1. Cup (1.41 stars, 324 notes)
2. Formed (5.58 stars, 705 notes)
3. Platter (3.29 stars, 565 notes)
4. Rain (4 stars, 695 notes)
5. Salad (2.22 stars, 379 notes)

Cup
Salad
Platter
Rain
Formed

Thanks For Modding

Withered Lotus
-[ Asuna ]-
RoseusJaeger
Hareimu
DragonSlayer96
OSUjanaiKATSURAda
alienflybot
Benny-
Kurokami
JBHyperion
Sinnoh
ZiRoX

Thanks For The Stars

OSUjanaiKATSURAda +1
TheFlameWind +1
And myself hue hue :^) +5

Special Thanks

Deif, ZiRoX, Sorcerer, JBHyperion, and Absolute Zero for helping me with vocal timing
JBHyperion and Kurokami For the 1st and 2nd bubbles
Benny- For the qualify
And again to all modders and testplayers who have contributed. Thank you so much for putting your spare time into helping my beatmap.
Last but not least to you whom read this and have played the mapset. You're the people I make mapsets for !
Stay happy and have fun!

The overdose diff sounds and looks better when you read this

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Epilogue:
Once upon, there was a player named -[ Asun-
*cough*, Hi papa! asuna is here, this mod as requested in-game.
Note that i mod from the lowest difficulty in order. - Thank you so much for your time Asuna >w<

General

1. widescreen stuff in some difficulty - Fixed

Cup

1. 00:02:156 (1) - ctrl+h for better flow or make it stand up instead, the reason is because beginner mostly will follow the flow path thoroughly even though it can be caught without a move - Done
2. 00:03:527 (1,2,3) - ctrl+h to avoid anti flow, it works also for 00:05:755 (2,3,1) - . I dont know if anti flow is allowed in cup nor salad nowadays, but imo it should be avoided regarding to the diffs itself are for beginners that has just played osu!catch gamemode. CMIIW with current guidelines, i didnt modding for a while, so i wont touch another antiflow in low diffs. - Don't worry I think this is fine. Little anitflow is already imo as long as it has a lot of time to get to. I am also a man of symmetry and would hate to ruin it for the next pattern ;w;
3. 00:23:413 (2,3,1,2,1) - until 00:44:670 (1) - . Those unsnapped vocals, i suggest to find some pro timer to make this clear, if you really wanted to follow the vocal. Some notes are off from the place, i find some objects which snapped at 1/12s and 1/16s, i think this is not okay to take a risk. If you want, this is my another suggestion. There is only one section of this in the whole song, so you can make this to be a slow relaxing section with 3/1 long sliders (you can add a circle at 1/2s tick if possible, it depend on the rhythm). But only 3/1 long slider is fine imo since this still a cup, you can make variant in higher diffs. - Like I said in PM I will try get a modder like Deif to take a look but as far as I am concerned I find that snapping to lower snap divisor notes would not follow the rhythm correctly and not be timed right as how osu should be all about timing right ?
4. 00:54:127 (4,1,2,1) - you can remove this, and add spinner from 00:54:270 - until 00:55:642 -. - I don't like that idea sorry
5. 01:03:699 (3) - remove this, it feels too dense although the rhythm start more faster. - I'd rather not since it stays well with 01:05:070 (3) -
6. 01:11:756 (3) - change into a circle. You can leave the red tick blank so it wont to be too dense as its not that loud like at 01:13:299 -. - Hmm I will give this one a think although might not since the whole time on this bit I follow the bassline
7. 01:17:242 (3) - ^, or change into 1/1 slider and remove (1). - Same ^ and it also fits with the vocal slices here
8. 01:22:213 - add circle so it has similar density with 01:18:613 (4,1,2,3,4) - . - I didn't add one at 01:18:442 - though
9. 01:27:699 - ^. - Alright added one here due to no drums which bring out the vocals a bit more since nothing else to map on
10. 01:28:556 - Kiai should end here, and no kiai before 01:50:499 (1) - . This is kinda overused kiai, imo this is not included as a chorus, as it has faded vocal that started at 01:37:127 -, its mark that this section doesnt has the intensity as a chorus, so it doesnt deserve a kiai. I hope, i can give my opinion perfectly, since my english is bad so that i cant build my words xdxd. - Kiai's are fine
11. 01:43:470 (3) - you map this, but no in the previous part. Map it or no, its better to be consistent imo. - Oh you're right! I placed the notes in the previous parts
12. 01:48:099 (2,3,1,2,3) - this feels too dense and kinda a bit too fast for cup. Choose to follow vocal or music clearly to reduce the density. Or, you can rearrage the rhythm if you want to keep the density (at least i have something more better that follow both music and vocal clearly). - Okay yeah I see this working
    *picture
13. 01:55:299 (3) - change into circles, so that the 1/1 gap at 01:55:470 - can be filled by larger spacing. It makes the emphasize at 01:54:613 (1,2,3) - and the single drum kick at 01:55:642 (4) - feels more better. - Holy crap I didn't see that drum sound I missed out. Fixed
14. 02:00:099 (1,2,3,4) - this feels too dense, you could remove some notes. As you dont map 01:50:327 -, so you can leave 02:01:299 -, i have rhythm suggestion. - I know it might be much but I feel like I don't want to miss these sounds*picture
15. 02:06:098 (2,3) - same as 01:55:299 (3) - . - done (took a lot of fixing though)
16. 02:24:785 (1) - ctrl+h - I would but it plays out pretty straight already in the editor and plus want symmetry with previous and afterwards one
17. 02:27:527 (1,2,3) - avoid anti flow, this still a cup. It doesnt fit for beginner. - Same again as before
18. 02:31:642 (1,1) - umm, unrankable? Song with BPM>120 should has 1/1 gap between object and spinner in cup and salad difficulty.
    - woops XD. Fixed

A bit too dense, could be more improved over time.

Salad

1. 00:00:613 (2,1) - Is not it intended to be a jump? The sound has potential to be make jump, but it has less spacing. Spacing should be clear so player wouldnt be confused. - Increased spacing (it was meant to be a jump)
2. 00:04:899 (1) - It has less 8px compared the others, it seems accidentally moved 1 grid to the right, should be moved back 1 grid to the left for consistent spacing. - Sure done
3. 00:05:927 (3,1) - same as 00:00:613 (2,1) - - Increased
4. 00:18:613 (1,2) - ^ These has less spacing and it can be caught without dash. - increased
5. 00:23:413 (2,3,1) - until 00:44:670 (1) - . I will leave this as i said in cup diff, you should find new timming or do change the rhythm patterning. - Yep will find someone like said
6. 00:54:270 (1,2) - spinner could be applied here too. - Nah as said in cup
7. 00:59:414 (4,1) - confusing spacing. Increase distance if this intended to be jump, or vise versa. - Increased by 2 grid snaps
8. 01:00:956 (9,1) - ^. - Same again
9. 01:02:327 (3,1) - ^, spacing between each jump should be clear, so players not confused. - Done
   
   These following notes still can be caught without any dash, easily :

   01:12:099 (1) - , 01:14:842 (1) - , 01:16:213 (1) - , 01:21:699 (1,2,3) - , 01:32:670 (1) - , 01:38:156 (1) - , 01:40:899 (1) - , etc. I got that spacing below 2.6x has less spacing to become a jump. You could check the rest.
   - adjusted all at least in some way
10. 01:28:556 (1) - Kiai mode thing, reason in cup mod. - Nope
11. 01: 28: 556 (1,2,3) - I think, this kind of flow feels bad, moreover this still a salad and there is a jump that make inconvenience for beginners. - Made into a MUCH nicer flow now
12. 01:34:042 (1,2,3) - ^. - ^
13. 01:47:071 (2,3,1) - ^, why you dont made something similar like 01:45:013 (1,2,3) - instead x( . - ^
14. 01:48:956 (4,1,2,3) - You can use my rhythm patterning that i gave in cup mod - Done
15. 01:56:499 (2) - unsnapped object. - Fixed
16. 02:07:470 (2) - ^. - This one was already snapped for me O_o
17. 02:13:127 - missing note. - Nah I decided not to do this because it's not a strong sound and I wanted to reduce the notes in Salad and cup
18. The rest is copy paste pattern from the beginning, so just recopy it from the place where its come from. (Funny fact, i had just realized it! after this 4 hours modding, i had just realized it now! hh). Also recheck about those confusing jump, because i just did quick scan after mentioning some of it in the firsthalf.
19. 02:31:642 (1,1) - should have 1/1 gap - Done same again

Some jump is kinda ambiguous, some antiflow a bit bothered me, but its not interally necessary.

Platter

1. 00:01:384 (3) - move 1 grid to the left for better looking of stream. - Errrm... sure I guess XD?
2. 00:02:756 (3,4) - 2 grid to the right, then 00:02:928 (5) - 1 grid to the right ^. - Done
3. 00:04:127 (3) - same as before. - Done
4. 00:05:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - also. - Done
5. 00:14:842 (5,6) - this can be more intense to the song, *picture. - Nah it would be inconsistent with the rest then
6. 00:23:413 (2,3,1) - until 00:44:670 (1) - . I will leave this as i said in cup diff, you should find new timming or do change the rhythm patterning. - As said before
7. 00:54:813 (2,1) - This hyper is actually over, its almost from the edge to the edge, should be decreased at least. Regardless of that, this doesnt need to be hyper, although it has potential, a huge jump without a hyper is emphasized the sound enough. - Hell no. I don't want to fix this at all ;w;
8. 01:05:927 (5,6,1) - Unrankable? Is this that "Hyper must not be in conjunction with an edge dashes" thing? Tbh, i dont exactly understand with that statement in the Ranking Criteria, i just simply assume it like this kind of thing. CMIIW. - I'm not so sure myself but I hope i made something better
9. 01:22:385 (3) - move it more far from (2) so the jump is clearly visible. - Moved slightly more away
10. 01:28:556 (1) - kiai mode thing. - Nope
11. 01:29:242 (4,5) - i just dont understand with this kind of spacing, why is it has different spacing. Is it jump? or no? - Increased by 2 grids to show dash
12. 01:43:642 (1,2,3,4) - these has inconsistent spacing compared with the previous one. - Made (3) a bit bigger on dash space
13. 01:51:699 - why dont map this like what you do at 01:57:013 (4) - - I don't think it's that bad since the copy and paste bit on the next section does the same but will keep this in mind
14. 01:53:756 (3,4,5) - i know what happen when you were mapping this, its like kinda out of space, thats why 01:53:756 (3,4) - has unusual spacing. But 01:54:270 (5) - has less spacing from previous note which should has a lil bit more. You can move it to the right and tilt it more to manage the spacing - I think this is fine
15. 01:58:385 (4,1) - add hyper for consistent with 01:52:899 (4,1) - - Done and done at later bit too
16. 02:02:498 (4,1) - OMG, i forgot that this is copy paste rhythm. Ok, make a consider to make it consistent or not, give me your opinions about that thing. Ok i dont want to OOT, we can discuss another things in other places, lets finish this modding first. - What XD?
17. Check mod from beginning for the rest part. - Think I did it all

Just the spacing bothered me, rest is fine imo.

Rain

1. 00:06:270 (1) - inconsistent with 00:00:784 (1,2) - . After give it a try, i see that this streams isnt a copy paste'd XD . as example 00:02:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has different pattern with 00:08:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , although it has similar rhythm. - Fixed but made it like 00:06:270 (1) -
2. 00:16:727 (3,4) - the jump feels a bit odd, spacing could be increased. - Really O-o ? It seems fine to me
3. 00:23:413 (2,3,1) - until 00:44:670 (1) - . I will leave this as i said in cup diff, you should find new timming or do change the rhythm patterning. - yep yep
4. 00:56:327 (3) - i think ctrl+g and move it abi to left feels more fun to play - Instead I just increased the distance between previous note
5. 01:12:099 (1,2) - isnt it abit too far? you have 2.0x DS at 01:06:613 (1,2) - - Slightly decreased
6. 01:28:556 (1) - kiai thing - Nope
7. 01:51:013 (3,4) - miss placement jump, move 01:51:356 (4) - to x:136 - nah I like this
8. 01:56:499 (3,4) - ^, move 01:56:842 (4) - to x:144 - Nah again because it follow the main melody better this way as it is
9. Recheck mod for the rest part

The spacing a bit too over, looks like it intended to increase sr. but idk tho

Overdose

1. 00:04:641 (6,7) - okay, i dont see copy paste thing in the streams, so this should have been mapped mannualy, but why this map has hyper? the rhythm doesnt support to be a hyper - It's fine because it has a cymbal sound that's pretty loud
2. 00:11:627 (11) - im sure the slider end doesnt snapped properly, ask some pro timer for confirmation, looks like at 1/16 or anything. - We will see o:
3. 00:23:413 (2,3,1) - until 00:44:670 (1) - . I will leave this as i said in cup diff, you should find new timming or do change the rhythm patterning. - Yup
4. 00:45:356 (3,1) - okay this hyper doesnt make any sense, it just overused imo. - I honestly find this fine with all the other vocal sliced hypers
5. 00:47:070 (5,6,7) - also this. - I have had a lot of compliments for this so really want to keep sorry ;w;
6. 00:47:413 (1,2) - this is also kind of overused, you dont even do this at this triplet 00:49:470 (5,6,7) - though it has similar rhythm, how come that be exception for a variant purpose. - Okay fixed this one as agreed with you
7. 01:17:242 (4,5,6) - it suddenly stopped without any movement and its kinda awkward, would be better if you do something like *this. You can rearrage the next notes to keep the hyper. - I think these are nice honestly
8. 01:22:727 (6,7,8) - ^. - Same ^
9. 01:32:327 (4,1) - why hyper? - 01:32:499 (1) - is quite a loud synth sound
10. 01:37:813 (4,1) - ^. - ^
11. 01:40:727 (5,6) - it has 8px from edge screen, object from hyperjump should be minumum 16px from the edge of the screen. - I don't see what you're on about here
12. 01:43:299 (5,6) - hhmm. - Reduced
13. 01:53:756 (3,4) - after these long distance jumping, this distance feels uncomfortable, it lacks of movement and it has less preparation for a jumps afterward - Fixed
14. 01:54:613 (1,2) - this spacing feels very harsh, it is catchable but at least make it more smooth. - Reduced a little of the distance
15. Recheck mod for the rest part. - Nothing to change

Some part has overused hypers, its like mapped for high SR, no matterwhat it should has high SR so its fulfilled by high distance jump.

Okay, thats it. 7 hours felt so fast *yawns
Ask me, if there is any mistake i made. Because i did offline mod without any help from lord gtranslate

Thanks Asuna for the mod
Will be applying bit by bit over the next day or 2

RoseusJaeger wrote:

M4M from queue

General

Looks good.

Cup

00:00:099 (1,2,1) – You might want to keep the flow simple since this is a Cup. Ctrl+H on (1,2) and put on X=128 so the - Fixed differently

01:05:242 (1,2) – You're a pixel off from 1.2x and it kinda shows while playing. - This is fine as it's set to distance snap as I have usually O-o ? I always have it at 1.2x and only used 1.0x on the slow vocals before this


Salad

I'm able to walk or overshoot about 90% of the 1 /2 dashes. I'd increase them to 2.4x or 2.5x just to make sure they read as a dash.

Other than that, the flow is nice.


Platter

00:33:570 (3,1) – This feels weird flowing to the right because the 1/6 slider throws the player off. Try making (1) flow to the left of the playfield instead. -Fixed


Rain

Seems good to me. - :D


Formed

I personally don't like the ¼ hyper chains triplets but it does make the map unique so I won't ask you to change them. - I have had mixed reviews. But I really like them and yeah it does make it seem unique. I feel they fit really well too


Wasn't much I could comment on since your maps are usually pretty polished. Good luck fam.

Hareimu wrote:

[ General]

1. Difficulty Spread : kk
2. Background Size : 1366x768 background
3. Unsnapped objects : 02:05:585 (1) - This slider at the Formed diff is unsnapped due to not being over the white tick that changes SV from 1x to 1,30x completely. Please fix. - Done
4. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : nope
5. Metadata Issues : you could add drum n' bass/dnb/electronic to tags idk - Added a few things including "Dnb"
6. Timeline Issues : The uninherited timing point at 00:00:784 - (175bpm 20% volume one) is overlapping with an inherited timing point that has different settings (another sampleset, 30% volume) on all diffs, which is unrankable. Please fix this - Fixed with the help of Benny as I ran into a few problems. Thanks Benny
   Also, 01:28:556 - This part until 01:47:756 - shouldn't be a kiai section IMO, it's not that remarkable out of the other two kiai sections you already have and having a whole minute with the catcher and fruits glowing doesn't really sit with me. - Nah I like this kiai imo
7. Combo Colors : k
8. Unused Hitsounds : none
9. Hitsounds Issues : none
10. Unused Files / Other : nothing to add for now

[ Cup]

General

1. 01:03:699 (3) - Delete note? Seems weird in the middle of a 1/1 beat buildup that starts 01:01:127 - here. I'd add it 01:04:385 - here instead.
   - Done

Nothing else to add, really. Pretty fine IMO. -

[ Salad]

General

1. 00:00:613 (2,1) - Is this distance a dash? I believe it should be larger if that's the case, it's really weak and doesn't really look like a dashing distance at first glance (it's also pretty overshootable, I couldn't stop missing a droplet or two or even fruits because of dashing a bit too much). Been testing, and at around 2,8x/2,9x does the trick, I think. If you think you can apply this, don't forget to do so on every dash you have on the diff to keep consistency (unless there is a, IDK, slower/calmer section or w/e?) - Increased just this one
2. 02:00:613 (3,4) - ctrl+h? Flows better into the next 1/1 slider at 02:01:470 (1) - , rn it's not really intuitive as to how to play it and can cause unnecessary misses. - I find it's harder this way due to trying to catch an anti-flow reverse slider then

[ Platter]

General

1. 00:53:270 (2) - The shape of this slider, in gameplay, produces a stutter movement from the player that doesn't follow the lyrical line in the background. You could make it completely horizontal pointing to the right and move 00:53:927 (3) - to x:216 so that it made a triangular pattern, like this: - Fixed (Did some moving around also
   pattern
2. 01:20:842 (3,4,5) - I'd make this pattern a bit simpler than this, the movement between 3 and 4 is pretty demanding when it comes to key inputs (antiflow)
   and having an hyperdash between 4 and 5 doesn't help it much. ofc I could be wrong here, but platter players might find this a bit unexpected nontheless. - Fixed. Also did same for 01:26:327 (3,4,5) -
3. 01:26:327 (3,4,5) - Same as above, but even a bigger problem taking into account that there is a 1/4 dash between 01:27:098 (8,1) - these, so... I think that's a bit too much to ask for? xD - Oh I should have read this first XD. But yeah as said above fixed also
4. 01:42:785 (2) - Move to x:277, the movement between 01:42:270 (1,2,3) - these is really stuttery. - Agreed. But since I use Distance Snap it's x:264 instead

[ Rain]

General

1. Nothing to point out here, nice diff! - Yeah I really like my rain XD. Woooo :3

[ Formed]

General

1. 00:05:156 (4,5) - Shouldn't there be a hyperdash between these to keep consistency with 00:03:784 (4,5) - 00:02:413 (4,5) - 00:07:899 (4,5) - these? - I tried to be a bit various with the streams to make them more interesting but i'm not always an expert when it comes to streams so will see
2. 00:52:556 (5,6,7) - I love these <3 - Yeah I love these also :3
3. 02:30:870 (8,1) - Don't really know why there is a hyperdash between these aside from emphasizing the end of the song here, but me myself would rather remove it. Just a suggestion, dunno how would you modify it so that it emphasized all snare sounds correctly instead of just using 1/4 hyperdashes every 1/2 beats. - I think when it get's to 02:30:270 (1) - the arp in the song gets slightly louder. I did think about having 1/4's all the time up to the part you mention but it seems a bit much having that many. That's why I varied it a bit.

Finished! Nice song, I love it <3 - Thank you

Thanks for the mod Hareimu

OSUjanaiKATSURAda wrote:

Hi Wildone (late mod) sorry i ve been busy lately

General:

1. mind cutting the end of the audio where it goes silent for about 14 secs (which is not good in idle mode it will end but u will wait 14 seconds until the next song start etc) - Hmm will think about doing all this but don't know if it would be too much work to do then or not... Not sure if there is a fast way to do this
2. try to Add "Drum" and "Bass" in tags to ease reachability for people seeking for bass or drum particularly - Sure
3. i think its unecessary to have two timing sections in this song, one is enough and set offset to 108ms instead, then resnap all notes and inheriting sections ( timing setup then Ctrl+A and +9 ms to all ) - The reason I have 2 timing points is because if I make it into one of the green timing points it goes weird for some reason . Try it out ;w;

Formed

1. 00:14:842 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - as u can hear this melody is different than the rest and stronger and needs different representation (playing it like that sounds less rhythmical imo ) so i suggest to increase the spacing of the stream at this pattern or maybe characterize it differently -
   an example
   
   - I honestly think what I have now flows better
   
2. 00:20:328 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same suggestion as above - ^
   
   Vocals snapping suggestions
   
3. 00:26:156 (2) - this slider's end should be on 1/6 (next tick) not on 1/12 ( play it on 25% playback rate there will be no sound even after it passes the 1/12 tick, and it starts technically at the next tick )
4. 00:26:670 (1) - this starts and sounds better when its mapped to the more audible sound at 1/12 (next tick) ofc the tail should stay where it was
   
   
5. 00:32:213 (1) - if you mapping this to vocals it start one tick earlier (1/12) ( if u changed fix the slider extend slider to where it ended before )
   
   
6. 00:32:870 (2) - this the previous gey tick is where it should start ( when u change etc lol )
   
7. 00:34:856 (1) - and this is clearly starting on 1/6
8. 00:35:199 (2) - this seems to start on the next grey tick (1/12)
9. 00:37:985 (1) - this should start on 1/16 next gey tick ( when etc )
10. 00:39:870 (2) - hmm it seems too far from where its supposed to be unless you were following that change in tone, it/vocal starts here anyway 00:39:806 - (1/16)
11. 00:40:385 (3) - yea it seems that what u were following
12. 00:41:527 (3) - i suggest to put this on the white tick where the sound is more important/emphasising the vocal/word at that part
    Done - I actually have plans to go over this with a QAT soon. As much as I consider your points here and your timings it's just that a QAT might see somethings as wrong so best to check with them.
    
    
13. 00:43:842 (2) - hmm it will play better if you just copied then ctrl+h 00:43:156 (1) - - Done (I presume you mean to CTRL + G this too ?)
14. 00:47:413 (1) - a fully vertical slider would fit better that vocal and strong beat imo or just apply a circle like u did here 00:50:156 (1) - - Hmmm I don't see it being really that much changing but if mentioned again then will change
15. 00:52:899 (1) - same as above - ^
16. 00:53:270 (2) - still not enough to invovle a hyper dash here a normal move is fitting that part better like u did before - Good point. Fixed
17. 00:58:385 (1) - same as above - Confused here O-o This has no hyper coming off of this note ?
18. 01:08:499 (2) - rotate it vertically heading to right, as it feels now like the rhythm is drawn when it comes - I don't see it changing much. I think it's nice as it is
19. 01:13:985 (2) - same - ^
20. 01:59:242 (3,4) - it doesnt fit well its the similiar to the case as above ( ctrl+g can improve it ) - Do you mean just (3) ? because doing it with both seems weird. But fixed if you meant (3)
21. 02:01:470 (1,2) - same thing the flow freezes where it should be active try to move 02:01:813 (2) - to x240 y192 - Fixed differently
22. 02:10:213 (3,4) - same suggestion - As before
23. 02:15:527 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - same suggestion i mentioned at 00:14:842 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - - Same as
24. 02:31:642 (1) - stacking this on (3) gives better emphasis to the last beat ( bigger jump ) - I find that a bad idea D:

Rain

1. *if you are mapping those various metronome vocals in the same ticks as "Formed" then apply the same suggestions mentioned above (for the rest of diffs too ) - Same as before
2. 00:09:185 (3,4) - a hyper would fit rhythmically and aesthetically better imo - If I did this then it wouldn't match with the no hyper in first stream like this then. Plus it's hard to place it so it would hyper also
3. 00:28:899 (2) - i recommend a similiar shape as 00:26:156 (2) - since they share same tone - nah this is fine as it is
4. 00:43:842 (2) - same suggestion copy paste 00:43:156 (1) - - I would but 00:43:842 (2) - wouldn't hyper I think. but reduced distances 00:43:156 (1,2) - instead by a little
5. 01:45:013 (1) - move a little bit to left - Why O-o ?
6. 01:46:385 (1) - a little bit to right - ^
7. 02:31:642 (1) - a little bit to right xD - no ;w;

Platter

1. 00:05:927 (7,1) - since you made a hyperdash here i think its better if u keep it consistent on this parts 00:00:784 (1) - and 00:11:756 (1) - - did some things but some different
2. 00:19:470 (3) - stack it on (2) like u did at 00:16:727 (3) - - Done
3. 00:17:927 (2,3,4) - increase the space for bit bigger jump - Done
4. 00:30:613 (4,1) - same thing a slight jump would flow better - I find this one fine

Salad

1. 00:23:413 (2,3) - a jump like u will do later in such strong vocals try to ctrl+g slider then stack circle on 00:24:213 (1) -
2. 00:23:413 (2) - its clearly unsnapped (well i already mentioned suggestions about this part)
   *rest is Clean
   - Fixed all :3

Cup

1. *imo the vocals part it will not be well represented because its a cup where there shouyld be no jumps and it sounds unrhtyhmical catching those close unstable metronomes i think its better if you map the music sounds with long sliders instead or try this
2. 00:27:870 (3) - i think it would be better replacing it with a circle ( simple rhythm will make things clearer) - Sounds good
3. 00:29:413 (1) - same - ^
4. 00:30:785 (1) - same - Maybe not this one because it sounds kind of naked without the tail end
5. 00:34:856 (1) - same - Done
6. 00:37:642 (3) - same - ^
7. 00:39:185 (1) - same - ^
8. 00:41:242 (2,3) - increase spacing - no need
9. 00:41:727 (1,2) - same thing - ^
10. *Rest is good

Nice Mapset
Goodluck !!

Cheers dude
Thanks for the mod
And the star

WildOne94 wrote:

Cheers dude

Will probably apply this in 2 or 3 days time since tomorrow I have my University graduation :O!! Also need to apply Dragonslayer96's first too

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

heya. if i screw up, just yell really loud. jbh has found a way to yell at people around the world so ask him if you don't know how to do it
but here for a mod. the song itself sounds like it should be salad and above from preview point, but that is first hear and not even looking at the maps or hearing the full song. preview point just makes me say "i am glad i don't play harder diffs", but enough on the first thoughts. here is the mod

General

you can add <world> to the tags. i know that - at least for me - i would probably never type wrld for the song, get frustrated and just go and look up wild platter (or any CtB diff) just to find this song. Also, add <oil> to tags since a lot of people know you by that too - Eh I honestly don't see any point in adding any of these tags since "world" is not the right way of spelling the artists name. Plus not many people know me by "oil" XD

Cup

00:00:784 (1) - through numerous testplays (and even looking at the map beforehand) i feel like this should be flipped. Testplays it feels even more awkward than what I originally thought it would be by playing through it. Basically, switching the position of that note with 00:01:470 (2,3) - plays better for me because - for me - the movement back is not what I would expect on a cup how you have it mapped. - I think I already fixed this in previous mods or in my own time
00:20:842 (2,3) - move these notes closer to 00:19:985 (1) - for an easier transition.Though you have other spots with similar distances, this is the only spot that made me second guess for a split second. It might just be because vocals are here and I switched to them, but this is the only spot that it happened when I was tesplaying - This is fine because distance snap was on all the time. So every distance should be right.

other than those two, Cup is good to me.

Salad

01:52:556 (2,3) - - This one is fine 01:58:042 (2,3) - - Made adjustments 02:03:527 (2,3) - - This one is fine and 02:09:013 (2) - - made adjustments but to (3) instead these you can emphasize with at least jumps due to the music.

Platter

more copy/paste patterns \o/
there are a few things i want to discuss before i post the mod on platter. message me somewhere and i will talk - Let me know plz

Went through some timing stuff for vocals with Deif. Gotta get that QAT pass satisfaction . Thanks Deif

WildOne94 wrote:

1. i think its unecessary to have two timing sections in this song, one is enough and set offset to 108ms instead, then resnap all notes and inheriting sections ( timing setup then Ctrl+A and +9 ms to all ) - The reason I have 2 timing points is because if I make it into one of the green timing points it goes weird for some reason . Try it out ;w;

alienflybot wrote:

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Yes, you guessed it right, mod from your Secret Santa! - Santa baby!!

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

• 
  Tags

1. Replace 'Dance/Electronic' with 'Dance' and 'Electronic' separately. No one is going to search this map with this whole keyword typed. - Done

[ Cup]

• 
  Gameplay
  Too many 1/2 patterns which can be really difficult for beginners, please reduce the density of these by changing most to 1/1. For instance:

1. 00:00:099 (1,2,1) - , 00:10:728 (2,3,4) - etc. - For now I will leave these as we discussed in PM that we might IRC this diff at some point soon. I think we could have proper talks about these then
2. Also it would be better if you only use 1/2 as finishers. For example, at 00:00:785 - 00:05:928 - , you can use mostly 1/1 patterns and add some 1/2 notes at 00:05:585 - 00:05:928 - . -
   Check the entire map with the above-mentioned issue and fix accordingly. - I am honestly a little confused what you mean here O-o. Might need to bring it up in the IRC again but I find it fine as it is so far.
   
   Complex snapping, for example:
3. 00:26:156 (2,1) - So awkward... Refrain from using advanced snaps please. Also the Ranking Criteria highly recommends using 1/1 and 1/2 patterns only. - Alright for this diff only I can make it so it's a 1/2 instead
4. 00:32:199 (1,2) - ^ - I find this one is fine due to it only being 1/8th off a 1/2 away from it's next note.
   Check the entire map with the above-mentioned issue and fix accordingly.
   
   Going to stop here due to high amount of difficulties and I think most of the problems are as above.

[ Salad]

• 
  Gameplay

1. Too many dashing, I suggest having dash at finishers so the rhythm is still there to be followed. For example, at the first stanza 00:00:785 - 00:06:099 - , I will put dash at 00:05:928 (3,1) - or both 00:03:185 (3,1) - and 00:05:928 (3,1) - so the dashing is not too dense. The Kiai Time / chorus part would be fine with such density, so only the introduction and the closing part can have the amount of dashes reduced. - Made adjustments. Hope it's better
   
2. 00:26:156 (2,1) - Same as one stated in Cup. - Done
   
   Ambiguous distance, for example:
3. 02:09:699 (1,2) - , 02:11:414 (2,3) - can be reached without dashing. Maybe you reduce the former while add dash to the latter in this case. Check the entire map to look for the same issue and make slight adjustment to these distances. - Hope they work out better

[ Platter]

• 
  Gameplay
  Ambiguous distance, for example:

1. 00:01:642 (6,7) - , 00:03:014 (6,7) - , 00:04:385 (6,7) - I had thoughts to tap dashes at these points though they are actually catchable by simply walking. I suggest reducing these however so the dashes at 00:01:814 (7,1) - , 00:03:185 (7,1) - and 00:04:556 (7,1) - can be more focused. Also check the remaining parts because I think most of them have the same issue. - Instead of reducing I increased instead as I like these dashes

[ Rain]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 00:08:928 (8,1,2,3,4) - Not a comfortable stream pattern here... It requires some momentum from the hyperdash to reach (3). - made it much nicer
2. 00:15:271 (10,11) - Better reduce these distances before the hyperdash to the another side, which is too hard to catch. Fix this to the rest stream pattern as well, for instance, 00:20:756 (10,11) - , 02:21:442 (10,11) - and etc. - Done but don't know if I am happy with it...

[ Formed]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 01:29:242 (4,5) - Too hard to make a quick turn here with a dash. - Reduced by 2 grids to the right with (4)
2. 01:30:271 (2,3) - ^ - ^
3. 01:35:756 (2,3) - ^ - ^

There you go hohoho - Thanks Alien Santa :^)

Thanks a bunch

Benny- wrote:

im here because im your santa - I want a red firetruck for Xmas please Santa >///<

merry christmas

Cup

1. 01:10:728 (1,2) - the way you put the pattern here 01:07:985 (1,2) - fits a lot better for a cup and also for consistency with previous patterns, that also applies to similar places - - I don't see this being a problem at all. Movement is still the simple Left > Right motion that comes to expect with cups
2. 02:00:099 (1) - can remove repeat here also, a pretty long 1/2 pattern here - Hmm quite a loud synth. I kinda want to leave it in ;w;
3. Can't find much else, I'd just be nitpicking and that's not fun

Salad

1. 00:22:728 - 00:44:671 - In this part there are a few distances that feel very ambigous, like 00:27:871 (3,1) - 00:31:985 (3,1) - and so on. imo this part should have any dashes at all except 00:32:885 (2,1) - 00:43:856 (2,1) - - I managed to fix those dashes that didn't require a dash but I feel that having no dashes here feels a bit boring imo.
2. Generally still a lot of dashes, try having dashes only to the strongest beats - Anything that catches my eye I will do but mostly will see what others say. I was tweaking a lot of this the other day

Platter

1. 00:11:414 (10,1) - Would be supercool if you could make a hyper here too, additionally you could add a note here 00:11:585 - for the piano. A hyper and a note here fits well for consistency with previous parts 00:00:614 (5,1) - 00:05:928 (7,1) - - I would but if you look at overdose. The sound does not actually play on the 1/4 so it would be played to nothing pretty much. I also don't know why this wasn't mentioned in Rain though also :thinking:
2. 00:33:571 (3) - also this is inconsistent with previous sounds like this where you've either not mapped the piano or simplified it to one note. I suggest you do the same here. - Hmmm I think it's more noticable here but I did make some changes to the note itself by just adding a single Circle note instead due to it being a bit complex
3. Other than that I like this diff owob

Rain

1. 00:52:214 (4,5,6,7) - a bit cramped - I realised this was accidentally on 1.0 spacing and not 1.2 which I was supposed to have XD. Increased. (And on the other places)
2. 00:57:699 (4,5,6,7) - same here - ^
3. 01:05:928 (5,6,1) - Unfortunately hypers with different snaps in direct contact with each other is unrankable in a rain difficulty so you're gonna have to remove one of them or perhaps try making 6 an extended slider - Ahhhhh it really pained me to change this but if it's unrankable then I guess I must change ;w;. Fixed ;w;
4. 01:09:614 (4,5) - I think generally for this first kiai part, you can add hypers on beats like this too to balance out the hypers a bit to the next part where you got double hypers like this 01:18:271 (4,5,1) - - I didn't change these into hypers because I don't want toooo many of these and the next section only contains 2. I think it's okay but the next section is more upbeat with the vocal slices so it upbeats the diff a bit. I did however fix 01:13:985 (2,3) - which I noticed after reading this as I didn't add a hyper here but I did before.
5. 01:49:471 (2,3) - this can also be a hyper - Alright yeah since I did with Overdose. Fixed
6. 01:50:499 - Then in this last kiai part you have absolutely no 1/4 hypers or any double hypers like the previous kiais had... This is like the finale and should be the top point in the map - I did make some changes but don't think it's as high as you expect. I increased a lot of distances such as 01:54:099 (4,5,6) - 01:59:585 (4,5,6) - (and the other 2 of these). And also 02:11:585 (3,4,5) -

Formed

1. 00:10:214 (7,8,1) - strong beat is 1 so would make more sense to have a hyper between 8 and 1 - I wanted to be a little different here and besides I don't think it's THAT strong.
   same as 00:07:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -
2. 00:10:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Since these beats stand out a lot compared to the other streams it would be cool to emphasise that with more hypers but that's up to you - Alright done one thing. (I guess this changes the last suggestion then XD)
3. 00:11:714 - You could add a note here also - Too hard for the hyper then imo even for overdose
4. 00:21:614 - here also would fit with a note - Done
5. 00:46:214 (2,3,4) - whaat, this is literally one of the most calm parts in the song, yet it contains a whole lot of hypers on beats that doesn't really support it... Especially the triplets 00:47:071 (5,6,7) - are the most advanced 1/4 usage in the whole song and even kiai doesn't use those 01:17:242 (4,5,6) - 01:19:985 (5,6,7) - - Removed some hypers
6. 02:27:871 (5,6,1) - Could be cool to place hypers according to the claps on 02:28:128 - 02:28:299 - to create some variation in the streams, just back and forth doesn't compliment the music very well - Following another suggestion you gave I made it so that they hyper with when the 1/4 arp gets louder

Good luck with this!

TY Benny

Kurokami wrote:

I want to play AC Origins instead. :c - I am such torture :^)

[Cup]

00:00:099 (1) -, 00:01:471 (2,3) -, 00:02:842 (2,3) -, etc - Your placement at these are consuming the whole width of the catcher which requires the players to have a good control over it. It is something that most new player will not have. Instead of straight horizontal sliders I suggest a slight tilted ones to make them much more lenient. - wow it actually makes a really nice change some how! Fixed multiple of these. (gone down by 0.01 star woo)
00:00:099 (1,2,1) - These kind of patterns are really hard for beginners because they tends to press dash even where only a slight move is enough. I would place the first (1) to the other side of (2) - Alright fair
00:41:242 (2,3) - The low distance between these are causing a weird pause in the flow which I think it should not be there. Might try to increase it a little bit. - Done. Easy fix actually as 00:40:728 (1,2) - were not snapped correctly to 1.0 distance.
01:25:128 (4,5) - Why this isn't a repeat slider? It has a kick in the middle plus that weird standstill in the movement kinda bugs me. - As you may see on the timeline this section has SO many notes that I had to remove at least some to reduce density and mapping over the top for cup. So that's why in this case I missed out the drum but I think it acts alright honestly.
01:28:214 (4) - This actually could be a single circle so you can increase the distance at the start of the next kiai to have better emphasis. - Yeah good point. Fixed
01:41:585 (2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You had a very nice left-right movement theme in this kiai up until this point which broke when you decided to change your patterns slightly. It would actually be nice to keep using the same movement up to the kiai's end. - Actually I quite like it as I found it very fitting with the vocals in the music. I find it smooth
02:00:099 (1,2,3) - Again a slight sudden direction change, similar to the beginning of this difficulty. - I don't find this one as bad as the starting one.
02:08:328 (1,2,1) - Right movement, sudden left then again right? It is a fun and cool pattern but might be a bit hard for this level but it might just to me. - I didn't change the pattern as I struggled for placements of notes but I did move 02:09:014 (2) - closer to the next note for more ease
02:13:299 (2,3) - At this point the distance from the previous slider is huge yet to the next is tiny. I would move (2) to right and (3) to left a bit or flip them horizontally to make it play better. - Oh god yeah this was pretty big distance. I did option 2 and flipped.

[Salad]

00:22:728 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - This part is the exact same on the timeline as Cup, no wonder the gap is low between these two difficulty actually. It actually could be fine but I see potential to lower the note count for Cup at this point. - It would be nice to discuss this as I worry about removing notes without someone suggesting which ones to delete. As I don't know what else I could do imo to make easier.

[Platter]

00:11:414 (10,1) - This jump feels really weird although it might be just to me because I don't like antiflow movements. I would mirror everything before (10) in order to correct the flow. - I fixed this but I didn't need to Ctrl + H the whole start.
01:03:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This stream feels a little bit plain, you should try to create some pattern instead of just a simple curve. - Yeah good point I did make it quite simple. I didn't change the first combo stream but 01:04:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I made more interesting
[]

I will stop here for now. I'm actually a little bit tired to do monotonous work at the moment. I can't play AR9.4 very well anyway and Rain feels like an endless jumping map, which is not bad but not my type at all, not now at least.

JBHyperion wrote:

General

1. 00:37:128 - Sounds to me like this slider ends better on the white tick for the "The" vocal, sounds later than similar ones at 00:23:414 (2) - but might just be me - I went over timing with Deif but I agree that I could maybe move the first one to a more simple timing spot like the white tick so changed that one. But for me the 2nd suggestion sounded perfect.
2. Definitely need more volume on the hitsounding throughout - I honestly thought you hadn't added any at all until I put music to 0%, and even then they are hard to hear lmao - Increased. Although not sure if the whistle is too blended in with the drum in the song.
3. 02:31:985 (1) - Volume is still quite loud on this ending part, some more volume on the spinner would be helpful - I honestly find it's at an alright volume level imo.

Cup
My only real gripe with this diff is the density. Patterns flow fine and spacing is good throughout, but at this BPM, with no breaks, it's really unfair to use such long unbroken 1/2 chains and expect new players to keep concentration, since missing can chunk your HP in a significant way even at low HP

1. 01:10:728 (1,2,3) - etc. - Could avoid mapping the background synth to focus on drumline, removing a repeat and leaving a 1/1 gap - Made a lot easier. and on the next part like this too
2. 01:18:614 (4,1,2,3,4) - 01:24:099 (4,1,2,3,4) - etc. - these could instead follow vocals and utilise more 1/1 sliders - Made some adjustments and made it a bit easier to navigate also.
3. 02:00:099 (1,2,3,4,1) - etc. - Could avoid mixing synth and drums to leave a few more 1/1 gaps - I think you will be MUCH happier with this now

Salad

1. 00:27:871 (3,1) - 00:29:414 (1,2) - Unexpected dashes given the musical intensity here, you can keep this to a walk, there are no other instrument dashes in this section and 00:30:785 (1,2) - is a stronger vocal but doesn't have dash so
2. 00:34:856 (1,2) - 00:37:642 (3,1) - As above, vocal is still weak here
3. 00:40:342 (3,1) - Walkable when I think you intended a dash
4. 01:19:985 (5,1) - 01:25:471 (5,1) - As above
5. 01:29:242 (2,3) - 01:30:614 (2,3) - etc. - Seems a weird place to put jumps the synth on the downbeat is stronger each time and you in fact did do that at 01:31:985 (2,3) - and following
6. 01:55:299 (3,1) - 02:06:271 (3,1) - etc. - Walkable

Basically just make sure things you intended to be dashes are clearly dashes and vice versa
Fixed Everything and made a heck of a lot of adjustments which I am sure you will be pleased about

Platter

1. 00:17:242 (1,2) - Ambiguous walk/dash distance that confuses me as to how I am meant to play it
2. 01:48:271 (3,5,2) - Kinda walkable although I think you intended a dash to each of these given the drum sound
3. 01:55:128 (2,3) - 02:06:099 (2,3) - 1/4 here for the synth would alleviate the 1/2 monotony and be more consistent with the 1/4 sounds you mapped elsewhere, this is the kiai after all, try to make it stand out :p
4. 02:12:099 (6,1) - Splitting (6) into two circles and having dash > hyper here would be great to emphasise the kiai end with these two strong drum sounds
5. 02:16:556 (1,2) - 02:17:928 (1,2) - More ambiguous spacings, don't forget to clarify these as dashes since you basically copypasted them from earlier zzz
   Fixed all again

Rain

1. 00:04:556 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:07:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you are aware different stream shapes exist right? This pattern is really boring to play over and over again, try throwing in some L-shaped, horizontal or stacked repeat slider patterns for variety - I honestly found this quite nice imo and I let a lot of testplayers come to me for it and it was liked quite a bit. I think it also shows nice flow. It might seem a bit repetitive but to me I really like it.
2. 00:15:871 (1,2) - 00:18:956 (2,3) - Missing hypers based on your previous patterning, synth here is really strong e.g. 00:13:471 (2,3) - - Just a heads up as I did change a bit to these for the 2nd part for the outro as I thought it would be nice to change it up more for the ending (And it makes it seem different too kek). Different by have some dashes like at 02:17:414 (3,4) - because I find it more climatic this way. But fixed
3. 01:54:614 (1,2) - 02:05:585 (1,2) - Deceptive spacing since it looks walkable, please make this bigger by reducing the curve on (1) or something so the dash is more clear - 01:55:128 (2,3,4) - Moved these left a bit more (same for the other one)
4. 02:11:242 (2,3) - Surprised you skipped the drum triplet here, feels like it would be a nice way to emphasise the kiai end - I find it's quite weak here and I think i will keep as it is. Think it's more for overdose imo. I think it might be a bit unexpected too for a 1/4 here.
5. 02:16:556 (1,2) - 02:19:642 (2,3) - 02:19:642 (2,3) - etc. - More skipped hypers on strong synth sounds I reckon

Fun diff until you realise it's the same patterns copypasted over and over again ;w; - Fixed ;w;

Formed

1. 00:47:071 (5,6,7) - Cool, kudos for trying something unexpected like this, hope you keep it - Heck yeah I love these also
2. 00:53:285 (2) - Would be cool split into two sliders following the vocal with a hyper between them, feels a bit underwhelming atm (and also the low SV out of the strong slider makes it really easy to overshoot and droplet miss lol) - Oh man really ? I find this is such a nice and calm vocal to have a gentle dash to and I didn't find it hard at all O-o.
3. 01:05:585 (5,6,7) - Wish you'd done something more interesting than more regular flow 1/4 chain here, like idk, bwoah to make the kiai start stand out more - Will discuss an alternative with you in PM

Personally the first half of each kiai feels very samey, lots of regular left/right flow again, could use some more antiflow and direction changes for variety. Up to you to decide whether this is a concern to you

Hope this helps, good luck! (:

JBHyperion wrote:

Recheck, no kudosu

Cup

1. Nothing to complain about, density is much more appropriate now

Salad

1. 01:36:442 (3,1) - Woah there partner, that's a pretty strong dash all of a sudden, you previous ones were around the 2.8-3.0x DS mark but this is 3.4 eek. Try reducing this please
2. 01:51:528 (3,1) - To dash or not to dash, that is the question, try 2.1x on this puppy. There are still some others such as 01:59:756 (3,1) - 02:02:499 (3,1) - 02:07:985 (3,1) - etc. so buff those a bit too please - Fixed all and put those puppies to around 2.1x

Platter

1. 00:33:571 (3,1) - This is a mean 3/8 dash the player won't be expecting, better to reduce the distance and offer a more lenient dash for the odd snap - moved 00:33:699 (1) - about 2 grid spaces right
2. 01:13:471 (1,2) - 01:18:099 (3,4) - 01:18:614 (5,1) - etc. could use larger dash distances to emphasise the synth/vocals, kinda easy to overshoot atm, see 01:16:214 (1,2) - for an example of "comfortable" dash spacing
3. 01:48:614 (4,5,1) - Low distancing here creates a bit of a flowstop, feels awkward to play when you're building back up to another kiai section. This can stay walkable, but you could opt for slightly higher spacing for better flow - Not really a major change here as I decided to keep walk-able as you say but I did just nudge 01:48:785 (5,1) - a bit left to make it a bit better spaced out for nicer walking.
4. 02:11:414 (2,3) - No hyper here for the strong synth sound? Would be a nice way to finish the kiai imo - Made into a dash instead. As close to another hyper.

Basically same problem the Salad has before, the Platter has now - idk if you fixed all the spacings with my last mod or just the ones I pointed out, but 1.95x is actually a somewhat walkable distance here, and you use it throughout for dashes. This is confusing to the player when they miss something that's visually similar to all other spacings because you put a direction change or whatever, so wherever you use dashes, please buff the spacing to around 2.2-2.4x for more clarity - Alright yeah. Done some buffing such as these to at least be 2.1x or 2.2x 00:18:099 (3,4) - 00:42:656 (2,1) - 00:56:156 (2,3) - 00:57:528 (3,4) - 01:12:785 (3,4,1) - 01:36:099 (4,5) - 01:59:071 (2,3) - 01:59:242 (3,4) - 02:10:042 (2,3) - 02:10:556 (4,5) - 02:18:785 (3,4) - (Listed them all)

The non-replies mean fixed

Rain

1. 00:50:842 (3,1) - Annoyingly low distance, very easy to overshoot here, could easily take (1) to x-248 or so for more flow
2. 00:53:285 (2) - I mentioned this in Overdose but you said it was a "nice calm vocal", don't really see how that pans out since it totally stands out from everything else around it. At the very least you should add more of a dash to this if you don't want to split into two sliders - Added more dash
3. 00:54:271 (1,2) - Easy to overshoot due to small spacing based on previous slider's momentum, Make (2) more curved and move the head further right for better flow - Curved and moved more so it's around 2.1x - 2.2x distance
4. 01:56:499 (3,4,5) - Shouldn't the hyper be to (5) for the synth and snare sound? As it is (4.5) is very low and easy to overshoot - Instead I just moved (5) left/right a bit for these 2 places in the kiai by a little nudge so people don't overshoot as much and makes it a nice walking distance after hyper. I prefer the hyper from (5) to (1) also with the synth.
5. 02:05:585 (1,2) - Slightly stronger dash than I was expecting based on previous patterns, mind reducing this one a little? - Done to the other one too by a few grid spaces

Formed

1. 00:52:899 (1,2) - Reiterating, again, the distance here is too low. Even if you don't want to split this up into two sliders, please at least try (2) at x-256 and tell me the flow isn't better - Moved to x:256
2. 01:27:356 (3,4,5) - Really unexpected to have a slow walk here after the previous pattern, simple fix would be to put (4) on the right side of (5), adding a hyper for the vocal that maintains the intensity into the next kiai. Another direction change would be perfect here, but I don't think you could fit one in at this BPM without redoing a bunch of other patterns, so I won't go that far - Yup done

Call me back.

1. Mended a few rogue dashes on Salad
2. Increased a distance on Platter
3. Cleaned up some flow and spacing on Formed
4. Re-snapped a couple of vocals on all diffs

Sinnoh wrote:

Hi, I felt that there could still be a couple improvements.
00:31:342 (2) - Using a silent slidertick hitsound is something to consider, since they're an ignored beat here. - Made this point so it has 5%
audio for a split 1/8th second.
Combo colours 3,4 should be swapped so they aren't next to each other, having two similar colours next to each other can cause reading issues. - Alright

Formed
00:09:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - + 02:27:871 (5) - Not sure what's really changed in the music to justify large stream jumps here, I'd suggest removing the jump betwee 6,7 since there's almost nothing to emphasise compared to the other jumps, which all have drums - Actually if you listen closely you can hear that the 1/4 arp in the background get's more intense. That's why I did this
00:22:728 (1,2) - Increasing distance so this is a dash could work, since vocal is a bit higher pitched. + 00:28:214 (1,2) - also has a dash - I made this a non-dash as a semi recovery (yes even for overdose). Just because it dives right into the calm section and having a dash her does not feel the same when going into a calmer part
01:05:585 (5,6) - All of the stream movement here is just left / right movement. If you ctrl-g these sliders, it would add a bit of antiflow to emphasise the new sounds. - I'm not a massive fan of this sorry ;(
01:36:099 (4,5) - This distance felt a bit like an edge dash, could nerf - Reduced
01:48:442 (5) - This could easily have lower spacing + 1/4 rhythm D: - What are you on about o-o ? (5) is Distance snapped perfectly to the others ?
02:11:414 (3) - This pattern heavily emphasises the sounds on this slider end, as you have to do many button presses to catch both head + tail here. Moving this to the left side of 02:11:242 (2) - emphasises 3 less, and 4 more. - Heck no! That's a HUGE 1/4 jump then. I did some adjustments and tried it out (Only on spacing) and it seems to play fine.

Optional stuff
00:10:728 (2) - Stream shapes could be more interesting rather than just using curve shapes like the rest of this map. You could try using sliders or straight lines to emphasise the new sounds here. - Eh I find it's nice and smooth imo.
00:21:356 (1,2,3,4) - Same idea above, using straight lines helps show there's a new instrument instead of synths - I changed this slightly
00:17:242 (1,2,3) - Spacing felt a but small here, would move 00:17:242 (1,2) - to x120 so that there's equal distance between the three objects - Made slightly different changes

Rain
02:05:585 (1,2) - Edge dashy - Literally nudged one grid space. As for the other one too
Same as overdose, I think the general section of 01:47:756 (1) - could use much lower spacing to contrast the kiais better. Changing distances from tap-dashes to walks would make the difference clearer. - I find it's fine

Platter
00:22:728 (1) - If you compare distance spacings to rain for this part of the song till the kiai, you'll find there's a lot of places that have dashes on platter which rain doesn't have. Try to keep distances either clear dashes or walks, since this is a low intensity section + diff, lower intensity is needed. - I made some different spacings here but if I were to decrease anymore it would make it walk-able which is not intended. I'm not sure if this is what you meant but I find it's fine around here.
01:27:099 (8,1) - This jump is really large for a 1/4 dash, harder than a hyper, just lower a bit. - Reduced by a tiny bit
01:51:014 (2,3,4,1) - 02:01:985 (2) - Combining dashes + hyperdashes is pretty hard for this level, I'd highly suggest to remove the dash here and make 01:51:014 (2) - vertical. - I didn't remove the dash as I thought it was fine but I did reduce distances here to make it slightly more easier

Salad
00:03:185 (3,1) - 02:26:157 (1) - Dashes should really not be used here, there's no difference to 00:04:556 (3,1) - besides that it lands on a downbeat. That + it reduces emphasis on 00:05:928 (3,1) - , as having more dashes decreases their importance. - I disagree here. I find it would be a bit empty of dashes then when it does have something to go with. I liked keeping AFB's idea of having one dash and one non dash for these sections.
00:31:342 (2) - Just simplify rhythm here to 1/1, slider tick is overlapping the fruit which looks quite odd. Same for cup - I discussed this note literally recently with JBH. If I were to switch to 1/1 it would not only be inconsistent with the rest of the diffs but it would also not sound correct to play on.
00:45:356 (3,1) - 00:56:328 (3,1) - Distance unclear if it's dash or walk - Made clearer
01:30:956 (3,1) - Dash is too large compared to others - Reduced
01:31:985 (2,3) - That + combined with antiflow is quite tricky for new players, ctrl-h would make this part much easier to follow, especially since the other parts were also using easier flow. - Fixed. It will also match 01:37:471 (2,3) - too

Cup
00:43:856 (2,1) - This felt really under-emphasised. Rotating 00:43:856 (2) - clockwise a bit would help increase distance a bit
01:28:214 (4,1) - Same, increase distance of 4,1 a little

Applied all for cup

Unfortunetaly, I can't qualify even if I pass the ctb application since probation is a thing, good luck!

Benny- wrote:

qualified

stuff

2017-12-16 19:22 Benny-: rrrrr
2017-12-16 19:22 WildOne94: rrrrrrr
2017-12-16 19:22 WildOne94: I will quickly brb for like 2 or 3 mins just to feed my dog
2017-12-16 19:23 Benny-: ok
2017-12-16 19:25 WildOne94: back
2017-12-16 19:26 WildOne94: Yeah I am home alone for the weekend so I must look after all the animals in the house XD
2017-12-16 19:26 WildOne94: And the chickens outside owo
2017-12-16 19:26 Benny-: owo
2017-12-16 19:26 Benny-: ok
2017-12-16 19:27 Benny-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1429066 WRLD - By Design [Salad]]
2017-12-16 19:28 WildOne94: on it
2017-12-16 19:28 Benny-: 00:03:185 (3,1) - why is this dash but not 00:01:814 (3,1) - 00:04:556 (3,1) - 00:07:299 (3,1) -
2017-12-16 19:29 WildOne94: AFB gave me the idea here to dash on and off because it might be a bit too much to dash so much ?
2017-12-16 19:29 WildOne94: But what do you think ?
2017-12-16 19:29 Benny-: yeah but
2017-12-16 19:29 Benny-: it gets kind of inconsistent in the end here
2017-12-16 19:29 Benny-: 00:08:671 (3,1) - 00:10:042 (3,1) -
2017-12-16 19:29 Benny-: two dashes on a downbeat in a row
2017-12-16 19:30 WildOne94: What should I do here O: ?
2017-12-16 19:30 Benny-: 00:10:042 (3,1) - i'd remove here and add a dash here 00:10:385 (1,2) - instead
2017-12-16 19:30 Benny-: 00:11:414 (4,1) - also is this meant to be a dash?
2017-12-16 19:31 WildOne94: Yeah is it not big enough ?
2017-12-16 19:31 Benny-: easily walkable
2017-12-16 19:32 Benny-: actually let me play through the whole thing and see how many times i need to press dash
2017-12-16 19:33 WildOne94: >///<
2017-12-16 19:33 Benny-: okay its not that bad
2017-12-16 19:34 WildOne94: I think I solved both problems in one go but instead I didn't make 00:10:385 (1,2) - a dash either
2017-12-16 19:34 WildOne94: Both are walk-able
2017-12-16 19:34 WildOne94: for emphasis on 00:11:414 (4,1) -
2017-12-16 19:34 Benny-: okay!
2017-12-16 19:34 WildOne94: OKAY!
2017-12-16 19:35 Benny-: 00:43:856 (2,1) - this is a good 1/1 dash distance
2017-12-16 19:35 Benny-: easy to read as a dash
2017-12-16 19:35 Benny-: 2,00 isn't quite enough on places like 01:06:271 (4,1) -
2017-12-16 19:36 WildOne94: Oh yeah good point
2017-12-16 19:36 WildOne94: it's also quite weak for a strong kiai start
2017-12-16 19:36 WildOne94: Will increase to maybe around 2.2 ?
2017-12-16 19:36 WildOne94: Or 2.1 ?
2017-12-16 19:36 Benny-: Do what you think fits :3
2017-12-16 19:36 Benny-: as long as it isn't an edge dash
2017-12-16 19:36 WildOne94: okay XD
2017-12-16 19:37 WildOne94: Fixed
2017-12-16 19:37 Benny-: can you go over the map for similar stuff?
2017-12-16 19:37 Benny-: look at all 1/1 dashes
2017-12-16 19:37 Benny-: or 1/1 distances
2017-12-16 19:37 Benny-: some places it's rather confusing
2017-12-16 19:37 WildOne94: Alright sure
2017-12-16 19:37 Benny-: im gonna brb
2017-12-16 19:38 Benny-: fix the litter box
2017-12-16 19:38 WildOne94: okay will look
2017-12-16 19:38 WildOne94: What XD?
2017-12-16 19:38 Benny-: im gonna
2017-12-16 19:38 Benny-: fix the litter box
2017-12-16 19:38 WildOne94: Oh LOL
2017-12-16 19:38 WildOne94: I literally thought you meant to me "Fix letterbox" in song setup XDDD
2017-12-16 19:40 WildOne94: nudged 01:28:214 (7) - right one to make it 2.2x
2017-12-16 19:41 WildOne94: And actually 01:28:556 (1) - left one nudge too just to make 01:28:214 (7,1) - a tiny bit bigger for kiai emphasis
2017-12-16 19:41 WildOne94: Increased 01:44:671 (2,1) -
2017-12-16 19:42 WildOne94: to 2.2x
2017-12-16 19:42 WildOne94: Nudged one left 01:51:871 (1) -
2017-12-16 19:43 WildOne94: 01:57:356 (1) - Nudged bit right
2017-12-16 19:43 WildOne94: Nudged one left 02:00:099 (1) -
2017-12-16 19:45 WildOne94: 02:07:985 (3,1) - Increased
2017-12-16 19:46 WildOne94: 02:17:585 (3,1) - same
2017-12-16 19:47 WildOne94: 00:16:899 (3,1) - Same
2017-12-16 19:47 WildOne94: That's it I think
2017-12-16 19:49 WildOne94: oh wait increased also 00:19:642 (3,1) -
2017-12-16 19:50 WildOne94: 00:14:499 (1,2) - ^
2017-12-16 19:50 WildOne94: 02:14:842 (3,1) - ^
2017-12-16 19:52 Benny-: ok im back
2017-12-16 19:53 WildOne94: Wb :3
2017-12-16 19:53 WildOne94: Did you fix it XD?
2017-12-16 19:53 Benny-: yeah
2017-12-16 19:53 Benny-: haha
2017-12-16 19:53 WildOne94: Woo XD
2017-12-16 19:53 Benny-: had to give it a proper wash also
2017-12-16 19:53 WildOne94: Yuckie XD
2017-12-16 19:53 WildOne94: Should I update it so you can see the salad distances I did ?
2017-12-16 19:54 Benny-: yeah please do!
2017-12-16 19:54 Benny-: (i skipped cup because i was already pretty happy with it before)
2017-12-16 19:55 WildOne94: Updated and cool :3
2017-12-16 19:56 WildOne94: Oh sec
2017-12-16 19:56 WildOne94: just noticed something
2017-12-16 19:56 WildOne94: 01:39:185 (1) -
2017-12-16 19:56 WildOne94: NC'ed by mistake
2017-12-16 19:56 Benny-: 00:00:614 (2,1) - yeah ok I think 1/2 dashes can be increased to 3,00 like you did here 00:03:185 (3,1) -
2017-12-16 19:56 Benny-: some 1/2 dashes are all the way down to 2,40
2017-12-16 19:56 Benny-: and that's pretty inconsistent
2017-12-16 19:57 Benny-: I can't find it now
2017-12-16 19:57 WildOne94: Sure that's not too big instead o: ?
2017-12-16 19:57 Benny-: But I promise I saw one
2017-12-16 19:57 Benny-: well
2017-12-16 19:57 Benny-: it is currently plate-walk
2017-12-16 19:57 Benny-: 2,70 is plate walk
2017-12-16 19:58 Benny-: but i gues its fine
2017-12-16 19:58 Benny-: as long as you're consistent with it
2017-12-16 19:58 WildOne94: So if I move 00:00:099 (1,2) - to x:160 it will be okay ?
2017-12-16 19:58 Benny-: maybe 2,80 then
2017-12-16 19:58 WildOne94: Yeah that makes it 2.81 ^
2017-12-16 19:58 Benny-: yeah ok
2017-12-16 19:59 WildOne94: Oh no 0.01 off :^) Can't have that
2017-12-16 19:59 WildOne94: DQ!
2017-12-16 19:59 Benny-: 00:03:185 (3,1) - but then decrease this
2017-12-16 19:59 Benny-: LOL
2017-12-16 19:59 Benny-: no
2017-12-16 19:59 Benny-: xDDDDD
2017-12-16 19:59 WildOne94: XDDDD
2017-12-16 19:59 WildOne94: Alright will do
2017-12-16 20:00 WildOne94: Done
2017-12-16 20:00 Benny-: 00:11:414 (4,1) - this one is 2,25 but this 01:06:271 (4,1) - is barely 2,10, maybe use similar as first distance cause it's pretty STRONK beat
2017-12-16 20:01 WildOne94: Nudged 01:06:614 (1) - one right so it's 2.2
2017-12-16 20:01 Benny-: cool
2017-12-16 20:01 Benny-: ok i guess its cool
2017-12-16 20:02 Benny-: platter
2017-12-16 20:02 WildOne94: Sweet :3
2017-12-16 20:02 WildOne94: I did a lot of distance fixes that JBH mentioned for this one
2017-12-16 20:02 WildOne94: I remember you commented saying you liked this one also
2017-12-16 20:05 Benny-: 00:55:642 (1) - ik it follows the guidelines but
2017-12-16 20:05 Benny-: i still think it's way too close to the wall
2017-12-16 20:06 Benny-: you can move it to x40 and still keep hyper
2017-12-16 20:06 WildOne94: Done
2017-12-16 20:07 Benny-: 01:06:614 (1) - kind of same here but because of the slider being placed on the very end it is almost fully vertical in gameplay which is considered a flow stop
2017-12-16 20:07 Benny-: and can be considered antiflow
2017-12-16 20:08 Benny-: but idk
2017-12-16 20:08 Benny-: it's not that big of a deal
2017-12-16 20:08 Benny-: i just really hate hitting the wall while playing
2017-12-16 20:08 WildOne94: I nudged by one grid snap for you
2017-12-16 20:08 Benny-: LOL
2017-12-16 20:09 WildOne94: XD
2017-12-16 20:13 Benny-: just talking to zirox
2017-12-16 20:13 WildOne94: *gulp*
2017-12-16 20:13 Benny-: https://benedictator.s-ul.eu/rZVN6uo0
2017-12-16 20:14 WildOne94: Thanks for putting it in a good way >///<
2017-12-16 20:14 Benny-: rain
2017-12-16 20:14 Benny-: LOL
2017-12-16 20:14 WildOne94: my favourite !
2017-12-16 20:15 WildOne94: Should I update my platter ?
2017-12-16 20:15 Benny-: nah its fine
2017-12-16 20:15 Benny-: 00:22:385 (4,5,1) - YOU CAN MAKE THIS DANK DOUBLE HYPER FOR THE CLAPS
2017-12-16 20:15 Benny-: or whistle
2017-12-16 20:15 Benny-: as you put on them
2017-12-16 20:16 WildOne94: Ehhh I think that might be a bit too much benny ;w;
2017-12-16 20:16 WildOne94: For this part at least
2017-12-16 20:16 Benny-: not really
2017-12-16 20:16 WildOne94: I could have though maybe dash hyper ?
2017-12-16 20:16 Benny-: haha
2017-12-16 20:17 WildOne94: Oh LOL
2017-12-16 20:17 WildOne94: haha XD
2017-12-16 20:17 WildOne94: Nevermind then XD
2017-12-16 20:17 Benny-: says the one putting 1/4 hyper triplets in the calmest part of the song on overdose
2017-12-16 20:17 Benny-: you're not the one to judge XD
2017-12-16 20:18 WildOne94: Hey hey hey :^)
2017-12-16 20:18 WildOne94: A lot of people like those okay :^)
2017-12-16 20:18 Benny-: yeah for loved maps
2017-12-16 20:18 Benny-: :^)
2017-12-16 20:18 WildOne94: :^)
2017-12-16 20:18 but at least now you **kind of** made it fit with the kiai
2017-12-16 20:18 so it's at least **better** now
2017-12-16 20:19 WildOne94: ovo
2017-12-16 20:20 WildOne94: [http://puu.sh/yHOuy/3637726fe5.png JBH's comment on them :^)]
2017-12-16 20:20 WildOne94: But yeah I took out a lot of hypers
2017-12-16 20:20 WildOne94: when you mentioned that it was too much
2017-12-16 20:20 Benny-: yeah xD
2017-12-16 20:20 Benny-: it was too much
2017-12-16 20:20 Benny-: now it's at least somewhat consistent with the intensity
2017-12-16 20:21 WildOne94: Yeah XD. Glad you mentioned it
2017-12-16 20:21 Benny-: btw 01:27:356 (2,3) - wanna make this a dash for the drum sound
2017-12-16 20:21 Benny-: SLIDER BODY 01:28:214 (5) - IS OUTSIDE THE BORDER REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
2017-12-16 20:22 WildOne94: REEEEEEEEEE
2017-12-16 20:22 Benny-: 01:47:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same here, wanna try dash between 01:48:099 (3,4) - 01:48:614 (6,7) - so it's not purely walkable
2017-12-16 20:22 WildOne94: move 01:27:871 (4,5,1,2,3) - slightly right ?
2017-12-16 20:23 Benny-: also makes it cool considering 01:49:471 (2,3) - is hyper
2017-12-16 20:23 Benny-: so making them dashes but following the same patterns is a cool diea
2017-12-16 20:23 Benny-: idea
2017-12-16 20:23 WildOne94: how does 01:27:871 (4,5,1,2,3) - on x:248 look to you ?
2017-12-16 20:23 WildOne94: For first one
2017-12-16 20:24 Benny-: cool except i wanted dash between 2,3 not 3,4
2017-12-16 20:24 WildOne94: hmmm
2017-12-16 20:25 WildOne94: move 01:26:842 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - right 2 grid snaps ?
2017-12-16 20:27 Benny-: uwu
2017-12-16 20:27 WildOne94: WB XD
2017-12-16 20:27 Benny-: I said to move 01:26:842 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - right slightly
2017-12-16 20:28 WildOne94: Not on my screen ;w;
2017-12-16 20:28 Benny-: ohhh
2017-12-16 20:28 Benny-: no
2017-12-16 20:28 WildOne94: But we both agree then XD
2017-12-16 20:28 Benny-: that's what you said
2017-12-16 20:28 Benny-: to me on discord
2017-12-16 20:28 Benny-: i copied to see timestamp
2017-12-16 20:28 WildOne94: YEAH LOL
2017-12-16 20:28 Benny-: LOL
2017-12-16 20:28 WildOne94: HAHAHAHA WOW XD
2017-12-16 20:30 WildOne94: And fixed the distances at the quiet sectionm you mentioned
2017-12-16 20:30 WildOne94: 01:47:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
2017-12-16 20:30 WildOne94: around here
2017-12-16 20:30 Benny-: yeah i got one more suggestion
2017-12-16 20:30 Benny-: https://benedictator.s-ul.eu/YZHxLl7e
2017-12-16 20:30 Benny-: 01:49:814 (4,5,6,1) -
2017-12-16 20:30 Benny-: make it something like that
2017-12-16 20:30 Benny-: to emphasise the synth better on 01:50:156 (5,6) -
2017-12-16 20:31 Benny-: (i lowered ar to be able to see the whole pattern
2017-12-16 20:31 Benny-: )
2017-12-16 20:31 WildOne94: Hmmm
2017-12-16 20:32 WildOne94: Instead I am going to make it so 01:50:156 (5) - is moved slightly left
2017-12-16 20:32 WildOne94: so it's like a dash hyper
2017-12-16 20:32 Benny-: also if you made 00:22:385 (4,5) - hypers you should make this hyper too 02:12:099 (4,5) - didn't quite catch what you did so just throwing it out
2017-12-16 20:32 Benny-: okay
2017-12-16 20:32 WildOne94: Does 01:50:156 (5) - on x:360 look good to you ?
2017-12-16 20:33 WildOne94: I didn't make those hypers in the end XD
2017-12-16 20:33 WildOne94: I left as dash hyper like I said
2017-12-16 20:33 WildOne94: But I probably good of clarified that better
2017-12-16 20:33 WildOne94: Errm
2017-12-16 20:34 WildOne94: brain... "Could" not "Good"
2017-12-16 20:34 Benny-: hahaha dw
2017-12-16 20:34 Benny-: formed
2017-12-16 20:34 WildOne94: Wait wait did 01:50:156 (5) - on x:360 look good to you ?
2017-12-16 20:34 WildOne94: Just to make sure
2017-12-16 20:35 Benny-: 01:18:099 (3) - 01:23:585 (3) - PUT FURTHER INTO THE PLAYFIELD IT BREAKS THE GUIDELINE SHOULD BE AT LEAST 16x INTO THE PLAYFIELD THESE ARE ONLY 8x >;(
2017-12-16 20:36 Benny-: yeah its fine dw
2017-12-16 20:36 Benny-: 00:05:156 (4,5) - should be hyper for consistencyyyyyyy
2017-12-16 20:37 WildOne94: Oh woops XD
2017-12-16 20:38 WildOne94: Wait how to fix 01:18:099 (3) -
2017-12-16 20:38 WildOne94: and 01:23:585 (3) -
2017-12-16 20:39 Benny-: 00:11:628 (11,1) - why weird snap here but not on similar places liek 00:00:614 (5,1) - 00:06:099 (7,8,1) - 01:28:214 (6,1) - 02:12:271 (9,1) - 02:28:728 (5,6,1) - etccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
2017-12-16 20:39 Benny-: idfk just put them further into the playfield
2017-12-16 20:39 Benny-: preferably at least 16x
2017-12-16 20:39 Benny-: other than that i got no concerns
2017-12-16 20:40 WildOne94: Having a bit of trouble with it atm
2017-12-16 20:40 Benny-: yeah just
2017-12-16 20:40 Benny-: call me back when you sorted it out
2017-12-16 20:40 Benny-: gonna play some more sims
2017-12-16 20:40 WildOne94: okay >x<
2017-12-16 20:41 WildOne94: What do you mean by 16x though ;w; ? I don't see a menu that shows me that or what that means
2017-12-16 20:44 WildOne94: Let's just say if 01:18:099 (3) - was on x:488 would that be fine !? (Then I can do the same changes for the mirrored one)
2017-12-16 20:45 Benny-: 01:18:099 (3) - is placed on 504 https://benedictator.s-ul.eu/AQ8HQYLt the highest number is 512
2017-12-16 20:45 Benny-: 512-504=8
2017-12-16 20:45 Benny-: which means it's 8 pixels from the wall
2017-12-16 20:46 Benny-: it has to be 16
2017-12-16 20:46 WildOne94: OH RIGHT
2017-12-16 20:46 WildOne94: I GOT YOU NOW
2017-12-16 20:46 Benny-: or should*
2017-12-16 20:46 Benny-: be
2017-12-16 20:46 Benny-: 16
2017-12-16 20:46 WildOne94: Sorry ;w;
2017-12-16 20:52 WildOne94: Btw you mention about the 00:11:628 (11) -
2017-12-16 20:52 WildOne94: That's not fixed due to others being on a closed hat sound
2017-12-16 20:52 WildOne94: which this one does not have
2017-12-16 20:52 WildOne94: So it's mapped to the synth
2017-12-16 20:52 WildOne94: Updated
2017-12-16 21:17 WildOne94: BENNYYYYYYYY
2017-12-16 21:25 Benny-: OH
2017-12-16 21:25 Benny-: SORRY
2017-12-16 21:25 Benny-: I IDN*T GET
2017-12-16 21:25 Benny-: ANY NOTICIFACON
2017-12-16 21:25 WildOne94: hahah it's fine XD
2017-12-16 21:26 Benny-: okay
2017-12-16 21:26 Benny-: just gonna recheck quick
2017-12-16 21:27 WildOne94: Thanks <3
2017-12-16 21:32 Benny-: hmm
2017-12-16 21:32 WildOne94: O: ?
2017-12-16 21:32 Benny-: you know you can use 1920x1080 as BG
2017-12-16 21:32 Benny-: basically it can be upscaled a lot
2017-12-16 21:33 WildOne94: True I could. If I find the bg again
2017-12-16 21:33 Benny-: search by picture
2017-12-16 21:33 WildOne94: Found it https://i.imgur.com/Tv0Dxt1.png
2017-12-16 21:34 WildOne94: That is 1920x1080 dw
2017-12-16 21:34 Benny-: https://benedictator.s-ul.eu/TFCFHAdY
2017-12-16 21:34 WildOne94: Will change now
2017-12-16 21:34 Benny-: This is how you literally find anything uwu
2017-12-16 21:34 WildOne94: IT'S FINE I FOUND IT FAST XD
2017-12-16 21:35 Benny-: yeah
2017-12-16 21:35 Benny-: but
2017-12-16 21:35 Benny-: for another time owo
2017-12-16 21:35 WildOne94: Yeah owo! Thank you
2017-12-16 21:35 WildOne94: Replacing now
2017-12-16 21:36 Benny-: tell me when updated
2017-12-16 21:36 Benny-: dont forget to delete the old
2017-12-16 21:36 WildOne94: Yeah deleted that
2017-12-16 21:37 WildOne94: done
2017-12-16 21:37 WildOne94: and updated
2017-12-16 21:41 Benny-: nominated

Thank you Benny-
So happy and I am running around the house right now XD

1. On the 00:23:928 (3,1) - pair , the treatment on how to snap them is inconsistent (i.e. one is snapped when the vocal actually starts/ends and some the other is napped to where the accent is). The first of them should be placed in the previous 1/8 tick if both were to be mapped when the vocal actually starts - conversely, 00:24:228 (1) - should start on the red tick if you followed the accent.
2. 00:26:156 (2) - Should end on the white tick IMO.
3. 00:31:342 (2) - This should end on the following 1/8 tick
4. 00:31:985 (3) - If it's following the vocals, this should be on the following yellow tick.
5. 00:35:199 (2) - This should be 1/8 later IMO.
6. 00:37:985 (1) - This should end 1/8 later.
7. 00:39:871 (2) - This should end on the white tick.
8. 00:41:585 (3) - This should be snapped on the following white tick.
9. 00:42:656 (2) - This should end on the following 1/8 tick.
10. 00:43:171 (1) - This should also end on the following 1/8 tick.

ZiRoX wrote:

Hi! I'm a bit dubious about the snaps of the synth vocals.

1. On the 00:23:928 (3,1) - pair , the treatment on how to snap them is inconsistent (i.e. one is snapped when the vocal actually starts/ends and some the other is napped to where the accent is). The first of them should be placed in the previous 1/8 tick if both were to be mapped when the vocal actually starts - conversely, 00:24:228 (1) - should start on the red tick if you followed the accent. I think moving 00:24:228 (1) to 00:24:271 (1) makes following the vocals late and makes the accent sound off, but 00:23:928 (3) should be moved to 00:23:885, the 1/8 tick before.
2. 00:26:156 (2) - Should end on the white tick IMO. I do agree here. The "-ways" in always sort of disappears at that moment.
3. 00:31:342 (2) - This should end on the following 1/8 tick I disagree here. This causes the slider to end quite late and I think it's pretty much on the beat.
4. 00:31:985 (3) - If it's following the vocals, this should be on the following yellow tick. Yep, agree.
5. 00:35:199 (2) - This should be 1/8 later IMO. Ehhh....I think it's fine the way it is. Either one seems to work since the actual sound hits in the middle of the two.
6. 00:37:985 (1) - This should end 1/8 later. I actually think this should end 1/8 earlier. xD
7. 00:39:871 (2) - This should end on the white tick. Agreed. Same situation as 00:26:156 (2) tbh.
8. 00:41:585 (3) - This should be snapped on the following white tick. I do agree here, although it's kinda unclear which one the vocal synths hit more closely. Would get more opinions.
9. 00:42:656 (2) - This should end on the following 1/8 tick. This sounds right on beat.
10. 00:43:171 (1) - This should also end on the following 1/8 tick. Agreed. Wait until the sound completely dies out.

Note: I checked these on the Rain diff, but should also apply to other diffs if the same sounds are mapped. These were checked on the overdose for me, assuming they apply to both.

Gonna poke the other BNs and QATs to promote a discussion on these.

ZiRoX wrote:

Hi! I'm a bit dubious about the snaps of the synth vocals.

1. On the 00:23:928 (3,1) - pair , the treatment on how to snap them is inconsistent (i.e. one is snapped when the vocal actually starts/ends and some the other is napped to where the accent is). The first of them should be placed in the previous 1/8 tick if both were to be mapped when the vocal actually starts - conversely, 00:24:228 (1) - should start on the red tick if you followed the accent. - Agreed with AZ here. (3) sounded off but I think (1) was fine.
2. 00:26:156 (2) - Should end on the white tick IMO. - Agreed. I also removed the 2 green lines that were placed here before since no use for them now.
3. 00:31:342 (2) - This should end on the following 1/8 tick - Yeah I also disagree here. I think it ends perfectly on the "Low" vocal
4. 00:31:985 (3) - If it's following the vocals, this should be on the following yellow tick. - Yeah Strongly agreed here
5. 00:35:199 (2) - This should be 1/8 later IMO. - Hmmm I disagree here ALTHOUGH I think the start of this note sounds like it should start 1/12 later. But I was informed that I shouldn't really use 1/12's or 1/16's. The end of this slider is fine though. So I will leave this up to others. Please others read this
6. 00:37:985 (1) - This should end 1/8 later. - I disagree with both here. Although IMO the start could be another 1/12 later again to me. The end of the slider really hits the vocal that sounds like "Chew" in 25% playback rate
7. 00:39:871 (2) - This should end on the white tick. - I don't know about this honestly. in a way it could simplify it but to me it sounds less on time. I thought it was pretty accurate as it was honestly.
8. 00:41:585 (3) - This should be snapped on the following white tick. - Sorry but I disagree again . I think this is perfect
9. 00:42:656 (2) - This should end on the following 1/8 tick. - In a way I agree with both of you... 1/8 sounds good but also as it is on the white tick sounds good also.. Maybe could get some more people to listen to this one. I think I might just slightly agree more with ZiRoX here but just want to make sure what others think first. It would make also a perfect 1/1 slider doing changing this also if I go with ZiRoX
10. 00:43:171 (1) - This should also end on the following 1/8 tick. - Agreed here

Note: I checked these on the Rain diff, but should also apply to other diffs if the same sounds are mapped. - applied to all

Gonna poke the other BNs and QATs to promote a discussion on these.