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Le Ciel - Feather

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Topic Starter
Loneight
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月21日 at 下午 05:13:29

Artist: Le Ciel
Title: Feather
Source: Touhou
Tags: Revengexsoyah yasaka kanako The Venerable Ancient Battlefield Suwa Foughten Field Mountain of Faith succubus frontier records
BPM: 190
Filesize: 6501kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.19 stars, 185 notes)
  2. Hard (4.99 stars, 577 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 677 notes)
  4. Normal (3.54 stars, 255 notes)
  5. soyaH's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1274 notes)
Download: Le Ciel - Feather
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2
Enjoy it ;)

Easy --- done by me
Normal --- done by me
Hard --- done by me
soyaH's Taiko Oni --- done by Revengexsoyah
Lunatic --- done by me

Special thanks :
Revengexsoyah does taiko diff for this map
spboxer3 mods my normal 2 times
Ryuu finds BG for this map
Hinsvar gives me 14 stars !!! looool , really !! so many stars , and mods this map 2 times!!!
bossandy gives 2 stars and modding 2 times!!
Suzully teaches me important thing , gives me a chance to remap "Lunatic", mods my map again and again , and bubbles it!
xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx mods this 2 times !!
DarknessAngel gives me 2 times IRC-mod
Andrea rebubbles it :3
abalee ranks it >w<

Thanks them for modding or star
xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
L_P
bossandy
Xavier18488
Hinsvar (14 stars)
Revengexsoyah
Suzully
DarknessAngel
pimpG (timing help)
---Assault[K]---
spboxer3
BeatofIke
AstroniX
ertyukjh010
Quilt
popner
rockleejkooo
Byakugan249
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Niva
LKs
-Gamu-
Genkishi
ax_pokl
forevehappy
Jacob
Philippines
Leorda
Mystica
Mio_chan
Regou
Koro McAlpine
wmfchris
Breeze
Andrea
xxheroxx
t e n n y a -
YuZuKi Kenny
加油:D

路過
Kanari
Halloww~
You requested in my queue~

[General]
-You have 2 .osb files delete one of them.

[Normal]
-All your difficulty setting are either too low or too high, keep it around 3-5.
-00:24:792 (1) - Remove new combo.
-00:34:897 (1) - ^
-02:18:476 (1) - ^
-03:36:160 (1) - ^
-03:36:792 (3) - New combo (If you did that^)

[Hard]
-Difficulty setting are a bit low and high in this as well, keep it around 5-7. (Hit circle size doesnt matter though)
-Everything else is fine~

[Lunatic]
-Bring Overall Difficulty up to 7?
-00:52:897 (1) - Remove new combo.
-00:53:370 (5) - New combo (If you did that^)
-00:54:160 (1) - Remove new combo.
-00:54:634 (4) - New combo (If you did that^)
-00:55:423 (1) - Remove new combo.
-00:55:897 (4) - New combo (If you did that^)
-02:38:686 (1) - Remove new combo?
There just suggestions~

Well mapped ;D
Star~
Topic Starter
Loneight

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww~Hi
You requested in my queue~

[General]
-You have 2 .osb files delete one of them. deleted~

[Normal]
-All your difficulty setting are either too low or too high, keep it around 3-5.I change to 3
-00:24:792 (1) - Remove new combo.fix~
-00:34:897 (1) - ^fix~
-02:18:476 (1) - ^fix~
-03:36:160 (1) - ^fix~
-03:36:792 (3) - New combo (If you did that^)fix~

[Hard]
-Difficulty setting are a bit low and high in this as well, keep it around 5-7. (Hit circle size doesnt matter though)I change to 5
-Everything else is fine~lol.

[Lunatic]
-Bring Overall Difficulty up to 7?okay~changed
-00:52:897 (1) - Remove new combo.I think ... if i change , i will feel strange.
-00:53:370 (5) - New combo (If you did that^)
-00:54:160 (1) - Remove new combo.
-00:54:634 (4) - New combo (If you did that^)
-00:55:423 (1) - Remove new combo.
-00:55:897 (4) - New combo (If you did that^)
-02:38:686 (1) - Remove new combo?
There just suggestions~

Well mapped ;D
Star~
Thank you mod my map :)
upload!!!
---Assault[K]---
From mod queue

[Normal]
Fine by me
[Hard]
also fine
[Lunatic]
Approach 8? 9 is too fast
00:31:132 (1,2) i don't like slider like these.
00:36:178 (1) rotate clockwise -37 degree and move close to (8) like how (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) is done. its nicer that way
01:19:141 (3) add note after (3) preferably new combo ,break is too long
02:27:648 : Remove this break. Too short breaks to me is useless,
02:29:908 : ^
03:16:838 (,4,5,6,7,8,9) change pattern of stream? i dont like the way it is. put vertically or horizontally is fine, too much curve here
03:42:966 (5) add here (6)
03:44:886 (4) add here (5)
03:45:487 (4) i think is too near to (3)

end of mod

Map is already good.
Topic Starter
Loneight

---Assault[K]--- wrote:

From mod queue

[Normal]
Fine by me
[Hard]
also fine
[Lunatic]
Approach 8? 9 is too fast I think it okay .
00:31:132 (1,2) i don't like slider like these. changed~
00:36:178 (1) rotate clockwise -37 degree and move close to (8) like how (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) is done. its nicer that way I can't understand
01:19:141 (3) add note after (3) preferably new combo ,break is too long add~
02:27:648 : Remove this break. Too short breaks to me is useless, remove~
02:29:908 : ^ removed~
03:16:838 (,4,5,6,7,8,9) change pattern of stream? i dont like the way it is. put vertically or horizontally is fine, too much curve hereI ... doesn't know how to put them
03:42:966 (5) add here (6)sorry~
03:44:886 (4) add here (5)add~
03:45:487 (4) i think is too near to (3) I down 1 grip

end of mod

Map is already good.thanks
Thank you for modding my map~
Upload!!!
---Assault[K]---
kd mod ~ thx!
Topic Starter
Loneight

---Assault[K]--- wrote:

kd mod ~ thx!
lol ... I forget to give KD
sorry OTZ
spboxer3

[general]


  • Settings
    Stack Leniency設置不能低於0.3 你設到0.2去了(就是堆疊的密度)

[Normal]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:23:528 (3,4) -
  2. 00:51:634 (1,2) -
  3. 00:54:160 (1,2) -
  4. 01:36:792 (3,1) -
  5. 02:37:107 (3,1) -
mapping
  1. 00:22:265 (2) - 想辦法完全對稱
  2. 00:26:055 (1,2,3) - 這個絕對會被罵偷懶的... 三個一樣的而且這樣不好看 還是橫列排開...
  3. 00:42:476 (2,1) - 覆蓋好點
  4. 01:53:213 (2,1,2) - 間距不同
  5. 02:55:423 (1,3) - 沒對稱
  6. 03:02:686 (1,2) - 這不好 節奏有點奇怪 重點是你這樣接很難抓節奏

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. 無用的綠線:
    00:56:370 -
    03:01:423 -
    03:02:686 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:57:318 (1,2,3,4) - 注意一下 全部都覆蓋到邊了
mapping
  1. 00:13:897 (2,4) - 尾端沒有stack
  2. 00:49:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 作點修飾吧...全部都是直線不覺得感覺有點太...? (而且也是再同一直線lol)
  3. 00:51:634 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 太過難了些...應該說有點亂~當然!這只是我個人的看法~
  5. 01:57:002 (4,2) - not stack 覆蓋好吧!
  6. 02:11:844 (3,1) - ^
  7. 02:58:423 (3,2) - 不覆蓋嗎?

[Lunatic]


  • Settings
  1. 太神了你...SV 1.4
  2. 無用的綠線:
    00:56:370 -
    02:04:897 -
    03:01:423 -
    03:02:686 -
mapping
  1. 00:01:265 (1,2,3,4) - 12與34的距離不同
  2. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...無法說清楚...反正比對稱跳更...額>_>
  3. 02:05:370 (2,4) - 沒有覆蓋
  4. 02:40:160 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  5. 02:48:160 (3,4,1) - 間距不同 ((尾端部分自己看一下
  6. 03:07:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這個我又無語了...看起來好像Jubeat的...Play the Game ((?
  7. 03:43:265 (2,4) - 覆蓋

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議


個人看法
  1. 說說我個人的看法吧... 你有很多部份太制式化了 簡單來說就是指你的map沒變化... 有部分的地方都是用直線或直角帶過...這讓別人看了感覺起來很不舒服...舉個例子:↓你的部份是這樣

    我來做會變成這樣

    差別在於一個是完全直線的 另一個不是~ 這會讓人有視覺上的差別 感覺會讓別人覺得你比較有用心在做map
    太多的水平或垂直直線會有種 你只是為了完成這張圖而排的 而不是用心排出來的的
    這些的小地方可以特別注意下
  2. copy過後記得修飾下...
    在Hard中像:01:11:528 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 這就屬於我說的那類 copy沒有修飾過 一看就知道是用copy的
  3. 再來是音效部分 因為這首歌本來就屬於偏向重節奏的... 所以比較吵些 但是你的音效還是大了些
    還有中間的whistle(哨子聲) 感覺不是很適合這首歌 至少那地方並不是很適合的! 你可以考慮換掉或改小聲些

    大致上的建議就是這樣了

好了 希望這些會對你有幫助吧...
BeatofIke
Request from my modding queue. :) Sorry for the long wait. :|

[General]
-There's no audio lead-in. In this case, it is unrankable. Set audio lead-in either to 1 or 1.5 seconds. Change it in all difficulties.

[Normal]
-Drain rate (+1)

[Hard]
-Good. No Comments.

[Insane]
-Drain rate (-1)
-Map is too hard. It's hard for me to mod this difficulty. Prephaps a more experienced player/modder can assist you. Sorry. :(


Overall, this map is so perfect indeed.
L_P
normal(感觉偏难点,不如再做多一个easy)
00:26:055 (1,2) - 看起来挺别扭的
00:36:160 (1) - 不大提倡开始在repeat那里?
感觉巨长repeat的slider太多了?不如用多点note
02:22:265 (1,2,3,4) - 最低难度不大建议这种风扇

Hard
00:02:686 (x) - 这里加点东西吧?
00:58:581 (1) - finish?
02:03:318 (4) - 建议这里不用1.5速也可以
02:56:213 (x) - 塞个note下去?

lunatic
00:31:107 (1,2,3) - 最高难度不建议巨长slider
00:40:976 (x) - 这里感觉可以直接stream下去
00:58:897 (1,2) - 拉开点
00:59:686 (3,4) - ^
01:11:213 (8) - 干脆stack在7上面?感觉更加好?
01:39:792 (4) - whistle
guitar solo的地方做的挺不错的
03:34:108 (3) - 感觉拉不大美观


就这样吧。。送星闪人
Topic Starter
Loneight

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]


  • Settings
    Stack Leniency設置不能低於0.3 你設到0.2去了(就是堆疊的密度)fix~

[Normal]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:23:528 (3,4) - fix~
  2. 00:51:634 (1,2) - fix
  3. 00:54:160 (1,2) - fix~
  4. 01:36:792 (3,1) - fix~
  5. 02:37:107 (3,1) - fix
mapping
  1. 00:22:265 (2) - 想辦法完全對稱對稱了~
  2. 00:26:055 (1,2,3) - 這個絕對會被罵偷懶的... 三個一樣的而且這樣不好看 還是橫列排開...額...改了XD
  3. 00:42:476 (2,1) - 覆蓋好點ok~
  4. 01:53:213 (2,1,2) - 間距不同fix
  5. 02:55:423 (1,3) - 沒對稱fix
  6. 03:02:686 (1,2) - 這不好 節奏有點奇怪 重點是你這樣接很難抓節奏[/color]改了OAO

[Hard]



  1. 無用的綠線:
    00:56:370 -
    03:01:423 -
    03:02:686 -
    全刪了

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:57:318 (1,2,3,4) - 注意一下 全部都覆蓋到邊了okay~
mapping
  1. 00:13:897 (2,4) - 尾端沒有stackstack了~
  2. 00:49:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 作點修飾吧...全部都是直線不覺得感覺有點太...? (而且也是再同一直線lol)修了
  3. 00:51:634 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^okay了
  4. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 太過難了些...應該說有點亂~當然!這只是我個人的看法~我換了一下順序?!
  5. 01:57:002 (4,2) - not stack 覆蓋好吧!okay~
  6. 02:11:844 (3,1) - ^okay~
  7. 02:58:423 (3,2) - 不覆蓋嗎?okay~

[Lunatic]


  • Settings
  1. 太神了你...SV 1.4what?! 什麼意思 QAQ
  2. 無用的綠線:
    00:56:370 -
    02:04:897 -
    03:01:423 -
    03:02:686 -
    全刪了
mapping
  1. 00:01:265 (1,2,3,4) - 12與34的距離不同 fix~
  2. 01:52:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...無法說清楚...反正比對稱跳更...額>_>換了
  3. 02:05:370 (2,4) - 沒有覆蓋okay了
  4. 02:40:160 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).okay了
  5. 02:48:160 (3,4,1) - 間距不同 ((尾端部分自己看一下fix了
  6. 03:07:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這個我又無語了...看起來好像Jubeat的...Play the Game ((?我偷改了一點 不過那是什麼?! .
  7. 03:43:265 (2,4) - 覆蓋okay~

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議


個人看法
  1. 說說我個人的看法吧... 你有很多部份太制式化了 簡單來說就是指你的map沒變化... 有部分的地方都是用直線或直角帶過...這讓別人看了感覺起來很不舒服...舉個例子:↓你的部份是這樣

    我來做會變成這樣

    差別在於一個是完全直線的 另一個不是~ 這會讓人有視覺上的差別 感覺會讓別人覺得你比較有用心在做map
    太多的水平或垂直直線會有種 你只是為了完成這張圖而排的 而不是用心排出來的的
    這些的小地方可以特別注意下
  2. copy過後記得修飾下...
    在Hard中像:01:11:528 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 這就屬於我說的那類 copy沒有修飾過 一看就知道是用copy的
  3. 再來是音效部分 因為這首歌本來就屬於偏向重節奏的... 所以比較吵些 但是你的音效還是大了些
    還有中間的whistle(哨子聲) 感覺不是很適合這首歌 至少那地方並不是很適合的! 你可以考慮換掉或改小聲些

    大致上的建議就是這樣了

好了 希望這些會對你有幫助吧...
謝謝阿三醬 幫我mod這麼多QAQ!!

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue. :) Sorry for the long wait. :|

[General]
-There's no audio lead-in. In this case, it is unrankable. Set audio lead-in either to 1 or 1.5 seconds. Change it in all difficulties.

[Normal]
-Drain rate (+1) If +1 ... I can't think how to reduce the star

[Hard]
-Good. No Comments. Thanks~

[Insane]
-Drain rate (-1) No~ Thank you
-Map is too hard. It's hard for me to mod this difficulty. Prephaps a more experienced player/modder can assist you. Sorry. :(
I think, too

Overall, this map is so perfect indeed.
Thank you for modding~

L_P wrote:

normal(感觉偏难点,不如再做多一个easy)normal來說對我很難了 easy我根本不會做啊!!!!QAQ~
00:26:055 (1,2) - 看起来挺别扭的改了~
00:36:160 (1) - 不大提倡开始在repeat那里?謝~不過還是打算不改OAO
感觉巨长repeat的slider太多了?不如用多点note ...我不會做簡單的QAQ 因為不知道星星怎麼減少 之前是過 加一堆note星星反而更多 ...~
02:22:265 (1,2,3,4) - 最低难度不大建议这种风扇讓他變成slider了~

Hard
00:02:686 (x) - 这里加点东西吧?加了
00:58:581 (1) - finish?okay~
02:03:318 (4) - 建议这里不用1.5速也可以主要是想要讓前面0.5跟1.0對稱
02:56:213 (x) - 塞个note下去?塞了~

lunatic
00:31:107 (1,2,3) - 最高难度不建议巨长slider額...我有改不過還是巨大slider
00:40:976 (x) - 这里感觉可以直接stream下去 what?!
00:58:897 (1,2) - 拉开点不懂QAQ
00:59:686 (3,4) - ^不懂?!OAO
01:11:213 (8) - 干脆stack在7上面?感觉更加好?主要是想要讓前面對稱~所以就不改了~
01:39:792 (4) - whistle 聽起來怪怪的所以就沒加了 lol
guitar solo的地方做的挺不错的 Thanks~
03:34:108 (3) - 感觉拉不大美观 我盡力了 .


就这样吧。。送星闪人Thank you QAQ
謝謝L_P mod><!

Upload!!
L_P
拉开点是说spacing目前稍微近了点
Topic Starter
Loneight

L_P wrote:

拉开点是说spacing目前稍微近了点
Oh!我懂了
不過..那裡因為是x1所以 ..應該不會拉開
謝謝L_P :)
AstroniX_old
From mod4mod

[Normal]
01:09:949(2)- remove it and at 01:10:265 add a combo
01:16:739(1)- remove new combo?
02:05:844(3)- add a note
02:06:792(1)- make this slider end at 02:06:949
03:15:634(1)- 来回3次?

[Hard]
00:51:318(2)这的slider velocity感觉慢得有点厉害,1.0x应该好些
02:00:002(2)^

[Lunatic]
01:19:116(3)- remove new combo
图很不错,望早日RANK吧(又一东方鬼蓄...)
Topic Starter
Loneight

AstroniX wrote:

From mod4mod

[Normal]
01:09:949(2)- remove it and at 01:10:265 add a combo 抱歉OAO加了我感覺怪怪的 所以沒改~
01:16:739(1)- remove new combo? no~
02:05:844(3)- add a note add~
02:06:792(1)- make this slider end at 02:06:949 no~
03:15:634(1)- 来回3次?okay!

[Hard]
00:51:318(2)这的slider velocity感觉慢得有点厉害,1.0x应该好些額...為了配合音樂?!
02:00:002(2)^同上

[Lunatic]
01:19:116(3)- remove new combo no~
图很不错,望早日RANK吧(又一东方鬼蓄...)
Thank you for modding
圖很善良!!!XD
Upload
ertyukjh010


Normal

00:51:318 (3,1,2) - 這個節奏比較順
00:53:844 (1,2) - ^
02:51:160 (X) - 將02:50:528的(2)Slider複製,在這個位置貼上
02:55:107 (X) - Add note
整體上我覺得有點小難,作為整張圖最簡單的難度來說,02:51:949 add note.

Hard

01:53:528 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 對於這個難度來說這個跳太難了,雖然我是能夠跳這個位置

Lunatic

這個難度就饒了我吧
這種誇張的Jump實在另人覺得有點overmap(特別是後面的部份),這可能比剛剛Rank出來的雷神右腕還要恐佈多
我只能夠400連左右~有興趣就看一下我的Replay(我的第1個Miss是Lag造成,那個位置沒問題的)Download: 7627ff7bfd144726c7fb10fc123b44c1-129745824424793632.osr
(開啟OSU,下載到桌面並雙點就可以,前提是您的版本沒有更新或者變動)

That all, Good Luck :)

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Loneight

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Normal

00:51:318 (3,1,2) - 這個節奏比較順
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change~
00:53:844 (1,2) - ^fixe~
02:51:160 (X) - 將02:50:528的(2)Slider複製,在這個位置貼上okay~
02:55:107 (X) - Add noteadd !
整體上我覺得有點小難,作為整張圖最簡單的難度來說,02:51:949 add note.no~

Hard

01:53:528 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 對於這個難度來說這個跳太難了,雖然我是能夠跳這個位置改了~

Lunatic

這個難度就饒了我吧
這種誇張的Jump實在另人覺得有點overmap(特別是後面的部份),這可能比剛剛Rank出來的雷神右腕還要恐佈多
我只能夠400連左右~有興趣就看一下我的Replay(我的第1個Miss是Lag造成,那個位置沒問題的)[attachment=0:db036]7627ff7bfd144726c7fb10fc123b44c1-129745824424793632.osr[/attachment:db036]
(開啟OSU,下載到桌面並雙點就可以,前提是您的版本沒有更新或者變動)

That all, Good Luck :)
我看過你的replay ... 只有兩個字 神觸!!
我無法PC ...XD
謝謝你的MOD

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Quilt
Normal
00:53:844 (2) - http://puu.sh/iype like this?

Hard
fine~

Insane
01:19:265 - add note?

02:26:844 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/252848 like this?

03:10:897 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/252851 like this?

sorry my mod is noob ....

good song and good map~
Topic Starter
Loneight

Quilt wrote:

Normal
00:53:844 (2) - http://puu.sh/iype like this? no
Hard

fine~lol

Insane
01:19:265 - add note?no~

02:26:844 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/252848 like this? change~

03:10:897 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/252851 like this?no~

sorry my mod is noob ....



good song and good map~
your mod no noob , is helpful~
Thank you for modding

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