is partially off the screen, move it up
01:11:879 (7) - Copy 01:10:879 (3) and replace this slider with it
01:16:879 (4) - Off the screen

Hard

00:04:712 (4) - I think you should move it a bit to the left to prevent an overlap with 00:03:712 (1)
00:51:379 (8) - Imo this is a bit confusing for hard the way it is stacked under 00:50:712 (5), I would suggest moving it somewhere else

Normal

00:07:712 (3) - I think you should move this slider to 00:07:545 in time, it makes more sense for the song (don't forget to DS it and the notes after)
01:21:712 (2) - This might be a bit too hard to read for a normal diff as it is stacked under 01:19:712 (3), I think you should move it

Easy

00:16:045 (2) - This slider is a bit too high, move it down a bit
01:18:379 - I think there should be a note here with a NC
01:21:045 - ^

A pretty good map ^^
Sorry for the short mod, there's not much I could find c:
Good luck!

TheKoala wrote:

Hey c: From my queue
Sorry for the wait

General

I love your blankets // Thanks

Insane

I would recommend using a higher ar, maybe 8.3 as right now some of the patterns are too hard to read // I was actually messing around with this earlier, since it feels somewhere in between 8-9. Ended up going with 8.3 like you suggested
00:40:712 (11) - It looks kinda ugly with this slider stacked under 00:40:212 (10) , maybe you could try moving it to x:387 y:175 for a blanket?// Fixed
00:48:212 (10) - This note is partially off the screen, move it up // Fixed
01:11:879 (7) - Copy 01:10:879 (3) and replace this slider with it // Fixed (I didn't even realize it was off centre; thanks ;w;)
01:16:879 (4) - Off the screen // Fixed

Hard

00:04:712 (4) - I think you should move it a bit to the left to prevent an overlap with 00:03:712 (1) // Fixed
00:51:379 (8) - Imo this is a bit confusing for hard the way it is stacked under 00:50:712 (5), I would suggest moving it somewhere else // I think this is fine as it is, but I see what you mean. I'll consider it if another modder points this out as well

Normal

00:07:712 (3) - I think you should move this slider to 00:07:545 in time, it makes more sense for the song (don't forget to DS it and the notes after) // I think this is fine as it is, since the slider does follow the drumbeat. I see what you mean though, so I'll consider moving it if another modder points it out
01:21:712 (2) - This might be a bit too hard to read for a normal diff as it is stacked under 01:19:712 (3), I think you should move it // I don't think this is a problem, since you can clearly see the whole slider ahead of time

Easy

00:16:045 (2) - This slider is a bit too high, move it down a bit // I don't think this is a problem since the slider is still movable within the borders of the grid
01:18:379 - I think there should be a note here with a NC // Added a note here like you suggested
01:21:045 - ^ // Sort of took this suggestion; placed it at 01:20:879 instead

A pretty good map ^^
Sorry for the short mod, there's not much I could find c:
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod

Sorry for late mod >.<
Newbid modding ;_;
[General]
Sorry I cannot help out much I think OAO most of them are personal opinions

[Insane]
00:03:045 (3,4,5) - will it cause confusion?
00:51:045 (9,10,11,12) - ^, I will suggest swapping 10 with 11 QAQ
01:01:713 (8,9,10,11) - ^
00:59:712 (1,2) - I think they touches the HP bar (I am using official skin QAQ), maybe lowering them?
01:21:712 (3,4) - I think too many objects start here .__.

[Hard]
00:17:545 (2,3,4) - DS here does not look good ._.
00:30:379 (1,2) - missing a beat here, looks weird to me
00:50:712 (5,8) - will it be too hard to read for hard difficulty? Idk QAQ
01:23:545 (1,2,3,4) - this part do not quite work for me

[Normal]
00:55:045 (3,5) - If I'm correct such overlaps are not preferred in normal ;__;
01:14:045 (3,4) - ^

[Easy]
I don't know how to mod easy, sorry .__.

clp012345 wrote:

Sorry for late mod >.<
Newbid modding ;_;
[General]
Sorry I cannot help out much I think OAO most of them are personal opinions

[Insane]
00:03:045 (3,4,5) - will it cause confusion? // I don't think it's that confusing
00:51:045 (9,10,11,12) - ^, I will suggest swapping 10 with 11 QAQ // Great idea here! Used it
01:01:713 (8,9,10,11) - ^ // Took your suggestion here as well
00:59:712 (1,2) - I think they touches the HP bar (I am using official skin QAQ), maybe lowering them? // Fixed
01:21:712 (3,4) - I think too many objects start here .__. // I don't think it's too much of a problem. If another modder points it out I'll consider fixing it

[Hard]
00:17:545 (2,3,4) - DS here does not look good ._. // It looks fine to me, but moved it slightly anyways. Hope it's better now
00:30:379 (1,2) - missing a beat here, looks weird to me // Fixed
00:50:712 (5,8) - will it be too hard to read for hard difficulty? Idk QAQ // I'll play around to see if I can come up with something better but for now I'll leave it as is
01:23:545 (1,2,3,4) - this part do not quite work for me // I think this is fine as it currently is since it follows the trumpets

[Normal]
00:55:045 (3,5) - If I'm correct such overlaps are not preferred in normal ;__; // Fixed
01:14:045 (3,4) - ^ // Fixed

[Easy]
I don't know how to mod easy, sorry .__. // Don't worry about it, you did your best

Thanks for the mod

Insane

00:03:212 (4,5) - why the anti-jump here, it's weird
00:21:879 (7,8) - I think you should unstack this as it halts movement
00:29:878 (8,9) - ^
00:38:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and 00:41:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are similar in music, yet the former one is much more spaced out, some common balance would be good
01:00:379 (3) - it feels different from 00:59:712 (1,2) - unstack 3 from those 2 for more emphasis of the new vocal line, which isn't a held vocal
01:26:879 (4) - add finish on slider start?

Hard

00:13:545 - something should start here instead of having a slider end here, with the trumpet holding on in the music
00:16:712 (8,1) - don't let them touch each other, your objects with the usual spacing do not do so, this is irregular and isn't nice, sticks out
00:28:879 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why the sudden decrease in spacing?
00:31:212 - missing the strong beat in vocals
00:42:712 (5,6,7) - I rather you repeat the 3/4 rhythm rather than the 1/2 rhythm before that
01:00:379 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why the sudden decrease in spacing

The random spacing doesn't make sense, it's not intuitive here. It makes it unpolished and more complicated

Normal

For Normal either stack 00:04:712 (3,4) - 1/2 rhythms or 00:08:712 (4,1) - 1/4 rhythms, don't further complicate things by having both sometimes use stacking

Easy

01:05:045 (1) - I won't recommend multiple repeat sliders in Easy
01:17:379 (3,1) - 01:20:045 (4,1) - keep things in Easy to at most 1/1 beat apart between objects. Only these 2 are like this, it comes at the end and is quite a surprise



Good Luck

neonat wrote:

Insane

00:03:212 (4,5) - why the anti-jump here, it's weird
00:21:879 (7,8) - I think you should unstack this as it halts movement
00:29:878 (8,9) - ^
00:38:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and 00:41:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are similar in music, yet the former one is much more spaced out, some common balance would be good
01:00:379 (3) - it feels different from 00:59:712 (1,2) - unstack 3 from those 2 for more emphasis of the new vocal line, which isn't a held vocal
01:26:879 (4) - add finish on slider start?

Hard

00:13:545 - something should start here instead of having a slider end here, with the trumpet holding on in the music
00:16:712 (8,1) - don't let them touch each other, your objects with the usual spacing do not do so, this is irregular and isn't nice, sticks out
00:28:879 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why the sudden decrease in spacing?
00:31:212 - missing the strong beat in vocals
00:42:712 (5,6,7) - I rather you repeat the 3/4 rhythm rather than the 1/2 rhythm before that
01:00:379 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why the sudden decrease in spacing

The random spacing doesn't make sense, it's not intuitive here. It makes it unpolished and more complicated

Normal

For Normal either stack 00:04:712 (3,4) - 1/2 rhythms or 00:08:712 (4,1) - 1/4 rhythms, don't further complicate things by having both sometimes use stacking

Easy

01:05:045 (1) - I won't recommend multiple repeat sliders in Easy
01:17:379 (3,1) - 01:20:045 (4,1) - keep things in Easy to at most 1/1 beat apart between objects. Only these 2 are like this, it comes at the end and is quite a surprise



Good Luck

Thanks for the mod, and sorry about the late kudos! Been a little busy with school lately; will take a look at your mod when I have the chance

Hi there. Sorry for the late reply (you made your request in June)

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow whatever I say. Changes are separated into boxes.






Final thoughts: There is not much for me to mod since a lot of things are A-Ok in my opinion. Of course when playing insane it took me a few tries to get it but it works. There are a few minor things that if fixed can make a huge impact (that is what I think).

Good luck and again I apologize for the very late reply.

Thanks for the mod! I've been pretty busy with school for the past few months, so I haven't even managed to finish my queue either, heheh. though I recently finished my summer term so I'm hoping to fix that asap

As for the song, I'm taking a short break on it, but I'll get right back on it soon

RVMathew wrote:

Hi there. Sorry for the late reply (you made your request in June)

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow whatever I say. Changes are separated into boxes.

General

1) Audio lead in should be between 1500-2000ms.

2) 01:27:879 The spinner should have a finish sound. Try this hitsound: http://puu.sh/jEbmv/5c158ec070.wav

3) Is there a way for you to compress the vid size without losing quality to reduce download size?

Easy

1) 00:10:045 Straighten the slider:

SPOILER

2) 00:11:379 Shift the note up. New coordinates: x: 94, y: 175.

3) 00:53:712 Do not scrunch up the slider as it does not look good. Try this:

SPOILER

Everything else is fine.

Normal

1) 00:17:045 Make the arrow shape more symmetrical.

2) 00:30:379 Why go with the angled curve at the end? It looks a little weird. I think a curve will do but this is a minor thing.

Hard

1) 00:02:212 Adjust the slider like so; I think it looks better imo

SPOILER

[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/3546162[/img]

Insane

1) 01:18:712 and 01:19:045 It makes more sense to straighten the sliders:

SPOILER

Final thoughts: There is not much for me to mod since a lot of things are A-Ok in my opinion. Of course when playing insane it took me a few tries to get it but it works. There are a few minor things that if fixed can make a huge impact (that is what I think).

Good luck and again I apologize for the very late reply.

nice song,rip graveyard

sahuang wrote:

nice song,rip graveyard

you should check out the full version instead same song, but longer and not in graveyard lol