1. Banana's Hime (5 stars, 427 notes)
2. Easy (1.07 stars, 122 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 553 notes)
4. Kite's Hard (4.89 stars, 436 notes)
5. Normal (3.15 stars, 181 notes)

1. reset掉你的蓝线的书签

1. 滑条太快了 这不是提议 这是硬伤
2. 00:06:371 - 加note
3. 02:25:076 - +break
4. 02:46:429 - 转盘应该这里开始

1. 00:06:371 (1) - 建议叠在(9)的下面
2. 00:58:076 (4) - 不要和(3)摆成一个方向 建议和(1)(2)那样做成相对的
3. 01:02:665 (1) - 建议速度放慢到50% 滑条长度延伸到后面一条红线
4. 01:47:841 (1) - ^
5. 01:36:371 (5,1) - 建议(5)和(1)的开头合并成一个滑条 而把(1)的结尾单独做成note 会和后面衔接顺畅一点
6. 01:37:253 (2) - ctrl+R
7. 01:59:665 (1,2,3,4) - 超不喜欢这样的排列，读图太困难了。按照歌来看这里怎么也应该是x-xxx或者x xxx这样的节奏
8. 02:31:253 (4) - ctrl+R
9. 02:36:194 - 这里应该下节奏的
10. 02:43:076 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里放太保守了 跟着音高尽情跳得再大一点吧
11. 02:46:341 (1) - 这个蓝线起手的转盘是什么路面

Leorda wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
00:22:253 (1) - Too much repeating slider can confuse beginners fix~
00:27:900 (1) - ^ fix~
01:18:723 (1) - Remove new combo? no
01:23:665 (1) - ^ no


[Normal]
00:32:135 (5,1) - Swap new combo? no
02:04:606 (3) - Use N:C1 for tail slider and add whistle at tail slider.... fix~
02:33:547 (5) - New combo? fix~


[Banana's Hard]
* Star Rating = 5.00? Are you serious?


That's all I got, good luck

mint_ong89 wrote:

can i do taiko map .....??

1. Tags加上 "vocaloid2" KDS的diff來的時候記得上Tags啊
2. 刪osb
3. 你的BG是553KB, 然後我好奇的轉了檔變1xxKB ...你要不要用? http://puu.sh/OBGS
4. Video在這裡~ http://puu.sh/OCPm 呃 畫質好差啊我發現- -

1. 00:00:371 (1,2) - 這裡與其擺兩個不如直接上一個長滑條, 像00:03:195 (1) - 這樣.
2. 00:00:724 (2) - 這clap應該下在(1)的位置?
3. 00:03:195 (1) - 跟著下clap
4. 01:02:665 (1) - 考慮上finish?
5. 01:14:488 (1) - 上finish?
6. 01:18:018 (4) - whistle是啥用意- -?
7. 01:41:312 (1) - 你忘了下clap了 第二個折返那裡, 不過你又加了那條綠線就有點別扭...把綠線搬到最後 第二個折返下clap吧

1. 00:24:018 - 為啥有whistle!
2. 00:37:429 (4) - 這個位置有點不太美觀, 268,200試試?
3. 02:39:900 - 應該要下whistle?

1. 說真的沒有很建議Hard比Insane的SV高- -...請先調整 x_x

1. 我找不出來了啦/QAQ\

Flask wrote:

來了~! Request from In-Game PM

天真爛漫... owo

[General]

1. Tags加上 "vocaloid2" KDS的diff來的時候記得上Tags啊 fix~
2. 刪osb
3. 你的BG是553KB, 然後我好奇的轉了檔變1xxKB ...你要不要用? http://puu.sh/OBGS 不變吧~ :3
4. Video在這裡~ http://puu.sh/OCPm 呃 畫質好差啊我發現- - 超過20M了吶~~其實video最後在考慮是否加~~先不急吧

[Easy]

1. 00:00:371 (1,2) - 這裡與其擺兩個不如直接上一個長滑條, 像00:03:195 (1) - 這樣. 保持原樣啦 :3
2. 00:00:724 (2) - 這clap應該下在(1)的位置? fix~
3. 00:03:195 (1) - 跟著下clap fix~
4. 01:02:665 (1) - 考慮上finish? fix~
5. 01:14:488 (1) - 上finish? fix~
6. 01:18:018 (4) - whistle是啥用意- -? :3
7. 01:41:312 (1) - 你忘了下clap了 第二個折返那裡, 不過你又加了那條綠線就有點別扭...把綠線搬到最後 第二個折返下clap吧 fix~

[Normal]

1. 00:24:018 - 為啥有whistle! fix~
2. 00:37:429 (4) - 這個位置有點不太美觀, 268,200試試? fix~
3. 02:39:900 - 應該要下whistle? fix~

[Banana]

1. 說真的沒有很建議Hard比Insane的SV高- -...請先調整 x_x lol

[Insane]

1. 我找不出來了啦/QAQ\

天真爛漫www
現在時間:上午05:04 Baka~都這麼晚了還mod Orz
小米加油~~給你星星!

1. 话说这图我AR8打的比9好
2. 00:01:077 (5) - 没这个note感觉舒服点...
3. 00:02:489 (8) - ^ 感觉就是空了一拍, 硬加上的话不合拍了...
4. 00:03:901 (6) - ^
5. 00:04:607 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 看着怎么那么像香蕉
6. 00:23:665 (4) - 这个音我听着是和下面一组的o.o ... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397095
7. 00:25:782 (3) - 这里这样摆怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397103 最后那个50%速度 四个的话有点挤, 要不分开些
8. 00:37:076 (8) - 慢速的1/1滑条好很多这里, 中间reverse太违和了o.o
9. 00:51:900 (1,2,3,4) - 这个不错>.>
10. 00:59:312 (4) - 柔和点, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397116 下一个也是。。
11. 01:02:135 (3,4) - 这样吧 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397114 因为这里是声音降低的感觉, 间距相应的减小一点比较舒服
12. 01:30:988 - 加个note? 这个音比较明显。。
13. 01:34:253 (1,2) - 这个也柔和点... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397121
14. 01:37:253 (2) - 大概这样的位置。。? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397126 感觉比较好
15. 02:04:165 (4) - 这一段都不错啊
16. 02:18:018 (5) - here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397131
17. 02:41:665 (1) - 加个new combo吧
18. 整体感觉打起来舒服, 音效也不错, 就是细节部分还需要再加强, slider形状什么的其实可以挑一堆。。。
19. 可以去看下NTR的那些图, 虽然都难得不是人打的但是细节上比较出彩, 看起来能有一种美感0.0

1. 为什么滑条速度比I还快...
2. 00:21:018 (2) - delete? 比较难接上...
3. 00:22:782 (4,5) - 往下1grid
4. 00:49:429 (1) - 往左1grid._.
5. 00:58:959 (1,2,3,4) - 太蛋疼了最好别这样...
6. 01:13:782 (1,2,3,4) - 右2grids
7. 01:19:606 (5) - 下面。。。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397158 不想叠的话这里前面调整下 或者
8. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397160
9. 01:44:488 (3,4,6) - ._.整齐点
10. 02:18:547 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397167
11. 02:19:782 (3,4,5) - 太坑... 02:19:606 - 加note叠到(1)吧
12. 总断尾啊._. 话说感觉CTB是不是会很好玩的样子(....

1. slider认真点233
2. 00:06:371 (1) - 间距。。。
3. 00:45:547 (4) - blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397173
4. 01:32:841 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397180
5. 02:05:665 (1,2) - blanket

1. 00:30:723 (2) - ._.
2. 后段new combo好多... 不过还好吧

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~

Banana's Hard

1. 为什么滑条速度比I还快... 咦 我去看看 啊 真的（死
2. 00:21:018 (2) - delete? 比较难接上... 改
3. 00:22:782 (4,5) - 往下1grid 懒
4. 00:49:429 (1) - 往左1grid._. 改
5. 00:58:959 (1,2,3,4) - 太蛋疼了最好别这样... 就是蛋疼才这样的（大雾
6. 01:13:782 (1,2,3,4) - 右2grids 改
7. 01:19:606 (5) - 下面。。。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397158 不想叠的话这里前面调整下 或者
8. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397160 改
9. 01:44:488 (3,4,6) - ._.整齐点 改
10. 02:18:547 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397167 平行不如香蕉（误
11. 02:19:782 (3,4,5) - 太坑... 02:19:606 - 加note叠到(1)吧 巨懒 先看看 还有人提就改
12. 总断尾啊._. 话说感觉CTB是不是会很好玩的样子(.... 喵？

Good luck~

lepidopodus wrote:

Taiko mod, as KDS asked to do so.

[Taiko DS]
00:06:724 ~ 00:12:194 - Really similar with the next 4 measure, if you want to make some variations you can delete 00:07:782 (30) / 00:09:194 (38) / 00:10:605 (46), I guess? ok
00:16:606 (87,88,89,90,91) - Maybe four big notes is better? good
00:19:429 / 00:25:076 - I'm not very sure with emptying here, vocal sounds here and this is the first beat of the measure. I guess you can find better spot to make empty, without vocal sound nor significant beat, ect. ;w; remapped this part
00:22:959 (117) / 00:28:606 (145) - It would be better to spare this kind of short drum roll since you used this a lot later. For other words, make this 'identity' of the next part. hmm.. ok done
00:27:194 - Similar with 00:19:429 / 00:25:076, though not the first beat. But I think it isn't quite right to empty here with such a high pitched vocal sound which can be easily recognized. ^^
00:42:723 (14) / 00:45:547 (30) - Similar reason with 00:22:959 (117) / 00:28:606 (145), you'd better replace this to 'o---oo' kind of pattern. You used 'k--dk' a lot so you can try something else and I think that is enough to differentiate this. ok. d--kd and k--kd
00:59:665 (121) - Consider a note then a drum roll? Maybe a short spinner work, if you want to make this trickier. no c. i think slider is not so bad. in other words, "I have no idea to make this point more nicer D:"
01:02:665 - I usually recommend to end kiai with measure. Extend kiai till 01:03:194? fixed
01:03:194 ~ 01:08:664 - Similar with 00:06:724 ~ 00:12:194. :3
01:19:429 (242) - Just to note, you don't need to replace this even if you followed my advice in 00:22:959 (117) / 00:28:606 (145) since you used totally different patterns this time. changed to 'kkddd' :3
01:44:841 (414) - Similar with 00:59:665 (121). ^^^^
01:48:018 - Similar with 01:02:665. :33
02:22:429 (607,608,609) - These don't sound that nicely. Especially 608 and 609, there isn't any sound corresponding it. Consider removing those two or all three. ok removed all
02:32:842 (38) - Similar with 00:59:665 (121), but maybe you can try a spinner here if you tried drum roll before. ^^^
02:45:723 (122,123) - Maybe big notes does not suit here cause vocal is kinda weak here. I'm not so sure about this though. ok changed to small note.

Seems nice, you did a good job with pranky mood of this map.

wmfchris wrote:

...你和樓上的做同一首 <_<

[Taiko]
- You may need 2 taiko diffs due to the new rules oh, really?! i don't have enough time to make easier diff... orz (cuz my summer vacation ended already)

02:05:488 - this part is slightly different from 02:06:900 - so you might want to hv some variations, like kkd for 02:05, then ddk for 02:06, etc "d ddk d x2/ k ddk d x2/....." it's variable enough IMO
02:15:194 - it's similar to 02:12:371 (569,570) - so I don't think it needs finishes why? there are two accents in that point.
02:23:400 - not recommended to use sldier becoz (1) the vocal doesn't start exactly on the blue tick (2) it gives 1/4 stream which does not fit the long vocal note changed to start on red tick
02:43:606 - as indicated by the music, k d fixed :3
02:46:253 - add a note before the spinner ....note?

The main component of the diff is well made. :3

Makar wrote:

IRC mod for Muzu

SPOILER

11:29 Makar: IRC mod weeeee
11:30 Makar: 02:46:253 - you should use a spinner here, mainly to be consistent with KDS but also because I think it fits
11:30 Xakyrie: alright
11:30 Xakyrie: at first I thought it didn't fit but eh
11:30 Xakyrie: it's not like it completely sticks out horribly
11:31 Makar: o.ob
11:31 Makar: 00:09:547 (1) - I dont reallly think this finish fits... doesn't seem to follow anything
11:32 Makar: 00:12:371 (1) - finish because of new phase; also you use finishes in the leadin to this so it seems anti-climatic to not use a finish here
11:32 Makar: 00:15:194 (1) - remove finish for reason mentioned before
11:35 Makar: 00:51:900 (2) - finish? since its start of kiai and htere is a crash here in the music
11:35 Makar: 00:57:547 (1) - you could add a finish here too if you want
11:36 Makar: 01:03:194 (1) -  and here
11:36 Makar: 01:06:018 (1) - remove finish for reasons mentioned before about removing finishes
11:36 Makar: 01:08:841 (1) - add finish for the same reason as the anti-climatic thing
11:36 Makar: 01:11:664 (1) - remove finish for the reasons mentioned before about the removing finishes
11:38 Makar: 01:25:782 (1) -  you could add a finisher here if you'd like
11:39 Makar: 01:37:076 (1) - finisher here cuz of kiai and crash in music blahblah
11:39 Makar: 01:42:723 (1) - ^
11:39 Makar: 01:48:371 (1) - ^
11:41 Makar: 02:27:900 (1) - ^
11:41 Makar: 02:30:723 (1) - ^
11:41 Xakyrie: what a boss
11:42 Makar: 02:30:723 (1) - ^ + for consistency
11:42 Makar: wut
11:42 Xakyrie: :3
11:42 Makar: Dx
11:42 Makar: dats all
11:42 Makar: :3
11:42 Xakyrie: yaay
11:42 Makar: :D
11:43 Xakyrie: lmao
11:43 Xakyrie: 02:46:253 (3) - can I add a spinner after or does it have start here?
11:43 Xakyrie: I kinda like how it is now
11:44 Makar: I think after would be better but KDS started it there
11:44 Makar: you should probably suggest KDS change his/her part so its like that
11:44 Xakyrie: yeah
11:45 Xakyrie: red tick?
11:45 Xakyrie: or white
11:45 Makar: I'd say red
11:48 Xakyrie: 00:09:547 (1) - fixed this
11:48 Xakyrie: btw replying so I don't have to reply on thread
11:48 Makar: k
11:49 Makar: if you fixed that then you should be sure to fix the other ones where I mentioned them (the remove finishes) so its consistent 
11:50 Xakyrie: lol yes I know
11:50 Xakyrie: 00:12:371 (1) - added finish
11:50 Makar: o.ob
11:50 Xakyrie: 00:15:194 (1) - removed finish woo
11:51 Xakyrie: 00:51:900 (2) - added finish for good reason you had
11:51 Makar: \o\
11:51 Makar:  /o/
11:51 Makar: I should stop replying with pointless emotes
11:51 Makar: lmao
11:51 Xakyrie: 00:57:547 (1) - finish 
11:51 Xakyrie: LOL
11:51 Xakyrie: it's funny
11:51 Makar: \o/
11:51 Xakyrie: keep going
11:52 Xakyrie: \o/
11:53 Xakyrie: 01:03:194 (1) - fixed to finish
11:53 Makar: :D
11:53 Xakyrie: 01:06:018 (1) - removed finish like stated
11:53 Makar: :3
11:54 Xakyrie: 01:08:841 (1) - followed what you said
11:54 Makar: C:
11:54 Xakyrie: 01:11:664 (1) - removed like said
11:54 Makar: O)
11:54 Xakyrie: 01:25:782 (1) - made a finish since it fits
11:54 Makar: o.oc
11:55 Xakyrie: 01:37:076 (1) - ^
11:55 Xakyrie: btw can't see comments
11:55 Xakyrie: lmao
11:55 Makar: what comments
11:55 Makar: xD
11:55 Makar: my emotes o.o?
11:55 Xakyrie: 01:42:723 (1) - added finish since it fits like you said
11:55 Makar: :>
11:55 Xakyrie: 01:48:371 (1) - I don't think it calls for a finisher
11:56 Xakyrie: music gets quiet, even if it's consistent
11:56 Xakyrie: so I disagree
11:56 Makar: k
11:56 Makar: I sorta thought th esame thing
11:56 Makar: but suggested it anyways
11:56 Xakyrie: 02:27:900 (1) - added to be consistent
11:56 Xakyrie: 02:30:723 (1) - same here
11:56 Makar: I just realized I derped on my mod
11:57 Xakyrie: lol where
11:57 Xakyrie: so I took everything but one
11:57 Xakyrie: cool
11:57 Makar: the last suggestion
11:57 Makar: linked to the same thing
11:57 Makar: 02:40:606 (1) - meant to link to this
11:58 Xakyrie: 02:40:606 (1) - fixed
11:58 Xakyrie: k
11:58 Xakyrie: :3
11:58 Xakyrie: thanks a bunch!
11:58 Makar: \o.o/
11:58 Makar: ye
11:58 Makar: posting
11:58 Xakyrie: \o.o/
11:58 Makar: :D
11:58 Xakyrie: k ^^

1. 02:40:606 (1,1,1,1) - 太短了。第二个折返看不到。。。orz 这算unrank？！~
2. 02:46:253 - add note?~然后把spinner往后移一拍？~

1. 00:30:723 (2) - >_>把第一个点往→拉一格>_>然后把最后一个点往下拉一格>_>~

LKs wrote:

[taiko muzukashii]

01:10:604 (1) - Unsnapped circle. I don't even know what happened there.
01:12:016 (1) - Unsnapped circle. ^

LKs wrote:

yo yo?

[Banana's Hime]

这大概是sv有点略快啊170配2.2 然后各种slider放着显得ar不太够用 不过貌似也没什么改动空间了

00:04:077 (3) - 我觉得还行但可能外国固执的xat会提这条 没压上音 放着就是等挑的 所以没动
00:51:547 (1) - 这slider弧线建议修一下 虽然不知道怎么修..但是改了
00:55:782 (4) - 这开头没丢whistle？丢了
01:43:076 (4,5) - 一样的间距 不一样的节奏 02:04:606 (1,2) - 如果是这种也还可以接受但现在你这个就有点坑 改了
02:32:841 (4) - blanket建议调一下 于是就改成不是blanket的了
02:38:488 (1,2) - 这突然转换finish位置有点违和 于是就改过去了

• [Easy]

1. 01:31:429 (3) - NC
2. 01:32:841 (1) - remove NC
3. 01:34:253 (3) - NC
4. 01:45:547 (3) - NC?
5. 02:32:135 (1) - 這個距離是故意的嘛 o.o?

• [Normal]

1. 00:37:782 (1) - 距離
2. 01:44:841 (4) - ^

• [Kite's Hard]
  AR-1? a little high for AR8.

1. 00:10:959 - Useless inherited point
2. 00:12:194 - ^
3. 00:15:900 - ^
4. 02:32:135 (1,2) - All select and move to x:264 y:228? Can make 02:32:665 (2,3,4) - look better.
5. 02:40:076 - Useless inherited point
   
   nothing find
   I like your mapping :>

• [Banana's Hime]

1. 00:04:077 (3) - 這slider感覺拍點特別的突兀 .. 00:04:342 - 這裡也沒有音 跟前面一樣不是很好嘛 o.o?
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:42:988 - Useless inherited point
3. 00:51:900 (2) - slider尾巴有點被 00:50:841 (6) - 擋到
4. 00:57:018 (3) - 你這種跳的梗用很多 這邊卻用一樣的排列但沒有跳 建議換個形狀或拉大一些吧?
5. 02:12:371 (2,3,4) - 都NC?
6. 02:39:194 (1) - 這沒用上finish有點可惜 這邊Vocal應該是更高音 要消finish的地方的話 02:38:488 (1) - 這slider消掉會比較好 另外這個
7. 02:39:900 (1) - 上finish也挺不錯的

• [Insane]

1. 00:23:665 (4,1) - test時這邊怎麼打都有點不順 可能前面note不跳突然大跳再給個3連 o.o (當然僅限1PC)
2. 00:25:782 (1) - 這變速真的有點無法適應 跟前面對應很自然的一定會滑的跟前面兩個一樣速度 QAQ (00:37:076 (1) - 這沒問題)
3. 01:34:253 - Useless inherited point
4. 02:39:371 (2) - 尾巴檔到 只剩下看的到單circle
   
   找不到東西了... 這style我喜歡 :>

1. 00:23:665 (3)-I wouldn't recommend having note 3 be stacked like that on an Easy difficulty. Use the distance snap to move it.
2. 01:18:723 (5)-Remove one repeat from this slider. A single repeat is fine enough and having the repeat slider like that follows the vocals imo. And why a new combo here? I don't see that fitting. Remove it.
3. 01:31:429-A new combo would make sense to put in honestly. Consider doing that. While you're at it, remove new combo from 01:32:841-. It doesn't seem like its fitting.
4. 01:34:253-Would be a good idea to put a new combo here.

1. 01:34:606 (3)-Spacing error. Fix this by using the distance snap.

1. 00:04:077 (3)-I don't get how this makes sense. This doesn't correspond with song very well. I strongly suggest you remove the repeat, extend the slider by 1/4 and add a note on 00:04:607. Should be something like this. http://puu.sh/1z9BM
2. 00:05:666 (4)-This doesn't make sense as well. It just sounds bad. It would be good to remove the repeat and extend the slider by 1/4.
3. 02:25:253-It isn't fair for you to let the HP Drain Rate go down like outta nothing. It would be wise of you to add a break there.

Roddie wrote:

Easy

1. 00:23:665 (3)-I wouldn't recommend having note 3 be stacked like that on an Easy difficulty. Use the distance snap to move it.
2. 01:18:723 (5)-Remove one repeat from this slider. A single repeat is fine enough and having the repeat slider like that follows the vocals imo. And why a new combo here? I don't see that fitting. Remove it. fix~
3. 01:31:429-A new combo would make sense to put in honestly. Consider doing that. While you're at it, remove new combo from 01:32:841-. It doesn't seem like its fitting. fix~
4. 01:34:253-Would be a good idea to put a new combo here. fix~

Normal

1. 01:34:606 (3)-Spacing error. Fix this by using the distance snap. fix~

Xakyrie's Taiko Muzukashii

Not bad. Very well made. (:

Taiko DS

Nicely done! I like how this taiko difficulty plays!

Kite's Hard

Kite's Hard holds up pretty well.

Banana's Hime

1. 00:04:077 (3)-I don't get how this makes sense. This doesn't correspond with song very well. I strongly suggest you remove the repeat, extend the slider by 1/4 and add a note on 00:04:607. Should be something like this. http://puu.sh/1z9BM fix~
2. 00:05:666 (4)-This doesn't make sense as well. It just sounds bad. It would be good to remove the repeat and extend the slider by 1/4. fix~
3. 02:25:253-It isn't fair for you to let the HP Drain Rate go down like outta nothing. It would be wise of you to add a break there. fix~

Insane

Plays alright I suppose.

And that's it. Good luck to you!

1. 00:19:959 - It's better to end the slider here for a proper vocals following. There is no sound in the music at the blue tick.
2. 00:21:371 - Same here.
3. 00:22:253 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This combo should be remade. The different sound starts from 00:22:959 (5) - but not from 00:23:135 (1) - , so it's more logical to start new pattern from (5). My suggestion is to change first (1,2,3,4) into a square, and next (5,1,2,3,4) into a pentagon. Moving new combo to (5), of course, too. It would look as something like that:
   
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4. 00:24:282 (5) - There is no sound at this circle. It would fit vocal better if you change 00:24:194 (4,5,6) - to a single 1/2 slider and change 00:24:547 (7) - to a triple instead.
5. 00:29:841 (4,5,6,7) - Same here.
6. 00:31:253 - Again it's better to end the slider here.
7. 00:32:665 - Same.
8. 00:34:959 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is totally wrong. It doesn't follow the music, confuses and plays badly. My suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:58:429 - Again it's better to end the slider here.
10. 01:00:635 - Try to add a note here, it'd fit the vocal.
11. 01:01:429 (4,5) - Such a pattern can be a bit confusing and not fun to play imo. I'd change it to anything else. Like, a triple, a repeating slider or so.
12. 01:31:165 (6,8) - Remove these two notes, they are mapped on nothing.
13. 01:33:459 - And add a note here for that string sound.
14. 01:35:223 - I'd add a note here for that small snare sound.
15. 01:36:724 (1) - This slider is really unnoticeable. Under the hitbursts of the previous notes it just blends. Remove the slowdown so it becomes visible please.
16. 02:18:635 - Again I'd suggest to add a note.
17. 02:31:606 - Again this slider should end here :S
18. 02:33:812 - And here a note should be added. Vocal calls for it.

1. A generally bad map. Too low AR for these fast sliders. Reading this 00:18:900 (3,4) - was just a pain with this AR. Too low spacing for such fast sliders. 0.7x for an Hard-Insane (or whatever it is) diff is just ridiculous. It plays weirdly and never flows good. Weird hitsounds. 00:20:841 (1,2,3,4) - loud soft hitsounds change to 00:22:253 (1,2,3,4) - some quiet custom stuff, and then change to complete silence at 00:22:959 (5,6) - with a really too loud finish at 00:23:312 (6) - . Not saying that hitsounds are also inconsistent withing this single diff. I heard some random normal whistles there, it makes no sense to me. Following the hitsounds of Insane could be a better idea.
   And again about readability: 00:30:194 (3,4) - 00:35:841 (3,4) - and similar patterns. With this AR, this slider velocity, this distance snap it's just unreadable. It is placed really close to previous sliders, but the gap in the music is far longer. Ok, I just generally don't like this diff.

1. 00:40:429 (6) - This confuses A LOT. Comparing to the rest of the map, this circle is too tricky, you definitely should move it somewhere else. It was the only 100 in my first play, lol. My suggestion will be simple and really fitting the music well. Stack (3,4) and (5,6).
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:02:312 (4) - This slider is very questionable. It looks like almost-a-burai-slider. But it's not the biggest problem, the problem is that you stack a circle under it. It's approach circle may be covered halfly with this slider's body and it will blend a bit (they both are pink). Just to avoid possible problems, I'd change the shape of this slider. Same for 01:15:900 (1,2) -
3. 02:04:606 (2,3,1) - I'd not make jumps here to prevent the confusion. They follow an unusual part, 5-repeat-sliders. Please make this part a bit simpler, without jumps.

grumd wrote:

Banana's Hime

1. A generally bad map. Too low AR for these fast sliders. Reading this 00:18:900 (3,4) - was just a pain with this AR. Too low spacing for such fast sliders. 0.7x for an Hard-Insane (or whatever it is) diff is just ridiculous. It plays weirdly and never flows good.
   ->AR8
2. Weird hitsounds. 00:20:841 (1,2,3,4) - loud soft hitsounds change to 00:22:253 (1,2,3,4) - some quiet custom stuff, and then change to complete silence at 00:22:959 (5,6) - with a really too loud finish at 00:23:312 (6) - . Not saying that hitsounds are also inconsistent withing this single diff. I heard some random normal whistles there, it makes no sense to me. Following the hitsounds of Insane could be a better idea.
   I'm acute to the NC1 whistle, and at 00:22:253 (1,2,3,4), I still think they are louder than 00:21:547 (4,5)'s soft-whistle slider head.This may due to different audiocard or earphone (actually I'm not familiar with audio devices, just listing a possibility). I feel sorry for can't share the same feeling with you.
3. And again about readability: 00:30:194 (3,4) - 00:35:841 (3,4) - and similar patterns. With this AR, this slider velocity, this distance snap it's just unreadable. It is placed really close to previous sliders, but the gap in the music is far longer. Ok, I just generally don't like this diff.

grumd wrote:

Kite's Hard

1. 00:40:429 (6) - This confuses A LOT. Comparing to the rest of the map, this circle is too tricky, you definitely should move it somewhere else. It was the only 100 in my first play, lol. My suggestion will be simple and really fitting the music well. Stack (3,4) and (5,6). Fixed
2. 01:02:312 (4) - This slider is very questionable. It looks like almost-a-burai-slider. But it's not the biggest problem, the problem is that you stack a circle under it. It's approach circle may be covered halfly with this slider's body and it will blend a bit (they both are pink). Just to avoid possible problems, I'd change the shape of this slider. Same for 01:15:900 (1,2) - It's fine imo so I will keep those, sorry
3. 02:04:606 (2,3,1) - I'd not make jumps here to prevent the confusion. They follow an unusual part, 5-repeat-sliders. Please make this part a bit simpler, without jumps. Fixed, can't remember mapping the 3 in that combo.. removed it