Problem about source
[ Normal ]
[ Hyper ]
[ Another ]
sama seperti Hyper
XD mending di hapus aja Source nya
[ Normal ]
[ Hyper ]
[ Another ]
sama seperti Hyper
XD mending di hapus aja Source nya
DoNotMess wrote:
ah ok thanks famoss, f this map anyway
aaa thank you so much maxusMaxus wrote:
akhirnya wa baru balik lg..
btw ini wa pake download an bbrp hari lalu, jdi mngkin ada yang ga sesuai ama update an lu yg skrg
[General]
Bikin diff easynya dih baru rankable ini.. normalnya 2,15 lo.. yes maxus sama =w=
[Another]
00:29:254 - wa prefer klo lu jg map 1/4nya pake 1/4 LN si biar lebih seru ok
00:36:404 - wa lebih prefer begini si sebenernya http://puu.sh/zc2nP/10109a8aff.png , karena 00:36:404 - ama 00:36:715 - suaranya sama jadi dibuat trill cocok ok
00:38:658 - agak trlalu linear stairnya imo, Ctrl+H 00:38:814 (38814|2,38891|3) - biar mirror ama jumpstream sblmnya di 00:38:270 - okk
00:42:156 (42156|1,42311|1,42466|1,42622|1) - patternnya jadi kerasa awkward di tangan, mending pindah 00:42:622 (42622|1) - ke col 4 lebih ngeflow. ok
00:48:218 (48218|3) - pindah ke col 2 ja, mini trillnya agk awkward di tangan kanan, dan biar ngeline up sejajar juga stairnya ama 00:48:684 (48684|0,48840|1,48995|2) - ok
00:51:948 - agak awkward dibreak LN nya disini padahal masih ad suara synthnya re-arranged into something thoughtful
00:55:057 - suara crash ini, harusnya double ok
01:01:793 - ini suaranya sama ama 01:01:897 - , harusnya dijack jg, kyk http://puu.sh/zc2LA/1dba215285.png ok
01:09:669 - wa rada merasa janggal disini, wa tau ini ada SVnya, tapi mending map 1/4 LN dan apus SV disini soalnya synthnya dominan met disini, dan ga cocoknya karena lu dah pindah fokus ke synth di 01:09:150 (69150|2,69254|1,69358|0,69358|3,69565|2) - , terus tiba2 ga fokus lagi. aa sbnrnya ini fokus di kick yg knceng dri section sblmnya ama crash.. jdi tak ksih sv ;-; ama pindah fokus
01:18:062 - disini dibikin efek SV lebih cocok kok wlaupun ga ad sound effectnya secara langsung. hmm.. kurng cocok kalo diksh sv di pace yg kek gni ;-;
01:26:612 (86612|3) - pindah ke col 3 ini, triple jackny tak jelas untuk apa ok
01:29:254 (89254|1,89409|2) - ga cocok jadi trill disini pitchnya dah beda, mnding http://puu.sh/zc3bm/2be2c7deb7.png ok
01:42:156 - bagian ini rada ngambang tbh, coba kyk http://puu.sh/zc3oX/23294d5918.png biar krasa lebih berisi ok
01:49:150 - sama kyk 01:29:254 (89254|1,89409|2) - re-arranged
02:02:518 - menurut wa perubahan jumptrillnya hrs diekspresikan melalui suara cymbalnya, dan yang pitchnya lebih tinggi kyk 02:03:451 - dibikin LN , kayak http://puu.sh/zc3tw/e30bd6333a.png re-arranged
[Hyper]
00:03:140 - bikin 1/2 LN pattern disini ja biar orang lain ga gitu ribut soal gap ok
00:29:254 - mirip kyk another tp dimap pake stream biasa ja ok
00:33:917 - lupa tambah note kah disini? klo diliat dari cara layerny, jumlah note di another ama hyper di section ini sama, jadi ini juga harusnya tambah note. sbnrnya gr gr tkud trlalu dense tpi ok
00:40:601 (40601|3) - triple jack daerah sini agak membingungkan untuk apa, pindah ke col 3 ja ok
00:43:762 (43762|2,43814|1) - apa ini.. coba bandinging lg dah ama diff another AMPUN ASTAGA GK NOTICE ;'(
00:51:948 - sama kyk another ok
01:29:254 (89254|3) - pindah ke col 2 , alasannya mirip ama diff another. ok
01:49:150 - pindah ke col 3 alesannya sama kyk diatas.ok
02:02:518 - kayak another jg, coba bikin kyk http://puu.sh/zc3H1/e40b66b1f9.pngok
[Normal]
00:10:446 - dimap ja 1/2 nya, soalnya ini 1/4 synth section ok
00:39:513 - menurut wa bisa tambah LN lagi biar lebih keemphasis kyk http://puu.sh/zc3Qk/ff14bb9a2a.png re-arranged
00:44:798 - tambah 1 note buat konsistensi ama 00:44:176 - 00:45:109 - ini snare (clap) 00:44:798 - yg ini kick doang (whistle)
00:47:285 - agak kurang ngerti konsistensinya ama 00:44:176 - , ^
01:02:518 - 01:08:114 - 01:08:736 - map jadi 1/3 ja biar dari LN ga tiba2 lompat gap ke 1/6 ok
01:21:016 - 01:21:327 - map 1/2 nya biar ga lompat dari 1/1 ke 1/4 dari normal ke hyper ok
01:22:259 - 01:22:570 - sama ok
01:44:487 - ampe 01:44:798 - ilangin LN dan map 1/3 biar gap ga gitu gede ok
paling masalah gap di bbrp tempat ama butuhnya diff easy, abis itu udah hrsnya
owoMaxus wrote:
ini buat diff easynya
[Easy]
00:12:777 (12777|1) - LN nya agak membingungkan disini, coba pendekin jadi 1/1 di 00:13:088 - , trus disana tambah 1 note lagi di col 1 ok
00:38:114 - wa tau jacknya mau disambungin strukturnya, tapi patterningnya jadi ampir sama ama 00:39:202 (39202|0,39513|1,39824|2) - , mending 00:38:114 (38114|1,38425|1,38736|2,39047|2) - di Ctrl+H lol gw disini layering suara hi hat udh siap dicyduk ama lu trnyata lolos owo ok
00:41:534 (41534|1,41689|0) - Bikin col 1 dan col 3 biar ga gitu berat di tangan kiri ok
01:05:316 (65316|1,65938|2,66560|3) - Flownya kalo LN nya mau dibikin arah kekanan jadi kurang pas disana, coba Ctrl+H 01:05:316 (65316|1,65938|2,66560|3) - ok
01:30:187 (90187|0,90498|1,90808|0,91119|1,91430|1,91430|0) - sepertinya jangan di diff easy kwwk, coba https://puu.sh/zf0m4/dd61853610.png ok
02:00:653 (120653|3) - pindah ke col 2 ja, biar jadi trill 3-2-3-2 dan sesuai dengan struktur di 02:01:275 (121275|1,121586|0,121897|1,122207|0) - ok
Udah solid kok easynya, abis apply ini, bisa wa lgsg bubble.
thanks a lot!! also added some missing crash soundKamikaze wrote:
as requested, hitsound volume crusade pending edition
you're using soft sampleset for a rather energetic song, hence the hitnormals are not audible, just change the sampleset to normal and see the diffrence will change
there's also some severe lack of sample placements, for example from 00:05:627 - onwards you could put whistles on the main beat and just layer those whistles for the same beat only clap sound (hence, snare) in the song, there is no kick here
pattern suggestions since it didn't feel completely how it should be imo
00:19:928 - I think to make that it would be more fitting and way more interesting for this sort of trilly sound to have actual trills here, here's my suggestion:
applied
00:42:000 - to avoid a pretty unnatural shield on 2nd column I suggest doing this, which still follows the pitch and flows a bit better:
re-arranged
01:00:446 - Missed a note here, not jacked with the next note since doesn't fit but it should be there, you could for example reverse columns of 01:00:187 (60187|3,60342|2) - and then put the 1/3 on 3rd column there is no melody there in the specified part
I feel like the 1/3s in this section have a lot of impact and could be a small jumpjack section but that's up to you will turn them into jumpjack then!!
01:05:005 (65005|3,65109|3,65213|3,65316|3) - this 4 note jack being the transition in to another LN section seems not good, I would personally switch LN patterns around so that 01:05:316 (65316|3) - would be on 3rd column, but I didn't play the map yet so your choice re-arranged
01:09:669 - I see your intention here on making the hard hits more emphasized with SV and chords but are you 100% sure you want to completely ignore the synth burst you have here? It would be interesting imo (ofc without SV) ok!
01:15:653 - a bunch of missed 1/4s in this section, featuring the highlighted timestamp, it's not good to miss them consistency wise imo rly want to emphasize the melody here instead of inaudible sounds
01:21:016 (81016|2,81171|2,81327|2,81482|2) - Two shields, easily mindblockable, suggesting something similar to the shield I mentioned before:
rre-arranged
rest is fine by me
fixed, thanksFycho wrote:
just a reminder, the way you romanise 夏越祭 is incorrect, Natsukoshi Matsuri => Nagoshisai.
Therefore, romanised title: Yamiyo no Nagoshisai ~for 2015 edition~
wow wat the tag is missing the day after i added it ~_~SpectorDG wrote:
no kudos
add tag : KSM for easily search K-Shoot Mania, like a SDVX
12:45 DoNotMess: bro i added the tag for yamiyo
12:53 DoNotMess: ..
12:55 DoNotMess: 01:40:757 - i got lil change here
13:02 DoNotMess: 02:00:498 - and here also, cos not the same pitch ~_~
13:02 Tofu1222: will check a bit later.
13:03 DoNotMess: (y)
13:17 Tofu1222: hi
13:17 DoNotMess: hi
13:18 Tofu1222: 00:20:549 - to 00:25:523 - and 00:30:498 - to 00:39:202 - in easy
13:18 Tofu1222: I am afraid ppl to mention gaps
13:18 Tofu1222: it's a bit huge with normal
13:19 Tofu1222: maybe you can change your focus of the hihats to melodies
13:20 Tofu1222: 00:50:394 - to 00:54:125 - ^
13:20 DoNotMess: can i add note for every kick from 00:20:549 -
13:20 DoNotMess: and um 30 lemme think
13:20 Tofu1222: you can just go for mapping melody
13:20 Tofu1222: and simplifying some
13:20 Tofu1222: that's best
13:21 DoNotMess: hm ok wait hang on there
13:21 Tofu1222: 01:10:290 - to 01:23:969 - besides this part can have more doubles for the kick?
13:21 Tofu1222: oh ok
13:22 Tofu1222: and also yes, you can add more doubles for places with F in easy
13:23 Tofu1222: F hitsound
13:25 DoNotMess: i dont rly like same interpretation with normal diff, but ive already done a lot doubles in easy
13:25 Tofu1222: ok
13:26 DoNotMess: lemme update first
13:26 DoNotMess: u check
13:27 DoNotMess: the double in easy is for rly strong emphasize like 01:45:109 - after the end of build up
13:27 DoNotMess: 01:54:435 - and yea this is exception, to make things harder in the end ~_~
13:29 Tofu1222: 01:12:777 - 01:13:399 - 01:14:021 - 01:14:332 - personally think doubles can be placed here
13:29 DoNotMess: alright
13:30 DoNotMess: but im gonna make it 12 34 based so it wont hurt easy player
13:30 DoNotMess: update again xd
13:31 Tofu1222: 01:15:886 - 01:16:508 - 01:17:130 - double?
13:31 Tofu1222: \01:19:617 - ^
13:31 Tofu1222: 01:23:969 - ^
13:31 Tofu1222: 01:25:834 - 01:26:456 - 01:27:078 - ^
13:32 DoNotMess: ok
13:32 Tofu1222: 00:31:741 (31741|1,32363|1) - besides such pattern might hurt beginners?
13:32 DoNotMess: should i move column or ..?
13:34 Tofu1222: well....
13:34 Tofu1222: it's not wrong to leave it like that if you wanna closely follow the pitch
13:35 DoNotMess: u know me well, im pitch guy
13:35 DoNotMess: lol xd
13:35 Tofu1222: yea then i think it's ok
13:36 Tofu1222: OK great
13:36 Tofu1222: ready?
13:36 Tofu1222: =w=
13:36 DoNotMess: wait
13:36 DoNotMess: 01:23:969 (83969|0,84902|3) -
13:36 DoNotMess: ~_~
13:37 DoNotMess: im so afraid with this tbh
13:37 Tofu1222: I use this often lol
13:37 Tofu1222: check my whiteout
13:37 DoNotMess: i change wait
13:37 Tofu1222: ok
13:37 DoNotMess: last update
13:37 DoNotMess: i dont like it and just realized it's there ~___~
13:38 DoNotMess: ok check it
13:39 Tofu1222: 01:43:244 - 01:43:865 - 01:45:731 - 01:46:353 - 01:46:974 - 01:53:814 - double?
13:39 Tofu1222: i am sorry ;w;
13:40 DoNotMess: no problem
13:40 DoNotMess: im shit with easy diff mapping anyway
13:40 DoNotMess: updating wait
13:40 DoNotMess: updated
13:41 Tofu1222: 01:44:176 - well, this doesnt need double lul
13:41 Tofu1222: 01:44:487 - but you can do this
13:42 DoNotMess: 01:44:487 - here need?
13:42 DoNotMess: okok
13:42 DoNotMess: hmm fuck i just realized something...fuck
13:42 DoNotMess: something that might get my map stupidly nuclear
13:42 Tofu1222: wot???
13:42 DoNotMess: fucking w and f stacked so much
13:42 DoNotMess: in easier diff
13:42 DoNotMess: fuck
13:42 Tofu1222: oh
13:43 Tofu1222: i will wait you
13:43 DoNotMess: ok 3 mins
13:45 DoNotMess: normal now
13:46 DoNotMess: is it even a problem... lol
13:46 DoNotMess: maybe im overthinking ~_~
13:48 Tofu1222: it's ok
13:48 Tofu1222: fixing them is better
13:49 DoNotMess: should i fix hyper also lol
13:49 Tofu1222: just give it a check then
13:49 Tofu1222: i would prefer to fix them all
13:52 DoNotMess: ok done ~_~
13:52 DoNotMess: updated
14:00 DoNotMess: fuk im going sleep so tired hue
14:00 Tofu1222: oh
14:00 Tofu1222: nothing to change right
14:00 DoNotMess: have u checked the another?
14:01 DoNotMess: the ones i pointed where i changed
14:01 DoNotMess: someone will point out ending troll or something
14:02 Tofu1222: I am fine with the end. It's your preference whether to change or not lol
14:02 DoNotMess: if it's fine, then it's fine :')
14:03 Tofu1222: well, you mean 02:02:363 (122363|1,122363|0,122441|3,122518|2,122518|1,122596|3,122596|0,122674|2,122674|1,122751|0,122751|3,122829|1,122829|2,122907|3,122907|0,122985|2,122985|1,123062|0) - this thing
14:03 Tofu1222: right?
14:04 DoNotMess: 02:00:498 - this
14:04 DoNotMess: 02:00:498 (120498|2,120498|3,120575|0,120575|1,120653|2,120653|3,120731|1,120731|0,120808|3,120808|2) -
14:04 Tofu1222: it's fine
14:05 DoNotMess: aight it's ready then lol
14:05 Tofu1222: ye
lastDoNotMess wrote:
Round 2!!
Serem ni ajeeArzenvald wrote:
mau yg ke 3?
u might want to check this again after some mods i applied xdProtastic101 wrote:
Hi, sorry about the lateness, but I'd like to point out a few minor things plus a concern about the spread in the mid difficulties.
[Another]
00:38:114 (38114|1,38270|1,38425|1) - This three note stack is fine for the most part, but paired with 00:38:503 (38503|0,38658|0) - on the same hand, it gets a bit straining. I'd suggest putting the 1/2 stack on the right hand to avoid this like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514277 re-arranged
01:24:202 (84202|0,84202|2,84202|3) - Might consider putting the hand at 01:24:435 - where the crash is more sustained rather than having a quick cut off and only using a jump here. It also reduces the anchors a little like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514304 . On the 1/6, it also utilizes two 1/3 minijacks on both hands as well while also making the pattern a bit easier to group visually imo since they're trills. also re-arranged
[Hyper]
00:29:254 - Here, I think since the 1/8 stops and switches to a more technical rhythm, I think it'd be nice to represent the drop in density with a drop in density in the chart. A way to do this would be to ignore the synth and just map the snares, like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514328 applied
[Advanced]
Overall the pattern is fine, but the larger issue here I think is the spread from this difficulty to Hyper as you can see clearly at 01:30:187 -
A way to help bridge the gap a bit better would be to add some short two beat long 1/4 bursts like at 01:30:808 - to 01:31:430 - and 01:32:052 - to 01:32:674 - where the synth becomes a bit louder. The only issue this may create though is a spread gap that's too wide from the normal to advanced since normal uses a lot of single 1/2 bursts. also applied, dunno if it's ok tho..
Really cool chart otherwise. The LNs in the top diff are really fun to play (even if I fail on them most of the time lmao).
thanks for mod :3shionelove wrote:
i think for Hyper diff making 2chords in bursts(? idk what to say) single stream,except on cymbal sounds, is better solution.which part ;-;
some for Advanced:
01:44:591 (104591|2,104694|1) - these rhythm are not good,i know these sounds are 1/6 so you have to choose 1/3 to make easier tho.change LN is better. sounds good
01:49:850 (109850|1) - this causes weird rhythm because there is different sounds from 01:49:617 (109617|0,109694|2,109928|3) - ,no accented drums. sorry, applied
the part Protastic101 mentions as example of issueDoNotMess wrote:
shionelove wrote:
i think for Hyper diff making 2chords in bursts(? idk what to say) single stream,except on cymbal sounds, is better solution.which part ;-;
re-arranged like this to anchor the loud snareshionelove wrote:
]i think for Hyper diff making 2chords in bursts(? idk what to say) single stream,except on cymbal sounds, is better solution.which part ;-;
the part Protastic101 mentions as example of issue
:'( yaudah ini mumpung di pop cpet post :'(Arzenvald wrote:
gw gk ngepost apa apa yak :V