tones of unsnapped notes.. orz
444,84,34090,6,0,B|404:40|404:40|356:16,1,110,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,60,34840,2,0,L|140:168,2,165,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,36340,2,0,B|400:128|372:180|372:180|416:208|412:284,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Very useful, as always! I didn't agree with a couple of things only, but the rest is all changed. Thank you very much~mancusojuanmattos wrote:
Yo! :3. Random bubble check (you know, I'll do that in English)
[General:]
• You are missing the video file in S o r d a's Hard, fix that and be careful on your next update. It is the second time that make the same mistake in this difficulty This has been happening frequently, i think it was Sorda who didn't change it or idk o3o but i guess it's fixed now.
• 00:18:152 (Break) - In all difficulties, I suggest you to move the end of this break till this point. It makes sense because in that point the music pitch change. Yeeep :3
[Easy:]
• 00:12:340 (1,2) - Actually the 1/1 pattern doesn't sound really good to me, in this case the red tick in 00:12:902 need an emphasize. Would be better if you try a rhythm like this one (Plus, I'd add Claps in the reverse and Slider end): wow how didn't i think of this? ;-;
• 00:34:090 (1) - This is a bit nazi, but I can see an overlap between this Slider and the previous Slider (1), and for me looks bad during the gameplay. Try doing something like this (and have a code with the next (1,2,3) re-arranged spacing):yay thank you :3Screenshoot + Code• 00:37:840 (1) - I'd add a Whistle in the Reverse Slider fine o3o444,84,34090,6,0,B|404:40|404:40|356:16,1,110,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,60,34840,2,0,L|140:168,2,165,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,36340,2,0,B|400:128|372:180|372:180|416:208|412:284,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
• 00:55:840 (1,2,3) - This pattern cause a bit of confusion in me, sincerely, I really hoped a Note or some beat in 00:57:340 and other things. Let me re-arrange this for you, the beat changes (I mean red tick and then a white tick) cause confusion in New players, they usually try following a simple 1/1 rhythm in general, and as I said before a Note in the downbeat in 00:57:340 is pretty necessary in my opinion, so try a rhythm like this one: agreed, and done.
• 01:10:840 (1,2) - In this case, remove (2) and add a Repetition in (1), will be easier to read for new players. Btw, in my opinion fits better with the vocals too. nice suggestion, wow i had to rearrange everything here
• 01:23:590 (1) - This Slider sounds really empty, you can maybe add a Whistle in the Reverse Arrow. sure
• 01:27:527 (Spin) - Why don't you try a Normal Sampleset Hitsounds in this Spinner? This drum hitsound is inconsistent with the whole of the map, plus the whistle would be consistent with your Normal diff.waa i liked the drum :< but okay, sounds quite similar anyway
[Normal:]
• 00:02:331 (1) - Such a lot of combo spam in this first section of the map, I'd remove this one
• 00:06:331 (1) - (^) agreed with both ^
• 00:32:402 (x) - In my personal point of view, sounds better if you add a Note here and...
• 00:33:152 (5) - Remove this instead because follow better the Instrumental done.
• 01:19:840 (Spin) - Move this Slider 1/2 back? Follow better the Instrumental and long vocal in my opinion. If you do that, don't forget to make this Spinner 1/2 bigger too. ok o:
[Insane:]
• Settings:
--> OD 8 looks excessive for this difficulty, I'd reduce it by 1 Tick. (OD-1) wow lol i thought i had 7 od. i never use od 8.
• 00:00:331 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - In this section, I'd adjust the Distance Snap in 1.20x, actually the notes look really close and don't fit too much with this AR8. In addition, I wouldn't use jumps/Spacing increases in this 1st section, the music becomes really slow and these kind of thing don't fit at all. I wouldn't do that, i prefer to keep 1,0x so players can recognize the slowdowns in the song. :3 about jumps, i think these fit good since the vocals change a lot from the previous note and 00:02:081 (1) imo. i also did it to make it less boring/monotonous for pro players, you know
• 00:08:581 (Spin) - Move this Spinner 1/4 back because fits better with the music. Remember to make it bigger in 1/4 after to apply that yes
• 00:34:840 (1) - It's me or you are missing a Clap at this Slider end? Because It feels necessary you're right xD
• 00:44:590 (3,1) - Reduce the spacing between these Notes please, it doesn't fit in this slow section of the music reduced a bit
• 00:53:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This kind of pattern, emm.. I don't like it a lot, the flow especially. You have a similar pattern in your 'Suit Up' map and I didn't like either. This is a personal point of view, feel free to ignore that if you feel this pattern works fine to you The guitar sound gives me that feeling of zig-zag jumps, that's why i made it like this :< but i think it plays good! nobody had problems with it o3o
• 01:09:340 (2,3,4,5) - Such an empty pattern (talking about the hitsounding), I'd add some hitsound somewhere to make this pattern more enjoyable it feels empty due to (3). here at 01:09:715 should be a normal-hitnormal sound but (3) is following the vocals, that's why i ignored it. if i add a whistle, it would sound odd since i didn't add any whistles at the rest of the kiai so i think i'll leave it like this.
• 01:29:965 (8) - A Normal samplset hitsounds sounds better at the Slider end, so I'd replace it the whistle for that. In addition, I'd remove the Drum finish from the slider start done
And.. That's all for now .
Nice difficulties in general, but popped due to the inconsistent video file in Hard diff.
Call me back then (in-game game pls, I need to talk some things with you)
Kawayi Rika wrote:
http://puu.sh/2CeTA[S o r d a's Hard]
- 00:08:081 (4) - Remove circle,it's unnecessary.i think need circle not fixed
- 00:25:652 (8,1) - Switch new combo,looks much better.fixed
- 00:30:715 (1,2) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.i guess fixed
- 00:42:902 (4,1) - Bad spacing,looks so confused,stack on 00:42:902 (4) - start point is better.kk next spacing better to me dont poke please
- 01:07:746 - You should add a note to here,make a stream,it's follow drum.fixed
- 01:18:246 - Same as above.nope if i add note stream too long
Thank youuuuuuuu ><!! updated everythingKawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Kei ~ Hi Rika! ><
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions[General]
- Please use original Artist : タッキー&翼 awesome :3
[Insane]
- 00:50:402 (2,3) - More better rhythm,like this. Yeah!
[Normal]
- 00:19:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - More better rhythm,same as Insane.
- 01:00:340 (1,2,3) - Same as above. All done
[Easy]
- 01:00:340 (2) - More better rhythm,like this.
- 01:12:340 (2) - Same as above. done too, both
OK ~ That's all ~ I love inuyasha song :3 so do i! a lot :3
Call me back ~
I'm not pro ;_;Sieg wrote:
so pro, congrats
<3Snepif wrote:
grats sugar <3
Muchas gracias! espero que rankees el tuyo pronto tambienZexion_Vi wrote:
Felicidades Kei, no esperaba menos de este gran mapa