1. Easy (1,29 stars, 257 notes)
2. Hard (2,99 stars, 544 notes)
3. Normal (1,58 stars, 341 notes)

CDFA wrote:

Overall
For the kiai sections, I suggest using normal hitsounds for this just so it's more impactful. I listened to it. I disaggree, because the slider are kinda noisy then. I would have to decrease the Volume, but then you wouldn't hear the hit or the whistle that well.

Hard:
k

Normal:
00:24:073 (4) - NC Done
00:30:282 (7) - Pull the middle sliderticks back a bit Done

Easy:
k

This is good and you should feel good.

-Bakari- wrote:

hi there! random mod

[General]
clear

[Easy]
maybe use hitsounds like (at least for kiai parts)
1st Big white line - none
2nd white line - whistle
3 rd white line - nothing
4th white line - clap
....
Did this in all diffs

maybe add some breaks for easy? beginners need more time to rest Hm, no, I wann keep the breaks consistent

[Normal]
00:13:615 (3,4) - this one not looks good. ugly crossing Changed


[Hard]
i guess Normal hitsounds fits with song, too. just try them for some sections. I use normal hitsounds? I just have a silenced sliderslider, that's all
00:30:282 (10) - seems like note in the end should be a bit louder (clap or finish i guess) In my opinion clap or finish sounds outside the Kiai too noisy --> kept the whistle
00:43:354 (3,4,5) - hmm.. i guess you can make (3) and (5) cover (4) better w/o ruining this symmetrical pattern :3 I tried -- didn't work D:
00:54:628 (5) - thisfits with song better IMO (just pointing out that 00:55:282 here should be something IMO) Added the note, but didn't replace the slider by circles
01:08:844 (1) - maybe this? Done and fixed spacing afterwards
01:43:811 (10) - clap in the reverse arrow. (and in the same places?) Sounds strange for me --> Disaggree
02:07:668 (6,6,...and so on) - claps? ^
02:51:785 (5) - clap at the start? Disaggree
03:54:530 (6) - whistle? ~_~ Done
04:05:968 (5,1) - ^ ^

~~~~~~~~~

Awesome! gl~

Tshemmp wrote:

Hi. If you don't like my suggestions don't give me kudos. I don't only give kudo for the quality of the suggestions, but also for the effort of modding itself

[Hard]
There is an inconsistency with your NCs at the beginning. Once you have a NC already on the stream 00:02:831 (1), once you have one on the slider after the stream 00:05:772 (1). I suggest removing the NC on 00:02:831 (1). Done
00:10:021 (1) - finish Done
00:13:289 (5) - NC Done
00:15:249 (1,2) - nice ^^ :3
00:17:864 (3) - maybe NC Done
00:22:602 (4) - move to x:460 y:216, this feels better Done
00:24:563 (2,3,4,5) - something like this would feel better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329451 Done
01:03:289 (2) - finish on start with 60% volume, 01:03:615 80% volume here again Done
01:05:903 (2) - same as ^ Done
01:13:746 (1) - ^ Done
01:16:360 (2) - ^ Done
01:12:439 (8) - shorten by one repeat, ctrl+r, and add a circle at 01:13:093 over 01:13:419 (9) Done
02:06:034 (3) - same as 01:03:289 Done
02:08:648 (3) - ^ Done
02:16:491 (1) - ^ Done
02:19:106 (1) - ^ Done
02:44:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would increase th spacing between these I'll keep it for the moment, and change, when more suggest this
02:47:864 (1) - whistle on start? It sounds a bit empty here. Done
02:50:478 (1) - ^ Done
and so on on every first beat in each measure until 03:06:164 (1) Done
03:29:694 (1) - same as 01:03:289 Done
03:32:308 (1) - ^ Done
03:40:151 (1) - ^ Done
03:42:766 (1) - ^ Done
03:50:609 (6) - finish Done
04:09:236 (6) - make this more like a wave slider Done
04:32:439 - maybe lower SV here, for example 0,75x. You will have to remake all sliders and the spacing then, though. Disaggree, because too lazy~

Although I don't like maps with this style I have to admit that this diff is pretty good. What an honour for my map xD

[Normal]
AR 5 maybe. Done
00:30:282 (7) - this slider should be curved mroe evenly Done
00:43:681 (3) - nazi: one grid to the right for equal spacing Done
01:03:289 - do it with the finishes like in Hard Done
01:11:132 (5) - make it curved like this, it feels better: http://puu.sh/xHpU Disaggree
02:06:034 - again the finishes Done
03:12:700 (6,7,8,1) - make it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329478? You have to re-adjust the spacing between 03:14:008 (1,2) then ofcourse. Disaggree
03:29:694 - finishes like in Hard Done
04:32:439 - maybe lower SV here, for example 0,75x. You will have to remake all sliders and the spacing then, though. Same as in Hard


[Easy]
AR 3 maybe. Done
00:03:158 (1) - hm, in Hard and Normal you always added a NC every two measures. You should do this here too, so remove this NC and the following ones where this case applies. Or you change your NCs in Hard and Normal. I did this here, because in [easy] the Combo shouldn't become such big (with a NC every two measures I would have about 5-6 combo everytime)01:03:289 - apply the finishes like you did (or didn't you do it?) in Hard and Normal
02:06:034 - finishes, you know what I mean Done
03:06:164 (1,2) - like this: http://puu.sh/xHAb? Done
03:12:700 (3) - return slider like at 03:10:086 (2)? Done
03:29:694 - finishes Done
04:32:439 - maybe lower SV here, for example 0,75x. You will have to remake all sliders and the spacing then, though. Same as in Hard

Yo, that's it. You got a really good looking mapset here, not much I can find. Star. Thanks :3

Muya wrote:

[Easy]
00:58:713 (1) - end at 01:01:981 Done
02:01:459 (1) - end at 02:04:727 Done

[Normal]
00:58:713 (1) - end at 01:01:981 Done
02:01:459 (1) - end at 02:04:727 Done

[Hard]
02:05:380 (1,2,3) - Please change to same spacing Done

• 
  00:50:217 (6) - make this a finish
  01:07:537 (5) - finish i guess
  01:13:419 (10) - finish!
  01:45:445 (2) - ^
  02:05:707 (2) - ^
  02:05:707 (2) - ^
  02:05:707 (2) - ^
  02:05:707 (2) - ^
  02:51:459 (4) - ^
  02:55:380 (6) - ^
  03:08:452 (5) - ^
  03:13:027 (5) - ^
  03:22:831 (3) - ^
  03:24:138 (6) - ^
  03:33:942 (5) - ^
  03:39:171 (5) - ^
  03:44:400 (5) - clap!

RusselG wrote:

Hard

• 
  00:50:217 (6) - make this a finish Done
  01:07:537 (5) - finish i guess Disaggree
  01:13:419 (10) - finish! ^
  01:45:445 (2) - ^ ^
  02:05:707 (2) - ^ ^
  02:05:707 (2) - ^ ^
  02:05:707 (2) - ^ ^
  02:05:707 (2) - ^ ^
  02:51:459 (4) - ^ ^
  02:55:380 (6) - ^ ^
  03:08:452 (5) - ^ ^
  03:13:027 (5) - ^ ^
  03:22:831 (3) - ^ ^
  03:24:138 (6) - ^ ^
  03:33:942 (5) - ^ ^
  03:39:171 (5) - ^ ^
  03:44:400 (5) - clap! ^

[Normal]
00:36:491 (7) - clap here! Disaggree
00:41:720 (8) - ^ ^
00:47:602 (1) - add a finish ^
00:50:217 (5) - ^ Done
00:52:831 (1) - ^ Disaggree
01:45:119 (1) - ^ ^
01:50:347 (1) - ^ ^
02:53:093 (1) - ^ ^
03:19:236 (1) - ^ ^

[Easy]
easy is fine!

1. 00:41:066 (2) stattdessen: http://puu.sh/y6VA
2. 00:56:753 (3) das gleiche
3. 01:40:544 mach den Repeater weg und mach bei 01:41:524 einen slider zu 01:41:851 hin
4. 01:52:962 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y75h
5. 02:18:779 add note
6. 03:58:452 (1,2,3,4) warum nicht symmetrisch anordnen?

1. 00:58:060 stattdessen: ein Slider mit der gleichen länge wie (6), aber ohne Repeat
2. 02:16:491 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y7b9
3. 02:40:021 (5,6) besser erst den Slider und dann den Circle
4. 04:39:628 (3,4,5,6) versuch diese Formation: http://puu.sh/y7f8
5. 04:42:243 New Combo würd hier passen
6. und mach mal für die letzten 3 nicht nur eine Linie: http://puu.sh/y7fr

1. 00:20:642 (4) 1 grid nach unten und einen nach rechts
2. 00:20:968 ^ kopiere dann (4) und füg es hier (und Strg+H/ Strg+J)
3. 00:24:727 (3,4,5) Ich würd das etwas auseinande rziehen: http://puu.sh/y7ib (und fix spacing)
4. 01:49:204 (5) stattdessen: einen Slider der ohne Repeat die gleiche Länge hat
5. 03:06:164 das würde gut besser passen: http://puu.sh/y7lr
6. 04:10:543 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y7mU

GamerX4life wrote:

My Mod:

[Easy]

1. 00:41:066 (2) stattdessen: http://puu.sh/y6VA Gemacht
2. 00:56:753 (3) das gleiche Gemacht
3. 01:40:544 mach den Repeater weg und mach bei 01:41:524 einen slider zu 01:41:851 hin Gemacht
4. 01:52:962 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y75h Gemacht
5. 02:18:779 add note Gemacht
6. 03:58:452 (1,2,3,4) warum nicht symmetrisch anordnen? Die sind symmetrisch: Punktsymmetrisch

[Normal]

1. 00:58:060 stattdessen: ein Slider mit der gleichen länge wie (6), aber ohne Repeat Disaggree
2. 02:16:491 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y7b9 Nicht sicher, hab's aber glaube ich nicht gemacht
3. 02:40:021 (5,6) besser erst den Slider und dann den Circle Gemacht
4. 04:39:628 (3,4,5,6) versuch diese Formation: http://puu.sh/y7f8 Gemacht
5. 04:42:243 New Combo würd hier passen Gemacht
6. und mach mal für die letzten 3 nicht nur eine Linie: http://puu.sh/y7fr Gemacht

[Hard]

1. 00:20:642 (4) 1 grid nach unten und einen nach rechts Gemacht
2. 00:20:968 ^ kopiere dann (4) und füg es hier (und Strg+H/ Strg+J) Gemacht
3. 00:24:727 (3,4,5) Ich würd das etwas auseinande rziehen: http://puu.sh/y7ib (und fix spacing)Gemacht
4. 01:49:204 (5) stattdessen: einen Slider der ohne Repeat die gleiche Länge hat negativ
5. 03:06:164 das würde gut besser passen: http://puu.sh/y7lr Negativ
6. 04:10:543 versuch mal das hier: http://puu.sh/y7mU negativ

Star
Viel Glück

Katty Pie wrote:

hi ^.^

HARD

00:56:589 - maybe add note here? Done
00:58:713 - hm i think this slider very long ._. maybe you make so http://puu.sh/yknL Disaggree
01:39:563(5) - make this slider double Added a note instead
03:52:243 - this slider not sound here make on 1\4 Disaggree

NORMAL

01:08:517 - add finish here with volume 60% Disaggree
01:11:132 - ^ Disaggree
01:18:975 - ^ Disaggree
01:21:589 - ^ Disaggree
02:40:674 - put this note so http://puu.sh/ykNT it more playable Done
02:58:321 - i thinl this sound better http://puu.sh/ykPx make symmetry http://puu.sh/ykPL Disaggree

EASY

00:16:557 -replace this slider on 2 notes in white ticks Disaggree
01:20:936 - oh i think it will be difficult for begginers maybe make so http://puu.sh/ykVU Disaggree
02:23:681 - ^ Disaggree

it's all for me, nice map ^.^ good luck~~

HellDawn wrote:

Hard

00:33:877- whistle There is already a whistle
01:14:400- remove whistle put at the end Disaggree
01:17:668- whistle Disaggree
01:44:465- ^ There is already a whistle
02:40:021- ^ Disaggree
03:19:236- whistle because fit with music and 3. slider Disaggree
03:45:380- ^ Disaggree
04:23:289- whistle Disaggree

Normal

01:33:354- break drag What?
01:54:269- 1 grid up Done
03:07:798- add a note ? Disaggree

Easy

00:54:138- 2 grid down Done
03:55:838- 1 grid up ? Done

Nice mapset

Ylinestra44 wrote:

CDFA wrote:

Overall
For the kiai sections, I suggest using normal hitsounds for this just so it's more impactful. I listened to it. I disaggree, because the slider are kinda noisy then. I would have to decrease the Volume, but then you wouldn't hear the hit or the whistle that well.

CDFA wrote:

CDFA wrote:

Overall
For the kiai sections, I suggest using normal hitsounds for this just so it's more impactful. I listened to it. I disaggree, because the slider are kinda noisy then. I would have to decrease the Volume, but then you wouldn't hear the hit or the whistle that well.

Just to re-comment on this, if you're talking about slider-rolls, then you can just use a silent slider-roll hitsound ( If you want one, http://puu.sh/ynh2 . Change soft to normal, though) I already have one, thanks. And I am completely against the idea of normal hitsounds in Kiai. The Soft-clap fits better, and I would have to decrease the volume either way, so there difference would be minimal

ALLRIGHT RE-MODDING. For future notice, you don't have to post in my queue if you want a re-mod, just forum PM me and I'll put it top priority~.

Didn't re-download so sorry if I needed to download stuff ;~;

Overall:
Personally, I'd like claps on 2 and 4 for the kiai. You know I was totally on some sort of drugs or something in my last mod since I didn't mention this ;D. I know you have your thing with the nwnc, but there's no difference between 2 and 4, so just keep claps >:3~. Done

Hard:
00:34:530 (6) - NC Disaggree
00:52:831 (1) - Add finish on beginning? Disaggree
01:24:204 - Add note with finish Disaggree
01:34:661 (1) - Add finish on beginning Done
01:43:158 (8) - NC Disaggree
02:26:949 - Add note with finish Disaggree
04:01:066 (1) - Add finish Disaggree
04:04:661 (4) - Not moe! I think it's something to do with the last sliderpoint. I think it's okay as it is
04:06:622 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think this would look and play better like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/332110 Kept it as it is
04:11:524 (1) - Add finish Disaggree
04:21:981 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider Disaggree

Normal:
00:34:530 (4) - NC Disaggree
00:44:988 (4) - ^ Disaggree
00:50:870 (6) - ^ Disaggree
00:56:099 (5) - ^ Disaggree
01:24:204 - Add note with finish Disaggree
01:45:119 (1) - Add finish Done
04:01:066 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider Disaggree
04:11:524 (1) - Add finish Disaggree
04:21:981 (1) - ^ Disaggree

Easy:
01:34:661 (1) - Add finish Done
01:45:119 (1) - ^ ^
01:55:576 (1) - ^ ^
02:00:805 (1) - Remove NC? Done
03:08:779 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider Disaggree
03:19:236 (1) - ^ Disaggree
04:01:066 (1) - ^ Disaggree
04:11:524 (1) - Add finish Disaggree
04:21:981 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider Disaggree

This is still a good map but my previous mod sucked. Sorry about that.

Another star for you. Thanks :3

Bobo wrote:

Hi there. From my queue!

[General]

Seems okay to me.

[Easy]

01:23:550 (4) - I'd add an extra slider repeat to this slider, you can hear a beat from the bassline as the vocals come in, so it fits well. Perhaps you could add a normal hitfinish to it as well, in my opinion it sounds nice at the given volume. Done
02:26:295 (4) - Same as above. Done
03:58:452 (1,2,3,4) - Could you try move these so that (2,3) have symmetry with the y axis? No, they are symmetric to the center

[Normal]

01:23:550 (7) - Same issue that I pointed out in [Easy]. Done
02:26:295 (8) - ^ Done
03:00:936 (4) - The slider ball follow circle goes off the screen, you really should move this. Done

[Hard]

00:15:249 (1,2) - This is a very nice little pattern, how come this is the only time I see something like this? Judging by the amount of green sections and the quality of the patterns, it seems as if the intro was mapped with detail and the rest of the map is a bit more rushed.. The intro has less notes at all, that's why I could make such patterns. At the rest of the map I have like permanent notes with rarely 1/1 breaks, so I couldn't make such patterns. And additional the slider themselves are longer in the intro
00:34:530 (6) - There's a bit of a pause between this and (5), so I'd place a NC. Done
01:23:223 (10) - Same issue with [Easy] and [Normal]. Done
02:25:968 (10) - ^ Done
04:00:195 (6) - NC here to justify the pause. Done
04:13:267 (6) - Same here, repeat with all similar patterns. Done

Well. There you go.
I suggest trying to improve the map as much as you can before looking for other modders.

Good luck!

1. Using pure white combo color isn't recommended. So, maybe make it a bit grey?

1. 01:20:936 (3,1,2,3,4) - it's quite too much for Easy. Try to make it easier, for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:17:798 (3,4,5) - maybe make reverse slider or slider+circle? Because there are no three 1/2 circles before.
3. 02:23:681 (3,1,2,3,4) - as 01:20:936 (3,1,2,3,4) -
4. 02:37:406 (1) - finish
5. 02:45:903 (2,3,4,1) - make it easier, please :<
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:08:779 (1) - finish

1. You have quite hard rhythm. I understand that BPM is low and this is not so hard, but anyway, rearrange some 'too-much-1/2'.
2. 00:13:615 (3) - new combo? You have quite long comboes, maybe split some?
3. 00:34:530 (4) - new combo here as there is one on 00:24:073 (1) -
4. 00:39:759 (5) - ^
5. 00:50:217 (5) - why finish? D:
6. 00:50:217 (5) - and new combo
7. 00:56:099 (5) - ^ and so on, if you want
8. 03:08:779 (1) - finish
9. 04:02:047 (2) - delete this note, it would better to put it on 04:02:700 -
10. 04:36:360 (6) - reduce to 04:37:014 -

1. 00:20:478 (3) - remove whistle
2. 00:20:969 (6) - ^
3. 00:21:296 (8) - ^
4. 00:50:217 (6) - why finish?
5. 03:08:779 (1) - finish
   
   There is no mistakes, you know. But personally, I think that there is too much 1/4 which don't fit the rhythm and song. I'd better remove some 1/4 and make it more rhythmical. This sounds to me like overmap D:
   orz :<

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello.

General

1. Using pure white combo color isn't recommended. So, maybe make it a bit grey? Done

Easy

1. 01:20:936 (3,1,2,3,4) - it's quite too much for Easy. Try to make it easier, for example: Done
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:17:798 (3,4,5) - maybe make reverse slider or slider+circle? Because there are no three 1/2 circles before. Done
3. 02:23:681 (3,1,2,3,4) - as 01:20:936 (3,1,2,3,4) - Done
4. 02:37:406 (1) - finish Done
5. 02:45:903 (2,3,4,1) - make it easier, please :< Done
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:08:779 (1) - finish Done

Normal

1. You have quite hard rhythm. I understand that BPM is low and this is not so hard, but anyway, rearrange some 'too-much-1/2'.
2. 00:13:615 (3) - new combo? You have quite long comboes, maybe split some? Done
3. 00:34:530 (4) - new combo here as there is one on 00:24:073 (1) - Done
4. 00:39:759 (5) - ^ Done
5. 00:50:217 (5) - why finish? D: Removed
6. 00:50:217 (5) - and new combo Done
7. 00:56:099 (5) - ^ and so on, if you want Done
8. 03:08:779 (1) - finish Done
9. 04:02:047 (2) - delete this note, it would better to put it on 04:02:700 - Done
10. 04:36:360 (6) - reduce to 04:37:014 - Disaggree

Hard

1. 00:20:478 (3) - remove whistle Disaggree
2. 00:20:969 (6) - ^ ^
3. 00:21:296 (8) - ^ ^
4. 00:50:217 (6) - why finish? Removed
5. 03:08:779 (1) - finish Done
   
   There is no mistakes, you know. But personally, I think that there is too much 1/4 which don't fit the rhythm and song. I'd better remove some 1/4 and make it more rhythmical. This sounds to me like overmap D: :(
   orz :<

Good luck! I love this song and your map is nice!

Bass wrote:

[Hard]

1. 01:07:864 (6) - slider kinda feels weird, how about this ? Done
2. 02:44:432 (9) - I'd remove this note, if this note is here, then it's 1/4 rhythm and then 1/3 and it might cause confusion while playing Done

Mapset is nicely done but I agree with Reiji. There is too much 1/4s in Hard and feels kinda overmapped. I don't think so =/

Raging Bull wrote:

Hiya from #modreqs.

Everything I say is a suggestion unless I mention it in red or so. And if you disagree with a mod, please explain why instead of a "no"

Easy:
00:29:302 (4) - NC Here? It seems the best because it would make your NC pattern consistent since you're NCing after every 4/1. Done
01:23:550 (3) - Consider removing one repeat from this slider. I think it would play better since you can click a note as the chorus ends. Plus you can also NC the note afterwards because the slider ends where an NC should be. I prefer it my way
02:00:805 (4) - NC here to keep it consistent with 00:58:060 (1) - ? Done
02:26:295 (3) - Same idea as 01:23:550 (3) - Remove that repeat and add a note to replace it and NC it. I think it would play better since clicking on a downbeat is boss. Same answer as 01:23:550 (3) -
04:07:929 (3,4) - Perhaps change it to http://puu.sh/yF0S ? The slider ends on where an NC should be and seeing as your NC pattern is nearly the same throughout the entire song, it would be a shame to see this combo ruin it. I think that shortening 3 by 1/2 and adding a note to replace it would be better and plays better since it follows vocals better. Sorry, but imo it fits this way, and a "combo ruin" is not the worst thing on earth
04:41:589 (3) - Same as 01:23:550 (3) - ? Same as 01:23:550 (3) -

Normal:
00:29:302 (6) - NC here to keep it consistent with 00:39:759 (1) - Done
00:44:988 (4) - NC here for consistency? Done
00:54:792 (4) - Remove repeat and replace it with a note instead? I usually feel like a click for downbeat would be a lot better than a slider ending there. If you do follow this, NC here and remove NC at 00:56:099 (1) - Diaggree here
00:58:060 (5) - Remove NC for consistency? Done
01:23:550 (4) - Remove repeat and replace with note + NC? Same as in easy
[spoilerbox=NCing mod here since it looks little weird]
01:37:276 (3) - NC Done
01:38:583 (1) - Remove NC Done
01:39:890 (6,1) - Swap NC Done
01:42:504 (4) - NC Done[/spoilerbox]
01:47:406 (5) - Replace this slider with 2 1/1 notes and NC the downbeat? Avoid ruining NC pattern that you have. Diaggree
01:57:537 (1) - Change this to 1 1/2 slider and add a note at the downbeat with NC? Same reason as above. Same answer as above
02:00:805 (5) - NC? Done
02:14:204 (2) - Perhaps shorten this to 1/2 slider and make a 1/1 slider at 02:14:857 (3) - then add a note at 02:15:838 (4) - ? I think it follows the vocals better than what you have. http://puu.sh/yFaG Disaggree
02:26:295 (4) - Same as 00:54:792 (4) - ? Same as 00:54:792 (4)
The ending NC seems alright to me since you changed it and it was quite consistent at the end with your new NC pattern.

Hard:
00:58:713 (1) - I think replacing the spinner with some hitcircles/sliders would be better. I don't feel like spinning feels good here since there are few things you can follow here that you can clearly hear. Yeah, but that rhythm is kinda strange, and I prefer a spinner
02:01:459 (1) - ^ ^
02:46:774 (6) - Perhaps silence that tick? Seeing as how this specific part is a 1/3 the tick sounds rather awkward. I can hear the "t" of "last name" here, so no

Lizbeth wrote:

Hellow~

[Hard]
When the black combo color circles are on top of the hat, the approach circle blends with it, switch combo colors in those parts to avoid this. I lightened the black a bit, I hope this solves the problem as well
02:44:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not sure about this, threw me off while playing. I think you should use 1/8, something like this: http://puu.sh/z1EN Changed
03:50:609 - 04:01:066 - why not add another break here? I disaggree on this. There are already two breaks, and even if it's a long song I think they are enough
[Normal]
Same about the black combo color and the break I mentioned on hard. Same answers

[Easy]
Same about the black combo color and the break I mentioned on hard. Same answers
And I didn't like notes half beat apart, Would be perfect if you avoid it in the easy diff ~ I think with only 1/1 notes this song would be very, very monotonous, and additional it's almost 5 minutes long. THis should be okay.

Really nice mapset btw

1. Have you thought about using a custom hit sound (maybe just use hitnormal) to emphasize the drum sound?

1. +1 Approach Rate?

1. This is overmapped imo. Lots of 1/4 notes that don't follow anything. Some examples: 00:21:949 (2) - and 00:22:602 (4) - and 00:24:563 (2) - etc etc all throughout the map. All those 1/4 notes really inflate the score; I'd recommend cutting them but you'd have to rethink your patterns / mapping. Maybe the other MATs disagree?

Shulin wrote:

[General]

1. Have you thought about using a custom hit sound (maybe just use hitnormal) to emphasize the drum sound? No, I haven't, because I don't like normal-hitsounds.

[Easy]

00:17:864 (1) - Extend to 00:20:805 - ? Disaggree, because then the space to the next note would be too short.
00:55:445 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe arrange these into a triangle pattern? The end of 00:54:138 (3) - and 00:55:445 (1,2) - build a triangle, and 00:56:099 (2,3,4) - do the same. I think there are enough triangles in this 5 combos.
01:23:550 (3) - This looks better if it's straight vertically imo. Changed
01:43:158 (2,3) - Align these vertically? Done
03:20:870 (2) - Make this horizontally straight and then align 03:19:236 (1) - and 03:21:851 (1) - will look neater. Done
03:42:766 (1) - Align this with 03:42:766 (1) - ? Disaggree
03:59:106 (2,3) - Align these vertically. Looks ugly in game. Done

[Normal]

1. +1 Approach Rate? Disaggree

00:17:864 (1) - Extend to 00:20:805 - ? Same as in Easy
01:02:635 - Note? It seems strange to ignore the vocal here. This isn't easy so the gap between spinner and notes have to be this big. Done
01:02:962 - ^ ^
02:05:380 - ^ ^
02:05:707 - ^ ^
02:53:093 (1) - Move it down some to make it align with 02:52:439 (5) - much neater. Done
03:03:550 (1) - Move it up some to make it align with 03:02:896 (3) - Done

[Hard]

1. This is overmapped imo. Lots of 1/4 notes that don't follow anything. Some examples: 00:21:949 (2) - and 00:22:602 (4) - and 00:24:563 (2) - etc etc all throughout the map. All those 1/4 notes really inflate the score; I'd recommend cutting them but you'd have to rethink your patterns / mapping. Maybe the other MATs disagree? We'll see

01:47:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This sounds really strange, it sounds like you're trying to follow the vocal but it doesn't really work. Maybe follow instruments here instead? I'll keep it for now.

Apart from this I have nothing else to add, good luck!

1. I agree with the modders above about the overmap. Some of the 1/4 notes in this diff doesn't fit with the song. It's better if you just follow the vocal or the drum rather then using 1/4 notes that doesn't justifies anything in the song. For example in 00:21:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) if you remove the 1/4 the rhythm will follow the vocal (even though it'll be a simple 1/2 beats note). Try to use jumps instead to give challenge for the diff, 01:02:635 is one of the good places for jump imo and it'll give a good built in for the kiai too
2. 01:07:864 (6,7,8) - These notes doesn't sound very fit with the song as there aren't many beat in the current place of the music that correspondence well with all those objects. I suggest to follow the vocal all together, something like this one below
   
3. 01:10:478 (3,4,5,6,7) - Almost the same as above. For this one rather than using circle for the 1/4 note, maybe try using slider instead, kinda like this
   
4. 01:35:151 (2) - Another one of unnecessary offbeat. If you're trying to follow the vocal, it's supposed to be on 01:35:206 which is a 1/6 beat. Because it doesn't follow anything just remove the note
5. 03:06:164 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:07:864 (6,7,8) changing 2 into a 1/2 beat long slider works too, you can also add jump to spice things up
6. 03:16:622 (1,2) -This will sound better if you use a single 1/2 beat long slider rather than 1/4 slider repeat for 1 & 2
7. 03:26:426 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:07:864 (6,7,8), for this one I suggest something like this
   

paseli wrote:

From modding queue~ (2 Jahre schon, wow. Das sieht man selten^^)

[Normal]
00:13:615 (1,2,3) - this sounds weird if you don't put a4th slider at 00:17:864 - to 00:18:844 - . I have this spinner at that part in all diffs. I think it works fine =/
01:47:406 (5,1) - the offbeat slider really don't feel good here, try to go with circle-slider-slider instead I will Keep it for now, if mentioned again, Change will come


[Hard]
This should be hard+ with all the sudden jumps in here. Then you haven't seen my newest [Hard] xD

00:15:249 (1,2) - chromosome pattern ftw :3
00:35:184 (2,3) - really sharp flow here, maybe put slider 3 up a bit Kept it
00:45:478 (2,3,4) - this sounds really strange, i dunno. i would make slider 3 end on blue tick It's mapped on like every Sound that appears there, and well, for now Keep it.
01:58:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - pretty sharp stream, make it flatter maybe I don't think it's sharp
02:17:145 (3) - could improve blanket here, but this is Preference Keep it
02:40:511 (5) - set at x:352 y:72 for better dropoff flow maybe Changed

These are some really nice beatmaps, i rarely see someone mapping low bpm songs that good. Keep your work up mate! I will, don't worry :3

Greetings,
paseli

TrigonometrY wrote:

Hello from my queue!

[Hard]
Overmapped parts (you can check them in any Audio Editor):
00:02:831 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/be4MW/0bda12229f.png
00:08:060 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/be4YR/eb921b5336.png
00:13:289 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/be53L/8111cfe784.png In all three cases there is a Sound on the yellow tick (1/8) afterwards, but I don't want to use 1/8 here, and I think this triplets still Plays fine, because on 100% Speed you can't figure out the Sound is really a bit leater.
00:44:172 (6) - http://puu.sh/be5xN/7589dc07d1.jpg The "Mo-" from Money stops here, so I don't think this note is too much.
01:02:798 (2) - http://puu.sh/be5I7/6fdc22d084.png There may not be a Sound in here, but this note still gives the "intro" of the Kiai a bit more than 2 1/2 notes. In my ears both sounds good, so I will Keep it.
01:35:151 (3) - quiet and nothing else. Same like at the start, here it is the "My".
02:00:315 (9) - ^ Again it fits with the voice. Since People Play this map on 100% Speed, this note fits
02:57:831 - ^ replace it with 1/2 slider Same like 1:02:798 -
03:14:498 (2) - remove it
03:27:570 (2) - ^
03:45:870 (2) - ^ These three notes don't bother me at all, since they give a nice ongoing in the map and create their own rhythm which fits the song. No changes

1/4 to 1/6:
01:10:968 (2) - I'm pretty sure it follows 1/6 rhythm, not 1/4. Move circle to 01:11:023 - and listen carefully
01:13:256 (2) - same here. Blue tick is empty, her vocal matches 1/6 01:13:201 -
since 1/6 might confuse player, I suggest to remove that circle.
01:14:236 (2) - ^
02:05:544 (2) - ^
02:16:001 (2) - 02:16:981 (2) - ^ To all above: As 1/6 may be to complicated to Play or even recognize here, I won't Change it on the timeline, nor will I remove those notes. Same reason as in the "overmapped" section - last mentioned Points.
02:38:060 (2,3) - it should be like 1/3 or 1/2 (if you don't want to skip piano), not 1/4 (again, blue ticks are empty): http://puu.sh/beaoM/139e615208.jpg or http://puu.sh/beaqX/0649e8fde5.jpg
03:19:727 (2) - move to 03:19:672 - or delete
03:38:027 (2) - 03:38:681 (4) - ^ Actually, there is 1/3 vocal, so my suggestion: http://puu.sh/bebgb/11ce5d1789.jpg
03:40:642 (2) - http://puu.sh/bebDI/2d9202f76e.jpg
03:43:256 (2) - to 03:43:201 -
03:48:485 (2) - to 03:48:539 -
03:48:648 (3,4) - it's 1/3: http://puu.sh/bebTo/d9f5748c43.jpg
04:27:047 (2) - to 04:27:101 -
Check carefully all such stuff - I could be mistaken or miss something. All the changes from 1/4 to 1/6 seem reasonable in the way, that the vocals really appear there, but while playing, Player woulnd't recognize the different snapping and just 100 such cases. Additionally, the 1/4 rhythms don't Play bad and are intuitive, so I will Keep them. Sorry.

Other:
01:46:426 (3,4) - fix blanket: http://puu.sh/be9BK/e6dd38439b.jpg Done
01:45:445 - 01:50:674 - don't skip beats and put circles maybe? I didn't add here circles to emphatise the vocals - no changes
01:51:001 (1) - what about to make accent on 1/3 vocal? http://puu.sh/be9OW/6f3c28002c.jpg Prefer it the way it is
02:47:864 - aww, favourite part of song :3
03:08:779 - I like how you used claps there!

[Normal]
00:13:615 (1,2,3) - what do you think about changing the flow after each slider? AS for me, it fits vocal nicely: http://puu.sh/bedsR/1446dd81ac.jpg http://puu.sh/bedtP/5d4594880f.jpg Done
00:31:916 (1,2,3) - make it more symmetrical: 00:32:570 (2) - move to 112;120, 00:33:223 (3) - to 220;152 Done
00:42:374 (1) - 00:43:681 (3) - old-style sliders (yeah, just noticed them)
I looked through diff and want to say that it reminds me old-style mapping. I saw your Hard before and after remapping, so now Hard looks smoothly and nattily. I suggest to remap at least such part like 01:42:504 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:406 (5,1,2,3) - 01:51:981 (3,1,2,3) - objects are placed disorderly, randomly.
Changed them
Easy is good for me.

I'm really glad you have mapped this song, I love it since childhood
Take one more star and rank this map please!