yaaa ヽ(○´∀`)ノ♪Gaia wrote:
sugoi keysounds ヽ(○´∀`)ノ♪
thank you ヾ(。>﹏<。)ノ゙
yaaa ヽ(○´∀`)ノ♪Gaia wrote:
sugoi keysounds ヽ(○´∀`)ノ♪
thank you for modding_Meep_ wrote:
randomly passing byze mods by ze meepDeaR YoU
00:23:832 (1,3) - Fix blanket https://gyazo.com/aa70d3afb97675012018e3951acb4239 [CHANGE]
00:40:095 (5) - Delete note [NO CHANGE]
00:40:253 (1,2) - Fix Blanket? [CHANGE]
00:41:516 (1,2) - Jump is a bit weird,try reconsidering,because the flow is a bit messed up there [CHANGE]
00:44:201 (2,3,4,6) - Blanket properly? https://gyazo.com/c582c4d44723f643d681c26e97f8de47 [CHANGE]
00:44:990 (7,8,9) - Overmapped? I don't hear anything so much as a triple there [NO CHANGE]
00:46:095 (7,2) - Overlap Sliderend of 7 with 2? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6351278 [NO CHANGE]
00:52:569 (6,1) - Consider placiing it closer together,because players dont know if there is a 1/4 gap [NO CHANGE]
00:55:095 (8,9,10,1) - Overmapped? [NO CHANGE]
01:07:727 (8,3) - Blanket? [NO CHANGE]
01:12:464 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Consider making it the other direction? (Ctrl+H) Because the jump from 4-5 is going >> but then the player has to move << for the stream,a bit uncomfortable(imo) [RETENTION]
01:16:095 (4,6) - Blanket? https://gyazo.com/c6b408293601f0d3e830442f1e97d9a1 [CHANGE]
01:16:727 (6,7,8,1) - A bit hard to see that it's a triple right after a slider,maybe a bit overmapped,Try making 6 a 1/2 slider? [NO CHANGE]
01:19:095 (3) - Move to X384 Y232 to fix blanket [CHANGE]
01:20:674 (1,2,4) - Fix Blanket https://gyazo.com/b6b42657f84ed079a7201b877b0623db [CHANGE]
01:21:622 (3) - Try bringing closer and moving 01:21:937 (1) - ontop so that it collides with 01:21:937 (1) - perfectly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6351314 [NO CHANGE]
01:24:306 (6,1) - Fix blanket https://gyazo.com/a726bf0e534b01a33e91845fea640cf4 [CHANGE]
01:25:095 (3,1) - Fix Blanket? https://gyazo.com/dd52c338d6bd2b314fe2f1ed31b282f8 [CHANGE]
01:28:885 (2) - What does this play? [CHANGE]
no kds if u want
the fite for rank lol https://osu.ppy.sh/s/518004
great mapper wSkystar wrote:
cookiezi my new favourite mapper
:OKuranteMelodii wrote:
Can i mod this already
I am learning Japanese anyway
sameeeSkystar wrote:
cookiezi my new favourite mapper
ありがとう!Homura- wrote:
hai
https://puu.sh/s0osG/8e1f856265.zip
thank you for moddingbatman98 wrote:
Beautifull Song , Beautifull Hit Sounds..... i'm crying :')ModEasy:
01:33:297 (1) - delete and up the spiner NO CHANGE
Dear Rue:
00:23:034 (2) - please fx this , an idea https://gyazo.com/1782bfdfa8ef6f5c3e670d9ab3b3a41f NO CHANGE
01:02:823 (8,1) - plase fx this, so longer distance NO CHANGE
Cookiezi's Insane:
00:04:876 (6) - NC CHANGE
00:52:086 (6) - NC? CHANGE
00:56:034 (7) - NC CHANGE
00:56:034 (7,8,9,10,11) - lol stream fx this please NO CHANGE
01:09:297 (7) - NC CHANGE
01:18:060 (11) - NC 10 add NC
Good Luck
thank you for modding ~Short_Sentences wrote:
Re:TraumenD
01:03:771 (7,8,9) - I see no reason to space these as all the triples before it are stacked CHANGE
01:11:350 (4,5,6) - ^ although i can see as to why you would spaced these CHANGE
01:30:771 (1) - Maybe end this on the redtick instead of the blue due to not much indication of this being only a 1/4th gap 現状でも別に問題ないと思うのでNO CHANGE
Insane
01:12:455 (3) - you could get away with this being a 4 burst into the other kick slider 簡単なInsane目的で作っているので必要ありません、NO CHANGE
Im getting tired bec its getting late , im sorry i didnt mod the full spread.
This is my first mod tho so i might be wrong in a lot of these so sorry if i wasted your time.
Great map wish the best for it!
KuranteMelodii wrote:
As promised
わたしの日本語が下手なのでごめんなさい。まだ勉強中です[General]全て改善しました。ありがとうございます。
- ????????
- Please add those into tags:
"Shin'ainaru Anata e" - Romaji of the game name
"Kawaiwkyik" - Rizia's old username[DeaR YoU]
change- 00:11:192 (5) - ここでNC
change- 00:11:192 (5,6) - ここcopy and pasteがいいぞ
分かりにくいですがRe:LieFのロゴに合わせている''つもり''なので保留- 00:17:507 (1) - ここが強い音があるので、個人的にもっと飛ばしてもいいと思います、 x:447 y:216 と x:446 y:155 がどう?
change- 00:20:665 (5,6,7,8) - ここのflowsがなんかおかしい。。。特別に4-5が近い過ぎると思う
配置は違いますが変えました- 00:20:665 (5) - NC?
change- 00:35:192 (5,1) - Swap NC
change- 00:39:928 (4,5) - ここのボーカルを強調すると思いますので1/2スライダー
change- 00:55:560 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Nazi、ここはシンメトリーぱパターンができると思う。
:::とてもいい案ですが少し保留にさせてください、少し考えてみます。Nice modです!
00:55:402 (1) - x:300 y:212
00:55:718 (3) - x:426 y:102
00:55:876 (4,5,6) - x:256 y:288
00:56:507 (9) - x:212 y:212- 01:32:034 (2) - 重なりすぎる
ここも保留で。
If possible, Please tell me which problem i have in my Japanese skills
ぐっとらっく~
3連打は全てno change NCは全て変更しました。KuranteMelodii wrote:
As promised
わたしの日本語が下手なのでごめんなさい。まだ勉強中です[しげとら]
- 00:07:086 (1,2) - NCを取り替え
- 00:09:928 (2,3) - ここcopy and pasteがいいよ
- 00:12:139 (1,5) - NCを取り替え
- 00:14:113 (2) - なにも聞いてないのでovermapした
- 00:14:665 (5,6,7) - ^
- 00:17:350 (8,1) - blanket
- 00:17:507 (1) - ここのスタートでfinish
- 00:19:481 (7) - おばーまっぷ~
- 00:20:034 (1,4) - Finish
- 00:21:297 (7) - NC
- 00:23:823 (5) - 00:23:902 - はovermap
- 00:25:007 (10) - おばーまっぷ~
- 00:32:981 (2,3,4) - ^
- 00:35:350 (2) - ^ , 00:36:455 (7,1) - Swap NC
- 00:36:534 (8) - ^
- 00:38:981 (5) - NC
- 00:41:428 (5) - overmap
- 00:41:507 (6,1) - NCを取り替え
- 00:45:297 (4) - Finish & NC
- 00:45:376 (5) - overmap
- 00:46:007 (9) - ^
- 00:47:823 (1) - スタートでfinish
- 00:47:823 (1,2) - Blanket
- 00:49:086 (5) - overmap (1/2 slider) & NC
- 00:49:718 (1) - remove NC
- 00:49:797 (2,5) - overmap??? Although it maps the music transition perfectly....
- 00:51:613 (5,1) - Swap NC
- 00:53:271 (4) - remove note
- 00:54:534 (5) - ^
- 00:55:086 (1,2) - NC
- 00:55:481 (3) - remove
- 00:56:113 (2,4) - remove? IDK
- 00:56:507 (6) - もっと綺麗にできるよ~ さらにNC
- 00:57:928 (2) - スタートでFinish, さらにNC
- 01:00:771 (3) - 1/2 slider
- 01:05:507 (1,5) - finish
- 01:06:771 (1) - finish
- 01:08:034 (1) - スタートでFinish
- 01:09:297 (1) - Finish
- 01:11:507 (3) - NC for consistancy of 01:10:560 (1,2,1,2) -
- 01:13:086 (1) - ここが強い音があるので、個人的にもっと飛ばしてもいいと思います、さらにFinish
- 01:17:981 (1,3) - Swap NC
- 01:18:613 (4,5) - ぶらんけっと~
- I know I wanted to mod this mapset in Japanese (Except for Rizia, He don't speak Japanese wwww) , But i wanted to speak this in English so i can understand what i am saying for now (My Japanese skills is bad lol)
I don't want to be too harsh, but i'll point out some main problems in this diff
In calm parts, the rhythm is pretty random and strange
While 00:26:350 (5) - and 00:26:981 (7) - is acceptable since both slider head and end shares the equal strangth on vocals, on the latter part, 00:28:244 (3,4) - is trying to map the vocals, but strangely 00:28:876 (5,6,7,8) - is more like mapping the drums at the background, and i have no idea what 00:30:771 (6) - is mapping- The random triplets is also one of the serious issues in this diff, too. such as 00:32:981 (2,3,4) - ,00:36:455 (7,8,9) - , Although it makes kinda sense since it sound more mapping those music transitions, it kinda sounds too much for me... IDK, Maybe since you're an old mapper, i may forgive you since you maybe still applying 2013 rhythm styles, so i'll let you to desire....
- As for the NCs...... It's kinda inconsistent... Usually it NCs for every big white ticks (or downbeats) , or maybe 2 in calmer parts (or easier diffs) , Sometimes there might have some complecated NC methods such as 01:10:560 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - , which empasizes the sound every 2 notes (if you apply NC on 01:11:507 (3) - , but i think you might not for the square pattern)
- The Hitsounds.... I am no hitsounding master, but it's below the standards, there's so many missing finish on strong notes or snares, And there's even no Clap thoughout the entire map, I recommend you to add clap on 2nd and 4th white ticks, or maybe copy the hitsounds from eLy's diff, that was awesome
- But don't be sad that i have said so many bad things on this map, Everyone struggles this kind of mods, even myself on my old maps, try to get few more mods and learn some basics, then someday you might be the next skystar in the osu mapping community
GG top right corner
If possible, Please tell me which problem i have in my Japanese skills
ぐっとらっく~
Short_Sentences wrote:
Wkyik's Extra
00:32:350 (5,6) - I'd swap 5 and 6 for reading purposes i did like to move away 00:31:876 (3) - from 00:31:402 (1) - , but 4,5,6 i will use a similar way to keep it
00:42:455 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe something similar to 00:44:981 (4,5,6,7) - keep because imo its not fit here
01:00:928 (3,4,5) - Stack? i want this triple can make a smooth flow for 01:00:771 (2) - to 01:01:244 (6,7) -
01:17:665 (1,2,3,1) - make the last one be apart of the combo cant understandxd
01:18:455 (2) - Nc keep, it hard to affect reading
thx for mod!KuranteMelodii wrote:
[柚子]
- 00:57:613 (1,2) - 呢度用兩個單打就得了,嗰啲聲都唔算係幾重 但係剩係1/2會有D單調
- 01:33:218 (3) - 兩個單打嚟做三連,然後嚮最嬲尾加NC,而家咁樣將slider尾壓住重音唔係幾好 可以
Pro la,不如你教我點樣飛我啲圖 有機會既話
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YoungsterMario wrote:
EasyInsane
- 00:04:876 (1) - の後 00:05:823 - にサークルを一つ追加したら良く流れると思います。 サークルは必要ないと感じました no change
- 00:40:244 (1) - と00:39:613 (3) - を入れ替えたら良く流れると思います。 入れ替えた方が流れ悪くなりませんか? no change
- 01:25:718 (1) - を01:24:455 (2) - から01:26:981 (2) - へまっすぐ行くスライダーにした方が良いと思います。 このままで。何故良いのかが分かりませんでした。
ReTraumenD
- 00:08:665 (1,1,1,1) - 新しいコンボを毎回始める必要無いと思います。 入れてはいけない明確な理由も無さそうですのでno change
- 00:59:192 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 連続でジャンプしすぎ。 連続でジャンプの意味が全く分からないのでno change
- 01:21:928 (1,1,1,1) - ここも。 上記同様明確な理由も無さそうですのでno change
00:08:665 (1,1,1) - 毎回新しいコンボを始める必要ないと思います。 Insane記載同様。no change
01:13:086 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - 四に一回コンボを始めたら良いと思います。 2の方がいいと思います。4ですと見にくくなる印象を受けました。4にする理由もないのでno change
01:27:139 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Not sure if best spacing idea 特に問題もないと思うのでno change
01:30:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - これとても良いと思います。とても面白い!(ˆ_ˆ) ありがとうございます。
YoungsterMario wrote:
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litoluna's Insane
00:07:086 (1) - 新しいコンボを始める必要ありますか?
->nc挟んではいけない理由もなさそうなのでnochange
00:20:034 (1,2,3,4) - 全て2.3xにした方がいいと思います
->確かにそうですが0.01ぐらいなら影響ないのでこのままで
00:20:665 (1,2,3,4) - ここは1.79x
->同上
00:28:876 (4) - Maybe add a beat after this
->voに合わせてるからいらないかなって。
Will prob edit later
thanks moddingShort_Sentences wrote:
Litoluna's Insane
00:31:086 (2) - maybe lower this slider a bit for the more noticeable 1/4th gap
->little changed
Looked great to me nothing else i saw
thank you for modYoungsterMario wrote:
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hmr's NormalWill prob edit later
- 00:15:455 (2,3,4) - を少し下向きにして 00:15:455 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - を少しだけ広げた方が読みやすいです。
- 00:43:876 (4,5) - の間と00:44:981 (7,1) - の間を1.00xにしたらどうですか。
- 01:16:402 (3) - PrevとNextを両方1.00xˆ
sorry, all no change