1. Collab (5 stars, 652 notes)
2. Dis (4.69 stars, 506 notes)
3. Easy (1.47 stars, 188 notes)
4. Normal (3.57 stars, 279 notes)
5. Taiko Oni (4.67 stars, 498 notes)

kanpakyin wrote:

O_O/

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loveFantasy wrote:

你好

[General]
- nothing wrong

[Easy]
- cool, just delete the last green line

[Normal]
<00:54:360..> (2,3) 感覺怪怪的, 改在00:54:860下一個1又1/2拍的repeat slider?
<01:16:360> (1,2) 雖然說是Normal沒錯, 但我覺得照節奏擺完全不會有難度問題:

我是圖片

<01:21:693> (3) 下clap就好
<01:36:693> (1) 建議折成repeat slider, 在vocal上才有東西打
<02:09:026..> 這段偷用複製貼上! 因為後面有slider spinner, 所以這裡的建議是(2,3)都下finish
<02:22:026> new combo? (這段KIAI combo都比較長?)
<02:30:026> new combo改下這裡, <02:31:693>拔, <02:32:693>再下

[Dis]
<00:53:693> (4) 沒疊好
<00:54:860> 挺詭異的, 其實這裡就能停了, <00:55:360>用circle吧
<01:20:026> 下note
<01:38:693> (2,3,1,2) 略嫌難讀
<02:05:850> (5) 沒疊好, 拔掉再重下 (或手動移到x:33 y:176)
<03:08:026> (3) 拉彎一點

我看完[Dis]就知道[Collab]我大概不用mod了, 一開果然是FC不能的等級..所以只Quick check一次

[Collab]
<01:36:693> (1) x:184 y:144

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

Easy
00:53:860 (1) - 延长到00:56:026 - ？Ok.
01:14:026 (2) - off grid太多，不过改不改无所谓

Normal
01:10:360 - 加个note Ok.
01:15:360 - 从这里开始一个slider到01:16:026 - 结束 Ok.
02:01:026 - 加note
02:34:026 (3) - repeat slider减少一次重复，在02:35:026 -用个note
03:22:026 (5) - 换成2个slider,像03:24:693 (1,2) - 这样

Dis
00:48:693 (1,2) - repeat slider？
00:59:360 (2) - 延长到白线 Ok.
01:47:693 (1,2,3,4) - 我会把红线也加上note，如果你觉得这样太难就在这里用slider修改下，这里和01:49:860 (1,2,3,4,1) - 的vocal是不同的，现在这个样子觉得空
02:39:693 (1,2,3,4) - 本身没什么，只是觉得12和34摆放都是一样的话会更好看一些、 Ok.


Collab
00:20:026 (3,4) - 把3变成一个repeat slider 4的结尾白线位置变成一个note更好一些，或者像这样02:38:026 (3,4,1) - ，同样音效的都是slider或note
00:24:693 (5) - off gird有些多，不过改不改都可以
00:26:693 (3,1,2) - 我熟悉这个歌曲，所以没有什么问题这里，不过对于第一次玩的人来说，ds的减小也许会造成一定困难
00:31:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我会考虑从第一个note开始就加大ds,或者把1放到前一个beat下面 Ok.
00:30:693 (3) - off gird有些多，不过改不改都可以
01:12:193 (1,2,3,1) - 本身没什么问题，但是我更希望看到01:11:360 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的摆放
01:48:193 (3,4,5) - 这个三连对我来说看起来更像随机的，没有什么规律可循，周围都没有三连，音效也感觉不出需要，也许把4去掉更好？ Ok.
03:27:193 (10,1) - 变成一个slider更好一些，和后面节奏也比较配

banvi wrote:

just my suggestion~

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:56:693 (1) add finish at the beginning? Fixed~
01:39:360 (5) remove whistle & add finish at the beginning? Fixed~
03:15:360 (1) add finish at the beginning? Fixed~
03:26:026 (3) add finish? Fixed~
03:33:693 (1) add finish? Fixed~

[Dis]
00:18:860 (2) add whistle? Fixed~
00:20:526 (7) add whistle at the middle? Fixed~
00:22:026 (1) remove whistle & add finish Fixed~
02:08:360 (1,2,3,4) hmm , this rhythm don't fit for me... I suggest this. Yeah i think so.

SPOILER

[attachment=0:df742]de9438977df512c4f534005dda8aa76e.png[/attachment:df742]

02:51:193 (1) add finish at the beginning? Fixed~
03:01:860 (4) add finish? Fixed~
03:34:026 (1) remove whistle Fixed~

[Collab]
OD +1?
01:53:193 (4) new combo? Fixed~
02:00:693 (5) new combo? Fixed~

very nice!!
I love your map~ >.</★

rEdo wrote:

[Collab]
1:59:693 (2,3,4) - ...just what is this. o_o please, rearrange that part without those useless 1/4s @.@

rEdo wrote:

[Normal]
0:02:027 (1) - add a finish at its beginning Fixed
2:40:860 (1) - i'd start it 1/2 earlier Fixed
2:59:360 (1) - move it 1/2 earlier, so it starts and ends at the sweet parts Fixed
3:04:693 (1) - finish at it's beginning? Fixed
3:33:693 (1) - start it 1/2 later Fixed


[Dis]
0:50:693 (1) - unnecessary new combo Fixed
1:47:193 (5) - shorten this slider to 1:47:360? Fixed
2:40:860 (1) - silence its end Fixed
3:04:693 - 3:15:360 - that part sounds kinda null...yeah, i know it's a slowdown, but i'd suggest hitsounding it. for the best effects, use ~60% volume section Fixed
3:33:693 (1,2) - unnecessary new combo Fixed

[Collab]
0:43:193 (8) - add finish? Fixed
0:43:610 (x) - add a note?
0:51:276 (1) - this spinner starts artifically soon, start it at least 1/2 after the last note Fixed
0:53:943 (1) - ^ Fixed
1:49:943 (1) - ^ Fixed
1:59:693 (2,3,4) - ...just what is this. o_o please, rearrange that part without those useless 1/4s @.@
2:20:693 (7) - new combo? Fixed
2:29:943 (1) - this spinner starts artifically soon Fixed
2:34:860 (1,4) - swap new combos Fixed
3:04:193 (1,2) - swap new combos Fixed
3:04:693 (x) - why won't you start kiai at this point, and than later add a fountain at 3:08:693? looks a lot better for me Fixed
3:07:360 (7) - new combo Fixed
3:08:693 (1) - delete new combo Fixed
3:40:443 (1,2) - maybe delete this, and add a three-note burst?
3:43:443 (1) - this spinner starts artifically soon Fixed

1. 前移一下offset: 693
2. break期间的姓名板隐藏掉吧- - 看起来怪怪的
3. 按collab统一一下KIAI

1. 00:55:860 (4) - new combo
2. 01:05:693 (T) - add note
3. 02:03:026 (5) - new combo
4. 02:16:193 (5,1) - 交换new combo
5. 02:32:360 (5) - new combo
6. 03:01:943 ~ 03:03:026 (T) - spinner
7. 03:04:193 (5) - new combo
8. 03:10:360 (T) - KIAI这里开始?
9. 03:24:943 (4) - new combo

1. 检查下姓名板 有的地方是空白

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 前移一下offset: 693 Fixed
2. break期间的姓名板隐藏掉吧- - 看起来怪怪的
3. 按collab统一一下KIAI

[Collab]:

1. 00:55:860 (4) - new combo Fixed
2. 01:05:693 (T) - add note Fixed
3. 02:03:026 (5) - new combo Fixed
4. 02:16:193 (5,1) - 交换new combo Fixed
5. 02:32:360 (5) - new combo Fixed
6. 03:01:943 ~ 03:03:026 (T) - spinner Fixed
7. 03:04:193 (5) - new combo Fixed
8. 03:10:360 (T) - KIAI这里开始? Fixed
9. 03:24:943 (4) - new combo Fixed

[Normal]:

1. 检查下姓名板 有的地方是空白

star~

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osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

01:47:694 (2) - Unsnapped.
01:48:694 (3) - ^
01:49:694 (5) - ^

All fixed
[Dis]

00:42:860 (1) - 1/2 before or just remove this circle and extend the spinner.
00:44:026 (1,2) - I totally don't like this.
02:13:860 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:14:026 (2) - New combo.
02:29:360 (5) - ^
02:29:526 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:24:360 (5,1,2,3) - What?! Ok , change

All fixed
[Collab]

01:59:693 (2,3,4) - I don't like how this sounds.
02:15:860 (4) - Stack it correctly under (1).
02:19:693 (2) - ^ under (10).

All fixed