kanpakyin wrote:

O_O/

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loveFantasy wrote:

你好

[General]
- nothing wrong

[Easy]
- cool, just delete the last green line

[Normal]
<00:54:360..> (2,3) 感覺怪怪的, 改在00:54:860下一個1又1/2拍的repeat slider?
<01:16:360> (1,2) 雖然說是Normal沒錯, 但我覺得照節奏擺完全不會有難度問題:

我是圖片

<01:21:693> (3) 下clap就好
<01:36:693> (1) 建議折成repeat slider, 在vocal上才有東西打
<02:09:026..> 這段偷用複製貼上! 因為後面有slider spinner, 所以這裡的建議是(2,3)都下finish
<02:22:026> new combo? (這段KIAI combo都比較長?)
<02:30:026> new combo改下這裡, <02:31:693>拔, <02:32:693>再下

[Dis]
<00:53:693> (4) 沒疊好
<00:54:860> 挺詭異的, 其實這裡就能停了, <00:55:360>用circle吧
<01:20:026> 下note
<01:38:693> (2,3,1,2) 略嫌難讀
<02:05:850> (5) 沒疊好, 拔掉再重下 (或手動移到x:33 y:176)
<03:08:026> (3) 拉彎一點

我看完[Dis]就知道[Collab]我大概不用mod了, 一開果然是FC不能的等級..所以只Quick check一次

[Collab]
<01:36:693> (1) x:184 y:144

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

Easy
00:53:860 (1) - 延长到00:56:026 - ？Ok.
01:14:026 (2) - off grid太多，不过改不改无所谓

Normal
01:10:360 - 加个note Ok.
01:15:360 - 从这里开始一个slider到01:16:026 - 结束 Ok.
02:01:026 - 加note
02:34:026 (3) - repeat slider减少一次重复，在02:35:026 -用个note
03:22:026 (5) - 换成2个slider,像03:24:693 (1,2) - 这样

Dis
00:48:693 (1,2) - repeat slider？
00:59:360 (2) - 延长到白线 Ok.
01:47:693 (1,2,3,4) - 我会把红线也加上note，如果你觉得这样太难就在这里用slider修改下，这里和01:49:860 (1,2,3,4,1) - 的vocal是不同的，现在这个样子觉得空
02:39:693 (1,2,3,4) - 本身没什么，只是觉得12和34摆放都是一样的话会更好看一些、 Ok.


Collab
00:20:026 (3,4) - 把3变成一个repeat slider 4的结尾白线位置变成一个note更好一些，或者像这样02:38:026 (3,4,1) - ，同样音效的都是slider或note
00:24:693 (5) - off gird有些多，不过改不改都可以
00:26:693 (3,1,2) - 我熟悉这个歌曲，所以没有什么问题这里，不过对于第一次玩的人来说，ds的减小也许会造成一定困难
00:31:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我会考虑从第一个note开始就加大ds,或者把1放到前一个beat下面 Ok.
00:30:693 (3) - off gird有些多，不过改不改都可以
01:12:193 (1,2,3,1) - 本身没什么问题，但是我更希望看到01:11:360 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的摆放
01:48:193 (3,4,5) - 这个三连对我来说看起来更像随机的，没有什么规律可循，周围都没有三连，音效也感觉不出需要，也许把4去掉更好？ Ok.
03:27:193 (10,1) - 变成一个slider更好一些，和后面节奏也比较配

banvi wrote:

just my suggestion~

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:56:693 (1) add finish at the beginning? Fixed~
01:39:360 (5) remove whistle & add finish at the beginning? Fixed~
03:15:360 (1) add finish at the beginning? Fixed~
03:26:026 (3) add finish? Fixed~
03:33:693 (1) add finish? Fixed~

[Dis]
00:18:860 (2) add whistle? Fixed~
00:20:526 (7) add whistle at the middle? Fixed~
00:22:026 (1) remove whistle & add finish Fixed~
02:08:360 (1,2,3,4) hmm , this rhythm don't fit for me... I suggest this. Yeah i think so.

SPOILER

[attachment=0:df742]de9438977df512c4f534005dda8aa76e.png[/attachment:df742]

02:51:193 (1) add finish at the beginning? Fixed~
03:01:860 (4) add finish? Fixed~
03:34:026 (1) remove whistle Fixed~

[Collab]
OD +1?
01:53:193 (4) new combo? Fixed~
02:00:693 (5) new combo? Fixed~

very nice!!
I love your map~ >.</★

rEdo wrote:

[Collab]
1:59:693 (2,3,4) - ...just what is this. o_o please, rearrange that part without those useless 1/4s @.@

rEdo wrote:

[Normal]
0:02:027 (1) - add a finish at its beginning Fixed
2:40:860 (1) - i'd start it 1/2 earlier Fixed
2:59:360 (1) - move it 1/2 earlier, so it starts and ends at the sweet parts Fixed
3:04:693 (1) - finish at it's beginning? Fixed
3:33:693 (1) - start it 1/2 later Fixed


[Dis]
0:50:693 (1) - unnecessary new combo Fixed
1:47:193 (5) - shorten this slider to 1:47:360? Fixed
2:40:860 (1) - silence its end Fixed
3:04:693 - 3:15:360 - that part sounds kinda null...yeah, i know it's a slowdown, but i'd suggest hitsounding it. for the best effects, use ~60% volume section Fixed
3:33:693 (1,2) - unnecessary new combo Fixed

[Collab]
0:43:193 (8) - add finish? Fixed
0:43:610 (x) - add a note?
0:51:276 (1) - this spinner starts artifically soon, start it at least 1/2 after the last note Fixed
0:53:943 (1) - ^ Fixed
1:49:943 (1) - ^ Fixed
1:59:693 (2,3,4) - ...just what is this. o_o please, rearrange that part without those useless 1/4s @.@
2:20:693 (7) - new combo? Fixed
2:29:943 (1) - this spinner starts artifically soon Fixed
2:34:860 (1,4) - swap new combos Fixed
3:04:193 (1,2) - swap new combos Fixed
3:04:693 (x) - why won't you start kiai at this point, and than later add a fountain at 3:08:693? looks a lot better for me Fixed
3:07:360 (7) - new combo Fixed
3:08:693 (1) - delete new combo Fixed
3:40:443 (1,2) - maybe delete this, and add a three-note burst?
3:43:443 (1) - this spinner starts artifically soon Fixed

1. 前移一下offset: 693
2. break期间的姓名板隐藏掉吧- - 看起来怪怪的
3. 按collab统一一下KIAI

1. 00:55:860 (4) - new combo
2. 01:05:693 (T) - add note
3. 02:03:026 (5) - new combo
4. 02:16:193 (5,1) - 交换new combo
5. 02:32:360 (5) - new combo
6. 03:01:943 ~ 03:03:026 (T) - spinner
7. 03:04:193 (5) - new combo
8. 03:10:360 (T) - KIAI这里开始?
9. 03:24:943 (4) - new combo

1. 检查下姓名板 有的地方是空白

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 前移一下offset: 693 Fixed
2. break期间的姓名板隐藏掉吧- - 看起来怪怪的
3. 按collab统一一下KIAI

[Collab]:

1. 00:55:860 (4) - new combo Fixed
2. 01:05:693 (T) - add note Fixed
3. 02:03:026 (5) - new combo Fixed
4. 02:16:193 (5,1) - 交换new combo Fixed
5. 02:32:360 (5) - new combo Fixed
6. 03:01:943 ~ 03:03:026 (T) - spinner Fixed
7. 03:04:193 (5) - new combo Fixed
8. 03:10:360 (T) - KIAI这里开始? Fixed
9. 03:24:943 (4) - new combo Fixed

[Normal]:

1. 检查下姓名板 有的地方是空白

star~

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osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

01:47:694 (2) - Unsnapped.
01:48:694 (3) - ^
01:49:694 (5) - ^

All fixed
[Dis]

00:42:860 (1) - 1/2 before or just remove this circle and extend the spinner.
00:44:026 (1,2) - I totally don't like this.
02:13:860 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:14:026 (2) - New combo.
02:29:360 (5) - ^
02:29:526 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:24:360 (5,1,2,3) - What?! Ok , change

All fixed
[Collab]

01:59:693 (2,3,4) - I don't like how this sounds.
02:15:860 (4) - Stack it correctly under (1).
02:19:693 (2) - ^ under (10).

All fixed