1. Easy (1.49 stars, 183 notes)
2. Hard (4.63 stars, 361 notes)
3. Kazumi's Insane (4.87 stars, 405 notes)
4. Normal (4.11 stars, 255 notes)

Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Done

Insane - Done

1. Kazumikos
2. -Bakari-
3. Yuki-kun
4. Frostmourne

Thank a lot everyone

1. ertyukjh010
2. YunBora
3. jogfi2002
4. Sonnyc
5. Breeze <BAT>
6. Flower
7. kajiyatta
8. Kiiwa
9. -Bakari-
10. B2IN
11. Taris
12. Kawayi Rika <MAT>
13. HellDawn
14. yurunneram
15. Saten
16. Lally
17. - t e n n y a -
18. Shulin <MAT>
19. Jayel
20. Ayu
21. Nichiyouki
22. Sushi <BAT>
23. those <BAT>
24. CDFA
25. Scorpiour <BAT>
26. Colin Hou <BAT>

-Bakari- wrote:

hi.

Title is: I Wanted You
source: why lineage II? Are you sure?
missed SB element: lineage_2.jpg
i think it's okay to have two breaks in every diffs. Try to add break (from 01:22:206 - till 01:38:340) at least for Easy and Normal


no need to kd me.

Sonnyc wrote:

kazumi's Insane:

-- Use Claps only where you can hear in the song.. mhmm i disagree >_>
If there isn't a clap but you are wanting to place a hit sound, use a whistle (maybe)

00:30:525 (2) - Delete Clap
00:32:542 (2,3,5) - ^
00:37:332 (3) - Add a Clap at the head
00:40:861 (3) - Delete Clap at the end
00:44:643 (2) - Delete Clap at the head
00:46:660 (2) - ^
00:47:416 (3) - Delete Clap
00:54:475 (5,7) - 1 Grid Right fixed
00:56:365 (4) - Spacing fixed
01:44:139 (4) - 2 Grid Right, to make a consistent spacing as (1,2) k
02:06:449 ( ) - Add a note? there's nothing here to add note o_o
02:40:609 (2,2,4) - Delete Whistle whistle is following the bass sound =o
02:42:878 (5) - Instead of Stacking, Consider placing at (360,322) stacking looks neater to me
03:01:534 (1) - Make a line with (5,6) k
That's it. Good luck

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi~ I'm from CLANNAD modding queue

General:

-- Time line at 146844 is unsnapped, and check if this is functioning correctly. Prefer to delete that, and make 146744 a 40% sound.

Easy:

-- Since it is Easy, consider Circle size 3

00:28:760 (2) - A sound increase here doesn't sound well to me.
00:48:928 (4) - NC this, due to the new melody
01:53:466 (4) - ^
01:36:324 (3,5) - Delete Whistles here
02:59:012 (1) - Add a Finish at the start

Normal:

01:32:290 (3) - Delete Clap at the middle
02:39:853 (7,1) - o.o a Jump??
02:57:500 (3) - Delete this, no beat I hear..
02:57:752 (4) - NC

Hard:

01:09:601 (2) - (nazi) this slider isn't a perfect line
01:15:399 (7) - ctrl+R I don't think a jump with (8) fits
01:37:836 (6,7) - Delete whistle
02:06:071 (4) - Delete Clap at the Head
02:59:012 (5,1) - (1,2)
03:05:819 (8,1) - ^
03:26:491 (2) - ctrl+R will look better
03:30:777 (10) - NC? a speed change..

That's it. Good luck

1. About the title, sadly I can't find the artist name in the wiki, I could only know she is namde "Ina Wroldsen", British, and this song is from here ablum <Suddenly> form internet, no sure about this song's title is "I wanted you" or "I Wanted You", so just leave is as it is now.
   About source, if you can't sure, remove " lineage II" for safe
2. It is suggested that use 4:3 image as background image, so maybe you can find some 4:3 images like 800x600 or 1024x768?
3. I see there is a SB code about "lineage_2.jpg" in your osb file, but the file is missing in your folder, did you forget to submit it?

1. 00:49:937 (1) - Slider end, consider adding a finish sound?
2. 01:06:071 (4) - ^, but slider start
3. 01:33:298 (2) - No clap here?
4. 01:54:475 (1) - Slider end, finish?
5. 02:10:609 (4) - ^, slider head
6. 02:26:844 - Unused timing section
7. 02:38:340 (3) - clap instead of whistle sounds better
8. 02:43:382 - Unused timing section
9. 02:44:895 - ^
10. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
11. 03:01:029 (1) - This NC seems useless
12. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
13. 03:31:281 - ^

1. 00:26:744 (1) - Reverse point, clap
2. 00:32:794 (5) - Slider end, clap
3. 00:44:391 (3) - Reverse point, clap?
4. 00:49:937 (1) - Finish
5. 01:06:071 (4) - ^
6. 01:21:197 (2,3) - clap
7. 01:54:475 (1) - Finish
8. 02:10:609 (5) - ^
9. 02:26:844 - Unused timing section
10. 02:43:004 - ^
11. 02:43:382 - ^
12. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
13. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
14. 03:31:281 - ^

1. 00:28:256 (5) - Clap
2. 00:49:937 (1) - Finish?
3. 01:06:071 (6) - ^
4. 01:29:769 (5) - Slider end, clap?
5. 01:37:836 (6,7,8) - spacing looked kinda weird, use usual spacing would be better imo
6. 01:54:475 (1) - Finish
7. 02:10:609 (6) - ^
8. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
9. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
10. 03:31:281 - ^

1. 00:30:525 (2) - Clap here sounds odd, remove it would be better
2. 00:44:643 (2) - ^, slider start
3. 00:46:660 (2) - ^
4. 00:50:693 (2) - ^, hmm, there are many double clap you used, oh well, if you like that, that's fine though...I won't point them out any more
5. 02:38:340 (3) - no clap here?
6. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
7. 03:31:281 - 55% volume sounds loud here, try 40%-45%?

Breeze wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]

1. 00:30:525 (2) - Clap here sounds odd, remove it would be better k
2. 00:44:643 (2) - ^, slider start k
3. 00:46:660 (2) - ^ done
4. 00:50:693 (2) - ^, hmm, there are many double clap you used, oh well, if you like that, that's fine though...I won't point them out any more o3o
5. 02:38:340 (3) - no clap here?fixed
6. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?done
7. 03:31:281 - 55% volume sounds loud here, try 40%-45%? k

Flower wrote:

Insane
00:28:634 (4) - add a note? there was a note here o3o
01:22:206 (1) - Only Insane has the break here. I suggest complete the section or delete the section in other difficultys. but its up to you whether you do them or not. hmm
02:28:760 - add whistle? k
03:21:954 (1,2,3,4) - do some rotation to make it more beautiful and harder mmm actually this doesnt look nice to me, i'll consider this

1. Tick Rate 2 fits the way better
2. Hitsounds are too loud for softer part, imo. Try to make them less loud (for softer parts only)

1. Do you really think that those pointsell jumps are fitting? 00:31:786 (4) - x3.0 appers from NOWHERE. Personally, I'd suggest you totally remove this kind of jumps. Instead of this you can put jumps at fountains.
   
   Example

   00:49:937 (1) -
   And if it's possible try to keep jump distance under x2.2 to make jumps are enjoyable but not crazy. THose unfitting overjumps are ruining your map, imo.
2. 00:17:668 (1) - some kind of clap (kick-clap?) would fit here. try to put clap/whistle and see what happen
3. 00:48:676 (7) - and all similar parts - try to put new combo here? It fits with vocals and start of new line should be pointed out somehow.
4. 01:18:928 (1,2,3,4) - what's the point? Why do you ruin your flow with some inconsistent and really weird jumps?
5. 01:37:836 (6,7,8) - hm.. those anti-jumps are unfitting here, imo. Looks like 1/4s, to be honest.
6. 01:51:954 - start 1/2 slider here and put reverse on it. For this pattern it would be better to avoid sliders start at red ticks at all. try this
7. 02:06:954 - don't hurt this stream! there's missed beat on it o3o
8. 02:21:449 (1,2,3,4) - don't touch those jumps. They're cute. exvept this one 02:23:466 (1) - kinda suddenly appears that random x2.0 jump.
9. 02:26:744 (1,2,3,4) - as long as anti-jumps are consistent and well-placed - I don't mind them.
10. 03:11:365 (8,1) - NC swap to avoid awkward-pattern and to follow music
11. 03:30:777 (4) - NO! Do not change slider velocty this sudden. Put new combo here to let us know about this slowdown. :/
    
    Finally! There's break time on [Easy] and [Normal] and almost the same break at [Insane]. And [Hard] doesn't has this break? Awkward, right?

1. Short combo chain 01:00:777 (1,2) / Long combo chain - 00:56:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and the question is: Why? Why your comboing is so random? Try to follow vocals or music and be consistent!
2. 00:21:197 (5,5) - it's good to keep consistency. But you're doing consisten offbeat 1/2s in the end of pattern and it's not ok. (same here 00:33:298 (6,7,8) - ) Test them by yourself. Players won't feel those beats. They're extra here. Remove them, please.
3. 01:12:878 (1,2) - nazi/personal opinion - personally I don't like this kind of overlaps because it looks messy. just saying
4. 01:38:844 (1) - remove new combo. It's extra one. Two new combos in a row may confuse some beginners
5. 02:10:609 (5) - if it's fountain or kiai - put new combo! those notes are louder - and it would be beter to put NC here.
6. 02:42:626 (5) - Totally unacceptable for me. I belive that normal and Easy must have consistent slider speed. If you still disagree - at least put New combo here to let us know that velocity changes here.
   
   All you need is consistent flow - and you'll get a cute diff.

1. and now all of your objects are too close to each other. Try to fix distance (make it +x0.1 bigger)
2. 00:17:668 (1) - asdasdasdasdasd.. whistle or clap or whatever. just make this note louder! this is start of the song! it should be louder >.<
3. 00:46:407 - and manymanymanymanymany similar patterns. It's quite obviously that there's a note (vocals). And you're missing it. Don't you think that this is not confusing for beginners? It's confusing of course!
4. 02:43:004 - unused green line - remove it

-Bakari- wrote:

hi. as i told you via pm you will not get serious mod because you should be more attentive towards modders. Don't just ignore posts.

[General]

1. Tick Rate 2 fits the way better- here is all diff ? i will fix easy and normal
2. Hitsounds are too loud for softer part, imo. Try to make them less loud (for softer parts only)

reduced 10%
[Hard]

1. Do you really think that those pointsell jumps are fitting? 00:31:786 (4) - x3.0 appers from NOWHERE. Personally, I'd suggest you totally remove this kind of jumps. Instead of this you can put jumps at fountains. fix note heree 00:31:281 (3) - do not know like you said not ?
   
   Example

   00:49:937 (1) -
   And if it's possible try to keep jump distance under x2.2 to make jumps are enjoyable but not crazy. THose unfitting overjumps are ruining your map, imo.
   Fix = Ctrl + G
2. 00:17:668 (1) - some kind of clap (kick-clap?) would fit here. try to put clap/whistle and see what happen . fix
3. 00:48:676 (7) - and all similar parts - try to put new combo here? It fits with vocals and start of new line should be pointed out somehow. fix and 01:53:340 (6) -
4. 01:18:928 (1,2,3,4) - what's the point? Why do you ruin your flow with some inconsistent and really weird jumps? I want it to point to emphasize: D
5. 01:37:836 (6,7,8) - hm.. those anti-jumps are unfitting here, imo. Looks like 1/4s, to be honest.it is an idea ^^
6. 01:51:954 - start 1/2 slider here and put reverse on it. For this pattern it would be better to avoid sliders start at red ticks at all. try this yes. was fix
7. 02:06:954 - don't hurt this stream! there's missed beat on it o3o i don't understand
8. 02:21:449 (1,2,3,4) - don't touch those jumps. They're cute. exvept this one 02:23:466 (1) - kinda suddenly appears that random x2.0 jump. fix 02:23:466 (1) -
9. 02:26:744 (1,2,3,4) - as long as anti-jumps are consistent and well-placed - I don't mind them. it is style i want ^^
10. 03:11:365 (8,1) - NC swap to avoid awkward-pattern and to follow music fix, NC contrast between the two
11. 03:30:777 (4) - NO! Do not change slider velocty this sudden. Put new combo here to let us know about this slowdown. :/ I see it, or rather, but i will changer with 2 note
    
    Finally! There's break time on [Easy] and [Normal] and almost the same break at [Insane]. And [Hard] doesn't has this break? Awkward, right?

01:34:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I love this place, but play game is listen music, i fix. add beark time


[Normal]

1. Short combo chain 01:00:777 (1,2) / Long combo chain - 00:56:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and the question is: Why? Why your comboing is so random? Try to follow vocals or music and be consistent! i will try find mod NC, i really not good about it and fix note it
2. 00:21:197 (5,5) - it's good to keep consistency. But you're doing consisten offbeat 1/2s in the end of pattern and it's not ok. (same here 00:33:298 (6,7,8) - ) Test them by yourself. Players won't feel those beats. They're extra here. Remove them, please. fix, remove note in the middle beat
3. 01:12:878 (1,2) - nazi/personal opinion - personally I don't like this kind of overlaps because it looks messy. just saying fix
4. 01:38:844 (1) - remove new combo. It's extra one. Two new combos in a row may confuse some beginners fix
5. 02:10:609 (5) - if it's fountain or kiai - put new combo! those notes are louder - and it would be beter to put NC here. fix
6. 02:42:626 (5) - Totally unacceptable for me. I belive that normal and Easy must have consistent slider speed. If you still disagree - at least put New combo here to let us know that velocity changes here. fix
   
   All you need is consistent flow - and you'll get a cute diff.as poor in the current job do normal. i try

[Easy]

1. and now all of your objects are too close to each other. Try to fix distance (make it +x0.1 bigger) i don't understand
2. 00:17:668 (1) - asdasdasdasdasd.. whistle or clap or whatever. just make this note louder! this is start of the song! it should be louder >.< done
3. 00:46:407 - and manymanymanymanymany similar patterns. It's quite obviously that there's a note (vocals). And you're missing it. Don't you think that this is not confusing for beginners? It's confusing of course!I can understand, I'm doing the beat because I think playing rhythm easier, but i still fix and 01:49:937 -
4. 02:43:004 - unused green line - remove it

fix

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Wrote only important problems. Hope you'll be able to fix many of SIMILAR problems by yourself. Don't just apply mod but check your map for similar mistakes!

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

The hardest difficulty in this mapset has the most breaks. Insane also has less score then the Hard because you added in that extra break. Consider mapping from 01:22:206 - 01:38:340 - on Insane to fix the score spread. i'll consider this o3o
03:15:147 - You can have another Kiai burst here going by how frequent you place them prior to this.

kazumi's Insane
00:58:004 - Replace clap with finish here sounds really nice. k
01:06:071 (4) - Add new combo, 01:07:080 (1) - Remove new combo. done
01:14:139 - Replace clap with finish here sounds really nice. ^
01:20:441 (1) - Replace whistle with finish. this part doesnt fit finish imo
02:02:542 - Replace clap with finish here sounds really nice. fixed
02:18:676 - Replace clap with finish here sounds really nice. ^
02:22:458 (5) - Delete note. done
03:08:340 (3) - Move this slider 1/4 later. fixed
03:30:777 (3) - Move to x:188 y:280. ^

B2IN wrote:

kazumi's Insane

make it easier to move. Example 00:19:181 (5) - move to x:216 y:76. than 00:19:937 (2) - ctrl + G . i'll just stack 00:19:181 (5) - o_o
00:35:063 (3) - neatly stack with 00:33:802 (1) fixed
01:19:685 (3) - the clap use only slider's start. it more fit done
03:07:080 (1) - add finish on slider's start ^
03:23:214 (1) - ^
01:53:466 (1) - this overlap is not good.. plz re-space. fixed

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ Zejky :3
from my Q

[General]
fine
[Easy]
00:18:172 (2) - reduce overlap with 00:20:693 (3). this look better .
[Normal]
hardly normal ;3 ..
reduce the note on 1/2 snap ..
[Hard]
01:52:710 (5) - remove repeat slider, add note to 01:53:214 with NC. if you play = mod HR
[kazumi's Insane]
make it easier to move. Example 00:19:181 (5) - move to x:216 y:76. than 00:19:937 (2) - ctrl + G .i was fic other
00:35:063 (3) - neatly stack with 00:33:802 (1)
01:19:685 (3) - the clap use only slider's start. it more fit
03:07:080 (1) - add finish on slider's start
03:23:214 (1) - ^
01:53:466 (1) - this overlap is not good.. plz re-space.

good luck ~

Taris wrote:

Hey~ mod request

[Easy]

00:20:693 (3) - Move note to x:160 y:132 looks better.| fix x152 - y112
00:21:197 (4,5) - Move to x:240 y:136 | no fix because on the other side
00:21:702 (5) - Add Finish | why is finish ?. i will add = hit whitle
00:25:735 (4) - ^ same
00:33:802 (5) - ^ same
00:37:836 (4) - ^ same
00:41:870 (4) - ^ same
01:42:374 (4) - ^ same
01:46:408 (4) - ^ same
01:49:937 (3) - ^ same
01:00:525 (2) - Add Whistle| no
01:01:029 (3) - ^ to reverse | add
01:02:542 (4) - ^ | add
01:03:046 (5) - ^ To reverse | add
01:04:559 (1) - ^ | add
01:08:592 (2) - ^ | add
01:16:660 (2) - ^ | no

Ignore, because it is copy and paste]01:56:996 (2) - ^ 
02:01:029 (2) - ^ 
02:05:063 (2) - ^
02:07:080 (4) - ^
02:07:584 (5) - ^ To reverse
02:09:097 (1) - ^
02:13:130 (2) - ^
02:15:147 (4) - ^
02:17:164 (2) - ^
02:21:198 (2) - ^
02:22:206 (4) - ^
02:23:214 (5) - ^
02:23:719 (6) - ^ To reverse
02:26:744 (3) - ^

02:28:256 (2) - ^ | add
02:30:273 (4) - ^ | add
02:31:281 (5) - ^ | add
02:32:794 (2) - ^ to end | no
02:31:786 (1) - ^ to end | no
02:35:315 (4) - ^ | add
02:35:819 (1) - ^ to end | no
03:01:534 (3) - ^ | add
03:03:550 (5) - ^ | add
03:05:567 (2) - ^ | add
03:09:601 (2) - ^ | add
03:11:618 (4) - ^ | add
03:12:122 (5) - ^ to reverse | add
03:13:634 (6) - ^ | add
03:15:651 (2) - ^ | add
03:17:668 (2) - ^ | add
03:19:685 (4) - ^ | add
03:21:702 (2) - ^ | add
03:25:735 (2) - ^ | add
03:27:752 (4) - ^

Apply those whistles on every diff and call me back orz...

HellDawn wrote:

General

Slider Tick rate mus be 1 for all diffs | no. it is proposal of bakari

Easy

01:36:323- break drag | fix
02:44:895- why break drag to here ? its not need. | no. it is suggested of everyone previous

Hard

02:06:702- delete this combo because doesnt follow the music | I would like to emphasize that the it hard


Sorry I couldnt continiue because I cant motivition this song
Anyway Nice song
Goodluck.

yurunneram wrote:

Here is my mod as per request. Sorry if it's not much. It's a pretty lousy mod

Timing, Design and General

Tick rate: Are you sure that you want tick rate of 2 (easy)? I’m fine with that though… Try one, it seems better.
Good Combo colours. | yes. it is proposal of bakari
Timing is perfect so it’s okay. You have no custom skin or storyboard so that’s all for the general issues.| SB. it too difficult for me XD

Easy

There’s hardly anything wrong here except
02:26:240 (3) - THIS IS DANGEROUS! YOU MUST SEE THIS! There are two notes in the same spot at the same time! Two and three are together! Please delete this one it is against the rules for ranked beatmaps. You should pay attention to these mistakes. Please don’t repeat it. When you test your beatmap and find that you missed a note that you didn’t see, you must stop and fix it. | Wow!!! thank you ~ sure will fix
01:42:878 (1) - Add a clap | why ? i can't fix
01:46:912 (1) - ^ | same ^
That’s all. Smooth map.

Normal

Sorry, I’m very particular about sliders ><
00:26:239 (1,2) - A bit weird shaped, don’t you think? | fix fix
00:31:786 (5) - More symmetrical please | fix fix
00:41:365 (4) - Make the angle smaller | i think it like is good
00:43:886 (3) - Change the second tick from the left right one square to x:292 | ok
00:49:937 (1) - Rounder. Just move the tick slightly. | sorry, thus, difficult to distance
00:51:702 (3) - ^ | fix slider perhaps better. FIX
00:55:735 (8) - ^ | sorry, thus, difficult to distance
01:01:534 (2) - ^ | it was consistent with previous slider
01:10:105 (4) - ^ | same ^
01:14:139 (4) - ^ | same ^
01:38:844 (2) - ^ | has changer
01:41:365 (4) - Cool Slider | XD, i don't like slider itt
01:55:231 - add a note. | no, i do follow beat new
02:24:223 (3) - Try another “shape” | no, it is consistent with previous
02:59:012 (1) - Rounder | ? i don't undertand
03:04:811 (5) - Try making this end at a lower axis. It looks weird jutting upwards | no, it is symmetric style
03:23:214 (4) - Redo it. Doesn’t look nice | yes . I'm looking for a reason to fix it ^^
That’s all ^^” sorry I judge your sliders so much. You can choose not to change them…| no, my slider assessment, it was very important for normal. thank you a lot

Hard

Woah this map is really fun ^^ Good job~
00:49:937 (1) - Flip the start and end. It’s a big jump from the finish note. | it is a big jump, it would be a pretty interesting dance, so, no fix
00:55:231 (3) - Like the above, flip | because here is a hard, should i not want easy
01:16:660 (1,2,3,4) - switch the positions of 2 and 4 | it is the point emphasis, it for fun with jump
01:20:441 (5) - consider deleting this note | feeling better players will not has or sound here. so, i don't delete
01:53:340 (1) - ^ | it sound good . like you have seen so
01:55:483 (3) - try putting it at x:200, y:96 | this it jump XD
01:55:735 (4) - flip the start and end. | no, it jump with previous
02:00:273 (7) - Move the last point of the slider one square up (x:120, y:344) | no, instead I have new ideas < Ctrl + G
02:05:819 (3) - Maybe reposition to x:240, y:192. Or at least closer to 4. | it is jump
02:07:332 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing | follow distance and foloow jump XD
02:10:609 (1) - Remake the slider | i see it good with vocal
02:33:802 (6) - ^ | appropriate with the note previous
03:03:046 (1) - ^ | it is a new style: D
03:10:105 (4) - ^ | same ^
03:15:147 (3) - ^ | same ^
03:16:155 (5) - Try it at x:408, Y: 104 | jump for before and after that
That’s all ^^” sorry if I don’t like your sliders. You can choose not to if you want.| new tyle , sorry if you no like :XP

Erm, Insane is too hard sorry .///.
That’s all ^^ You’re map is great go for the mod!
You have been modded out by Yurun Neram <3