[General]
- BG4 is too big, max size is 1024 x 768, so resize it please.
- BG3 looks strange, the people look stretched can you find a better BG?
[Easy]
00:17:668 (1,2) - Make the volume 40% for these 2 notes? Unless it was intentional for these to be louder.
00:18:172 (2) - Flip this horizontally? It works better with the position of 00:20:693 (3,4) -
00:33:802 (5) - Move this left to improve the blanket with 00:32:290 (4) - you might have reposition other notes slightly after.
00:35:063 - This should be 40% volume? I'm not sure why is suddenly drops to 30% here unless you wanted to reduce the volume of the tick and forgot to change back the volume? If that's the case then the tick at 00:18:172 (2) - is too loud. xD
00:52:962 (3) - Add a whistle to the end to emphasize the vocal like 00:58:004 (5) -
00:54:979 (5) - Missing a clap here.
00:55:987 (1) - Add whistle? Works nice with the patten you have with 00:56:491 (2,3,4) -
01:00:525 (2) - Add whistle to keep your hitsound pattern for this section.
01:16:660 (2) - ^
01:38:340 to 01:54:349 - Volume should be 40% here like the start of the map. Seems too quiet right now.
01:45:399 (2,3) - In game the overlap with 01:42:878 (1) - is rather ugly. Consider moving these up to a new position?
01:53:466 to 02:23:719 - Same suggestions as before since this is a copy paste of the previous section / chorus.
02:10:609 (4) - This should be 45% volume like the other chorus?
02:32:794 (2) - Remove clap and add whistle?
02:38:340 (3) - The direction here is pretty awkward to play. I suggest either using a different slider type for 02:36:828 (2) - or repositioning 02:38:340 (3,4,5) -
02:56:996 (1) - Why not stack this on top of 02:59:012 (1) - plays better imo.
02:59:012 to 03:28:256 - Same suggestions as the other chorus.
Overall a nice easy, be careful to watch out for volume and hitsound consistency though because when you're playing it can be strange when hitsounds seem missing and the volume suddenly lowers.
[Normal]
- Please try and make the volume here consistent with the other difficulties.
00:43:886 (3) - Remove clap, it clashes with the song. Add whistle instead?
00:47:416 (2) - Add whistle here?
02:00:273 (7) - Remove whistle on the return? Seems to be too much whistle right now.
03:29:012 (1) - It would be cool if you could reduce the volume gradually for this spinner like you did at 02:41:365 (1) -
[Hard]
- Same thing about volume here, try to make it the same as the other diffs. The choruses on this diff all have different volumes =S
00:31:786 (4) - Add whistle to emphasize the vocal?
00:41:618 (7) - Add a note here? It's weird to have a gap in the vocal here.
00:55:735 (4) - Remove whistle on the return. Seems too much whistle here.
01:41:870 (8) - Add whistle here so it fits with 01:42:122 (10) -
01:53:340 (1) - Remove whistle here it seems to clash with the song.
02:24:979 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm maybe come up with a better placement for these notes? Right now the pattern isn't very symmetrical but I think it'd be even better if you could make a smoother transition to 02:26:744 (1) -
02:58:508 (4) - Move this left 3 squares, it looks better next to 02:57:500 (2) -
02:58:760 (5) - Right 2 squares ^
03:00:399 (4) - Remove whistle, too much whistle.
03:03:046 (1) - Move this up slightly? The overlap with 03:02:542 (7) - looks very strange.
03:04:559 (4) - This jump does seem very big, it'd be great if you could reduce it slightly.
03:07:584 (2) - Missing clap at the end.
03:09:097 (5) - It would look much better if you stopped this overlapping with 03:08:340 (3) -
03:10:105 (4) - I think a curved slider would look much better here.
03:11:113 (7) - Remove whistle, too much.
03:13:130 (6,7,8) - If you made this symmetrical it would look great.
03:27:500 (5) - Missing whistle?
03:28:004 (1) - Remove whistle from the slider body.
[kazumi's Insane]
- Remove the source? Or add it to the other diffs.
- Add letterbox in breaks here too.
- Try and make the volume consistent with the other diffs! =P
00:32:542 (2) - Remove clap? I think this sounds very strange.
00:37:332 (3) - Missing clap?
00:57:752 (4) - Move the direction of this so the end aligns with the start of 00:58:004 (5) - instead of overlapping it? Something like 00:53:970 (4) -
01:15:399 (3,4) - I don't think this 1/4 is a nice rhythm. It'd be better as 1/2 imo.
01:16:407 (6) - Delete this note? It works better with the vocal.
01:22:458 - Move breaktime to 01:22:710 - to keep it the same as the other diffs?
01:39:097 (2) - Clap the end?
01:49:937 (4) - Clap?
02:22:710 (1) - Maybe start this earlier at 02:22:458 (1) - also reduce the volume it's much too loud right now.
02:30:273 (3) - Whistle this?
02:32:038 - Add note? You seem to be following the vocal right now.
02:34:559 (1) - Remove clap? Seems to clash with the song here.
02:40:105 (1,2) - I don't think the 1/4 rhythm works well here, would fit better as 1/2 imo.
That's all. Really nice maps, call me back after 1 or 2 more mods?