1. Easy (1,27 stars, 66 notes)
2. Insane (4,97 stars, 252 notes)
3. Normal (3,54 stars, 116 notes)
4. S o r d a's Hard (4,83 stars, 215 notes)

happy30 wrote:

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replay

Insane
the AR feels too fast till the first break... how is the rest of the map mmmh
the rest of the map feels the same, I think AR8 would play much nicer here.

The map is pretty solid, nice use of sliders.
I got a bit confused with the stream around halfway, you can see me miss there in the replay.
Other than that I noticed nothing weird or out of place, good job on the map

Zhengster wrote:

Hi! M4M from your queue~ I'm a noob modder, please take what I say as suggestions

[Easy]
01:31:096 (1) - maybe put this right in the middle? Yup. I dont even know why it was placed there in the first place o.o

[Normal]
00:30:721 (1) - remove NC Hmm i dont agree with you here. The vocals at this part are all part of the same verse so it would be better to keep the combo like this imo :p
00:31:846 (3) - NC ^
01:10:471 (1,2,3) - I think this would fit the song better: Agree, but instead of that i didnt add repeat to the slider, to make the pattern more simple.

SPOILER

01:27:533 (1,2,3) - I don't think straight sliders really fit here :/ hmm i tried doing some wavy sliders to fit more the music.

Insane looks good, good luck on your map! Hope my mod is helpful

Zexion_Vi wrote:

M4M From your Queue. Hope its useful.

[General]
-Solid mapset! Yay!
-On Hard and Insane, there are parts with 0,50x slider velocity. While it does fit the song, its a sudden change, I know it would be a pain to remap it so don't worry, but maybe consider it for future projects. Understood :> I don't think they're that sudden but i'll consider it!

[Easy]
AR -1. Its too much for an easy diff, its confusing for begginers. Yep!
00:51:729 add a circle w/ wristle?
00:57:346 add a circle? The music suggests so.
01:08:971 add a circle? I sincerely don't want to add more notes, i made those blank spaces to make it easier for beginners. I don't like to place consecutive notes in easier diffs, they make the diff end up playing like a normal one.

[Normal]
AR - 1. (or maybe 2) 6 is way too high for a normal!. Maybe it fits the song, but It does not fit the difficulty. decreased by 1
00:31:846 (3) NC? okie
00:43:846 (1) remove NC? here i dont agree. i did it to emphasise the change of melody
01:18:346 (1) maaaaybe reshape this slider? I don't know, it looks kinda ugly... uhmm im not sure about this. i personally like the shape buuut at the same time i feel like i should change it. if somebody else mentions this again i'll change it asap!
01:30:158 (1) I'd really suggest you to use constant spacing for a normal difficulty, new players may rush to the note and fail it. Maybe put it at the center of the map? hmm i thought this way was readable.. ughmm well okay! changed

[S o r d a's Hard]
OD -1? (Not sure about this one) uugh im not sure neither. i changed it, od 7 seems like too much for a hard.
00:01:087 (3) End this slider on the white tick, it doesn't sound good on the blue one. o.o perhaps sorda did this accidentally. fixed.
00:02:087 (4) Move the slider to 00:02:337 and add a circle at 00:02:087 mmm k.
00:19:846 (1,2) I seriously dislike this overlap, but just a personal opinion. i'll keep it since sorda seemed like she wanted to keep this pattern. if i receive more negative feedback about it i'll fix it.
00:39:252 (3) Delete this note, It doesn't fit to the music. agreed
00:59:971 Add a note with finish! That way you won't lose the flow of the kiai. not sure about this. sorda clearly had intentions to only follow the vocals so i'll keep this for now. again, if some other modders complain about it, i'll try to fix it.
01:08:971 ^ ^

[Insane]
-I don't feel the patterns are weird, and I can't mod with video (my pc is crap), so don't fret about that. Nice diff! Thank you very much :p some parts are like that such as 00:49:846 (1,2,3) due to the video. Sesshoumarou slashes horizontally and then vertically with his katana. :3
00:36:721 NC? the melody doesnt really change there so i'll keep the whole combo!
Nothing more to say, I really enjoyed playing this one. I'm glad you like it!

That's all. I hope my mod was useful, and good luck on your map! Yes it was! thank you very much

Drianel wrote:

Hola! desde tu post de m4m vengo^^ me encanta esta canción, ánimo con que sea ranked en breves ^^ aquí tienes los cambios que veo correctos. No dudes en preguntarme por osu si necesitas algo. Hola, perdon la demora con la reply. Me siento bastante vaga ultimamente..

Easy

00:57:721 (3) - Cambia el slider por "slider + nota" o doble slider no estoy de acuerdo, recuerda que es una easy, las easy deben ser lo mas simples posibles y la manera de hacerlo es poner sliders largos que abarquen la vocal lo mas que puedan junto con el instrumental.

SPOILER

Si haces esto añade Finish al final del slider y colócalo en 00:57:346 (3) -

01:20:221 (1) - No crees que el spinner queda mejor en 01:20:033 (1) - ?? y alarga el final del mismo hasta 01:22:846 - lo puse mas lejos para que los beginners puedan entender que empieza un spinner y no se sorprendan. los beginners siempre leen lento los patterns y mas los spinners.
01:31:096 (1) - finish en lugar de whistle mmm no esta mal pero prefiero whistle porque se siente muy calmado el sonidito de la guitarra ahi. un finish suena muy ruidoso pero entiendo que tu intencion es darle un final mas acentuado.

Normal

00:53:971 (5) - muévela a x:212 y:288 ok
01:22:846 - Añade una nota (6) antes del spinner y añádele finish suena bien pero me parece que despues el spinner queda muy junto a la nota que me estas diciendo agregar asi que mejor lo dejo asi. si alguien me sugiere lo mismo lo hago
00:54:346 (1) - desplaza el spinner a 00:54:533 - por que? no sigue nada de esa manera o.o yo lo hice asi para seguir el turuturuturu de la guitarra
01:04:846 (3) - qué te parece este diseño para el slider? mm no se ve mal pero personalmente prefiero mi manera, lo hice curvo asi para que quede este pattern ovalado http://puu.sh/2o34p

SPOILER

punto 1: x:372 y:224 punto 2: x292 y:180 punto 3: x:172 y:276 punto 4: x:84 y:180

01:31:096 (1) - elimina la nota y reemplázala por un spinner que dure hasta 01:33:346 - mm no es mala idea pero no quiero complicarla mas para una normal. dejar una nota al final asi creo que esta bien. nisiquiera use spinner en la insane. no me gusta mucho como queda.

S o r d a's Hard

00:05:837 - Añade una nota (4) y ponle finish s o r d a esta siguiendo solo la voz asi que creo que no es necesario agregar una nota de mas.

SPOILER

00:07:837 (3) - separalo del slider y colócalo en x:220 y:280 es un antijump y personalmente creo que queda muy bien con la voz.

SPOILER

00:08:087 (4) - Elimina la nota no estoy segura :c veo que dicen otros modders y si me lo mencionan lo cambio.
00:59:971 - añade una nota (5) uhh suena bien pero voy a tratar de respetar la decision de sorda, ella solo puso notas siguiendo exclusivamente la vocal, asi que vamos a dejarlo asi por el momento.
01:18:064 (6) - Elimína la nota por que o.o? se puede oir la bateria ahi, asi que no esta mal la nota
01:18:158 (7) - ahora esta nota pasará a ser un (6) y colócala en x:276 y:192

SPOILER

01:31:096 (1) - Finish en lugar de whistle mismo que en easy

Insane
01:31:096 (1) - Finish en lugar de whistle mismo

moonlightleaf wrote:

From my queue a little advice , hope can help you

Easy

fine

00:26:971(2),00:40:846(1) like these,of course it is nice , but i think it not fit in easy diff,new player‘s first touch should be very Normal pattern , make these like 00:25:846(1) ? it maybe better in this diff XD o3o this slider shape is clearly readable imo, nothing wrong with it, but if other modders mention it i'll consider trying something else

Normal

CS-1 mm not sure about this. i like this cs for normal.

00:21:908 note？sounds good but it may be too difficult for beginners to play the patttern if i add a note imo.

00:43:471 add note ^ same, 1/2 long streams are not a very good idea

00:45:158 add note on 00:45:346(2) good idea

01:10:846(2)change to note same as before, may be to odifficult to do patterns like this in a normal, but it sounds good yea. i used sliders because theyre more easier to play

01:11:596 add note o3o doesnt sound good nor necessary. i'll keep this part as it is

Hard

fine

00:07:837(3)(4) maybe diasance is too close easy to read as batter mmm i think it fits quite good with the vocals, it is easy to read, its a hard diff, players should be prepared to play this kind of patterns.

Insane

00:42:721(6) move to x:296 y:296 much better!

00:51:346(1)can put it on (2) yup :3

00:57:158(1) move to x:460 y:160 hmmm not sure about this.. i'l lleave this as it is. its a jump, i didnt want to snap it with dS.

01:00:158(1) move to x:68 y:160 ^

SPOILER

1. A solid map really. It flows and plays well, and some patterns such as the antijump at 00:28:283 (3,4,5) - is just a pleasure to play. I have no idea why though
2. Still, there are a few things I want to point one. One is the slider here 00:44:596 (2) - . This just felt awkward to play. It helps to change over to red ticks, but it sounds out of place, and feels too short. Something like this instead would feel better imo http://puu.sh/2rruL
3. I agree with the timing at 01:19:471 (2,3), but not sure if I agree with the antijump. It just feels a bit forced. Imo, moving it someplace else would just make it play better. Also seeing as there is this long tone at (3), consider changing that to a slider as well.
4. I'm not sure if this map was supposed to follow the video as well? I was trying hard to notice, but I couldn't catch anything

SPOILER

1. The map plays fine, and it flows well, so nothing much to complain about really. Still, I wish there were a bit more interesting stuff going on, kind of setting this map out as "different" from most other ranked TV size maps. It's pretty hard to be the new creative star though . Anyhow, you say in your description that the patterns follow the video, but I honestly couldn't see that. Maybe it's because I'm playing with 16:9 resolution?
2. My replay is kinda bad, which is because I was intently focusing on trying to catch where these patterns that follow the video were
3. 00:12:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are pretty hard to hit first time around, as the song speeds up at this point. Consider changing (2,3) and (5,6) to sliders, as that would be consistent with the loudest drum having a hitcircle, while the lower ones share the same slider. At the same time, the slider will act as an indicator to the accelerated rhythm at this point, since sliders are set and play at the right time as long as you hit them.
4. 00:21:346 (5) - I think this is the only place you use a 3/4 slider, and it feels a bit out of place. Just having it as a regular 1/2 slider works just as well.
5. You'll notice in my replay how I didn't read 00:45:158 (1) - properly. The jump is really sudden and feels out of place for a slow section like this. Consider just placing this inbetween (6) and (2). Alternaively, delete this note and extend (6) to end here.
6. The jump at 00:49:846 (1) - is kind of impossible to read, and it's really awkward. Try splitting the stream by deleting the note at 00:49:377 - (if you listen closely, there is a short break in the drums here). This way you can also arrange this part so that the 5-note stream leading to the slider and lead to it properly without having this awkward jump
7. This note 01:11:783 (5) - should have a new combo. I almost decided to hit it because it's so well into the triangle-jump pattern earlier.
8. 01:28:470 (6) - Well, yes, hitsound this, but drum-hitfinish really doesn't fit here

Nyquill wrote:

Mod request from Sorda
[Easy]
01:16:846 (2) - You're missing a finish on the repeat. oops

[Insane]
00:42:908 (1) - Missing a finish here? yes
00:49:752 (8,1) - I appreciate the notion to create some sort of jump leading into a slider with a finish, but this is the only time in the entire map where anything remotely close to a spaced stream happens. I'd seriously suggest snapping this pattern to the previous stream. everyone seems to be having problems with this stream so, done.
01:24:158 (4,9) - Set the sampleset to normal, but set additions to soft :p. yup
01:26:408 (2) - ^end of this slider. sure :3

CXu wrote:

1. The map plays fine, and it flows well, so nothing much to complain about really. Still, I wish there were a bit more interesting stuff going on, kind of setting this map out as "different" from most other ranked TV size maps. It's pretty hard to be the new creative star though . Anyhow, you say in your description that the patterns follow the video, but I honestly couldn't see that. Maybe it's because I'm playing with 16:9 resolution? i made some parts inspired on the video such as 01:27:533 (1) due to the pink thing rolling around in the video, 00:49:846 (1,2,3) there i made that part according to sesshoumaru slashes.. 01:00:346 (2,3,4,5) made that part like that due to the demons going down.
2. My replay is kinda bad, which is because I was intently focusing on trying to catch where these patterns that follow the video were haha, understandable. :p
   
3. 00:12:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are pretty hard to hit first time around, as the song speeds up at this point. Consider changing (2,3) and (5,6) to sliders, as that would be consistent with the loudest drum having a hitcircle, while the lower ones share the same slider. At the same time, the slider will act as an indicator to the accelerated rhythm at this point, since sliders are set and play at the right time as long as you hit them. agreed!
   
4. 00:21:346 (5) - I think this is the only place you use a 3/4 slider, and it feels a bit out of place. Just having it as a regular 1/2 slider works just as well. uhh i personally like it, i think it fits with the vocals, thats why i used it but.. if other modders suggest me the same i'll change it asap :3
   
5. You'll notice in my replay how I didn't read 00:45:158 (1) - properly. The jump is really sudden and feels out of place for a slow section like this. Consider just placing this inbetween (6) and (2). Alternaively, delete this note and extend (6) to end here. imo it's a very simple and small jump o.o but if other people mention it, like i've said ^ i'll change it. i saw some people playing it and that wasn't a problem. The problem was that stream mentioned below v
   
6. The jump at 00:49:846 (1) - is kind of impossible to read, and it's really awkward. Try splitting the stream by deleting the note at 00:49:377 - (if you listen closely, there is a short break in the drums here). This way you can also arrange this part so that the 5-note stream leading to the slider and lead to it properly without having this awkward jump already fixed this with Nyquill's mod!~
   
7. This note 01:11:783 (5) - should have a new combo. I almost decided to hit it because it's so well into the triangle-jump pattern earlier. hmm you're right. i changed the combos a bit here. hope its better.
   
8. 01:28:470 (6) - Well, yes, hitsound this, but drum-hitfinish really doesn't fit here replaced with hitnormal :3

That's all really. Anyhow, if you're able to come up with something eye-catching, that will make everyone who plays this map remember it, then all the better! The map is fine, but it also lacks the impact necessary to make it stand out from the crowd. Still, good job, and good luck! The problem is that when i made this, i wasn't playing as much as now. now i'm trying to make more unique patterns and fun to play stuff. i've learned some stuff from other people maps! but i'll do my best to improve my mapping skills.

ps. That animeextremist.com thing is weird. If you can, try find a clean version of the opening video ah yeah i know xD im gonna ask somebody to find a good video for me

Tari wrote:

I'd like to request M4M

[General]

1. I swear there a clap that goes well with this song, Give me 1 sec to find it.. Aha, here it is http://puu.sh/2rFFl , Use it if you want. o.o that's the hitnormal hitsound im using already. perhaps you copied the wrong link?

[Easy]

1. 00:04:837 (3) - Whistle here suddenly abrupt your pattern, I don't really understand the reason you put it here, since their no "real" whistle sound in this location , Removing it seems good. okay! i removed it and added whistle to the repeat
2. 00:28:471 (3,4,1) - Doesn't look very clean, because slider note 3 slightly overlaps slider note 1 , To prevent such bad overlapping, I think you should stack slider note 3 start position with the end of slider note 1 position , something like this http://puu.sh/2rF3X looks better. yup, made something very similar.
3. 00:56:971 (2,3) - Something feels wrong about this , I think the rhythm here is slightly off, because there an noticeable empty beat between these two notes causing it to feel a bit empty, maybe add a note at 00:57:346? Hmm theres nothing too much important than a vocal.. mmm i'll consider it, if other modder mentions it i'll add the note. i really like the pause :<
4. 01:00:346 (2) - In previous parts , you added whistles , for example this similar part 00:34:846 (2,3) - you added whistle to the third slider, why not do it here too to keep consistency? oops added
5. 01:08:971 - Same as second suggestion You did it here too, Idk if it was purposely done or not, lol Going further into the map I start to see, but I'm just pointing this out just in case. its purposely done, to make a small pause for beginners
6. 01:14:596 (1) - I think you miss whistle at the repeat, because it sounds little empty without it. ok :3

[Normal]

1. 00:21:908 - Its really strange that you didn't add a note here but you added it to the previous one when there rhythmically the same, its kinda like a seesaw rhythm, tbh, it plays better if you add it here if i do that the pattern will end up being a bit too difficult for a normal. i agree it sounds good, but i prefer to keep things as they are :<
2. 00:22:096 (1) - If you do the above, this new combo needs to go away as well as this note : 00:22:658 (1) - , New combo 00:22:846 (1) - here ^
3. 00:30:721 (1) - I think emphasis wise, you should remove this slider and replace it with two circles, It'll put the emphasis on the 4 vocal hits in this part of the map, and is like the rising action for the upcoming notes.i personaaaaally think it fits more a slider since it fits with the vocals, your point is valid too, but i persnoally prefer my way.
4. 00:42:721 (1) - Slowdown here, This is a good place to slow SV down, didn't slowdown since its a normal diff and i preffered to refrain from doing sv changes
5. 00:57:346 (3) - I believe whistle should be here mm idk why i didnt add whistles.. i probably forgot too.
6. 01:00:346 (1) - Same thing as above
7. 01:09:346 (3) - ^ yeah added whistles
8. 01:08:596 (2,3,4) - Rhythmically awkard again, there a strong vocal beat in the red tick, but oh well, guess you can keep it this way. i think i made this part too easy yea.. i'll consider this
9. 01:18:346 (1) - Super nazi. but move this slightly farther apart. done?

[Insane]

1. 00:35:408 (2) - I think finish here doesn't sound nice, possibly remove it? uhh i like it ;___; will see if other people agree with this, because i really like to emphasise the vocals here
2. 00:32:408 (2) - If you intend to keep the finish above, then you must add a whistle to the start of here i used whistles to follow the guitar calm sound, so i prefer to keep my whistles as they are ;-;
3. 00:39:346 (5) - Please add whistle to start here as well
4. 00:48:346 (4) - ^
5. 01:00:346 (2) - ^
6. 00:57:346 (2) - ^
7. 01:09:346 (2) - ^
8. 01:07:096 (2) - Missed a finish here? didnt add it because i think it sounds way too noisy and exaggerated imo. two finishes for that vocal is fine. :>
9. 00:58:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - Might as well make this symmetrical since its already close enough to being symmetry anyway they are making symmetry! just not at the middle of the screen.
10. 01:16:846 (5) - Put a new combo here because the sliders before are a separate pattern. yes!
11. Awesomeee Insane 8D thank you very much

Great Job on this, <3

1. Slider Tick Rate 2 fits with song much better, try it now!
2. I'd use AudioLeadIn 1500 here, because it feels that 2000 is a bit too much. But it doesn't really matter, tbh.

1. 00:21:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this combo feels too long towards other combos. I'd recommend you to put a New Combo at 00:23:971 (6) or (7), it will keep your comboing a bit more consistent and fit with music.
2. 00:28:846 (5) - same as above. Those two combos are kinda too long. That's why NC here is needed, imo.
3. 00:39:346 (5) - same as above. This time you are placing jumps here, and NC will help us to read them! What's more it fits with vocals/music and looks better here! Try it!
4. 00:43:846 (4) - normally I'm not so picky with New Combos, but this one is kinda neessary. Actual slowdown starts here, and beat here is quite loud, too! that's why Nc here is necessary!
5. 00:53:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I quite like first combo of this pattern, but second part is too fast here, I think. 00:54:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels different from previous patter - that's why I want you to replace 00:54:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with sliders.
   
   example

   note:try to gradually increase distnce spacing here.
   
6. 01:04:846 (1,2,3) - nazi - don't you feel like you should place here a jump? According to your pattern it will fit here quite good! [url=I was thinking about this pattern]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692444[/url]
7. 01:05:971 (5,1,1) - 1/2 stack and then circle with 3/2 rhythm. It may confuse players (they might mistakenly click it too late/too early. Try to Crl+G 01:06:721 (1,2) - it will give you cute flow and easier readable pattern here!
8. 01:07:846 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:04:846 (1,2,3). It's kiai start and vocals are so loud here. This part is begging for jumps!
9. 01:27:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - those circles fit here, but it's too boring for skilled players to "tap" them all. Try to add some sliders (or replace them all with sliders) to make this part a bit more nteresting? just an example
   
   I like that diff, almost nothing to say. Just some suggestions how to improve flow.

1. Why there's no video?
   
   If you don't know how to fix it just copy it

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"sesshoplz.jpg",0,0
   Video,0,"videoplx.avi"

2. Try AR8, I know it may hurt diff spread a bit! AR8 here feels the way better, playfield is not flooded with hitobjects and jumps are easy to read! What's more AR8 fits even with your slider velocity!
3. 00:00:337 (1,2,3) - nazi - I'd recommend you to keep spacing consistent. You have x1.2 between 00:02:087 (4,5,6) - and x1.0 for 00:00:337 (1,2,3) - it feels inconsistent and looks a bit messy :<
4. 00:42:908 (4,1) - nazi - I'd recommend you to fix spacing here. It looks like you will have to fix it manually. Right now it looks like 1/4 note, which can confuse players!
5. 00:53:408 (3,4,6,7,1) - this pattern looks kinda messy, imo. by the way, it's quite hard to read. What if we will try to avoid this overlap? example
6. 01:05:408 (2) - this slider feels weird. Maybe it's because vocals end at 01:05:596 - just try to place a circle at 01:05:408 - and start slider 1/2 later. It feels much better for me.
7. 01:17:783 (3,4,5,6,7) - since this diff is [Hard] streams here are kinda confusing. Try to avoid them? For example, you can replace this stream with a reversed 1/4 slider.
   Note: you've already done similar pattern at 01:25:283 (1) -
8. 01:21:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nazi - in case if you've fixed 00:53:408 (3,4,6,7,1) - fixe this one fo consistency!

1. try to use OD4 to make this diff a bit more interesting/challenging. I feel like it will make players to try harder, and they will like this diff more!
2. 00:30:721 (1,2) - I understand that you're following vocals, but this combo looks the way too short. Can't you find the way to keep combos a bit more consistent?
   
   Nothing else to say, very neat diff!

1. This diff is the easiest, I'd recommend you OD-1 because of BPM changes in this map. It may stress beginners, that's why OD-1 is is required.
2. 01:04:846 (3,1) - 3/2 rhythm here. It fits with music but may confuse beginners. Is here any way to avoid rhythm changes? If yes, please make sure to do it!
   note: it's better if you will follow consistent rhythm in [Easy] diff. So, beginners will be able to relax and enjoy music!
3. 01:31:096 (1) - this note after spinner is unexpected! Beginner won't expect anything after final spinner, s it may stress them too much. I'd recommend you to end spiinner at 01:31:096 - instead!

-Bakari- wrote:

Hey!
someone send me this map because he likes it and wants to see it ranked soon. I totally agree with him Hi! thanks for checking i wonder who is that 'someone' :3

[General]

1. Slider Tick Rate 2 fits with song much better, try it now! Hmmm not bad but I don't like how it sounds at the slow parts of the song. If suggested again, I'll change it. I'm very unsure :p
2. I'd use AudioLeadIn 1500 here, because it feels that 2000 is a bit too much. But it doesn't really matter, tbh. Yes it does! I changed it :<

[Insane]

1. 00:21:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this combo feels too long towards other combos. I'd recommend you to put a New Combo at 00:23:971 (6) or (7), it will keep your comboing a bit more consistent and fit with music. Added to 00:22:096 (1) ~
2. 00:28:846 (5) - same as above. Those two combos are kinda too long. That's why NC here is needed, imo. Alright
3. 00:39:346 (5) - same as above. This time you are placing jumps here, and NC will help us to read them! What's more it fits with vocals/music and looks better here! Try it! Yeah!
4. 00:43:846 (4) - normally I'm not so picky with New Combos, but this one is kinda neessary. Actual slowdown starts here, and beat here is quite loud, too! that's why Nc here is necessary! wow how did a miss this nc? added
5. 00:53:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I quite like first combo of this pattern, but second part is too fast here, I think. 00:54:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels different from previous patter - that's why I want you to replace 00:54:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with sliders.
   
   example

   note:try to gradually increase distnce spacing here. Not bad, but i prefer keeping notes instead of sliders, i feel it more fitting :< but i'll consider your way if more people suggest me to change the pattern
   
6. 01:04:846 (1,2,3) - nazi - don't you feel like you should place here a jump? According to your pattern it will fit here quite good! [url=I was thinking about this pattern]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692444[/url] Not sure ;_____; i really like the flow of this one :<
7. 01:05:971 (5,1,1) - 1/2 stack and then circle with 3/2 rhythm. It may confuse players (they might mistakenly click it too late/too early. Try to Crl+G 01:06:721 (1,2) - it will give you cute flow and easier readable pattern here! Nice eye! didn't notice this possibilty. thanks :3
8. 01:07:846 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:04:846 (1,2,3). It's kiai start and vocals are so loud here. This part is begging for jumps! made a jumpy pattern!
9. 01:27:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - those circles fit here, but it's too boring for skilled players to "tap" them all. Try to add some sliders (or replace them all with sliders) to make this part a bit more nteresting? just an example i made it to fit with the music and the video, you can see that round pink thing which i forgot the name xD floating. I dont understand the screenshot neither :<
   
   I like that diff, almost nothing to say. Just some suggestions how to improve flow. yay!

[Normal]

1. try to use OD4 to make this diff a bit more interesting/challenging. I feel like it will make players to try harder, and they will like this diff more! agreed
2. 00:30:721 (1,2) - I understand that you're following vocals, but this combo looks the way too short. Can't you find the way to keep combos a bit more consistent? removed nc for consistency with 00:34:096 (1,2)
   
   Nothing else to say, very neat diff! o3o!

[Easy]

1. This diff is the easiest, I'd recommend you OD-1 because of BPM changes in this map. It may stress beginners, that's why OD-1 is is required. okay!
2. 01:04:846 (3,1) - 3/2 rhythm here. It fits with music but may confuse beginners. Is here any way to avoid rhythm changes? If yes, please make sure to do it! i cant think of a better way to follow music avoiding this.. hmm i think it is okay. at least the next slider starts at a white tick, it shouldn't be that difficult to read imo o3o
   note: it's better if you will follow consistent rhythm in [Easy] diff. So, beginners will be able to relax and enjoy music! will have it in mind for my next projects~
3. 01:31:096 (1) - this note after spinner is unexpected! Beginner won't expect anything after final spinner, s it may stress them too much. I'd recommend you to end spiinner at 01:31:096 - instead! there's no sound at 01:30:346 ~ 01:31:096 so it would be pointless to extend the spinner like that. let's keep this as it is for now, and check for other people opinoin to see if they agree with this o3o

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Good luck!

Cancel wrote:

M4M!!

General

at 00:19:846 : Start using these hitsounds. (http://puu.sh/2v4qy) once applied, change it on all difficulties with custom 1. I like the custom hitsound but it sounds too loud for such a quiet song. The song has a very calm instrumental, this kind of hitsounds fits much more with a metal/rock song, but thank you anyways!

Easy

01:19:471 (4) - x=72: y=124 Okay. doesn't really change gameplay, but i moved it.

Sorry, but I can't mod insanes. no problem

Good map!! Hope to see it ranked soon Thank you

Good luck

1. Use the same Audio Lead-In on Hard difficulty as well for consistency.

1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.

1. 01:18:346 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 01:31:096 (1) - It would be better if you don't center this note due to the previous hitburst, try to place it like this.
   SPOILER

   

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.

1. 00:56:408 (1,2) - It would be better if you make these two circles into a slider, so the rhythm will be easier to read.
2. 01:29:783 (3,1) - They're too close each other imo, try to move (1) down a bit, like I suggested you on Easy difficulty.

1. 00:07:087 (2,3,4) - I don't like this sudden spacing change, I think it would be better if you space them normally like the rest of the difficulty.
2. 00:19:846 (1,2) - I seriously dislike this overlap, it looks ugly to me.
3. 00:28:846 (1,2) - This small jump feels random and doesn't really make sense, space them normally please.
4. 01:13:846 (3) - There should be a finish at the begin of this slider and not a whistle, to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.
5. 01:19:658 (3) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the music.
6. 01:29:596 (8,9) - Disable the grid snap and stack these sliders better together.

1. 00:13:283 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 00:13:846 (1) - You can remove this new combo from here afterwards.
3. 00:34:846 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.
4. 01:18:252 (6,1) - Even though there's the new combo on (1), this sudden spacing change is really confusing to read at first sight, I highly suggest you to space these notes normally each other.

Andrea wrote:

~S o r d a's Hard~
00:07:087 (2,3,4) - I don't like this sudden spacing change, I think it would be better if you space them normally like the rest of the difficulty.
00:19:846 (1,2) - I seriously dislike this overlap, it looks ugly to me.
00:28:846 (1,2) - This small jump feels random and doesn't really make sense, space them normally please.fixed
01:13:846 (3) - There should be a finish at the begin of this slider and not a whistle, to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.fixed
01:19:658 (3) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the music.fixed
01:29:596 (8,9) - Disable the grid snap and stack these sliders better together.fixed

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Use the same Audio Lead-In on Hard difficulty as well for consistency. Sorda fixed it!

~Easy~

1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.

Uhhhmmm i think it was bakari who told me to decrease it but well i guess ill increase it again, im still not sure nor see any difference.

1. 01:18:346 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change. Yuup
2. 01:31:096 (1) - It would be better if you don't center this note due to the previous hitburst, try to place it like this. done
   SPOILER

   

~Normal~

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings. your point is good but i think it may be a bit too much so i'll better leave it as it is

1. 00:56:408 (1,2) - It would be better if you make these two circles into a slider, so the rhythm will be easier to read. in my opinion it may result more difficult since it would be a slider at a red tick. since most of my sliders are at white tick, i prefer keeping consistency to avoid confusion. o3o
2. 01:29:783 (3,1) - They're too close each other imo, try to move (1) down a bit, like I suggested you on Easy difficulty. done

~Insane~

1. 00:13:283 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change. fine o3o
2. 00:13:846 (1) - You can remove this new combo from here afterwards. agree~
3. 00:34:846 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible. ugh that looks ugly, moved o.o
4. 01:18:252 (6,1) - Even though there's the new combo on (1), this sudden spacing change is really confusing to read at first sight, I highly suggest you to space these notes normally each other. o.o i think you're right. moved.

Hope this can help you, good luck. very helpful :3

Strawberry wrote:

<3 ♥ o3o
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1. the offset on all timing sections should be decrease 6ms imo~ the present sound out and a bit delayed.. Done o3o
2. 00:00:337 - in all diffs, the 40% volume sounds a bit loud for the intro.. i'd prefer to use 30% on this part so the whistles would not be so noisy.. Agree :3

　
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1. 00:08:587 (1) - remove the whistle on that slider since the beat on 00:10:337 sounds need not be stressed.. a bit weird for now.. i like the whistle at the start of the slider :< but instead i removed whistle at the repeat so it doesnt sound too noisy
2. 00:31:465 - i'd like to bring forward the stream 1/4 tick~ sounds better~ :3 http://puu.sh/2xiZv ;___; here i dont agree with you. I think the current way is better because it emphasizes a bit more the vocals, and also the triplet starts at a white tick making it easier to read imo. o3o
3. 00:59:027 (2) - i feel the nc should be set on here rather than the previous slider (1).. (also the same thing at 01:10:465 (1) - these new combos are like that because the singer says in english "go in and try!" and at the other example you mentioned he says "show in the fight" if im not wrong. o3o these are only like that because they follow the vocals :3
4. 01:17:777 (1) - remove nc here and put another one on 01:17:590 (5) for music? sounds like the circle (5) is on the same bar with th following stream. :3 yes :3
5. 01:27:527 - made a tiny adjustment for better shape of the circle~ done *-*
   

   256,356,87527,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   352,344,87715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   428,284,87902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   444,192,88090,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   428,100,88277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   352,40,88465,1,0,1:0:0:0:
   256,28,88652,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   160,40,88840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   84,100,89027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   68,192,89215,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   84,284,89402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   160,344,89590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,356,89777,1,2,0:0:0:0:

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mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Yo! :3. Random bubble check (you know, I'll do that in English)

[General:]

• You are missing the video file in S o r d a's Hard, fix that and be careful on your next update. It is the second time that make the same mistake in this difficulty This has been happening frequently, i think it was Sorda who didn't change it or idk o3o but i guess it's fixed now.
• 00:18:152 (Break) - In all difficulties, I suggest you to move the end of this break till this point. It makes sense because in that point the music pitch change. Yeeep :3

[Easy:]

• 00:12:340 (1,2) - Actually the 1/1 pattern doesn't sound really good to me, in this case the red tick in 00:12:902 need an emphasize. Would be better if you try a rhythm like this one (Plus, I'd add Claps in the reverse and Slider end): wow how didn't i think of this? ;-;

SPOILER

• 00:34:090 (1) - This is a bit nazi, but I can see an overlap between this Slider and the previous Slider (1), and for me looks bad during the gameplay. Try doing something like this (and have a code with the next (1,2,3) re-arranged spacing):yay thank you :3

Screenshoot + Code

444,84,34090,6,0,B|404:40|404:40|356:16,1,110,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,60,34840,2,0,L|140:168,2,165,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,36340,2,0,B|400:128|372:180|372:180|416:208|412:284,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

• 00:37:840 (1) - I'd add a Whistle in the Reverse Slider fine o3o
• 00:55:840 (1,2,3) - This pattern cause a bit of confusion in me, sincerely, I really hoped a Note or some beat in 00:57:340 and other things. Let me re-arrange this for you, the beat changes (I mean red tick and then a white tick) cause confusion in New players, they usually try following a simple 1/1 rhythm in general, and as I said before a Note in the downbeat in 00:57:340 is pretty necessary in my opinion, so try a rhythm like this one: agreed, and done.

SPOILER

• 01:10:840 (1,2) - In this case, remove (2) and add a Repetition in (1), will be easier to read for new players. Btw, in my opinion fits better with the vocals too. nice suggestion, wow i had to rearrange everything here
• 01:23:590 (1) - This Slider sounds really empty, you can maybe add a Whistle in the Reverse Arrow. sure
• 01:27:527 (Spin) - Why don't you try a Normal Sampleset Hitsounds in this Spinner? This drum hitsound is inconsistent with the whole of the map, plus the whistle would be consistent with your Normal diff.waa i liked the drum :< but okay, sounds quite similar anyway

[Normal:]

• 00:02:331 (1) - Such a lot of combo spam in this first section of the map, I'd remove this one
• 00:06:331 (1) - (^) agreed with both ^
• 00:32:402 (x) - In my personal point of view, sounds better if you add a Note here and...
• 00:33:152 (5) - Remove this instead because follow better the Instrumental done.
• 01:19:840 (Spin) - Move this Slider 1/2 back? Follow better the Instrumental and long vocal in my opinion. If you do that, don't forget to make this Spinner 1/2 bigger too. ok o:

[Insane:]

• Settings:
--> OD 8 looks excessive for this difficulty, I'd reduce it by 1 Tick. (OD-1) wow lol i thought i had 7 od. i never use od 8.

• 00:00:331 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - In this section, I'd adjust the Distance Snap in 1.20x, actually the notes look really close and don't fit too much with this AR8. In addition, I wouldn't use jumps/Spacing increases in this 1st section, the music becomes really slow and these kind of thing don't fit at all. I wouldn't do that, i prefer to keep 1,0x so players can recognize the slowdowns in the song. :3 about jumps, i think these fit good since the vocals change a lot from the previous note and 00:02:081 (1) imo. i also did it to make it less boring/monotonous for pro players, you know
• 00:08:581 (Spin) - Move this Spinner 1/4 back because fits better with the music. Remember to make it bigger in 1/4 after to apply that yes
• 00:34:840 (1) - It's me or you are missing a Clap at this Slider end? Because It feels necessary you're right xD
• 00:44:590 (3,1) - Reduce the spacing between these Notes please, it doesn't fit in this slow section of the music reduced a bit
• 00:53:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This kind of pattern, emm.. I don't like it a lot, the flow especially. You have a similar pattern in your 'Suit Up' map and I didn't like either. This is a personal point of view, feel free to ignore that if you feel this pattern works fine to you The guitar sound gives me that feeling of zig-zag jumps, that's why i made it like this :< but i think it plays good! nobody had problems with it o3o
• 01:09:340 (2,3,4,5) - Such an empty pattern (talking about the hitsounding), I'd add some hitsound somewhere to make this pattern more enjoyable it feels empty due to (3). here at 01:09:715 should be a normal-hitnormal sound but (3) is following the vocals, that's why i ignored it. if i add a whistle, it would sound odd since i didn't add any whistles at the rest of the kiai so i think i'll leave it like this.
• 01:29:965 (8) - A Normal samplset hitsounds sounds better at the Slider end, so I'd replace it the whistle for that. In addition, I'd remove the Drum finish from the slider start done

And.. That's all for now .
Nice difficulties in general, but popped due to the inconsistent video file in Hard diff.
Call me back then (in-game game pls, I need to talk some things with you)

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[S o r d a's Hard]

1. 00:08:081 (4) - Remove circle,it's unnecessary.i think need circle not fixed
2. 00:25:652 (8,1) - Switch new combo,looks much better.fixed
3. 00:30:715 (1,2) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.i guess fixed
4. 00:42:902 (4,1) - Bad spacing,looks so confused,stack on 00:42:902 (4) - start point is better.kk next spacing better to me dont poke please
5. 01:07:746 - You should add a note to here,make a stream,it's follow drum.fixed
6. 01:18:246 - Same as above.nope if i add note stream too long

http://puu.sh/2CeTA

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Kei ~ Hi Rika! ><



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Please use original Artist : タッキー&翼 awesome :3

[Insane]

1. 00:50:402 (2,3) - More better rhythm,like this. Yeah!
   

[Normal]

1. 00:19:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - More better rhythm,same as Insane.
   
2. 01:00:340 (1,2,3) - Same as above. All done

[Easy]

1. 01:00:340 (2) - More better rhythm,like this.
   
2. 01:12:340 (2) - Same as above. done too, both

OK ~ That's all ~ I love inuyasha song :3 so do i! a lot :3

Call me back ~