1. Easy (1.94 stars, 78 notes)
2. Hard (4.82 stars, 187 notes)
3. Normal (3.14 stars, 103 notes)
4. Sakurasou (5 stars, 289 notes)
5. Tari's Kichigai (4.97 stars, 181 notes)

Skin by sherrie__fay (Not the spinner, that I made)
Right now I'm asking sherrie if i can use her skin... (I hope by crediting her I don't get a kick in the butt )
Insane by Tari - Thank you so much!

3/9: Went on a rampage since i accidentally deleted the BG's, but fixed.

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~

M4M

> General <

--- Wrong offset. In my idea, 1990 is better than your current offset. If you used this, make sure all your diff use same offset.

1. really need fix spacing and beat snap divisor like happened previous diff's

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Anyway, nice skin~

1. 00:33:729(1)avoid use slider like this in a easy diff
2. 00:36:772(1)use default soft-whistle here?
3. 00:38:511(3)^
4. 00:40:250(1)^
5. 00:43:729(1)^
6. 00:45:468(3)^
7. 00:47:207(5)^
8. 00:41:555(1)remove clap
9. 00:47:750(1)spin can start at 00:47:859
10. 01:01:120 - 01:05:468 just some suggestion
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:05:033(3,1)spacing
2. 00:18:511(1)remove nc
3. 00:19:381(3)nc
4. 00:19:816(1)remove nc
5. 00:19:816(1,2)try this?
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:076(3,4)move finish to circle 4?
7. 00:47:642(1)suggestion
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:48:837(1)slider start at 00:48:729

1. AR+1
2. 00:34:816(6)end in 00:35:250
3. 00:43:076(3)if you want to use this spacing,nc here
4. 00:48:403(4)wrong position？
5. 01:02:859(1)end in 01:03:729
6. 01:15:250(1)end in 01:16:337
7. 01:18:511(1)reduce volume here

1. AR-1?
2. 00:24:598(8)nc
3. 00:25:903(1)remove nc
4. 00:28:076(5)nc
5. 00:57:424 - 01:02:642 too much whistle

yurunneram wrote:

uhhh... I'll mod this tomorrow (I'm having my Sunday here) ==" But u got some big D snap problems and I'll do some grilling when I mod this. I don't if your changes have been made yet though. Have you updated the changes yet? (from the previous mods)

yurunneram wrote:

General
What's with the dark colours? Choose something more lively. At least change the black. And yes. Distancing is really important if you want to get the map ranked. And seeing how much effort you put into it you shouldn't turn back now. If I don't say "Maybe" or a question mark then you should really consider changing it. Especially if its about timing and spacing. Hmm I might as well change the colors to the one's Tari made, it's alot more prettier than mine at least.I was never good at colors... As well with the distancing, I'll probably get on that when i have the time. It's only on the Hard and Sakurasou right?

Easy
01:01:119 (1) - Maybe add one more repeat? Alrighty
01:07:206 - add note? Nope, personally i find it a little difficult for a beginner to play that, maybe if theres another complaint though!
01:07:424 (3) - Distance farther away from previous note Fixed.

Normal
00:02:424 (2) - Resnap Really? Looks snapped to me, I'll make sure.
00:04:706 (2) - Shouldn't be on a blue tick (in the time line) Umm, I'll move it to the white line after it.
00:07:207 (5,6,7) - This part is a bit weird for normal diffs. Try stretching the slider to 00:08:076 and distance the two hitcircles away from each other if not people will think that object 7 is at 00:08:728 or 00:08:510 Fixed.

Hard
00:06:119 (2) - resnap. It has to overlap the previous slider. Meaning distance snapping? I'll get to work on that with hard and sakur.
00:09:598 (6) - ^ ^
00:15:903 (1) - Move further away from the previous note. ^
00:19:163 (5,6) - Closer to the previous slider. ^
00:21:119 (3) - This is a suggestion. Move the slider to start at 00:20:902 and add a note at 00:21:554. Why? because of the way you arranged the notes. it looks like a jump that we see in typical hard difficulties so we would think that it's coming pretty quickly. This is only a suggestion cuz sometimes my instincts are messed up from playing too many screwed up unranked maps. Hmm I think I'll leave it as it is.
00:26:337 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Hey -.- Dun abuse new combo. Dawwww it's to make it look prettier, I had a different response from this saying it's okay since it's beautiful.
00:35:685 (1) - Distance it further from the previous slider. Okie
01:10:685 (7) - uhh... WAY too big a jump... Yeah i thought the same as well, its just that putting a slider next to it would look weird in my opinion. Fixed.

That's all. Sorry if too much. Good luck. I'll star it if it gets better after the changes. It's your choice to star it, I won't force you haha.

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram~

Makyu wrote:

[General]
As far as I know the combo colours in each diff must be the same always, even if the background is differemt Yeah I'm going to change the colors to the one Tari made. It's more beautiful that way.

You need atleast TWO taiko diff if you want this map ranked -> t/92508Dang it, another taiko!? I'll have to make another bad one again haha.

[Insane 2] For this i might ask Tari's permission since I didn't make this one.
00:03:945 (1) - move this note to x56 y332
00:15:684 (8) - Delete this note maybe
00:46:771 (4) - Move this note to x232 y52
01:07:206 (9) - Delete this note maybe

[Insane 1]
00:04:598 (1,2,3) - This notes are too close without aparently reason, please use distance correctly in those notes Fixed.
00:07:859 (3,4,5) - same problem here ^
00:35:903 (2) - delete this note maybe Yeah, it sounds better
00:42:859 (7) - Delete this note maybe ^
00:58:294 (3) - why the whistle in this slider? Oh, nice save. I thought i removed all the whistles in this.
01:13:511 (6) - Delete this note maybe Mmm.. Yeah i agree.

[Hard]
00:20:902 (3) - add a note here Umm. I'll think about it. If i do this, I'll probably have to alter everything due to distance snapping.

[Normal]
00:02:424 (2,3,4) - Try this http://puu.sh/2c6nw Here is the code if you like it Hmm.. Looks nice. I'll try it
00:05:903 (2,3) - same here http://puu.sh/2c6s3 Here is the code if you like it ^
00:08:293 (5,6) - this two notes are better as a slider imo I'll try it.
This mapset is a bit hard for a newbie, some things must me changed, like the things I mention above. Mmm... I'll probably change it if another complaint appears, this is probably the first time I've heard of this.

[Easy]
00:25:033 (2) - I don't get it, why this clap sounds different? Oh no, thats part of the song. The drum of it is mixing with mine haha. I'll probably make it a little louder.
00:47:207 (5) - Move this note to the Y axis, it's pretty :3 Um, I'm hoping that what i moved is the y-axis you're talking about. xD...

Sorry this mod, Im a noob at modding, Im trying to improve my skills :c Nah, its cool. Helped me alot!

I will pot the codes later, sorry xD

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue!

[Easy]
00:19:381 (1) - NC doesn't fit there. It should be here: 00:19:816 (2) - in my opinion. Mmm. It kind of does, I'm just following the piano in the backround, it introduces a new thing.
00:22:859 (1) - Work out this slider a bit more. It could be a more beautiful beatblanket. Fixed... I guess? I just moved it a little closer to the slider.
00:53:511 (1) - You should place this in a different way, it doesn't look beautiful and it somehow overlapped from the previous slider. Fixed.
01:11:555 (1) - This could be a more beautiful beat blanket. Fixed
01:13:729 (2,3,1) - No offense but this is ugly. Change their placing a bit and avoid overlap :/ Yeah I agree, I'm just troubled on what to do for this haha.

[Normal]
00:09:598 (2,4,5,1) - Why you overlap :c Hmm... I might need some suggestions here. Noobie Mapper statement incoming: What do you mean by overlapping?
00:28:946 (3,4,5,1) - They look better this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/641393 Fixed.
00:38:511 (3) - Get the middle square one grid to left and curve is fixed Fixed.

[Hard]
Lots of senseless spacing errors. Yeah... I'm going to have to fix them, but it'll take a while.
00:14:598 (2,3,4,5,6) - Why such random spacing? They are 1/2 beats even though they look like they start 1/1 and change to 1/2. Fix them please. Hmm. I hope i fixed this correctly.
00:16:555 (2,3,4,5) - Fix the distance between those and make up a nice curve. Fixed.
00:26:772 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from those. Hmm, I had a similar suggestion from this, but I'm going to stick with this since its to make the sliders look beautiful.
00:28:511 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from those. ^
00:46:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can make something better out of this :/ I believe so as well, I'm just not sure what. Maybe I'll just make it into sliders or something.
00:48:946 (1) - End this at 00:50:032 - It is not recommended to put a circle right after the spinner end so fast according to the Ranking criteria writted in the osu! wiki. Ah Okay! Gotcha. Nice save.
00:52:207 (5) - That curve needs some work. Okie

[Sakurasou]
-1 HP Drain. That HP Drain is deadly for that song :< Alright.
00:31:337 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing.
00:33:729 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing. Not symmetrical with 00:33:076 (2,3,4) Fiiiiiiiiiiixed.

[Tari's Kichigai]
This is nice o3o I bet Tari would be happy haha.

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Overlapping means that one slider is overlapping another and some times it doesn't look beautiful. What I mean is that sometimes you should "cheat" the distance snap due to avoid this overlapping. When the user can see the slider border clearly it's more enjoyable.

00:26:772 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from those. Hmm, I had a similar suggestion from this, but I'm going to stick with this since its to make
the sliders look beautiful.

This is not recommended and that's all. They do look beautiful but the New combo is meant to "highlight" the change of the rhythm, Lyrics and so on and not to "decorate" the beatmap.

That's the reason why I told you this, even though, you can keep it like this since I'm one at the moment who says that. If you see more Mods in the future saying the same thing it would be nice to change it


No KD

VocaloidTACU wrote:

hi ~~~ VocaloidTACU 입니다 Edit: I was deaf from not hearing the faint finishes, I thank Gloria Guard for making me realize as well as you! Some finishes aren't registered though since having finishes in a few seconds are weird to me.




[Easy]



00:17:642 (1) - Position - > x:316 y:216 (Grid level 4) Ooo, Nice save. Fix.


00:26:337 (1) - try this - > I'll try it. Thanks.

00:36:336 - add in soft whistle sound Ok.
00:40:684 - add in clap (soft C1) Okay

00:44:598 (2) - ^ I see no need with this one.

00:46:337 (4) - ^ ^

00:47:207 (5) - add finish ^

00:50:903 (2) - position - > x:212 y:120(Grid level 4 ) and make symmetry with previous 00:50:033 (1) - Okay

00:51:772 (3) - position - > x:212 y:212(Grid level 4 ) and make symmetry with previous 00:50:903 (2) - ^

00:53:511 (1,2) - try this - > I'm going to leave it like the original, can't make the same beat on yours.

00:58:076 (1,2,3,4) - use Ctrl + H Alrighty.


01:11:555 (1) - add finish in head I originally tried this, but its too weird.

[Normal]


00:04:706 (2) - try this - > Hmm Alright, i always seem to have trouble with the second slider haha.

00:17:642 (4,5) - try this - > Ok

00:33:728 (1) - ^ - > Decided to go to a slider approach, but thanks

00:40:249 (1) - ^ - > Ok

00:45:468 (3) - end point is here - > 00:46:989 - I'll leave it as is.

00:47:207 (4) - add finish No thanks.

01:01:120 (1) - boring ... try this - > It does doesn't it? I'll use this, but i might need ideas.

01:02:641 (1) - remove finish Hmm, idk why it has a finish here

01:04:381 (1) - add finish in head Thanks.


[Hard]



00:05:468 (1) - add finish in head Hmm, I always seem to question a finish here, but ok.

00:06:119 (2) - try this - > Meh, i'll leave it.

00:09:598 (6) - ^ ^

00:22:423 (5) - change this - > I'll leave it as it is.

00:22:532 - add clap =It does.

00:22:858 - add circle No need, since 00:22:423

00:36:989 (2) - add clap in tail I wasn't actually going for the chain of claps, I was just following the music since some cases it has a beat. This is nice though, I'll give it a go.

00:38:729 (6) - ^ ^

00:40:468 (2) - ^ ^

00:44:163 (3) - add clap in head ^

00:45:903 (2) - ^ ^

00:53:729 (8) - New Combo ok

00:58:729 (4) - use Ctrl + G Ok

01:11:555 (1) - add finish in head Ehh, Ill pass. I don't like finishes since they sound really weird if i keep using them. Some specific parts they're okay.

01:12:859 (1,2) - add finish in tail ^

01:15:033 (6) - add finish Ok

01:16:554 - add circle Just extended the spinner, it's not good to have a circle right after a spinner.



[Sakurasou]



00:08:511 (6) - add clap K

00:15:576 (11,12) - remove clap I like the way it is though.

00:22:533 (11,12) - ^ ^

00:35:685 (1) - add finish ^

00:36:772 (3) - ^ ^

00:36:989 (4) - add clap in tail Ok

00:38:729 (4) - ^ Ok

00:42:642 (6) - add finish No

00:43:076 (7) - remove finish No

00:47:207 (4) - remove clap end add finish ^

00:45:903 (4) - add clap Ok

00:46:772 (1) - ^ ^

00:47:642 (2) - ^ ^

00:48:729 (1) - remove finish Alright.

00:50:468 (1) - add finish ^

01:02:641 (9) - ^ No

01:11:337 (1) - add finish in tail ^

01:12:207 (3) - ^ ^

01:13:076 (5) - ^ ^

01:14:163 (3) - add finish ^

01:15:033 (7) - ^ Ok


[Tari's Kichigai]

00:01:880 (4) - remove clap I'll leave it as it is.

00:18:076 (6) - use ctrl + g muuuuuch better Okie

00:19:815 - add clap ^

00:22:641 - remove clap ^

00:25:032 (5) - use ctrl + g Mm, Not needed.

00:35:684 (1) - add finish in head Nah

00:36:771 (1) - ^ Okie

00:47:641 (1) - add clap in head Nah

01:01:989 (4) - use ctrl + g Not needed.

01:11:554 (1) - add finish in head ^

01:12:423 (3) - add finish ^

01:13:293 - ^ ^

01:14:163 (3) - add finish in head ^

01:15:032 (1) - ^ ^



good luck ~~~~

cFiszpan wrote:

From my queue (: Let's Go! I can't move though!

[Easy]
00:33:294 (1) - remove NC to fit song's verse (voice) Alright
00:33:728 (4) - add NC here, where begins new verse ^
01:15:033 (1) - remove NC to fit song's verse (voice) (if this NC is here for coherence with [Hard]'s last spinner and you want keep it, do nothing here (: ) mmm, i'd say i did NC for the change in music.

[Normal]
00:04:815 (2) - move to this red stick, fits better the song Fix
00:05:468 (1) - move to x:208 y:56 for keep spacing safe Hmm, since i did the mod from the previous mod, ima move it somewhere else.
00:05:902 (2) - ^ to x:104 y:56, same reason Ok
00:06:772 (3) - ^ to x:104 y:208, ^ Ok
00:07:207 (4) - move just the 1st dot to x:80 y:312 - for spacing and for keep the blanket with no further adjustements needed Ok

01:10:685 (1) - remove NC? K
01:11:555 (3) - add NC? ^
01:15:033 (1) - remove NC? (if this NC is here for coherence with [Hard]'s last spinner and you want keep it, do nothing here (: ) Same reason as easy.

[Hard]
*nothing to say here (:

[Sakurasou]
*nothing to say here (:

[Tari's Kichigai]
*nothing to say here (:

----------------------------------------

Nice song, nice video (I liked it) ~~ (: nice diffs (: Very good map, nearly perfect^^.

That's it. Let's go to Ranking ^^ Ahaha, Thanks for the compliment, but i feel as if this isn't ready yet, Good post though

Att.

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi Entreal (:3 」_)=3

From my queue m4m

[Easy]

00:05:249 (4,2) overlap
That will interfere with reading the notes,recommended that other place. There shouldn't be any trouble, i replayed this over and over just to make sure.

00:11:554 (4) remove clap and add finish Removed clap, didn't add finish

00:17:206 (1,2,1) specing Fixed by a pixel.

00:30:249 (1) I beat seems a little better.-> http://puu.sh/2f2dx, and slider head add clap Looks good, I'll try it.

00:35:249 (2) very empty feeling.. please hitsound insert. Added Whistle like the others

00:36:771 (1) add finish Mmm.. No need.

00:45:467 (1,2,3,4,5) hmm.. I don't understand about the beat, this part do not have the exact sound.
and simply rather awkward, i want to replace this one. -> http://puu.sh/2f2kX (1) note start 00:44:163
(2) note 00:45:032, (3) note 00:45:902, (4) note 00:46:771, (5) note 00:47:641 Alright, I'll try it.

00:57:641 (4,1) specing Ahh, I forgot about that spacing, since one modder told me to flip the whole combo vertically, I'll change it.

01:01:119 (1) slider head add finish Not needed.

01:07:423 (3) slider head remove clap and one arrow white line add clap, two arrow
red line remove clap Okay.

01:11:554 (1) slider head add finish and slider end add finish Not needed, not really a big fan of finishes.

01:14:380 (2) 3 note interval widening is recommended. -> http://puu.sh/2f256
and slider end add finish Okay. No on the finish.


[Normal]

00:08:293 (5) hmm.. your mistake slider... check please this is slider end 00:08:510 Ohhhh, This is because it starts a new tune but i added a clap before it. Thanks, now i just need to know which one i should use.

00:11:663 (4,5) oh.. 4 slider end score effect hidden 5 slider arrow.. -> http://puu.sh/2f2tZ
Skin inserted, but admitting it was not bad and will not be able to judge Hmm I have no idea how to fix that one, since I use the skin inserted.

00:21:880 (3,4,5,6) The beat is very awkward. I think it is better -> http://puu.sh/2f2C4 Hmm I like mine better, it's not following the vocals i believe.

00:34:489 (1,2) blanket -> http://puu.sh/2f2Gn Nice, fixed.

00:35:249 (3) Easy same Hmm Alrighty.

00:36:771 (1) slider head add finish Not needed.

00:45:032 (2) 1 gird left Ok.

00:47:641 (5) slider head add clap Ok

00:50:032 hmm.. why kiai line here? move please 00:50:467 start kiai time It's to be consistent with the other times, but this i kind of agree with. It rises up at 00:50:467. I guess i'll change the rest.

00:57:641 (1) slider head add finish Not a big fan of finishes, but I'll make a light one.

01:01:119 (1) slider head add finish ^

01:13:293 (2) add finish No.

01:14:163 (4) slider head add finish ^


[Hard]

00:02:641 (1,2) blanket -> http://puu.sh/2f2Ub Fixed

00:07:858 (3,4,5) blanket too -> http://puu.sh/2f2Wf ^

00:13:836 (4,1) specing ^

00:18:076 (2,3) 1 gird left ^

00:32:423 (3,4,5,6) Please enlarge the interval. this is confusing. I don't find this confusing.

00:35:684 (1) add finish Okay.

00:48:402 (1,2,3,4,5) hmm.. this is patter shape, bad shape change please -> http://puu.sh/2f36X Nice Save.

00:50:032 Normal same Fixed

00:54:815 (1) remove slider please change this is beat -> http://puu.sh/2f39C Shortened slider added circle.

00:57:641 (1) slider end add finish Added faint finish.

01:01:119 (2) add finish ^

01:03:728 (1) remove finish Ok

01:04:380 (2) slider head add finish ^

01:09:815 (3) add finish ^

01:10:684 (7) slider head remove clap ^

01:11:554 (1) slider head add finish ^

01:12:423 (3) add finish No

01:13:293 (1) slider end add finish No, having too much finishes in a sitting sounds really weird.

01:14:163 (2) ^ No


[Sakurasou]

00:04:489 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) hmm.. this is patter shape really bad shape you change please
-> http://puu.sh/2f3fD Nice idea, i'll go with it.

00:07:744 (2,3) specing Ok

00:22:423 (10) add clap Okay, but i had an idea since you mentioned this.

00:25:358 (5,6) specing Ok

00:35:684 (1) add finish ^

00:36:771 (3) ^ ^

00:50:032 ^ Normal, Hard same ^

00:57:641 (1) slider end add finish ^

01:00:141 (7,8) specing K

01:01:119 (2) add finish ^

01:09:815 (2) slider end add finish Not needed.

01:11:554 (1) slider end add finish K.

01:12:423 (3) ^ Having finishes around will make it sound weird in my opinion

01:13:293 (5) ^ ^

01:14:163 (3) add finish ^


Good luck

VocaloidTACU wrote:

I suggested finish sound in my modding post

but you didn't almost not fix

....why ? that finish sound is really necessary ( follow back rhythm )

you need more think about the hit sound

neonat wrote:

Some suggestions

Hard

00:35:467 - add a note Following that little sweet jingle here, no need.
00:48:946 (1) - end same place, but start at 00:48:836 Ok.
01:02:858 (1) - ^ ^
01:15:249 (1) - ^ ^


Sakurasou

00:33:837 (2) - remove, triplets doesn't suit well in the part I'll leave it.
Generally there's a lot of triplets, but I feel they don't suit the music behind

Hmm I kind of like triplets, but maybe i'll change them, just don't know what to change em with so...

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, modding from popner's queue O: Sorry for shitty english! No need. Thanks for having time to mod haha.

Easy

00:08:076 (4,5) - Usually, stacks in easy diffs are confusing for newbie players, I suggest you to change it I'll move it down.
00:08:510 (5,1) - Make a blanket with them Since moving the stack, no need.

00:11:554 (4,5) - The same about stack Ok
00:14:163 (1,1) - This overlap is a bit ugly... To be consistent with the other sliders during the vocals, leaving it.
00:22:858 (1,3) - The same, move (3) a bit Not needed.
00:32:858 (3,4) - This stack, you know. I suggest you to put the (4) in 84|80 Moved it to 84|84
00:44:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a better square with these, you should put the notes here:
(1) - move to 192|96
(2) - move to 372|116
(3) - move to 352|296
(4) - move to 172|276
(5) - move to 192|96
This will flow better and it is more nice to see! Fixed.
01:00:684 (4,1) - A blanket? ^

01:02:532 (1) - This spinner is too short. Replace it with a slider, but if you fix, start it on the red tick, in 01:02:641 !! No need.
01:04:380 (1,2) - You can make these better! Fixed.

01:07:423 (3,4) - I don't like how they overlap... It's really ugly Ok
01:08:945 - I'd add a note here Ok
01:14:597 (3) - This is covered by the previous slider, I think it's unrankable. Unfortunately I don't know how to fix it I believe its fixed?
01:15:032 (1) - Please move the final point to 320|236. If you do this, make a pattern like this Fixed.

Normal

00:11:771 (5) - The repeat is partially covered by the previous slider and I think it's unrankable, you should move it like this:

Good idea.
00:35:249 (3,1) - You can make a better blanket with these Ok
00:40:902 (2,3) - They are too near in my opinion, it's hard to read them in a Normal Um.. Kind of fixed?
00:43:728 (1) - This too. I'd make an unique long slider instead of a 3 repeat slider I'd agree, but I'm keeping the flow with the vocals
01:04:380 (1) - Put the final sliderpoint to 361|168 for a perfect simmetry I'm not sure about 361|168, a little out there don't you think? I'm probably interpreting wrong though.
01:11:554 (1) - This is asymmetric, unfortunately I don't know how to fix... I totally agree, I might just fidget around with this one.
01:18:619 - Here you can start a spinner and end it here: 01:23:728 No need.

Hard

00:02:858 (2,4) - Try to use ctrl+g on these sliders Ehh no need.
00:08:076 (4) - Ctrl+g ^
00:11:336 (2) - Spacing error. Move this 1 grid left Ok
00:14:597 (2) - move to 320|228 for a better pattern ^
00:17:206 (5) - 252|128 ^
00:19:380 (6) - 200|80 for a better flow ^
00:32:641 (3,4,5,6) - A pattern like this? (6 is stacked under 3) ^

00:37:858 (4) - Why isn't this curved like others? It also overlaps with two sliders! Ok

00:40:467 (2,4) - Ctrl+g on these sliders Ok, but going to ctr+g on 3rd not 4th.
00:44:597 (4,1) - Overlap... Maybe try to curve (1) like other sliders Ok
00:46:336 (3,5) - Another overlap, this time try to curve (5) Ok
00:53:076 (7) - Try ctrl+g No.
01:08:293 (4,5,6) - I don't like how you stacked these, try to make a triangle or something... Ok

Tari's Kichigai

00:02:967 (4) - Move to 205|81 No need.
00:11:336 (3) - This is a bit ugly... You can surely improve it ^
00:31:554 (4,5) - Please blanket these notes, it would be more funny to play Ok
00:34:380 (3) - Move final sliderpoint to 180|65 to make this perfectly parallel with the following slider ^
01:15:467 (2,3) - They have different spacing. Make the spacing like these 01:15:032 (1,2) Nah, its for the new combo.
01:18:619 - I'd add a longer spinner here (end it in 01:23:728) ^

Sakurasou

00:00:250 (1,2) - These have different spacing compared to 00:00:684 (2,3) - Please fix! Ok
00:03:728 (1) - move to 256|284 for a better flow Ok
00:08:293 (5,6,7,8,9) - You can surely make a better square and then a better pattern. ^
(5) - Put this in 376|176 ^
(6,7,8) - Put these three notes in 308|196
(9) - Put this in 320|272 ^
00:19:597 (1,2,3) - Overlap... ^
00:20:902 (5,6,7) - Another overlap. Put (6) in 256|36. Sometimes you have to ignore spacing in order to make better patterns! ^
00:24:163 (6,1) - Move to 256|120 ^
00:30:902 (3) - This is not symmetrical with the center... I'm not an expert and I don't know how to fix it, sorry I got it.
00:34:815 (4) - Curve this and make a blanket Ok

00:35:684 (1) - I think you should remove whstle from here, it's inaudible Oh what the heck, why is a whistle here.
00:43:728 (2,3,4) - Select the whole pattern and put it two grids down Ok
00:44:815 (2,3,4) - The same, select the whole pattern and put it two grids up! (This is for spacing) ^
01:04:815 (4,7) - Ctrl+g on these sliders ^
01:07:858 (2,3) - Curve the slider and make a blanket ^
01:10:902 (6,7) - Move these 2 or 3 grid down ^
01:11:771 (2,4) - Ctrl+g on these? ^
01:18:619 - Add a final spinner. End it in 01:23:728 Not needed.

Well, I hope this helps. This map needs some work but I'm sure you can do it I'll star it because you starred my map

Verlaren wrote:

Hi~ from Aincrad's modding queue~

General:
Use grid level 3 YUS
You haven't a storyboard. Deselect letterbox during breaks in song setup menu (Song setup --> Storyboarding --> Misc. Toggles)
Oh what the heck! I didn't notice, fix.

Easy:
AR +1 Ok
00:08:510(5) - move to x:184 y:328 Ok
00:11:989(5) - move to x:272 y:88 Nah, it looks strange to me, also due to distance snapping.
00:33:293(4) - move to x:88 y:88 Ok
01:01:119(1) - remove one reverse arrow No need, I'm keeping in flow of the vocals.
01:02:532(1) - unsnapped spinner. Move to 01:02:432 and extend him to 01:03:728 Really? It's unsnapped? Alright, i fixed it.


Normal:
DR +2 These 3 fixed.
AR +1
OD +1
00:03:728(1) - remove new combo I think i'm going to keep this since it introduces a new instrument thing.
00:08:292(5) - unsnapped slider(end). Extend him to 00:08:728 Hmm i believe its fixed, but i once extended it to that, but it just sounds to weird.
00:59:380(1) - remove new combo Ok
01:18:510(1) - All your diffs should end in 01:21:989. So delete pattern in 01:18:510(1) and place there spinner with duration of up to 01:21:989 I kind of wanted it to end when it finishes.
01:18:510(1) - add inherit pint(green line): Sampleset - soft: costum 1, volume: 5% ^


Hard:
00:19:163(5) - place on x:176 y:128 Ok.
00:19:380(6) - place on x:232 y:120 ^
00:33:293(6) - remove this pattern ?
00:43:076(1) - remove new combo Ok
00:48:836(1) - move spinner to one tick forward and reduce to one tick Ok
01:02:206(1) - remove new combo Ok
01:02:749(1) - move spinner to one tick forward and reduce to one tick ^
01:15:032(6) - remove this pattern and place a at this place next pattern; and extend this spinner to one tick Um, I'm going to leave this for the finish.
01:18:510(1) - All your diffs should end in 01:21:989. So delete pattern in 01:18:510(1) and place there spinner with duration of up to 01:21:989
01:18:510(1) - add inherit pint(green line): Sampleset - soft: costum 1, volume: 5% Already stated this in normal.


Sakurasou:
00:22:423(10) - new combo K.
00:33:510(1) - maybe delete this new combo? Removed.
00:33:728(1) - ^ No.
01:10:902(6,7) - place on x:256 y:192 Moved it to y:184.
01:18:510(1) - All your diffs should end in 01:21:989. So delete pattern in 01:18:510(1) and place there spinner with duration of up to 01:21:989
01:18:510(1) - add inherit pint(green line): Sampleset - soft: costum 1, volume: 5% Already Stated.


Tari's Kichigai:
DR +1 Fixed except CS.
CS -1
AR +1

Council to make changes to all of the above. So your map will be easier to read and will take another step on the way to the rank. Thanks very much for the mod.