1. Another (5 stars, 502 notes)
2. Fear (5 stars, 816 notes)
3. Hyper (4.89 stars, 337 notes)
4. Normal (2.77 stars, 157 notes)

Sanjenin Nagi -U wrote:

I made ​​you a map of Taiko Guest difficulty please?

Video,-4050,"BGA.avi"

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1. 00:06:667 (6,1,2) - Some suggestions here:
   
   1. You can either put NC on all three for aesthetics
   2. I'd personally add whistle on (1) to accompany the instrument as well
   3. Also consider making it like this perhaps? Somehow it plays nice imo because the next 00:12:001 (1) is located in the exact center:
      
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2. 00:12:001 (1) - I highly recommend to apply a gradual volume increase here (40 -> 50 -> 60 -> 70, for example) or at least use lower volume, constant 70% sounds quite abrupt imo ._.
3. 00:21:835 (3) - Minor stuff but would look better if this isn't touching (1) imo, moving it slightly to ~:249 y:189 should do
4. 00:23:334 (4,5,6,7,9,1) - Consider using manual stacking here? Flows good while playing imo:
   
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5. 00:33:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - This is a good place to experiment with Sampleset/Addition (top-left in the editor) feature before, with it no need to use hitnormal as S:C1's hitwhistle here, you could use Sampleset : Normal Addition : Soft and get both normal-hitnormal + soft-hitwhistle on the same object (really useful here imo)
6. 00:33:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Also with this, I understand your point here is to make (1,3) and (2,4,1) in a straight line but perhaps consider making this stream encircle (3)'s end instead:
   
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7. 00:37:001 (4,5,6) - I prefer having this symmetrical with (1,2,3), it's neater like this imo but up to you of course :3
8. 00:42:001 (7) - Consider moving this downward a bit perhaps (~y:38 for example)?
9. 00:44:001 (x) - Feels quite empty here to be honest, I tried adding a circle here with 50% volume (in the center, stacked with your next (1)) and it looks/sounds better xD
10. 00:45:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggestion here, perhaps consider arranging them in an upward arc instead...
11. 00:49:334 (1,2,3) - ...and this one as a downward arc? In the end it'll flow like this:
    
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12. 00:51:668 (4,5,6) - Whistle on (6) instead of (5)? The instrument is stronger there
13. 01:00:001 (7,8) - Suggestion, make this encircle (6) like this instead?
    
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14. 01:02:001 (5,6) - This is placed a bit further compared to (2,3), is this intentional? (I prefer a perfect square by moving (2,3) further though (not (5,6) closer)...)
15. 01:05:084 (11) - Umm, I prefer to remove finish on slider's end here to emphasize the other two finishes nearby (:
16. 01:04:001 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Another good place to use manual-stacked stream imo, for example: ((4) is stacked beneath (3) in this pic though)
    
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17. 01:06:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Quite ambiguous spacing here imo, moving (4,5,6) further should do better though
18. 01:08:501 (12) - Missing finish sound here? :3
19. 01:10:668 (12) - Minor stuff, move to ~x:85 y:351 so this doesn't overlap (11)? (looks much neater also in play mode~)
20. 01:25:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Also would be neater and better as well imo if this doesn't touch the previous stream (select all and move them to ~x:276 y:202, for example would do)
21. 01:37:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - For me it's better if you could use Sampleset : Normal Addition : Soft with a bit of volume tweaking here, considering the bass' sound :3
22. 01:38:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just a suggestion, rather than a straight stream consider using this variation perhaps? Fits the song's holiness atmosphere better imo (:
    
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23. 01:38:668 (1) - Beginning of a new section from the song here, add finish?
24. 01:43:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, manual-stacked stream could flow better here:
    
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25. 01:48:001 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,1) - Umm, I just felt weird with the stream's curve uneven curve here (not really a problem though), just mentioning you could use the new slider algorithm + 'Compose -> Convert Slider to Stream...' feature xD
26. 02:00:001 (1) - Move to ~y:11? No need to reduce the spacing here though o.o
27. 02:07:881 (1) - Remove whistle here to emphasize the two other whistles nearby?

1. 00:06:668 (1) - Missing whistle on slider's start I suppose?
2. 00:06:668 (1,2) - About these two, to get the 'echo' effect you could use 70 -> 5 -> 10 -> 15 volume progression though (blends much better rather than just 70 -> 5 imo)
3. 00:23:584 (3,4) - Minor stuff here, should be moved to ~x:52 y:331 for a better triangle
4. 00:24:001 (1) - Add finish also here to note the new section of the song?
5. 00:24:668 (6) - Umm, shouldn't it be rotated ~-25° selection centre? Can't really tell if this is intentional though...
6. 00:31:334 (1,2,1) - - I think it's better if these three's spacing made equal rather than an anti-jump on (2,1) - it keeps the player's momentum imo:
   
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7. 00:32:834 (3) - You could use Sampleset : Normal Addition : Soft here to follow the drum's climax~
8. 00:34:668 (1) - Err, just wondering is it intentional to shape the slider like this? It's fine though, but I prefer a smooth tilted slider wave here personally:
   

   112,288,34668,6,0,B|120:244|92:205|92:205|64:166|77:116,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

9. 00:38:668 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - A bit confusing to read here to be honest, a back-to-back manual stack like this plays better and fits the song better imo:
   
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10. 00:44:001 (5) - If you do above suggestion, you can simply put this in the center so you can keep the symmetry you previously made here (:
    
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11. 00:45:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - This arc could definitely made smoother, for example:
    

    329,278,45334,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    402,227,46001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    422,138,46668,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    373,62,47334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    287,34,48001,1,0,0:0:0:0:

12. 00:56:501 (1,2) - You put whistle on (1)'s end instead of (2) here, is this intentional? o.o
13. 01:00:168 (2,3,4,5) - Same suggestion as soulfear's diff actually, on this map's doubles (such as this one) you can experiment with manual-stacked stream variation :3
    
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14. 01:01:334 (1,2) - Would fit (9)'s flow better imo if (1,2) is made similar like this:
    
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15. 01:06:168 (2,4) - Select both and move them to ~x:365 y:215 so that 01:06:168 (2,4,3) will be equally spaced in a straight line? Much more pleasant to view this way imo
16. 01:11:168 (6,10) - Flow is a bit weird imo (especially (9,10,11) where the spacing varies) - I'd rather put (10) around ~x:205 y:173 to make them as an equally spaced diamond instead but it's up to you
17. 01:13:334 (1,3) - Umm, well, you could just recreate the slider using the new slider algorithm to get a MUCH smoother slider on this one :3
18. 01:16:668 (3,4) - Move (3) upper and (4) lower like this perhaps? Looks good how (3)'s end is encircled by the next (1) this way~
    
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19. 01:26:168 (2,4) - Personally I'd remove the finish on these two so that the triple finish on 01:26:834 (2,3,4) would stand out more...
20. 01:33:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I recommend to move all these to ~x:271 y:349, so they'll look correct in play mode (due to stacking's nature)
21. 01:42:668 (1) - ...why the finish got discontinued here ._.
22. 01:43:001 (5,6,7) - Also here, why no hitsound at all on these three? I recommend to use Sampleset : Normal where the bass comes though (as soulfear did on his diff), in this case add Sampleset : Normal on
    
    1. 01:43:334 (6) - Slider's start, first repeat, slider's end
    2. 01:43:668 (7) - Slider's start and second repeat
23. 01:46:668 (1,2,5,6) - ...also consider redoing this slider with the new slider algorithm for a much smoother slider
24. 01:58:668 (1) - Again why no finish on slider's end? It blends really well there xD
25. 02:07:024 (1,1) - There's nothing on the song following the slider's end here, consider reducing the volume of each slider's end to ~30-40%?
26. 02:08:738 (1) - Should be snapped to the red line!

1. 00:06:001 (4) - Whistle on slider's end as well? (you have it on 00:03:334 (4)'s end)
2. 00:08:001 (2) - For me it's better if this could make symmetry with (4,1) - up to you though:
   
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3. 00:17:334 (1,2,3,4) - imo it'll be better if you could space them out a bit so they don't touch each other, for example:
   
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4. 00:21:501 (1,2,3,...) Err, for this arc imo you could place (2) in the center and make a better arc based on (2)'s approach circle like this:
   
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5. 00:23:001 (2) - Also this one's missing whistle I believe :3
6. 00:28:334 (2) - Remove the whistle on slider's body here (sliderwhistle) here? (this wasn't intentional I think)
7. 00:32:001 (1) - Considering the song's piano triples perhaps try to split this slider into four repeating sliders? It would fit the song more imo - also simple pattern like this would work already imo:
   
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8. 00:33:334 (1) - Soft sampleset blends better than Normal here imo, the song goes lush there~
9. 00:45:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Considering (1,2,3)'s symmetry pattern perhaps try to create an arc here? The flow will be like this:
   
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10. 00:50:668 (3) - I'd add whistle here for the instrument (:
11. 00:51:668 (1,2,3) - Really minor here but I'd like to mention that due to stacking's nature, if you want to stack these three correctly with previous (3) this should be placed in ~x:353 y:284 xD
12. 00:55:334 (1,2,3,4) - Rather than four circles here I much prefer two repeating 1/4 sliders here, fits the music much more and shouldn't be hard to place imo considering the previous part's rhythm :3
13. 00:57:001 (5) - To fit the synth here, I'd add whistle here...
14. 00:58:334 (4) - ...and remove the whistle in here
15. 00:58:668 (1,2) - Just a pattern suggestion here, I prefer something more dynamic rather than just two straight sliders here:
    
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16. 01:00:001 (1,2,3,4) - Select all four and move them to ~x:431 y:21 so that (1)'s end and (4) will be stacked to the previous (3)?
17. 01:05:001 (5) - Missing finish on slider's end? o.o
18. 01:07:334 (4,7,1,...) - Because previously you had a normal sampleset on 01:06:668 (1) imo it would be best to continue the normal sampleset to accompany the bass here, don't be afraid to use Sampleset : Normal Addition : Soft as well if it's necessary though
19. 01:14:668 (3) - I'd NC this also to make the combo 1-2-1-2-1-1 - you can also make it 1-2-1-2-1-2 if 01:15:668 (1) isn't NCed though (:
20. 01:15:334 (1,1) - Encircle previous (3) like this instead perhaps?
    
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21. 01:18:501 (1) - I would really recommend to add whistle here for the instrument, sounds fabulous (:
22. 01:21:168 (1) - ...however don't place whistle here though, place whistle on 01:23:834, and don't place whistle on 01:26:501 - this pattern fits the instrument most imo xD
23. 01:34:001 (3,4,1) - imo it's fine to use a slightly wider spacing on these three so that (1) can encircle the previous slider without touching it, looks much neater:
    
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24. 01:37:001 (2) - Add whistle on slider's end here as well?
25. 01:41:334 (1,1,1) - Because of the previous finishes that you had on (1,1)'s start would be best if you add finishes on these three's start as well imo (and also on 01:43:002 (2)'s start)
26. 01:57:334 (1) - I'd make this face upward instead to avoid overlap with (6), it won't overlap with (2) btw because of the AR - also I don't think you should stop the whistles here, in fact here should be the whistles' climax ._.
27. 01:58:668 (1) - No finish here? o.o

1. 00:04:001 (4) - Put NC here instead?
2. 00:06:668 (3) - Also NC here instead? (if you did these two you'll get 1-2-3, as you did on other diffs)
3. 00:08:001 (1) - Add whistle here for the instrument?
4. 00:15:001 (2) - You can easily make this in the center (~x:256)... Minor stuff though
5. 00:41:334 (1) - Umm idk... I prefer to use a repeating slider 2/1 slider here instead, fits the song better for me personally :3
6. 00:45:334 (1,2,3) - Hmm, I'm thinking of using a symmetry here perhaps: (you don't have to really follow dist.snap from previous 00:44:001 (3) imo, there's a 4/1 delay between each other - as long as they don't get really close they should be fine xD)
   
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7. 00:49:334 (1) - If you did above suggestion you can just simply stack this below (3)
8. 00:51:668 (3) - Put whistle on slider's end (downbeat) instead of repeat (blue tick)?
9. 00:59:334 (4) - Just a suggestion, you can add variation like this imo, flows good in play mode (:
   
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10. 01:10:001 (1,2) - Move these two more to the left (around ~x:70) so that (1,2,3,4) won't overlap in play mode (due to stacking's nature)
11. 01:14:668 (1,2,3) - Another suggestion here (so it'll overlap less) - make these three in a straight line perhaps:
    
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12. 01:16:668 (4,1) - ...and arrange the following two notes like this - I know (4,1) is a bit far compared to normal spacing but it's still very intentional, I prefer this personally because it looks much neater (:
    
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13. 01:21:334 (2,3) - Err, considering the piano's sound here it's better imo to put the whistles on the slider's start (not repeat ._.)
14. 01:25:001 (4) - Umm, this should be new combo-ed if you wanted to follow the combo ordering you've used in 01:21:001 (1)
15. 01:25:334 (5,6) - Same as 01:21:334 (2,3)
16. 01:35:334 (2) - Make this as a 1/1 repeating slider and start the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after? Would leave a much better impression to the players here (compared to the long delay you currently have)
17. 01:36:001 (1) - No finish on spinner's end here? o.o
18. 01:43:334 (7) - Consider using Sampleset : Soft on slider's repeat here? It sounds less abrupt though (considering the bass also don't go that hectic here~)
19. 02:01:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's quite obvious that this hexagon is uneven, there's Compose -> Create Polygon Circles feature which you can use here though
20. 02:07:024 (1,1,1) - Would be much better if you can aim for a perfect triangle here instead of fully following spacing imo, yes the slowdown ruins normal spacing and imo the new combos should help already:
    
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21. 02:08:756 (1) - Also as portrayed in the picture above, try to make this placed in the center? (:

Niva wrote:

Hi Fear! Sorry for delay, this song...

[General]

-> The most obvious error about this mapset is (idk why) no-video download link doesn't appear in Beatmap Listing, renaming the video's filename and

Video,-4050,"BGA.avi"

it's website problem,not map,like this https://osu.ppy.sh/b/128663&m=1 some diffs have no-video dl and some not

in the .osu file *might* work (not really sure though, never seen case like this before but I've heard similar experiences about BG not showing - this might worth trying (: )

-> About the combo color, the gray and white is a bit hard to distinguish imo (just personal opinion though, it's not unreadable) - also for me it'll be a lot prettier if the red and blue combocolor made lighter, blends really well with the video's gentle atmosphere~

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-> Actually the song is really good if you wanted to experiment with the Addition/Sampleset feature, I understand this is an old map (which was mapped before the feature is implemented) though :3

-> also that .osu file I send earlier in PM *hides*

[-to the death-]

-> I'd HP Drain +1 and OD -1 here but it's up to you

1. 00:06:667 (6,1,2) - Some suggestions here:
   
   1. You can either put NC on all three for aesthetics
   2. I'd personally add whistle on (1) to accompany the instrument as well
   3. Also consider making it like this perhaps? Somehow it plays nice imo because the next 00:12:001 (1) is located in the exact center:
      
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2. 00:12:001 (1) - I highly recommend to apply a gradual volume increase here (40 -> 50 -> 60 -> 70, for example) or at least use lower volume, constant 70% sounds quite abrupt imo ._. fixed
3. 00:21:835 (3) - Minor stuff but would look better if this isn't touching (1) imo, moving it slightly to ~:249 y:189 should do
4. 00:23:334 (4,5,6,7,9,1) - Consider using manual stacking here? Flows good while playing imo:
   
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5. 00:33:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - This is a good place to experiment with Sampleset/Addition (top-left in the editor) feature before, with it no need to use hitnormal as S:C1's hitwhistle here, you could use Sampleset : Normal Addition : Soft and get both normal-hitnormal + soft-hitwhistle on the same object (really useful here imo)
6. 00:33:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Also with this, I understand your point here is to make (1,3) and (2,4,1) in a straight line but perhaps consider making this stream encircle (3)'s end instead:
   
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7. 00:37:001 (4,5,6) - I prefer having this symmetrical with (1,2,3), it's neater like this imo but up to you of course :3
8. 00:42:001 (7) - Consider moving this downward a bit perhaps (~y:38 for example)?
9. 00:44:001 (x) - Feels quite empty here to be honest, I tried adding a circle here with 50% volume (in the center, stacked with your next (1)) and it looks/sounds better xD
10. 00:45:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggestion here, perhaps consider arranging them in an upward arc instead...
11. 00:49:334 (1,2,3) - ...and this one as a downward arc? In the end it'll flow like this:
    
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12. 00:51:668 (4,5,6) - Whistle on (6) instead of (5)? The instrument is stronger there
13. 01:00:001 (7,8) - Suggestion, make this encircle (6) like this instead? fixed
    
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14. 01:02:001 (5,6) - This is placed a bit further compared to (2,3), is this intentional? (I prefer a perfect square by moving (2,3) further though (not (5,6) closer)...)
15. 01:05:084 (11) - Umm, I prefer to remove finish on slider's end here to emphasize the other two finishes nearby (:
16. 01:04:001 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Another good place to use manual-stacked stream imo, for example: ((4) is stacked beneath (3) in this pic though) fixed
    
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17. 01:06:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Quite ambiguous spacing here imo, moving (4,5,6) further should do better though
18. 01:08:501 (12) - Missing finish sound here? :3
19. 01:10:668 (12) - Minor stuff, move to ~x:85 y:351 so this doesn't overlap (11)? (looks much neater also in play mode~)
20. 01:25:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Also would be neater and better as well imo if this doesn't touch the previous stream (select all and move them to ~x:276 y:202, for example would do) fixed
21. 01:37:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - For me it's better if you could use Sampleset : Normal Addition : Soft with a bit of volume tweaking here, considering the bass' sound :3
22. 01:38:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just a suggestion, rather than a straight stream consider using this variation perhaps? Fits the song's holiness atmosphere better imo (:
    
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23. 01:38:668 (1) - Beginning of a new section from the song here, add finish?
24. 01:43:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, manual-stacked stream could flow better here: fixed
    
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25. 01:48:001 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,1) - Umm, I just felt weird with the stream's curve uneven curve here (not really a problem though), just mentioning you could use the new slider algorithm + 'Compose -> Convert Slider to Stream...' feature xD
26. 02:00:001 (1) - Move to ~y:11? No need to reduce the spacing here though o.o
27. 02:07:881 (1) - Remove whistle here to emphasize the two other whistles nearby?

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1. 00:06:668 (1) - Missing whistle on slider's start I suppose? fixed
2. 00:06:668 (1,2) - About these two, to get the 'echo' effect you could use 70 -> 5 -> 10 -> 15 volume progression though (blends much better rather than just 70 -> 5 imo)
3. 00:23:584 (3,4) - Minor stuff here, should be moved to ~x:52 y:331 for a better triangle
4. 00:24:001 (1) - Add finish also here to note the new section of the song?
5. 00:24:668 (6) - Umm, shouldn't it be rotated ~-25° selection centre? Can't really tell if this is intentional though...
6. 00:31:334 (1,2,1) - - I think it's better if these three's spacing made equal rather than an anti-jump on (2,1) - it keeps the player's momentum imo:
   
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7. 00:32:834 (3) - You could use Sampleset : Normal Addition : Soft here to follow the drum's climax~
8. 00:34:668 (1) - Err, just wondering is it intentional to shape the slider like this? It's fine though, but I prefer a smooth tilted slider wave here personally:
   

   112,288,34668,6,0,B|120:244|92:205|92:205|64:166|77:116,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

9. 00:38:668 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - A bit confusing to read here to be honest, a back-to-back manual stack like this plays better and fits the song better imo:
   
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10. 00:44:001 (5) - If you do above suggestion, you can simply put this in the center so you can keep the symmetry you previously made here (:
    
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11. 00:45:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - This arc could definitely made smoother, for example:
    

    329,278,45334,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    402,227,46001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    422,138,46668,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    373,62,47334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    287,34,48001,1,0,0:0:0:0:

12. 00:56:501 (1,2) - You put whistle on (1)'s end instead of (2) here, is this intentional? o.o
13. 01:00:168 (2,3,4,5) - Same suggestion as soulfear's diff actually, on this map's doubles (such as this one) you can experiment with manual-stacked stream variation :3
    
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14. 01:01:334 (1,2) - Would fit (9)'s flow better imo if (1,2) is made similar like this:
    
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15. 01:06:168 (2,4) - Select both and move them to ~x:365 y:215 so that 01:06:168 (2,4,3) will be equally spaced in a straight line? Much more pleasant to view this way imo
16. 01:11:168 (6,10) - Flow is a bit weird imo (especially (9,10,11) where the spacing varies) - I'd rather put (10) around ~x:205 y:173 to make them as an equally spaced diamond instead but it's up to you
17. 01:13:334 (1,3) - Umm, well, you could just recreate the slider using the new slider algorithm to get a MUCH smoother slider on this one :3
18. 01:16:668 (3,4) - Move (3) upper and (4) lower like this perhaps? Looks good how (3)'s end is encircled by the next (1) this way~
    
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19. 01:26:168 (2,4) - Personally I'd remove the finish on these two so that the triple finish on 01:26:834 (2,3,4) would stand out more...
20. 01:33:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I recommend to move all these to ~x:271 y:349, so they'll look correct in play mode (due to stacking's nature)
21. 01:42:668 (1) - ...why the finish got discontinued here ._.
22. 01:43:001 (5,6,7) - Also here, why no hitsound at all on these three? I recommend to use Sampleset : Normal where the bass comes though (as soulfear did on his diff), in this case add Sampleset : Normal on
    
    1. 01:43:334 (6) - Slider's start, first repeat, slider's end
    2. 01:43:668 (7) - Slider's start and second repeat
23. 01:46:668 (1,2,5,6) - ...also consider redoing this slider with the new slider algorithm for a much smoother slider
24. 01:58:668 (1) - Again why no finish on slider's end? It blends really well there xD fixed
25. 02:07:024 (1,1) - There's nothing on the song following the slider's end here, consider reducing the volume of each slider's end to ~30-40%? fixed
26. 02:08:738 (1) - Should be snapped to the red line! fixed

[Hyper]

1. 00:06:001 (4) - Whistle on slider's end as well? (you have it on 00:03:334 (4)'s end) fixed
2. 00:08:001 (2) - For me it's better if this could make symmetry with (4,1) - up to you though:
   
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3. 00:17:334 (1,2,3,4) - imo it'll be better if you could space them out a bit so they don't touch each other, for example:
   
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4. 00:21:501 (1,2,3,...) Err, for this arc imo you could place (2) in the center and make a better arc based on (2)'s approach circle like this:
   
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5. 00:23:001 (2) - Also this one's missing whistle I believe :3 fixed
6. 00:28:334 (2) - Remove the whistle on slider's body here (sliderwhistle) here? (this wasn't intentional I think) fixed
7. 00:32:001 (1) - Considering the song's piano triples perhaps try to split this slider into four repeating sliders? It would fit the song more imo - also simple pattern like this would work already imo:
   
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8. 00:33:334 (1) - Soft sampleset blends better than Normal here imo, the song goes lush there~ fixed
9. 00:45:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Considering (1,2,3)'s symmetry pattern perhaps try to create an arc here? The flow will be like this:
   
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10. 00:50:668 (3) - I'd add whistle here for the instrument (: fixed
11. 00:51:668 (1,2,3) - Really minor here but I'd like to mention that due to stacking's nature, if you want to stack these three correctly with previous (3) this should be placed in ~x:353 y:284 xD
12. 00:55:334 (1,2,3,4) - Rather than four circles here I much prefer two repeating 1/4 sliders here, fits the music much more and shouldn't be hard to place imo considering the previous part's rhythm :3
13. 00:57:001 (5) - To fit the synth here, I'd add whistle here... fixed
14. 00:58:334 (4) - ...and remove the whistle in here fixed
15. 00:58:668 (1,2) - Just a pattern suggestion here, I prefer something more dynamic rather than just two straight sliders here:
    
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16. 01:00:001 (1,2,3,4) - Select all four and move them to ~x:431 y:21 so that (1)'s end and (4) will be stacked to the previous (3)?
17. 01:05:001 (5) - Missing finish on slider's end? o.o
18. 01:07:334 (4,7,1,...) - Because previously you had a normal sampleset on 01:06:668 (1) imo it would be best to continue the normal sampleset to accompany the bass here, don't be afraid to use Sampleset : Normal Addition : Soft as well if it's necessary though
19. 01:14:668 (3) - I'd NC this also to make the combo 1-2-1-2-1-1 - you can also make it 1-2-1-2-1-2 if 01:15:668 (1) isn't NCed though (:
20. 01:15:334 (1,1) - Encircle previous (3) like this instead perhaps?
    
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21. 01:18:501 (1) - I would really recommend to add whistle here for the instrument, sounds fabulous (: fixed
22. 01:21:168 (1) - ...however don't place whistle here though, place whistle on 01:23:834, and don't place whistle on 01:26:501 - this pattern fits the instrument most imo xD fixed
23. 01:34:001 (3,4,1) - imo it's fine to use a slightly wider spacing on these three so that (1) can encircle the previous slider without touching it, looks much neater:
    
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24. 01:37:001 (2) - Add whistle on slider's end here as well? fixed
25. 01:41:334 (1,1,1) - Because of the previous finishes that you had on (1,1)'s start would be best if you add finishes on these three's start as well imo (and also on 01:43:002 (2)'s start)
26. 01:57:334 (1) - I'd make this face upward instead to avoid overlap with (6), it won't overlap with (2) btw because of the AR - also I don't think you should stop the whistles here, in fact here should be the whistles' climax ._.
27. 01:58:668 (1) - No finish here? o.o fixed

[Normal]

-> A lot of sliders on this diff could be made better with the new slider algorithm, again I understand though this map was made before that feature was implemented~

1. 00:04:001 (4) - Put NC here instead?
2. 00:06:668 (3) - Also NC here instead? (if you did these two you'll get 1-2-3, as you did on other diffs)
3. 00:08:001 (1) - Add whistle here for the instrument?
4. 00:15:001 (2) - You can easily make this in the center (~x:256)... Minor stuff though
5. 00:41:334 (1) - Umm idk... I prefer to use a repeating slider 2/1 slider here instead, fits the song better for me personally :3
6. 00:45:334 (1,2,3) - Hmm, I'm thinking of using a symmetry here perhaps: (you don't have to really follow dist.snap from previous 00:44:001 (3) imo, there's a 4/1 delay between each other - as long as they don't get really close they should be fine xD)
   
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7. 00:49:334 (1) - If you did above suggestion you can just simply stack this below (3)
8. 00:51:668 (3) - Put whistle on slider's end (downbeat) instead of repeat (blue tick)?
9. 00:59:334 (4) - Just a suggestion, you can add variation like this imo, flows good in play mode (:
   
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10. 01:10:001 (1,2) - Move these two more to the left (around ~x:70) so that (1,2,3,4) won't overlap in play mode (due to stacking's nature)
11. 01:14:668 (1,2,3) - Another suggestion here (so it'll overlap less) - make these three in a straight line perhaps:
    
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12. 01:16:668 (4,1) - ...and arrange the following two notes like this - I know (4,1) is a bit far compared to normal spacing but it's still very intentional, I prefer this personally because it looks much neater (:
    
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13. 01:21:334 (2,3) - Err, considering the piano's sound here it's better imo to put the whistles on the slider's start (not repeat ._.)
14. 01:25:001 (4) - Umm, this should be new combo-ed if you wanted to follow the combo ordering you've used in 01:21:001 (1)
15. 01:25:334 (5,6) - Same as 01:21:334 (2,3)
16. 01:35:334 (2) - Make this as a 1/1 repeating slider and start the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 after? Would leave a much better impression to the players here (compared to the long delay you currently have)
17. 01:36:001 (1) - No finish on spinner's end here? o.o fixed
18. 01:43:334 (7) - Consider using Sampleset : Soft on slider's repeat here? It sounds less abrupt though (considering the bass also don't go that hectic here~)
19. 02:01:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's quite obvious that this hexagon is uneven, there's Compose -> Create Polygon Circles feature which you can use here though
20. 02:07:024 (1,1,1) - Would be much better if you can aim for a perfect triangle here instead of fully following spacing imo, yes the slowdown ruins normal spacing and imo the new combos should help already:
    
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21. 02:08:756 (1) - Also as portrayed in the picture above, try to make this placed in the center? (:

To be honest I'm quite afraid while modding this, I have a lot of map from you in my PC and I was afraid I couldn't deliver a mod which fits your mapping style... I'm trying my best though >_<

I can't believe I finally finished this orz - map is enjoyable as expected but I still see some quite worrying errors (that last note on gowww's Another, for example) so I'd drop a star + star icon for now~

Umm, well, good luck Fear, great set and song choice :3

1. Normal : 00:35:668 (1) - Missing new combo here
2. -to the death- : The first combo color (the gray) is different with other diffs (idk why), please alter it to R:210 G:210 B:210 to make it consistent with other diffs
3. I just realized that the BG is 717*717, which is in a 1:1 ratio, and I've altered it into 800*600 (4:3) below - I really, really recommend to use this one (the 4:3 one) though:
   
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1. -to the death- : 00:37:001 (4,5,6) - I don't remember there were three whistles here before... Somehow too noisy imo (and idk if this is intentional) - use whistle only on (5)?
2. -to the death- : 00:44:001 - I'm still expecting a note here, still feels very empty without a note ._.
3. -to the death- : 01:00:001 (7) - Missing finish here?
4. -to the death- : 01:59:917 (2,1) - Same as my previous mod post here (spacing issue)
5. Hyper : 01:35:001 (2) - Missing whistle on slider's end
6. Normal : 00:22:668 (6) - Please move the inherit section at the middle of the slider either 1/2 or 1/1 later, the early transition to N sampleset sounds abrupt on the slider's body ._.

Niva wrote:

Umm, well, I guess I'd recheck this now~ (don't kd btw)

First of all I'd like to mention some things (only the important ones though) which are also mentioned by AIBat:

1. Normal : 00:35:668 (1) - Missing new combo here fixed
2. -to the death- : The first combo color (the gray) is different with other diffs (idk why), please alter it to R:210 G:210 B:210 to make it consistent with other diffs fixed
3. I just realized that the BG is 717*717, which is in a 1:1 ratio, and I've altered it into 800*600 (4:3) below - I really, really recommend to use this one (the 4:3 one) though:
   
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my picture is more clear than that when is used as BG

Then here are some map-related things I'd like to brought up, not many though as I've covered most in my previous post:

1. -to the death- : 00:37:001 (4,5,6) - I don't remember there were three whistles here before... Somehow too noisy imo (and idk if this is intentional) - use whistle only on (5)? fixed
2. -to the death- : 00:44:001 - I'm still expecting a note here, still feels very empty without a note ._.
3. -to the death- : 01:00:001 (7) - Missing finish here?
4. -to the death- : 01:59:917 (2,1) - Same as my previous mod post here (spacing issue) fixed
5. Hyper : 01:35:001 (2) - Missing whistle on slider's end fixed
6. Normal : 00:22:668 (6) - Please move the inherit section at the middle of the slider either 1/2 or 1/1 later, the early transition to N sampleset sounds abrupt on the slider's body ._.

That should be the major issues imo, however feel free to take your time to reconsider some of my previous suggestions on the previous mod post, I do believe there are a lot of things there which can improve your map more :3

Feel free to contact me again though, but then again I'm still busy with univ stuffs atm and can't really promise a fast recheck ._.