1. ADV*NCED!! (3.59 stars, 337 notes)
2. B*GINNER!! (1.81 stars, 111 notes)
3. EXH*UST!! (4.31 stars, 353 notes)
4. INF*NITE!! (5.76 stars, 585 notes)
5. M*XIMUM!! (5.04 stars, 486 notes)
6. N*VICE!! (2.63 stars, 204 notes)
7. XXX!! (6.22 stars, 585 notes)

-Warning-

Really Slow Sliders Ahead

_DT3 wrote:

Lol, was just thinking about making a standard set of this music xDDD

Good luck! Will probably mod this soon

Renigar wrote:

what a god omfg

Plaudible wrote:

m4m from your queue! My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/480736
______________________

These hitsounds remind me a lot of Highscore, lol
They fit though, nice job! I can see you put a lot of work into them. I know that's the idea xDD i love tham too :3 and yes i worked a lot on them xDD

INSANE!!
00:05:334 (2,3,1) - Stacked a bit odd...double check that.
00:05:488 (1,2,3) - Spacing here is different, no real reason to though, with consistent spacing before it.
00:48:565 (1) - Move the end of this spinner to 00:49:411. Then map something at 00:49:795. No thanks
00:54:718 (1) - This doesn't feel like it should be a spinner... mapping it would be appropriate maybe for a normal or easy, but with an insane you can work with triples and stuff to map this nicely. Maybe use reverse sliders instead of streams.I prefer to mantain that spinner because if i map that part i will use streamers and i don't want to use spinners
I love the flow in this map, especially the staggering sliders fun to play. Me too (but my favorite is Another diff :3)

ANOTHER!!
00:08:872 (5,1) - Any reason to stack them like this? It's 1/2, you put distance between everything else 1/2 D: either extend slider so it's 1/4 or spread further.just a little anti-jump but i will think about it
00:54:718 (1) - I'd map this out, too. Just doesn't feel right in a higher difficulty song having a moment like this in the song just be a spinner. No thanks I also wanted to mention, since I forgot to in the last instance of this: ending the spinner where it is really interferes with the "3,2,1" in the vocals. when mapping it out, put the 3 notes so it works with this, if that makes sense
01:00:872 (1,2,3,4) - 1,2 and 3,4 are not spaced the same. That's the idea
01:28:103 (2,3) - Also, with these... I know you've had them throughout the song, but it feels... weird to play. The sound is the same, honestly I would suggest just having one slider and making it twice as long. The sound doesn't change and making it two sliders is uncomfortable. It's more appropriate in areas like 01:46:565 (2,3,4) because the pitch is increasing. I will think about it

EXTRA!!
00:54:718 (1) - Same issue. No thanks
01:11:641 (5) - I feel like these in all the difficulties would be cool as a NC, to match the moaning noise.
Didn't see much issue in this difficulty, looks pretty solid!

EXPERT!!
00:05:795 (7) from here to 00:09:795 (2) I feel the hitsounds could be a bit louder, they're almost unhearable. That's the idea :3 is the "kawaii" part of the song xDD
00:10:411 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Wew, sorry for highlight spam. These sections in the extra/expert feel a bit too... easy. They're very similar to the other difficulties, and with the intensity of this section it certainly should be more difficult, I'd consider mapping it to match the star difficulty a little more, even if it's minor increases of spacing. No thanks
00:47:641 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream looks... awkward. Nothing unplayable about it, but I'd consider changes.
00:54:565 (1) - Ahh, yes! Thanks for mapping it out, this is perfect.
00:59:334 (4) - I'd NC here.I will think about it

Feel like 4 is a bit too short, I'll do one more~ Thanks :3

EXTREME!!
Early hitsounding feels pretty quiet again. That's the idea :3
00:52:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is this huge jump pattern necessary? The song isn't intense yet. The sound is the same as 00:50:103 (1,2,3,1), yet the difference is significant. I think a smaller pattern will do, here. Some of the patterns in your upcoming kiai are smaller than this. meh...

Overall, your flow is very good ik :3 and the maps are really fun to play thank you for say that :3, just a few small things that need improvement! yeah... sorry xDD From my newbie mapper eyes, this seems pretty good already thank ya! , close to being ready for a BN ;w;. Fun song ;;w;;, good luck! Thanks!

Togetic wrote:

HOOOLY is that the real fort xd ;;;;;;w;;;;;; thank you. Anyways I really hope this mod can help! (i didn't have much time so sorry that i could only do one diff) Sure it's ok!

XXX

00:09:025 (8,9,1) - overlap these with the slider because it looks and flows better
00:22:718 (1) - i would recommend making the slider look more like this http://puu.sh/qmKLF/606b1f1cda.PNG
00:23:949 (1,2) - i would make this a triple instead or i would space these sliders instead because overlapping this completely looks weird and doesn't play as well
00:24:718 (4,5) - ^
00:40:565 (5) - change this slider please it plays awkwardly
00:47:334 (1,2,3,4) - kinda unnecessary quad
00:53:334 (8,1) - overlap please No thanks
00:58:410 (1,2,3,4) - i think it would be better if you would use the same distance snap that you used for the second third and fourth notes on the first too
01:04:103 (6) - underwhelming slider i would increase sv No thanks
01:05:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these jumps are a bit too much and are awkward to aim compared to the others
01:07:795 (6,7,8) - overlap this triple
01:36:565 (1) - underwhelming again
01:40:103 (8,1) - doesn't really flow well
01:42:718 (1) - underwhelming again

'please don't mention any overlap or blanket problem'

Whirl wrote:

hi m4m from modreqs



lets start



[A REALLY REALLY BAD WORD@@#@#$ (xxx)]
00:01:718 - add a note here meh
00:05:488 (1) - this can be 1/2 slider with a note at the end ~
00:06:103 (3) - ^ ~
00:06:718 (1) - ^^ ~
00:09:025 (8,9,1) - I would suggest slowing down the speed to 50 or 25 to see where you should put triples and sliders, cause this doesn't go to the beat at all No thanks, no SV changes
01:12:949 - add note here No thanks
01:21:026 (2,3,4,5,6) - this can be, improved No thanks i prefer it like it is



[PROHIBITED!!!]
00:00:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the volume can be a bit louder that's the idea
00:24:257 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern can be smoothed out a bit more it's good so no thanks
00:58:411 (1,2,3,4) - in your harder diff these notes are less sperated, consider making this easier than your XXX diff





[EXTREME!!!]
00:43:026 (5,6,7,8,1) - spacing is inconsistant here That's the idea





ok so uh

'please don't mention any overlap or blanket problem'

and other than that there isn't much problem

1. According to https://soundcloud.com/t-pazolite/censored-short-ver the name of the song should be t+pazolite - CENSORED!! (Short ver.) since you are using the short version
2. Tags are totally inaccurate, you don't have to add names of the songs that Fort mapped, it has nothing to do with the song
   [*However you can add tags such as the album name, doujin circle name, sources, name of the original touhou song (SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS, ALICE'S EMOTION for example), do your own search
   [/list]
   
   
   This mapset is really far from ranking in term of quality:
   
   1. Badly structured, random object placement
   2. Random spacing changes
   3. Hitsound abuse imo
   4. Wrong rythm, totally ignoring triplets, small streams that can be found very often in the song
   5. Random jump spam abuse to increase star rating
   I will mod your XXX diff as an example
   
   
   1. Hitsounding is really low during the beginning of the song, you could also have hitsounded the drum things starting at 00:05:488 (1) -
   2. The rythm used at the beginning is fine for an easier song but totally not for a 7* map, use less reverse sliders, more circles
   3. From 00:10:411 (1) - to 00:18:718 (3) - Your flow is basically running in a circle for the whole part, not even fun to or anything, still too easy for a 7* map, add circles
      There are also spacing inconsistancies and non structured placement
      
   4. During the whole kiai from 00:20:257 (1) - You are missing so many triplets, small streams and interessing rythm variety, you just spammed jumps to fill your map
   5. Your abuse of aplause hitsound is painful to listen imo
      These are totally random hitsounds that does not fit well the song
   6. 00:25:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Star pattern that is not even structured using the circle tool creator or something and has spacing inconsistances
   7. 00:27:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Missing triplets and stuff
   8. 00:28:872 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ignoring streams
      
   9. You could have mapped that part from 00:30 to 00:40 since the song is not that long
   10. 00:44:872 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Sliders makes it too easy for this quite intense part that has rythm variety, there are missing triplets, streams again
   11. 00:56:872 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream has small spacing inconsistencies that makes it look bad
       
   12. The rest of the map is basically non structured jump abuse and missing rythms, too lazy to mention everything
       
   13. 01:51:334 (1) - Finishing with a spinner is a bad choice, there are interresting things that could have been mapped instead
   
   If you want to see this map ranked, consider remapping everything once you have more mapping experience
   
   Sorry for being a bit rough but this was my honest opinion about your mapset, I hope that will help you
   
   I started mapping this song for fun before you submitted yours, check my version if you want to see what I'm talking about rythm and stuff
   It's not finished nor hitsounded
   http://puu.sh/qoq02/eb547d0bd8.osz

Renigar wrote:

[ General]

1. Jesus christ next Fort calm down omgl fucking wow dude jesus omg this is wow man wow jeez ;;;W;;; thank you
2. Bg is 1366x768 which is different from the recommended size of 1024x768. Might wanna get that resized ;w; Well normally mostly of the maps have that BG resolution (a rankable like 1366x768) here's an example of it Reol - no title
3. One of the diffs has an inconsistent Kiai time with the others. Look through all Kiai times to make them all the same to one another in every diff.
4. quite the tags :^)
5. Thoroughly disappointing that you didn't include the "Onii-Chan!~" hitsound tbh FeelsBadMan yeah i included that before upload the map but i erased it, i will include it Added~

absolute madman :3

[ BEGINNER!!]

Cambia a HP:2,5 meh y AR:3 por favor TTwTT (Most super easy diffs shouls rely heavily on a slow ds, given the chance that the song allows for such also please btw lower DS please No thanks in this part,cuz if i use a lower DS some parts will overlap and the overlap are not permitted on easy diffs and i could not to put emphasis in the places that i want)

kek omg

1. 00:05:488 (1,2) - Well, 00:00:565 (1,2) - these two are the same... so why shouldn't these two be the same too? Like, I get it's supposed to look likewise to 00:07:949 (2,1) - this but 00:10:411 (1) - this slider marks a whole new section songwise so ;w; No thanks i prefer to keep that part
   
   Suggestion #1

   
   or
   
   Suggestion #2

   
2. 00:10:411 (1,2) - Make these too parallel. It's just that given the case in such an easy diff (made for the sake of being easy y'know), it should really rely on simplicity and comfortable patterns and slider shapes and whatnot. 00:10:411 (1) - in this part change the rhytmn so no thanks
   
   Suggestion

   
3. 00:15:334 (1) - No NC? I don't really see necessary to remove the NC, but i will think about it
4. 00:20:257 (1,2) - Blanket? I'll pass from every blanket suggestion
   
   Suggestion

   
5. 00:27:641 (2) - Blanket too?^
   
   Suggestion

   
6. 00:41:180 (1) - No NC my dude~
7. 00:43:641 (2) - Replace for a note instead.
8. 00:44:872 (1,2) - Why no hitsounds?
9. 01:02:103 (2) - Just curve? Following the same pattern as here 00:10:411 (1,2,1) -
   
   Suggestion

   
10. 01:19:334 (1,1,1) - This line of new NC's.. //: Start of a new kiai time= New combo
11. 01:19:334 (1,1) - Make these two alike.Meh...
12. 01:39:026 - Moe hitsound (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) Onii-chan~ Added!
13. 01:51:334 (1) - That SDVX woosh woosh slider spinner sound omggggggg haha ik :3 (also only real concern is that the spinners too short?? idk im dumbIt's easier for new players)

[ EASY!!]

difficulty adjustements are way too alike to beginners' nerf

1. 00:03:026 (1,2) - Make these two alike?Meh...
   
   Suggestion

   
2. 00:07:949 (1) - Why the NC? 00:05:488 (1,2) - 2 downbeats=New combo
3. 00:09:180 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - All these sliders and just one note? Like.. replace some sliders for a note now and then :c Better for beginner players
4. 00:19:026 (2) - Kinda piggybacking the previous suggestion, replace this slider for a note.
5. 00:39:949 (1,2) - Make these look more parallel and/or similar to each other if that was your intention /:intentionally :3
6. 00:48:565 (2) - I suggest going for something like this for this slider? (toomanysliderskindamonotonous) Better for new players
   
   Suggestion

   
7. 01:05:795 (2,1,2) - ///:? the blankets take too much time and errors s i don't like to take suggestions about blankets
   
   Suggestion

   
   (just make some more patters instead of slider -> ds spam /:) Erm...?
8. 01:10:718 (3) - Sliderend *BEEEP* sound made me so hard happy cause like omg nice dude (but my opinion, I think it'd sound better on sliderhead than sliderend. just idk place green line on sliderhead n place clap on sliderhead and whistle on sliderend ;w;/)
9. 01:14:411 (1,2) - ;w;? Nah
   
   Suggestion

   
10. 01:24:257 (1) - Circular sliders for the most part should have blankets imo NotLikeThis meh...
11. 01:29:180 - Moe hitsound (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) <3
12. 01:37:795 (2,3) - nice my dude Keh heh heh~

end this diff on a note pls

[ NORMAL!!]

1. 00:14:103 (2) - Replace for two notes? I tried but... it becomes a chaos xDD
2. 00:23:949 (2) - Slider shape DD:
3. 00:39:949 (1) - This slider is too classy for the other sliders. A-L-I-E-N-ify this slider (Kappa)
4. 00:59:334 (1,1) - I get why the NC but this is a normal diff still ;-; 00:59:334 (1,1) - Start of the kiai= New combo
5. 00:59:641 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Erm...?
6. 01:10:718 (3) - Slider beep thing omg so orgamic
7. 01:29:180 - Moe hitsound (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀)
8. 01:37:795 (2,3,4,5) - Sliders for miles then suddenly NOTES (nerf some sliders for notes pls. problem is that because there are so many sliders, this diff would resemble Easy and Beginner a lot :T then again you're fort not me so w/e i will think about it
9. 01:50:103 (2) - woosh hngGggG

a lot of sliders my dude that's the idea

[[b]IT DISAPPEARED! ADVANCED!![/b]]

HP:4 please

1. 00:05:334 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Mediate :d
   
   Suggestion

   
2. 00:07:641 (2,3) - .-. Doesn't goes really well with the music so no thanks
   
   Suggestion

   
3. 00:10:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - Woulb be quite the leap from Normal tbh. Buff the Normal or nerf this Advanced? ;-; Erm...?
4. 00:20:257 - Beginner, Easy and Normal don't have the "tick" hitnormal that this one has ;-; (i.e sounds on 00:20:872 (2,3) - these sliders)Intentionally, only for match it with the streamer sound
5. 00:28:257 (2) - :d?
   
   Sugestion

   
6. 00:29:488 (4) - Just noticed, why no *BEEEP* hitsound in these sliders in the rest of the diffs, it would really fit with the song :< Fixed on all diffs~
7. 00:38:718 - Useless green line boi Nothing to see here guys
8. 00:59:641 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - In circles and repeptitive /: That's the idea
9. 01:01:488 (4) - Why not make this alike to 01:02:103 (1) - this?
10. 01:11:641 - Kreygasm
11. 01:26:718 (1,2) - Make these alike //: Meh...
12. 01:29:180 - hi i'm sukinathan (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀)
13. 01:37:795 (3) - Normal has a few notes but this advanced diff which is supposed to be harder only has a repeat slider? like i said before, buff or nerf please Harder
14. 01:49:334 (2,3) - tfw no overlap Doesn't overlap while gameplay

a bunch of sliders, not much to say :T I AM A SLIDER INSANE!!

[ Hard]

AR between 7-8 and cs 3.9~7 pls meh...

1. 00:03:026 (1,2,3,4) - Uhh, something like this? Just that the way it is now looks super "glued" together, I think.
   
   Suggestion

   
2. 00:07:949 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Too together? ><
   
   Suggestion

   
3. 00:06:718 (1,2,3) - Separate still since it is a hard ><
   
   Suggestion

   
4. 00:19:180 (2,3,4,5) - Pattern?
   
   Suggestion

   
5. 00:21:949 (2,3,2,3) - Make these curved to resemble 00:20:718 (7,8) - ?
6. 00:25:180 - Oh boy (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (why this hitsound so early? shouldn't the other diffs have this hitsound at this point and time too if you're gonna place it here in this diff?; make this hitsound fall in the same place in the lower diffs xwx)
7. 00:25:641 (2,3,4,5,6) - hmmmm .-.
   
   Suggestion #1

   
   or maybe?
   
   Suggestion #2

   
8. 00:26:411 (1,2,3,4) - ..? No thanks
   
   Suggestion

   
9. 00:38:718 - dumb green line :>
10. 00:44:872 (1) - Weird slider? /:
11. 01:04:565 (4,5) - NC on any of these please
12. 01:29:180 - hi sukinathan (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) (´・◡・｀) Nye heh heh~
13. 01:43:949 (4) - NC
14. 01:48:872 (1,2) - ?
    
    Suggestion

    

:d

will mod more later dw thanks Reni :>

ezek wrote:

el pozolito, yummy!

General

1. Tu BG esta muy pesada para ser una simple BG, considera convertirla a jpg con algún programa, ya que ese formato comprime mas las imágenes~ Lo prefiero en PNG aun que pese mas le da un toque mas bonito el PNG

BEGINNER!!

1. Revisa el aimod, te menciona algo de unas lineas que están al mismo tiempo~ No se pero no me sale ;w;
2. Solo tienes 2 circulos en toda la diff O_O deberias variar mas~ (Se que hay diffs que son puros sliders, pero ya que hay círculos, procura poner unos pocos mas) Considerando que es una beginner es mejor dejarlo con pocos single taps
3. 00:44:872 (1) - Cuando hagas curvas siempre procura que se noten como tales, el slider se ve raro así, haz de cuenta que te salio un chichón en la frente (por que asi no es como normalmente te vez)

EASY!!

1. 00:17:795 (1) - Cuidadito! Este slider se va algo offscreen in-game (unrankable papu :v)
2. 00:22:718 (1) - Se siente algo extraña esa curva, te recomiendo hacer una forma mas abstracta (simple) para mantener las cosas fáciles aquí~
3. 01:47:641 (2) - En mi opinion no se siente bien que hagas esas micro curvas al final del slider; se que enfatizan esas vocales, pero no creo que este tipo de técnicas encajen bien en una easy, ya que estas dificultades solo cubren un ritmo basico~

NORMAL!!

1. 00:01:795 (2) - Yo haría que la cola de este slider apuntara directo al siguiente objeto para un flow mas natural, no se tu~
2. 00:19:026 (2,3,4) - Esta parte es muy densa para una normal, deberías hacerla mas simple~ Esta bien, ya que no sobrepasa los 4 objetos y ademas hago uso de los red ticks, asi que esta bien
3. 00:23:949 (2) - Podría ser que el zigzagueo en este slider cause confusión :c
4. 01:25:488 (2) - Este va que roza la orilla de la pantalla con la cola, muevelo un poco arriba, esta casi offscreen por un bello pubico~

ADVANCED!!

1. 00:28:257 (2) - Recuerdas lo que te dije del chichón?

HARD!!

1. Mismo comentario en ese tipo de sliders, no hay otra cosa que me llame la atención, es que yo no ando con este tipo de música, así que no me siento seguro de que se debería hacer o no por aquí aparte de lo que mencione <.<

INSANE!!

1. 00:54:565 - Aquí puedes hacer un triple y que el spinner comience en el tick azul que sigue del downbeat, es totalmente aceptable~ Digo, por si no sabias, cada quien con su preferencia de como mappear esta parte~
   Ya no se de insanes a BPM alto o extras así que asta aquí llego~

Good luck t..t....t..... Trenty is still alive! Zyl :v

Gracias ezek

1. Badly structured, random object placement Jumps...
2. Random spacing changes ^
3. Hitsound abuse imo Custom Hitsounding
4. Wrong rythm, totally ignoring triplets, small streams that can be found very often in the song Remember that every mapper maps what he want's, for example if there's a part that can possibly make an streamer i can evade that part with a spinner, all is about mapping styles.
5. Random jump spam abuse to increase star ratingKhe heh heh~ i don't really see the problem of this, cause mostly of the maps haves jumps for make it harder the map so... here's an example Check the diff "it"

1. Hitsounding is really low during the beginning of the song, you could also have hitsounded the drum things starting at 00:05:488 (1) - that's the idea.
2. The rythm used at the beginning is fine for an easier song but totally not for a 7* map, use less reverse sliders, more circlesIs the slow part of the song so... no thanks
3. From 00:10:411 (1) - to 00:18:718 (3) - Your flow is basically running in a circle for the whole part, not even fun to or anything, still too easy for a 7* map, add circles That's the idea, i don't want to "spam" that part with circles, and its better cause the DS can be confusing because if you look at the timeline is like this~ So, how i difference between a pattern like this and a 1/1 slider?
4. There are also spacing inconsistancies and non structured placement Is an extreme Spacing isn't really important...
5. During the whole kiai from 00:20:257 (1) - You are missing so many triplets, small streams and interessing rythm variety, you just spammed jumps to fill your map Remember that every mapper maps what he want's, for example if there's a part that can possibly make an streamer i can evade that part with a spinner, all is about mapping styles, and men if you will talk about like this about my style please shut up and mod wisely
6. Your abuse of aplause hitsound is painful to listen imo Your PC volume is too high
7. These are totally random hitsounds that does not fit well the song Actually they do it... i think you must listen them a little more...
8. 00:25:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Star pattern that is not even structured using the circle tool creator or something and has spacing inconsistances Intentionally
9. 00:27:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Missing triplets and stuff Mapper styles~
10. 00:28:872 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ignoring streams ^
11. You could have mapped that part from 00:30 to 00:40 since the song is not that long All the players will need a Break time
12. 00:44:872 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Sliders makes it too easy for this quite intense part that has rythm variety, there are missing triplets, streams againi will ignore all the references to streams... are kinda anoying if you are stalking me with them... sorry """""spamming"""""
13. 00:56:872 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream has small spacing inconsistencies that makes it look bad Fixed~ you were right in this part Khe heh heh~
14. The rest of the map is basically non structured jump abuse and missing rythms, too lazy to mention everything If you were good to spam about it and now you don't do it you are really lazy...
15. 01:51:334 (1) - Finishing with a spinner is a bad choice, there are interresting things that could have been mapped instead Seriously...?

isn't necessary!, i think that you need more experience to mod and mapping cuz this map is really bad mapped and needs lots of fixed and it only haves mapped like 40 secs... and you abuse of the blue ticks+sliders and that plays really awkward, so yeah! i need experience to make extremes but you need more experience to mod and evade the spamming about so little things about streamer consistencies and hitsounding

collector7 wrote:

Hey. M4M from #modreqs

Generally you have one big problem on every diff: you're going in one direction for too long.
As example in ADVANCED!!: 01:29:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - for twenty seconds you going anti-clockwise only. It's really boring. Try to change it like every 1-2 tact, it would be much more interesting. Keh heh heh~ good point but i will leave it like it is

EASY!!
ar2 od2 maybe
00:01:795 (2) - try moving red point on white tick. Same to others sliders. Try to do it whenever you can and want Erm...? Well if you are talking about put a slider on a red tick on a easy diff no thanks, das no gud

NORMAL!!
ar4

ADVANCED!!
ar5/5,5
I think triples is too much for advanced Good point fixed, i will take that in mind in future mapping
00:19:641 - make it clickable
01:28:565 - ^
00:26:411 (3,4) - move them to 171,215 meh...
00:41:180 (3,4) - move red points on red ticksred points...?

HARD!!
ar7 od7 atleast No thanks

INSANE!!
ar8 od7,5 Impossible with hidden
00:09:180 (1,2) - it would a little bit more interesting, if you rotate them by -90 and make them curved or somthing like that meh...
01:03:334 (1,2) - ^ i really don't like that patterns while gameplay so, no thanks
00:19:180 (2,3,4) - like this maybe? Erm...?
00:22:411 (4) - ctrl+g meh...
00:47:949 (3) - 420,131 00:48:257 (4) - 168,68 no position suggestions
00:52:257 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+j on each of this separated with same locations would be more prettier Looks better like it is
00:54:565 (2) - this note feels out of place. I think if you add not here 00:54:411 - it would be better Fixed long time ago xDD
01:11:025 (2) - ctrl+gmeh...
01:28:103 (2,3,4,5) - I think it's better to unstack

ANOTHER!!
ar8,5 od7,5Impossible with hidden
00:19:180 (2,3,4) - same as insanei don't really understand what are you refering to...
01:28:103 (2,3,4) - ^ ?
01:17:488 (6) - nc

EXTRA!!
od8
00:42:411 (1,2,3) - change the order to 2,3,1 No thanks triangles are good

EXPERT!!
00:19:642 (5) - change it into a note
01:15:641 (1,2) - ctrl+g both separately


Well I think there is enough. Really catchy song, but in the map there is so much to improve It only haves 3 days, it's a baby~. Good luck with this

Zyl wrote:

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Axon wrote:

Zyl wrote:

Tags: Reol Highscore Monster Freeze DanganRonpa Ooi O2i3 Touhou Trent83 Tatsh GameOver ALiCE'S EMOTiON Reitaisai ZUN SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS MUSECA ハルトマンの妖怪少女 作曲 Blossom Koishi Circulation

these tags hOLY

Axon wrote:

No kudosu.

I may or may not do a full mod later, but for now I'm just going to point out some things that really bugged me, with the difficulty setup specifically.

First off, the BEGINNER!! difficulty has a higher approach rate than the EASY!! diff.

The INSANE!! diff, which is 4.03* is only at AR7, it should be at least AR8, AR8.5 would probably fit best.

The ANOTHER!! diff which is 4.52* is only at AR8, it should be raised up to AR9. Also, INSANE!! has a higher HP drain than ANOTHER!!.

For future reference, Insane maps that are 3.75-4.10* should be around AR8 or AR8.5, 4.10-5.25 should be AR9.

Good Luck!

Edit: Also, the hitsounds are very obnoxious. I think you use the audience and hitsound way too liberally. Only use it when there's a part in the music that REALLY deserves it. Not every downbeat