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Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT

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Erisan
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月16日 at 18:17:05

Artist: Hotaru Murasaki
Title: Re:TrymenT
Source: Re:LieF〜親愛なるあなたへ〜
Tags: rask レリーフ relief Shin'ainaru Anata e DeaR YoU retryment opening op short eroge game visual novel 甘利紗陽 amari saya piano homura- wring lecana litoluna cookiezi asahina momoko mokori kawaiwkyik rizia vellya alyce 5hiki
BPM: 190
Filesize: 30956kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alyce's Extra (5.65 stars, 347 notes)
  2. Cookiezi's Insane (5.23 stars, 367 notes)
  3. Easy (1.6 stars, 98 notes)
  4. hmr's Normal (2.32 stars, 193 notes)
  5. Lecana's Another (4.45 stars, 292 notes)
  6. Light Insane (4.01 stars, 288 notes)
  7. litoluna's Insane (4.88 stars, 340 notes)
  8. momoko's Expert (5.48 stars, 363 notes)
  9. Re:TraumenD (6 stars, 401 notes)
  10. vellya's Expert (5.39 stars, 410 notes)
  11. wkyik's Extra (5.53 stars, 369 notes)
  12. wring's Hard (3.21 stars, 266 notes)
Download: Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Karen
Lasse
My Angel Azusa
Xexxar
Koiyuki
Naxess
Garden
Mir
Garden
updated
Kisses
updated
Garden

GD Information
Homura-
wring
Lecana
litoluna
Cookiezi
vellya
Asahina Momoko
Rizia
Alyce
hitsounds → vellya
Last edited by Erisan , edited 312 times in total.
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Homura-
どね

https://puu.sh/rM7rB/7f8eddea8b.zip
_Meep_
1,707 posts
Joined April 2014
_Meep_
randomly passing by
ze mods by ze meep
DeaR YoU
00:23:832 (1,3) - Fix blanket https://gyazo.com/aa70d3afb97675012018e3951acb4239
00:40:095 (5) - Delete note
00:40:253 (1,2) - Fix Blanket?
00:41:516 (1,2) - Jump is a bit weird,try reconsidering,because the flow is a bit messed up there
00:44:201 (2,3,4,6) - Blanket properly? https://gyazo.com/c582c4d44723f643d681c26e97f8de47
00:44:990 (7,8,9) - Overmapped? I don't hear anything so much as a triple there
00:46:095 (7,2) - Overlap Sliderend of 7 with 2? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6351278
00:52:569 (6,1) - Consider placiing it closer together,because players dont know if there is a 1/4 gap
00:55:095 (8,9,10,1) - Overmapped?
01:07:727 (8,3) - Blanket?
01:12:464 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Consider making it the other direction? (Ctrl+H) Because the jump from 4-5 is going >> but then the player has to move << for the stream,a bit uncomfortable(imo)
01:16:095 (4,6) - Blanket? https://gyazo.com/c6b408293601f0d3e830442f1e97d9a1
01:16:727 (6,7,8,1) - A bit hard to see that it's a triple right after a slider,maybe a bit overmapped,Try making 6 a 1/2 slider?
01:19:095 (3) - Move to X384 Y232 to fix blanket
01:20:674 (1,2,4) - Fix Blanket https://gyazo.com/b6b42657f84ed079a7201b877b0623db
01:21:622 (3) - Try bringing closer and moving 01:21:937 (1) - ontop so that it collides with 01:21:937 (1) - perfectly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6351314
01:24:306 (6,1) - Fix blanket https://gyazo.com/a726bf0e534b01a33e91845fea640cf4
01:25:095 (3,1) - Fix Blanket? https://gyazo.com/dd52c338d6bd2b314fe2f1ed31b282f8
01:28:885 (2) - What does this play?

no kds if u want
the fite for rank lol https://osu.ppy.sh/s/518004
Gaia
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Gaia
sugoi keysounds ヽ(○´∀`)ﾉ♪
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Erisan

Gaia wrote:

sugoi keysounds ヽ(○´∀`)ﾉ♪
yaaa ヽ(○´∀`)ﾉ♪

thank you ヾ(｡>﹏<｡)ﾉﾞ
thzz
579 posts
Joined May 2012
thzz

Gaia wrote:

sugoi keysounds ヽ(○´∀`)ﾉ♪
thank you~~~ (๑>◡<๑)
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Erisan

_Meep_ wrote:

randomly passing by
ze mods by ze meep
DeaR YoU
00:23:832 (1,3) - Fix blanket https://gyazo.com/aa70d3afb97675012018e3951acb4239 [CHANGE]
00:40:095 (5) - Delete note [NO CHANGE]
00:40:253 (1,2) - Fix Blanket? [CHANGE]
00:41:516 (1,2) - Jump is a bit weird,try reconsidering,because the flow is a bit messed up there [CHANGE]
00:44:201 (2,3,4,6) - Blanket properly? https://gyazo.com/c582c4d44723f643d681c26e97f8de47 [CHANGE]
00:44:990 (7,8,9) - Overmapped? I don't hear anything so much as a triple there [NO CHANGE]
00:46:095 (7,2) - Overlap Sliderend of 7 with 2? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6351278 [NO CHANGE]
00:52:569 (6,1) - Consider placiing it closer together,because players dont know if there is a 1/4 gap [NO CHANGE]
00:55:095 (8,9,10,1) - Overmapped? [NO CHANGE]
01:07:727 (8,3) - Blanket? [NO CHANGE]
01:12:464 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Consider making it the other direction? (Ctrl+H) Because the jump from 4-5 is going >> but then the player has to move << for the stream,a bit uncomfortable(imo) [RETENTION]
01:16:095 (4,6) - Blanket? https://gyazo.com/c6b408293601f0d3e830442f1e97d9a1 [CHANGE]
01:16:727 (6,7,8,1) - A bit hard to see that it's a triple right after a slider,maybe a bit overmapped,Try making 6 a 1/2 slider? [NO CHANGE]
01:19:095 (3) - Move to X384 Y232 to fix blanket [CHANGE]
01:20:674 (1,2,4) - Fix Blanket https://gyazo.com/b6b42657f84ed079a7201b877b0623db [CHANGE]
01:21:622 (3) - Try bringing closer and moving 01:21:937 (1) - ontop so that it collides with 01:21:937 (1) - perfectly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6351314 [NO CHANGE]
01:24:306 (6,1) - Fix blanket https://gyazo.com/a726bf0e534b01a33e91845fea640cf4 [CHANGE]
01:25:095 (3,1) - Fix Blanket? https://gyazo.com/dd52c338d6bd2b314fe2f1ed31b282f8 [CHANGE]
01:28:885 (2) - What does this play? [CHANGE]

no kds if u want
the fite for rank lol https://osu.ppy.sh/s/518004
thank you for modding ;)
Pachiru
osu! Alumni
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Pachiru
did cookiezi will do a diff on it? really?
could be fun
Skystar
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Skystar
cookiezi my new favourite mapper
Ashton
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Ashton
still looking for a hard diff? I can make one if you want
Rizia
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Rizia
Hi
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Erisan

Skystar wrote:

cookiezi my new favourite mapper
great mapper w
Erisan
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Topic Starter
Erisan

Rizia wrote:

Hi
Hi ~ :3
-Atri-
3,049 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
Can i mod this already

I am learning Japanese anyway
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Erisan

KuranteMelodii wrote:

Can i mod this already

I am learning Japanese anyway
:O

全部の難易度が出来たらmodお願いします><
sahuang
2,294 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang

Skystar wrote:

cookiezi my new favourite mapper
sameee
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Homura-
hai

https://puu.sh/s0osG/8e1f856265.zip
Erisan
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Topic Starter
Erisan

Homura- wrote:

hai

https://puu.sh/s0osG/8e1f856265.zip
ありがとう！
Karen
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Joined August 2013
Karen
o.o
YoungsterMario
9 posts
Joined April 2016
YoungsterMario
何故この曲を選択したのか聞いて良いですか？
Last edited by YoungsterMario , edited 1 time in total.
Dear
8 posts
Joined March 2012
Dear
Good song and nice beatmap :)
batman98
30 posts
Joined February 2014
batman98
Beautifull Song , Beautifull Hit Sounds..... i'm crying :')
Mod
Easy:
01:33:297 (1) - delete and up the spiner

Dear Rue:

00:23:034 (2) - please fx this , an idea https://gyazo.com/1782bfdfa8ef6f5c3e670d9ab3b3a41f
01:02:823 (8,1) - plase fx this, so longer distance

Cookiezi's Insane:

00:04:876 (6) - NC
00:52:086 (6) - NC?
00:56:034 (7) - NC
00:56:034 (7,8,9,10,11) - lol stream fx this please
01:09:297 (7) - NC
01:18:060 (11) - NC

Good Luck :D
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Erisan

batman98 wrote:

Beautifull Song , Beautifull Hit Sounds..... i'm crying :')
Mod
Easy:
01:33:297 (1) - delete and up the spiner　NO CHANGE

Dear Rue:

00:23:034 (2) - please fx this , an idea https://gyazo.com/1782bfdfa8ef6f5c3e670d9ab3b3a41f　NO CHANGE
01:02:823 (8,1) - plase fx this, so longer distance　NO CHANGE

Cookiezi's Insane:

00:04:876 (6) - NC　CHANGE
00:52:086 (6) - NC?　CHANGE
00:56:034 (7) - NC　CHANGE
00:56:034 (7,8,9,10,11) - lol stream fx this please　NO CHANGE
01:09:297 (7) - NC　CHANGE
01:18:060 (11) - NC　10 add NC

Good Luck :D
thank you for modding ;)
Rizia
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Joined January 2012
Rizia
done!
https://puu.sh/s1S3b/437d350a49.zip
hope you like it
Erisan
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Topic Starter
Erisan

Rizia wrote:

done!
https://puu.sh/s1S3b/437d350a49.zip
hope you like it
wow!

thank you rizia (∩´∀`∩)
Nakano Itsuki
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Nakano Itsuki
o.o
Sentences
16 posts
Joined June 2016
Sentences
Re:TraumenD

01:03:771 (7,8,9) - I see no reason to space these as all the triples before it are stacked
01:11:350 (4,5,6) - ^ although i can see as to why you would spaced these
01:30:771 (1) - Maybe end this on the redtick instead of the blue due to not much indication of this being only a 1/4th gap

Wkyik's Extra

00:32:350 (5,6) - I'd swap 5 and 6 for reading purposes
00:42:455 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe something similar to 00:44:981 (4,5,6,7) -
01:00:928 (3,4,5) - Stack?
01:17:665 (1,2,3,1) - make the last one be apart of the combo
01:18:455 (2) - Nc

Cookiezi's Insane

00:08:665 (5,6,7) - I'd either space these equal or stack them due to it being a whole beat space
00:49:086 (5) - Maybe a triple instead?
00:54:455 (4,5,6) - Stack bec the one before this did
01:12:139 (2,3,4) - S-s-stack
01:12:771 (7,8,9) - Maybe add another circle after this triple or change the position of 01:13:086 (1) -
01:15:455 (6,7,1) - def stack bec this part isnt as intense as the next few triples are
01:30:771 (1) - maybe end on redtick bec not to obvious that its a 1/4th gap
Lol cookiezi map

Litoluna's Insane

00:31:086 (2) - maybe lower this slider a bit for the more noticeable 1/4th gap
Looked great to me nothing else i saw

Insane

01:12:455 (3) - you could get away with this being a 4 burst into the other kick slider


Im getting tired bec its getting late , im sorry i didnt mod the full spread.
This is my first mod tho so i might be wrong in a lot of these so sorry if i wasted your time.
Great map wish the best for it!
Erisan
375 posts
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Topic Starter
Erisan

Short_Sentences wrote:

Re:TraumenD

01:03:771 (7,8,9) - I see no reason to space these as all the triples before it are stacked　CHANGE
01:11:350 (4,5,6) - ^ although i can see as to why you would spaced these　CHANGE
01:30:771 (1) - Maybe end this on the redtick instead of the blue due to not much indication of this being only a 1/4th gap　現状でも別に問題ないと思うのでNO CHANGE

Insane

01:12:455 (3) - you could get away with this being a 4 burst into the other kick slider　簡単なInsane目的で作っているので必要ありません、NO CHANGE


Im getting tired bec its getting late , im sorry i didnt mod the full spread.
This is my first mod tho so i might be wrong in a lot of these so sorry if i wasted your time.
Great map wish the best for it!
thank you for modding ~ ;)
Last edited by Erisan , edited 1 time in total.
Enon
Beatmap Nominator
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Enon
OK dad
-Atri-
3,049 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
As promised

わたしの日本語が下手なのでごめんなさい。まだ勉強中です

[General]
  1. ???????? :?
  3. Please add those into tags:
    "Shin'ainaru Anata e" - Romaji of the game name
    "Kawaiwkyik" - Rizia's old username

[しげとら]
  2. 00:07:086 (1,2) - NCを取り替え
  3. 00:09:928 (2,3) - ここcopy and pasteがいいよ
    :::
  4. 00:12:139 (1,5) - NCを取り替え
  5. 00:14:113 (2) - なにも聞いてないのでovermapした
  6. 00:14:665 (5,6,7) - ^
  7. 00:17:350 (8,1) - blanket
  8. 00:17:507 (1) - ここのスタートでfinish
  9. 00:19:481 (7) - おばーまっぷ～
  10. 00:20:034 (1,4) - Finish
  11. 00:21:297 (7) - NC
  12. 00:23:823 (5) - 00:23:902 - はovermap
  13. 00:25:007 (10) - おばーまっぷ～
  14. 00:32:981 (2,3,4) - ^
  15. 00:35:350 (2) - ^ , 00:36:455 (7,1) - Swap NC
  16. 00:36:534 (8) - ^
  17. 00:38:981 (5) - NC
  18. 00:41:428 (5) - overmap
  19. 00:41:507 (6,1) - NCを取り替え
  20. 00:45:297 (4) - Finish & NC
  21. 00:45:376 (5) - overmap
  22. 00:46:007 (9) - ^
  23. 00:47:823 (1) - スタートでfinish
  24. 00:47:823 (1,2) - Blanket
  25. 00:49:086 (5) - overmap (1/2 slider) & NC
  26. 00:49:718 (1) - remove NC
  27. 00:49:797 (2,5) - overmap??? Although it maps the music transition perfectly....
  28. 00:51:613 (5,1) - Swap NC
  29. 00:53:271 (4) - remove note
  30. 00:54:534 (5) - ^
  31. 00:55:086 (1,2) - NC
  32. 00:55:481 (3) - remove
  33. 00:56:113 (2,4) - remove? IDK
  34. 00:56:507 (6) - もっと綺麗にできるよ～ さらにNC
    :::
  35. 00:57:928 (2) - スタートでFinish, さらにNC
  36. 01:00:771 (3) - 1/2 slider
  37. 01:05:507 (1,5) - finish
  38. 01:06:771 (1) - finish
  39. 01:08:034 (1) - スタートでFinish
  40. 01:09:297 (1) - Finish
  41. 01:11:507 (3) - NC for consistancy of 01:10:560 (1,2,1,2) -
  42. 01:13:086 (1) - ここが強い音があるので、個人的にもっと飛ばしてもいいと思います、さらにFinish
  43. 01:17:981 (1,3) - Swap NC
  44. 01:18:613 (4,5) - ぶらんけっと～
  45. I know I wanted to mod this mapset in Japanese (Except for Rizia, He don't speak Japanese wwww) , But i wanted to speak this in English so i can understand what i am saying for now (My Japanese skills is bad lol)
    I don't want to be too harsh, but i'll point out some main problems in this diff
    In calm parts, the rhythm is pretty random and strange
    While 00:26:350 (5) - and 00:26:981 (7) - is acceptable since both slider head and end shares the equal strangth on vocals, on the latter part, 00:28:244 (3,4) - is trying to map the vocals, but strangely 00:28:876 (5,6,7,8) - is more like mapping the drums at the background, and i have no idea what 00:30:771 (6) - is mapping
  46. The random triplets is also one of the serious issues in this diff, too. such as 00:32:981 (2,3,4) - ,00:36:455 (7,8,9) - , Although it makes kinda sense since it sound more mapping those music transitions, it kinda sounds too much for me... IDK, Maybe since you're an old mapper, i may forgive you since you maybe still applying 2013 rhythm styles, so i'll let you to desire....
  47. As for the NCs...... It's kinda inconsistent... Usually it NCs for every big white ticks (or downbeats) , or maybe 2 in calmer parts (or easier diffs) , Sometimes there might have some complecated NC methods such as 01:10:560 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - , which empasizes the sound every 2 notes (if you apply NC on 01:11:507 (3) - , but i think you might not for the square pattern)
  48. The Hitsounds.... I am no hitsounding master, but it's below the standards, there's so many missing finish on strong notes or snares, And there's even no Clap thoughout the entire map, I recommend you to add clap on 2nd and 4th white ticks, or maybe copy the hitsounds from eLy's diff, that was awesome
  49. But don't be sad that i have said so many bad things on this map, Everyone struggles this kind of mods, even myself on my old maps, try to get few more mods and learn some basics, then someday you might be the next skystar in the osu mapping community
    GG top right corner

[柚子]
  1. 00:57:613 (1,2) - 呢度用兩個單打就得了，嗰啲聲都唔算係幾重
  2. 01:33:218 (3) - 兩個單打嚟做三連，然後嚮最嬲尾加NC，而家咁樣將slider尾壓住重音唔係幾好
    :::
    Pro la,不如你教我點樣飛我啲圖

[DeaR YoU]
  2. 00:11:192 (5) - ここでNC
  3. 00:11:192 (5,6) - ここcopy and pasteがいいぞ
  4. 00:17:507 (1) - ここが強い音があるので、個人的にもっと飛ばしてもいいと思います、 x:447 y:216 と x:446 y:155 がどう？
  5. 00:20:665 (5,6,7,8) - ここのflowsがなんかおかしい。。。特別に4-5が近い過ぎると思う
    :::
  6. 00:20:665 (5) - NC?
  7. 00:35:192 (5,1) - Swap NC
  8. 00:39:928 (4,5) - ここのボーカルを強調すると思いますので1/2スライダー
  9. 00:55:560 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Nazi、ここはシンメトリーぱパターンができると思う。
    :::

    00:55:402 (1) - x:300 y:212
    00:55:718 (3) - x:426 y:102
    00:55:876 (4,5,6) - x:256 y:288
    00:56:507 (9) - x:212 y:212
  10. 01:32:034 (2) - 重なりすぎる
    :::

If possible, Please tell me which problem i have in my Japanese skills :D

ぐっとらっく～
thzz
579 posts
Joined May 2012
thzz
i'm in the process of putting hitsound on some dif.
(Easy,Insane,Cookiezi's Insane,litoluna's Insane,Re:TraumenD )

then, eLy and Cookiezi and litoluna, plz wait to apply mods at a moment.
this work will be finished in this weekend

……って書きましたけどこれ日本語で良かったですね
ともあれ、updateのトラブルが発生するとお互いに困ってしまうと思うので、あと１日２日ご協力お願いします～
-Atri-
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Joined March 2013
-Atri-
So that's explains the reason of hitsound is kinda unfinished, i get it

Again, Still sorry if i hurt anyone's feelings
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Erisan

KuranteMelodii wrote:

As promised

わたしの日本語が下手なのでごめんなさい。まだ勉強中です

[General]
  1. ???????? :?
  3. Please add those into tags:
    "Shin'ainaru Anata e" - Romaji of the game name
    "Kawaiwkyik" - Rizia's old username
全て改善しました。ありがとうございます。

[DeaR YoU]

  1. change
  2. 00:11:192 (5) - ここでNC
    change
  3. 00:11:192 (5,6) - ここcopy and pasteがいいぞ
    分かりにくいですがRe:LieFのロゴに合わせている''つもり''なので保留
  4. 00:17:507 (1) - ここが強い音があるので、個人的にもっと飛ばしてもいいと思います、 x:447 y:216 と x:446 y:155 がどう？
    change
  5. 00:20:665 (5,6,7,8) - ここのflowsがなんかおかしい。。。特別に4-5が近い過ぎると思う
    :::
    配置は違いますが変えました
  6. 00:20:665 (5) - NC?
    change
  7. 00:35:192 (5,1) - Swap NC
    change
  8. 00:39:928 (4,5) - ここのボーカルを強調すると思いますので1/2スライダー
    change
  9. 00:55:560 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Nazi、ここはシンメトリーぱパターンができると思う。
    :::

    00:55:402 (1) - x:300 y:212
    00:55:718 (3) - x:426 y:102
    00:55:876 (4,5,6) - x:256 y:288
    00:56:507 (9) - x:212 y:212
    とてもいい案ですが少し保留にさせてください、少し考えてみます。Nice modです！
  10. 01:32:034 (2) - 重なりすぎる
    :::
    ここも保留で。

If possible, Please tell me which problem i have in my Japanese skills :D

ぐっとらっく～

態々日本語でのmodありがとうございました ;) ！
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined June 2012
Satellite
wringさん wrong lol 00:17:507 (1) -
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Erisan

KuranteMelodii wrote:

As promised

わたしの日本語が下手なのでごめんなさい。まだ勉強中です

[しげとら]
  2. 00:07:086 (1,2) - NCを取り替え
  3. 00:09:928 (2,3) - ここcopy and pasteがいいよ
    :::
  4. 00:12:139 (1,5) - NCを取り替え
  5. 00:14:113 (2) - なにも聞いてないのでovermapした
  6. 00:14:665 (5,6,7) - ^
  7. 00:17:350 (8,1) - blanket
  8. 00:17:507 (1) - ここのスタートでfinish
  9. 00:19:481 (7) - おばーまっぷ～
  10. 00:20:034 (1,4) - Finish
  11. 00:21:297 (7) - NC
  12. 00:23:823 (5) - 00:23:902 - はovermap
  13. 00:25:007 (10) - おばーまっぷ～
  14. 00:32:981 (2,3,4) - ^
  15. 00:35:350 (2) - ^ , 00:36:455 (7,1) - Swap NC
  16. 00:36:534 (8) - ^
  17. 00:38:981 (5) - NC
  18. 00:41:428 (5) - overmap
  19. 00:41:507 (6,1) - NCを取り替え
  20. 00:45:297 (4) - Finish & NC
  21. 00:45:376 (5) - overmap
  22. 00:46:007 (9) - ^
  23. 00:47:823 (1) - スタートでfinish
  24. 00:47:823 (1,2) - Blanket
  25. 00:49:086 (5) - overmap (1/2 slider) & NC
  26. 00:49:718 (1) - remove NC
  27. 00:49:797 (2,5) - overmap??? Although it maps the music transition perfectly....
  28. 00:51:613 (5,1) - Swap NC
  29. 00:53:271 (4) - remove note
  30. 00:54:534 (5) - ^
  31. 00:55:086 (1,2) - NC
  32. 00:55:481 (3) - remove
  33. 00:56:113 (2,4) - remove? IDK
  34. 00:56:507 (6) - もっと綺麗にできるよ～ さらにNC
    :::
  35. 00:57:928 (2) - スタートでFinish, さらにNC
  36. 01:00:771 (3) - 1/2 slider
  37. 01:05:507 (1,5) - finish
  38. 01:06:771 (1) - finish
  39. 01:08:034 (1) - スタートでFinish
  40. 01:09:297 (1) - Finish
  41. 01:11:507 (3) - NC for consistancy of 01:10:560 (1,2,1,2) -
  42. 01:13:086 (1) - ここが強い音があるので、個人的にもっと飛ばしてもいいと思います、さらにFinish
  43. 01:17:981 (1,3) - Swap NC
  44. 01:18:613 (4,5) - ぶらんけっと～
  45. I know I wanted to mod this mapset in Japanese (Except for Rizia, He don't speak Japanese wwww) , But i wanted to speak this in English so i can understand what i am saying for now (My Japanese skills is bad lol)
    I don't want to be too harsh, but i'll point out some main problems in this diff
    In calm parts, the rhythm is pretty random and strange
    While 00:26:350 (5) - and 00:26:981 (7) - is acceptable since both slider head and end shares the equal strangth on vocals, on the latter part, 00:28:244 (3,4) - is trying to map the vocals, but strangely 00:28:876 (5,6,7,8) - is more like mapping the drums at the background, and i have no idea what 00:30:771 (6) - is mapping
  46. The random triplets is also one of the serious issues in this diff, too. such as 00:32:981 (2,3,4) - ,00:36:455 (7,8,9) - , Although it makes kinda sense since it sound more mapping those music transitions, it kinda sounds too much for me... IDK, Maybe since you're an old mapper, i may forgive you since you maybe still applying 2013 rhythm styles, so i'll let you to desire....
  47. As for the NCs...... It's kinda inconsistent... Usually it NCs for every big white ticks (or downbeats) , or maybe 2 in calmer parts (or easier diffs) , Sometimes there might have some complecated NC methods such as 01:10:560 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - , which empasizes the sound every 2 notes (if you apply NC on 01:11:507 (3) - , but i think you might not for the square pattern)
  48. The Hitsounds.... I am no hitsounding master, but it's below the standards, there's so many missing finish on strong notes or snares, And there's even no Clap thoughout the entire map, I recommend you to add clap on 2nd and 4th white ticks, or maybe copy the hitsounds from eLy's diff, that was awesome
  49. But don't be sad that i have said so many bad things on this map, Everyone struggles this kind of mods, even myself on my old maps, try to get few more mods and learn some basics, then someday you might be the next skystar in the osu mapping community
    GG top right corner

If possible, Please tell me which problem i have in my Japanese skills :D

ぐっとらっく～
3連打は全てno change NCは全て変更しました。
Last edited by Erisan , edited 1 time in total.
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

Short_Sentences wrote:

Wkyik's Extra

00:32:350 (5,6) - I'd swap 5 and 6 for reading purposes i did like to move away 00:31:876 (3) - from 00:31:402 (1) - , but 4,5,6 i will use a similar way to keep it
00:42:455 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe something similar to 00:44:981 (4,5,6,7) - keep because imo its not fit here
01:00:928 (3,4,5) - Stack? i want this triple can make a smooth flow for 01:00:771 (2) - to 01:01:244 (6,7) -
01:17:665 (1,2,3,1) - make the last one be apart of the combo cant understandxd
01:18:455 (2) - Nc keep, it hard to affect reading

KuranteMelodii wrote:

[柚子]
  1. 00:57:613 (1,2) - 呢度用兩個單打就得了，嗰啲聲都唔算係幾重 但係剩係1/2會有D單調
  2. 01:33:218 (3) - 兩個單打嚟做三連，然後嚮最嬲尾加NC，而家咁樣將slider尾壓住重音唔係幾好 可以
    :::
    Pro la,不如你教我點樣飛我啲圖 有機會既話
thx for mod!

place better jump
osu file format v14

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260,140,50034,1,8,0:3:0:0:
180,280,50192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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60,52,50823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,50981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,128,51297,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,36,51455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,56,61876,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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284,356,70402,1,2,2:0:0:0:
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348,200,77823,2,0,L|340:252,1,45
232,376,77981,2,0,L|225:331,1,45
120,252,78139,5,4,0:0:0:0:
348,352,78455,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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336,124,87297,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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304,368,90139,2,0,P|312:332|312:288,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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365,176,91244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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marcuddles
450 posts
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marcuddles
yo eLy, are you still open for GDs? I'd like to map insane or extra c:
YoungsterMario
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Joined April 2016
YoungsterMario
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Mod
Easy
  1. 00:04:876 (1) - の後　00:05:823 -　にサークルを一つ追加したら良く流れると思います。
  2. 00:40:244 (1) - と00:39:613 (3) -　を入れ替えたら良く流れると思います。
  3. 01:25:718 (1) - を01:24:455 (2) - から01:26:981 (2) - へまっすぐ行くスライダーにした方が良いと思います。
hmr's Normal
  1. 00:15:455 (2,3,4) - を少し下向きにして　00:15:455 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - を少しだけ広げた方が読みやすいです。
  2. 00:43:876 (4,5) - の間と00:44:981 (7,1) - の間を1.00xにしたらどうですか。
  3. 01:16:402 (3) - PrevとNextを両方1.00xˆ

wring's Hard
  1. 00:04:876 (1,2) - と00:05:034 (2,3) - の間のスペースを等しくしてください。
  2. 00:27:613 (1,2,1) - 急なスピード／勢い低落？
  3. 01:05:507 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - 飛び過ぎ？
  4. 01:07:402 (2) と　01:12:455 (3) - - Missing beat after?
Insane
  1. 00:08:665 (1,1,1,1) - 新しいコンボを毎回始める必要無いと思います。
  2. 00:59:192 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 連続でジャンプしすぎ。
  3. 01:21:928 (1,1,1,1) - ここも。
litoluna's Insane
  1. 00:07:086 (1) - 新しいコンボを始める必要ありますか？
  2. 00:20:034 (1,2,3,4) - 全て2.3xにした方がいいと思います
  3. 00:20:665 (1,2,3,4) - ここは1.79x
  4. 00:28:876 (4) - Maybe add a beat after this

Cookiezi's Insane
  1. 00:19:244 (6) - ここで新しいコンボ。
  2. 00:54:455 (4,5,6) - Don't need to blanket; other triplets in this section of the song aren't blakets
wkyik's Extra
  1. 00:16:086 (1,2,3) - 一直線に並べた方が良いと思います。

ReTraumenD

  • 00:08:665 (1,1,1) - 毎回新しいコンボを始める必要ないと思います。
    01:13:086 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - 四に一回コンボを始めたら良いと思います。
    01:27:139 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Not sure if best spacing idea
    01:30:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - これとても良いと思います。とても面白い！(ˆ_ˆ)


あとがき
今回でModは二回目です。（こんなに時間かかると思わなかったXD）
これが役に立てばいいです。
もし僕の言ったことに対して意味が分から無かったら指摘して下さい。(僕の旗はカナダですが日本人なので日本語でお願いします)

Will prob edit later

Sorry this didn't really help. I'll try to become a better modder.
Last edited by YoungsterMario , edited 3 times in total.
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
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Erisan

YoungsterMario wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:04:876 (1) - の後　00:05:823 -　にサークルを一つ追加したら良く流れると思います。　サークルは必要ないと感じました no change
  2. 00:40:244 (1) - と00:39:613 (3) -　を入れ替えたら良く流れると思います。 入れ替えた方が流れ悪くなりませんか？ no change
  3. 01:25:718 (1) - を01:24:455 (2) - から01:26:981 (2) - へまっすぐ行くスライダーにした方が良いと思います。 このままで。何故良いのかが分かりませんでした。
Insane
  1. 00:08:665 (1,1,1,1) - 新しいコンボを毎回始める必要無いと思います。　入れてはいけない明確な理由も無さそうですのでno change
  2. 00:59:192 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 連続でジャンプしすぎ。 連続でジャンプの意味が全く分からないのでno change
  3. 01:21:928 (1,1,1,1) - ここも。 上記同様明確な理由も無さそうですのでno change
ReTraumenD

  • 00:08:665 (1,1,1) - 毎回新しいコンボを始める必要ないと思います。 Insane記載同様。no change
    01:13:086 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - 四に一回コンボを始めたら良いと思います。 2の方がいいと思います。4ですと見にくくなる印象を受けました。4にする理由もないのでno change
    01:27:139 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Not sure if best spacing idea 特に問題もないと思うのでno change
    01:30:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - これとても良いと思います。とても面白い！(ˆ_ˆ) ありがとうございます。
thank you for modding !
Last edited by Erisan , edited 1 time in total.
litoluna
1,074 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna

YoungsterMario wrote:

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litoluna's Insane
00:07:086 (1) - 新しいコンボを始める必要ありますか？
->nc挟んではいけない理由もなさそうなのでnochange
00:20:034 (1,2,3,4) - 全て2.3xにした方がいいと思います
->確かにそうですが0.01ぐらいなら影響ないのでこのままで
00:20:665 (1,2,3,4) - ここは1.79x
->同上
00:28:876 (4) - Maybe add a beat after this
->voに合わせてるからいらないかなって。
Will prob edit later

Short_Sentences wrote:

Litoluna's Insane

00:31:086 (2) - maybe lower this slider a bit for the more noticeable 1/4th gap
->little changed

Looked great to me nothing else i saw
thanks modding :D

thzzさんへ
個人的に00:31:560 - にnoteがあると打ちにくかったので元に戻しました。

http://puu.sh/s9qPM.zip
Len
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Len
take litolunas stars
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Homura-

YoungsterMario wrote:

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hmr's Normal
  1. 00:15:455 (2,3,4) - を少し下向きにして　00:15:455 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - を少しだけ広げた方が読みやすいです。
  2. 00:43:876 (4,5) - の間と00:44:981 (7,1) - の間を1.00xにしたらどうですか。
  3. 01:16:402 (3) - PrevとNextを両方1.00xˆ
Will prob edit later

:arrow: sorry, all no change
thank you for mod
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
hmr's Normal
00:31:402 (4,5,6,7) - 静かな曲調に対してちょっと複雑すぎる気がした、00:31:402 (4) - これを1/1sliderとかにしたらEasy作った人は喜びそう
00:33:455 (3) - これ始点が、00:32:981 (2) - こっちの音で終点が、00:33:928 (4) - こっちの音？だからcircle + circleのほうがよくね？ってなる
01:13:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ご存知の通りこれをするとEasyとのdiff spreadで通らないと思います。区切りましょう、01:14:034 (4,8) - この2個をcircleに変える簡単なお仕事です
01:20:507 - add noteしたい
01:23:192 (1) - repeatけしたほうがよくね？

wring's Hard
AR7か7.5でいいんじゃ？
00:07:086 (3,1,2) - 前後ds通りなのにここだけ違うの気になる
00:17:507 (1) - offscreen
01:05:507 (1,2) - 音取り逆じゃね？

Insane
00:51:297 (4,5) - 01:26:823 (2,3) - 挑戦的
01:00:139 (4) - 1/2 sliderとcircleにしたほうがいい

litoluna's Insane
00:26:665 (1) - remove ncしないときつい
00:27:771 (1,1) - 00:47:665 (1,1) - ncなに？

Re:TraumenD
01:01:718 (1,1) - ここのncの入れ方はこのましくない
01:09:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここの流れだけきになったので参考程度に http://puu.sh/sgFFV/ec63ba9961.jpg
01:15:297 (3) - ncほしくない？

overall
tagが全diff統一しないといけないからaimodでチェックしてみて
oszが31mbだから30mb以内に収めれるなら収めたほうがいい。。。
normal-hitwhistle11.wavって使ってますか？
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Just Miracle-
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Please enter this map, it is beautiful :) :D
Erisan
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Erisan
Insane
00:51:297 (4,5) - 01:26:823 (2,3) - 挑戦的　直し忘れ！change
01:00:139 (4) - 1/2 sliderとcircleにしたほうがいい　change
mod ありまとぉ～ :D
Homura-
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Satellite wrote:

hmr's Normal
00:33:455 (3) - これ始点が、00:32:981 (2) - こっちの音で終点が、00:33:928 (4) - こっちの音？だからcircle + circleのほうがよくね？ってなる
:arrow: 別に
01:20:507 - add noteしたい
:arrow: これで
01:23:192 (1) - repeatけしたほうがよくね？
:arrow: いい
書いてないとこは直しました　modありです

http://puu.sh/sess0.rar
litoluna
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litoluna
@Satte
NC pattern変えました。
mod thxxxxxxxxxxxxx:x:;x;
http://puu.sh/sfej3.zip

Fast wwwwwwww
Erisan
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Topic Starter
Erisan
Re:TraumenD
01:01:718 (1,1) - ここのncの入れ方はこのましくない　変なところに入ってた・・・　change
01:09:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここの流れだけきになったので参考程度に http://puu.sh/sgFFV/ec63ba9961.jpg　ちょっと他の案もあったけどひとまず採用で。また変えるかも　change
01:15:297 (3) - ncほしくない？　change

overall
tagが全diff統一しないといけないからaimodでチェックしてみて　hmr's normal の tag 揃えました change
oszが31mbだから30mb以内に収めれるなら収めたほうがいい。。。　画像の画質を落とすか不要なmp3再確認します。
normal-hitwhistle11.wavって使ってますか？　確認中
mod ありがとう ;)
thzz
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thzz
overall
normal-hitwhistle11.wavって使ってますか？
eLyさんRe:TraumenDの01:12:455 - 、Additions:Normalにしといてください！
normal-hitwhistle11はそこです :)



ついでにtagに私の名前入れてくれるとめっちゃ嬉しいです
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Add 'retryment' to tag pls
can't search this one with 're:tryment', I always search 'cookiezi's insane'. rip


[Cookiezi's insane]
00:11:469 (5) - 고조되는 부분인 만큼, 뉴콤을 넣어줄 수 있지 않을까 생각합니다.
00:21:574 (1) - suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644451
00:30:258 (3) - 2쪽에 붙여서 4의 보컬을 강조해주거나, 4쪽 가까이에 붙여서 현재 의도되는 효과를 부각시키거나 해줄 수 있지 않을까 생각합니다. 아니면 아예 스페이싱을 일정하게 맞춰주는 쪽이 시각적으로 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:33:258 (2,3,4) - 개인적으로 고조되지 않은 부분에서 이런 1/4사용은 좀 아쉽다고 생각합니다. 음이 확실한 것도 아니고..맵 전반적으로 불필요한 1/4이 가장 걱정됩니다.
00:41:942 (2,3,4,5) - 스페이싱을 좀 늘려서 강조해보려는 의도가 보였던 것 같은데 앞쪽과 스페이싱을 좀더 차이나게 해주면 좋지 싶습니다.
01:15:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 분명한 강조가 필요한 부분인데, 스페이싱이 미적지근하네요.

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