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call me back.
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- the offset on all timing sections should be decrease 6ms imo~ the present sound out and a bit delayed..
- 00:00:337 - in all diffs, the 40% volume sounds a bit loud for the intro.. i'd prefer to use 30% on this part so the whistles would not be so noisy..
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- 00:01:087 (3) - rotate the slider -30° for a much better flow? (also make spacing adjustments on following notes. :3
- 00:31:564 (4) - remove this circle? sounds needless for me..
- 00:42:908 (4) - how about moving the anchor on that tail onto x.120 y.72 so that the long slider would be on the same line with the previous circle (2). looks better imo.
- 00:48:346 (4) - move to x.0 y.308 would be looks more artistic.
- 00:56:971 (5,6) - try this arrangement. (yea don't forget to adjust the spacings on next sliders. http://puu.sh/2xjgo
- 01:21:346 - could be more saponaceous.. http://puu.sh/2xjkM
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204,348,81533,1,0,1:0:0:0:
120,344,81721,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,300,81908,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,316,82096,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,296,82283,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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- 00:08:587 (1) - remove the whistle on that slider since the beat on 00:10:337 sounds need not be stressed.. a bit weird for now..
- 00:31:465 - i'd like to bring forward the stream 1/4 tick~ sounds better~ :3 http://puu.sh/2xiZv
- 00:59:027 (2) - i feel the nc should be set on here rather than the previous slider (1).. (also the same thing at 01:10:465 (1) -
- 01:17:777 (1) - remove nc here and put another one on 01:17:590 (5) for music? sounds like the circle (5) is on the same bar with th following stream. :3
- 01:27:527 - made a tiny adjustment for better shape of the circle~
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428,284,87902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,88090,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,100,88277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,88465,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,28,88652,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,40,88840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,100,89027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,192,89215,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,284,89402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,344,89590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,89777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
call me back.