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pan - Yamiyo no Nagoshisai ~for 2015 edition~ [OsuMania]

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DoNotMess
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, April 7, 2018 at 8:17:00 PM

Artist: pan
Title: Yamiyo no Nagoshisai ~for 2015 edition~
Tags: SF2015 Japanese Hardcore K-Shoot MANIA KSM
BPM: 193
Filesize: 5824kb
Play Time: 02:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced - 4Key (2.55 stars, 924 notes)
  2. Another - 4Key (4.45 stars, 1684 notes)
  3. Hyper - 4Key (3.63 stars, 1433 notes)
  4. Normal - 4Key (1.65 stars, 503 notes)
Download: pan - Yamiyo no Nagoshisai ~for 2015 edition~
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PiraTom
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PiraTom
[MetaData]
Artist : pan
Title : 闇夜之夏越祭 ~for 2015 edition~
Romanised Titile : Yamiyo no Natsukoshi Matsuri ~ for 2015 edition~
Source : K-Shoot MANIA
Tags : you should add SF2015

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Protastic101
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Protastic101
hitsounds!
[Samples]
  1. Hitnormal, it's like a quiet hihat kind of hit thing
  2. Hitclap, it's a snare for stuff like 00:05:597 (5597|0,5908|0,6219|0,6530|0,6685|0,6841|2) -
  3. Hitfinish, used at the start and ends of sections/phrases
  4. Hitwhistle, just a basic kick used for stuff like 00:20:519 (20519|0,20597|2,20675|1,20830|0,21141|0,21452|0,21763|2) -
  5. Snare. Here's an extra sample for use on the 2/1 at 00:20:830 (20830|0,21452|0,22074|0,22696|1,23317|2,23939|0,24561|0,25183|0) - and so on if you wanna do that. You can rename the samples however, I didn't really take 5 samples into account lol
[Like, 2 things to note when hitsounding]
Don't put two of the same sample at the same point in time (so like don't do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7887906 ), and if possible, if applying two different samples at the same point in time, try and put them on separate notes so if the player misses one, they still get the feedback of the other, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7887918 . Either way works, you could still put them on the same note, but meh.

[Another]
00:02:022 (2022|2,2333|1) - I'd suggest stacking these in the same column for pitch
00:05:597 (5597|0,5753|1,5908|0,6063|1,6219|0) - Despite only being 1/2, this is pretty uneven and favors the left hand much more than the right hand.
I would do something like this to try and balance it out a bit more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7887939
00:07:152 - Missing a jump here for the snare? Unless you're only accenting the synths with jumps. Idk, I'm not far enough into the chart to tell what you're going for yet lol
00:08:706 - I might suggest a burst that doesn't change direction nearly as often as the current one does, which breaks momentum since there's more strain on specific columns like 00:08:784 (8784|2,8861|1,8939|2) - 00:09:095 (9095|1,9172|2,9250|1) - which stop the flow imo. Instead, I'd do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7887956
00:18:032 (18032|2) - I think it'd be fine to leave this note out so that you get a hooked feel between 00:17:877 (17877|0,17877|1,18188|0,18188|1) - with the short 1/1 pause in between to represent the sudden emptiness in the music
00:18:032 - This SV sequence averages out to 0.95x cause (0.9 x 2) + 0.75 + 1.25 = 3.8 / 4 = 0.95 average SV. In order to make it average out to 1x which makes reading a bit easier, I'd do something like this
  1. 00:18:032 - 0.75x
  2. 00:18:110 - 1.25x
  3. 00:18:188 - 0.5x
  4. 00:18:266 - 1.5x
In this way, it just gets a bit stronger on the 1/2 before the crash
00:19:898 - Might consider trying to connect this roll a bit more so it doesn't feel as spaced out and jumpy to hit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888000
00:28:291 (28291|2,28447|2,28602|2,28758|2,28913|2) - This 5 note stack is a bit painful to hit, so I'd rearrange the pattern a bit to make it look kind of like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888019
00:30:390 - To average this sequence to 1x, make this SV 1.9x because 4 - (0.7 x 3) = 1.9
00:37:851 (37851|2,38006|2,38084|1,38240|1,38395|1) - Bit of a nasty direction turn makes it play kind of like stairs which put a lot of strain on the outer columns as opposed to inner columns. I'd rather you make them more roll like, such as this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888031
00:55:338 - Alright, let's have a talk about SVs! They're cool when making visual effects, but they can be really difficult to read when they average something besides 1x as you're essentially making the player read a speedup/slowjam depending on how they add up. The way to actually find the values that make them average 1x is by taking the starting SV value (whichever random number you wanna start with) and multiplying it by the number of units (units here are just how many snaps occur, like this part for example, uses 3/4 spaces), and subtracting that number from your total number of units. So for these 3/4 SVs to work, you'd have to make 00:55:493 - 00:55:727 - 1.6x since 3 - (0.7 x 2) = 1.6x
01:03:939 (63939|2) - Why not make this a 1/3 LN to connect to 01:04:043 - since the sounds are still the same fluid synth as before. Breaks the consistency a bit to just make this note single and the rest LNs
01:08:810 - 01:08:913 - I'd suggest making these jumps so that they feel capped and finished off, cause currently, it looks like an incomplete roll despite the music supporting the pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888184
01:23:939 (83939|1,84095|1,84250|1,84405|1) - 01:23:162 (83162|0,83317|0,83473|0,83628|0,83784|0,83939|0) - stacks! Since it's a bit stressful on one finger more than others, I'd try to even out the weight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888196
01:30:079 (90079|2,90234|2,90390|2,90545|2,90701|2) - Stairs! But god, this one handed trill feels really unnecessary in this part. I'd do something more like this which makes use of two handed trills more often https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888210
01:44:457 - I thought this burst was a bit difficult to read due to all the sudden changes in direction. I'd rather you change it halfway with smoother transition like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888219
01:49:975 (109975|1,110131|1,110286|1,110442|1,110597|1) - 01:50:753 (110753|2,110908|2,111063|2,111219|2,111374|2) - *sobs* If you wanted something trill like, I'd make it two handed because of how long these last, so something like this might play better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888232

Hope the hitsounds made sense, if not, poke me or something o/
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Protastic101 wrote:

hitsounds!
[Samples]
  1. Hitnormal, it's like a quiet hihat kind of hit thing
  2. Hitclap, it's a snare for stuff like 00:05:597 (5597|0,5908|0,6219|0,6530|0,6685|0,6841|2) -
  3. Hitfinish, used at the start and ends of sections/phrases
  4. Hitwhistle, just a basic kick used for stuff like 00:20:519 (20519|0,20597|2,20675|1,20830|0,21141|0,21452|0,21763|2) -
  5. Snare. Here's an extra sample for use on the 2/1 at 00:20:830 (20830|0,21452|0,22074|0,22696|1,23317|2,23939|0,24561|0,25183|0) - and so on if you wanna do that. You can rename the samples however, I didn't really take 5 samples into account lol
[Like, 2 things to note when hitsounding]
Don't put two of the same sample at the same point in time (so like don't do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7887906 ), and if possible, if applying two different samples at the same point in time, try and put them on separate notes so if the player misses one, they still get the feedback of the other, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7887918 . Either way works, you could still put them on the same note, but meh.

[Another]
00:02:022 (2022|2,2333|1) - I'd suggest stacking these in the same column for pitch ok!
00:05:597 (5597|0,5753|1,5908|0,6063|1,6219|0) - Despite only being 1/2, this is pretty uneven and favors the left hand much more than the right hand.
I would do something like this to try and balance it out a bit more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7887939 in 00:05:597 - i use column 1 as the anchor of snare, and at 00:06:841 - i use column 4 as anchor for snare, my map is kinda related to iidx style
00:07:152 - Missing a jump here for the snare? Unless you're only accenting the synths with jumps. Idk, I'm not far enough into the chart to tell what you're going for yet lol
i only map snare as 1 in the column 4, if there is no melody, i dont map it (iidx style)00:08:706 - I might suggest a burst that doesn't change direction nearly as often as the current one does, which breaks momentum since there's more strain on specific columns like 00:08:784 (8784|2,8861|1,8939|2) - 00:09:095 (9095|1,9172|2,9250|1) - which stop the flow imo. Instead, I'd do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7887956 re-arranged to 1 direction of the jumpstream
00:18:032 (18032|2) - I think it'd be fine to leave this note out so that you get a hooked feel between 00:17:877 (17877|0,17877|1,18188|0,18188|1) - with the short 1/1 pause in between to represent the sudden emptiness in the music ok
00:18:032 - This SV sequence averages out to 0.95x cause (0.9 x 2) + 0.75 + 1.25 = 3.8 / 4 = 0.95 average SV. In order to make it average out to 1x which makes reading a bit easier, I'd do something like this
  1. 00:18:032 - 0.75x
  2. 00:18:110 - 1.25x
  3. 00:18:188 - 0.5x
  4. 00:18:266 - 1.5x
In this way, it just gets a bit stronger on the 1/2 before the crash re-arranged
00:19:898 - Might consider trying to connect this roll a bit more so it doesn't feel as spaced out and jumpy to hit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888000 keep for pattern flow and tbh i dont like mapping 1|3 or 2|4 jump...it just doesnt suit
00:28:291 (28291|2,28447|2,28602|2,28758|2,28913|2) - This 5 note stack is a bit painful to hit, so I'd rearrange the pattern a bit to make it look kind of like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888019 in this section, i want to change the direction of the jumpstream midway, also this is 4,6* map,
as fas as i see players testing it, they have no problem in this section
00:30:390 - To average this sequence to 1x, make this SV 1.9x because 4 - (0.7 x 3) = 1.9 this sv is inspired by the map Flashes by ZZHBOY, as i see the replays on the leaderboards, they dont seem to have any problem hitting those pattern in this kind of sv
00:37:851 (37851|2,38006|2,38084|1,38240|1,38395|1) - Bit of a nasty direction turn makes it play kind of like stairs which put a lot of strain on the outer columns as opposed to inner columns. I'd rather you make them more roll like, such as this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888031 pitch, and it's not that hard as u described to hit those pattern
00:55:338 - Alright, let's have a talk about SVs! They're cool when making visual effects, but they can be really difficult to read when they average something besides 1x as you're essentially making the player read a speedup/slowjam depending on how they add up. The way to actually find the values that make them average 1x is by taking the starting SV value (whichever random number you wanna start with) and multiplying it by the number of units (units here are just how many snaps occur, like this part for example, uses 3/4 spaces), and subtracting that number from your total number of units. So for these 3/4 SVs to work, you'd have to make 00:55:493 - 00:55:727 - 1.6x since 3 - (0.7 x 2) = 1.6x ok
01:03:939 (63939|2) - Why not make this a 1/3 LN to connect to 01:04:043 - since the sounds are still the same fluid synth as before. Breaks the consistency a bit to just make this note single and the rest LNs ok
01:08:810 - 01:08:913 - I'd suggest making these jumps so that they feel capped and finished off, cause currently, it looks like an incomplete roll despite the music supporting the pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888184 ok
01:23:939 (83939|1,84095|1,84250|1,84405|1) - 01:23:162 (83162|0,83317|0,83473|0,83628|0,83784|0,83939|0) - stacks! Since it's a bit stressful on one finger more than others, I'd try to even out the weight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888196 re-arranged
01:30:079 (90079|2,90234|2,90390|2,90545|2,90701|2) - Stairs! But god, this one handed trill feels really unnecessary in this part. I'd do something more like this which makes use of two handed trills more often https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888210 re-arranged
01:44:457 - I thought this burst was a bit difficult to read due to all the sudden changes in direction. I'd rather you change it halfway with smoother transition like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888219 re-arranged
01:49:975 (109975|1,110131|1,110286|1,110442|1,110597|1) - 01:50:753 (110753|2,110908|2,111063|2,111219|2,111374|2) - *sobs* If you wanted something trill like, I'd make it two handed because of how long these last, so something like this might play better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7888232^

Hope the hitsounds made sense, if not, poke me or something o/
wow that was really helpful
also i thought the forum was about hitsounding the map XDDD lel im the laziest person in osu mapping community
thank you so much ! :)
DoNotMess
485 posts
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DoNotMess

PiraTom wrote:

[MetaData]
Artist : pan
Title : 闇夜之夏越祭 ~for 2015 edition~
Romanised Titile : Yamiyo no Natsukoshi Matsuri ~ for 2015 edition~
Source : K-Shoot MANIA
Tags : you should add SF2015

I checked, it may be true metadata. Good Luck :)
thanks for metadata piratom!!! :')
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Sandalphon
Diff name "Delete this"

Kudosu me thank you
dionzz99
677 posts
Joined April 2013
dionzz99
i demand 2017 edition
Shima Rin
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Joined March 2015
Shima Rin
Hi M4M This time i will remember to save draft QAQ

1|2|3|4

Another
00:07:152 - add a note

00:07:696 - ^ for the same volume as 00:07:773 -

00:08:550 - ^

00:09:872 - miss a note

00:11:582 (11582|2) - 00:12:825 (12825|1) - 00:14:069 (14069|2) - 00:16:556 (16556|1) - 00:17:799 (17799|3) -

00:20:209 - add a note

00:22:074 (22074|3,22074|0,22229|1,22229|2,22385|0,22385|1,22540|3,22540|2,22696|1,22851|3,22851|0,23006|3,23006|2) - add note in between will be fun like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7934619

00:56:271 (56271|0,56271|3) - make triple

00:57:514 - make this part like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7934628

01:08:395 (68395|1,68395|0) - 01:09:017 (69017|0,69017|1) - make triple

01:09:639 - catch those sound like； https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7934646

01:47:721 (107721|3) - 01:48:343 (108343|0) - delete

02:01:867 - make it like this will be nicer: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7934659

Hyper
00:14:846 - better add one

00:56:271 (56271|1,56271|0) - 00:57:514 (57514|3,57514|2) - i think these two should be especially triple notes, u can change some triple notes except them to maintain the density

01:23:861 - miss a note, u can delete one on 01:23:784 -

01:35:053 - miss one

01:35:442 (95442|2) - make it on column 4

01:42:670 (102670|2) - delete and add one on column 1 for 01:42:747 -

01:43:369 (103369|1,103447|2,103525|0,103525|3) - same for this

02:02:333 (122333|2,122411|1,122488|3,122488|2,122566|1,122644|2,122721|1,122799|2,122877|1,122955|2,123032|1,123110|3,123110|2,123188|1,123266|2,123343|1) - this pattern is really hard to play, try to change to some other patterns, it is hyper not another

And that's all, hope it helps, and good luck for rank ;)
Amiichii
729 posts
Joined November 2016
Amiichii
Ngeng~
  • [Lainnya]
  1. 00:07:152 (7152|3) - delete? better flow
  2. 00:11:582 (11582|2) - ini nyempil apaan si? aneh. klo disini 00:11:504 - gpp
    00:12:825 (12825|1) - 00:14:069 (14069|2) - etc dah ^ wkwk
  3. 00:18:965 (18965|3) - turunin ke 00:18:887 - ? viano
  4. 00:53:628 (53628|2,53706|1) - 1/6s mz
  5. 00:55:105 (55105|3) - sama kyak sblmnya
  6. 01:22:618 - missing note di colomn 4
  7. 01:24:250 - add note? kyak suara simbal fx gitu

    [Hiper]
  8. 00:10:727 (10727|1,10882|0) - buat jack? same pitch
  9. 00:11:970 (11970|0,12126|1) - 00:13:214 (13214|3,13369|2) - 00:15:701 (15701|2,15856|3) - etc ^
  10. 00:14:846 - kok pianonya di skip si? jadi bingung pas main uwu
  11. 00:15:079 - add note?
  12. 00:18:965 (18965|1) - turunin ke 00:18:887 - ?
  13. 00:19:898 - simbal kok single?
  14. 02:03:188 (123188|1,123343|1) - pindah ke kolom 1?
  15. 00:30:468 (30468|2,30468|1,30468|3) - why triplet?
  16. 00:37:618 (37618|1,37851|1) - jangan dibuat gini pls klo masih ada kolom yg lain :(

goodluck
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi M4M This time i will remember to save draft QAQ

1|2|3|4

Another
00:07:152 - add a note ok

00:07:696 - ^ for the same volume as 00:07:773 -

00:08:550 - ^

00:09:872 - miss a note i want to highlight the kick only

00:11:582 (11582|2) - 00:12:825 (12825|1) - 00:14:069 (14069|2) - 00:16:556 (16556|1) - 00:17:799 (17799|3) -

00:20:209 - add a note why

00:22:074 (22074|3,22074|0,22229|1,22229|2,22385|0,22385|1,22540|3,22540|2,22696|1,22851|3,22851|0,23006|3,23006|2) - add note in between will be fun like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7934619 um i only map melody

00:56:271 (56271|0,56271|3) - make triple kick 2 crash 3 here

00:57:514 - make this part like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7934628 no sound supporting 1/4 in this section

01:08:395 (68395|1,68395|0) - 01:09:017 (69017|0,69017|1) - make triple too dense

01:09:639 - catch those sound like； https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7934646 im giving sv to replace those note for more fun

01:47:721 (107721|3) - 01:48:343 (108343|0) - delete ok

02:01:867 - make it like this will be nicer: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7934659 rearranged

Hyper
00:14:846 - better add one ok

00:56:271 (56271|1,56271|0) - 00:57:514 (57514|3,57514|2) - i think these two should be especially triple notes, u can change some triple notes except them to maintain the density kick 2 crash 3

01:23:861 - miss a note, u can delete one on 01:23:784 - ok

01:35:053 - miss one nope

01:35:442 (95442|2) - make it on column 4 pitch is the same

01:42:670 (102670|2) - delete and add one on column 1 for 01:42:747 - drum

01:43:369 (103369|1,103447|2,103525|0,103525|3) - same for this kick

02:02:333 (122333|2,122411|1,122488|3,122488|2,122566|1,122644|2,122721|1,122799|2,122877|1,122955|2,123032|1,123110|3,123110|2,123188|1,123266|2,123343|1) - this pattern is really hard to play, try to change to some other patterns, it is hyper not anothernerfed but still keeping the trill


And that's all, hope it helps, and good luck for rank ;)
gotta mod urs soon !! Thank u so much!!! :)
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Amiichii wrote:

Ngeng~
  • [Lainnya]
  1. 00:07:152 (7152|3) - delete? better flow snare, no
  2. 00:11:582 (11582|2) - ini nyempil apaan si? aneh. klo disini 00:11:504 - gpp sbenarnya synth, tpi gw adjust so ok!
    00:12:825 (12825|1) - 00:14:069 (14069|2) - etc dah ^ wkwk
  3. 00:18:965 (18965|3) - turunin ke 00:18:887 - ? viano lbh emphasis ke crash nya
  4. 00:53:628 (53628|2,53706|1) - 1/6s mz 1/4 :)
  5. 00:55:105 (55105|3) - sama kyak sblmnya ok
  6. 01:22:618 - missing note di colomn 4 disini gw map yg lbh kenceng suaranya, kan ad 2 tuh, kalo yg kcil emng ada
  7. 01:24:250 - add note? kyak suara simbal fx gitu 01:24:172 (84172|0,84172|3) - disini fxnya

    [Hiper]
  8. 00:10:727 (10727|1,10882|0) - buat jack? same pitch ok
  9. 00:11:970 (11970|0,12126|1) - 00:13:214 (13214|3,13369|2) - 00:15:701 (15701|2,15856|3) - etc ^
  10. 00:14:846 - kok pianonya di skip si? jadi bingung pas main uwu udh di mod sbelumnya
  11. 00:15:079 - add note? ok
  12. 00:18:965 (18965|1) - turunin ke 00:18:887 - ? ^
  13. 00:19:898 - simbal kok single? salah, fixed
  14. 02:03:188 (123188|1,123343|1) - pindah ke kolom 1? pitch
  15. 00:30:468 (30468|2,30468|1,30468|3) - why triplet?
  16. 00:37:618 (37618|1,37851|1) - jangan dibuat gini pls klo masih ada kolom yg lain :( mirrored

goodluck
thanks!!
Captain Cusheen
222 posts
Joined October 2016
Captain Cusheen
ho!!! WIPWEIPWEIPSPEIPS
NORMAL
just a suggestion 00:00:778 (778|1) - put that on the third collumn
01:09:017 (69017|0) - put this in to the third collumn and then
01:09:328 (69328|1,69328|2) - move it on the left
Hard
This is pretty nice tbh
00:59:535 - add note maybe? add to the fourth collumn
00:59:613 - same here add first collumn
00:59:690 - delete this part
00:59:768 - add first collumn
00:59:846 - add fourth collumn

I don't know for me it is more comfortable and nice to see and to learn




Another
OKAY THIS IS HELLA FUN :) :) :) :) :) :)
just some minor changes because it's too bland
01:34:198 - the ln's
02:04:043 - maybe add note?
02:04:664 - same here

:DD:DD::D:D:D:DDD:D
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Captain Cusheen wrote:

ho!!! WIPWEIPWEIPSPEIPS
NORMAL
just a suggestion 00:00:778 (778|1) - put that on the third collumni keep for pitch (low pitch on the left)
01:09:017 (69017|0) - put this in to the third collumn and thenrearranged
01:09:328 (69328|1,69328|2) - move it on the left
Hard
This is pretty nice tbh
00:59:535 - add note maybe? add to the fourth collumn in this section , kick is only 1 regarding it's only H diff
00:59:613 - same here add first collumn
00:59:690 - delete this part keep, because i want to stress the snare there
00:59:768 - add first collumn
00:59:846 - add fourth collumn

I don't know for me it is more comfortable and nice to see and to learnmaybe you should provide screenshot so i can see what you are suggesting more clearly next time




[box=Another]OKAY THIS IS HELLA FUN :) :) :) :) :) :)
just some minor changes because it's too bland
01:34:198 - the ln's i think it's fine but lets see upcoming mods
02:04:043 - maybe add note? it's only snare
02:04:664 - same here reconsidering

:DD:DD::D:D:D:DDD:D[box]
thank u so much for mod <3
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Ibrahim
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General

saya ga begitu yakin lo mau pake keysound atau gimana? soalnya saya nemu yg kaya begini
Click Here
kalo seengaknya ga di pake itu HS mending hapus aja
cek lagi ada di setiap diff, kalo mau di hapus pecet Tab terus ctrl + A dan delete.

Normal

00:18:684 (18684|2,18917|2) - ini geser aja ke col 2 biar enak (col 1 2 3 4)
00:22:726 - add note lagi aja
00:30:498 (30498|1) - ini hapus aja deh, sebelum nya yg di kasih hitsound W cuman 1
00:47:907 (47907|2) - ini juga bukan C delete aja
00:48:529 (48529|0) - sama
01:10:290 (70290|3) - geser ke col 2 biar mirror dengan ini 01:09:358 (69358|2,69358|3) -
01:39:513 - kurang enak di bikin trill , ubah kaya gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7979393
01:40:757 (100757|3,100912|3,101068|3,101223|3) - tau kok ini pitch nya sama tapi kasian buat normal , di buat gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7979398 suapaya balance
01:55:290 (115290|1,115912|2) - miss C
01:56:612 (116612|2,117233|1) - kenapa cuman 1 buat C , sebelumnya kasih 2

Hyper

00:28:710 - di buat gini aja supaya transisi stair nya enak sama stair sebelumnya https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7979428
00:40:446 (40446|3,40601|3,40757|3,41068|3) - ini gak enak , 00:41:068 (41068|3) - pindahin ke kol 1
sisanya udah bagus
DoNotMess
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Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Ibrahim wrote:

General

saya ga begitu yakin lo mau pake keysound atau gimana? soalnya saya nemu yg kaya begini
Click Here
kalo seengaknya ga di pake itu HS mending hapus aja
cek lagi ada di setiap diff, kalo mau di hapus pecet Tab terus ctrl + A dan delete.smua dipake tapi tar gw adjust lg abis kuota mod abis

Normal

00:18:684 (18684|2,18917|2) - ini geser aja ke col 2 biar enak (col 1 2 3 4) ok
00:22:726 - add note lagi aja disini emphasis ke melodi
00:30:498 (30498|1) - ini hapus aja deh, sebelum nya yg di kasih hitsound W cuman 1 ok
00:47:907 (47907|2) - ini juga bukan C delete aja 00:47:907 - sini ampe 00:48:840 - 2 note smua (1 ln 1 biasa) biar gk kliatan sepi/color]
00:48:529 (48529|0) - sama
01:10:290 (70290|3) - geser ke col 2 biar mirror dengan ini 01:09:358 (69358|2,69358|3) -
01:39:513 - kurang enak di bikin trill , ubah kaya gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7979393 ok
01:40:757 (100757|3,100912|3,101068|3,101223|3) - tau kok ini pitch nya sama tapi kasian buat normal , di buat gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7979398 suapaya balance jdi 1 hand trill
01:55:290 (115290|1,115912|2) - miss C ok
01:56:612 (116612|2,117233|1) - kenapa cuman 1 buat C , sebelumnya kasih 2 ok

Hyper

00:28:710 - di buat gini aja supaya transisi stair nya enak sama stair sebelumnya https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7979428 rearranged
00:40:446 (40446|3,40601|3,40757|3,41068|3) - ini gak enak , 00:41:068 (41068|3) - pindahin ke kol 1 rearranged become no jack
sisanya udah bagus
owo ibrahimovic
[ Ari Knight ]
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[ Ari Knight ]
Yo!
utang m4m :D

here you go!

|1|2|3|4|

Hyper
  1. 00:02:052 (2052|2) - could you make this as mini LN? just it feels better with that
  2. 00:06:715 (6715|0) - delete and add 2 notes on |2| and |3| for the drum sound [IDK what's the name of that]
  3. 00:07:648 (7648|0) - delete and add a note in |1| in white line, reason is same as above
  4. 02:03:140 (123140|2,123218|1,123296|2,123373|1) - beter do the above first and then do this to the above
  5. 02:03:762 (123762|2,123762|1) - move to |1| and |4| because of ^


ok that's it! sorry if not enough

the overal was good, very good :D

find me here if you need anything again Ari Knight Modding Qu'eue' :)


Good Luck then ;)
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

Ari Knight wrote:

Yo!
utang m4m :D

here you go!

|1|2|3|4|

Hyper
  1. 00:02:052 (2052|2) - could you make this as mini LN? just it feels better with that iidx style, no
  2. 00:06:715 (6715|0) - delete and add 2 notes on |2| and |3| for the drum sound [IDK what's the name of that] ok
  3. 00:07:648 (7648|0) - delete and add a note in |1| in white line, reason is same as above keep for flow
  4. 02:03:140 (123140|2,123218|1,123296|2,123373|1) - beter do the above first and then do this to the above pitch
  5. 02:03:762 (123762|2,123762|1) - move to |1| and |4| because of ^


ok that's it! sorry if not enough

the overal was good, very good :D

find me here if you need anything again Ari Knight Modding Qu'eue' :)


Good Luck then ;)
thanks~
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K-Shoot MANIA is not a source

Reference: https://soundcloud.com/panbanana0729/sf ... editionver

Artist : pan
Title : 闇夜之夏越祭 ~for 2015 edition~
Romanised Titile : Yamiyo no Natsukoshi Matsuri ~for 2015 edition~
(Isn't it should be Yamiyo no Nagoshi Matsuri ?)
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Tags: SF2015 Japanese Hardcore K-Shoot MANIA

the romanised title is unsure
DoNotMess
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kk i love u
Virtue-
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GOBLO
19:02 DoNotMess: si ampas
19:02 DoNotMess: KAPAN IRC
19:02 Virtue-: mari
19:02 Virtue-: mumpung gua hari ini bs on
19:02 Virtue-: bsk 2 hari mw pergi camping
19:03 Virtue-: pramuka jancuk
19:04 DoNotMess: eh gk deh
19:04 DoNotMess: gw lg nunggu makan h3h3
19:04 Virtue-: JANCOEG
19:05 DoNotMess: MAU MOD KGK
19:05 DoNotMess: LU MOD MAP GW DLU DIH
19:05 DoNotMess: ANOTHER AJA
19:05 DoNotMess: biar bsa dpet bubble T_T
19:05 DoNotMess: bangsad nih avalon minta mod  udh di mod kgk onlen onleln orz
19:06 Virtue-: =W=
19:06 Virtue-: irc 
19:06 Virtue-: SINI LU
19:07 *Virtue- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1267936 pan - Yamiyo no Natsukoshi Matsuri ~ for 2015 edition~ [Another]]
19:08 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/vJrP1/f8ea4fdb79.jpg
19:08 Virtue-: gpp sih 
19:08 Virtue-: cmn rada
19:08 Virtue-: uhh
19:10 DoNotMess: duh pada komplen disitu T_t gw ubah dh
19:11 Virtue-: gjd
19:11 Virtue-: ternyata w full rainbow disitu
19:11 Virtue-: 01:44:798 (104798|0,104798|3) - 
19:11 Virtue-: handling ena http://puu.sh/vJrVw/208103ada3.jpg
19:12 DoNotMess: ok
19:12 Virtue-: astaga 01:48:373 (108373|2,108529|1,108684|2,108840|1,108995|2,109150|1,109306|2) - 
19:13 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/vJs0f/90cef5c7b4.jpg
19:13 DoNotMess: changed
19:13 DoNotMess: mau keep cymbal di 1 ama 4
19:14 DoNotMess: tpi ln ddh gw gnti
19:14 Virtue-: ok oc 'w')b
19:14 Virtue-: 01:55:057 (115057|2) - 
19:14 DoNotMess: ok oc slese?
19:15 Virtue-: blm
19:15 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/vJs3O/1df69ed86c.jpg
19:15 DoNotMess: apa itu.. smua melodi jadi 2 note gw
19:15 Virtue-: mungkin itu lebih ena, cmn gtw
19:15 Virtue-: w males ngeblok smwny
19:15 Virtue-: D:
19:15 DoNotMess: ok deh
19:15 DoNotMess: itu apply walaupun pitchnya sama tapi lbh enak
19:16 Virtue-: 02:02:518 (122518|3,122518|1,122518|0,122596|2,122674|3,122674|0,122751|2,122751|1,122829|3,122829|0,122907|2,122907|1,122985|3,122985|0,123062|1,123140|0,123140|2,123140|3,123218|1,123296|3,123296|0,123373|2,123373|1,123451|3,123451|0,123529|2,123529|1,123606|3,123606|0,123684|2,123762|3,123762|0,123762|1) - 
19:16 Virtue-: give
19:16 Virtue-: us
19:16 Virtue-: mercy
19:16 Virtue-: pls
19:16 DoNotMess: ini lagu 4,5
19:16 DoNotMess: sorry keep
19:16 DoNotMess: LAGIAN LU LIAD SMUA LAGU GW
19:16 DoNotMess: endingnya sama smua kek gni
19:16 DoNotMess: lovely bomb, sheriruth
19:16 DoNotMess: 1 model endingnya
19:17 Virtue-: smwny g beres :(
19:17 Virtue-: KWOAKWOAK
19:17 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/vJs8t/5c7c8f492a.png
19:17 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/vJs9z/6d01a58307.png lovely bomb
19:18 DoNotMess: KWAKAW smua map gw udh fix endingnya itu :'v udh paling enak, enchance crash, enchance kick, enak di tangan
19:18 DoNotMess: walaupun anchor di 14
19:18 DoNotMess: :')
19:18 Virtue-: DI JARIMU ENA
19:18 DoNotMess: ah gw liad orng maen aja rainbow smuaa :')
19:18 DoNotMess: oh
19:18 DoNotMess: lu mau gw ganti trill 1 4 kgk usah cymbal?
19:19 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/vJsdU/90df7462ac.png
19:19 DoNotMess: oh gni bole sih
19:21 Virtue-: ummmmm
19:21 Virtue-: HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
19:21 Virtue-: lebih bagus 
19:21 Virtue-: :'v
19:21 DoNotMess: wadu
19:21 DoNotMess: awas aja gw di cyduk gw sbut nama lu
19:22 Virtue-: 01:15:575 (75575|0) - move 3?
19:22 Virtue-: PLS
19:22 Virtue-: JANGAN
19:22 Virtue-: SEBUT NAMA W
19:22 DoNotMess: ok
19:22 DoNotMess: gw dramain ampe gw di mod bagian situ ama bn
19:22 Virtue-: 01:19:617 (79617|0) - 
19:22 Virtue-: ena menurut w http://puu.sh/vJsmS/d7fbca263e.jpg
19:23 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/vJsnO/09729b74ad.png dh gw botakin
19:23 Virtue-: WADO
19:23 Virtue-: BOTAK
19:23 DoNotMess: LAH KAN BAGIAN ATAS NYA ILANG LN NYA YA BOTAK AWKAKWWAK
19:23 Virtue-: 01:20:860 (80860|0,80938|1,81016|2,81093|3,81171|0,81249|1,81327|2,81404|3) - make the same and reverse it
19:23 Virtue-: OAWKOKAOWKA
19:24 Virtue-: masa 3x ada gituan sama trs sih =w=
19:24 DoNotMess: udh
19:24 DoNotMess: suaranya sama ya patternnya sama :'')
19:24 Virtue-: =w=
19:24 Virtue-: 01:22:104 (82104|0,82182|1,82259|2,82337|3,82415|0,82492|1,82570|2) - botakin
19:24 DoNotMess: UDAH
19:24 DoNotMess: 01:22:570 (82570|2) - tpi ini keep..
19:24 Virtue-: WHY?
19:25 DoNotMess: dnger sndiri
19:25 DoNotMess: ampe botak
19:25 Virtue-: ow
19:25 Virtue-: oke
19:25 Virtue-: sama kek yg udh gua sebutin 01:28:477 (88477|1,88632|2,88788|1,88943|2,89099|1,89254|2,89409|1) - 
19:26 Virtue-: udh
19:26 Virtue-: segitu ae
19:26 DoNotMess: UDH astaga
19:26 Virtue-: YWDH :V

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Meggumi
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Meggumi
Jadi last mod yahh... hhmmm good luck (y)

mod
00:00:653 - gimana kalo dimulainya pake LN aja? suara yg berdengung itu apa sih namanya wkwkkwkw
00:17:285 - note 1 pindah ke 3 supaya balance
00:19:150 - note 3 pindah ke 2 ^
00:19:928 - 00:20:394 | ngikutin suara drum aja
00:20:860 - 4 pindah ke 1, biar pas sama suaranya
00:21:482 - ^
00:22:415 - 1 ke 2
00:22:570 - 2 ke 3
00:23:814 - 3 ke 2
00:23:969 - 2 ke 3
00:24:902 - sama kayak 00:20:890
00:29:720 - note 4 sama 1 tuker aja
00:30:187 - 4 pindah ke 3
00:45:420 - note 2 itu jadi LN kecil aja
00:47:907 - note 3 ^
01:07:182 - 2 ke 3, biar sama kayak yg dibawah
01:07:492 - 1 ke 2, ^
01:19:928 - note 4 pindah ke 1
02:00:031 - 3 ke 1 biar kayak stairs yg dibawah
02:04:539 - add note disini.. ada suaranya juga

Hutang lunas yahh.. sorry agak lama
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

Meggumi wrote:

Jadi last mod yahh... hhmmm good luck (y)

mod
00:00:653 - gimana kalo dimulainya pake LN aja? suara yg berdengung itu apa sih namanya wkwkkwkw jdi 1 ktuk
00:17:285 - note 1 pindah ke 3 supaya balance re-structured
00:19:150 - note 3 pindah ke 2 ^
00:19:928 - 00:20:394 | ngikutin suara drum aja iidx style mapping is melody
00:20:860 - 4 pindah ke 1, biar pas sama suaranya pitch
00:21:482 - ^
00:22:415 - 1 ke 2
00:22:570 - 2 ke 3
00:23:814 - 3 ke 2
00:23:969 - 2 ke 3
00:24:902 - sama kayak 00:20:890 ok
00:29:720 - note 4 sama 1 tuker aja re-structured
00:30:187 - 4 pindah ke 3 :thinking:
00:45:420 - note 2 itu jadi LN kecil aja kalo melody panjangnya 1/2 doang, di section ini gw pake normal note dh ckup mnurut gw
00:47:907 - note 3 ^
01:07:182 - 2 ke 3, biar sama kayak yg dibawah re-structured
01:07:492 - 1 ke 2, ^
01:19:928 - note 4 pindah ke 1
02:00:031 - 3 ke 1 biar kayak stairs yg dibawah pitch
02:04:539 - add note disini.. ada suaranya jugadisini cuman ngemap snare nya


Hutang lunas yahh.. sorry agak lama
thanks for mod, cie last mod~
otw bubble in june
[ Ari Knight ]
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udah juni
kapan bubblenya?
FAMoss
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DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
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FAMoss
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Problem about source

[ Normal ]


[ Hyper ]


[ Another ]

sama seperti Hyper

XD mending di hapus aja Source nya
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
ah ok thanks famoss, f this map anyway
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DoNotMess wrote:

ah ok thanks famoss, f this map anyway
Maxus
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Maxus
akhirnya wa baru balik lg..
btw ini wa pake download an bbrp hari lalu, jdi mngkin ada yang ga sesuai ama update an lu yg skrg

[General]
Bikin diff easynya dih baru rankable ini.. normalnya 2,15 lo..

[Another]
00:29:254 - wa prefer klo lu jg map 1/4nya pake 1/4 LN si biar lebih seru

00:36:404 - wa lebih prefer begini si sebenernya http://puu.sh/zc2nP/10109a8aff.png , karena 00:36:404 - ama 00:36:715 - suaranya sama jadi dibuat trill cocok

00:38:658 - agak trlalu linear stairnya imo, Ctrl+H 00:38:814 (38814|2,38891|3) - biar mirror ama jumpstream sblmnya di 00:38:270 -

00:42:156 (42156|1,42311|1,42466|1,42622|1) - patternnya jadi kerasa awkward di tangan, mending pindah 00:42:622 (42622|1) - ke col 4 lebih ngeflow.

00:48:218 (48218|3) - pindah ke col 2 ja, mini trillnya agk awkward di tangan kanan, dan biar ngeline up sejajar juga stairnya ama 00:48:684 (48684|0,48840|1,48995|2) -

00:51:948 - agak awkward dibreak LN nya disini padahal masih ad suara synthnya

00:55:057 - suara crash ini, harusnya double

01:01:793 - ini suaranya sama ama 01:01:897 - , harusnya dijack jg, kyk http://puu.sh/zc2LA/1dba215285.png

01:09:669 - wa rada merasa janggal disini, wa tau ini ada SVnya, tapi mending map 1/4 LN dan apus SV disini soalnya synthnya dominan met disini, dan ga cocoknya karena lu dah pindah fokus ke synth di 01:09:150 (69150|2,69254|1,69358|0,69358|3,69565|2) - , terus tiba2 ga fokus lagi.

01:18:062 - disini dibikin efek SV lebih cocok kok wlaupun ga ad sound effectnya secara langsung.

01:26:612 (86612|3) - pindah ke col 3 ini, triple jackny tak jelas untuk apa

01:29:254 (89254|1,89409|2) - ga cocok jadi trill disini pitchnya dah beda, mnding http://puu.sh/zc3bm/2be2c7deb7.png

01:42:156 - bagian ini rada ngambang tbh, coba kyk http://puu.sh/zc3oX/23294d5918.png biar krasa lebih berisi

01:49:150 - sama kyk 01:29:254 (89254|1,89409|2) -

02:02:518 - menurut wa perubahan jumptrillnya hrs diekspresikan melalui suara cymbalnya, dan yang pitchnya lebih tinggi kyk 02:03:451 - dibikin LN , kayak http://puu.sh/zc3tw/e30bd6333a.png

[Hyper]
00:03:140 - bikin 1/2 LN pattern disini ja biar orang lain ga gitu ribut soal gap

00:29:254 - mirip kyk another tp dimap pake stream biasa ja

00:33:917 - lupa tambah note kah disini? klo diliat dari cara layerny, jumlah note di another ama hyper di section ini sama, jadi ini juga harusnya tambah note.

00:40:601 (40601|3) - triple jack daerah sini agak membingungkan untuk apa, pindah ke col 3 ja

00:43:762 (43762|2,43814|1) - apa ini.. coba bandinging lg dah ama diff another

00:51:948 - sama kyk another

01:29:254 (89254|3) - pindah ke col 2 , alasannya mirip ama diff another.

01:49:150 - pindah ke col 3 alesannya sama kyk diatas.

02:02:518 - kayak another jg, coba bikin kyk http://puu.sh/zc3H1/e40b66b1f9.png

[Normal]
00:10:446 - dimap ja 1/2 nya, soalnya ini 1/4 synth section

00:39:513 - menurut wa bisa tambah LN lagi biar lebih keemphasis kyk http://puu.sh/zc3Qk/ff14bb9a2a.png

00:44:798 - tambah 1 note buat konsistensi ama 00:44:176 -

00:47:285 - agak kurang ngerti konsistensinya ama 00:44:176 - , coba ente putusin dlu mw kyk gimana

01:02:518 - 01:08:114 - 01:08:736 - map jadi 1/3 ja biar dari LN ga tiba2 lompat gap ke 1/6

01:21:016 - 01:21:327 - map 1/2 nya biar ga lompat dari 1/1 ke 1/4 dari normal ke hyper

01:22:259 - 01:22:570 - sama

01:44:487 - ampe 01:44:798 - ilangin LN dan map 1/3 biar gap ga gitu gede

paling masalah gap di bbrp tempat ama butuhnya diff easy, abis itu udah hrsnya
DoNotMess
485 posts
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Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Maxus wrote:

akhirnya wa baru balik lg..
btw ini wa pake download an bbrp hari lalu, jdi mngkin ada yang ga sesuai ama update an lu yg skrg

[General]
Bikin diff easynya dih baru rankable ini.. normalnya 2,15 lo.. yes maxus sama =w=

[Another]
00:29:254 - wa prefer klo lu jg map 1/4nya pake 1/4 LN si biar lebih seru ok

00:36:404 - wa lebih prefer begini si sebenernya http://puu.sh/zc2nP/10109a8aff.png , karena 00:36:404 - ama 00:36:715 - suaranya sama jadi dibuat trill cocok ok

00:38:658 - agak trlalu linear stairnya imo, Ctrl+H 00:38:814 (38814|2,38891|3) - biar mirror ama jumpstream sblmnya di 00:38:270 - okk

00:42:156 (42156|1,42311|1,42466|1,42622|1) - patternnya jadi kerasa awkward di tangan, mending pindah 00:42:622 (42622|1) - ke col 4 lebih ngeflow. ok

00:48:218 (48218|3) - pindah ke col 2 ja, mini trillnya agk awkward di tangan kanan, dan biar ngeline up sejajar juga stairnya ama 00:48:684 (48684|0,48840|1,48995|2) - ok

00:51:948 - agak awkward dibreak LN nya disini padahal masih ad suara synthnya re-arranged into something thoughtful ;)

00:55:057 - suara crash ini, harusnya double ok

01:01:793 - ini suaranya sama ama 01:01:897 - , harusnya dijack jg, kyk http://puu.sh/zc2LA/1dba215285.png ok

01:09:669 - wa rada merasa janggal disini, wa tau ini ada SVnya, tapi mending map 1/4 LN dan apus SV disini soalnya synthnya dominan met disini, dan ga cocoknya karena lu dah pindah fokus ke synth di 01:09:150 (69150|2,69254|1,69358|0,69358|3,69565|2) - , terus tiba2 ga fokus lagi. aa sbnrnya ini fokus di kick yg knceng dri section sblmnya ama crash.. jdi tak ksih sv ;-; ama pindah fokus

01:18:062 - disini dibikin efek SV lebih cocok kok wlaupun ga ad sound effectnya secara langsung. hmm.. kurng cocok kalo diksh sv di pace yg kek gni ;-;

01:26:612 (86612|3) - pindah ke col 3 ini, triple jackny tak jelas untuk apa ok

01:29:254 (89254|1,89409|2) - ga cocok jadi trill disini pitchnya dah beda, mnding http://puu.sh/zc3bm/2be2c7deb7.png ok

01:42:156 - bagian ini rada ngambang tbh, coba kyk http://puu.sh/zc3oX/23294d5918.png biar krasa lebih berisi ok

01:49:150 - sama kyk 01:29:254 (89254|1,89409|2) - re-arranged

02:02:518 - menurut wa perubahan jumptrillnya hrs diekspresikan melalui suara cymbalnya, dan yang pitchnya lebih tinggi kyk 02:03:451 - dibikin LN , kayak http://puu.sh/zc3tw/e30bd6333a.png re-arranged

[Hyper]
00:03:140 - bikin 1/2 LN pattern disini ja biar orang lain ga gitu ribut soal gap ok

00:29:254 - mirip kyk another tp dimap pake stream biasa ja ok

00:33:917 - lupa tambah note kah disini? klo diliat dari cara layerny, jumlah note di another ama hyper di section ini sama, jadi ini juga harusnya tambah note. sbnrnya gr gr tkud trlalu dense tpi ok

00:40:601 (40601|3) - triple jack daerah sini agak membingungkan untuk apa, pindah ke col 3 ja ok

00:43:762 (43762|2,43814|1) - apa ini.. coba bandinging lg dah ama diff another AMPUN ASTAGA GK NOTICE ;'(

00:51:948 - sama kyk another ok

01:29:254 (89254|3) - pindah ke col 2 , alasannya mirip ama diff another. ok

01:49:150 - pindah ke col 3 alesannya sama kyk diatas.ok

02:02:518 - kayak another jg, coba bikin kyk http://puu.sh/zc3H1/e40b66b1f9.pngok

[Normal]
00:10:446 - dimap ja 1/2 nya, soalnya ini 1/4 synth section ok

00:39:513 - menurut wa bisa tambah LN lagi biar lebih keemphasis kyk http://puu.sh/zc3Qk/ff14bb9a2a.png re-arranged

00:44:798 - tambah 1 note buat konsistensi ama 00:44:176 - 00:45:109 - ini snare (clap) 00:44:798 - yg ini kick doang (whistle)

00:47:285 - agak kurang ngerti konsistensinya ama 00:44:176 - , ^

01:02:518 - 01:08:114 - 01:08:736 - map jadi 1/3 ja biar dari LN ga tiba2 lompat gap ke 1/6 ok

01:21:016 - 01:21:327 - map 1/2 nya biar ga lompat dari 1/1 ke 1/4 dari normal ke hyper ok

01:22:259 - 01:22:570 - sama ok

01:44:487 - ampe 01:44:798 - ilangin LN dan map 1/3 biar gap ga gitu gede ok

paling masalah gap di bbrp tempat ama butuhnya diff easy, abis itu udah hrsnya
aaa thank you so much maxus
btw diff easy made and need check, and maybe need round 2 of hitsounding check (or some mod that i applied) ... because im not rly good at it
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oh gitu easynya bikin sendiri :'<
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ini buat diff easynya

[Easy]
00:12:777 (12777|1) - LN nya agak membingungkan disini, coba pendekin jadi 1/1 di 00:13:088 - , trus disana tambah 1 note lagi di col 1

00:38:114 - wa tau jacknya mau disambungin strukturnya, tapi patterningnya jadi ampir sama ama 00:39:202 (39202|0,39513|1,39824|2) - , mending 00:38:114 (38114|1,38425|1,38736|2,39047|2) - di Ctrl+H

00:41:534 (41534|1,41689|0) - Bikin col 1 dan col 3 biar ga gitu berat di tangan kiri

01:05:316 (65316|1,65938|2,66560|3) - Flownya kalo LN nya mau dibikin arah kekanan jadi kurang pas disana, coba Ctrl+H 01:05:316 (65316|1,65938|2,66560|3) -

01:30:187 (90187|0,90498|1,90808|0,91119|1,91430|1,91430|0) - sepertinya jangan di diff easy kwwk, coba https://puu.sh/zf0m4/dd61853610.png

02:00:653 (120653|3) - pindah ke col 2 ja, biar jadi trill 3-2-3-2 dan sesuai dengan struktur di 02:01:275 (121275|1,121586|0,121897|1,122207|0) -

Udah solid kok easynya, abis apply ini, bisa wa lgsg bubble.
DoNotMess
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Maxus wrote:

ini buat diff easynya

[Easy]
00:12:777 (12777|1) - LN nya agak membingungkan disini, coba pendekin jadi 1/1 di 00:13:088 - , trus disana tambah 1 note lagi di col 1 ok

00:38:114 - wa tau jacknya mau disambungin strukturnya, tapi patterningnya jadi ampir sama ama 00:39:202 (39202|0,39513|1,39824|2) - , mending 00:38:114 (38114|1,38425|1,38736|2,39047|2) - di Ctrl+H lol gw disini layering suara hi hat udh siap dicyduk ama lu trnyata lolos owo ok

00:41:534 (41534|1,41689|0) - Bikin col 1 dan col 3 biar ga gitu berat di tangan kiri ok

01:05:316 (65316|1,65938|2,66560|3) - Flownya kalo LN nya mau dibikin arah kekanan jadi kurang pas disana, coba Ctrl+H 01:05:316 (65316|1,65938|2,66560|3) - ok

01:30:187 (90187|0,90498|1,90808|0,91119|1,91430|1,91430|0) - sepertinya jangan di diff easy kwwk, coba https://puu.sh/zf0m4/dd61853610.png ok

02:00:653 (120653|3) - pindah ke col 2 ja, biar jadi trill 3-2-3-2 dan sesuai dengan struktur di 02:01:275 (121275|1,121586|0,121897|1,122207|0) - ok

Udah solid kok easynya, abis apply ini, bisa wa lgsg bubble.
owo
get out from probational mode and get ur ass back here 8-)
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as requested, hitsound volume crusade pending edition

you're using soft sampleset for a rather energetic song, hence the hitnormals are not audible, just change the sampleset to normal and see the diffrence

there's also some severe lack of sample placements, for example from 00:05:627 - onwards you could put whistles on the main beat and just layer those whistles for the same beat

pattern suggestions since it didn't feel completely how it should be imo

00:19:928 - I think to make that it would be more fitting and way more interesting for this sort of trilly sound to have actual trills here, here's my suggestion:


00:42:000 - to avoid a pretty unnatural shield on 2nd column I suggest doing this, which still follows the pitch and flows a bit better:


01:00:446 - Missed a note here, not jacked with the next note since doesn't fit but it should be there, you could for example reverse columns of 01:00:187 (60187|3,60342|2) - and then put the 1/3 on 3rd column

I feel like the 1/3s in this section have a lot of impact and could be a small jumpjack section but that's up to you

01:05:005 (65005|3,65109|3,65213|3,65316|3) - this 4 note jack being the transition in to another LN section seems not good, I would personally switch LN patterns around so that 01:05:316 (65316|3) - would be on 3rd column, but I didn't play the map yet so your choice

01:09:669 - I see your intention here on making the hard hits more emphasized with SV and chords but are you 100% sure you want to completely ignore the synth burst you have here? It would be interesting imo (ofc without SV)

01:15:653 - a bunch of missed 1/4s in this section, featuring the highlighted timestamp, it's not good to miss them consistency wise imo

01:21:016 (81016|2,81171|2,81327|2,81482|2) - Two shields, easily mindblockable, suggesting something similar to the shield I mentioned before:


rest is fine by me
DoNotMess
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Kamikaze wrote:

as requested, hitsound volume crusade pending edition

you're using soft sampleset for a rather energetic song, hence the hitnormals are not audible, just change the sampleset to normal and see the diffrence will change

there's also some severe lack of sample placements, for example from 00:05:627 - onwards you could put whistles on the main beat and just layer those whistles for the same beat only clap sound (hence, snare) in the song, there is no kick here

pattern suggestions since it didn't feel completely how it should be imo

00:19:928 - I think to make that it would be more fitting and way more interesting for this sort of trilly sound to have actual trills here, here's my suggestion:
applied

00:42:000 - to avoid a pretty unnatural shield on 2nd column I suggest doing this, which still follows the pitch and flows a bit better:
re-arranged

01:00:446 - Missed a note here, not jacked with the next note since doesn't fit but it should be there, you could for example reverse columns of 01:00:187 (60187|3,60342|2) - and then put the 1/3 on 3rd column there is no melody there in the specified part

I feel like the 1/3s in this section have a lot of impact and could be a small jumpjack section but that's up to you will turn them into jumpjack then!!

01:05:005 (65005|3,65109|3,65213|3,65316|3) - this 4 note jack being the transition in to another LN section seems not good, I would personally switch LN patterns around so that 01:05:316 (65316|3) - would be on 3rd column, but I didn't play the map yet so your choice re-arranged

01:09:669 - I see your intention here on making the hard hits more emphasized with SV and chords but are you 100% sure you want to completely ignore the synth burst you have here? It would be interesting imo (ofc without SV) ok!

01:15:653 - a bunch of missed 1/4s in this section, featuring the highlighted timestamp, it's not good to miss them consistency wise imo rly want to emphasize the melody here instead of inaudible sounds

01:21:016 (81016|2,81171|2,81327|2,81482|2) - Two shields, easily mindblockable, suggesting something similar to the shield I mentioned before:
rre-arranged

rest is fine by me
thanks a lot!! also added some missing crash sound
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just a reminder, the way you romanise 夏越祭 is incorrect, Natsukoshi Matsuri => Nagoshisai.
Therefore, romanised title: Yamiyo no Nagoshisai ~for 2015 edition~
DoNotMess
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Fycho wrote:

just a reminder, the way you romanise 夏越祭 is incorrect, Natsukoshi Matsuri => Nagoshisai.
Therefore, romanised title: Yamiyo no Nagoshisai ~for 2015 edition~
fixed, thanks
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sorry for the late.
Seems alright, good luck.
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4K: 1|2|3|4


[General]
  1. Please check the storyboard hitsounds. It's kinda a mess.
[Easy]
  1. 00:28:321 - 00:28:943 - Might have single notes on these spots cuz the pitchs change there and the drums are kinda dense.
  2. 01:29:565 - C hitsound here should be changed to F. Apply to all diffs.
  3. 01:34:228 - 01:34:539 - Should you have F hitsounds applied to both because of the cymbals? If yes be sure to apply to all diffs.
  4. 01:34:850 (94850|2,94850|1) - Easy is double but Normal is single? I would suggest doing single in Easy but double in Normal.
  5. 01:43:244 - 01:43:865 - 01:44:487 - Also, double notes are not needed.
  6. 01:45:109 - Double note here works better because of the cymbal.
  7. 01:49:306 - Add W here.
  8. 02:03:140 (123140|2,123451|0) - Why spliting them apart? I think making them in one LN can mirror the pattern of 02:02:518 (122518|1,122518|0) -, which will be more clearly understood.
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:928 - Miss a F.
  2. 00:20:239 - According to higher diffs, hitsound here should be C.
  3. 01:13:244 - 01:13:865 - 01:14:176 - 01:14:487 - Miss F.
  4. 01:22:726 - Miss W.
  5. 01:24:591 - 01:24:746 - Miss W.
  6. 01:44:487 - Miss W.
  7. 01:54:746 - Double note here for the heavy vocal sound might fit better.
  8. 02:00:031 - Miss F.
[Hyper]
  1. 00:42:000 - Need a double for consistency.
  2. 00:51:327 - 00:53:814 - Double notes for consistency.
  3. 01:09:669 - 01:09:979 - Miss F.
  4. 02:03:140 - Change one W to F.
  5. 02:04:228 (124228|2,124306|1,124306|0,124384|3,124461|2,124461|1,124539|0) - Your double focus here is completely different with Another. Might wanna really follow Another's pattern of double notes since hitsounds are on them, which represent heavier effects.
[Another]
  1. 00:07:726 - Double here because of the same drum sound as those you put with doubles around.
  2. 00:11:534 - 00:12:777 - 00:14:021 - 00:16:508 - 00:17:751 - Add C.
  3. 01:14:954 - Miss W.

Good Work!
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all applied :3
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[General]
  1. From 00:05:627 - to 00:09:358 -, preferably just delete these drum-hitclap stuff because they are kinda deviating people from following the music in Easy and Normal. Maybe just remove them in all diffs and then remove the drum hitsounds from your file. It will make the hitsounds better.
  2. 00:57:855 - to 01:00:342 - ^
[Easy]
  1. 00:11:534 - 00:12:777 - 00:14:021 - 00:16:508 - 00:17:751 - Add C.
[Normal]
  1. 01:24:435 - Add F.
[Hyper]
  1. 00:51:948 (51948|3) - No melody sound here so don't need a LN.
  2. 01:13:865 - Might wanna rearrange a bit for more variation here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10445635
[Another]
  1. 01:59:409 (119409|2,119409|3,119487|0,119487|1,119565|0,119565|3) - Maybe still use this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10445672 since the first two sounds are actually with the same pitch.

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no kudos

add tag : KSM for easily search K-Shoot Mania, like a SDVX
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Rebubbled as requested from the creator.
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SpectorDG wrote:

no kudos

add tag : KSM for easily search K-Shoot Mania, like a SDVX
wow wat the tag is missing the day after i added it ~_~
added again
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12:45 DoNotMess: bro i added the tag for yamiyo
12:53 DoNotMess: ..
12:55 DoNotMess: 01:40:757 - i got lil change here
13:02 DoNotMess: 02:00:498 - and here also, cos not the same pitch ~_~
13:02 Tofu1222: will check a bit later. 
13:03 DoNotMess: (y)
13:17 Tofu1222: hi
13:17 DoNotMess: hi
13:18 Tofu1222: 00:20:549 - to 00:25:523 - and 00:30:498 - to 00:39:202 - in easy
13:18 Tofu1222: I am afraid ppl to mention gaps
13:18 Tofu1222: it's a bit huge with normal
13:19 Tofu1222: maybe you can change your focus of the hihats to melodies
13:20 Tofu1222: 00:50:394 - to 00:54:125 - ^
13:20 DoNotMess: can i add note for every kick from 00:20:549 -
13:20 DoNotMess: and um 30 lemme think
13:20 Tofu1222: you can just go for mapping melody
13:20 Tofu1222: and simplifying some
13:20 Tofu1222: that's best
13:21 DoNotMess: hm ok wait hang on there
13:21 Tofu1222: 01:10:290 - to 01:23:969 - besides this part can have more doubles for the kick?
13:21 Tofu1222: oh ok
13:22 Tofu1222: and also yes, you can add more doubles for places with F in easy
13:23 Tofu1222: F hitsound
13:25 DoNotMess: i dont rly like same interpretation with normal diff, but ive already done a lot doubles in easy
13:25 Tofu1222: ok
13:26 DoNotMess: lemme update first
13:26 DoNotMess: u check
13:27 DoNotMess: the double in easy is for rly strong emphasize like 01:45:109 - after the end of build up
13:27 DoNotMess: 01:54:435 - and yea this is exception, to make things harder in the end ~_~
13:29 Tofu1222: 01:12:777 - 01:13:399 - 01:14:021 - 01:14:332 - personally think doubles can be placed here
13:29 DoNotMess: alright
13:30 DoNotMess: but im gonna make it 12 34 based so it wont hurt easy player
13:30 DoNotMess: update again xd
13:31 Tofu1222: 01:15:886 - 01:16:508 -  01:17:130 - double?
13:31 Tofu1222: \01:19:617 - ^
13:31 Tofu1222: 01:23:969 - ^
13:31 Tofu1222: 01:25:834 - 01:26:456 - 01:27:078 - ^
13:32 DoNotMess: ok
13:32 Tofu1222: 00:31:741 (31741|1,32363|1) - besides such pattern might hurt beginners?
13:32 DoNotMess: should i move column or ..?
13:34 Tofu1222: well....
13:34 Tofu1222: it's not wrong to leave it like that if you wanna closely follow the pitch
13:35 DoNotMess: u know me well, im pitch guy
13:35 DoNotMess: lol xd
13:35 Tofu1222: yea then i think it's ok
13:36 Tofu1222: OK great
13:36 Tofu1222: ready?
13:36 Tofu1222: =w=
13:36 DoNotMess: wait
13:36 DoNotMess: 01:23:969 (83969|0,84902|3) -
13:36 DoNotMess: ~_~
13:37 DoNotMess: im so afraid with this tbh
13:37 Tofu1222: I use this often lol
13:37 Tofu1222: check my whiteout
13:37 DoNotMess: i change wait
13:37 Tofu1222: ok
13:37 DoNotMess: last update
13:37 DoNotMess: i dont like it and just realized it's there ~___~
13:38 DoNotMess: ok check it
13:39 Tofu1222: 01:43:244 - 01:43:865 - 01:45:731 - 01:46:353 - 01:46:974 - 01:53:814 - double?
13:39 Tofu1222: i am sorry ;w;
13:40 DoNotMess: no problem
13:40 DoNotMess: im shit with easy diff mapping anyway
13:40 DoNotMess: updating wait
13:40 DoNotMess: updated
13:41 Tofu1222: 01:44:176 - well, this doesnt need double lul
13:41 Tofu1222: 01:44:487 - but you can do this 
13:42 DoNotMess: 01:44:487 - here need?
13:42 DoNotMess: okok
13:42 DoNotMess: hmm fuck i just realized something...fuck
13:42 DoNotMess: something that might get my map stupidly nuclear
13:42 Tofu1222: wot???
13:42 DoNotMess: fucking w and f stacked so much
13:42 DoNotMess: in easier diff
13:42 DoNotMess: fuck
13:42 Tofu1222: oh
13:43 Tofu1222: i will wait you
13:43 DoNotMess: ok 3 mins
13:45 DoNotMess: normal now
13:46 DoNotMess: is it even a problem... lol
13:46 DoNotMess: maybe im overthinking ~_~
13:48 Tofu1222: it's ok
13:48 Tofu1222: fixing them is better
13:49 DoNotMess: should i fix hyper also lol
13:49 Tofu1222: just give it a check then
13:49 Tofu1222: i would prefer to fix them all
13:52 DoNotMess: ok done ~_~
13:52 DoNotMess: updated
14:00 DoNotMess: fuk im going sleep so tired hue
14:00 Tofu1222: oh
14:00 Tofu1222: nothing to change right
14:00 DoNotMess: have u checked the another?
14:01 DoNotMess: the ones i pointed where i changed
14:01 DoNotMess: someone will point out ending troll or something
14:02 Tofu1222: I am fine with the end. It's your preference whether to change or not lol
14:02 DoNotMess: if it's fine, then it's fine :')
14:03 Tofu1222: well, you mean 02:02:363 (122363|1,122363|0,122441|3,122518|2,122518|1,122596|3,122596|0,122674|2,122674|1,122751|0,122751|3,122829|1,122829|2,122907|3,122907|0,122985|2,122985|1,123062|0) - this thing
14:03 Tofu1222: right?
14:04 DoNotMess: 02:00:498 - this
14:04 DoNotMess: 02:00:498 (120498|2,120498|3,120575|0,120575|1,120653|2,120653|3,120731|1,120731|0,120808|3,120808|2) -
14:04 Tofu1222: it's fine
14:05 DoNotMess: aight it's ready then lol
14:05 Tofu1222: ye

Recheck log here.
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