05:33 Jakomo73: hey did u have any problems besides that slider?
05:33 Mir: nah it was just that
05:33 Jakomo73: ok, thanks ^^
05:33 Mir: not bad for a first map tho i think you could been a bit more idk
05:33 Mir: force more movement in the second part
05:33 Mir: felt a little lacking in that department but the first part was pretty nice
05:34 Jakomo73: by second part do you mean second part of the chorus?
05:34 Mir: nah like after the really long slider-art part
05:34 Mir: the really repetitive part
05:34 Jakomo73: ahh
05:34 Mir: the part is already pretty repetitive so making something interesting out of it would mask that repetitiveness
05:34 Mir: but atm you have a pretty basic part there
05:36 Jakomo73: hmm, im not too sure what i couldve done to combat too much
05:36 Mir: well for one raise the sv
05:36 Jakomo73: interpretting rhythms with different objects prob would be a good start tho
05:36 Mir: i don't think the song calls for such a low sv at all there, it's a fairly fluid section
05:36 Mir: i mean it's pretty subjective tho lol
05:36 Mir: mm lets look
05:37 Jakomo73: to me that section is more of a technical rhythm section instead of an aim section
05:37 Jakomo73: although streams of 5 and triples isnt very technical tbf
05:37 Mir: tbf
05:37 Mir: 03:16:408 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) -
05:37 Mir: this isn't technical at all LOL
05:38 Jakomo73: that parts just coming out of the super slow section tho, I think having it be pretty calm kinda fits
05:39 Jakomo73: doubles are very technical tho :^)
05:40 Mir: not at this bpm
05:40 Mir: also i would have used
https://i.imgur.com/HytH8rI.png personally
05:40 Mir: from 03:16:408 -
05:40 Mir: just so it's not so empty
05:40 Mir: cuz atm it feels like the song is going but i'm barely moving
05:41 Mir: then 03:37:515 (1,1) - is pretty out of the blue
05:41 Mir: in such a calm part
05:41 Mir: (the nc doesn't help)
05:42 Mir: i like 04:07:837 - this part a lot more than the part before it tbh
05:42 Mir: 04:33:551 (1,2,1,2,1) - but this is so underwhelmingggg
05:44 Mir: idk about you but i feel like
https://i.imgur.com/cqTWk1b.png fits more for 04:33:551 -
05:44 Mir: since you have the hihats in the back too that you were previously mapping with streams like 04:23:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc
05:45 Mir: idk just some things to take into consideration is all
05:45 Mir: it's really up to you in the end it's not enough to make me pop the map cuz it's not what i interpret the song as
05:46 Jakomo73: yeah i dont really agree with the calm part, but I think ill make those changes to the second thing you linked
05:46 Jakomo73: cause that sounds and plays a ton better than just 3/4 jumps
05:47 Jakomo73: i will try to change some of the repetative parts tho to accentuate the differences in rhythm as well
05:48 Mir: i like how
05:48 Mir: you SORT of had the idea with 04:47:480 (2,3,1,2,3,4) -
05:48 Mir: just making 1/4 sliders to fit the hihats would have been perfect imo
05:50 Jakomo73: yeah i completely agree with that, ill have to add 1/4 sliders to those jump parts
05:50 Mir: dammit now i feel like mapping this song at some point
05:50 Mir: but i already have 9 pending slots aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
05:50 Mir: good luck with this btw
05:50 Jakomo73: its a really good song
05:50 Jakomo73: thanks, i appreciate the help <3
05:51 Mir: o//
05:51 Jakomo73: do u mind if i post logs in the thread? just kinda for "says rebubble is fine" as well?
05:52 Mir: lemme do it so i can milk some free kds out of this