1. Hyper (3.51 stars, 259 notes)
2. Insane (3.94 stars, 358 notes)
3. Light (1.68 stars, 113 notes)
4. Medium (2.81 stars, 187 notes)
5. Normal (1.29 stars, 152 notes)

Loli Master wrote:

Timing Mod

Timing Point/s:

00:02:505 - At 130 Bpm. used new offset

Hope this helps

Goodluck with the Beatmap! thanks

1. The Easy diff is harder than the Normal diff. -> Shouldnt be the case
2. Try to work with a constant DS on Easy and Normal difficulties. (DS = Distance Snapping)
3. I think the offset should be 2274

1. 00:15:889 (2) - This reversed slider seems strange for me for an Easy diff. Right after that slider is a little pause. Try to change that part and map it differently. Maybe into this
2. 00:19:120 (1,2,3,4) - To make the diff a bit easier you could replace those sliders with simple notes
3. 00:31:928 starts a Kiai time but ends not even after one second already. Remove that or readjust the timing of it
4. 00:33:889 (2,3,4,5,1) - Again maybe simple notes to make it simplier
5. 00:56:043 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3) - This is feels strange while playing. Probably because of the missing DS
6. 01:36:658 Add a note
7. 01:38:043 Add a note
8. I dont understand your timingsections tbh. Maybe take a look at them again.
9. Like in General said. THere are a lot of snapping error. Use a constant DS

1. 00:02:505 (1,2) - Try to get some new pattern instead of copy pasting this all over again.
2. 00:12:888 (1,1,1,1) - Use a higher combo than just 1
3. ~ 00:17:735 A gap try to map it
4. 00:19:351 (1,2,3,4) - Start on the white tick not on the red
5. 00:20:966 No need for a break there
6. 00:26:735 (1,2,3,4) - Again start on white tick
7. 00:28:812 Gap again.
8. 00:31:581 (1) - This starts way earlier on 00:31:120
9. 00:32:505 Gap
10. 00:34:120 (1,2,3,4) - On the white tick
11. 00:36:197 No need for a break there
12. 00:41:505 (1,2,3,4) - On white tick
13. 00:43:581 Gap
14. 00:56:043 and 00:56:505 add note
15. 00:58:581 (4) - remove this note. If you want to map the silent beats try to use sliders instead
16. 00:59:274 (5) - Move this to the next white tick
17. 01:00:197 Add note
18. 01:02:274 (7) - Remove this note (Just as the same before) 01:02:966 (8) - Move to the next white tick and 01:03:889 add note
19. 01:05:966 (10,11) - Same again here ---^
20. 01:08:505 Add note
21. 01:10:812 Gap
22. 01:14:505 Gap
23. 01:18:197 Gap
24. 01:21:889 Gap
25. 01:23:274 (2) - This starts earlier ----^ The gap
26. 01:24:197 Gap
27. ....
28. I guess it not finished I stop here
29. ....
30. Maybe lower the hitsound volume from 100 to 60? Personal preference

1. Try to use a higher combo than 3
2. 00:21:197 (1,1) - Remove those
3. 00:30:197 The stream should start around here, but imo you shouldnt use streams in a Hard difficulty
4. 00:33:428 (4,5) - Remove them
5. 00:37:120 (3) - Replace with a note
6. 00:38:043 (6) - Move from white to the next red tick
7. 00:54:543 (1,2,3,4) - Use DS because the timing is weird or use sliders
8. 00:56:735 (3,4,5) - Maybe just notes instead of sliders. Feels strange while playing
9. 00:57:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use DS
10. 01:00:428 (3,4,5) - Same as before
11. 01:01:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use DS
12. 01:04:120 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same again
13. 01:07:813 (3,4,5) - Too much copy and paste ^^
14. I just pick some examples 01:30:658 (4) - this slider should be from white to red
15. Try to get new patterns instead of copy pasting it again. Sometimes the notes doesnt fit the rythm at all 01:32:966 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -

Domi200 wrote:

Hey this is from my M4M queue.

Mod reply

[General]

1. The Easy diff is harder than the Normal diff. -> Shouldnt be the case Normal diff isn't made yet
2. Try to work with a constant DS on Easy and Normal difficulties. (DS = Distance Snapping)
3. I think the offset should be 2274

[Easy]

1. 00:15:889 (2) - This reversed slider seems strange for me for an Easy diff. Right after that slider is a little pause. Try to change that part and map it differently. Maybe into this used this except without the note at 3
2. 00:19:120 (1,2,3,4) - To make the diff a bit easier you could replace those sliders with simple notes Good idea. remapped the slider as well so ds and flow is preserved
3. 00:31:928 starts a Kiai time but ends not even after one second already. Remove that or readjust the timing of it less for the kiai than for the spray fireworks. i saw this effect in another map and thought it'd be appropriate to use them here since the music goes up a notch in terms of tension here.
4. 00:33:889 (2,3,4,5,1) - Again maybe simple notes to make it simplier thanks
5. 00:56:043 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3) - This is feels strange while playing. Probably because of the missing DS Will keep in mind. No idea how to fix
6. 01:36:658 Add a note Will keep in mind for a remap. The repeating slider makes it hard to play for beginners because they don't know when to stop holding the note. that's why i left a gap there for them to recover.
7. 01:38:043 Add a note Same reason
8. I dont understand your timingsections tbh. Maybe take a look at them again.
9. Like in General said. THere are a lot of snapping error. Use a constant DS

[Normal]
Yeah sorry. it's not mapped yet.

1. 00:02:505 (1,2) - Try to get some new pattern instead of copy pasting this all over again.
2. 00:12:888 (1,1,1,1) - Use a higher combo than just 1
3. ~ 00:17:735 A gap try to map it
4. 00:19:351 (1,2,3,4) - Start on the white tick not on the red
5. 00:20:966 No need for a break there
6. 00:26:735 (1,2,3,4) - Again start on white tick
7. 00:28:812 Gap again.
8. 00:31:581 (1) - This starts way earlier on 00:31:120
9. 00:32:505 Gap
10. 00:34:120 (1,2,3,4) - On the white tick
11. 00:36:197 No need for a break there
12. 00:41:505 (1,2,3,4) - On white tick
13. 00:43:581 Gap
14. 00:56:043 and 00:56:505 add note
15. 00:58:581 (4) - remove this note. If you want to map the silent beats try to use sliders instead
16. 00:59:274 (5) - Move this to the next white tick
17. 01:00:197 Add note
18. 01:02:274 (7) - Remove this note (Just as the same before) 01:02:966 (8) - Move to the next white tick and 01:03:889 add note
19. 01:05:966 (10,11) - Same again here ---^
20. 01:08:505 Add note
21. 01:10:812 Gap
22. 01:14:505 Gap
23. 01:18:197 Gap
24. 01:21:889 Gap
25. 01:23:274 (2) - This starts earlier ----^ The gap
26. 01:24:197 Gap
27. ....
28. I guess it not finished I stop here
29. ....
30. Maybe lower the hitsound volume from 100 to 60? Personal preference

[Hard]

1. Try to use a higher combo than 3
2. 00:21:197 (1,1) - Remove those changed to slider here, because these map the snare drums on the white beat as well as a melody-beat
3. 00:30:197 The stream should start around here, but imo you should use streams in a Hard difficulty the stream does start there. thanks
4. 00:33:428 (4,5) - Remove them same as above
5. 00:37:120 (3) - Replace with a note thanks for spotting this! huge mistake here. remapped the surrounding region as well
6. 00:38:043 (6) - Move from white to the next red tick works better with the previous red tick. :3
7. 00:54:543 (1,2,3,4) - Use DS because the timing is weird or use sliders used sliders to teach the rhythm
8. 00:56:735 (3,4,5) - Maybe just notes instead of sliders. Feels strange while playing I have to say that I partially agree was originally just notes but changed it to sliders to match the echo. I will use sliders for insane when i make it.
9. 00:57:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use DS Didn't change these.
10. 01:00:428 (3,4,5) - Same as before Same as before.
11. 01:01:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use DS Same as before
12. 01:04:120 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same again Same again
13. 01:07:813 (3,4,5) - Too much copy and paste ^^ I'll keep that in mind. For now I have no ideas
14. I just pick some examples 01:30:658 (4) - this slider should be from white to red keeping this, but changing the sliders to 5 note stream so the slider feels more natural, since it matches the music after all. (will edit this specifically later because posting reply first)
15. Try to get new patterns instead of copy pasting it again. Sometimes the notes doesnt fit the rythm at all 01:32:966 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These seem to match the rhythm. I'll think of something for the first two copies, the last two copies i want to keep for the effect.

Good luck with your map Thank you!

Lokovodo wrote:

This is Ayano-chan~

And this is a mod!~ (reply!~)

Hello from my modding queue~

[General]
the first thing that strikes me is that the "Easy" is remarkably more difficult than the "normal" normal isn't made yet


[easy]
00:10:351 (2) - maybe add curve here like this used a S slider instead, so it flows more easily


00:29:966 (3) - this starts too early on the timeline move it to start at 00:30:197 and end at 00:31:120 Doesn't match the music (it does start at 29:966, i think) and it switches from red->white if i move it to 30:197.

[normal]

this entire difficulty is just copy+paste you should try to move some things around and add notes it's not made

[hard]

00:10:351 (2) - maybe postion this to blanket 00:09:889 (1) - like this Used a wider blanket to preserve DS and for easier flow (because the song's still in the easy stage). wasn't originally meant to be a blanket to be honest



than repostion this note in between the new slider end and the next note like this I want this slider straight, but it's true that the area is ugly. so i remapped it.



00:28:351 (11,12) - you can try to curve and blanket these like this



and generally you should just try to work on making your map look aesthetically better like these examples shown, the "normal" needs a ton of work and you can probably see some pattern in your map from just seeing a few changes here to make you be able to figure out what else needs changing

Will learn!

ego_17 wrote:

well not a mod, just saying - then bg2 appears, bg1 not dessapears
you can save SBload bu adding this code to bg1 events:

F,0,83620,,0
F,0,98505,,1

Modem wrote:

Hi~! For M4M

General

The difficulty spread is weird. Easy diff is harder than Normal diff. This isn't allowed Normal isn't mapped.

Easy (Puthujjana)

CS 3.3 is weird. Change it to 3 Alright
00:03:889 (3) Overlapped with 00:03:658 (2) . These aren't allowed for Easy diff. The beginner players might not recognize that note since it's almost hidden behind this slider -> 00:03:658. Move it away. Put 00:03:889 (3) to x:436 y:308 then fix the DS problem afterwards
00:05:735 (3) The same issue again about overlapped thing. Move this note somewhere like x:200 y:180 don't forget to fix the DS if you do this
00:07:581 (3) Overlapped again. Please fix this. Move this to the spot where all of the players could see it clearly while playing this diff.
00:09:428 (3) ^
00:13:120 (3) ^
00:15:889 (2) Reverse this slider once more. There is no reason to make it end at the blue tick
00:24:428 (1) This part almost get overlapped again. I suggests you to delete this slider and put a note at 00:24:658 (big white tick) instead of this 1/2 slider
00:29:966 (3) This kind of repeated slider isn't recommended for an Easy diff. Since it's too hard for some beginner players. I strongly suggests you to remove this slider and put a long slider that begins at 00:30:197 ~ 00:31:120
00:56:043 ~ 01:08:505 Don't use normal default sampleset at a slow part like this. Change it to soft default sampleset at Timing Setup Panel so you can add whistle at some part to follow the piano like : Hitsounds not made yet :/ I'll change it for now but it's going to be a little different when i finish the map.
00:56:043 (1)
00:56:505 (2)
01:00:197 (2)
01:03:428 (1)
01:05:274 (1)
01:07:120 (1)
After that, get back to normal default sampleset at 01:08:966 (1) and don't forget to add finish at this slider's head
01:22:351 (1) Again. This kind of repeated slider isn't recommended for Easy diff. Remove it and replace it with a long slider that starts from here to 01:23:735 Add finish at this part. Because there's high pitch from the music
01:28:120 (3) Do the same thing about this kind of repeated slider like what I told you before
01:31:812 (3) Here too ^
01:34:812 (1) Move this note to x:408 y:176 to make a better flow
01:35:505 (3) Do the same thing about this kind of repeated slider like what I told you before
01:37:120 (4) ^
01:52:812 (2) ^
There's so many overlapped sliders and notes at this diff. I suggests you to change the DS to 1.0 to make a good spacing

I used DS 1.1 and rearranged pretty much everything. Sorry you had to put so much effort into making comments :/

Normal (Sotapanna)

There are so many unsnapped objects :
00:09:426 (2)
00:11:272 (2)
00:13:118 (1)
00:14:964 (4)
00:27:426 (2)
00:28:349 (4)
01:53:043 (18)
And some DS problem :
01:27:658
01:31:351
01:35:043
01:37:812
01:53:043
Please check AiMod. This might get unrankable so please fix this
00:02:505 ~ 00:14:735 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1) This pattern kind of too repetitive. Even if it's a short song, but if the pattern is too repetitive like this, the players might get bored too soon. So please remap this part and make some variety patterns like some bended sliders with note, or some blankets
00:15:428 (1) This slider make the flow goes a bit weird. First, ctrl + G this slider, then add finish at this slider's head. It will make it looks much better
00:19:351 ~ 00:28:351 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) This part is also too repetitive. Make some variations for 00:26:735 ~ 00:28:351 (1,2,3,4) You can flip all this sliders at this part horizontally for variety
00:34:120 ~ 00:43:120 Some repetitive sliders again. I hope you'll find some time to remap this part by adding some more pattern in it
00:57:889 (3) New combo colour
01:01:581 (6) ^
01:05:274 (9) ^
01:12:658 (1) Please flip this slider horizontally for some variety
01:20:043 (1) ^
01:29:274 (4) ctrl + G
01:32:966 (5) Flip this slider horizontally
01:36:658 (6) Flip this slider horizontally then ctrl + G afterwards
01:42:197 (8) New combo colour
01:45:428 (9) ^
01:49:581 (12) ^
This diff. have too many repetitive sliders and notes. Hopefully you'll find some time to remap this diff. and make some interesting patterns so the players won't get bored so easily

It isn't mapped.

Hard (Sakadagami)

Some objects aren't snapped : 00:09:426 and 00:27:195 . Please check AiMod, then fixed this Fixed
00:02:505 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it Not going to make any hitsounds yet. I'll map the hardest diff first, then copy over.
00:15:428 (1) This note too ^
00:20:966 (10) New combo colour should be here
00:21:197 ~ 00:21:658 (1,1,1) I don't see any reason for new combo colour at all of this notes. Remove all new combo colours at this part since the right combo colour should begins at 00:20:966 (1) And the next new combo colour should begins at 00:22:812 (4) Sorry, I remapped this while you were modding.
00:26:505 (7) New combo colour
00:34:351 (2) Ctrl + G for variety
00:35:274 (4) ^
01:23:505 (1) Remove new combo colour
01:23:620 (1) ^
01:34:812 (1) Move this note to x:132 y:276 to make some consistance distance with the next note. It feels weird to see that note have different spacing to the next note Moved it.
01:37:694 (1) Remove new combo colour from this note, since there is no reason to add it over there Yep, it was a leftover from when I made the stream too hard and wanted to emphasize two notes, but now that it's a normal stream it doesn't work very well.
01:38:505 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
01:53:158 (4) Add thet ^ for this note as well

That's all~!
Good luck for rank (> w <)/

• 
  Big/Overall Issues

1. The map seemed to lack an overall "cleanliness" to it. Not that it's really an issue, however sliders such as 00:10:351 (2) - and 00:14:043 (2) - (To name a few) were hard on the eyes and not particularly interesting to play.
2. Now, I'm not going to bash on the "Copy, paste, and move it around" technique (Especially considering I use it frequently in my maps); but frankly the intro was a bore to play. It wasn't necessarily the rhythm that was unfun to play; The lack of creativity in the first few seconds of the map (Some of the most critical imo) made me want to quit the map and go play another song.
3. 00:33:428 (4,5) - The antijump here was completely random and didn't fit the music at all, please revise here.
4. 00:43:581 (2) - ^
5. 00:44:505 (4) - ^ (Note that I'm not trying to stop you from being creative; In fact, I encourage it. But please.)
6. 00:52:351 (1) - Why a spinner here? There's nothing in the music (No music at all) to warrant a spinner here other than spinner for spinner's sake.
7. 00:54:197 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - (Sorry for large selection) The spacing here was wonky, to say the least. When playing here I often found myself relying exclusively on the approach circles as opposed to the music. Also the overlapping was pretty meh.
8. 01:08:966 (1) - As I said towards the beginning of this mod, there's a time and place for everything. I felt like this part of the song up to 01:20:043 (1) - Could have really made use of interesting and unique sliders!
9. 01:30:658 (1) - Unsnapped object end!
10. 01:34:351 (2) - ^
11. 01:31:812 (1) - This is classified as manipulating sliders with red points and afaik it's unrankable, especially considering it's not readable at all.
12. What happened at the end?!?!?! I was expecting a nice cool-down after the kiai, not an easy! I'd suggest throwing in at least a little bit more density here.

• 
  Nit-picky Stuff/Suggestions

1. 00:17:274 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This sections was pretty boring to play (Little movement) and hard on the eyes (All those little edge overlaps). Perhaps revise this section.
2. 00:22:120 (4,5,6) - The blanketing here was pretty sloppy imo, might wanna clean it up a touch?
3. 00:24:428 (1) - Remove NC here and instead put it on 00:24:658 (2) - ??
4. 00:28:351 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing and blanketing here was really hard on the eyes. I'd clean it up a lot here.
5. 00:30:658 (2,3) - This was fun to play!
6. 00:33:889 (1,2,3,4) - This part of the map felt too cramped and didn't offer much in terms of movement.
7. 00:42:197 (3,1) - Pretty ugly overlap here imo. Space it out so it looks more like a triangle?
8. 00:46:812 (1) - The jump here wasn't really hard to play, but it didn't really follow the flow of the streamy sliders before it. Maybe put it in line with the sliders?
9. Remove NC on 01:24:428 (1) - 01:26:274 (1) - 01:28:120 (1) - etc.? The comboing in the kiai felt pretty awkward imo
10. 01:28:812 (3,1) - This overlap was pretty nasty (Not in a good way) Move (1) out of the way?

• 
  Final Thoughts

1. Pretty rough around the edges, but show's some promise. Never give up!

BrosephStalin wrote:

Here's your m4m, as requested!

(Please note that I'm only modding the hard diff, as we worked out earlier owo)

• 
  Big/Overall Issues

1. The map seemed to lack an overall "cleanliness" to it. Not that it's really an issue, however sliders such as 00:10:351 (2) - and 00:14:043 (2) - (To name a few) were hard on the eyes and not particularly interesting to play. I'm not sure if there are still sliders that don't look good, but I think I fixed everything you mentioned.
2. Now, I'm not going to bash on the "Copy, paste, and move it around" technique (Especially considering I use it frequently in my maps); but frankly the intro was a bore to play. It wasn't necessarily the rhythm that was unfun to play; The lack of creativity in the first few seconds of the map (Some of the most critical imo) made me want to quit the map and go play another song. Remapped intro. Should be more fun now
3. 00:33:428 (4,5) - The antijump here was completely random and didn't fit the music at all, please revise here. Remapped
4. 00:43:581 (2) - ^ ^
5. 00:44:505 (4) - ^ (Note that I'm not trying to stop you from being creative; In fact, I encourage it. But please.) Yeah
6. 00:52:351 (1) - Why a spinner here? There's nothing in the music (No music at all) to warrant a spinner here other than spinner for spinner's sake. Yep
7. 00:54:197 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - (Sorry for large selection) The spacing here was wonky, to say the least. When playing here I often found myself relying exclusively on the approach circles as opposed to the music. Also the overlapping was pretty meh. I tried to fix it
8. 01:08:966 (1) - As I said towards the beginning of this mod, there's a time and place for everything. I felt like this part of the song up to 01:20:043 (1) - Could have really made use of interesting and unique sliders! I tried... ;-;
9. 01:30:658 (1) - Unsnapped object end! !!! oh derr!
10. 01:34:351 (2) - ^ ^
11. 01:31:812 (1) - This is classified as manipulating sliders with red points and afaik it's unrankable, especially considering it's not readable at all. Hoped it would slip past I made it a visible bump (seen this in other maps before)
12. What happened at the end?!?!?! I was expecting a nice cool-down after the kiai, not an easy! I'd suggest throwing in at least a little bit more density here. Again, I tried.

• 
  Nit-picky Stuff/Suggestions

1. 00:17:274 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This sections was pretty boring to play (Little movement) and hard on the eyes (All those little edge overlaps). Perhaps revise this section. Remapped.
2. 00:22:120 (4,5,6) - The blanketing here was pretty sloppy imo, might wanna clean it up a touch? Yep
3. 00:24:428 (1) - Remove NC here and instead put it on 00:24:658 (2) - ?? Yep
4. 00:28:351 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing and blanketing here was really hard on the eyes. I'd clean it up a lot here. Tried my best both times ;-;
5. 00:30:658 (2,3) - This was fun to play! Thanks
6. 00:33:889 (1,2,3,4) - This part of the map felt too cramped and didn't offer much in terms of movement. Remapped slightly.
7. 00:42:197 (3,1) - Pretty ugly overlap here imo. Space it out so it looks more like a triangle? I didn't notice that. Thanks!
8. 00:46:812 (1) - The jump here wasn't really hard to play, but it didn't really follow the flow of the streamy sliders before it. Maybe put it in line with the sliders? Alright then.
9. Remove NC on 01:24:428 (1) - 01:26:274 (1) - 01:28:120 (1) - etc.? The comboing in the kiai felt pretty awkward imo Hm I guess I'm not good at comboing yet
10. 01:28:812 (3,1) - This overlap was pretty nasty (Not in a good way) Move (1) out of the way? At first it was non overlapping, but then i switched to this so the circle radius is more similar. I think I agree it wasn't a good idea.

• 
  Final Thoughts

1. Pretty rough around the edges, but show's some promise. Never give up! Arigatou~

Smoothie World wrote:

M4M ^^

[Hard (Sakadagami)]
Overall your combos are too lengthy for a difficulty as easy as this. Consider shortening them down so they dont go over 10 at the very least. I kept the ending bit because OD is very low so there shouldn't be any problem getting these combos down (they're around 8)
Also, the whole beginning is too loud. Consider bringing the volume down or setting it to a soft hitsound. I'll go through hitsounds later
00:14:043 (3,4,5) - Flow is bad here. Also, a rhythm like this may suit the part better: http://puu.sh/fr9NR/ab6f23f0a5.png Remapped the area.
00:09:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern overall feels lazily designed in my eyes. Try to avoid making blocky patterns like this that only go in 4 straight directions out of a possible 360. Remapped ^
00:12:197 (8,9,10,11) - Doesn't flow right. In addition, instead of a quick slider, try something longer that disrupts the flow less and something that leads into
00:13:581 (1) I made it flow better, but I don't think it'll be nice to use a long slider because I'd be switching beat patterns twice, and if I switched the previous one to a long one as well the whole thing would be too boring. Instead I remapped the area (see above)
00:15:658 (1) - Not enough reaction time between the spinner and 00:17:274 (1) for this difficulty. Shorten it to the white tick. There's no more spinner now due to the remap
00:24:428 (9) - Position this better. It overlaps in an awkward way right now. Moved the circle to the left, and reangled the slider (i think)
00:58:581 (2) - Lengthen this to the next tick. I don't think I'd want that. It echoes 4 times and while (very) tricky to play, everyone gets it on the second try.
01:04:120 (2) - ^ ^
01:07:812 (2) - ^ ^
01:05:966 (2) - Why is there a drum hitsound at the end of this slider? No idea. I didn't even do hitsounds yet o.o
01:08:966 (1) - Too loud for the rest of this slower part. Not doing hitsounds yet
01:44:505 (4,5) - Shouldn't be spaced the same as 01:45:428 (6,7) It's actually the same 1/4 spacing, but I accelerated it a little (keeping the overlaps) for the feels

[Easy (Puthujjana)]
Remapping the whole thing.
00:08:043 (1,2) - Bad blanket
00:11:735 (1,2) - ^
From 00:15:889 (2) to 00:17:274 (1) feels too empty. Try to fill it in with stuff.
00:22:581 (3,4) - Note should come first in this pattern, not the slider. Swap them.
00:37:351 (1,2) - ^
00:39:197 (1,2) - ^
01:29:274 - Something should be here
01:32:966 - ^
01:36:658 - ^
01:37:120 (4) - Too short, doesn't sound right. Consider making it longer.
01:47:735 (6) - Move this up to make a triangle with the 2 notes before it

[Normal (Sotapanna)]
Assuming this diff is not done Well assumed. I even put it down in the beatmap description that it's not done. I guess no one reads those seeing by all the useless "mods" done on normal >.<

^-^

1. Audo combo color set is really boring. How about setting like me? Hope you like it.
   
   Example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 101,170,81
   Combo2 : 20,101,182
   Combo3 : 192,192,192

2. The map didn't use hitsound yet. I suggest you should add it for more interesting
3. 00:54:197 - Put a red line- timing line with current bpm/offset set here. For be correct with strong beat for big tick

1. HP+1 for blanketing.
2. 00:04:697 - How about adding circle here to follow the instrument?
3. 00:05:735 (4) - I suggest making 1/4 slider here and ends at 00:05:851 - to catch the sound.
4. 00:09:428 (4) - the same as above ^
5. 00:09:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is really for me. I suggest making like this:
   
   Example

   
6. 00:12:197 (3) - This shape seems be not good for me. I think making normally will be nicer.
7. 00:12:658 (4) - Move the middle point to 1 grid up for better blanket
8. 00:13:120 (5) - Remove 1 middle point, it looks ugly
9. 00:17:505 (5,1) - Swap NC
10. 00:17:274 - Add finish
11. 00:02:505 (1) - ^
12. 00:14:966 (6) - ^ at tail
13. 00:20:620 - The rhythm could be nicer if you catched the drum at here
14. 00:22:812 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow
15. 00:32:043 (1) - Add finish at head
16. 00:39:428 (1) - Seem this slider was too curved, it looks ugly. I suggest moving the middle point down abit
17. 00:41:043 (5) - Move to 352/96 is nicer flow and pattern
18. 00:46:812 (1) - Add finish
19. 00:53:851 - This greenline isn't used. So delete it pls
20. 00:56:043 (1) - I'd rather to make this end at 00:56:389 -, then 00:56:505 (2) - ends at 00:56:735 - . The rhythm can be improved
21. 00:57:428 (3) - I don't hear the sound here. I recommend to remove it
22. 00:59:735 (1,2,3) - same as 00:56:043 (1,2,3) -
23. 01:03:428 (1,2,3) - ^
24. 01:07:120 (1,2) - ^
25. 01:14:505 (2) - Move to 256/76 to avoide stacking
26. 01:21:889 - Add finish
27. 01:23:735 (1) - Add finish at head
28. 01:23:735 (1,2,3) - The distance of pattern is quite near for me. I suggest making further
29. 01:35:274 (3,4) - Swap this rhythm is more sensible.
30. 01:36:658 (1) - Add finish
31. 01:40:812 (3,4,5) - Bad distance. I want to make further, avoide stacking
32. 01:44:505 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
33. 01:48:197 (4,5,6) - ^
34. 01:49:581 (7) - New combo

1. 00:02:505 (1) - Add finish
2. 00:22:120 (2) - Ugly slider shapr, just mke normally pls
3. 00:27:428 (5) - How about making this curved slider to around 00:28:351 (1) - . The pattern looks nicer.
   
   Example

   
4. 00:32:043 (1) - Add finish at head
5. 00:46:812 - ^
6. 00:54:197 - Put greenline here with soft-soun for be consistency with Hard diff
7. 01:03:428 (1) - Remove NC due to 00:56:043 (3) -
8. 01:08:966 (1) - Add finish at head
9. 01:21:889 (1,2) - Swap NC
10. 01:28:351 (3,4,5) - Bad flow, i suggest making straight one
11. 01:32:043 (3,4,5) - Stack isn't really good for new bies
12. 01:36:658 (1) - Add finish

1. AR-1 (3) pls. (4) is so difficult
2. 00:02:966 (2) - Just a mistake, the slider should be ended at 00:03:889 -
3. 00:02:505 (1) - Add finish
4. 00:20:735 (1,2,3) - Bad distance and pattern, stack is so diffifuclt for newbies. Make clearer and seperated pls.
5. 00:32:043 (1) - Add finish at head
6. 00:56:043 (1) - 00:59:735 (1) - 01:03:428 (1) - 01:07:120 (1) - Remove new combo color
7. 00:44:966 (1) - Add fnish at tail
8. 01:21:889 (1) - Add finish both head and tail
9. 01:42:197 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Map seperatedly pls. Don't overlap. Newbies can't play like this.
10. Seem you didn't use distance snap ruler for diff. So the distance isn't consistency. Newbie can't realize the correct rhythm with this. Jump in Easy diff? I hope not. Pls use distance snap ruler for next time.

Oyatsu wrote:

Hello, M4M. Sorry for late.
[General]

1. Audo combo color set is really boring. How about setting like me? Hope you like it. Used another set of combo colours. Good idea though!
   
   Example

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 101,170,81
   Combo2 : 20,101,182
   Combo3 : 192,192,192

2. The map didn't use hitsound yet. I suggest you should add it for more interesting Ok. Will add after i have the maps themselves mostly done.
3. 00:54:197 - Put a red line- timing line with current bpm/offset set here. For be correct with strong beat for big tick

No need as it is already a big tick.

[Hard (Sakadagami)]

1. HP+1 for blanketing.
2. 00:04:697 - How about adding circle here to follow the instrument? The instrument is also on previous blue tick, like a stream. So if I put it here, then I want to put it on previous blue tick as well, but this makes it quite hard to play.
3. 00:05:735 (4) - I suggest making 1/4 slider here and ends at 00:05:851 - to catch the sound. Ok.
4. 00:09:428 (4) - the same as above ^
5. 00:09:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is really for me. I suggest making like this: I changed it to . . _ _ .
   
   Example

   
6. 00:12:197 (3) - This shape seems be not good for me. I think making normally will be nicer. Yeah. Don't know why I had the original...
7. 00:12:658 (4) - Move the middle point to 1 grid up for better blanket Fixed the blanket.
8. 00:13:120 (5) - Remove 1 middle point, it looks ugly Ok
9. 00:17:505 (5,1) - Swap NC Ok
10. 00:17:274 - Add finish
11. 00:02:505 (1) - ^
12. 00:14:966 (6) - ^ at tail
13. 00:20:620 - The rhythm could be nicer if you catched the drum at here Used repeating slider
14. 00:22:812 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow Ok
15. 00:32:043 (1) - Add finish at head
16. 00:39:428 (1) - Seem this slider was too curved, it looks ugly. I suggest moving the middle point down abit Ok
17. 00:41:043 (5) - Move to 352/96 is nicer flow and pattern Yeah
18. 00:46:812 (1) - Add finish
19. 00:53:851 - This greenline isn't used. So delete it pls
20. 00:56:043 (1) - I'd rather to make this end at 00:56:389 -, then 00:56:505 (2) - ends at 00:56:735 - . The rhythm can be improved Remade the rhythm (don't know what you mean though)
21. 00:57:428 (3) - I don't hear the sound here. I recommend to remove it It's definitely there. (You need to hear both sides of earphone)
22. 00:59:735 (1,2,3) - same as 00:56:043 (1,2,3) - ^
23. 01:03:428 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
24. 01:07:120 (1,2) - ^ ^
25. 01:14:505 (2) - Move to 256/76 to avoide stacking Moved it down more.
26. 01:21:889 - Add finish
27. 01:23:735 (1) - Add finish at head
28. 01:23:735 (1,2,3) - The distance of pattern is quite near for me. I suggest making further Remapped
29. 01:35:274 (3,4) - Swap this rhythm is more sensible.
30. 01:36:658 (1) - Add finish
31. 01:40:812 (3,4,5) - Bad distance. I want to make further, avoide stacking Ok
32. 01:44:505 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
33. 01:48:197 (4,5,6) - ^
34. 01:49:581 (7) - New combo Ok

[Normal (Sotapanna)]

1. 00:02:505 (1) - Add finish
2. 00:22:120 (2) - Ugly slider shapr, just mke normally pls Ok
3. 00:27:428 (5) - How about making this curved slider to around 00:28:351 (1) - . The pattern looks nicer. Ok
   
   Example

   
4. 00:32:043 (1) - Add finish at head
5. 00:46:812 - ^
6. 00:54:197 - Put greenline here with soft-soun for be consistency with Hard diff
7. 01:03:428 (1) - Remove NC due to 00:56:043 (3) - Ok
8. 01:08:966 (1) - Add finish at head
9. 01:21:889 (1,2) - Swap NC Ok
10. 01:28:351 (3,4,5) - Bad flow, i suggest making straight one Ok
11. 01:32:043 (3,4,5) - Stack isn't really good for new bies ?
12. 01:36:658 (1) - Add finish

[Easy (Puthujjana)]

1. AR-1 (3) pls. (4) is so difficult
2. 00:02:966 (2) - Just a mistake, the slider should be ended at 00:03:889 -
3. 00:02:505 (1) - Add finish
4. 00:20:735 (1,2,3) - Bad distance and pattern, stack is so diffifuclt for newbies. Make clearer and seperated pls.
5. 00:32:043 (1) - Add finish at head
6. 00:56:043 (1) - 00:59:735 (1) - 01:03:428 (1) - 01:07:120 (1) - Remove new combo color
7. 00:44:966 (1) - Add fnish at tail
8. 01:21:889 (1) - Add finish both head and tail
9. 01:42:197 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Map seperatedly pls. Don't overlap. Newbies can't play like this.
10. Seem you didn't use distance snap ruler for diff. So the distance isn't consistency. Newbie can't realize the correct rhythm with this. Jump in Easy diff? I hope not. Pls use distance snap ruler for next time.

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Good luck!

-Mo- wrote:

Hey, Mod4Mod from your queue.

General
- 00:31:928 - Was there a reason why this kiai burst is on the blue tick rather than the downbeat? Placing it on the downbeat makes more sense in my opinion.

Normal (Sotapanna)
Ignoring volumes and hitsounds assuming it's not fully complete yet.
- 00:17:274 (1) - Perhaps make this a mirror of 00:18:428 (3) so that they compliment eachother better? Hm... I rotated the kickslider so it flows better. I want this straight.
- 00:26:505 (4) - This could also be a mirror of 00:27:428 (5) if you wanted but it's not so important. Yep.
- 00:54:197 (1,2) - Not sure about the polarity of this. It fits with the music, so it might work. This is just a comment; I'm not sure personally how to improve this, and as such I'll just mention this once. Yeah... That's why I ended up deleting the Easy... because the polarity in this song is really hard, and there isn't a good interesting beat in the background.
- 01:03:889 (4,1) - Avoid having these touch if you can. Yep.
- 01:05:274 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing between these, an as a result they are touching. Yep.
- 01:32:043 (3,4,5) - I don't really like this flow and arrangment in a Normal. I would have the curve going the other way around. Nah. I want the flow to break here.

Example

- 01:33:427 (6,1) - Avoid having these touch if you can. Yep.
- 01:40:351 (3) - Move to 123:312 for a better triangle. Yep.
- 01:44:043 (4) - As above; move to 432:363. Yep.
- 01:51:428 (1) - I'm not so fond of this slider. I'm not sure if you've finalised this or if it's just a placeholder, but consider making the shape smoother, simpler, and not looking like a flattened worm (no offense intended). Here's another slider shape. (it's still a worm )

Hard (Sakadagami)
- 00:15:889 (2,3) - This sort of overlap isn't so good in my opinion since it's covering a significant amount of the slider's head. If you want this sort of flow, that's fine, but I would make it a little more visible. Made it more visible.
- 00:17:274 - The music changes significantly from this beat onwards, so having the downbeat here be covered by a slider tail feels wasted. I would start this section off by having a stronger note on this downbeat, such as a circle or the start of a new slider. Perhaps rhythm wise that is true, but I think the apparent slider velocity increase makes up for that.
- 00:29:505 (4,1) - I would avoid this overlap, since the slider does cover the reverse arrow of the next reverse slider. It might work since there is quite a bit of time, but it still does obstruct even for a little amount of time and I would personally not have this. Yes. you are right.
- 00:36:428 (3,4) - This is also a bad overlap. It doesn't look very good, and it covers a significant amount of the circle. Made it a mini jump so it doesn't overlap.
- 01:12:658 (1,2) - Avoid having these touch. k
- 01:27:428 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing between these. There's no reason why these should be different. Fixed the spacing. Must be when I changed the sv that it broke.
- 01:28:120 (3,4,5) - As above. Move 4 further away.
- 01:47:274 (2,3,4) - This triangle can be improved. Note that 2-4 is a longer distance then 2-3. Consider using the Create Polygon Circles (CPC, Ctrl+Alt+D) feature to create perfect shapes including triangles. Fixed.

Insane (Anagami)
- 00:17:274 (1,2) - The tails of these aren't perfectly stacked. I know... I tried really hard but this was the best I could do.
- 00:19:581 (6,7) - Avoid having these touch. Fixed
- 00:26:274 (4,5) - As above. This doesn't look good either. Fixed.
- 00:30:658 (10,11) - This is poor polarity, and as such is difficult to read the timing. This is not poor polarity. The downbeats are well spaced, and as such is easy to read the timing. (Just kidding) I can't do much about it anyway, because the music doesn't give you any chance of fixing the polarity. Not to mention it sounds natural this way anyway. (If I had a stream of 4, then it would be carcinogenic, which is why I used a repeating slider)
- 01:21:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Going straight into a stream after a slow slider section with calmed music is a bad idea in my opinion. Kind of like shoving someone straight into the deep end of a pool; the jump in difficulty is too big, and since there was little percussion in the section just before, it's hard to get the rhythm initially. I would probably replace the first half of this with repeater sliders before going into the stream. I think it's a fitting transition in my opinion, because the kiai is even harder (stacks/streams placed back to back with jump sequences... how much harder can you get?), but I guess that the argument that the rhythm is hard to get is valid.
- 01:36:658 (1,2,3) - These aren't quite perfectly stacked. Fix'd
- 01:38505 - Unless you didn't get around to mapping this section yet, I don't understand why there is a break here when all of the other diffiulties have this section mapped. The other difficulties have more drain time than this difficulty, which makes no sense whatsoever, Yeah, I was in the middle of remapping lol.

I like the music. Good luck

zj0924 wrote:

My English is poor.hope you will understand it
Normal
00:54:197 - 01:08:505 I think sound effect should be changed into soft because this period is quiet right?
01:10:812 (2) - 01:11:274 (3) - change circles to arrow slider from 01:10:812 to 01:12:197
01:18:197 (2) - 01:18:658 (3) - ^
01:14:966 (3) - use slider last to 1:15:889
01:21:889 (2) - use "finish"(head and tail)
01:51:428 (1) - end at 01:53:274 and add finish

Hard
00:31:005 (3) - hard to recognize……rotate it
01:24:428 (3) - use circle 01:24:658 (4) - 1/4 arrow slider to 01:24:889
01:49:581 (1) - use slider to 01:50:043
01:50:966 (2) - use arrow slider from 01:50:505 to 01:50:966
01:51:889 (2) - delete it and replaced by 01:51:428 (1) slider(5 times) 01:52:120 add circle on 01:52:235 (3) -
01:53:043 (6) - four circles is better or 01:52:812 use 1/4 slider then two circles Ok

Insane
00:30:197 (7) - 00:30:312. 1/4 beat 4 circles.00:30:658 (10) -move sliders to 00:30:197 then move circle to 00:30:658 I did something else
00:39:081 (9) - circle Ok
00:45:428 (2) - 00:45:774 (3) - confused about that delete 00:45:774 (3) and 00:45:428 (2) - last to 00:45:543 add circles at 00:45:889
01:51:428 (2) - ^
00:46:812 (1) - add finish
00:56:043 (5) - use slider till 00:56:389 - delete00:56:389 (6) - add a circle at 00:56:505 It's supposed to be hard here.
00:57:889 (1) - feeling confused.I don't know how to deal with it perhaps you can use the style of 00:59:735-01:01:581 Made sliders overlap
01:03:889 (7) - New combo Long combos here because slow music
01:08:966 (1) - 01:21:428 a little boring i think.You can create a rythmn as you like.such a long slider is not suitable for insane This is a relatively easy Insane.
01:22:812 (1) - why not use speed velocity and change a 1/8 slider to increase difficulty? This wouldn't be in the music
01:23:735 (1) - kial mode you need to spped up.Sliders are too short I want this insane to be around this difficulty.
01:24:428 (3) - four hits you can change to slider to make it more intresting For a relatively easy insane, these quintuples can be annoying already, so I want to keep it consistent
01:36:658 (1) - hard to recognize.reorder plz Are you looking at this in play mode? This is very readable due to stacking.
Good Luck

Nitrousdragon wrote:

random mod
The text in bold means that it is either unrankable or makes more sense to said player.
Most of this is to make the patterns have more variety in them, not just boring linear patterns.

General

Preferable diff names: Normal, Hard, Light Insane, Insane. A bit too easy to call it a Normal or a Hard imo.

Light

00:15:428 (4) - The slider point after the hitcircle does not need to be a bezier slider. Right click on the red slider point. If this isn't a red there won't be a bend...?
00:33:889 (4) - (my opinion) Use another half-note back and forth slider on this part. Am actually considering remapping the whole thing, but at the moment I like it this way

Medium

00:02:505 (1) - I would recommend moving this target to x:256 y:224 It's quite readable so this isn't really a problem. Note especially how the slider doesn't appear until just before you click the circle.
00:02:735 (2) - For equal spacing, move this to x:336 y:220 ^
00:04:351 (1) - Move to x:416 y:260 Moved to y:272 instead
00:08:043 (1,2) - Move those two targets out of the slider's way. In my opinion, I would consider that "blocking" the slider. Move 1 to x:296 y:212 and 2 to x:308 y:132. I'll ask a BN. I like the 180 degree flow here, but moving the circles a little is almost just as good, so I won't hesitate if it's really bad.
00:15:889 (2) - Swerve this slider out of the previous slider's way. Same reason as above, really.
00:37:351 (5) - Move to x:256 y:132 You really hate the straight lines don't you It feels like skipping to me because it's just outside comfortable flow range, so they really are kinda like individual jumps imo. In that case a straight line seems to work well. (again, since I'm considering remapping this, I might actually decide that it's not that good after all XD)
01:01:581 (1,2,3) - heh, you could definitely move these targets farther away from each other. Let's say about 1.4 distance spacing multiplier on those targets. I don't see why I could, actually? It breaks DS and breaking DS when the rhythm is hard is always annoying.
01:25:120 (5) - Move to x:164 y:20 Completely right this time, skipping doesn't work here
01:53:274 - A target could definitely be added to this stream. If you're talking about the end of the stream, then no. The downbeat is completely silent in the music. If you're talking about before the stream, then it makes the stream feel unbalanced, starting on a weak note. (plus it's not an awkward 1/2 to play.)

Thank you very much for your mod! Taking another look at these difficulties is really refreshing

The only mod on Hyper mode is this: 00:26:505 (5,6,7,8) - Wow that spacing is far. I would move them closer to each other. As in...1.7 distance spacing multiplier. Yep. I'll trust an actual Hard player huehuehue.

The only recommendations I have for Insane is to move 00:16:235 (7) closer to 6 and a new combo at 00:45:889 (1). I've already fixed the accelerating stream, and the new combo is a go.

1. your Insane has different kiai-time. ( between 00:32:038 and 00:32:153 ) is it intended?
2. make sure unused timing point in break time.
3. 00:17:269 - there is useless timing. before you used 00:09:884 here.

1. there is quite a lot lack of hitsounds. make sure your hitsound pattern. (especially clap.)
2. also it has so many unreadable distance ( like 01:18:192 (2) - 01:21:884 (2) - 01:24:884 (3) and many 1/2 triplet. but like 00:09:423 (6) this is fine to play.

1. 01:20:038 (1) - it is a little bit tricky when playing. I'm worried about it is regarded to SV changing slider from QAT. what about just simple?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:15:884 (4) - since 00:16:288 here, it is downbeating sound. this and 00:16:346 this is overmapped.
2. 01:49:576 (1) - minor thing. how about make slider end more visible?

1. 00:36:192 (2,5,2,5,2) - a kind of these jump make confuse to it is 1/4 one. I recommend changing traditional distance.

scanter wrote:

hey as your request.

General

1. your Insane has different kiai-time. ( between 00:32:038 and 00:32:153 ) is it intended?
2. make sure unused timing point in break time.
3. 00:17:269 - there is useless timing. before you used 00:09:884 here.

Light

1. there is quite a lot lack of hitsounds. make sure your hitsound pattern. (especially clap.)
2. also it has so many unreadable distance ( like 01:18:192 (2) - 01:21:884 (2) - 01:24:884 (3) and many 1/2 triplet. but like 00:09:423 (6) this is fine to play.

Medium

1. 01:20:038 (1) - it is a little bit tricky when playing. I'm worried about it is regarded to SV changing slider from QAT. what about just simple?
   
   SPOILER

   

Hyper

1. 00:15:884 (4) - since 00:16:288 here, it is downbeating sound. this and 00:16:346 this is overmapped.
2. 01:49:576 (1) - minor thing. how about make slider end more visible?

Insane

1. 00:36:192 (2,5,2,5,2) - a kind of these jump make confuse to it is 1/4 one. I recommend changing traditional distance.

well, your Light diff needs more work imo. else diff seems fine. GL anyway