1. 249's Easy (1.5 stars, 109 notes)
2. Hard (4.74 stars, 239 notes)
3. Insane (4.99 stars, 316 notes)
4. Normal (4.07 stars, 179 notes)

1. Uh... From what I've seen of you while modding this, you make a solid kiai time section into a "burst" one while mapping your diff, and this one looks to be of no exception. Just wondering... What's the reason?
2. 00:17:089 - Considering you mapped on all white ticks before the next spinner, why don't you add a circle here? I guess the idea here is to make a 2/1 rhythm because 00:16:166 is empty (and considering it's just 1/1 beat after a spinner, I'll let that slip), but the nothingness here feels weird, IMO.
3. 00:22:628 (1) - What about if you make this a circle and then a 1/1 slider (1/1 beat after the circle), THEN apply NC to the slider? Using a repeating 1/1 slider just doesn't fit here, and NC doesn't really go well if you want to follow the phrasing of the lyrics (which seems to be what you're doing here).
4. 00:26:320 (5) - Split this slider into two circles, and then NC the second one? Well, yeah, it's just that I'm not comfortable with the combo placement.
5. 00:32:320 (3) - ...Honestly, I went all "what" in my mind at this slider. It just doesn't fit the song, in my opinion. How about changing this slider? My idea's like this (Not feeling like taking a timeline picture, so I'll go with text only; also, if you're following this, NC the first slider for ALL choice, although I would choose A, which, while have some 1/2 sliders, goes with the song better):
   

   Choice A: (C) x (C) (S)x(S) x (C) (S)x(S)
   Choice B: (C) x (S) x (S) x (S) x (S)

   *Note: (C) = Circle; (S)x(S) = 1/2 slider; (S) x (S) = 1/1 slider; x = Red tick; using 1/2 beat snap divisor.
6. 01:02:320 (3) - NC (new stanza and the slider's very long)? Also, yeah, I do respect this art, but don't you think 6/1 is... a bit too long?
7. 01:09:243 (3) - ...And this is 8/1. Well, at least this one is well-used, so it's fine I guess.

1. 00:24:936 (4,1) - Swap the NCs? Well, you know, new stanzas. The combo placement's really annoying to me while playing this diff.
2. 00:26:782 (3) - NC? (Reason: ^)
3. 01:06:474 (3,4) - Hmm... I guess following the phrasing on the lyrics (vocal) will be better by using two 1/2 sliders, instead of a repeating 1/2 slider and a circle that you are using right now.

1. 00:44:089 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ...I swear I have seen a similar double-triangle pattern before, although the spacing between the circles on the middle there are tighter... Oh. Hi, shameless advertisement.
2. 01:41:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can't really see what are you trying to do here. Maybe you're trying to make two triangles around here, but while playing, the circles look randomly placed. Well, not really a big deal.

Hinsvar wrote:

https://twitter.com/Yasorarara/status/229445686511407104

For you, sure.

SPOILER

Yasora wrote:

SPOILER

thank you XD

Hinsvar wrote:

For you, sure.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants.

>249's Easy

1. Uh... From what I've seen of you while modding this, you make a solid kiai time section into a "burst" one while mapping your diff, and this one looks to be of no exception. Just wondering... What's the reason? read this post and you'll understand.
2. 00:17:089 - Considering you mapped on all white ticks before the next spinner, why don't you add a circle here? I guess the idea here is to make a 2/1 rhythm because 00:16:166 is empty (and considering it's just 1/1 beat after a spinner, I'll let that slip), but the nothingness here feels weird, IMO. i did this intentionally because it's more like an introduction to the map. i want to keep this 1/1 gap because if i add a circle, it feels as if i'm rushing to get this diff done.
3. 00:22:628 (1) - What about if you make this a circle and then a 1/1 slider (1/1 beat after the circle), THEN apply NC to the slider? Using a repeating 1/1 slider just doesn't fit here, and NC doesn't really go well if you want to follow the phrasing of the lyrics (which seems to be what you're doing here). i did this because the vocals start here. i'm not following the instrumental for this part at all.
4. 00:26:320 (5) - Split this slider into two circles, and then NC the second one? Well, yeah, it's just that I'm not comfortable with the combo placement. hmm idk...i really want to keep this 1/1 slider because i find it fitting. if i add 2 circles, then i'll feel uncomfortable in the flow and note placement.
5. 00:32:320 (3) - ...Honestly, I went all "what" in my mind at this slider. It just doesn't fit the song, in my opinion. How about changing this slider? My idea's like this (Not feeling like taking a timeline picture, so I'll go with text only; also, if you're following this, NC the first slider for ALL choice, although I would choose A, which, while have some 1/2 sliders, goes with the song better):
   

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   Choice B: (C) x (S) x (S) x (S) x (S)

   
   *Note: (C) = Circle; (S)x(S) = 1/2 slider; (S) x (S) = 1/1 slider; x = Red tick; using 1/2 beat snap divisor. tbh i have no idea what you're saying here. give me screenshots so that i can understand a lot better.
6. 01:02:320 (3) - NC (new stanza and the slider's very long)? Also, yeah, I do respect this art, but don't you think 6/1 is... a bit too long? no and no. it makes me feel uncomfortable seeing this slider a NC and as long as it flows to the vocals, then it's fine.
7. 01:09:243 (3) - ...And this is 8/1. Well, at least this one is well-used, so it's fine I guess. yea looks like you noticed the lyrics change then the bump is hit.

So yeah, that's it. Nice song, btw.

Good luck on the way

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
My Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

AI Bat wrote:

249's Easy
00:11:987 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
00:11:987 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end). orz...Ya-chan did you change the offset again o.0?

249's Easy
01:21:243 (3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/MHag that slight blanket would be gone so no.
01:48:013 (3) - ctrl r? no the flow would be gone if i do that.




always nice mapset! good luck!

Byakugan249 wrote:

tbh i have no idea what you're saying here. give me screenshots so that i can understand a lot better.

• 249's Easy

1. 00:52:628 (1) - Doesn't seem to fit the vocals there, maybe no repeat and instead 2 hitcircles after the slider?
2. 00:56:782 (1,2) - This is the only part of the diff with a 1/2 beat...For the sake of those poor osu beginners, who totally can''t read this, I would try to handle this with shorter slider like you did in 00:49:859 (1)
3. 01:02:320 (3) - similar problem as above, however that probably only counts for very new players that only just started playing osu, those who would probably lose their combo at this slider, because they can't really see and understand the small loop it does, they would think it would just go on as any other slider, thus moving their cursor too fast and losing the sliderball... (Actually, that might be not such a big problem, I just noticed it while playing, and in a mod the modder's supposed to tell the mapper what the he notices, right? orz)
   
   Anyways, great diff!

• Normal

1. AR -1?
2. 00:53:320 (2) - Somehow it feels weird that here is no circle, maybe add one?
   
   Not much to complain about here either...

• Hard

1. 01:31:397 (1,3) - make those slider symmetrical
2. 01:41:551 (4) - Ctrl + R
3. 01:37:859 (3) - I would shape this and 01:39:705 (3) a little bit more flat (I mean they should look a little bit more like these: 01:31:397 (1,3)

• Insane

1. OD +1
2. 00:31:628 (4) - Why not making some jumps out of these 3 tones, they occur 4 times and 3 of those 4 times they are a repeating slider, u could add some more variation here
3. 01:15:936 (1,2,3) - Maybe flip those vertically?

Zarerion wrote:

Modding this becuz Kingdom Hearts <3
First of all, as I'm still new to mapping and modding, all of the following are really only suggestions, but even so I hope them to be helpful.

• 249's Easy

1. 00:52:628 (1) - Doesn't seem to fit the vocals there, maybe no repeat and instead 2 hitcircles after the slider? actually it does. listen to the repeat. the vocals change once that repeat is hit.
2. 00:56:782 (1,2) - This is the only part of the diff with a 1/2 beat...For the sake of those poor osu beginners, who totally can''t read this, I would try to handle this with shorter slider like you did in 00:49:859 (1) no then it'll look like a boring diff. i did this to challenge beginners on their timing. i want to make my diff easy, fun and somewhat challenging for beginners.
3. 01:02:320 (3) - similar problem as above, however that probably only counts for very new players that only just started playing osu, those who would probably lose their combo at this slider, because they can't really see and understand the small loop it does, they would think it would just go on as any other slider, thus moving their cursor too fast and losing the sliderball... (Actually, that might be not such a big problem, I just noticed it while playing, and in a mod the modder's supposed to tell the mapper what the he notices, right? orz) nope i've seen loops like this on easy diffs. if i don't put a loop on any of my easy diffs, it won't feel like a 249 diff at all. if beginners lose it, then that's their fault. they could try again until they can clear this loop correctly.
   
   Anyways, great diff!

Uhm well, this mapset is just awesome. Every diff flows quite well, you have a lot of variation, different patterns etc. as well as a ver good difficulty spread. It's just fun to play, which is exactly what a good beatmap should be like.

Looking forward to seeing this ranked (I have no doubt this will be ranked)

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Arnold0 wrote:

From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[249's Easy]
Your Kiai end is not the same as the other diffs and... The Kiai time on this diff is only 115 milisecond long o_O
Just active Kiai on the green timing point at offset 76743 and it will be fixed since the next timing point is the same as other diffs Kiai end. so? the kiai time can be inconsistent if there's a guest diff in the map.
00:12:012 (1) - I think this spinner should start here 00:11:782 - no i don't like starting notes before the offset.
00:16:166 - Add a note here no beginners won't have enough time to recover after the spinner.
00:17:089 - And here too (It follow the music better without making the map harder I think) after giving some thought, i decided to keep this 1/1 gap even. i feel that if i add another circle, it feels as if i'm rushing through the map.
01:02:320 (3) - No reverse arrow, ends at 01:03:705 - i added the repeat arrow because it flows to the vocals on the way back. if i remove it, it'll make me feel uncomfortable during gameplay.
01:04:166 - Add slider which ends at 01:05:089 - didn't follow the suggestion above, so ignored.
01:42:474 (5) - Maybe you can delete this note and start a spinner here which ends at 01:43:859 - ? again, beginners won't have enough time to recover after the spinner is complete.
01:45:474 - Add a slider which end at 01:45:936 - (del 01:45:705 (2) -. I think it follow the vocal better but maybe it's too hard it's up to you to see if you want to map on red ticks or not ^^) i'm not following the vocals, i'm following the bass in the song. you can't just follow vocals all the time, otherwise it might be a bad or boring diff. you have to follow the instrumental as well to keep the flow going in the song.
02:00:474 (4) - This sound special because there is a little blank in the music here. Move to 02:00:243 - you can make a slider which start at the (2) note and end were I say if you think two note in in row with one on the white and the other on the red tick is too hard. yea it'll look too hard for beginners to do. i want my easy diffs to be fun, straightforward, and somewhat challenging for beginners. in this case, i want this part to be straightforward.


Nice map and I liked the song Good luck with rank

As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

1. 00:26:320 (5) - make this slider neater.. try copy and pasting 00:24:936 (4) - and get rid of the reverse ^^
2. 00:46:628 (3) - move 3rd point to x:116 y:252
3. 00:50:782 (2) - make better blanket around 3?
4. 01:49:859 (1) - add whistle at beginning? sounds empty here

1. 00:32:320 (1) - ehhh NC might not be necessary, up to u tho
2. 01:01:166 (3) - move 3rd point to x:136 y:160
3. 01:28:859 (3) - a little nazi but move one grid up for perfect spacing with 2 and 1

1. 00:29:320 (2) - one grid to the left
2. 01:00:474 (3) - u are missing a finish sound here at the beginning
3. 01:14:782 (4) - NC here and remove the NC at the next note
4. 01:32:320 (3) - one grid to the right, to make spacing between 2 with 01:31:397 (1) - equal xD

1. 00:20:089 (2) - stack with 00:18:013 (3) -
2. 00:21:474 (2) - a triplet works here, js..but the slider here is fine i guess too xD don't want to ruin the little symmetry pattern
3. 01:01:859 (1) - remove NC here and NC on 01:02:320 (3) -
4. 01:03:705 (1) - remove NC here and NC on next note
5. 02:00:474 (1) - NC might not be necessary

meiikyuu wrote:

hello ^^ feel free to ignore what u dont like xD

249's Easy
no kiai time? xD ok lol nope . it's a kiai burst lol

1. 00:26:320 (5) - make this slider neater.. try copy and pasting 00:24:936 (4) - and get rid of the reverse ^^ no i actually did this so that this slider can be slightly aligned to (3), and the beginning of (4). i feel that doing that would make me feel uncomfortable.
2. 00:46:628 (3) - move 3rd point to x:116 y:252 no then it'll ruin the blanket for the end of the previous slider.
3. 00:50:782 (2) - make better blanket around 3? fine i'll adjust it...
4. 01:49:859 (1) - add whistle at beginning? sounds empty here no this part focuses on claps, so adding 1 whistle would ruin that consistency pattern.

no big problems here <3

i like this song too o_o, hope it gets ranked! star~~

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DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, it's me again .w.

Giving a deeper analysis of the beatmap, the song is too nice and I couldn't resist to make a map for my selfish fun, and I found inconsistence in the beats at the end of the song, so I found a better BPM, in my opinion, 130.034, same offset, you could try it. >w<

pimpG wrote:

249's easy

01:02:320 (3) - personaly i don like long sliders with repeat in this case
remove repeat, start another long slider at 01:04:166 end at 01:05:551.. (its consistent to the previous sliders)
and make 3 circles in the next white ticks ??
.......... no because it'd make me feel uncomfortable during gameplay, and the blanket between this and (2) at the next combo would be gone.
01:35:089 (1) - maybe end this slider at 01:36:013 and make 1/1 slider at 01:36:474 ? no that bump is good enough to let the player know that the lyrics are gonna change.
02:06:474 - spinner end here or in another long white tick? no the instrumental is still fading out here.

thats all

good luck ★

SPOILER

1. 00:20:081 (2,3,4) - I prefer something like this here, it's much tidier ((3) is stacked to (6)) plus the circular movement here plays more natural imo:
   
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2. 00:27:005 (2,3,4,5) - To avoid clustering here I prefer to use a triple first, then repeating slider instead of repeating slider first then triple (because on ~x:180 y:288 your free space is very available)
3. 00:31:158 (3) - (optional) Move to ~x:304 y:87? imo this angle flows better with your (4,5) because it's a straight line >_<
4. 00:36:005 (1) - Minor stuff, but actually you can move this to ~x:256 y:184 to form a triangle with your previous (6,1) :3
5. 00:38:543 (3,4,5) - (optional) Uhm, what's with (3)'s curve here >_< - arrange like this perhaps? Placing (5,6,7) in the middle of your two sliders flows better imo:
   
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6. 00:42:235 (2) - Move to ~x:130 y:57 to form a diamond on (1,2,3,4) here?
7. 00:46:505 (8,9) - Perhaps stack (8) to (2) and use a wave on (9) here for a fancier flow? xD
8. 00:52:620 (1) - ...uhm, if you can curve it more (and more symmetrical as well) it'll fit the vocals better:
   

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9. 00:58:620 (2) - (optional) Put in ~x:419 y:127 to make the spacing with (1) looks more natural?
10. 01:09:005 (4,1,2,3,4) - I think forcing (2) to overlap with (4) doesn't look good here... Again, definitely this part can be made more natural:
    
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11. 01:12:235 (3,4) - (optional) Would be awesome imo if the arc is downward instead : (3) in ~x:173 y:359, (4) in ~x:259 y:253
12. 01:12:928 (1) - Please move your red waypoint upper (~x:438 y:158), currently the red waypoint's placement is reeeeeeeeeally forced >_<
13. 01:17:543 (3) - (optional) Curve upward instead? I'd rather make the flow continuous with (4) and (1)...
14. 01:20:081 (6) - Move the whistle from (5) here? The vocal's pitch goes higher here...
15. 01:31:389 (1) - Starting on this point, idk why but imo it will be a lot fancier if you map following the secondary instrument (bass)... Just what I thought of though >_<
16. 01:41:081 (2,3,4,5,6) - ...don't really get the pattern here to be honest... Perhaps try this:
    
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17. 01:42:466 (1,2,3,4,5) - What are you following here actually... The song goes on nothing here - I suggest to at least remove (2) to follow the bass~
18. 01:52:158 (2,3) - (optional) Select both and then CTRL+R?
19. 01:58:158 (4,6) - Why the whistle discontinued here? The synth is still worth-following though...

1. 00:16:389 (3) - Curve this downward instead to give more power to the following jump?
2. 00:28:389 (4) - (optional) Put in ~x:321 y:135 to make (3,4,1) in a straight line?
3. 00:31:158 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - ...The jump (especially on (3,4)) looks quite random for me, perhaps arrange like this?
   
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4. 00:38:774 (3) - (optional) CTRL+R to make (3,4,5) a circular movement?
5. 00:45:928 (2,3,4) - Same here, I'd rather CTRL+R for a fancy flow~
6. 00:47:312 (2,3) - Remove one repeat on (3)? Because the vocal stops on 00:48:120...
7. 00:53:197 (2) - (optional) I'd curve this to the left instead to make an antagonistic effect with (1), but this is purely optional~
8. 00:57:005 (2,3,4,5) - Another jump which looks random for me... Try this instead perhaps?
   
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9. 01:03:120 (4) - Move the midpoint to ~x:291 y:173? Definitely curved too much compared to (3) here...
10. 01:09:235 (1) - (optional) Try to use a Z-shaped slider here, to follow the vocals' atmosphere more? (or at least make this more symmetrical orz, currently it's pretty much clear the midpoint is too far to the left)
11. 01:19:158 (3) - Hmm, actually I prefer to create a slider jump here, but it's not a must (:
12. 01:28:274 (2) - Err, is this triple intentional? Doesn't fit the rest of the map imo ._.
13. 01:34:620 (5,6) - Same as Insane - switch the whistle's position?
14. 01:38:543 (4,1) - Personally I really disliked the overlap here - try this instead?
    
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    [img][spoilerbox][img]http://i.imgur.com/ATf01.png[/img]
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15. 01:39:697 (3) - Why not just copy-paste this from (4) and flip horizontal orz ._.
16. 01:42:466 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:28:274, but this one makes more sense at least~
17. 01:43:389 (4,5) - (optional) idk why... I don't really feel right with the whistle's placement here - perhaps use whistle on (4)'s start and end + (5)'s end?
18. 01:56:774 (4,5) - ...why straight line here >_< - I really recommend a pseudo-pentagon pattern by placing (4) in ~x:370 y:12 and (5) in ~x:279 y:58

1. 00:18:697 (4) - ...drag midpoint to ~x:412 y:312 to avoid overlap? Minor stuff though >_<
2. 00:28:620 (1) - ...Why don't you add a circle here and start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after? The damp sound here sounds too dramatic not to be mapped imo ._.
3. 00:32:312 (1) - Why whistle here? Previously you don't have a consecutive two 1/1 whistles o.o
4. 00:35:081 (3) - (optional) Actually if you want to be safe you can just encircle 00:32:774 (2)'s start here~
5. 00:37:851 (1) - Err, to be honest I don't really get your shape here... If you're going for a tilted slider wave I suggest something like this though:
   
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6. 00:39:697 (1) - ...isn't the finish supposed to be on the next (1)'s start here? Whistle should be here instead imo xD
7. 00:50:312 (4) - (optional) Put slightly higher to emphasize the arc from (3)?
8. 00:50:312 (4,1,2,3) - Uhm, are you forming a diamond or square here? Looks nowhere closer to both imo... Creating a neat square/diamond here won't be hard though (:
   
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9. 01:03:005 (3) - (optional) Make this encircle (1)'s start instead?
10. 01:10:389 (4) - Whistle on slider's end here? Sounds good with the vocals and it also dramatizes your upcoming finish~
11. 01:12:235 (3,1) - Just a suggestion:
    
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12. 01:20:081 (4) - Remove whistle here? Personally I feel better without it as the vocal's main point is on your next (1)'s start here...
13. 01:23:543 (3) - Same here, I'd leave this with only clap as there's nothing for the whistle to follow here...
14. 01:25:158 (3) - (optional) imo it's better to face this slider to the right instead, it'll avoid clustering plus it'll also emphasize the triangle (:
15. 01:36:004 (2,2) - ...remove whistle on both (2)? Sounds better if less noisy imo :3
16. 01:58:159 (2,3,1,2,3) - I highly recommend to create a pentagon here - yes I can see you're trying to form a symmetry on (1,2,3), but it results in an abrupt angle between (3,1) >_<

1. 00:21:235 (3) - (optional) Not a fan of a wave here actually... Perhaps try this? xD
   
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2. 00:22:620 (1) - Finish (instead of whistle) sounds more dramatic on the repeat here imo~
3. 00:28:620 (1) - I'd rather add another circle here, start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after and form a diamond on (1,2,3,4) - looks fancier before the spinner this way I think :3
4. 00:34:620 (1,2) - (optional) I get your idea to create a straight line here, but perhaps move (1) to ~x:194 y:288 and (2) to ~x:254 y:362? Will be more elegant imo if (2) is in the center...
5. 00:36:928 (3,1) - ...err, why your clapping altered here? Previously your claps are consistent on downbeats, now they're 1/1 after downbeats o.o
6. 00:42:928 (4) - Suggestion, decrescendo here?
7. 00:49:851 (1) - Whistle on slider's end here won't hurt imo (plus it fits the vocals, really xD)
8. 00:52:620 (1,2) - (optional) Will be much tidier with slider encircles imo:
   
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9. 00:59:081 (4) - Perhaps move it slightly to the left? The arc here fits the vocal's atmosphere imo...
10. 01:00:466 (2) - ...also here, starting from here where the claps go, actually o.o
11. 01:09:235 (3) - (optional) To be honest I don't really like how this slider was shaped ("squared" waypoints)... I'd do something like this:
    

    237,84,69235,2,0,B|155:110|86:57|86:57|100:144|21:192,2,320,2|4|2

12. 01:22:158 (1) - ...remove finish here? No need for a finish 2/1 before your next one I think >_<
13. 01:33:235 (4) - I'd encircle (5) instead of (3) here, it'll avoid clustering imo~
14. 01:35:081 (1) - Same as my previous code, but for this you can just simply move the second bezier waypoint to ~x:80 y:185 to encircle (2) if you don't want to drastically alter the shape :3
15. 01:53:543 (1) - (optional) Finish on slider's start here, as Yasora did in her diffs?

Niva wrote:

[249's Easy]

1. 00:21:235 (3) - (optional) Not a fan of a wave here actually... Perhaps try this? xD
   
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   alright the blanket looks nicer...fixed.
2. 00:22:620 (1) - Finish (instead of whistle) sounds more dramatic on the repeat here imo~ the vocals aren't loud enough to add the finish so i feel that a whistle is loud enough to match the vocals.
3. 00:28:620 (1) - I'd rather add another circle here, start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after and form a diamond on (1,2,3,4) - looks fancier before the spinner this way I think :3 no i feel that i'd be rushing this part for beginners in this part of i do add a circle here.
4. 00:34:620 (1,2) - (optional) I get your idea to create a straight line here, but perhaps move (1) to ~x:194 y:288 and (2) to ~x:254 y:362? Will be more elegant imo if (2) is in the center... then the stack on (3) would be gone if i do move (2) at the center.
5. 00:36:928 (3,1) - ...err, why your clapping altered here? Previously your claps are consistent on downbeats, now they're 1/1 after downbeats o.o it's because of the lyrics. since it changes and since there's that sound in the instrumental, i want that to represent a new pattern in the song.
6. 00:42:928 (4) - Suggestion, decrescendo here? alright i've been thinking about this tbh...idk if i should be doing this or not, but alright, to emphasize the vocals.
7. 00:49:851 (1) - Whistle on slider's end here won't hurt imo (plus it fits the vocals, really xD) i disagree. i use my hitsounds wisely, in this case, if i add a whistle, then i'll find it unfitting and i feel that it doesn't belong there at all since it'll sound odd for me even if it matches the vocals.
8. 00:52:620 (1,2) - (optional) Will be much tidier with slider encircles imo:
   
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   alright it looks nice so fixed.
9. 00:59:081 (4) - Perhaps move it slightly to the left? The arc here fits the vocal's atmosphere imo... moved it to the right. i'd feel uncomfortable if i move it to the left.
10. 01:00:466 (2) - ...also here, starting from here where the claps go, actually o.o if you're saying that i should align this to (5), then no. i don't want to ruin that small blanket for this slider. although it may look bad, i want the flow to be smooth. making a shape out of this will break the flow during gameplay.
11. 01:09:235 (3) - (optional) To be honest I don't really like how this slider was shaped ("squared" waypoints)... I'd do something like this:
    

    237,84,69235,2,0,B|155:110|86:57|86:57|100:144|21:192,2,320,2|4|2

    hmm...alright it works.
12. 01:22:158 (1) - ...remove finish here? No need for a finish 2/1 before your next one I think >_< that finish is meant to match that sound in the instrumental. i feel that it'd sound odd with both whistles in this part.
13. 01:33:235 (4) - I'd encircle (5) instead of (3) here, it'll avoid clustering imo~
14. 01:35:081 (1) - Same as my previous code, but for this you can just simply move the second bezier waypoint to ~x:80 y:185 to encircle (2) if you don't want to drastically alter the shape :3 this one no. i will not ruin my blanket on (2,4) just for this.
15. 01:53:543 (1) - (optional) Finish on slider's start here, as Yasora did in her diffs? oh Ya-nyan did this? alright for consistency.

...imo current mapping is fine, but personally I think it's more fun to map based on the instruments on this song (especially on the higher diffs)...
Good luck then~

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Tsukasa wrote:

orz too nice...

It'd probably be a map people would go back playing. Here's a star isntead

Underflow wrote:

Hi, Yasora.

... Sorry, i can't mod this beatmap because this beatmap looks good for me T^T
this is some my suggestions...

[Normal]
- 01:09:248 (1) New Combo
- 01:51:687 (3) New Combo

General

249's Easy

01:13:864 (1) - spacing
01:35:072 (1) - move like this? looks better
01:57:226 (1) - ^

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/

Xavier18488 wrote:

Myyyyy moddddd! (Very noob mod :C)

Easy:
01:16:633 - 01:31:380 in kiai part and add preview point in the first timing selection as well no i don't like kiai times.
00:20:787 (2) - Remove whistle sound no that whistle is to emphasize the instrumental.
01:35:072 (1) - This isn't symmetrical and symmetrical is awesome
01:57:226 (1) - ^ fixed on the last mod.

Amazing music + Amazing mapset = Amazing star

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Title:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Deep River Byakugan249

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selova wrote:

hi yasora, req from mod queue

[249's Easy]
i think you have to follow yasora kiai times, nope kiai times can be different if there's a guest diff in the map
i prefer any note that placing just on white tick on 1/2 beat snap divisor, coz it easy diff... no if i do that, i'll find that boring and not fun for beginners.
i'm a little bit uncomfortable hearing about changing clap pattern, although the lyric vocal is changing too yes that's true but my hitsounding here is intentional...it mainly focuses on consistency and the vocals...the instrumental however not so much.
but it's fine... no problem,

1. Fix if you want.
   
   Unsnapped Inherited Lines

   01:31:402 -
   01:46:171 -
   01:46:402 -
   02:06:941
   Fine then.

1. 00:44:787 (4) - Put at 228,228? More square imo. (Nazi)
2. 01:08:556 (2,3) - I'd like to do like this. (A little bit change *o*) http://puu.sh/QGFT (Nazi)
3. 01:30:918 (3) - Add clap?

1. 01:35:995 (3) - Do like this? http://puu.sh/QGKn

2. 01:15:018 (1) - Remove NC?
3. 01:20:072 (6) - I dislike this where you put ._. Maybe put at 100,164?

1. Fix if you want.
   
   Unsnapped Inherited Lines

   01:31:402 -
   01:46:171 -
   01:46:402 -
   02:06:941
   Fine then.

1. 00:44:787 (4) - Put at 228,228? More square imo. (Nazi)
2. 01:08:556 (2,3) - I'd like to do like this. (A little bit change *o*) http://puu.sh/QGFT (Nazi)
3. 01:30:918 (3) - Add clap?

1. 01:35:995 (3) - Do like this? http://puu.sh/QGKn

2. 01:15:018 (1) - Remove NC?
3. 01:20:072 (6) - I dislike this where you put ._. Maybe put at 100,164?

Deif wrote:

Taken from #modreqs:

[249's Easy]

00:19:402 (1) - Seeing how you made the next slider (3), placing a corner down the beat of the music, I'd suggest you to do it in this slider as well. It'll fit pretty well to the melody. no i don't wanna be that complex...in this part i want to be simple, and straightforward to the point. so i feel that a curved slider would fit here, also the instrumental changes when (3) is hit.
00:52:633 (1,2) - In this case, it seems that the curvy one should be (1) and the sharp one (2). no the sharp slider is to emphasize the vocals...the curvy one is to emphasize the other part in the vocals.
00:56:787 (1,2) - You were probably trying to follow the lyrics placing 2 1/2 notes there, though the correct placement of (1) would be 00:56:90 in that case (1/4 distance in the timeline). Nevertheless, I'd suggest you to remove (1), or add a new note 00:57:941 (3) to balance those 2 sliders and make it more comfortable for new players. alright removed (1).
01:02:325 (3) - This slider is extremely long imo, because it covers 2 sentences of the lyrics while (1) just cover 1. To fix this, you can remove the repetition of (3) and place another slider (1) from 01:04:171 to 01:05:556, removing the current note (1). which is why i did this. if i remove the repeat, i'd feel as if something is missing here. i tried adding the sliders there and it just doesn't fit to my taste at all.


Good luck!

Behonkiss wrote:

Yay, Kingdom Hearts.

Easy:
00:49:864 (1): This is the only slider this short in this difficulty. It might throw novice players off. i wanna challenge beginners if they can hit this or not.
01:32:303 (2): Move this down a little so it's on the same horizontal plane as 1. then there would be no flow to this part of the song.
01:37:841 (3): Same here. ^. i did this intentionally to align this to the bump of (1)
02:00:918 (Spinner): Why doesn't this end at 02:02:764 like the other difficulties? oh she ended it there? alright for consistency.

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

249's Easy
00:34:633 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed. just realized that the hold is still going.
01:13:402 - Add note no the hold in the vocals is still going so adding a note here wouldn't fit here.
01:35:072 (1) - Fix 3rd (third) point on this slider trail to up 1 grid i don't see a difference during gameplay so no.
01:46:149 - Green line here isnt snapped. Is this the right sound effect? Please fix if not. yea it is...look again.
01:57:226 (1) - Again with point, but this time it is the first because of CTRL+R ~ same as 01:35:072.

Flask wrote:

Hi~ Request from CLANNAD Mod queue~

[249]

1. Fix if you want.
   
   Unsnapped Inherited Lines

   01:31:402 -
   01:46:171 -
   01:46:402 -
   02:06:941
   Fine then.

hmm? they're all snapped.

All nazi ;_;!
Good luck to you~

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Title:Hikari (PLANITb Remix)
Artist:Utada Hikaru
Creator:Yasora
Version:249's Easy
Source:Kingdom Hearts
Tags:Chain of Memories Birth by Sleep Re:coded Simple and Clean Disney Square Enix Byakugan249

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• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[249's Easy]

1. 00:21:248 (3) - 4th point on x:76 y:192
2. 00:22:633 (1) - 2th point on x:136 y:324 , 3rd point on x:180 y:320
3. 00:46:633 (3) - x:20 y:232 ?~
4. 00:50:787 (2) - 3th point on x:188 y:140
5. 01:47:995 (3) - 2th point on x:208 y:96

[Normal]

1. 00:25:864 (3) - x:136 y:164 ?~
2. 01:31:380 (1) - x:52 y:224 ?~
3. 01:45:226 (2) - x:300 y:324 ?~

[Hard]

1. 00:49:864 (3) - x:364 y:144 ?~
2. 00:39:710 (1) - ctrl + R ?~ flow will smooth ?~
3. 00:52:633 (1) - not pretty ;w;
4. 01:47:995 (1) - 3rd point on x:44 y:200 ,4th point on x:32 y:140

[Insane]

1. 00:48:479 (9) - last point on x:16 y:320

pimpG wrote:

general

01:16:593 - timeline here, bpm 130 (sounds better imo, please someone confirm it : D)

Niva wrote:

[General]

-> Actually you need another timing section - I'm very sure the offset shifts around your kiai time, this is what I got:

SPOILER

Matoryoshika wrote:

hello =w=b
sorry if my mod wasn't helpful

[Normal]

the star spread is 4 is quite far from easy =w=b

00:32:325 (1) - add finish? it sounds better IMO sure

00:40:633 (3) - Ctrl+H Ctrl+J Ctrl+R this and move up 1~2 grid for a better looking since it a little covered by hitburst *nazi I know the current was cover by hitburst, but that's already has consistent spacing

00:43:864 (2,3,4) - I think these clap aren't needed it has low vocal here also the whistle you may don't need it I think it would be more fit this way just removed in (3). the other for following the drum sound.

01:15:018 (2,3) - *gak kuat* dibagian ini whistle lebih cocok di pasang hanya di kepala slider karena whistle punya suara yang lebih tinggi ketimbang normal hitsound jadinya akan lebih pas karena mengikuti intrumennya ga ga kuat.. nvm ntahlah-- aku lebih suka ikutin suara2 dibelakangnya (?)

[Hard]

01:06:710 (4) - Ctrl+R this? also avoiding (1) covered by reverse arrow (well, I playtest it with osu! skin default) I think a little jump is acceptable in Hard umm-- i guess this is still playable altough that stacked with reverse arrow

01:23:072 (3) - Why don't try adding whistle here? it would fit the song IMO just like 01:26:764 (5,7) you add whistle to both right? following the instrument?

01:31:841 (1,3) - I tried to remove the whistles on the slider tail and it was not bad also it follow the vocal just removed in (1). because in (3) for following the instrument in bg music

01:35:995 (3) - I still don't know why it won't fit if you put whistle here maybe same reason as above? also a better slider anchor? http://puu.sh/Xzn4 so remove that and change shape right--

[Insane]

01:20:072 (6) - try move it to x:120 y:176 so it wouldn't covered by (4)'s hitburst or you can stack it with 01:21:226 (3) head slider ngg aku sengaja itu stack nya kyk gitu :v

that's all I can find, you're experience mapper so I can't find too much =w=

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[249's Easy]
00:31:402 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This clap pattern are not in upbeat. Please add clap the object when the note at upbeat (2nd and 4th tick) nope the whistles are already at the 2nd and 4th downbeat.
01:02:325 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider and map that part? no the flow going back flows smoothly to the vocals.
01:09:248 (3) - ^ ^

Ganbatteh

1. Fine~

1. 00:33:710 (2) - Oh please don't do this on easy. The hitburst from 00:32:325 (3) - is almost entirely cover up this slider body. It will be makes newbie confuse and rage because not seeing the slider body. Think of another pattern.
2. 00:42:941 (4) - You missing a clap here. Not consistant with your previous clap.
3. 00:57:018 (1) - This slider is having very bad polarity. You suddenly switch from white tick to red and then white again in the next note. This is hard to read especially for beginner. Try use this pattern, it won't change your rythim but it more easy to read http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/418249
4. 01:00:479 (2) - From here continue your clap rythim until 01:31:841 (1) - The claps suit the song from that point.

1. 00:41:556 (1) - Hmm, i think you should change the whistle here into finish. More nice to hear and more consistant to your finish rythim.
2. 00:57:018 (1) - Hmm, i think finish doesn't suit here. There's no sounds from the song that can support finish.
3. 01:06:248 (2) - Same, this whistle doesn't suit here, better to remove it.
4. Nothing else, nice diff >.<

1. 00:18:479 (3,4,5) - Do little jump here since you make a jump at 00:16:864 (4,5,6) -
2. 00:27:710 (3) - This jump is very high and too sudden. Doesn't follow the music very well too. Ctrl + R it please.
3. 00:32:094 (5,1) - Reduce the distance please, very high for a hard diff.
4. 00:35:094 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:35:325 (4,1) - Make this jump too. Not consistant with previous note.
6. 00:39:248 (4,5) - Reduce.
7. 00:39:479 (5,1) - Jump.
8. 00:42:941 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend this pattern for a hard diff. Besides is quite hard to read, also it's a bit messy with many hitburst.
9. 01:05:787 (2,3,4) - If you want, you can make this slider a bit jumpy since the vocal is quite heavy in this spot.
10. 01:19:380 (4,5) - If you do a jump at 01:23:072 (3,4) - the this note should be a jump too.
11. 01:26:995 (6,7) - Same as above.
12. Nothing wrong with the hitsounds and rythim. Just the jump is inconsistent in some part.

1. 00:53:210 (2) - A bit overmapped. Better to remove it. No vocal in 1/4 here.
2. 00:53:556 (3) - Hmm, since you following vocal at previous spot. This slider head is a bit overmapped then. Remove this slider and put a circle at 00:53:787-
3. 01:15:018 (1) - What's the purpose of new combo here? Better to remove it.
4. 01:28:264 (2,4) - This stream is a bit overmapped and not quite good to hear imo. Better to remove these circle.
5. 01:33:226 (1) - You should add another whistle at this slider end, not consistant with previous whistle.
6. 01:35:072 (1) - ^
7. 01:38:303 (6) - ^
8. 01:40:610 (1) - It's better if you put another finish at this slider start. The heavy beat from the song really fit for finish.

Miya wrote:

Normal

1. 00:41:556 (1) - Hmm, i think you should change the whistle here into finish. More nice to hear and more consistant to your finish rythim. ok
2. 00:57:018 (1) - Hmm, i think finish doesn't suit here. There's no sounds from the song that can support finish. ok
3. 01:06:248 (2) - Same, this whistle doesn't suit here, better to remove it. nope, for follow the vocal like (4)
4. Nothing else, nice diff >.< asek owob

Hard

1. 00:18:479 (3,4,5) - Do little jump here since you make a jump at 00:16:864 (4,5,6) - no, different rhythm in the music 0.0
2. 00:27:710 (3) - This jump is very high and too sudden. Doesn't follow the music very well too. Ctrl + R it please. ok
3. 00:32:094 (5,1) - Reduce the distance please, very high for a hard diff. ok stack at (5)
4. 00:35:094 (3,4) - ^ move (3)
5. 00:35:325 (4,1) - Make this jump too. Not consistant with previous note. ngg- nope-- I want make this seems symmetry
6. 00:39:248 (4,5) - Reduce. fine
7. 00:39:479 (5,1) - Jump. no--
8. 00:42:941 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend this pattern for a hard diff. Besides is quite hard to read, also it's a bit messy with many hitburst. k change into another pattern
9. 01:05:787 (2,3,4) - If you want, you can make this slider a bit jumpy since the vocal is quite heavy in this spot. I guess-- no
10. 01:19:380 (4,5) - If you do a jump at 01:23:072 (3,4) - the this note should be a jump too. following the vocal Q_Q
11. 01:26:995 (6,7) - Same as above. ^
12. Nothing wrong with the hitsounds and rythim. Just the jump is inconsistent in some part.

Insane

1. 00:53:210 (2) - A bit overmapped. Better to remove it. No vocal in 1/4 here. no, for following the vocal "ri"
2. 00:53:556 (3) - Hmm, since you following vocal at previous spot. This slider head is a bit overmapped then. Remove this slider and put a circle at 00:53:787- change into another rhythm
3. 01:15:018 (1) - What's the purpose of new combo here? Better to remove it. k
4. 01:28:264 (2,4) - This stream is a bit overmapped and not quite good to hear imo. Better to remove these circle. k
5. 01:33:226 (1) - You should add another whistle at this slider end, not consistant with previous whistle. nope-- not fit with the vocal imo
6. 01:35:072 (1) - ^ ^
7. 01:38:303 (6) - ^ already added--
8. 01:40:610 (1) - It's better if you put another finish at this slider start. The heavy beat from the song really fit for finish. ok

That's all nyaan~ @@

Miya wrote:

Nyaan :3~ Miya-nya~~~~

249's Easy

1. 00:33:710 (2) - Oh please don't do this on easy. The hitburst from 00:32:325 (3) - is almost entirely cover up this slider body. It will be makes newbie confuse and rage because not seeing the slider body. Think of another pattern. alright did something else, but i want to keep the notes.
2. 00:42:941 (4) - You missing a clap here. Not consistant with your previous clap. i did this intentionally. since the vocals are fading out in this part, a clap would ruin that moment and feeling in this part.
3. 00:57:018 (1) - This slider is having very bad polarity. You suddenly switch from white tick to red and then white again in the next note. This is hard to read especially for beginner. Try use this pattern, it won't change your rythim but it more easy to read http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/418249 yea i ran out of ideas when i did this. added.
4. 01:00:479 (2) - From here continue your clap rythim until 01:31:841 (1) - The claps suit the song from that point. i have a clap pattern in mind, but the problem is that the claps are at the sliderticks and that'll sound bad with the whistles in his part of the song during gameplay, so i can't do this.

That's all nyaan~ @@

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1. Normal is quite well done, but when I start playing this diff, the very start is already confusing me.
2. 00:15:825 - I thought there should be something here, to cover the keyboard. it would be fun to play if you follow the keyboard and bass mainly imo. and if I keeping this thing all along the map, there would be a wall modding you'd not want to see, so I just point this out.
3. 00:22:633 (5,6,7,8,1) - good
4. 00:27:941 (6,7,8,1) - consider making this a increasing spacing pattern? that would be cool when the slowdown happen
5. 00:54:479 (1,2) - make 1 shorter and another tail-slider? it fits the breathing point.
6. 01:30:918 (6,1) - the ends are not snapped properly
7. 01:33:226 (1) - you shouldn't use this as if you decide to tracking the vocal here, end at blue or find something else
8. 01:36:918 (1) - ^
9. 01:45:226 (3,4) - ^

1. 00:22:633 (5) - clap at the beginning
2. 01:36:918 (1,2,3) - the notes goes nowhere compared with either vocal or instrument
3. 01:45:572 (4) - cancel the whistles?

1. 00:18:017 (3,1,2,3) - claps on wrong ticks, use slidertick-replacement or just leave them blank.
2. 00:31:402 ~ 00:41:556 - claps on wrong ticks.

Colin Hou wrote:

M4M, and I'm here.

[Easy]

1. 00:18:017 (3,1,2,3) - claps on wrong ticks, use slidertick-replacement or just leave them blank. alright i'll apply the slidertick file. i hope Ya-nyan doesn't mind.
2. 00:31:402 ~ 00:41:556 - claps on wrong ticks. don't forget about the whistles. i added a clap at (1) as a start of the hitsound pattern in both the claps and whistles.

Insane is the best stage to impress how the song is. but normal did much better than it.
need more work, and good luck

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1. Use slider tick 2 . You're using 0.5x slider multiplier and this make the half speed 1/1 beat slider to have the same length as normal speed 1/2 beat slider. This could be fatal especially on Insane diff

1. The custom slider tick sounds louder compare to the rest. Try using timing sections to lower all the tick sounds by 10%
2. 00:31:402 (1) - According to your hit sound pattern, shouldn't the slider end is whistle not clap?
3. 00:41:094 - It's almost inaudible but I can still heat the drum roll from the slider slide. I don't know if this intentional though
4. 00:49:864 (1) - The short slider will easily confuse newbie who relies on vision, not to mention that this is the only 1/2 beat slider throughout the map
5. 01:44:764 - The custom sound for the slider tick sounds to conspicuous. It's better to remove this as the next 2 clap (on 01:45:226 & 01:45:687) are enough

1. SPOILER

   1. 00:21:248 (3) - This should be NC'ed
   2. 00:56:325 (4) - NC this
   3. 00:57:018 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 00:58:171 (5)
   4. 01:09:248 (3) - NC this
   5. 01:40:610 (3) - ^
   6. 01:51:687 (3) - ^
2. 00:43:402 (1,2,3,4) - Rather than the sharp clap, try using whistle or any other softer hit sound here. As you can hear the vocal gradually fade out here so the loud clap kinda ruin the song. You can gradually decrease the volume of each circle too

1. 00:17:556 (1) - Maybe continue the previous jump and increase the spacing to this slider? It's on the downbeat so it'll give more accent to the slider if you make it into a jump too
2. 00:24:479 (4) - I can't rally feel the jump because of the nature of the slider. Try changing it into circles to make the jumps more fun?
3. 00:40:633 (4,5,1) - Um... maybe mirror the slider so it'll be symmetry. It's looks awkward because the pattern are almost centered but the sliders aren't symmetry at all
4. 01:19:149 (3,4) - Rather than giving a jump only on these 2, it's better if you give jumps to all of 01:19:149 (3,4,5,6,7) that way you can give more emphasize on the whole phrase. Even if there is a stress on that place the jump looks bad, heck it looks like a spacing error first time I see it
5. 01:26:995 (6) - Try to increase the spacing to 1.6 here too. The whole jumps on 01:25:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) become awkward because of this small one
6. 01:55:149 (5) - Maybe use 1.6 spacing for the jump?
7. 02:00:457 (1) - Finish or maybe no hit sound like on insane diff?

1. 00:19:171 (5) - I suggest to change the jump to 1.5x then adjust the next jump to 1.5x too so the jumps are equal or make it into an increased jump like what you did on 00:24:248 (4,5,6)
2. 01:26:995 (3,4,5) - The jump then change back to normal spacing is very sudden and it plays awkward. If you want to give a jump here, try to make all of those 3 objects into jump. That way will make the jump more balance and it'll emphasized the current phrase of the vocal
3. 01:32:764 (6) - Normal spacing suited better here. There's no change what so ever on the music to warrant a jump
4. 01:43:611 (4) - ^
5. 01:48:803 (3) - This kick slider is hard to see because of the previous slider's hit burst. You can try readjust 01:47:995 (1) to make 3 more visible

Sallad4ever wrote:

Me like kingdom Hearts better

[General]

1. Use slider tick 2 . You're using 0.5x slider multiplier and this make the half speed 1/1 beat slider to have the same length as normal speed 1/2 beat slider. This could be fatal especially on Insane diff

no not for me. i have a low SV in this diff and i don't want to see the sliderticks cluttered in 1 slider.

[249's Easy]

1. The custom slider tick sounds louder compare to the rest. Try using timing sections to lower all the tick sounds by 10% for now i'l keep it. i want to hear opinions about this.
2. 00:31:402 (1) - According to your hit sound pattern, shouldn't the slider end is whistle not clap? no because since i have a finish on the spinner, it shows that a new pattern is coming.
3. 00:41:094 - It's almost inaudible but I can still heat the drum roll from the slider slide. I don't know if this intentional though oh this is intentional for consistency. i also did this for more effect in the drums.
4. 00:49:864 (1) - The short slider will easily confuse newbie who relies on vision, not to mention that this is the only 1/2 beat slider throughout the map ooh...alright i'll make this a 1/1 slider instead.
5. 01:44:764 - The custom sound for the slider tick sounds to conspicuous. It's better to remove this as the next 2 clap (on 01:45:226 & 01:45:687) are enough alright i'll remove it. it might bother beginners as well.

That's all from me. Good Luck with the map :3

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Byakugan249 wrote:

omg sorry about the delay. i'll see if i can get to his mod reply tomorrow

Gabe wrote:

Hi Yasora and Byakugan.
Actually, this was a mod request from my one hour modding queue, so I'm sorry for the really big delay. o/

Easy
Well, that's a pretty good difficulty. I only have two things to say..
00:18:017 (3) - I don't understand the hitsounds here... It's not consistent and it should be. My suggestion is to add a clap to the first note of the slider and the end to make the claps consistent. Also, on the reverse arrow, I'm suggesting you to replace the clap by a whistle. this is 100% intentional because the whistles are meant to match the hard beats in this part of the song, which is why the whistles are at every 1st downbeat, and for the claps...well that part alone is for consistency in that combo only...the rest is at every 2nd and 4th downbeat because the beat changes in the combo.
01:16:611 - To make every Kiai time consistent, you should really add a Kiai time here and it would ends at 01:31:380 like the other difficulties. Also, I won't understand if you refuse this suggestion.. i don't like kiai times. i find them boring and not exciting for me. i'd prefer kiai bursts because i want to give off a "bang", like fireworks shooting out of the sky.

It's a really nice mapset. It deserve to be ranked really soon (:

  - [249's Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:16:726    ( I think you have messed up something here?)

  - [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:31:380

  - [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:31:380

  - [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:31:380

Folder seems fine..

00:22:633 (5) - Add NC here?
01:53:072 (5) - ^

I left out Hard and Normal because they were fine!

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.

Deni wrote:

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General

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [249's Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:16:611, ends on 01:16:726 ( I think you have messed up something here?) nope kiai times can be different if there's a guest diff in the map.


Folder seems fine..

249's Easy

01:21:687 (4) - New Combo no because the vocals in (1) are like the bass. basically, i'm following the melody.
01:22:149 (1) - Remove New Combo if ^ didn't follow the suggestion, so ignored.
01:55:380 (3,1) - Overlap this is intentional for a smoother transition to the next note.
I left out Hard and Normal because they were fine!

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