Hi there. From my queue!
[General]
Seems okay to me.
[Easy]
01:23:550 (4) - I'd add an extra slider repeat to this slider, you can hear a beat from the bassline as the vocals come in, so it fits well. Perhaps you could add a normal hitfinish to it as well, in my opinion it sounds nice at the given volume.
02:26:295 (4) - Same as above.
03:58:452 (1,2,3,4) - Could you try move these so that (2,3) have symmetry with the y axis?
[Normal]
01:23:550 (7) - Same issue that I pointed out in [Easy].
02:26:295 (8) - ^
03:00:936 (4) - The slider ball follow circle goes off the screen, you really should move this.
[Hard]
00:15:249 (1,2) - This is a very nice little pattern, how come this is the only time I see something like this? Judging by the amount of green sections and the quality of the patterns, it seems as if the intro was mapped with detail and the rest of the map is a bit more rushed..
00:34:530 (6) - There's a bit of a pause between this and (5), so I'd place a NC.
01:23:223 (10) - Same issue with [Easy] and [Normal].
02:25:968 (10) - ^
04:00:195 (6) - NC here to justify the pause.
04:13:267 (6) - Same here, repeat with all similar patterns.
Well. There you go.
I suggest trying to improve the map as much as you can before looking for other modders.
Good luck!
[General]
Seems okay to me.
[Easy]
01:23:550 (4) - I'd add an extra slider repeat to this slider, you can hear a beat from the bassline as the vocals come in, so it fits well. Perhaps you could add a normal hitfinish to it as well, in my opinion it sounds nice at the given volume.
02:26:295 (4) - Same as above.
03:58:452 (1,2,3,4) - Could you try move these so that (2,3) have symmetry with the y axis?
[Normal]
01:23:550 (7) - Same issue that I pointed out in [Easy].
02:26:295 (8) - ^
03:00:936 (4) - The slider ball follow circle goes off the screen, you really should move this.
[Hard]
00:15:249 (1,2) - This is a very nice little pattern, how come this is the only time I see something like this? Judging by the amount of green sections and the quality of the patterns, it seems as if the intro was mapped with detail and the rest of the map is a bit more rushed..
00:34:530 (6) - There's a bit of a pause between this and (5), so I'd place a NC.
01:23:223 (10) - Same issue with [Easy] and [Normal].
02:25:968 (10) - ^
04:00:195 (6) - NC here to justify the pause.
04:13:267 (6) - Same here, repeat with all similar patterns.
Well. There you go.
I suggest trying to improve the map as much as you can before looking for other modders.
Good luck!