1. Easy (1.49 stars, 183 notes)
2. Hard (4.63 stars, 361 notes)
3. Kazumi's Insane (4.87 stars, 405 notes)
4. Normal (4.11 stars, 255 notes)

Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Done

Insane - Done

1. Kazumikos
2. -Bakari-
3. Yuki-kun
4. Frostmourne

Thank a lot everyone

1. ertyukjh010
2. YunBora
3. jogfi2002
4. Sonnyc
5. Breeze <BAT>
6. Flower
7. kajiyatta
8. Kiiwa
9. -Bakari-
10. B2IN
11. Taris
12. Kawayi Rika <MAT>
13. HellDawn
14. yurunneram
15. Saten
16. Lally
17. - t e n n y a -
18. Shulin <MAT>
19. Jayel
20. Ayu
21. Nichiyouki
22. Sushi <BAT>
23. those <BAT>
24. CDFA
25. Scorpiour <BAT>
26. Colin Hou <BAT>

-Bakari- wrote:

hi.

Title is: I Wanted You
source: why lineage II? Are you sure?
missed SB element: lineage_2.jpg
i think it's okay to have two breaks in every diffs. Try to add break (from 01:22:206 - till 01:38:340) at least for Easy and Normal


no need to kd me.

Sonnyc wrote:

kazumi's Insane:

-- Use Claps only where you can hear in the song.. mhmm i disagree >_>
If there isn't a clap but you are wanting to place a hit sound, use a whistle (maybe)

00:30:525 (2) - Delete Clap
00:32:542 (2,3,5) - ^
00:37:332 (3) - Add a Clap at the head
00:40:861 (3) - Delete Clap at the end
00:44:643 (2) - Delete Clap at the head
00:46:660 (2) - ^
00:47:416 (3) - Delete Clap
00:54:475 (5,7) - 1 Grid Right fixed
00:56:365 (4) - Spacing fixed
01:44:139 (4) - 2 Grid Right, to make a consistent spacing as (1,2) k
02:06:449 ( ) - Add a note? there's nothing here to add note o_o
02:40:609 (2,2,4) - Delete Whistle whistle is following the bass sound =o
02:42:878 (5) - Instead of Stacking, Consider placing at (360,322) stacking looks neater to me
03:01:534 (1) - Make a line with (5,6) k
That's it. Good luck

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi~ I'm from CLANNAD modding queue

General:

-- Time line at 146844 is unsnapped, and check if this is functioning correctly. Prefer to delete that, and make 146744 a 40% sound.

Easy:

-- Since it is Easy, consider Circle size 3

00:28:760 (2) - A sound increase here doesn't sound well to me.
00:48:928 (4) - NC this, due to the new melody
01:53:466 (4) - ^
01:36:324 (3,5) - Delete Whistles here
02:59:012 (1) - Add a Finish at the start

Normal:

01:32:290 (3) - Delete Clap at the middle
02:39:853 (7,1) - o.o a Jump??
02:57:500 (3) - Delete this, no beat I hear..
02:57:752 (4) - NC

Hard:

01:09:601 (2) - (nazi) this slider isn't a perfect line
01:15:399 (7) - ctrl+R I don't think a jump with (8) fits
01:37:836 (6,7) - Delete whistle
02:06:071 (4) - Delete Clap at the Head
02:59:012 (5,1) - (1,2)
03:05:819 (8,1) - ^
03:26:491 (2) - ctrl+R will look better
03:30:777 (10) - NC? a speed change..

That's it. Good luck

1. About the title, sadly I can't find the artist name in the wiki, I could only know she is namde "Ina Wroldsen", British, and this song is from here ablum <Suddenly> form internet, no sure about this song's title is "I wanted you" or "I Wanted You", so just leave is as it is now.
   About source, if you can't sure, remove " lineage II" for safe
2. It is suggested that use 4:3 image as background image, so maybe you can find some 4:3 images like 800x600 or 1024x768?
3. I see there is a SB code about "lineage_2.jpg" in your osb file, but the file is missing in your folder, did you forget to submit it?

1. 00:49:937 (1) - Slider end, consider adding a finish sound?
2. 01:06:071 (4) - ^, but slider start
3. 01:33:298 (2) - No clap here?
4. 01:54:475 (1) - Slider end, finish?
5. 02:10:609 (4) - ^, slider head
6. 02:26:844 - Unused timing section
7. 02:38:340 (3) - clap instead of whistle sounds better
8. 02:43:382 - Unused timing section
9. 02:44:895 - ^
10. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
11. 03:01:029 (1) - This NC seems useless
12. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
13. 03:31:281 - ^

1. 00:26:744 (1) - Reverse point, clap
2. 00:32:794 (5) - Slider end, clap
3. 00:44:391 (3) - Reverse point, clap?
4. 00:49:937 (1) - Finish
5. 01:06:071 (4) - ^
6. 01:21:197 (2,3) - clap
7. 01:54:475 (1) - Finish
8. 02:10:609 (5) - ^
9. 02:26:844 - Unused timing section
10. 02:43:004 - ^
11. 02:43:382 - ^
12. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
13. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
14. 03:31:281 - ^

1. 00:28:256 (5) - Clap
2. 00:49:937 (1) - Finish?
3. 01:06:071 (6) - ^
4. 01:29:769 (5) - Slider end, clap?
5. 01:37:836 (6,7,8) - spacing looked kinda weird, use usual spacing would be better imo
6. 01:54:475 (1) - Finish
7. 02:10:609 (6) - ^
8. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
9. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
10. 03:31:281 - ^

1. 00:30:525 (2) - Clap here sounds odd, remove it would be better
2. 00:44:643 (2) - ^, slider start
3. 00:46:660 (2) - ^
4. 00:50:693 (2) - ^, hmm, there are many double clap you used, oh well, if you like that, that's fine though...I won't point them out any more
5. 02:38:340 (3) - no clap here?
6. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
7. 03:31:281 - 55% volume sounds loud here, try 40%-45%?

Breeze wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]

1. 00:30:525 (2) - Clap here sounds odd, remove it would be better k
2. 00:44:643 (2) - ^, slider start k
3. 00:46:660 (2) - ^ done
4. 00:50:693 (2) - ^, hmm, there are many double clap you used, oh well, if you like that, that's fine though...I won't point them out any more o3o
5. 02:38:340 (3) - no clap here?fixed
6. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?done
7. 03:31:281 - 55% volume sounds loud here, try 40%-45%? k

Flower wrote:

Insane
00:28:634 (4) - add a note? there was a note here o3o
01:22:206 (1) - Only Insane has the break here. I suggest complete the section or delete the section in other difficultys. but its up to you whether you do them or not. hmm
02:28:760 - add whistle? k
03:21:954 (1,2,3,4) - do some rotation to make it more beautiful and harder mmm actually this doesnt look nice to me, i'll consider this

1. Tick Rate 2 fits the way better
2. Hitsounds are too loud for softer part, imo. Try to make them less loud (for softer parts only)

1. Do you really think that those pointsell jumps are fitting? 00:31:786 (4) - x3.0 appers from NOWHERE. Personally, I'd suggest you totally remove this kind of jumps. Instead of this you can put jumps at fountains.
   
   Example

   00:49:937 (1) -
   And if it's possible try to keep jump distance under x2.2 to make jumps are enjoyable but not crazy. THose unfitting overjumps are ruining your map, imo.
2. 00:17:668 (1) - some kind of clap (kick-clap?) would fit here. try to put clap/whistle and see what happen
3. 00:48:676 (7) - and all similar parts - try to put new combo here? It fits with vocals and start of new line should be pointed out somehow.
4. 01:18:928 (1,2,3,4) - what's the point? Why do you ruin your flow with some inconsistent and really weird jumps?
5. 01:37:836 (6,7,8) - hm.. those anti-jumps are unfitting here, imo. Looks like 1/4s, to be honest.
6. 01:51:954 - start 1/2 slider here and put reverse on it. For this pattern it would be better to avoid sliders start at red ticks at all. try this
7. 02:06:954 - don't hurt this stream! there's missed beat on it o3o
8. 02:21:449 (1,2,3,4) - don't touch those jumps. They're cute. exvept this one 02:23:466 (1) - kinda suddenly appears that random x2.0 jump.
9. 02:26:744 (1,2,3,4) - as long as anti-jumps are consistent and well-placed - I don't mind them.
10. 03:11:365 (8,1) - NC swap to avoid awkward-pattern and to follow music
11. 03:30:777 (4) - NO! Do not change slider velocty this sudden. Put new combo here to let us know about this slowdown. :/
    
    Finally! There's break time on [Easy] and [Normal] and almost the same break at [Insane]. And [Hard] doesn't has this break? Awkward, right?

1. Short combo chain 01:00:777 (1,2) / Long combo chain - 00:56:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and the question is: Why? Why your comboing is so random? Try to follow vocals or music and be consistent!
2. 00:21:197 (5,5) - it's good to keep consistency. But you're doing consisten offbeat 1/2s in the end of pattern and it's not ok. (same here 00:33:298 (6,7,8) - ) Test them by yourself. Players won't feel those beats. They're extra here. Remove them, please.
3. 01:12:878 (1,2) - nazi/personal opinion - personally I don't like this kind of overlaps because it looks messy. just saying
4. 01:38:844 (1) - remove new combo. It's extra one. Two new combos in a row may confuse some beginners
5. 02:10:609 (5) - if it's fountain or kiai - put new combo! those notes are louder - and it would be beter to put NC here.
6. 02:42:626 (5) - Totally unacceptable for me. I belive that normal and Easy must have consistent slider speed. If you still disagree - at least put New combo here to let us know that velocity changes here.
   
   All you need is consistent flow - and you'll get a cute diff.

1. and now all of your objects are too close to each other. Try to fix distance (make it +x0.1 bigger)
2. 00:17:668 (1) - asdasdasdasdasd.. whistle or clap or whatever. just make this note louder! this is start of the song! it should be louder >.<
3. 00:46:407 - and manymanymanymanymany similar patterns. It's quite obviously that there's a note (vocals). And you're missing it. Don't you think that this is not confusing for beginners? It's confusing of course!
4. 02:43:004 - unused green line - remove it

-Bakari- wrote:

hi. as i told you via pm you will not get serious mod because you should be more attentive towards modders. Don't just ignore posts.

[General]

1. Tick Rate 2 fits the way better- here is all diff ? i will fix easy and normal
2. Hitsounds are too loud for softer part, imo. Try to make them less loud (for softer parts only)

reduced 10%
[Hard]

1. Do you really think that those pointsell jumps are fitting? 00:31:786 (4) - x3.0 appers from NOWHERE. Personally, I'd suggest you totally remove this kind of jumps. Instead of this you can put jumps at fountains. fix note heree 00:31:281 (3) - do not know like you said not ?
   
   Example

   00:49:937 (1) -
   And if it's possible try to keep jump distance under x2.2 to make jumps are enjoyable but not crazy. THose unfitting overjumps are ruining your map, imo.
   Fix = Ctrl + G
2. 00:17:668 (1) - some kind of clap (kick-clap?) would fit here. try to put clap/whistle and see what happen . fix
3. 00:48:676 (7) - and all similar parts - try to put new combo here? It fits with vocals and start of new line should be pointed out somehow. fix and 01:53:340 (6) -
4. 01:18:928 (1,2,3,4) - what's the point? Why do you ruin your flow with some inconsistent and really weird jumps? I want it to point to emphasize: D
5. 01:37:836 (6,7,8) - hm.. those anti-jumps are unfitting here, imo. Looks like 1/4s, to be honest.it is an idea ^^
6. 01:51:954 - start 1/2 slider here and put reverse on it. For this pattern it would be better to avoid sliders start at red ticks at all. try this yes. was fix
7. 02:06:954 - don't hurt this stream! there's missed beat on it o3o i don't understand
8. 02:21:449 (1,2,3,4) - don't touch those jumps. They're cute. exvept this one 02:23:466 (1) - kinda suddenly appears that random x2.0 jump. fix 02:23:466 (1) -
9. 02:26:744 (1,2,3,4) - as long as anti-jumps are consistent and well-placed - I don't mind them. it is style i want ^^
10. 03:11:365 (8,1) - NC swap to avoid awkward-pattern and to follow music fix, NC contrast between the two
11. 03:30:777 (4) - NO! Do not change slider velocty this sudden. Put new combo here to let us know about this slowdown. :/ I see it, or rather, but i will changer with 2 note
    
    Finally! There's break time on [Easy] and [Normal] and almost the same break at [Insane]. And [Hard] doesn't has this break? Awkward, right?

01:34:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I love this place, but play game is listen music, i fix. add beark time


[Normal]

1. Short combo chain 01:00:777 (1,2) / Long combo chain - 00:56:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and the question is: Why? Why your comboing is so random? Try to follow vocals or music and be consistent! i will try find mod NC, i really not good about it and fix note it
2. 00:21:197 (5,5) - it's good to keep consistency. But you're doing consisten offbeat 1/2s in the end of pattern and it's not ok. (same here 00:33:298 (6,7,8) - ) Test them by yourself. Players won't feel those beats. They're extra here. Remove them, please. fix, remove note in the middle beat
3. 01:12:878 (1,2) - nazi/personal opinion - personally I don't like this kind of overlaps because it looks messy. just saying fix
4. 01:38:844 (1) - remove new combo. It's extra one. Two new combos in a row may confuse some beginners fix
5. 02:10:609 (5) - if it's fountain or kiai - put new combo! those notes are louder - and it would be beter to put NC here. fix
6. 02:42:626 (5) - Totally unacceptable for me. I belive that normal and Easy must have consistent slider speed. If you still disagree - at least put New combo here to let us know that velocity changes here. fix
   
   All you need is consistent flow - and you'll get a cute diff.as poor in the current job do normal. i try

[Easy]

1. and now all of your objects are too close to each other. Try to fix distance (make it +x0.1 bigger) i don't understand
2. 00:17:668 (1) - asdasdasdasdasd.. whistle or clap or whatever. just make this note louder! this is start of the song! it should be louder >.< done
3. 00:46:407 - and manymanymanymanymany similar patterns. It's quite obviously that there's a note (vocals). And you're missing it. Don't you think that this is not confusing for beginners? It's confusing of course!I can understand, I'm doing the beat because I think playing rhythm easier, but i still fix and 01:49:937 -
4. 02:43:004 - unused green line - remove it

fix

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Wrote only important problems. Hope you'll be able to fix many of SIMILAR problems by yourself. Don't just apply mod but check your map for similar mistakes!