1. Easy (1.94 stars, 78 notes)
2. Hard (4.82 stars, 187 notes)
3. Normal (3.14 stars, 103 notes)
4. Sakurasou (5 stars, 289 notes)
5. Tari's Kichigai (4.97 stars, 181 notes)

Skin by sherrie__fay (Not the spinner, that I made)
Right now I'm asking sherrie if i can use her skin... (I hope by crediting her I don't get a kick in the butt )
Insane by Tari - Thank you so much!

3/9: Went on a rampage since i accidentally deleted the BG's, but fixed.

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~

M4M

> General <

--- Wrong offset. In my idea, 1990 is better than your current offset. If you used this, make sure all your diff use same offset.

1. really need fix spacing and beat snap divisor like happened previous diff's

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Anyway, nice skin~

1. 00:33:729(1)avoid use slider like this in a easy diff
2. 00:36:772(1)use default soft-whistle here?
3. 00:38:511(3)^
4. 00:40:250(1)^
5. 00:43:729(1)^
6. 00:45:468(3)^
7. 00:47:207(5)^
8. 00:41:555(1)remove clap
9. 00:47:750(1)spin can start at 00:47:859
10. 01:01:120 - 01:05:468 just some suggestion
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:05:033(3,1)spacing
2. 00:18:511(1)remove nc
3. 00:19:381(3)nc
4. 00:19:816(1)remove nc
5. 00:19:816(1,2)try this?
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:076(3,4)move finish to circle 4?
7. 00:47:642(1)suggestion
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:48:837(1)slider start at 00:48:729

1. AR+1
2. 00:34:816(6)end in 00:35:250
3. 00:43:076(3)if you want to use this spacing,nc here
4. 00:48:403(4)wrong position？
5. 01:02:859(1)end in 01:03:729
6. 01:15:250(1)end in 01:16:337
7. 01:18:511(1)reduce volume here

1. AR-1?
2. 00:24:598(8)nc
3. 00:25:903(1)remove nc
4. 00:28:076(5)nc
5. 00:57:424 - 01:02:642 too much whistle

yurunneram wrote:

uhhh... I'll mod this tomorrow (I'm having my Sunday here) ==" But u got some big D snap problems and I'll do some grilling when I mod this. I don't if your changes have been made yet though. Have you updated the changes yet? (from the previous mods)

yurunneram wrote:

General
What's with the dark colours? Choose something more lively. At least change the black. And yes. Distancing is really important if you want to get the map ranked. And seeing how much effort you put into it you shouldn't turn back now. If I don't say "Maybe" or a question mark then you should really consider changing it. Especially if its about timing and spacing. Hmm I might as well change the colors to the one's Tari made, it's alot more prettier than mine at least.I was never good at colors... As well with the distancing, I'll probably get on that when i have the time. It's only on the Hard and Sakurasou right?

Easy
01:01:119 (1) - Maybe add one more repeat? Alrighty
01:07:206 - add note? Nope, personally i find it a little difficult for a beginner to play that, maybe if theres another complaint though!
01:07:424 (3) - Distance farther away from previous note Fixed.

Normal
00:02:424 (2) - Resnap Really? Looks snapped to me, I'll make sure.
00:04:706 (2) - Shouldn't be on a blue tick (in the time line) Umm, I'll move it to the white line after it.
00:07:207 (5,6,7) - This part is a bit weird for normal diffs. Try stretching the slider to 00:08:076 and distance the two hitcircles away from each other if not people will think that object 7 is at 00:08:728 or 00:08:510 Fixed.

Hard
00:06:119 (2) - resnap. It has to overlap the previous slider. Meaning distance snapping? I'll get to work on that with hard and sakur.
00:09:598 (6) - ^ ^
00:15:903 (1) - Move further away from the previous note. ^
00:19:163 (5,6) - Closer to the previous slider. ^
00:21:119 (3) - This is a suggestion. Move the slider to start at 00:20:902 and add a note at 00:21:554. Why? because of the way you arranged the notes. it looks like a jump that we see in typical hard difficulties so we would think that it's coming pretty quickly. This is only a suggestion cuz sometimes my instincts are messed up from playing too many screwed up unranked maps. Hmm I think I'll leave it as it is.
00:26:337 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Hey -.- Dun abuse new combo. Dawwww it's to make it look prettier, I had a different response from this saying it's okay since it's beautiful.
00:35:685 (1) - Distance it further from the previous slider. Okie
01:10:685 (7) - uhh... WAY too big a jump... Yeah i thought the same as well, its just that putting a slider next to it would look weird in my opinion. Fixed.

That's all. Sorry if too much. Good luck. I'll star it if it gets better after the changes. It's your choice to star it, I won't force you haha.

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram~

Makyu wrote:

[General]
As far as I know the combo colours in each diff must be the same always, even if the background is differemt Yeah I'm going to change the colors to the one Tari made. It's more beautiful that way.

You need atleast TWO taiko diff if you want this map ranked -> t/92508Dang it, another taiko!? I'll have to make another bad one again haha.

[Insane 2] For this i might ask Tari's permission since I didn't make this one.
00:03:945 (1) - move this note to x56 y332
00:15:684 (8) - Delete this note maybe
00:46:771 (4) - Move this note to x232 y52
01:07:206 (9) - Delete this note maybe

[Insane 1]
00:04:598 (1,2,3) - This notes are too close without aparently reason, please use distance correctly in those notes Fixed.
00:07:859 (3,4,5) - same problem here ^
00:35:903 (2) - delete this note maybe Yeah, it sounds better
00:42:859 (7) - Delete this note maybe ^
00:58:294 (3) - why the whistle in this slider? Oh, nice save. I thought i removed all the whistles in this.
01:13:511 (6) - Delete this note maybe Mmm.. Yeah i agree.

[Hard]
00:20:902 (3) - add a note here Umm. I'll think about it. If i do this, I'll probably have to alter everything due to distance snapping.

[Normal]
00:02:424 (2,3,4) - Try this http://puu.sh/2c6nw Here is the code if you like it Hmm.. Looks nice. I'll try it
00:05:903 (2,3) - same here http://puu.sh/2c6s3 Here is the code if you like it ^
00:08:293 (5,6) - this two notes are better as a slider imo I'll try it.
This mapset is a bit hard for a newbie, some things must me changed, like the things I mention above. Mmm... I'll probably change it if another complaint appears, this is probably the first time I've heard of this.

[Easy]
00:25:033 (2) - I don't get it, why this clap sounds different? Oh no, thats part of the song. The drum of it is mixing with mine haha. I'll probably make it a little louder.
00:47:207 (5) - Move this note to the Y axis, it's pretty :3 Um, I'm hoping that what i moved is the y-axis you're talking about. xD...

Sorry this mod, Im a noob at modding, Im trying to improve my skills :c Nah, its cool. Helped me alot!

I will pot the codes later, sorry xD

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue!

[Easy]
00:19:381 (1) - NC doesn't fit there. It should be here: 00:19:816 (2) - in my opinion. Mmm. It kind of does, I'm just following the piano in the backround, it introduces a new thing.
00:22:859 (1) - Work out this slider a bit more. It could be a more beautiful beatblanket. Fixed... I guess? I just moved it a little closer to the slider.
00:53:511 (1) - You should place this in a different way, it doesn't look beautiful and it somehow overlapped from the previous slider. Fixed.
01:11:555 (1) - This could be a more beautiful beat blanket. Fixed
01:13:729 (2,3,1) - No offense but this is ugly. Change their placing a bit and avoid overlap :/ Yeah I agree, I'm just troubled on what to do for this haha.

[Normal]
00:09:598 (2,4,5,1) - Why you overlap :c Hmm... I might need some suggestions here. Noobie Mapper statement incoming: What do you mean by overlapping?
00:28:946 (3,4,5,1) - They look better this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/641393 Fixed.
00:38:511 (3) - Get the middle square one grid to left and curve is fixed Fixed.

[Hard]
Lots of senseless spacing errors. Yeah... I'm going to have to fix them, but it'll take a while.
00:14:598 (2,3,4,5,6) - Why such random spacing? They are 1/2 beats even though they look like they start 1/1 and change to 1/2. Fix them please. Hmm. I hope i fixed this correctly.
00:16:555 (2,3,4,5) - Fix the distance between those and make up a nice curve. Fixed.
00:26:772 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from those. Hmm, I had a similar suggestion from this, but I'm going to stick with this since its to make the sliders look beautiful.
00:28:511 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from those. ^
00:46:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can make something better out of this :/ I believe so as well, I'm just not sure what. Maybe I'll just make it into sliders or something.
00:48:946 (1) - End this at 00:50:032 - It is not recommended to put a circle right after the spinner end so fast according to the Ranking criteria writted in the osu! wiki. Ah Okay! Gotcha. Nice save.
00:52:207 (5) - That curve needs some work. Okie

[Sakurasou]
-1 HP Drain. That HP Drain is deadly for that song :< Alright.
00:31:337 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing.
00:33:729 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing. Not symmetrical with 00:33:076 (2,3,4) Fiiiiiiiiiiixed.

[Tari's Kichigai]
This is nice o3o I bet Tari would be happy haha.

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Overlapping means that one slider is overlapping another and some times it doesn't look beautiful. What I mean is that sometimes you should "cheat" the distance snap due to avoid this overlapping. When the user can see the slider border clearly it's more enjoyable.

00:26:772 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from those. Hmm, I had a similar suggestion from this, but I'm going to stick with this since its to make
the sliders look beautiful.

This is not recommended and that's all. They do look beautiful but the New combo is meant to "highlight" the change of the rhythm, Lyrics and so on and not to "decorate" the beatmap.

That's the reason why I told you this, even though, you can keep it like this since I'm one at the moment who says that. If you see more Mods in the future saying the same thing it would be nice to change it


No KD

VocaloidTACU wrote:

hi ~~~ VocaloidTACU 입니다 Edit: I was deaf from not hearing the faint finishes, I thank Gloria Guard for making me realize as well as you! Some finishes aren't registered though since having finishes in a few seconds are weird to me.




[Easy]



00:17:642 (1) - Position - > x:316 y:216 (Grid level 4) Ooo, Nice save. Fix.


00:26:337 (1) - try this - > I'll try it. Thanks.

00:36:336 - add in soft whistle sound Ok.
00:40:684 - add in clap (soft C1) Okay

00:44:598 (2) - ^ I see no need with this one.

00:46:337 (4) - ^ ^

00:47:207 (5) - add finish ^

00:50:903 (2) - position - > x:212 y:120(Grid level 4 ) and make symmetry with previous 00:50:033 (1) - Okay

00:51:772 (3) - position - > x:212 y:212(Grid level 4 ) and make symmetry with previous 00:50:903 (2) - ^

00:53:511 (1,2) - try this - > I'm going to leave it like the original, can't make the same beat on yours.

00:58:076 (1,2,3,4) - use Ctrl + H Alrighty.


01:11:555 (1) - add finish in head I originally tried this, but its too weird.

[Normal]


00:04:706 (2) - try this - > Hmm Alright, i always seem to have trouble with the second slider haha.

00:17:642 (4,5) - try this - > Ok

00:33:728 (1) - ^ - > Decided to go to a slider approach, but thanks

00:40:249 (1) - ^ - > Ok

00:45:468 (3) - end point is here - > 00:46:989 - I'll leave it as is.

00:47:207 (4) - add finish No thanks.

01:01:120 (1) - boring ... try this - > It does doesn't it? I'll use this, but i might need ideas.

01:02:641 (1) - remove finish Hmm, idk why it has a finish here

01:04:381 (1) - add finish in head Thanks.


[Hard]



00:05:468 (1) - add finish in head Hmm, I always seem to question a finish here, but ok.

00:06:119 (2) - try this - > Meh, i'll leave it.

00:09:598 (6) - ^ ^

00:22:423 (5) - change this - > I'll leave it as it is.

00:22:532 - add clap =It does.

00:22:858 - add circle No need, since 00:22:423

00:36:989 (2) - add clap in tail I wasn't actually going for the chain of claps, I was just following the music since some cases it has a beat. This is nice though, I'll give it a go.

00:38:729 (6) - ^ ^

00:40:468 (2) - ^ ^

00:44:163 (3) - add clap in head ^

00:45:903 (2) - ^ ^

00:53:729 (8) - New Combo ok

00:58:729 (4) - use Ctrl + G Ok

01:11:555 (1) - add finish in head Ehh, Ill pass. I don't like finishes since they sound really weird if i keep using them. Some specific parts they're okay.

01:12:859 (1,2) - add finish in tail ^

01:15:033 (6) - add finish Ok

01:16:554 - add circle Just extended the spinner, it's not good to have a circle right after a spinner.



[Sakurasou]



00:08:511 (6) - add clap K

00:15:576 (11,12) - remove clap I like the way it is though.

00:22:533 (11,12) - ^ ^

00:35:685 (1) - add finish ^

00:36:772 (3) - ^ ^

00:36:989 (4) - add clap in tail Ok

00:38:729 (4) - ^ Ok

00:42:642 (6) - add finish No

00:43:076 (7) - remove finish No

00:47:207 (4) - remove clap end add finish ^

00:45:903 (4) - add clap Ok

00:46:772 (1) - ^ ^

00:47:642 (2) - ^ ^

00:48:729 (1) - remove finish Alright.

00:50:468 (1) - add finish ^

01:02:641 (9) - ^ No

01:11:337 (1) - add finish in tail ^

01:12:207 (3) - ^ ^

01:13:076 (5) - ^ ^

01:14:163 (3) - add finish ^

01:15:033 (7) - ^ Ok


[Tari's Kichigai]

00:01:880 (4) - remove clap I'll leave it as it is.

00:18:076 (6) - use ctrl + g muuuuuch better Okie

00:19:815 - add clap ^

00:22:641 - remove clap ^

00:25:032 (5) - use ctrl + g Mm, Not needed.

00:35:684 (1) - add finish in head Nah

00:36:771 (1) - ^ Okie

00:47:641 (1) - add clap in head Nah

01:01:989 (4) - use ctrl + g Not needed.

01:11:554 (1) - add finish in head ^

01:12:423 (3) - add finish ^

01:13:293 - ^ ^

01:14:163 (3) - add finish in head ^

01:15:032 (1) - ^ ^



good luck ~~~~

cFiszpan wrote:

From my queue (: Let's Go! I can't move though!

[Easy]
00:33:294 (1) - remove NC to fit song's verse (voice) Alright
00:33:728 (4) - add NC here, where begins new verse ^
01:15:033 (1) - remove NC to fit song's verse (voice) (if this NC is here for coherence with [Hard]'s last spinner and you want keep it, do nothing here (: ) mmm, i'd say i did NC for the change in music.

[Normal]
00:04:815 (2) - move to this red stick, fits better the song Fix
00:05:468 (1) - move to x:208 y:56 for keep spacing safe Hmm, since i did the mod from the previous mod, ima move it somewhere else.
00:05:902 (2) - ^ to x:104 y:56, same reason Ok
00:06:772 (3) - ^ to x:104 y:208, ^ Ok
00:07:207 (4) - move just the 1st dot to x:80 y:312 - for spacing and for keep the blanket with no further adjustements needed Ok

01:10:685 (1) - remove NC? K
01:11:555 (3) - add NC? ^
01:15:033 (1) - remove NC? (if this NC is here for coherence with [Hard]'s last spinner and you want keep it, do nothing here (: ) Same reason as easy.

[Hard]
*nothing to say here (:

[Sakurasou]
*nothing to say here (:

[Tari's Kichigai]
*nothing to say here (:

----------------------------------------

Nice song, nice video (I liked it) ~~ (: nice diffs (: Very good map, nearly perfect^^.

That's it. Let's go to Ranking ^^ Ahaha, Thanks for the compliment, but i feel as if this isn't ready yet, Good post though

Att.

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi Entreal (:3 」_)=3

From my queue m4m

[Easy]

00:05:249 (4,2) overlap
That will interfere with reading the notes,recommended that other place. There shouldn't be any trouble, i replayed this over and over just to make sure.

00:11:554 (4) remove clap and add finish Removed clap, didn't add finish

00:17:206 (1,2,1) specing Fixed by a pixel.

00:30:249 (1) I beat seems a little better.-> http://puu.sh/2f2dx, and slider head add clap Looks good, I'll try it.

00:35:249 (2) very empty feeling.. please hitsound insert. Added Whistle like the others

00:36:771 (1) add finish Mmm.. No need.

00:45:467 (1,2,3,4,5) hmm.. I don't understand about the beat, this part do not have the exact sound.
and simply rather awkward, i want to replace this one. -> http://puu.sh/2f2kX (1) note start 00:44:163
(2) note 00:45:032, (3) note 00:45:902, (4) note 00:46:771, (5) note 00:47:641 Alright, I'll try it.

00:57:641 (4,1) specing Ahh, I forgot about that spacing, since one modder told me to flip the whole combo vertically, I'll change it.

01:01:119 (1) slider head add finish Not needed.

01:07:423 (3) slider head remove clap and one arrow white line add clap, two arrow
red line remove clap Okay.

01:11:554 (1) slider head add finish and slider end add finish Not needed, not really a big fan of finishes.

01:14:380 (2) 3 note interval widening is recommended. -> http://puu.sh/2f256
and slider end add finish Okay. No on the finish.


[Normal]

00:08:293 (5) hmm.. your mistake slider... check please this is slider end 00:08:510 Ohhhh, This is because it starts a new tune but i added a clap before it. Thanks, now i just need to know which one i should use.

00:11:663 (4,5) oh.. 4 slider end score effect hidden 5 slider arrow.. -> http://puu.sh/2f2tZ
Skin inserted, but admitting it was not bad and will not be able to judge Hmm I have no idea how to fix that one, since I use the skin inserted.

00:21:880 (3,4,5,6) The beat is very awkward. I think it is better -> http://puu.sh/2f2C4 Hmm I like mine better, it's not following the vocals i believe.

00:34:489 (1,2) blanket -> http://puu.sh/2f2Gn Nice, fixed.

00:35:249 (3) Easy same Hmm Alrighty.

00:36:771 (1) slider head add finish Not needed.

00:45:032 (2) 1 gird left Ok.

00:47:641 (5) slider head add clap Ok

00:50:032 hmm.. why kiai line here? move please 00:50:467 start kiai time It's to be consistent with the other times, but this i kind of agree with. It rises up at 00:50:467. I guess i'll change the rest.

00:57:641 (1) slider head add finish Not a big fan of finishes, but I'll make a light one.

01:01:119 (1) slider head add finish ^

01:13:293 (2) add finish No.

01:14:163 (4) slider head add finish ^


[Hard]

00:02:641 (1,2) blanket -> http://puu.sh/2f2Ub Fixed

00:07:858 (3,4,5) blanket too -> http://puu.sh/2f2Wf ^

00:13:836 (4,1) specing ^

00:18:076 (2,3) 1 gird left ^

00:32:423 (3,4,5,6) Please enlarge the interval. this is confusing. I don't find this confusing.

00:35:684 (1) add finish Okay.

00:48:402 (1,2,3,4,5) hmm.. this is patter shape, bad shape change please -> http://puu.sh/2f36X Nice Save.

00:50:032 Normal same Fixed

00:54:815 (1) remove slider please change this is beat -> http://puu.sh/2f39C Shortened slider added circle.

00:57:641 (1) slider end add finish Added faint finish.

01:01:119 (2) add finish ^

01:03:728 (1) remove finish Ok

01:04:380 (2) slider head add finish ^

01:09:815 (3) add finish ^

01:10:684 (7) slider head remove clap ^

01:11:554 (1) slider head add finish ^

01:12:423 (3) add finish No

01:13:293 (1) slider end add finish No, having too much finishes in a sitting sounds really weird.

01:14:163 (2) ^ No


[Sakurasou]

00:04:489 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) hmm.. this is patter shape really bad shape you change please
-> http://puu.sh/2f3fD Nice idea, i'll go with it.

00:07:744 (2,3) specing Ok

00:22:423 (10) add clap Okay, but i had an idea since you mentioned this.

00:25:358 (5,6) specing Ok

00:35:684 (1) add finish ^

00:36:771 (3) ^ ^

00:50:032 ^ Normal, Hard same ^

00:57:641 (1) slider end add finish ^

01:00:141 (7,8) specing K

01:01:119 (2) add finish ^

01:09:815 (2) slider end add finish Not needed.

01:11:554 (1) slider end add finish K.

01:12:423 (3) ^ Having finishes around will make it sound weird in my opinion

01:13:293 (5) ^ ^

01:14:163 (3) add finish ^


Good luck

VocaloidTACU wrote:

I suggested finish sound in my modding post

but you didn't almost not fix

....why ? that finish sound is really necessary ( follow back rhythm )

you need more think about the hit sound

neonat wrote:

Some suggestions

Hard

00:35:467 - add a note Following that little sweet jingle here, no need.
00:48:946 (1) - end same place, but start at 00:48:836 Ok.
01:02:858 (1) - ^ ^
01:15:249 (1) - ^ ^


Sakurasou

00:33:837 (2) - remove, triplets doesn't suit well in the part I'll leave it.
Generally there's a lot of triplets, but I feel they don't suit the music behind

Hmm I kind of like triplets, but maybe i'll change them, just don't know what to change em with so...

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, modding from popner's queue O: Sorry for shitty english! No need. Thanks for having time to mod haha.

Easy

00:08:076 (4,5) - Usually, stacks in easy diffs are confusing for newbie players, I suggest you to change it I'll move it down.
00:08:510 (5,1) - Make a blanket with them Since moving the stack, no need.

00:11:554 (4,5) - The same about stack Ok
00:14:163 (1,1) - This overlap is a bit ugly... To be consistent with the other sliders during the vocals, leaving it.
00:22:858 (1,3) - The same, move (3) a bit Not needed.
00:32:858 (3,4) - This stack, you know. I suggest you to put the (4) in 84|80 Moved it to 84|84
00:44:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a better square with these, you should put the notes here:
(1) - move to 192|96
(2) - move to 372|116
(3) - move to 352|296
(4) - move to 172|276
(5) - move to 192|96
This will flow better and it is more nice to see! Fixed.
01:00:684 (4,1) - A blanket? ^

01:02:532 (1) - This spinner is too short. Replace it with a slider, but if you fix, start it on the red tick, in 01:02:641 !! No need.
01:04:380 (1,2) - You can make these better! Fixed.

01:07:423 (3,4) - I don't like how they overlap... It's really ugly Ok
01:08:945 - I'd add a note here Ok
01:14:597 (3) - This is covered by the previous slider, I think it's unrankable. Unfortunately I don't know how to fix it I believe its fixed?
01:15:032 (1) - Please move the final point to 320|236. If you do this, make a pattern like this Fixed.

Normal

00:11:771 (5) - The repeat is partially covered by the previous slider and I think it's unrankable, you should move it like this:

Good idea.
00:35:249 (3,1) - You can make a better blanket with these Ok
00:40:902 (2,3) - They are too near in my opinion, it's hard to read them in a Normal Um.. Kind of fixed?
00:43:728 (1) - This too. I'd make an unique long slider instead of a 3 repeat slider I'd agree, but I'm keeping the flow with the vocals
01:04:380 (1) - Put the final sliderpoint to 361|168 for a perfect simmetry I'm not sure about 361|168, a little out there don't you think? I'm probably interpreting wrong though.
01:11:554 (1) - This is asymmetric, unfortunately I don't know how to fix... I totally agree, I might just fidget around with this one.
01:18:619 - Here you can start a spinner and end it here: 01:23:728 No need.

Hard

00:02:858 (2,4) - Try to use ctrl+g on these sliders Ehh no need.
00:08:076 (4) - Ctrl+g ^
00:11:336 (2) - Spacing error. Move this 1 grid left Ok
00:14:597 (2) - move to 320|228 for a better pattern ^
00:17:206 (5) - 252|128 ^
00:19:380 (6) - 200|80 for a better flow ^
00:32:641 (3,4,5,6) - A pattern like this? (6 is stacked under 3) ^

00:37:858 (4) - Why isn't this curved like others? It also overlaps with two sliders! Ok

00:40:467 (2,4) - Ctrl+g on these sliders Ok, but going to ctr+g on 3rd not 4th.
00:44:597 (4,1) - Overlap... Maybe try to curve (1) like other sliders Ok
00:46:336 (3,5) - Another overlap, this time try to curve (5) Ok
00:53:076 (7) - Try ctrl+g No.
01:08:293 (4,5,6) - I don't like how you stacked these, try to make a triangle or something... Ok

Tari's Kichigai

00:02:967 (4) - Move to 205|81 No need.
00:11:336 (3) - This is a bit ugly... You can surely improve it ^
00:31:554 (4,5) - Please blanket these notes, it would be more funny to play Ok
00:34:380 (3) - Move final sliderpoint to 180|65 to make this perfectly parallel with the following slider ^
01:15:467 (2,3) - They have different spacing. Make the spacing like these 01:15:032 (1,2) Nah, its for the new combo.
01:18:619 - I'd add a longer spinner here (end it in 01:23:728) ^

Sakurasou

00:00:250 (1,2) - These have different spacing compared to 00:00:684 (2,3) - Please fix! Ok
00:03:728 (1) - move to 256|284 for a better flow Ok
00:08:293 (5,6,7,8,9) - You can surely make a better square and then a better pattern. ^
(5) - Put this in 376|176 ^
(6,7,8) - Put these three notes in 308|196
(9) - Put this in 320|272 ^
00:19:597 (1,2,3) - Overlap... ^
00:20:902 (5,6,7) - Another overlap. Put (6) in 256|36. Sometimes you have to ignore spacing in order to make better patterns! ^
00:24:163 (6,1) - Move to 256|120 ^
00:30:902 (3) - This is not symmetrical with the center... I'm not an expert and I don't know how to fix it, sorry I got it.
00:34:815 (4) - Curve this and make a blanket Ok

00:35:684 (1) - I think you should remove whstle from here, it's inaudible Oh what the heck, why is a whistle here.
00:43:728 (2,3,4) - Select the whole pattern and put it two grids down Ok
00:44:815 (2,3,4) - The same, select the whole pattern and put it two grids up! (This is for spacing) ^
01:04:815 (4,7) - Ctrl+g on these sliders ^
01:07:858 (2,3) - Curve the slider and make a blanket ^
01:10:902 (6,7) - Move these 2 or 3 grid down ^
01:11:771 (2,4) - Ctrl+g on these? ^
01:18:619 - Add a final spinner. End it in 01:23:728 Not needed.

Well, I hope this helps. This map needs some work but I'm sure you can do it I'll star it because you starred my map

Verlaren wrote:

Hi~ from Aincrad's modding queue~

General:
Use grid level 3 YUS
You haven't a storyboard. Deselect letterbox during breaks in song setup menu (Song setup --> Storyboarding --> Misc. Toggles)
Oh what the heck! I didn't notice, fix.

Easy:
AR +1 Ok
00:08:510(5) - move to x:184 y:328 Ok
00:11:989(5) - move to x:272 y:88 Nah, it looks strange to me, also due to distance snapping.
00:33:293(4) - move to x:88 y:88 Ok
01:01:119(1) - remove one reverse arrow No need, I'm keeping in flow of the vocals.
01:02:532(1) - unsnapped spinner. Move to 01:02:432 and extend him to 01:03:728 Really? It's unsnapped? Alright, i fixed it.


Normal:
DR +2 These 3 fixed.
AR +1
OD +1
00:03:728(1) - remove new combo I think i'm going to keep this since it introduces a new instrument thing.
00:08:292(5) - unsnapped slider(end). Extend him to 00:08:728 Hmm i believe its fixed, but i once extended it to that, but it just sounds to weird.
00:59:380(1) - remove new combo Ok
01:18:510(1) - All your diffs should end in 01:21:989. So delete pattern in 01:18:510(1) and place there spinner with duration of up to 01:21:989 I kind of wanted it to end when it finishes.
01:18:510(1) - add inherit pint(green line): Sampleset - soft: costum 1, volume: 5% ^


Hard:
00:19:163(5) - place on x:176 y:128 Ok.
00:19:380(6) - place on x:232 y:120 ^
00:33:293(6) - remove this pattern ?
00:43:076(1) - remove new combo Ok
00:48:836(1) - move spinner to one tick forward and reduce to one tick Ok
01:02:206(1) - remove new combo Ok
01:02:749(1) - move spinner to one tick forward and reduce to one tick ^
01:15:032(6) - remove this pattern and place a at this place next pattern; and extend this spinner to one tick Um, I'm going to leave this for the finish.
01:18:510(1) - All your diffs should end in 01:21:989. So delete pattern in 01:18:510(1) and place there spinner with duration of up to 01:21:989
01:18:510(1) - add inherit pint(green line): Sampleset - soft: costum 1, volume: 5% Already stated this in normal.


Sakurasou:
00:22:423(10) - new combo K.
00:33:510(1) - maybe delete this new combo? Removed.
00:33:728(1) - ^ No.
01:10:902(6,7) - place on x:256 y:192 Moved it to y:184.
01:18:510(1) - All your diffs should end in 01:21:989. So delete pattern in 01:18:510(1) and place there spinner with duration of up to 01:21:989
01:18:510(1) - add inherit pint(green line): Sampleset - soft: costum 1, volume: 5% Already Stated.


Tari's Kichigai:
DR +1 Fixed except CS.
CS -1
AR +1

Council to make changes to all of the above. So your map will be easier to read and will take another step on the way to the rank. Thanks very much for the mod.

moonlightleaf wrote:

My friend ~ this is just my opinion , hope can help you~

Look the General first

General

adjusting the note's distance according to "distance-snap" [/color]

keep all the kika the same (length) I might ask you in-game about this since i don't know what kika is...

Easy

00:19:380(1) maybe not new note This is the beginning for the piano thing

00:44:163(1) move to 00:43:728 Ok

00:45:032(2)(3)(4)(5) do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650640 I think i did that

00:55:032(3) end at 00:56:554 I don't think i'm following the vocals with this part

00:57:206(4) delete ^

00:58:076(1)(2)(3)(4) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650652 I think ima keep this

Normal

00:47:641(5) move to 00:47:858 end at Not following vocals

00:51:119(1) move to 00:51:336 ^

00:52:437(2) move to 00:52:641 end at 00:53:076 ^

00:53:510 add note Ok

Hard

00:06:119(2) move to 00:06:336 and reduce a return Fixed

00:09:597(6) move to 00:09:815 and reduce a return ^

00:15:899(1) and 00:16:554(2)(3)(4)(5) exchange Fixed, not sure if it looks good tho

00:22:423(5) delete all return No need, it keeps the beat i believe

00:23:076(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650673 No need

00:24:163 add note ^ following

00:24:815(2) add a return , 00:25:249(3)delete ,00:25:684(1)(2)(3) move to
front white line I like the idea, but i have no way in adjusting it, besides i think mines fine too

00:27:641(4) delete,00:28:076(1) add a return and move to 00:27:858 ^

00:36:554(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650684 This is to keep the difficulty, i think its too easy if i do repeats

00:40:032(1)(2)(3)(4) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650686 ^

00:45:032(5) delete Leaving this to keep the beat

00:45:467(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6) all move to front red line ^

00:48:523(4) delete Following the drums in this part

00:54:163(3)(4)(5) change to slider(3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650695 ^

00:56:554(6) delete , move 00:56:771(7) to here and add a return Ok

01:00:032(3) add a return , delete 01:00:467(4) Keeping the flow

01:08:076(3)(4)(5) do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650704 Ok

BrujoAzul wrote:

From my queue o3o

General

Remove 1/2 sec for music track No idea how to do that but I'll see what i can do

Easy

00:04:597 - I don't like how that slider overlaps another D: Fixed.
00:19:815 - Make that Symetric No need
00:33:728 - Same ^ ^
00:35:249 (2) - Move the start in the same gride where the previous slider ends ^
00:42:423 - Add note? ^
00:51:771 (3,4) - Those sliders aren't the same that 00:50:033 (1,2) Really? It does to me, i even copied it from the same thing
00:56:771 - Add slider? Ok
00:57:641 - Add note? No need
01:11:554 - Simetric It's symmetric in a twisted like kind of look.
Why sometimes you have 5 notes combo and sometimes only 2? Make the combos of 4~5 notes each oneFixed some

Normal

00:03:729 (1) - Make that slider end in 00:04:163 - And add two notes between it and the next slider I believe i'm following that funky sound thing
00:08:293 (5) - Make that slider Straigth Due to overlapping, can't
00:11:772 (5) - Same here Same reason ^
00:34:597 (2) - That slider isn't following the distance snap I'm kind of cheating the distance snap to make a blanket, leaving it.
00:43:510 - Add note? No need.
01:06:337 (4) - Make that slider end in 01:06:771 - I did this to follow vocals, leaving it
01:17:642 (2,3,1) - Don't put that notes under the slider Fixed.
01:18:510 - Transform that note in a slider Leaving it

Sakurasou

00:36:120 (2,3) - Put those notes further for the 1st note This is to be consistent with the other 3 notes.
00:43:076 (7) - Same here Ok
01:18:510 - Spinner?No need.

Uh... I don't find anything else, good luck getting this ranked! o3o

Moway wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]
00:04:598 (4,2) - Get rid of this overlap, makes the second slider quite hard to read. Fixed already.
00:08:076 (4,5) - Unstack these, try to avoid stacking on your easiest difficulty as this can be confusing for new players. ^
00:35:249 (2) - add a clap on the end of this slider No need, i only use clap when the music has a beat (ex: 00:32:858)
00:36:772 (1) - add a finish or a whistle, I think i like the finish better, but this needs some type of beatsound I think. Oh what the heck, why isn't this a whistle?! Fixed.
00:40:250 (1) - I like this slider with a finish on the head No need for a finish.
00:41:989 (2,3) - This rhythm can be a bit too hard for new players. I think a rhythm like this could work well and also keep your polarity nice.
Ok.
00:43:728 - Add a circle here, there is a quite strong beat here so it would fit nicely. Already fixed.
00:47:858 (1) - This spinner both begins too early and also ends too closely to the next circles. Consider replacing this with a long slider that starts at 00:48:076 and ends at 00:49:380. I'm going to leave this
00:50:033 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure how i feel about all of these 1/2 sliders in your easy diff. Maybe replace with 1/1 sliders or something, but consider remapping this part in some way. ^
00:53:511 (1) - If you choose to keep the previous sliders the same, then this part needs to be changed. Having the one repeat 1/2 sliders then suddenly a two repeat one will be something that new players won't be ready for. Fixed.
00:56:771 - Add a circle Already fixed.
00:57:641 - ^, especially for this one since the beat is strong. Fixed.
01:02:532 (1) - I don't like this spinner because it begins on a blue line and is too short and too close to other objects. Delete this and map the section to follow the drum beat. Remember that drum rhythm is usually more simple than the vocal rhythm, so for your easier difficulties it is better to stick with the drum beats. I feel as if this part fits with a spinner, I'll leave it.
01:07:206 - add a circle here, delete 01:07:423 (3) and instead replace with a 1/1 slider at 01:07:641. This will make the rhythm follow the drum beat better, remove that two repeat slider and also fix your polarity. Ok.
01:08:945 - add a circle here. Ok
01:11:554 (1) - I think it would be nice to make this slider symmetrical across the y-axis. Also all of this overlapping is a bit ugly. Here is the solution I came up with, so maybe try something like this. I'll try that


[Normal]
00:03:294 (3,1) - Form a blanket with these Fixed
00:03:729 (1) - remove NC to be consistent with the rest Ok
00:11:772 (5) - This needs to be adjusted, as the repeat is obscured quite greatly. As of now, I'll leave it since i can't think of anything nice to replace it.
00:21:989 (4,5,6) - maybe just replace this with a repeating 1/2 slider instead, that arrangement of circles is kind of odd. These circles are for the beat, if i put a slider i won't be able to create it.
00:29:816 (5) - NC Ok as well as v
00:30:250 (1) - remove NC
00:43:729 (1) - not a fan of this repeating slider, Maybe replace with two 1/2 sliders, one of them repeating once. Ok
00:53:510 (3,2) - very nazi, but maybe dont' have these overlap Can't think of anything here, due to distance snapping on lower diffs.
01:04:381 (1) - make this symmetrical across the y axis Strange, i believe i did.

01:08:511 (6) - NC Okay as well as v
01:08:946 (1) - remove NC

[Hard]
00:06:336 (2) - why's this one a repeating 1/2 :3. Either make it a 1/1 like the others

OR

00:02:859 (2) - replace this with a repeating 1/2 K

00:13:511 (4) - just make this a straight line, looks weird being this little curved nublet Lol, nublet... Fixed
00:25:685 (1,2,3) - stack these on 00:24:163 (6), the spacing here is really large so this will help K
00:27:642 (4,1) - fix this overlap I find this deliberate.
00:34:816 (6) - make this slider symmetrical across the y axis so that this whole pattern will look nice. K.
00:36:337 (4,1) - random jump, fix this I'd say it isn't but, tiny fix.
00:38:294 (5) - NC K
00:40:903 (3) - ctrl +g this I'd go for a ->, <-, <-, -> pattern, same with v
00:41:337 (4) - and this, makes for much better mouse flow, but you'll have to adjust the following pattern
00:41:772 (1) - split this into two 1/2 sliders. plays better, feels better. I agree.
00:43:294 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - decrease the slope of all of these so they can form proper blankets with each other. Fixed?
00:48:510 (4) - maybe NC here Nah
00:48:945 (1) - end spinner 00:50:249 Leaving it.
00:50:467 - add circle here. I think it is much better to have a hit here than just ending a spinner. It is fine on your easier diffs because the quick note after spinner doesn't work for those, but here it fits much better. Ok
00:53:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - arrange the previous objects so that these can be centered on the y axis I'll just leave em alone.
00:56:554 (6) - argh bleh!
00:57:424 (1,2,3,4) - center these on the yaxis, I don't know why you ahve that big jump between 00:56:554 (6,1) - anyway K
01:06:989 (8,3) - fix this overlap When you play it, it doesn't really show the overlap so I'm leaving it.

So I was modding this diff and I was like

"Hmm, something is weird."

And something is weird! Why is the section beginning at 00:36:554 - 1.5x slider velocity while the rest is 1.0x? 1.5x slider velocity makes the overall slider speed 1.50, which is good for a hard diff. That leads me to question why the rest is mapped with 1.00 slider velocity. That feels way too slow for your hard difficulty. I realize I'm basically asking for you to do a remap/readjustment of most of this difficulty, so if you don't want to then you can just look at my modding and take what you will from that. However, I think this difficulty would be much better if the slider velocity was 1.5 for the whole thing.
You know, after like a few days after getting mods from people I kind of realized to myself and said, "hey, why the heck is Hard and Sakurasou so slow if they're in difficult difficulties, it doesn't make sense. Sadly it was too late for me too fix these changes knowing that these mods have been put into place and i was like CRAP. I then thought to myself an excuse and simply said fun, not frustration. I agree with you fully, but me realizing this so late in the ball game makes me cringed to think i might have to remap everything, and I simply die inside. If i only realized it sooner though, I would've remapped it. All i can say is fun, not difficulty. If they want difficulty, they can do Doubletime Hard or something like that haha. Though I'm making a different map as we speak, so maybe I'll make the sv faster in that one, should tell me so i can remember xD


[Sakurasou]

Not going to do a full mod of this difficulty, I just have to say that is really weird that the non kiai parts are mapped with tiny babby sliders. This is supposed to be the hardest difficulty of the mapset, which makes it weird that a large part of the song is mapped with 1.20 sliders. The kiai is mapped at 1.80, which is far more reasonable. Should read the last page of hard, I make a speech there


That's all for me here. Good luck!

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[General]
Seems fine.

[Easy]
00:28:076 (3,1) - Please adjust both sliders' shape so they are better blankets. Fixed.

SPOILER

That's it! Nice!

[Normal]
00:08:293 (5) - This slider is a flow breaker. It would have a better flow if... I wish i could change to that, but then i'll probably have to move everything since i tested it.

SPOILER

BUT... that would ruin spacing so if you change that, be sure to fix spacing too.
00:21:989 (4,5,6) - This looks messy: the notes just look like being stuck together., like thrown one onto another. I agree, but i have no idea how to fix this due to distance.
00:45:468 (3,4,5) - This would also flow better when... Fixed.

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:36:337 (4,1) - Spacing issue, doesn't look appealing. Fixed.

This is it?

[Sakurasou]
Just some little things, but still pretty solid!

[Tari's Kichigai]
Perfect!

Good luck!!

Thanks for teh modz!

Tari wrote:

Remove your name "Entreal" and TV Size from tags please....

Tari wrote:

Reminder : Don't add tags that are already in either the artist, source or , song name

selova wrote:

hi, from lova que~ mod~~ WAI HELLOW THARE. Haha.
follow what you want...

easy
well spinner at 01:02 a little bit short but still catchable for newbie.. I don't like having sliders right near sliders in easy by the tick marks, leaving it.
already nice...

normal
did you really do random DS here... better to have a consistent DS in normal

00:03:293 (3) - make this 1.20 DS and also move (4) Ahh little mistake i made there, thanks.
00:08:293 (5) - better to follow Quiz-chan Same reply.
00:09:597 (2) - your DS too high I believe fixed.
00:10:684 (4,5) - meybe this could help Nice idea, using it.

SPOILER

hard

01:03:945 - end spinner at red tick, like you do from previous spinner No need.

sakurasou

00:28:510 (2) - move higher to have a good flow you can move to y:36 on grid Sure.

tari's

00:22:423 (2) - move 2 grid up Ok.

well, hard diff kinda weird with the jumps and DS n SV... be sure to adjust some spacing...
good luck... I tend to ignore distance spacing when it comes to Hard and Insane if thats what your implying.

captin1 wrote:

heey, from queue WAI HELLO THAR.

mostly nazi suggestions

General

00:12:423 (1) - from this point on I would decrease hitsound volume just a touch, the snare hits stick out a bit much and the music is much softer Hmm i would like to, but where do i end that? During the chorus? I'll fix once you respond to this.

Easy
00:18:510 (4,1) - x:252 y:156, slightly better blanket imo then adjust (1) for spacing Oh, thanks! I thought i fixed this.
00:26:010 (2,3,1) - spacing Fixed as well as below.
01:08:945 (2,1,2) - spacing
01:13:728 (1,2) - spacing

Normal

Can't think of anything, nice diff! Thank yah. Haha

Hard

01:10:684 (7,1) - I would increase the space between these, so it reflects the pause a bit better Moved a bit.

Sakurasou

00:01:119 (3) - curve this slider to the right so it leads into the stream a bit better K.
01:04:163 (2) - remove this note for effect Okie.

Tari's Kichigai

00:01:989 (1) - any reason this isn't in the same line as the notes before it? I think moving it over a bit would work Okay.
00:42:858 (7) - remove this note for effect Ok.

very solid maps! good luck!

Thanks guys! Note: Tari allowed me to mod her stooof.

captin1 wrote:

Yeah the volume in the chorus is fine, so the decrease until then would work well

popner wrote:

From my queue.

Let's see what I can help you.

Hmm..seems that it is your first map. The guest diff is good, and I give a normal mod for it. The diffs made by your self need some more works, a mod can help little in improving it so I will give you general suggestions.

Look at the composition, ctrl+a and you will see this:

SPOILER

That means, your pattern are cruising around the screen center and no notes are put on the side. This causes some problem. First, you have no enough space to arrange your notes and sliders, thus they need to overlap on each other, and the composition looks not neat and clear; Second, when others play your map, they will have a terrible feeling that the moving is bound up. So the suggestion is, to re-arrange the patterns to make a better composition. The guest diff has done a good job on this, so you can learn from it.

Same suggestion applied to all your own diffs.






And this is mod for guest diff. Fixed the Ctrl+A thingy you suggested, but i probably need mods again haha...

[Tari's Kichigai]
00:20:902 (3,6) - make blanket between them? like:

SPOILER

00:46:989 (5) - I know you want to follow the piano at 00:47:206 (6), but, the vocal is not ended here. I think you can add a reverse to this slider, so both the piano and vocal are considered.
00:46:989 (5,1) - make the two sliders parallel? Now from what I see, they are dragged randomly and looks not neat.
01:03:945 (1,2,3) - spacing issue
01:04:380 (3,4,5) - maybe a pattern like this can be better? Look:

SPOILER

The diff is good.

blackabyss wrote:

hi~ from popner's special rules queue

[General]

1. (AIBat Check) Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
   - [Easy] : 0 Fixed as well as below!
   - [Hard] : 1
   - [Normal] : 1
   - [Sakurasou] : 1
   - [Tari's Kichigai] : 1

[Easy]

1. 00:33:728 - a bit nazi, isn't symmetrical. turn like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656022 K
   

   45,186,33728,6,0,P|-15:295|48:331,1,225,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   100,259,35249,2,0,L|324:259,1,225,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   400,209,36772,5,2,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:14:163 - a bit nazi, maybe like this more beautiful https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656033 I'll leave it
   

   207,285,14163,2,0,P|151:221|207:157,1,180
   219,69,15468,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:13:728 - i think it's more better to add soft-whistle on head and tail K

[Normal]

1. (AIBat Check) Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: The heck?! They are snapped.
   00:04:273 - snap to 00:04:271
   00:07:751 - snap to 00:07:749
   00:20:795 - snap to 00:20:793
2. 00:26:336 - i seem not agree with this kind reverse in normal diff. change like this maybe? and add circle here 00:27:641 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656047 I'll try it, though your I'll alter a little bit since your way overlaps the previous note thingy
3. 00:40:249 (1,2,3) - imo, this a bit overlap re-arrange to beutiful pattern please. or try like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656054
   Meh, i'll change it to be at least non overlapping.

   216,72,40249,6,0,P|256:88|280:144,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   332,136,40902,2,0,P|400:156|372:208,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:45:032 (2) - move this note to x:283 y:134, look better anyway Moved a little bit
5. 00:47:206 - i think this way is more playable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656061 Ok
   

   121,252,47207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   200,325,47641,2,0,P|280:341|352:261,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 01:07:423 - this kind reverse on normal ;; imo a bit difficult. why not try to change that like this? http://puu.sh/2ivtD Meh, I'll leave it.
7. 01:13:293 (2,3,4) - add soft-whistle, seems fit with bg music. and for 4 just put it on head. Ok

[Hard]

• this diff is more nice :3

1. 01:12:858 (1,2) - add soft-whistle on the tail

Thanks, and okay.

[Tari's Kichigai]

1. 00:33:945 - imo, this one should be symmetric like this: http://puu.sh/2ivUx
2. 00:45:467- a bit nazi here, imo this one look better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656083
   

   336,228,45467,6,0,L|335:121,1,90
   420,80,45902,2,0,L|520:80,2,90
   336,40,46554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   252,84,46771,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:05:032 (4) - it's more better to move this one to x:508 y:208
4. 01:10:249 (9) - move to x:136 y:144
5. 01:13:728 (1,2) - adding soft-whistle?
6. 01:14:163 (3,4) - ^ but only on the head

[Sakurasou]

1. 00:16:771 - this slider imo look a bit strange. why not use this one? http://puu.sh/2iwkH So i fiddled around with it but i'm not sure if its good looking...
   

   40,328,16771,2,0,B|0:268|40:156|40:156|16:116|40:56,1,270

2. i think in this diff is much triplet eue

Daww i love triplet notes though!

sorry for being nazi modder ;; cause your rhythm is almost perfect, just try to do more nicer pattern.
nice map, here stars for yaa owo/

Thanks for modding

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue!

EASY

00:33:728 (1) - this slider is a bit out of the screen when playing just move it a bit on the right Fixed.

NORMAL

00:21:989 (4,5,6) - why don't make a perfect tryangle? just a suggestion u.u Tried it, but i hope its what you're saying.
00:31:120 (3) - one grid up, if you want to allign whit the previous slider Ok

HARD
00:25:902 (2) - I know sometimes in hard you could change spacing, but maybe in this point it's better to give the right spacing to this note, just move it a bit upper, it would be more readable in my opinion K, moved it a bit up
00:36:554 (5) - maybe it's better to fix spacing here... (I fail it everytime D:) Fixed.
00:43:076 (4) - also here spacing K.
00:54:815 (1) - maybe four reverse are a bit confusing (maybe) No need.
01:08:728 (4,5,1) - you made a triplet only in this part of the song, maybe it's better delete it. and also start the NC here 01:08:728 (4) -
maybe check in all the diff the points where spacing is a bit confusing. in some parts is ok because there is a symmetry and a good reason to change it but sometimes maybe it's a bit confusing for me... anyway it's your decision if change it or not u.u I'd best leave it, since its following the vocals but a did a NC.

nothing in Tari's Kichigai diff (this is really good) and I really suck at insane so it's better to leave it to someone else for it's mod u.u
anyway really good map and song! good luck for ranking! Thanks for the mod!

1. Most of the finish suggestions I gave most likely fit with lower volume as you've been using on most of them
2. Here's a video without audio to save some space http://puu.sh/2lg5s
3. The unicode title on Tari's Kichigai is a bit different from the other difficulties. Looks like you're not using the same type of ~ in it (~ & 〜 )

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Remove a repeat from 01:01:119 (1) - then move the spinner so it starts 1/2 after the slider, but it should still end where I suggested before (01:03:510 - )

popcap990 wrote:

T_T i can't open this beatmap with my mac osu pls repair it.