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Utada Hikaru - Hikari (PLANITb Remix)

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Topic Starter
Yasora
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 07, 2013 at 5:54:02 PM

Artist: Utada Hikaru
Title: Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Source: Kingdom Hearts
Tags: Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Byakugan249
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5104kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. 249's Easy (1.5 stars, 109 notes)
  2. Hard (4.74 stars, 239 notes)
  3. Insane (4.99 stars, 316 notes)
  4. Normal (4.07 stars, 179 notes)
Download: Utada Hikaru - Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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| Mapset |
Easy by Byaku-nyan
Normal - Insane by me

added weird SB =3=
I'm really like this song~
mancuso_JM_
Checking the Timing from #modreqs. I can find something like

BPM: 130 (Current)
Offset: 12013 (+25 on Current)

Don't forget to resnap all Notes and Green Line Sections
Good Luck with your map ;)
Topic Starter
Yasora
okay use that offset
thank you~
Hinsvar
https://twitter.com/Yasorarara/status/2 ... 6511407104

For you, sure.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants.

>249's Easy
  1. Uh... From what I've seen of you while modding this, you make a solid kiai time section into a "burst" one while mapping your diff, and this one looks to be of no exception. Just wondering... What's the reason?
  2. 00:17:089 - Considering you mapped on all white ticks before the next spinner, why don't you add a circle here? I guess the idea here is to make a 2/1 rhythm because 00:16:166 is empty (and considering it's just 1/1 beat after a spinner, I'll let that slip), but the nothingness here feels weird, IMO.
  3. 00:22:628 (1) - What about if you make this a circle and then a 1/1 slider (1/1 beat after the circle), THEN apply NC to the slider? Using a repeating 1/1 slider just doesn't fit here, and NC doesn't really go well if you want to follow the phrasing of the lyrics (which seems to be what you're doing here).
  4. 00:26:320 (5) - Split this slider into two circles, and then NC the second one? Well, yeah, it's just that I'm not comfortable with the combo placement.
  5. 00:32:320 (3) - ...Honestly, I went all "what" in my mind at this slider. It just doesn't fit the song, in my opinion. How about changing this slider? My idea's like this (Not feeling like taking a timeline picture, so I'll go with text only; also, if you're following this, NC the first slider for ALL choice, although I would choose A, which, while have some 1/2 sliders, goes with the song better):
    Choice A: (C) x (C) (S)x(S) x (C) (S)x(S)
    Choice B: (C) x (S) x (S) x (S) x (S)
    *Note: (C) = Circle; (S)x(S) = 1/2 slider; (S) x (S) = 1/1 slider; x = Red tick; using 1/2 beat snap divisor.
  6. 01:02:320 (3) - NC (new stanza and the slider's very long)? Also, yeah, I do respect this art, but don't you think 6/1 is... a bit too long?
  7. 01:09:243 (3) - ...And this is 8/1. Well, at least this one is well-used, so it's fine I guess.
>Normal
  1. 00:24:936 (4,1) - Swap the NCs? Well, you know, new stanzas. The combo placement's really annoying to me while playing this diff.
  2. 00:26:782 (3) - NC? (Reason: ^)
  3. 01:06:474 (3,4) - Hmm... I guess following the phrasing on the lyrics (vocal) will be better by using two 1/2 sliders, instead of a repeating 1/2 slider and a circle that you are using right now.
>Insane
  1. 00:44:089 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ...I swear I have seen a similar double-triangle pattern before, although the spacing between the circles on the middle there are tighter... Oh. Hi, shameless advertisement.
  2. 01:41:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can't really see what are you trying to do here. Maybe you're trying to make two triangles around here, but while playing, the circles look randomly placed. Well, not really a big deal.
Hard's completely fine.

So yeah, that's it. Nice song, btw.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
Yasora

Hinsvar wrote:

https://twitter.com/Yasorarara/status/229445686511407104

For you, sure.

thank you XD
Hinsvar

Yasora wrote:


thank you XD
I kinda expected that reaction.

...What the hell did I just type? "For you"?

I must get my sanity back.

Also, there, a star :P

EDIT: After searching for the full version of this song... I have a bad news for you.

Unless I'm wrong at doing stuff (which I'm certain enough I'm doing right), this is not the Godson Mix. What are you mapping now is the -PLANITb Remix.

I hope you still have enough will to resubmit this fully.
Topic Starter
Yasora
will fix later >3<
can't fullsubmit in home orz

oh ya pasang itu gambar soalnya terharu ada yang nanggepin juga twit itu lol
HelloSCV
Hi~ From my Queue
My Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER
General
Bpm 130.07 is right my guess( using 130 bpm is incorrect rhythm in back part of song )

AI Bat wrote:

249's Easy
00:11:987 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
00:11:987 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
Insane
02:01:051 (2) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner

249's Easy
01:21:243 (3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/MHag
01:48:013 (3) - ctrl r?


Normal
00:27:705 (2) - delete whislte start of slider
00:44:782 (6) - 1 gird right 1 gird down ( to make perfect square )
01:59:089 (1) - add finish?

Hard
00:21:013 (4) - add whislte?
01:36:012 (3) - making symmetry?
01:59:089 (1) - add finish start of slider

Insane
00:46:166 (7) - NC?
00:48:012 (7) - ^
01:06:474 (4) - Ctrl R?

always nice mapset! good lukc! :D
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed some, thank you :3
YTYuyu

Hinsvar wrote:

For you, sure.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants.

>249's Easy
  1. Uh... From what I've seen of you while modding this, you make a solid kiai time section into a "burst" one while mapping your diff, and this one looks to be of no exception. Just wondering... What's the reason? read this post and you'll understand.
  2. 00:17:089 - Considering you mapped on all white ticks before the next spinner, why don't you add a circle here? I guess the idea here is to make a 2/1 rhythm because 00:16:166 is empty (and considering it's just 1/1 beat after a spinner, I'll let that slip), but the nothingness here feels weird, IMO. i did this intentionally because it's more like an introduction to the map. i want to keep this 1/1 gap because if i add a circle, it feels as if i'm rushing to get this diff done.
  3. 00:22:628 (1) - What about if you make this a circle and then a 1/1 slider (1/1 beat after the circle), THEN apply NC to the slider? Using a repeating 1/1 slider just doesn't fit here, and NC doesn't really go well if you want to follow the phrasing of the lyrics (which seems to be what you're doing here). i did this because the vocals start here. i'm not following the instrumental for this part at all.
  4. 00:26:320 (5) - Split this slider into two circles, and then NC the second one? Well, yeah, it's just that I'm not comfortable with the combo placement. hmm idk...i really want to keep this 1/1 slider because i find it fitting. if i add 2 circles, then i'll feel uncomfortable in the flow and note placement.
  5. 00:32:320 (3) - ...Honestly, I went all "what" in my mind at this slider. It just doesn't fit the song, in my opinion. How about changing this slider? My idea's like this (Not feeling like taking a timeline picture, so I'll go with text only; also, if you're following this, NC the first slider for ALL choice, although I would choose A, which, while have some 1/2 sliders, goes with the song better):
    Choice A: (C) x (C) (S)x(S) x (C) (S)x(S)
    Choice B: (C) x (S) x (S) x (S) x (S)

    *Note: (C) = Circle; (S)x(S) = 1/2 slider; (S) x (S) = 1/1 slider; x = Red tick; using 1/2 beat snap divisor. tbh i have no idea what you're saying here. give me screenshots so that i can understand a lot better.
  6. 01:02:320 (3) - NC (new stanza and the slider's very long)? Also, yeah, I do respect this art, but don't you think 6/1 is... a bit too long? no and no. it makes me feel uncomfortable seeing this slider a NC and as long as it flows to the vocals, then it's fine.
  7. 01:09:243 (3) - ...And this is 8/1. Well, at least this one is well-used, so it's fine I guess. yea looks like you noticed the lyrics change then the bump is hit.
So yeah, that's it. Nice song, btw.

Good luck on the way 8-)
hmm..no changes made but ty for the mod.

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
My Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this


AI Bat wrote:

249's Easy
00:11:987 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
00:11:987 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end). orz...Ya-chan did you change the offset again o.0?

249's Easy
01:21:243 (3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/MHag that slight blanket would be gone so no.
01:48:013 (3) - ctrl r? no the flow would be gone if i do that.




always nice mapset! good luck! :D
ty for the mod and Ya-chan can you re-snap that spinner at the beginning for me?
Hinsvar

Byakugan249 wrote:

tbh i have no idea what you're saying here. give me screenshots so that i can understand a lot better.
A: http://puu.sh/MWfc

B: http://puu.sh/MWff

I basically think that the current object usage (using a 2/1 repeating slider) is weird to me, but everything's up to you ;)

Hey, I'm here again.
Topic Starter
Yasora
1st, changed title
2nd, I don't change the offset, but I resnap that spinner ><

thanks all~!
Zare
Modding this becuz Kingdom Hearts <3
First of all, as I'm still new to mapping and modding, all of the following are really only suggestions, but even so I hope them to be helpful.

  • 249's Easy
  1. 00:52:628 (1) - Doesn't seem to fit the vocals there, maybe no repeat and instead 2 hitcircles after the slider?
  2. 00:56:782 (1,2) - This is the only part of the diff with a 1/2 beat...For the sake of those poor osu beginners, who totally can''t read this, I would try to handle this with shorter slider like you did in 00:49:859 (1)
  3. 01:02:320 (3) - similar problem as above, however that probably only counts for very new players that only just started playing osu, those who would probably lose their combo at this slider, because they can't really see and understand the small loop it does, they would think it would just go on as any other slider, thus moving their cursor too fast and losing the sliderball... (Actually, that might be not such a big problem, I just noticed it while playing, and in a mod the modder's supposed to tell the mapper what the he notices, right? orz)

    Anyways, great diff!
  • Normal
  1. AR -1?
  2. 00:53:320 (2) - Somehow it feels weird that here is no circle, maybe add one?

    Not much to complain about here either...
  • Hard
  1. 01:31:397 (1,3) - make those slider symmetrical
  2. 01:41:551 (4) - Ctrl + R
  3. 01:37:859 (3) - I would shape this and 01:39:705 (3) a little bit more flat (I mean they should look a little bit more like these: 01:31:397 (1,3)
  • Insane
  1. OD +1
  2. 00:31:628 (4) - Why not making some jumps out of these 3 tones, they occur 4 times and 3 of those 4 times they are a repeating slider, u could add some more variation here
  3. 01:15:936 (1,2,3) - Maybe flip those vertically?

Uhm well, this mapset is just awesome. Every diff flows quite well, you have a lot of variation, different patterns etc. as well as a ver good difficulty spread. It's just fun to play, which is exactly what a good beatmap should be like.

Looking forward to seeing this ranked (I have no doubt this will be ranked) :)
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed some
thank you~
YTYuyu

Zarerion wrote:

Modding this becuz Kingdom Hearts <3
First of all, as I'm still new to mapping and modding, all of the following are really only suggestions, but even so I hope them to be helpful.

  • 249's Easy
  1. 00:52:628 (1) - Doesn't seem to fit the vocals there, maybe no repeat and instead 2 hitcircles after the slider? actually it does. listen to the repeat. the vocals change once that repeat is hit.
  2. 00:56:782 (1,2) - This is the only part of the diff with a 1/2 beat...For the sake of those poor osu beginners, who totally can''t read this, I would try to handle this with shorter slider like you did in 00:49:859 (1) no then it'll look like a boring diff. i did this to challenge beginners on their timing. i want to make my diff easy, fun and somewhat challenging for beginners.
  3. 01:02:320 (3) - similar problem as above, however that probably only counts for very new players that only just started playing osu, those who would probably lose their combo at this slider, because they can't really see and understand the small loop it does, they would think it would just go on as any other slider, thus moving their cursor too fast and losing the sliderball... (Actually, that might be not such a big problem, I just noticed it while playing, and in a mod the modder's supposed to tell the mapper what the he notices, right? orz) nope i've seen loops like this on easy diffs. if i don't put a loop on any of my easy diffs, it won't feel like a 249 diff at all. if beginners lose it, then that's their fault. they could try again until they can clear this loop correctly.

    Anyways, great diff!
Uhm well, this mapset is just awesome. Every diff flows quite well, you have a lot of variation, different patterns etc. as well as a ver good difficulty spread. It's just fun to play, which is exactly what a good beatmap should be like.

Looking forward to seeing this ranked (I have no doubt this will be ranked) :)
applied the 2nd screenshot and ty for the mod but i made no changes through your mod.

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: ~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76372
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Deep River Byakugan249

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Arnold0
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
Nothing

[249's Easy]
Your Kiai end is not the same as the other diffs and... The Kiai time on this diff is only 115 milisecond long o_O
Just active Kiai on the green timing point at offset 76743 and it will be fixed since the next timing point is the same as other diffs Kiai end.
00:12:012 (1) - I think this spinner should start here 00:11:782 -
00:16:166 - Add a note here
00:17:089 - And here too (It follow the music better without making the map harder I think)
01:02:320 (3) - No reverse arrow, ends at 01:03:705 -
01:04:166 - Add slider which ends at 01:05:089 -
01:42:474 (5) - Maybe you can delete this note and start a spinner here which ends at 01:43:859 - ?
01:45:474 - Add a slider which end at 01:45:936 - (del 01:45:705 (2) -. I think it follow the vocal better but maybe it's too hard it's up to you to see if you want to map on red ticks or not ^^)
02:00:474 (4) - This sound special because there is a little blank in the music here. Move to 02:00:243 - you can make a slider which start at the (2) note and end were I say if you think two note in in row with one on the white and the other on the red tick is too hard.

[Normal]
00:12:012 (1) - I think this spinner should start here 00:11:782 -
00:18:243 - Add note
00:25:628 - Add note
01:17:320 - Add note
01:33:936 - Add note

[Hard]
00:12:012 (1) - I think this spinner should start here 00:11:782 -
00:30:359 (4) - Delete this note
01:01:397 (5) - Move to 01:01:282 -

[Insane]
00:12:012 (1) - I think this spinner should start here 00:11:782 -
01:30:243 (2,3) - Remove these two notes maybe? I think it folow better the vocal without them.

Nice map and I liked the song :) Good luck with rank :)
YTYuyu

Arnold0 wrote:

From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[249's Easy]
Your Kiai end is not the same as the other diffs and... The Kiai time on this diff is only 115 milisecond long o_O
Just active Kiai on the green timing point at offset 76743 and it will be fixed since the next timing point is the same as other diffs Kiai end. so? the kiai time can be inconsistent if there's a guest diff in the map.
00:12:012 (1) - I think this spinner should start here 00:11:782 - no i don't like starting notes before the offset.
00:16:166 - Add a note here no beginners won't have enough time to recover after the spinner.
00:17:089 - And here too (It follow the music better without making the map harder I think) after giving some thought, i decided to keep this 1/1 gap even. i feel that if i add another circle, it feels as if i'm rushing through the map.
01:02:320 (3) - No reverse arrow, ends at 01:03:705 - i added the repeat arrow because it flows to the vocals on the way back. if i remove it, it'll make me feel uncomfortable during gameplay.
01:04:166 - Add slider which ends at 01:05:089 - didn't follow the suggestion above, so ignored.
01:42:474 (5) - Maybe you can delete this note and start a spinner here which ends at 01:43:859 - ? again, beginners won't have enough time to recover after the spinner is complete.
01:45:474 - Add a slider which end at 01:45:936 - (del 01:45:705 (2) -. I think it follow the vocal better but maybe it's too hard it's up to you to see if you want to map on red ticks or not ^^) i'm not following the vocals, i'm following the bass in the song. you can't just follow vocals all the time, otherwise it might be a bad or boring diff. you have to follow the instrumental as well to keep the flow going in the song.
02:00:474 (4) - This sound special because there is a little blank in the music here. Move to 02:00:243 - you can make a slider which start at the (2) note and end were I say if you think two note in in row with one on the white and the other on the red tick is too hard. yea it'll look too hard for beginners to do. i want my easy diffs to be fun, straightforward, and somewhat challenging for beginners. in this case, i want this part to be straightforward.


Nice map and I liked the song :) Good luck with rank :)
no changes made but ty for the mod.
Arnold0
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.
I think this sentence is usefull here :O
Hope my mod for other diff is not as bad as this diff one (And I was hoping it's good and I tryed to esplain some changes but .. Fail :O)
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks for mod~!
YTYuyu
dw about it. even though the mapper has made no changes, you'll also learn from that mapper on what to look for or what to suggest in the future. in other words, you'll be a better modder if you read the mapper's reply on why they ignored the suggestions.
Arnold0
Yes I've read them, luckily your are not like mappers which just say no when they dont take a suggestion ^^"
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my modding queue.

I played all the diffs (except Insane) and I have seen them in "Edit" but I didn't find anything wrong.

Good job for that beatmap, good luck with rankings ^^
meiikyuu

hello ^^ feel free to ignore what u dont like xD

249's Easy
no kiai time? xD ok

  1. 00:26:320 (5) - make this slider neater.. try copy and pasting 00:24:936 (4) - and get rid of the reverse ^^
  2. 00:46:628 (3) - move 3rd point to x:116 y:252
  3. 00:50:782 (2) - make better blanket around 3?
  4. 01:49:859 (1) - add whistle at beginning? sounds empty here
Normal
  1. 00:32:320 (1) - ehhh NC might not be necessary, up to u tho
  2. 01:01:166 (3) - move 3rd point to x:136 y:160
  3. 01:28:859 (3) - a little nazi but move one grid up for perfect spacing with 2 and 1
Hard
  1. 00:29:320 (2) - one grid to the left
  2. 01:00:474 (3) - u are missing a finish sound here at the beginning
  3. 01:14:782 (4) - NC here and remove the NC at the next note
  4. 01:32:320 (3) - one grid to the right, to make spacing between 2 with 01:31:397 (1) - equal xD
i like the flow here ^^

Insane
  1. 00:20:089 (2) - stack with 00:18:013 (3) -
  2. 00:21:474 (2) - a triplet works here, js..but the slider here is fine i guess too xD don't want to ruin the little symmetry pattern
  3. 01:01:859 (1) - remove NC here and NC on 01:02:320 (3) -
  4. 01:03:705 (1) - remove NC here and NC on next note
  5. 02:00:474 (1) - NC might not be necessary
love this diff.

no big problems here <3

i like this song too o_o, hope it gets ranked! star~~
DakeDekaane
Hi~ "random mod" time :3

A very nice song~

[249's Easy]

This diff is very weird for me, I don't know if the hitsounds are too loud, or there are too much whistles and/or claps, well, I won't give any suggestions about that because I'm not sure what is that weird feeling , it's only a comment.

All other diffs are fine for me, star :3

I'd like to make a guest diff, If you want, of course, but I'm a bit lazy >w<
YTYuyu

meiikyuu wrote:


hello ^^ feel free to ignore what u dont like xD

249's Easy
no kiai time? xD ok lol nope :P. it's a kiai burst lol

  1. 00:26:320 (5) - make this slider neater.. try copy and pasting 00:24:936 (4) - and get rid of the reverse ^^ no i actually did this so that this slider can be slightly aligned to (3), and the beginning of (4). i feel that doing that would make me feel uncomfortable.
  2. 00:46:628 (3) - move 3rd point to x:116 y:252 no then it'll ruin the blanket for the end of the previous slider.
  3. 00:50:782 (2) - make better blanket around 3? fine i'll adjust it...
  4. 01:49:859 (1) - add whistle at beginning? sounds empty here no this part focuses on claps, so adding 1 whistle would ruin that consistency pattern.


no big problems here <3

i like this song too o_o, hope it gets ranked! star~~
ty for the mod :D. and DakeDekaane hitsounds are fine to me. if i make it any lower, it'll feel as if the hitsounds are "too" quiet.

SPOILER
osu file format v9

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Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Deep River Byakugan249

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks for mod and star all~

updated :3
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[249's Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:19:397 (1) - nazi - spacing
00:57:013 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/NZ7A -> not looks good. This is better: http://puu.sh/NZ8I


[Hard]
00:24:013 (3,4) - use jumps here like 00:16:859 (4,5,6)?
00:28:628 (1,2) - change to a slider?http://puu.sh/NZ0T The 1.83x doesn't make the flow slow down here.
00:42:936 (4) - NC?
01:14:782 (4,1) - NC should be on (4)

[Insane]
00:15:859 - should be an unusual spot in rhythm: http://puu.sh/NYJj or http://puu.sh/NYNH Yes you may need to re-organize the pattern, but the waste of rhythm is just unbearable to me.
00:23:089 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/NYOA
00:32:320 (1) - ^ isn't a triple
01:03:128 (5) - the triple have nothing to follow. So delete (5) or change to triple like 01:00:474 (3,4,5)?
01:04:974 (4) - ^
01:56:089 (3,4,5) - I think use same pattern as 01:54:243 (2,3) is better
02:01:051 (1) - miss a NC?

That's all I can find. GL~
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks for mod~
DakeDekaane
Hi, it's me again .w.

Giving a deeper analysis of the beatmap, the song is too nice and I couldn't resist to make a map for my selfish fun, and I found inconsistence in the beats at the end of the song, so I found a better BPM, in my opinion, 130.034, same offset, you could try it. >w<
Topic Starter
Yasora

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, it's me again .w.

Giving a deeper analysis of the beatmap, the song is too nice and I couldn't resist to make a map for my selfish fun, and I found inconsistence in the beats at the end of the song, so I found a better BPM, in my opinion, 130.034, same offset, you could try it. >w<
but, I think the current timing is fine.. so no change sorry ;_;
Miya
Timing assistance as requested.
I got -8 in the offset. Using your offset i get 93% acc in insane, but using -8 offset i got 98++% in insane.

:)
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you for timing check \:D/
pimp
general

01:16:593 - timeline here, bpm 130 (sounds better imo, please someone confirm it : D)


249's easy

01:02:320 (3) - personaly i don like long sliders with repeat in this case
remove repeat, start another long slider at 01:04:166 end at 01:05:551.. (its consistent to the previous sliders)
and make 3 circles in the next white ticks ??
..........
01:35:089 (1) - maybe end this slider at 01:36:013 and make 1/1 slider at 01:36:474 ?
02:06:474 - spinner end here or in another long white tick?

thats all :?

good luck ★
Topic Starter
Yasora
still don't want change timing :'(
I will give you kudos if 249 fix something :3

thank you~
YTYuyu

pimpG wrote:

249's easy

01:02:320 (3) - personaly i don like long sliders with repeat in this case
remove repeat, start another long slider at 01:04:166 end at 01:05:551.. (its consistent to the previous sliders)
and make 3 circles in the next white ticks ??
.......... no because it'd make me feel uncomfortable during gameplay, and the blanket between this and (2) at the next combo would be gone.
01:35:089 (1) - maybe end this slider at 01:36:013 and make 1/1 slider at 01:36:474 ? no that bump is good enough to let the player know that the lyrics are gonna change.
02:06:474 - spinner end here or in another long white tick? no the instrumental is still fading out here.

thats all :?

good luck ★
no changes made but ty for the mod.
Niva
o/ (bingung mau nulis apa orz ._.)

[General]

-> Actually you need another timing section - I'm very sure the offset shifts around your kiai time, this is what I got:


...this also explains the -8 and another timing issues above (:

[Insane]

  1. 00:20:081 (2,3,4) - I prefer something like this here, it's much tidier ((3) is stacked to (6)) plus the circular movement here plays more natural imo:
  2. 00:27:005 (2,3,4,5) - To avoid clustering here I prefer to use a triple first, then repeating slider instead of repeating slider first then triple (because on ~x:180 y:288 your free space is very available)
  3. 00:31:158 (3) - (optional) Move to ~x:304 y:87? imo this angle flows better with your (4,5) because it's a straight line >_<
  4. 00:36:005 (1) - Minor stuff, but actually you can move this to ~x:256 y:184 to form a triangle with your previous (6,1) :3
  5. 00:38:543 (3,4,5) - (optional) Uhm, what's with (3)'s curve here >_< - arrange like this perhaps? Placing (5,6,7) in the middle of your two sliders flows better imo:
  6. 00:42:235 (2) - Move to ~x:130 y:57 to form a diamond on (1,2,3,4) here?
  7. 00:46:505 (8,9) - Perhaps stack (8) to (2) and use a wave on (9) here for a fancier flow? xD
  8. 00:52:620 (1) - ...uhm, if you can curve it more (and more symmetrical as well) it'll fit the vocals better:
    211,149,52620,6,0,B|267:189|346:148|329:80,1,180,4|8
  9. 00:58:620 (2) - (optional) Put in ~x:419 y:127 to make the spacing with (1) looks more natural?
  10. 01:09:005 (4,1,2,3,4) - I think forcing (2) to overlap with (4) doesn't look good here... Again, definitely this part can be made more natural:
  11. 01:12:235 (3,4) - (optional) Would be awesome imo if the arc is downward instead : (3) in ~x:173 y:359, (4) in ~x:259 y:253
  12. 01:12:928 (1) - Please move your red waypoint upper (~x:438 y:158), currently the red waypoint's placement is reeeeeeeeeally forced >_<
  13. 01:17:543 (3) - (optional) Curve upward instead? I'd rather make the flow continuous with (4) and (1)...
  14. 01:20:081 (6) - Move the whistle from (5) here? The vocal's pitch goes higher here...
  15. 01:31:389 (1) - Starting on this point, idk why but imo it will be a lot fancier if you map following the secondary instrument (bass)... Just what I thought of though >_<
  16. 01:41:081 (2,3,4,5,6) - ...don't really get the pattern here to be honest... Perhaps try this:
  17. 01:42:466 (1,2,3,4,5) - What are you following here actually... The song goes on nothing here - I suggest to at least remove (2) to follow the bass~
  18. 01:52:158 (2,3) - (optional) Select both and then CTRL+R?
  19. 01:58:158 (4,6) - Why the whistle discontinued here? The synth is still worth-following though...
[Hard]

  1. 00:16:389 (3) - Curve this downward instead to give more power to the following jump?
  2. 00:28:389 (4) - (optional) Put in ~x:321 y:135 to make (3,4,1) in a straight line?
  3. 00:31:158 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - ...The jump (especially on (3,4)) looks quite random for me, perhaps arrange like this?
  4. 00:38:774 (3) - (optional) CTRL+R to make (3,4,5) a circular movement?
  5. 00:45:928 (2,3,4) - Same here, I'd rather CTRL+R for a fancy flow~
  6. 00:47:312 (2,3) - Remove one repeat on (3)? Because the vocal stops on 00:48:120...
  7. 00:53:197 (2) - (optional) I'd curve this to the left instead to make an antagonistic effect with (1), but this is purely optional~
  8. 00:57:005 (2,3,4,5) - Another jump which looks random for me... Try this instead perhaps?
  9. 01:03:120 (4) - Move the midpoint to ~x:291 y:173? Definitely curved too much compared to (3) here...
  10. 01:09:235 (1) - (optional) Try to use a Z-shaped slider here, to follow the vocals' atmosphere more? (or at least make this more symmetrical orz, currently it's pretty much clear the midpoint is too far to the left)
  11. 01:19:158 (3) - Hmm, actually I prefer to create a slider jump here, but it's not a must (:
  12. 01:28:274 (2) - Err, is this triple intentional? Doesn't fit the rest of the map imo ._.
  13. 01:34:620 (5,6) - Same as Insane - switch the whistle's position?
  14. 01:38:543 (4,1) - Personally I really disliked the overlap here - try this instead?
    SPOILER
    [img][spoilerbox][img]http://i.imgur.com/ATf01.png[/img]
    [/img][/spoilerbox]
  15. 01:39:697 (3) - Why not just copy-paste this from (4) and flip horizontal orz ._.
  16. 01:42:466 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:28:274, but this one makes more sense at least~
  17. 01:43:389 (4,5) - (optional) idk why... I don't really feel right with the whistle's placement here - perhaps use whistle on (4)'s start and end + (5)'s end?
  18. 01:56:774 (4,5) - ...why straight line here >_< - I really recommend a pseudo-pentagon pattern by placing (4) in ~x:370 y:12 and (5) in ~x:279 y:58
[Normal]

  1. 00:18:697 (4) - ...drag midpoint to ~x:412 y:312 to avoid overlap? Minor stuff though >_<
  2. 00:28:620 (1) - ...Why don't you add a circle here and start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after? The damp sound here sounds too dramatic not to be mapped imo ._.
  3. 00:32:312 (1) - Why whistle here? Previously you don't have a consecutive two 1/1 whistles o.o
  4. 00:35:081 (3) - (optional) Actually if you want to be safe you can just encircle 00:32:774 (2)'s start here~
  5. 00:37:851 (1) - Err, to be honest I don't really get your shape here... If you're going for a tilted slider wave I suggest something like this though:
  6. 00:39:697 (1) - ...isn't the finish supposed to be on the next (1)'s start here? Whistle should be here instead imo xD
  7. 00:50:312 (4) - (optional) Put slightly higher to emphasize the arc from (3)?
  8. 00:50:312 (4,1,2,3) - Uhm, are you forming a diamond or square here? Looks nowhere closer to both imo... Creating a neat square/diamond here won't be hard though (:
  9. 01:03:005 (3) - (optional) Make this encircle (1)'s start instead?
  10. 01:10:389 (4) - Whistle on slider's end here? Sounds good with the vocals and it also dramatizes your upcoming finish~
  11. 01:12:235 (3,1) - Just a suggestion:
  12. 01:20:081 (4) - Remove whistle here? Personally I feel better without it as the vocal's main point is on your next (1)'s start here...
  13. 01:23:543 (3) - Same here, I'd leave this with only clap as there's nothing for the whistle to follow here...
  14. 01:25:158 (3) - (optional) imo it's better to face this slider to the right instead, it'll avoid clustering plus it'll also emphasize the triangle (:
  15. 01:36:004 (2,2) - ...remove whistle on both (2)? Sounds better if less noisy imo :3
  16. 01:58:159 (2,3,1,2,3) - I highly recommend to create a pentagon here - yes I can see you're trying to form a symmetry on (1,2,3), but it results in an abrupt angle between (3,1) >_<
[249's Easy]

  1. 00:21:235 (3) - (optional) Not a fan of a wave here actually... Perhaps try this? xD
  2. 00:22:620 (1) - Finish (instead of whistle) sounds more dramatic on the repeat here imo~
  3. 00:28:620 (1) - I'd rather add another circle here, start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after and form a diamond on (1,2,3,4) - looks fancier before the spinner this way I think :3
  4. 00:34:620 (1,2) - (optional) I get your idea to create a straight line here, but perhaps move (1) to ~x:194 y:288 and (2) to ~x:254 y:362? Will be more elegant imo if (2) is in the center...
  5. 00:36:928 (3,1) - ...err, why your clapping altered here? Previously your claps are consistent on downbeats, now they're 1/1 after downbeats o.o
  6. 00:42:928 (4) - Suggestion, decrescendo here?
  7. 00:49:851 (1) - Whistle on slider's end here won't hurt imo (plus it fits the vocals, really xD)
  8. 00:52:620 (1,2) - (optional) Will be much tidier with slider encircles imo:
  9. 00:59:081 (4) - Perhaps move it slightly to the left? The arc here fits the vocal's atmosphere imo...
  10. 01:00:466 (2) - ...also here, starting from here where the claps go, actually o.o
  11. 01:09:235 (3) - (optional) To be honest I don't really like how this slider was shaped ("squared" waypoints)... I'd do something like this:
    237,84,69235,2,0,B|155:110|86:57|86:57|100:144|21:192,2,320,2|4|2
  12. 01:22:158 (1) - ...remove finish here? No need for a finish 2/1 before your next one I think >_<
  13. 01:33:235 (4) - I'd encircle (5) instead of (3) here, it'll avoid clustering imo~
  14. 01:35:081 (1) - Same as my previous code, but for this you can just simply move the second bezier waypoint to ~x:80 y:185 to encircle (2) if you don't want to drastically alter the shape :3
  15. 01:53:543 (1) - (optional) Finish on slider's start here, as Yasora did in her diffs?
...imo current mapping is fine, but personally I think it's more fun to map based on the instruments on this song (especially on the higher diffs)...
Good luck then~
Topic Starter
Yasora
fixed timing and some mod
(@byaku-nyan plz fix your timing xD)

makasih ka niva :3
ngg, kayaknya ak lebih sk ikut vocal drpd instrument orz
YTYuyu

Niva wrote:

[249's Easy]

  1. 00:21:235 (3) - (optional) Not a fan of a wave here actually... Perhaps try this? xD
    alright the blanket looks nicer...fixed.
  2. 00:22:620 (1) - Finish (instead of whistle) sounds more dramatic on the repeat here imo~ the vocals aren't loud enough to add the finish so i feel that a whistle is loud enough to match the vocals.
  3. 00:28:620 (1) - I'd rather add another circle here, start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after and form a diamond on (1,2,3,4) - looks fancier before the spinner this way I think :3 no i feel that i'd be rushing this part for beginners in this part of i do add a circle here.
  4. 00:34:620 (1,2) - (optional) I get your idea to create a straight line here, but perhaps move (1) to ~x:194 y:288 and (2) to ~x:254 y:362? Will be more elegant imo if (2) is in the center... then the stack on (3) would be gone if i do move (2) at the center.
  5. 00:36:928 (3,1) - ...err, why your clapping altered here? Previously your claps are consistent on downbeats, now they're 1/1 after downbeats o.o it's because of the lyrics. since it changes and since there's that sound in the instrumental, i want that to represent a new pattern in the song.
  6. 00:42:928 (4) - Suggestion, decrescendo here? alright i've been thinking about this tbh...idk if i should be doing this or not, but alright, to emphasize the vocals.
  7. 00:49:851 (1) - Whistle on slider's end here won't hurt imo (plus it fits the vocals, really xD) i disagree. i use my hitsounds wisely, in this case, if i add a whistle, then i'll find it unfitting and i feel that it doesn't belong there at all since it'll sound odd for me even if it matches the vocals.
  8. 00:52:620 (1,2) - (optional) Will be much tidier with slider encircles imo:
    alright it looks nice so fixed.
  9. 00:59:081 (4) - Perhaps move it slightly to the left? The arc here fits the vocal's atmosphere imo... moved it to the right. i'd feel uncomfortable if i move it to the left.
  10. 01:00:466 (2) - ...also here, starting from here where the claps go, actually o.o if you're saying that i should align this to (5), then no. i don't want to ruin that small blanket for this slider. although it may look bad, i want the flow to be smooth. making a shape out of this will break the flow during gameplay.
  11. 01:09:235 (3) - (optional) To be honest I don't really like how this slider was shaped ("squared" waypoints)... I'd do something like this:
    237,84,69235,2,0,B|155:110|86:57|86:57|100:144|21:192,2,320,2|4|2
    hmm...alright it works.
  12. 01:22:158 (1) - ...remove finish here? No need for a finish 2/1 before your next one I think >_< that finish is meant to match that sound in the instrumental. i feel that it'd sound odd with both whistles in this part.
  13. 01:33:235 (4) - I'd encircle (5) instead of (3) here, it'll avoid clustering imo~
  14. 01:35:081 (1) - Same as my previous code, but for this you can just simply move the second bezier waypoint to ~x:80 y:185 to encircle (2) if you don't want to drastically alter the shape :3 this one no. i will not ruin my blanket on (2,4) just for this.
  15. 01:53:543 (1) - (optional) Finish on slider's start here, as Yasora did in her diffs? oh Ya-nyan did this? alright for consistency.
...imo current mapping is fine, but personally I think it's more fun to map based on the instruments on this song (especially on the higher diffs)...
Good luck then~
alright then ty for the mod Niva-san ;). fixed the timing as well...i hope i got it correct like the other diffs...

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Tsukasa
orz too nice...

It'd probably be a map people would go back playing. Here's a star isntead
Topic Starter
Yasora

Tsukasa wrote:

orz too nice...

It'd probably be a map people would go back playing. Here's a star isntead
arigatou for your star :'''D
Sylphi
Hi, Yasora.

... Sorry, i can't mod this beatmap because this beatmap looks good for me T^T
this is some my suggestions...

[Normal]
- 01:09:248 (1) New Combo
- 01:51:687 (3) New Combo
Topic Starter
Yasora

Underflow wrote:

Hi, Yasora.

... Sorry, i can't mod this beatmap because this beatmap looks good for me T^T
this is some my suggestions...

[Normal]
- 01:09:248 (1) New Combo
- 01:51:687 (3) New Combo
sorry not change both x''D because for consistent combo set
but thanks for mod :''3
kurohana
Thank you for request \(^^)/

General

Different Kiai-Times (Really, Easy has no kiai-time? Why?)

249's Easy

01:13:864 (1) - spacing
01:35:072 (1) - move like this? looks better
01:57:226 (1) - ^

Good luck ^^
-Napoleon-
Myyyyy moddddd! (Very noob mod :C) :D
Easy:
01:16:633 - 01:31:380 in kiai part and add preview point in the first timing selection as well
00:20:787 (2) - Remove whistle sound
01:35:072 (1) - This isn't symmetrical and symmetrical is awesome
01:57:226 (1) - ^
Normal:
00:23:094 (1) - Unsnapped (I think)
LOOKS CLEAR! :D
Hard:
01:09:248 (1) - This isn't symmetrical
LOOKS PERFECT! :D
Insane:
NOTHING TO SAY THIS IS AMAZING!

Amazing music + Amazing mapset = Amazing star
10nya
from my queue ~
allo yasora-san .w.

[General]
  1. add "game" on the tags?
[249's Easy]
~~~
and yes, no kiai at here?

[Normal]
  1. 02:00:457: I think its better to move the spinner to 02:00:918 since the vocal starts there
[Hard]
  1. 00:48:248: add clap on the slider head?
  2. 00:50:787: clap on the slider tail?
  3. 00:53:787: clap on the head?
  4. 00:55:633: ^
  5. 00:57:710: ^ slider tail
  6. 01:49:611: clap?
  7. 01:51:226: ^ on the tail?
  8. 01:58:611: ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:710: clap on the slider end?
  2. 00:26:094: ^
  3. 00:39:018: clap on the reverse and at the slider end?
itu aja :3
good luck~ ^w^)//~
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you all~ fixed some
also @kurohana I will give you kudos if byaku use your mod ^^



new page as always
YTYuyu

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/

Xavier18488 wrote:

Myyyyy moddddd! (Very noob mod :C) :D

Easy:
01:16:633 - 01:31:380 in kiai part and add preview point in the first timing selection as well no i don't like kiai times.
00:20:787 (2) - Remove whistle sound no that whistle is to emphasize the instrumental.
01:35:072 (1) - This isn't symmetrical and symmetrical is awesome
01:57:226 (1) - ^ fixed on the last mod.

Amazing music + Amazing mapset = Amazing star
Ya-nyan give kurohana kd since i fixed everything "but" the kiai. kiai times can be inconsistent if there's a guest diff in the map. ty for the mods everyone.

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348,248,87687,6,0,B|428:204|444:96,1,160,0|0
384,44,89072,1,2
288,40,89534,2,0,B|240:32|200:64,1,80,0|2
136,112,90457,2,0,B|96:180|140:272,1,160,4|2
212,324,91841,5,8
308,316,92303,1,0
368,244,92764,1,8
408,156,93226,2,0,B|368:140|320:156,2,80,0|8|0
368,68,94611,1,8
272,56,95072,6,0,B|168:56|172:156|172:156|76:160|80:292,1,320,4|2
176,248,97380,1,8
272,244,97841,1,0
268,148,98303,1,8
364,152,98764,6,0,B|444:200|412:312,1,160,4|0
332,332,100149,1,8
240,300,100611,2,0,B|192:288|164:240,2,80,0|8|0
260,204,101995,1,8
184,148,102457,1,4
128,44,104303,6,0,B|52:92|72:196,1,160,0|8
132,256,105687,1,8
220,292,106149,6,0,B|272:296|300:268,2,80,4|8|0
236,196,107534,1,8
176,120,107995,2,0,B|199:96|251:100,2,80,0|8|0
236,196,109380,1,8
156,248,109841,6,0,B|72:212|64:116,1,160,0|0
128,52,111226,1,8
224,44,111687,1,0
308,88,112149,1,8
380,152,112611,2,0,B|408:192|408:236,1,80,0|8
344,300,113534,6,0,B|308:320|252:304,2,80,4|8|0
296,216,114918,1,8
252,132,115380,2,0,B|296:112|344:128,2,80,0|8|0
204,216,116764,1,8
104,216,117226,6,0,B|116:112|204:112|204:112|212:24|320:24,1,320,4|0
296,120,119534,1,8
316,216,119995,1,0
220,216,120457,1,8
256,192,120918,12,0,126918
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hi yasora, req from mod queue

hee, sorry agak telat, kemaren2 susah bgt ngedonlot beatmap apa aja ~_~
+lagi banyak kerjaan hari ini, jadi ngemodnya agak cepet

[249's Easy]
i think you have to follow yasora kiai times,
i prefer any note that placing just on white tick on 1/2 beat snap divisor, coz it easy diff...
i'm a little bit uncomfortable hearing about changing clap pattern, although the lyric vocal is changing too
but it's fine... no problem,

[Insane]
00:42:941 > 00:45:479 - klo mau lebih enaknya sih, mulai dari detik ini, pokoknya yg kombo nomor 5,3,3,3 ke kombo 1 spacingnya samain 1,2x, trus yg kombo nomor 2,2,2 diliat spacing prev sama nextnya samain biar pas, yg sebelumnya kan 1,9 ; 1,9 ; 2,3... klo mau bertahap naik disesuaikan aja... klo bingung tanya aja nanti XD

~
normal sama hard gk masalah sih, udah bagus dimaenin, enak dimaenin pake DT+HR 22nya :P
soal hitsound lagi males ngecek, tapi udah bagus sih didenger sma dites ditaiko XD...

semoga dirank ya... XD
YTYuyu

selova wrote:

hi yasora, req from mod queue

[249's Easy]
i think you have to follow yasora kiai times, nope kiai times can be different if there's a guest diff in the map
i prefer any note that placing just on white tick on 1/2 beat snap divisor, coz it easy diff... no if i do that, i'll find that boring and not fun for beginners.
i'm a little bit uncomfortable hearing about changing clap pattern, although the lyric vocal is changing too yes that's true but my hitsounding here is intentional...it mainly focuses on consistency and the vocals...the instrumental however not so much.
but it's fine... no problem,
Ty for checking.
Deif
Taken from #modreqs:

[General]

Tags: Remove Utada's album "Deep River" from there, because the PLANITb Remix of Hikari doesn't appear there... Just the original Hikari belongs to that album (WIKI INFO).

[249's Easy]

00:19:402 (1) - Seeing how you made the next slider (3), placing a corner down the beat of the music, I'd suggest you to do it in this slider as well. It'll fit pretty well to the melody.
00:52:633 (1,2) - In this case, it seems that the curvy one should be (1) and the sharp one (2).
00:56:787 (1,2) - You were probably trying to follow the lyrics placing 2 1/2 notes there, though the correct placement of (1) would be 00:56:90 in that case (1/4 distance in the timeline). Nevertheless, I'd suggest you to remove (1), or add a new note 00:57:941 (3) to balance those 2 sliders and make it more comfortable for new players.
01:02:325 (3) - This slider is extremely long imo, because it covers 2 sentences of the lyrics while (1) just cover 1. To fix this, you can remove the repetition of (3) and place another slider (1) from 01:04:171 to 01:05:556, removing the current note (1).

[Normal]

00:57:018 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of that objects in timeline, it's better to use these ones for this level, to avoid that 1/2 beat spam (which is not really necessary here).
01:45:226 (2,3) - According to the 2 beats you can here in this part, I'd place a circle (2) at 01:45:226 and a 1/2 slider (3) at 01:45:687, instead of the slider-circle pattern you have right now.

[Hard]

01:38:534 (4) - I strongly recommend to change the place of this note. It's not easy to read due to (2)'s hitburst, and the fact that it's completely in the middle of (1)'s slider track don't help at all.

[Insane]

00:29:325 (2) - Due to the slowdown of the sliders (1) and (3), this jump seems to be out of place. If it wasn't intentional, please move that note a bit to the left to avoid it.
00:46:979 (10) - It's possible to remove this note and add a small jump between (9) and (1) to emphasize the 2 different phrases, like you did with 00:48:479 (9,1).
01:09:018 (4,1) - A jump fits perfectly here. You can try something like THIS, for example: It'll create a jump according to the mapping style, and the Finish you placed at the beginning of (1) will make more sense.
01:12:941 (1) - I bet you can make the small curve of that slider more soft, to match better with (5)'s hitcircle shape.
01:15:941 (1,2,3) - As you did in the previous 3 notes, a jump (1,2) would be better according to the music.
01:44:303 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion: Seeing the flow of the whole map with such a big amount of slight curves, it's odd to see now 4 straight consecutive sliders. Consider curving them to fit with the rest of the map.

Good luck!
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