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P!nk - Family Portrait

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Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 1. September 2014 at 00:25:11

Artist: P!nk
Title: Family Portrait
Tags: Missundaztood Pink
BPM: 91,8
Filesize: 7095kb
Play Time: 04:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,29 stars, 257 notes)
  2. Hard (2,99 stars, 544 notes)
  3. Normal (1,58 stars, 341 notes)
Download: P!nk - Family Portrait
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I don't want love to destroy me
Like it has done my family.
Last edited by Ylinestra44 , edited 28 times in total.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani


Overall
For the kiai sections, I suggest using normal hitsounds for this just so it's more impactful.

Hard:
k

Normal:
00:24:073 (4) - NC
00:30:282 (7) - Pull the middle sliderticks back a bit

Easy:
k

This is good and you should feel good.
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

CDFA wrote:

Overall
For the kiai sections, I suggest using normal hitsounds for this just so it's more impactful. I listened to it. I disaggree, because the slider are kinda noisy then. I would have to decrease the Volume, but then you wouldn't hear the hit or the whistle that well.

Hard:
k

Normal:
00:24:073 (4) - NC Done
00:30:282 (7) - Pull the middle sliderticks back a bit Done

Easy:
k

This is good and you should feel good.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
hi there! random mod

[General]
clear

[Easy]
maybe use hitsounds like (at least for kiai parts)
1st Big white line - none
2nd white line - whistle
3 rd white line - nothing
4th white line - clap
....

maybe add some breaks for easy? beginners need more time to rest :)

[Normal]
00:13:615 (3,4) - this one not looks good. ugly crossing


[Hard]
i guess Normal hitsounds fits with song, too. just try them for some sections. :)
00:30:282 (10) - seems like note in the end should be a bit louder (clap or finish i guess)
00:43:354 (3,4,5) - hmm.. i guess you can make (3) and (5) cover (4) better w/o ruining this symmetrical pattern :3
00:54:628 (5) - thisfits with song better IMO (just pointing out that 00:55:282 here should be something IMO)
01:08:844 (1) - maybe this?
01:43:811 (10) - clap in the reverse arrow. (and in the same places?)
02:07:668 (6,6,...and so on) - claps?
02:51:785 (5) - clap at the start?
03:54:530 (6) - whistle? ~_~
04:05:968 (5,1) - ^

~~~~~~~~~

Awesome! gl~
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod =)

-Bakari- wrote:

hi there! random mod

[General]
clear

[Easy]
maybe use hitsounds like (at least for kiai parts)
1st Big white line - none
2nd white line - whistle
3 rd white line - nothing
4th white line - clap
....
Did this in all diffs

maybe add some breaks for easy? beginners need more time to rest :) Hm, no, I wann keep the breaks consistent

[Normal]
00:13:615 (3,4) - this one not looks good. ugly crossing Changed


[Hard]
i guess Normal hitsounds fits with song, too. just try them for some sections. :) I use normal hitsounds? I just have a silenced sliderslider, that's all
00:30:282 (10) - seems like note in the end should be a bit louder (clap or finish i guess) In my opinion clap or finish sounds outside the Kiai too noisy --> kept the whistle
00:43:354 (3,4,5) - hmm.. i guess you can make (3) and (5) cover (4) better w/o ruining this symmetrical pattern :3 I tried -- didn't work D:
00:54:628 (5) - thisfits with song better IMO (just pointing out that 00:55:282 here should be something IMO) Added the note, but didn't replace the slider by circles
01:08:844 (1) - maybe this? Done and fixed spacing afterwards
01:43:811 (10) - clap in the reverse arrow. (and in the same places?) Sounds strange for me --> Disaggree
02:07:668 (6,6,...and so on) - claps? ^
02:51:785 (5) - clap at the start? Disaggree
03:54:530 (6) - whistle? ~_~ Done
04:05:968 (5,1) - ^ ^

~~~~~~~~~

Awesome! gl~
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
This is a great beatmap!!
GL in getting it ranked^^

No Kudosu, pls^^

Star^^
Tshemmp
1,405 posts
Joined June 2011
Tshemmp
Hi. If you don't like my suggestions don't give me kudos.

[Hard]
There is an inconsistency with your NCs at the beginning. Once you have a NC already on the stream 00:02:831 (1), once you have one on the slider after the stream 00:05:772 (1). I suggest removing the NC on 00:02:831 (1).
00:10:021 (1) - finish
00:13:289 (5) - NC
00:15:249 (1,2) - nice ^^
00:17:864 (3) - maybe NC
00:22:602 (4) - move to x:460 y:216, this feels better
00:24:563 (2,3,4,5) - something like this would feel better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329451
01:03:289 (2) - finish on start with 60% volume, 01:03:615 80% volume here again
01:05:903 (2) - same as ^
01:13:746 (1) - ^
01:16:360 (2) - ^
01:12:439 (8) - shorten by one repeat, ctrl+r, and add a circle at 01:13:093 over 01:13:419 (9)
02:06:034 (3) - same as 01:03:289
02:08:648 (3) - ^
02:16:491 (1) - ^
02:19:106 (1) - ^
02:44:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would increase th spacing between these
02:47:864 (1) - whistle on start? It sounds a bit empty here.
02:50:478 (1) - ^
and so on on every first beat in each measure until 03:06:164 (1)
03:29:694 (1) - same as 01:03:289
03:32:308 (1) - ^
03:40:151 (1) - ^
03:42:766 (1) - ^
03:50:609 (6) - finish
04:09:236 (6) - make this more like a wave slider
04:32:439 - maybe lower SV here, for example 0,75x. You will have to remake all sliders and the spacing then, though.

Although I don't like maps with this style I have to admit that this diff is pretty good.

[Normal]
AR 5 maybe.
00:30:282 (7) - this slider should be curved mroe evenly
00:43:681 (3) - nazi: one grid to the right for equal spacing
01:03:289 - do it with the finishes like in Hard
01:11:132 (5) - make it curved like this, it feels better: http://puu.sh/xHpU
02:06:034 - again the finishes
03:12:700 (6,7,8,1) - make it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329478? You have to re-adjust the spacing between 03:14:008 (1,2) then ofcourse.
03:29:694 - finishes like in Hard
04:32:439 - maybe lower SV here, for example 0,75x. You will have to remake all sliders and the spacing then, though.


[Easy]
AR 3 maybe.
00:03:158 (1) - hm, in Hard and Normal you always added a NC every two measures. You should do this here too, so remove this NC and the following ones where this case applies. Or you change your NCs in Hard and Normal.
01:03:289 - apply the finishes like you did (or didn't you do it?) in Hard and Normal
02:06:034 - finishes, you know what I mean
03:06:164 (1,2) - like this: http://puu.sh/xHAb?
03:12:700 (3) - return slider like at 03:10:086 (2)?
03:29:694 - finishes
04:32:439 - maybe lower SV here, for example 0,75x. You will have to remake all sliders and the spacing then, though.

Yo, that's it. You got a really good looking mapset here, not much I can find. Star.
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod =)

Tshemmp wrote:

Hi. If you don't like my suggestions don't give me kudos. I don't only give kudo for the quality of the suggestions, but also for the effort of modding itself

[Hard]
There is an inconsistency with your NCs at the beginning. Once you have a NC already on the stream 00:02:831 (1), once you have one on the slider after the stream 00:05:772 (1). I suggest removing the NC on 00:02:831 (1). Done
00:10:021 (1) - finish Done
00:13:289 (5) - NC Done
00:15:249 (1,2) - nice ^^ :3
00:17:864 (3) - maybe NC Done
00:22:602 (4) - move to x:460 y:216, this feels better Done
00:24:563 (2,3,4,5) - something like this would feel better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329451 Done
01:03:289 (2) - finish on start with 60% volume, 01:03:615 80% volume here again Done
01:05:903 (2) - same as ^ Done
01:13:746 (1) - ^ Done
01:16:360 (2) - ^ Done
01:12:439 (8) - shorten by one repeat, ctrl+r, and add a circle at 01:13:093 over 01:13:419 (9) Done
02:06:034 (3) - same as 01:03:289 Done
02:08:648 (3) - ^ Done
02:16:491 (1) - ^ Done
02:19:106 (1) - ^ Done
02:44:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would increase th spacing between these I'll keep it for the moment, and change, when more suggest this
02:47:864 (1) - whistle on start? It sounds a bit empty here. Done
02:50:478 (1) - ^ Done
and so on on every first beat in each measure until 03:06:164 (1) Done
03:29:694 (1) - same as 01:03:289 Done
03:32:308 (1) - ^ Done
03:40:151 (1) - ^ Done
03:42:766 (1) - ^ Done
03:50:609 (6) - finish Done
04:09:236 (6) - make this more like a wave slider Done
04:32:439 - maybe lower SV here, for example 0,75x. You will have to remake all sliders and the spacing then, though. Disaggree, because too lazy~

Although I don't like maps with this style I have to admit that this diff is pretty good. What an honour for my map xD

[Normal]
AR 5 maybe. Done
00:30:282 (7) - this slider should be curved mroe evenly Done
00:43:681 (3) - nazi: one grid to the right for equal spacing Done
01:03:289 - do it with the finishes like in Hard Done
01:11:132 (5) - make it curved like this, it feels better: http://puu.sh/xHpU Disaggree
02:06:034 - again the finishes Done
03:12:700 (6,7,8,1) - make it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329478? You have to re-adjust the spacing between 03:14:008 (1,2) then ofcourse. Disaggree
03:29:694 - finishes like in Hard Done
04:32:439 - maybe lower SV here, for example 0,75x. You will have to remake all sliders and the spacing then, though. Same as in Hard


[Easy]
AR 3 maybe. Done
00:03:158 (1) - hm, in Hard and Normal you always added a NC every two measures. You should do this here too, so remove this NC and the following ones where this case applies. Or you change your NCs in Hard and Normal. I did this here, because in [easy] the Combo shouldn't become such big (with a NC every two measures I would have about 5-6 combo everytime)01:03:289 - apply the finishes like you did (or didn't you do it?) in Hard and Normal
02:06:034 - finishes, you know what I mean Done
03:06:164 (1,2) - like this: http://puu.sh/xHAb? Done
03:12:700 (3) - return slider like at 03:10:086 (2)? Done
03:29:694 - finishes Done
04:32:439 - maybe lower SV here, for example 0,75x. You will have to remake all sliders and the spacing then, though. Same as in Hard

Yo, that's it. You got a really good looking mapset here, not much I can find. Star. Thanks :3
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
[Easy]
00:58:713 (1) - end at 01:01:981
02:01:459 (1) - end at 02:04:727

[Normal]
00:58:713 (1) - end at 01:01:981
02:01:459 (1) - end at 02:04:727

[Hard]
02:05:380 (1,2,3) - Please change to same spacing
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Thanks for the mod

Muya wrote:

[Easy]
00:58:713 (1) - end at 01:01:981 Done
02:01:459 (1) - end at 02:04:727 Done

[Normal]
00:58:713 (1) - end at 01:01:981 Done
02:01:459 (1) - end at 02:04:727 Done

[Hard]
02:05:380 (1,2,3) - Please change to same spacing Done
RusselG
RusselG
Hard


  • 00:50:217 (6) - make this a finish
    01:07:537 (5) - finish i guess
    01:13:419 (10) - finish!
    01:45:445 (2) - ^
    02:05:707 (2) - ^
    02:05:707 (2) - ^
    02:05:707 (2) - ^
    02:05:707 (2) - ^
    02:51:459 (4) - ^
    02:55:380 (6) - ^
    03:08:452 (5) - ^
    03:13:027 (5) - ^
    03:22:831 (3) - ^
    03:24:138 (6) - ^
    03:33:942 (5) - ^
    03:39:171 (5) - ^
    03:44:400 (5) - clap!
[Normal]
00:36:491 (7) - clap here!
00:41:720 (8) - ^
00:47:602 (1) - add a finish
00:50:217 (5) - ^
00:52:831 (1) - ^
01:45:119 (1) - ^
01:50:347 (1) - ^
02:53:093 (1) - ^
03:19:236 (1) - ^

[Easy]
easy is fine! :D
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44

RusselG wrote:

Hard


  • 00:50:217 (6) - make this a finish Done
    01:07:537 (5) - finish i guess Disaggree
    01:13:419 (10) - finish! ^
    01:45:445 (2) - ^ ^
    02:05:707 (2) - ^ ^
    02:05:707 (2) - ^ ^
    02:05:707 (2) - ^ ^
    02:05:707 (2) - ^ ^
    02:51:459 (4) - ^ ^
    02:55:380 (6) - ^ ^
    03:08:452 (5) - ^ ^
    03:13:027 (5) - ^ ^
    03:22:831 (3) - ^ ^
    03:24:138 (6) - ^ ^
    03:33:942 (5) - ^ ^
    03:39:171 (5) - ^ ^
    03:44:400 (5) - clap! ^
[Normal]
00:36:491 (7) - clap here! Disaggree
00:41:720 (8) - ^ ^
00:47:602 (1) - add a finish ^
00:50:217 (5) - ^ Done
00:52:831 (1) - ^ Disaggree
01:45:119 (1) - ^ ^
01:50:347 (1) - ^ ^
02:53:093 (1) - ^ ^
03:19:236 (1) - ^ ^

[Easy]
easy is fine! :D
DampfNudel
79 posts
Joined August 2011
DampfNudel
Hey, hatte grad Zeit also dachte ich mir ich Mod mal deine Map :3 Wenn dir der Mod nicht gefällt gib mir auch kein Kudosu!

Los gehts,


Easy

Overall Difficulty auf 2

01:08:517 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
01:18:975 (1,2) - Warum haste da ein kurzen dann langen?? mach es lieber wie da 01:08:517 (1) - mit einem reverse dann kannste auch schon wieder ein finish hinmachen :3
01:22:243 - Remove whistle add clap
01:24:204 - Add circle with finish
02:11:262 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
02:21:720 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
02:26:949 - Add circle with finish
02:47:864 (1) - Ein clap auf den anfang
02:50:478 - (1) - Ein clap auf den anfang
02:53:093 - (1) - Ein clap auf den anfang
02:58:321 (1) - Add clap
03:00:936 (1) - Add clap
03:03:550 (1) - Ein clap auf den anfang
03:08:779 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:11:393 (1) - Add finish
03:14:008 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:19:236 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:21:851 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:34:923 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:45:380 (1) - Add finish
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330097 <-- Absicht das die Circles nicht auf den Mittellinien sind?


Normal

01:24:204 - Add circle with Finish
02:26:949 - Add circle with Finish
02:47:864 (1) - Add finish
02:49:171 (3) - Add claps
02:50:478 (5) - Add finish
02:51:785 (7,8) - Add claps
02:53:093 (1) - Add finish
02:54:400 (3) - Add claps
02:55:707 (5) - Auf den start von dem slider ein whistle
02:56:687 (7) - Aufs ende von dem slider ein whistle
02:58:321 (1) - Auf den anfang ein Finish und aufs ende ein clap
02:59:955 (2) - Add clap
03:00:936 (4) - Auf den anfang ein finish und aufs ende ein clap
03:02:570 (5) - Add clap
03:03:550 (1) - Add finsih
03:04:857 (3) - Auf den anfang ein clap
03:08:779 (1) - Auf den anfang ein finish
03:11:393 (4) - Add finish
03:14:008 (1) - Auf den anfang ein finish
03:19:236 (1) - Add finish
03:21:851 (6) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:34:923 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:45:380 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:47:341 - Mach den slider weg und mach ein circle hin >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330128 <<
04:00:086 - Add circle
04:02:700 - Add circle
04:10:543 - Add circle
04:13:158 - Add circle
04:15:772 - Add circle
04:21:001 - Add circle
04:23:615 - Add circle
04:39:302 - Add circle


Hard

00:15:249 (1,2) - Respekt die sehen echt geil aus. Wollte ich nur mal gesagt haben :)
00:50:217 (1) - New combo
01:24:204 - Add circle with finish
01:55:740 (5) - Den würd ich zu weißen combo dazu nehmen o:
02:14:204 (3) - FORM DEN SCHÖNER (der is so lieblos hingeklatscht "nazimod" sorry xD)
02:26:949 - Add circle with finish
02:44:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wie ich es dir schonmal IRC gesagt habe das spielt sich suck mag sein das sie 1/3 singt aber es spielt sich einfach dreckig!!
02:47:864 (1) - Ein clap auf den anfang
02:50:478 (1) - Remove whistle add clap
02:53:093 (1) - Remove whistle add clap
02:58:321 (2) - Remove whistle add clap
03:00:936 (1) - Remove whistle add clap
03:03:550 (7) - Remove whistle add clap
03:08:779 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:11:393 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:14:008 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:19:236 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:21:851 (1) - Ein finish auf den anfang
03:52:352 (2) - Was soll das ?? Wir wäre es mit so etwas >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330140 <<
03:54:966 (1) - Genau das gleiche o.O das is fu (sorry) einfach aufs klavier zu mappen das sowieso sehr schnell zu überhören ist...
04:04:334 (3,4) - Hier denke ich ist es angebracht den langen slider auf dem weißen strich starten zu lassen ihn dafür kleiner zu machen und dann da wo der slider eigentlich startet den kurzen slider davor einen revers zu geben oder einen circle einzusetzen hier die Beispiele falls es schlecht zu verstehen ist >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330142 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330144 <<
04:13:267 (6) - Hier und bei den folgenden ist das wieder ok da hört man das klavier ja o:

Falls du dich fragst wieso ich bei der hard nicht alle hitsounds genauso gesagt habe wie bei Easy&Normal liegt das daran das man bei Hard das einfach nicht so braucht da man mehr Slider, Circles hat die den Eigenbeat machen o:


Alles in allem eine sehr gelungene Map ich hoffe ich konnte dir helfen und Viel Glück :)
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Okay, ich bin wirklich einfach nur zu faul, um auf das alles einzeln zu antworten.
Paar Hitsounds hab ich gemacht, viele nicht, und meine 1/3-Slider bleiben!
Trotzdem danke xD
Behon
Elite Mapper
1,380 posts
Here since the beginning
Behon
Easy:
The earlier parts of this are too repetitive in terms of note timing; a lot of just placing one every beat over and over. Try spicing it up a little.
03:39:498 (3) - Consider placing this right on the same horizontal plane as the previous circle. It'll look neater.
03:59:759 (3) - Same as above, only with the vertical plane.

Normal:
01:39:890 (1) - Consider getting rid of new combo here...
01:40:544 (2) - And apply it to this one instead.
04:04:661 (7) - Try matching this horizontally with 6.

Hard:
01:07:864 (6,7,8) - This part seems overly busy, mainly with the short repeat slider that is 7. Try simplying it a little.
03:59:923 - Maybe add a hitcircle here? Or move 6 up to it?
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
Hi~ from my queue
every thing is suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER
Easy
I think you don't need Easy diff becuase Normal diff's star rating is 3
or add more note :P

Normal
01:24:204 (8) - add note here?
01:38:583 (1) - NC
01:39:890 (3) - remove NC
01:40:544 (4) - NC
01:48:060 (6) - ^
01:52:962 (1) - ^
01:58:517 (1) - ^
02:07:994 (4) - ^
02:18:452 (4) - ^
02:23:681 (4) - ^
02:26:949 (9) - add note here?
02:40:347 (1) - NC
02:50:478 (1) - ^
02:55:707 (5) - ^
02:57:668 (1) -
02:58:321 (3) - remove NC
03:00:936 (1) - NC
03:11:393 (1) - ^
03:16:622 (4) - ^
03:21:197 (5) - ^
03:27:079 (5) - ^
03:32:308 (4) - ^
03:42:766 (4) - ^
03:47:994 (4) - ^
03:53:223 (5) - ^
03:58:452 (4) - ^
04:03:681 (5) - ^
04:13:485 (3) - ^

Hard
00:08:387 (1) - NC
00:29:302 (9) - ^
00:34:530 (6) - ^
01:07:864 (6) - ^
01:08:844 (1) - remove nc
01:10:478 (5) - NC
01:18:321 (6) - ^
01:19:302 (1) - remove nc
01:20:936 (6) - nc
01:24:204 - how about one more repeat this slider? 01:23:223 (12) -
and add finish
01:43:158 (8) - NC
01:58:517 (5) - ^
02:25:968 (10) - same as 01:24:204
03:03:550 (7) - nc
03:04:204 (1) - remove nc
03:52:352 (2) - I think other slider or note is better
03:54:966 (1) - ^
03:57:581 (1) - ^
04:00:195 (6) - ^
04:13:267 (6,6,6,6) - ^
04:34:182 (8,8,8,8) - ^
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Changed some things, but especially the NC I didn't change, because I prefer them like I made them.
Either way, thanks you both.
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
GamerX4life
My Mod:

[Easy]
  1. 00:41:066 (2) stattdessen: http://puu.sh/y6VA
  2. 00:56:753 (3) das gleiche
  3. 01:40:544 mach den Repeater weg und mach bei 01:41:524 einen slider zu 01:41:851 hin
  4. 01:52:962 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y75h
  5. 02:18:779 add note
  6. 03:58:452 (1,2,3,4) warum nicht symmetrisch anordnen?
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:060 stattdessen: ein Slider mit der gleichen länge wie (6), aber ohne Repeat
  2. 02:16:491 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y7b9
  3. 02:40:021 (5,6) besser erst den Slider und dann den Circle
  4. 04:39:628 (3,4,5,6) versuch diese Formation: http://puu.sh/y7f8
  5. 04:42:243 New Combo würd hier passen
  6. und mach mal für die letzten 3 nicht nur eine Linie: http://puu.sh/y7fr
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:642 (4) 1 grid nach unten und einen nach rechts
  2. 00:20:968 ^ kopiere dann (4) und füg es hier (und Strg+H/ Strg+J)
  3. 00:24:727 (3,4,5) Ich würd das etwas auseinande rziehen: http://puu.sh/y7ib (und fix spacing)
  4. 01:49:204 (5) stattdessen: einen Slider der ohne Repeat die gleiche Länge hat
  5. 03:06:164 das würde gut besser passen: http://puu.sh/y7lr
  6. 04:10:543 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y7mU
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Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ylinestra44
Danke für den mod

GamerX4life wrote:

My Mod:

[Easy]
  1. 00:41:066 (2) stattdessen: http://puu.sh/y6VA Gemacht
  2. 00:56:753 (3) das gleiche Gemacht
  3. 01:40:544 mach den Repeater weg und mach bei 01:41:524 einen slider zu 01:41:851 hin Gemacht
  4. 01:52:962 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y75h Gemacht
  5. 02:18:779 add note Gemacht
  6. 03:58:452 (1,2,3,4) warum nicht symmetrisch anordnen? Die sind symmetrisch: Punktsymmetrisch
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:060 stattdessen: ein Slider mit der gleichen länge wie (6), aber ohne Repeat Disaggree
  2. 02:16:491 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y7b9 Nicht sicher, hab's aber glaube ich nicht gemacht
  3. 02:40:021 (5,6) besser erst den Slider und dann den Circle Gemacht
  4. 04:39:628 (3,4,5,6) versuch diese Formation: http://puu.sh/y7f8 Gemacht
  5. 04:42:243 New Combo würd hier passen Gemacht
  6. und mach mal für die letzten 3 nicht nur eine Linie: http://puu.sh/y7fr Gemacht
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:642 (4) 1 grid nach unten und einen nach rechts Gemacht
  2. 00:20:968 ^ kopiere dann (4) und füg es hier (und Strg+H/ Strg+J) Gemacht
  3. 00:24:727 (3,4,5) Ich würd das etwas auseinande rziehen: http://puu.sh/y7ib (und fix spacing)Gemacht
  4. 01:49:204 (5) stattdessen: einen Slider der ohne Repeat die gleiche Länge hat negativ
  5. 03:06:164 das würde gut besser passen: http://puu.sh/y7lr Negativ
  6. 04:10:543 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y7mU negativ
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Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
hi ^.^

HARD

00:56:589 - maybe add note here?
00:58:713 - hm i think this slider very long ._. maybe you make so http://puu.sh/yknL
01:39:563(5) - make this slider double
03:52:243 - this slider not sound here make on 1\4

NORMAL

01:08:517 - add finish here with volume 60%
01:11:132 - ^
01:18:975 - ^
01:21:589 - ^
02:40:674 - put this note so http://puu.sh/ykNT it more playable
02:58:321 - i thinl this sound better http://puu.sh/ykPx make symmetry http://puu.sh/ykPL

EASY

00:16:557 -replace this slider on 2 notes in white ticks
01:20:936 - oh i think it will be difficult for begginers maybe make so http://puu.sh/ykVU
02:23:681 - ^

it's all for me, nice map ^.^ good luck~~
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