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Coldrain - Vena

Yay, more coldrain <3

Mostly a rhythm mod. A lot of stuff you have heads on notes that really aren't strong notes to hit. It'll be a bit repetitive, but it's somewhat important to look out for.

[General]
To start this on the correct measure. Your timing should begin at 00:04:243 - | The notes before this are part of the anacrusis. This is optional, but it does affect mods like Nightcore and some visual appearances elsewhere. Since you have volume/sound changes, all you have to do is add a red timing point at the above mentioned time, and then resnap any notes if necessary.

Since coldrain sings this song completely in English, and the Rock is a given for the genre. You can remove both rock english from the tags.

This naming is a bit too random. Involved really has nothing to do with Precise or Rigerous, Moderate is kind of standalone, and so on. I honestly can't see these difficulty names making it through ranking. You may want to simplify it a little. It reminds me of my naming from a map I made long ago which isn't rankable anymore lol. (Peaceful, Lonliness, Serenity, Solitude, Miko) | If I can't really tell what is what in the control+o list, then yikes..

[Briefness]
  1. 00:12:550 (2) - This could really be moved back 1/1 and it'd fit the song better. refer to how 00:13:473 (3) - plays as an example.
  2. 00:27:320 (2) - would look much better out at x196 y192. You'll have to adjust 00:28:243 (1) - though. The overlap is not a good idea on this diff. If you need more room, you can simply end 00:24:550 (1) - back at 00:26:396 - where it will fit your 4/1 rhythm with the upcoming notes since they all play on the big white line.
  3. 00:43:935 (2) - Much like at 00:12:550 (2) - This will suit the song better moved back 1/1
  4. 00:57:089 - Green timing is slightly off here. Not unrankable, but it's nice to fix these.


[Moderate]
  1. 00:06:781 (4) - this could end 1/1 earlier if you want to follow your current rhythm. Optional.
  2. 00:12:550 (3) - your rhythm suggest this should follow 00:14:166 (6) - (Try moving this back 1/1 and then placing a 1/1 slider at 00:13:012 - This means deleting 00:13:243 (4) - . Look at 00:16:012 (2,3) - for an example.)
  3. 00:20:396 (2) - I'd personally delete this. It would really give more emphasis to 00:20:858 (1) - and the stacked note works great here!
  4. 00:32:858 (2,3) - You don't actually use a 2/1 in this specific spot in the previous sections. Maybe use a 3/2 slider instead to maintain your consistent rhythm?


[Uneath]
  1. 00:13:473 (1) - I suggest copying 00:15:320 (1,2) - here. I didn't hold this long enough, and the note you want to click is at 00:13:935 -
  2. 00:20:627 (1) - Maybe delete this for a bit more breathing room? It's just lead-in anyways. Also because it's just lead-in, NC should be at 00:20:858 (2) -
  3. 00:21:320 (3) - This head note only hits a very very quiet cymbal which imo, shouldn't be mapped too. There are much more dominant sounds on the red ticks before and after it. Note how in this whole section, you don't actually map to this note anywhere else, and besides in Rigerous, you don't map this note at all! well besides at one other point...
  4. 00:29:627 (7) - ^
  5. 00:44:858 (1) - same as 00:13:473 (1) -


[Arduous]
  1. 00:11:858 (2) - Might be a bit repetitive from the last diff, but this doesn't actually hit anything either. It works good as a tail end of 00:11:627 (1) - or something, but that's about it. Check all of the other diffs, as they actually map it correctly.
  2. 00:14:281 (4,5) - swap these, so the 1/2 slider is at 00:14:281 - to match the rhythm to the song. You can also change this to a 1/1 slider and it'll play nicely.
  3. 00:20:858 (2) - NC since previous is lead-in. (Might as well do this to all your diffs now since I won't mention it from now on.)
  4. 00:23:050 (2) - you do a lot of reverses on these almost empty notes which I mentioned in the Uneath difficulty. It isn't game breaking, but 1/1 sliders would suit this much better since it wouldn't feel like you're hitting an empty sound. This applies to 00:28:589 (3) - 00:29:512 (6) - and so on.
  5. 00:36:435 (3) - Might as well put this on the 00:35:281 (8) - since you pretty much do it to this whole section here: 00:41:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - The song feels more intense at 00:35:166 (7,8,9) - anyways.
  6. 00:45:781 (5,6) - I'd double check this again if I were you, it really sounds like both the head of (5) and (6) don't hit anything spectacular in the music, which would easily cause this rhythm to play oddly. While the head of (5) is passable, I'd really suggest making sure the (6) is on a tail or skipped. (Check the other diffs for (6) at least and you'll notice it isn't mapped on any others)


[Precise]
  1. 00:08:050 (2) - Hits nothing. Yikes.
  2. 00:12:435 (4,5) - This is pretty difficult to follow, it doesn't have a clear indication anyways. If you flipped it, then it would follow the drums + guitar a little better since 00:12:666 - has a good drum kick. This is mostly because you skipped the vocal at 00:12:320 - that it makes following this hard.
  3. 00:14:281 (4,5) - same as above.
  4. 00:18:550 (12) - Not just circles? Feels like it got dumbed down pretty good here. If you want to keep the reverse, maybe throw it on 00:17:627 (5,6,7) - as well.
  5. 00:24:896 (2) - Same thing about the reverses in the last diff. Doesn't really make sense, but not the biggest issue.
  6. 00:28:704 (3) - The cymbal note thing again. More dominance on notes like the tail of 00:28:473 (2) - for example.
  7. 00:45:089 (2) - lands on nothing again.
  8. 00:45:666 (5,6) - Try swapping.
  9. 00:50:396 (1) - Besides the easier diffs, this is the only one that doesn't have a circle played here before the spinner.


[Furious]
  1. 00:06:089 (1) - 1/1 instead of 1/2 reverse for variety? (reverse hits nothing anyways.)
  2. 00:11:050 (5,6) - You could probably emphasize this a bit more. Try putting this on the 00:10:012 (2) - and maybe put the (6)'s head on the 00:11:627 (1) - or something. It might be a bit linear from (5,6,7) but it still doesn't play bad.
  3. 00:12:550 (1) - hits nothing. Maybe join it up with the previous 00:12:435 (5) - or something
  4. 00:21:896 (2) - I would personally just use a 1/1 slider here from (1), or swap this with (1)
  5. 00:25:589 (2) - Same idea here. This note is forced to play on barely anything audible. 00:32:973 (2) -
  6. 00:44:858 (1,2) - swap? It'll capture the full vocal, and let you play 00:45:204 - as its own note.


[Rigerous]
  1. Like uneath, 00:21:320 (5) - hits nothing big, so I suggest skipping this or making it land on a tail.


ok. Gonna move on. Hopefully these first 6 diffs I modded will help you look at the next couple on your own as well. Just make sure you prioritize the strong beats over the more passive ones. Good luck!
Topic Starter
smallbeans

Hobbes2 wrote:

NM from queue.

[Briefness]

00:24:550 (1,2) - Certainly an interesting blanket but to me it just looks kinda bad. I'd either make 1 a curve, or move the hit circle. Will destroy all of the alphabet when I have time, thanks!

00:31:935 (1) - Move the bend to 00:32:858 to match the music better Will also be changed!

00:31:935 (1,2) - The hit circle is closer to the left half of the slider than the right half. Looks uneven. You're right, will changed later.

[Moderate]

No comments.

[Uneath]

00:09:320 (4) - Move to the left for better flow. Adjust 5 accordingly. Changed.

00:19:012 (1) - End the spinner on the downebeat (00:19:935), feels much better Want to cover all guitar sound, sorry.

00:37:473 (1) - Move this down a bit for flow and adjust the following circles accordingly. Changed the sliders before this circle.

[Arduous]

00:10:704 (6) - NC here Nope.

okay, so a lot of your doubles in this map are too spaced out for this difficulty, I think. Things like 00:04:127 (3,1) should be closer together.

More examples of doubles hat should be closer together -

00:04:934 (4,5)
00:05:973 (8,1)
00:11:858 (2,3)
00:36:320 (2,3)

etc.

I think you should space these doubles the way you spaced 00:17:166 (1,2,3). Do this to make your map feel like the difficulty it claims to be and be more consistent overall.

Other than that, it looks mostly fine. Maybe I did it wrong. Will change 1/2 circles distance and add more jump, thanks.

[Precise]

Uh, I have no idea how to mod a CS this small lol

Maybe try to get Irreversible in here for this one? :^)

The rest of these I can't mod because I am not capable of passing them (a combination of the SR and the speed, which im not good at). Sorry :\

I hope what I have helps.
Thanks for your mod! After so many comment, finally need to have something big change now.

Log Off Now wrote:

NM from my queue

this song is so intense and 7.3+ in under a min hoyl lol.

[General]

Looks fine (but why no kiai?) I don't want to add it because this song is too short.

[Briefness]

00:24:550 (1) - Maybe make the directions of this slider match the main beat of the music so that it changes direction on every white tick, would just feel a bit more intuitive to the player (something like you did here 00:28:243 (1) - )

00:24:550 (1,2) - Visible overlap :(

00:31:935 (1) - Same comment as 00:24:550 (1) -

00:34:704 (2) - Move this a tiny bit right for it to be directly inbetween the triangle Will change all the pattern above.

00:57:089 (1) - Is this really necessary XD YES this is the essence!!!

[Moderate]

00:10:704 (6,7,1) - Maybe try this for a cleaner flow? It still has a similar visual style but makes it a bit easier on the player (remember to change the distance of the next combo if you use this) Feels great, changed.

00:25:473 (2,3) - This is the only other awkward place in the map, every other slider you have leads on nicely to the next one, but this one makes the player do a sharp left , maybe consider reshaping 00:26:396 (3) - ? Changed (2) to ~.

[Uneath]

00:26:627 (2,3,4,5) - Doubles like these are still extremely difficult for players at this skill level and are only usually found at insane or higher difficulties (especially at this sort of bpm), consider using sliders like you have done before here 00:25:127 (3) - Finally someone mod it, but still want to keep this pattern.

00:49:473 (3,4) - Maybe swap these out for some 1/4 repeat sliders? I know you're following the vocals here but I think it would be a more fitting end to the map if you followed the more intense part of the music. Feel weird to me, sorry.

[Arduous]

CS5 :o I don't play or map any CS5 so I don't really know how to mod this, sorry!
Hope someday you want to play it and map it, it would be a great experience. ;)
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I'm a bit confused by your CS choice from here lol, CS7 5*??? And I don't really know how to mod your other difficulties, hope this helps!
You won't really want to see if I put CS7 in the highest diff, and it will make that diff ridiculous. I put it in 5* map at least it's playable.
Thanks for modding!!

Lanturn wrote:

Coldrain - Vena

Yay, more coldrain <3 OMG you are the author of we're not alone!!! Your map are so great!!! I love it so much!!! Although I cant DT it.

Mostly a rhythm mod. A lot of stuff you have heads on notes that really aren't strong notes to hit. It'll be a bit repetitive, but it's somewhat important to look out for. Got it.

[General]
To start this on the correct measure. Your timing should begin at 00:04:243 - | The notes before this are part of the anacrusis. This is optional, but it does affect mods like Nightcore and some visual appearances elsewhere. Since you have volume/sound changes, all you have to do is add a red timing point at the above mentioned time, and then resnap any notes if necessary.A bit don't know how to work, but maybe you mean to add the second red line, so changed.

Since coldrain sings this song completely in English, and the Rock is a given for the genre. You can remove both rock english from the tags. I know what you mean, but since so many times I want to play english song in game, I cant just search "english" to find most of the songs, so I finally decide to add these tags, if others said about this, I will fix.

This naming is a bit too random. Involved really has nothing to do with Precise or Rigerous, Moderate is kind of standalone, and so on. I honestly can't see these difficulty names making it through ranking. You may want to simplify it a little. It reminds me of my naming from a map I made long ago which isn't rankable anymore lol. (Peaceful, Lonliness, Serenity, Solitude, Miko) | If I can't really tell what is what in the control+o list, then yikes.. Sometimes I think that "Another" "Extra" "Extreme" "Expert" are almost undefined diff names, everyone has different explain about how hard it should be. Also because 9 diffs are all made by me, I want to use something different diff names than just give a name like above mentioned time. So... I really want to keep it now or just change to other diff names than use Ex series, sorry.

[Briefness]
  1. 00:12:550 (2) - This could really be moved back 1/1 and it'd fit the song better. refer to how 00:13:473 (3) - plays as an example. Changed and also the next part.
  2. 00:27:320 (2) - would look much better out at x196 y192. You'll have to adjust 00:28:243 (1) - though. The overlap is not a good idea on this diff. If you need more room, you can simply end 00:24:550 (1) - back at 00:26:396 - where it will fit your 4/1 rhythm with the upcoming notes since they all play on the big white line. This part has been all change now!
  3. 00:43:935 (2) - Much like at 00:12:550 (2) - This will suit the song better moved back 1/1
  4. 00:57:089 - Green timing is slightly off here. Not unrankable, but it's nice to fix these. Waiting for timing check here, but thanks god it just effect on only one slider.


[Moderate]
  1. 00:06:781 (4) - this could end 1/1 earlier if you want to follow your current rhythm. Optional. Keep this now since I don't want to fill all and don't want to blank two white lines.
  2. 00:12:550 (3) - your rhythm suggest this should follow 00:14:166 (6) - (Try moving this back 1/1 and then placing a 1/1 slider at 00:13:012 - This means deleting 00:13:243 (4) - . Look at 00:16:012 (2,3) - for an example.) Changed.
  3. 00:20:396 (2) - I'd personally delete this. It would really give more emphasis to 00:20:858 (1) - and the stacked note works great here! Okay, it looks not weird, so let's try it.
  4. 00:32:858 (2,3) - You don't actually use a 2/1 in this specific spot in the previous sections. Maybe use a 3/2 slider instead to maintain your consistent rhythm? Can't really catch what you mean because my poor english... but I think (3) can hit to emphasize for the drum sound so it doesn't that weird, maybe.


[Uneath]
  1. 00:13:473 (1) - I suggest copying 00:15:320 (1,2) - here. I didn't hold this long enough, and the note you want to click is at 00:13:935 - Changed.
  2. 00:20:627 (1) - Maybe delete this for a bit more breathing room? It's just lead-in anyways. Also because it's just lead-in, NC should be at 00:20:858 (2) - No NC on this because it's the same lyric, but anyway, it deleted.
  3. 00:21:320 (3) - This head note only hits a very very quiet cymbal which imo, shouldn't be mapped too. There are much more dominant sounds on the red ticks before and after it. Note how in this whole section, you don't actually map to this note anywhere else, and besides in Rigerous, you don't map this note at all! well besides at one other point... Change to 1/2 slider.
  4. 00:29:627 (7) - ^ Let me keep this, I have no room to change it well.
  5. 00:44:858 (1) - same as 00:13:473 (1) - same as 00:13:473 (1)


[Arduous]
  1. 00:11:858 (2) - Might be a bit repetitive from the last diff, but this doesn't actually hit anything either. It works good as a tail end of 00:11:627 (1) - or something, but that's about it. Check all of the other diffs, as they actually map it correctly. Just worry about 3/2 blank here, but finally delete it in the end.
  2. 00:14:281 (4,5) - swap these, so the 1/2 slider is at 00:14:281 - to match the rhythm to the song. You can also change this to a 1/1 slider and it'll play nicely. Changed.
  3. 00:20:858 (2) - NC since previous is lead-in. (Might as well do this to all your diffs now since I won't mention it from now on.) For me it's in the same lyric, so I don't want to add NC here, and also other diffs.
  4. 00:23:050 (2) - you do a lot of reverses on these almost empty notes which I mentioned in the Uneath difficulty. It isn't game breaking, but 1/1 sliders would suit this much better since it wouldn't feel like you're hitting an empty sound. This applies to 00:28:589 (3) - 00:29:512 (6) - and so on. When I mapping this part I think that the repeat slider is okay here at least the head and the tail have the sound, but maybe it's a fault. Let me keep this now but will fix when another mod said about it.
  5. 00:36:435 (3) - Might as well put this on the 00:35:281 (8) - since you pretty much do it to this whole section here: 00:41:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - The song feels more intense at 00:35:166 (7,8,9) - anyways. Right.
  6. 00:45:781 (5,6) - I'd double check this again if I were you, it really sounds like both the head of (5) and (6) don't hit anything spectacular in the music, which would easily cause this rhythm to play oddly. While the head of (5) is passable, I'd really suggest making sure the (6) is on a tail or skipped. (Check the other diffs for (6) at least and you'll notice it isn't mapped on any others) In that time I want to map something different rhythm, but looks like it isn't anything good at all, thanks and fix a lot here.


[Precise]
  1. 00:08:050 (2) - Hits nothing. Yikes. 1/2 slider.
  2. 00:12:435 (4,5) - This is pretty difficult to follow, it doesn't have a clear indication anyways. If you flipped it, then it would follow the drums + guitar a little better since 00:12:666 - has a good drum kick. This is mostly because you skipped the vocal at 00:12:320 - that it makes following this hard. Oh I miss this, and so correct you say.
  3. 00:14:281 (4,5) - same as above. Right.
  4. 00:18:550 (12) - Not just circles? Feels like it got dumbed down pretty good here. If you want to keep the reverse, maybe throw it on 00:17:627 (5,6,7) - as well. Let's start stream party!
  5. 00:24:896 (2) - Same thing about the reverses in the last diff. Doesn't really make sense, but not the biggest issue. Keep as Arduous for now.
  6. 00:28:704 (3) - The cymbal note thing again. More dominance on notes like the tail of 00:28:473 (2) - for example. Swapped.
  7. 00:45:089 (2) - lands on nothing again. Why I didn't notice this before.
  8. 00:45:666 (5,6) - Try swapping. Yes.
  9. 00:50:396 (1) - Besides the easier diffs, this is the only one that doesn't have a circle played here before the spinner.Added.


[Furious]
  1. 00:06:089 (1) - 1/1 instead of 1/2 reverse for variety? (reverse hits nothing anyways.) Yes.
  2. 00:11:050 (5,6) - You could probably emphasize this a bit more. Try putting this on the 00:10:012 (2) - and maybe put the (6)'s head on the 00:11:627 (1) - or something. It might be a bit linear from (5,6,7) but it still doesn't play bad. (4) between (2) and (5) and others the same as you said.
  3. 00:12:550 (1) - hits nothing. Maybe join it up with the previous 00:12:435 (5) - or something Join it up.
  4. 00:21:896 (2) - I would personally just use a 1/1 slider here from (1), or swap this with (1) Swapped.
  5. 00:25:589 (2) - Same idea here. This note is forced to play on barely anything audible. 00:32:973 (2) - A slider now.
  6. 00:44:858 (1,2) - swap? It'll capture the full vocal, and let you play 00:45:204 - as its own note. Right and swapped.


[Rigerous]
  1. Like uneath, 00:21:320 (5) - hits nothing big, so I suggest skipping this or making it land on a tail. Swapped.


ok. Gonna move on. Hopefully these first 6 diffs I modded will help you look at the next couple on your own as well. Just make sure you prioritize the strong beats over the more passive ones. Good luck!

Other the same issue like what you comment will be fix soon.
Thanks for your mod and changed so many things, hope you can make more coldrain songs. :)
roshan117
NM from mah queue

00:46:704 (1,2) - Make the timing between being done pressing the 1 hitcircle, and beginning the 2 slider longer. This can probably done by increasing the distance between hitcircle 1 and slider 2.
00:50:396 (1,1) - This is where the break is. The break here seems kind of pointless, so what you can probably do is remove the spinner, and replace it with a long slider that goes through the entire break. Then, replace the slider 1 at the end where it yells "FUCK" with a single hitcircle.
00:50:396 (1,1) - Like the Briefness difficulty, the break here seems pointless. So, what I would do is replace spinner 1 with a really long slider that goes through where the break is (taking away the break), and replace the slider 1 at the end with a single hitcircle (where it says FUCK)
The maps I modded were done very solid, just that there were a couple of small things that could use some fixing!

I hope this is helpful! :)
Naxess
NM From Queue

I'm horrible at 5 SR + diffs... what have I done
I'll try modding them though.

[Precise]
00:08:050 (2) - This feels off, there's no beat here. There is here, however, and it's skipped 00:08:281 -
I'd keep consistency by making 00:07:935 (1) - a slider ending at 00:08:166 -

00:12:550 - There's no beat here either. I think this'd work better:

^ 00:14:396 - Make 00:14:512 - a circle?

00:18:896 - Perhaps you could add a note here.

00:20:743 - I wouldn't say this is a clear beat, so I'd recommend simply making 00:20:627 (1,2) - a slider instead.

00:25:012 - Don't exactly hear a beat here either, so a repeat wouldn't make sense imo.

00:24:896 (2,3) - Whatever you do with these, you can do with 00:25:820 (5,6) - as well, for consistency. Will define the rhythm better.

00:28:704 (3) - Can't hear this
^ 00:30:550 -
^ 00:32:050 -

00:32:512 - Object? Could do it like you did here 00:33:204 (4,5) -
^ 00:36:666 -

00:35:973 - Add note, perhaps make a slider with previous
^ 00:38:973 -
^ 00:39:781 -

00:36:954 - Could even make this a stack with a note here, but it might be too fast. Up to you.
^ 00:38:743 - 00:38:800 -

00:45:089 - Seems overmapped
^ 00:45:781 -

Seems to be a lot of notes missed and some overmapped so I'll stop pointing them out here.

00:47:743 (5) - Sounds different from 00:47:512 (4) - , could make them two circles, for example.

I think rhythm could be improved. I'll be hard to follow if it's not mapped to the beat properly.

[Rigorous]
00:06:204 - A repeat without a sound seems strange imo.

00:07:416 - Potential note, although might be hard to fit in at this point.

00:08:281 (2,4) - These have the same sound, so it wouldn't really make sense to have (2) be further from (3) and then stack (4) with it.

00:17:512 (3,4) - These two are spaced too far and I don't see a reason for it. I understand 00:17:281 (2,3) - , but 00:17:512 (3,4) - sound quite similar.

00:17:627 (4,5) - Might feel awkward with a sudden slowdown here, would space them a bit more so it fits with the SV.

00:20:743 (2) - Like mentioned in Precise, would probably fit better as a sliderend.

00:21:320 - Can't hear this. Would make 00:21:435 - a circle instead.
^ 00:23:166 -
^ 00:30:550 -

00:25:358 (4) - Feels like overmapping

00:32:627 (3) - A curve this tight will likely slow down cursor movement because of slider leniency. Consider straightening it out a bit.

00:34:820 (6,7) - These sound the same so they should be the same type of note imo.

00:35:454 - 00:35:512 - 00:35:570 - Could be mapped, but might make things too hard if it were implemented as things are at the moment with spacing.
Could be done like this, though:


00:35:743 - There's no beat here, but there is here 00:35:973 - , which leads me to believe 00:35:627 (1) - should be a circle.

00:36:954 - could also be mapped
^ 00:38:800 -

00:37:243 (5) - Could be made a circle because there's no beat at 00:37:358 -
Could be done like this for aesthetics and as an anti-jump to 00:37:473 (1) - :


00:43:588 (4,5) - Could extend slider so it ends where circle (5) is.

00:48:666 (2) - Perhaps this slider should just be circles, it sort of sounds like a stream when this section starts at 00:48:550 - .

I just thought of something... 00:57:089 (1) - imagine playing this on hidden and failing to get SS because of it xD

lol I gotta change the rules on the queue, I can't even play such high SR difficulties
I'll mod this diff as well, then I'll stop xD

[Furious]

  • 00:04:243 (1) - Feels weird that this slider ends on silence while 00:04:589 (3) - ends on a beat.
    Could do something like this for example:


    00:06:204 - I mentioned this earlier as well

    00:07:358 - 00:07:416 - Not going to cover these? It's a harder difficulty, so I'd think it would make sense to do so.

    00:10:589 - It's strange that this isn't mapped, it's quite a strong beat. I'm sure some will mistake the sound for being 00:10:704 (1) -

    00:12:320 - Can't hear this, could still map 00:12:204 - as a slider that ends here so there isn't a random hole in the rhythm.

    00:12:550 (1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels off, listen to the drums, for example.

    00:14:166 - There's no beat here, make it a sliderend or similar instead.
    ^ 00:16:012 - No clear beat here either. You may say that it's following the guitar, but honestly I can't hear it. If there's an guitar sound, it's at 00:15:896 -

    00:20:627 (1) - Well done! This is much better.

    00:21:896 - Can't hear this either.
    Any part like this, I think you should make into a sliderend instead on this difficulty. On previous ones you usually just had a slider running over it, but for this one you can fit in another circle where the sliderend would've been like this. It's a harder difficulty after all.
    ^ 00:25:589 -
    ^ 00:26:858 -
    ^ 00:28:127 -

    There's a lot of these, I'll stop pointing them out from here on.

    00:23:627 (1,2) - These sound almost the same so I don't see why there should be a jump here.

    00:34:704 (1) - Circles?

    00:36:896 - 00:36:954 - Missing some notes here

    00:41:166 (1,2) - I don't think a jump will fit here, especially not such a strong one, because (1) and (2) are in the same measure and jumping on an offbeat can be a bit strange imo.

    00:44:973 (2) - This slider should probably begin at 00:44:858 - instead
    Like this:


    But yeah, look for quiet notes that are clickable and fix them to sliderends or something instead. Will improve rhythm a lot.

[ General]

  • Are you sure the difficulty settings for precise are ok? OD 8 is a bit high for an insane imo. I'm sure OD 7 would suffice, especially since the circle size is so small. Could you imagine someone playing it with HR? xD

    Combo colour 3 and 4 are very similar, so perhaps you could switch places with colours 3 and 4.

    Sound files and background resolution are fine.

Good luck!
SnowNiNo_
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  • [Dyspnea]
  1. 看了一下整體...痾該怎說勒=w=, 嘛...還是可以拉, 不過做跳圖的話盡量把"為什麼要改間距"這原因給考量進去
  2. 00:04:243 - 這紅線是來做啥的..., 可以改成綠線八...
  3. 00:09:089 (3,4,5) - 這flow..很難打阿, 做跳圖的時候盡量避免這種直線跳或者是鈍角跳, 因為對玩家來說這種跳不好打
  4. 00:19:012 (3) - 這是個很強的音, 間距可以擺大, 還要NC
  5. 00:36:319 (4,1,2) - 同00:09:089 (3,4,5) -
  6. 00:41:166 (1,2,3) - 00:43:012 (1,2,3) - 00:47:166 (3,4,5) - ^
  7. 00:50:396 (12) - NC八...來emphasized這邊的音
  • [Involved]
  1. 00:04:012 (4,5,1) - 哦.....同問題我就不在提了
  2. 00:50:396 (12) - 恩NC


其實整體算不錯就是欠缺polish XD
NM而以不說太多=w=
那些跳如果你不休的話也是沒問題啦..., 畢竟也是rankable的
Topic Starter
smallbeans
;) 3 mods with no overlap diffs, great.

roshan117 wrote:

NM from mah queue

00:46:704 (1,2) - Make the timing between being done pressing the 1 hitcircle, and beginning the 2 slider longer. This can probably done by increasing the distance between hitcircle 1 and slider 2. In fact, really couldn't realize what you are talking abut, sorry for my bad english. ;w;
00:50:396 (1,1) - This is where the break is. The break here seems kind of pointless, so what you can probably do is remove the spinner, and replace it with a long slider that goes through the entire break. Then, replace the slider 1 at the end where it yells "FUCK" with a single hitcircle. Nope. First I am still waiting a timing check and second, a long slider here is really weird cause there are too many irregular sounds that hard to follow.
00:50:396 (1,1) - Like the Briefness difficulty, the break here seems pointless. So, what I would do is replace spinner 1 with a really long slider that goes through where the break is (taking away the break), and replace the slider 1 at the end with a single hitcircle (where it says FUCK) The same as the Briefness, sorry.
The maps I modded were done very solid, just that there were a couple of small things that could use some fixing!

I hope this is helpful! :)
Thanks for your first modding time! Keep on and you'd be better and better!

Naxess wrote:

NM From Queue

I'm horrible at 5 SR + diffs... what have I done
I'll try modding them though.

[Precise]
00:08:050 (2) - This feels off, there's no beat here. There is here, however, and it's skipped 00:08:281 -
I'd keep consistency by making 00:07:935 (1) - a slider ending at 00:08:166 - You're right, changed pattern here.

00:12:550 - There's no beat here either. I think this'd work better:

^ 00:14:396 - Make 00:14:512 - a circle? Changed in other way!

00:18:896 - Perhaps you could add a note here. Since I changed this part to seven circles before so I refuse this.

00:20:743 - I wouldn't say this is a clear beat, so I'd recommend simply making 00:20:627 (1,2) - a slider instead. No since I already make it a closer distance.

00:25:012 - Don't exactly hear a beat here either, so a repeat wouldn't make sense imo. Really think that it didn't hurt that much, but I fixed now.

00:24:896 (2,3) - Whatever you do with these, you can do with 00:25:820 (5,6) - as well, for consistency. Will define the rhythm better.

00:28:704 (3) - Can't hear this K
^ 00:30:550 - Just seem as I am following vocal or something, I don't really want to change this. (But maybe it's wrong.)
^ 00:32:050 - Wondering why slider end can have nothing but for reverse it will be bad despite the head and end have the sound. If I make this with slider+ circle, this place still have no heavy sound. But if got third time mod for this will mean changed for all diffs.

00:32:512 - Object? Could do it like you did here 00:33:204 (4,5) - Use slider tick sound.
^ 00:36:666 - Don't want to fill all of the sound, and the same reply with the following.

00:35:973 - Add note, perhaps make a slider with previous
^ 00:38:973 -
^ 00:39:781 - But changed this.

00:36:954 - Could even make this a stack with a note here, but it might be too fast. Up to you. Wow I never find this 1/4 sound before. Maybe will add to other harder diffs but this diff doesn't because nothing 1/4 use here.
^ 00:38:743 - 00:38:800 - There goes for intentionally.

00:45:089 - Seems overmapped
^ 00:45:781 - These two changed.

Seems to be a lot of notes missed and some overmapped so I'll stop pointing them out here.

00:47:743 (5) - Sounds different from 00:47:512 (4) - , could make them two circles, for example. Doesn't really need I think...

I think rhythm could be improved. I'll be hard to follow if it's not mapped to the beat properly.

[Rigorous]
00:06:204 - A repeat without a sound seems strange imo. Now 1/1 slider.

00:07:416 - Potential note, although might be hard to fit in at this point. I ignore that in this diff because it's not like 00:10:704 sound heavy, sitll have some harder diffs use this note.

00:08:281 (2,4) - These have the same sound, so it wouldn't really make sense to have (2) be further from (3) and then stack (4) with it. Moved (4) to other place.

00:17:512 (3,4) - These two are spaced too far and I don't see a reason for it. I understand 00:17:281 (2,3) - , but 00:17:512 (3,4) - sound quite similar. Right, for normal distance now.

00:17:627 (4,5) - Might feel awkward with a sudden slowdown here, would space them a bit more so it fits with the SV. Changed when fixed the above mod.

00:20:743 (2) - Like mentioned in Precise, would probably fit better as a sliderend.Don't want to do this, sorry.

00:21:320 - Can't hear this. Would make 00:21:435 - a circle instead. Swapped 4 and 5.
^ 00:23:166 -
^ 00:30:550 - About these two, I already have nothing pattern can use in this part if I can only follow the rhythm and fill all hitsounds, let me keep this

00:25:358 (4) - Feels like overmapping Maybe it's really like you say but that's also why I put them stack, if a blank here may cause a misunderstanding I think.

00:32:627 (3) - A curve this tight will likely slow down cursor movement because of slider leniency. Consider straightening it out a bit. If my memory is correct, this slider is just the same as the previous slider for 1/2 long, no change for now.

00:34:820 (6,7) - These sound the same so they should be the same type of note imo. Maybe I just want to make it easier, but anyway, fixed.

00:35:454 - 00:35:512 - 00:35:570 - Could be mapped, but might make things too hard if it were implemented as things are at the moment with spacing.
Could be done like this, though: I feels like a deaf because I never heard this until you mention it. (For me I need to use 50% speed to heard this.) Don't want to map in this diff but harder diffs may be acceptable.


00:35:743 - There's no beat here, but there is here 00:35:973 - , which leads me to believe 00:35:627 (1) - should be a circle.You are right but I don't know how to change

00:36:954 - could also be mapped For next time I map I will use 25% speed to listen for something like this, will add it in harder diffs (if I can)
^ 00:38:800 - Not to use in this diff

00:37:243 (5) - Could be made a circle because there's no beat at 00:37:358 - Don't want to blank this.
Could be done like this for aesthetics and as an anti-jump to 00:37:473 (1) - : Sorry I am too noob and I think this feels weird for me. ;_ ;


00:43:588 (4,5) - Could extend slider so it ends where circle (5) is. I think it's fine.

00:48:666 (2) - Perhaps this slider should just be circles, it sort of sounds like a stream when this section starts at 00:48:550 - . Too hard in this diff if I can only use circle, really.

I just thought of something... 00:57:089 (1) - imagine playing this on hidden and failing to get SS because of it xD Lol maybe next time for autoplay first.

lol I gotta change the rules on the queue, I can't even play such high SR difficulties
I'll mod this diff as well, then I'll stop xD

[Furious]

  • 00:04:243 (1) - Feels weird that this slider ends on silence while 00:04:589 (3) - ends on a beat.
    Could do something like this for example: Change (1,2) to a 1/1 slider to distinguish. Sorry but I think 6 circle still not easy in this difficulty.


    00:06:204 - I mentioned this earlier as well Only got a mod about no reverse, so can't realize what you mean, sorry.

    00:07:358 - 00:07:416 - Not going to cover these? It's a harder difficulty, so I'd think it would make sense to do so....still want to not use 1/4 here but......oh I feel hesitate don't know how I should do it.

    00:10:589 - It's strange that this isn't mapped, it's quite a strong beat. I'm sure some will mistake the sound for being 00:10:704 (1) - I don't know for me I can't really distinguish this sound clearly if I do not change the speed to 75%, and also a NC here. Maybe change to a slider instead.

    00:12:320 - Can't hear this, could still map 00:12:204 - as a slider that ends here so there isn't a random hole in the rhythm. Please let me use a slider here to cover the blank.

    00:12:550 (1,2,3,4) - This whole part feels off, listen to the drums, for example. Change (1) to a 1/1 slider and hope it can be better.

    00:14:166 - There's no beat here, make it a sliderend or similar instead. Changed some patterns, thanks.
    ^ 00:16:012 - No clear beat here either. You may say that it's following the guitar, but honestly I can't hear it. If there's an guitar sound, it's at 00:15:896 - Changed some patterns.

    00:20:627 (1) - Well done! This is much better.

    00:21:896 - Can't hear this either. Yes, so I use slider end to cover this, use all the same 1/1 slider not what I want to do.
    Any part like this, I think you should make into a sliderend instead on this difficulty. On previous ones you usually just had a slider running over it, but for this one you can fit in another circle where the sliderend would've been like this. It's a harder difficulty after all.
    ^ 00:25:589 - Change to a slider.
    ^ 00:26:858 - For truth it's not follow the sound, but I think that's not cause unplayable before. If others mention this, will fix these.
    ^ 00:28:127 - ^

    There's a lot of these, I'll stop pointing them out from here on. I am sorry I made them weird.

    00:23:627 (1,2) - These sound almost the same so I don't see why there should be a jump here. Yeah.

    00:34:704 (1) - Circles? I want to make it easier here.

    00:36:896 - 00:36:954 - Missing some notes here The same as previous I said...

    00:41:166 (1,2) - I don't think a jump will fit here, especially not such a strong one, because (1) and (2) are in the same measure and jumping on an offbeat can be a bit strange imo. Put it closer now.

    00:44:973 (2) - This slider should probably begin at 00:44:858 - instead Right.
    Like this:


    But yeah, look for quiet notes that are clickable and fix them to sliderends or something instead. Will improve rhythm a lot.

[ General]

  • Are you sure the difficulty settings for precise are ok? OD 8 is a bit high for an insane imo. I'm sure OD 7 would suffice, especially since the circle size is so small. Could you imagine someone playing it with HR? xD In fact, why I put OD 8.1 is exactly for I use CS7 and "precise". And I expect someone can play it with DT and HR.

    Combo colour 3 and 4 are very similar, so perhaps you could switch places with colours 3 and 4. I feel it's fine.

    Sound files and background resolution are fine.

Good luck!
Really like your mod because it's great and made me panic, thank you very much.

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

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  • [Dyspnea]
  1. 看了一下整體...痾該怎說勒=w=, 嘛...還是可以拉, 不過做跳圖的話盡量把"為什麼要改間距"這原因給考量進去 在你剛貼的時候我正打算大幅調整這個diff的...畢竟這是第一個做的diff,比起其他難度,這裡滿滿都是渣
  2. 00:04:243 - 這紅線是來做啥的..., 可以改成綠線八... 這是別人提的,他說這裡應該才是音樂的開始,前面的部分只是前導拍子。我原本只打算擺一條在這裡,可是前面的滑條都亂了,只好變成擺兩條了這樣
  3. 00:09:089 (3,4,5) - 這flow..很難打阿, 做跳圖的時候盡量避免這種直線跳或者是鈍角跳, 因為對玩家來說這種跳不好打 了解了,老實說我以為銳角跳比較困難的說,我果然還是太弱了
  4. 00:19:012 (3) - 這是個很強的音, 間距可以擺大, 還要NC 了解,不過不知道為什麼我不想要在這裡放NC...通常我會擺的
  5. 00:36:319 (4,1,2) - 同00:09:089 (3,4,5) - 所以應該要擺成銳角跳比較好打,對嗎?
  6. 00:41:166 (1,2,3) - 00:43:012 (1,2,3) - 00:47:166 (3,4,5) - ^ 好的,到時候應該會通通弄掉
  7. 00:50:396 (12) - NC八...來emphasized這邊的音 了解
  • [Involved]
  1. 00:04:012 (4,5,1) - 哦.....同問題我就不在提了 嗯...可是在 (4,5) 我沒有跳耶,這樣也不太好嗎?
  2. 00:50:396 (12) - 恩NC 還是先不放好了


其實整體算不錯就是欠缺polish XD
NM而以不說太多=w=
那些跳如果你不休的話也是沒問題啦..., 畢竟也是rankable的
為什麼突然跳出一個英文單字來XD
可能從一開始就應該衡量自己能打的程度只做到六星左右吧XD 你mod的這兩個diff某程度上我是用HT在感覺的
謝謝你的mod~~
Username105

smallbeans wrote:

Help: Need a better BG.
Before I start my mod, here are some backgrounds to consider.


Edit: Please deny KD
Username105
NM~!!

  1. I think you double-timed this but it's too late now.
  2. There's no need for two timing points when both are the same.
  1. Switch to 1/1 snap divider. 1/4 is way too much for an Easy.
  2. 00:06:089 - Not allowing the downbeat to be clickable here creates tension, which is unneccesary for an Easy.
  3. 00:37:473 - ^
  4. 00:57:089 - Check make make sure this is rhythmic, not just the singer talking.
  5. Generally, you have some unattractive sliders, eg. 00:48:550 (3) - this one. Try to come up with some more appealing sliders, especially because this is an Easy and the rhythm is very simplified.
  1. Moderate seems fine.
  2. Uneath has 00:13:473 (1) - this stack.
  3. Arduous has 00:26:050 (7) - this stack, 00:29:858 (7) - this stack, 00:33:435 (6) - this stack, and that's what I could find throughout the rest of the map. Check your stacks.
Sorry it started getting too fast/perfect for me to mod. Hopefully this helps.
Good Luck~!!
Topic Starter
smallbeans

Jonawaga wrote:

smallbeans wrote:

Help: Need a better BG.
Before I start my mod, here are some backgrounds to consider.


Thanks for these BG help! But sorry none of them fits what I want. ;w;

[]

  1. I think you double-timed this but it's too late now. I want to use both 130 and 260 before in this map but it looks like not allow, so I use 260 because there are some 1/4 notes in BPM260 for sure.
  2. There's no need for two timing points when both are the same. Someone mod this so I will keep them for other modders.
  1. Switch to 1/1 snap divider. 1/4 is way too much for an Easy.
  2. 00:06:089 - Not allowing the downbeat to be clickable here creates tension, which is unneccesary for an Easy. I can't get what you are talking about... sorry for my bad english reading skill.
  3. 00:37:473 - ^ ^
  4. 00:57:089 - Check make make sure this is rhythmic, not just the singer talking. In this part, almost no rhythm you can catch, and this word is strong for something so I want to map this for ending.
  5. Generally, you have some unattractive sliders, eg. 00:48:550 (3) - this one. Try to come up with some more appealing sliders, especially because this is an Easy and the rhythm is very simplified. Changed the slider here because someone also mod this ugly before.
  1. Moderate seems fine.
  2. Uneath has 00:13:473 (1) - this stack.
  3. Arduous has 00:26:050 (7) - this stack, 00:29:858 (7) - this stack, 00:33:435 (6) - this stack, and that's what I could find throughout the rest of the map. Check your stacks. All fixed.
Sorry it started getting too fast/perfect for me to mod. Hopefully this helps.
Good Luck~!!
Thanks for your mod!!
_Stan
Hey from my modq

[General]
source???

[Briefness]

00:03:320 (1,1,2) - 虽然节奏和note上没有么什么问题 但是这样摆的貌似不太好看(个人意见
00:09:781 (2) - ds控制在1.18-1.22比较好
00:28:243 (1) - 有点奇怪的shape but nevermind

[Moderate]
00:04:935 (2) - ds
00:11:627 (1) - ds
00:11:627 (1) - 0.5的前后ds差距 控制在0.3之间 建议
00:17:166 (4) - ^
00:31:704 (5) - ds

[Uneath]
00:20:858 (1,2,3) - 和00:21:781 (4,5,6) - 的打击节奏是一样的,00:22:127 (5) - 换成note把 和00:20:858 (1,2) - 保持一致比较好
00:36:550 (5,2) - 00:37:012 (6,1) - 让他们对其在一条直线上?

[Arduous]
00:05:050 (5) - ds
00:12:435 (4,5) - 的距离 会让刚刚打过00:11:973 (2,3) - 之后的 感到疑惑? 改成一样的DS把
00:25:473 (5,7) - 没有必要一定要叠
00:45:320 (3) - ds

后面的不会mod 能力不够呀(原谅我 :(:(:(
其实后面几个难度我觉得挺不错的~ GL~
Telomere
Hi from meh queue


Involved

Consider changing the AR to 10 since the bpm is so high.
00:05:166 (1,2,3,4) - Make the gap between 1 and 2 bigger and the same with 3 and 4. So it will be more like a up and down jump^^
00:09:550 (5,6) - Start a slider from circle 5 and end it at circle 6, I think it would fit better
00:10:704 (1,2,3) - Maybe change this into a reverse arrow slider :P
00:18:666 (6) - Make this a jump too
00:36:723 - I hear a triple. 00:36:897 (4,5) - Make this part a triple
00:42:320 (4,5) - Change it into a slider
00:49:012 (5,6) - Make this jump smaller so that 00:49:243 (7,8) - they aren't stacked.

You need some Kiai time :P I would place it here 00:35:627 - and end it here 00:43:012 -

00:57:089 (1,2) - I don't think you need this
Cellina
uhm this is not 7 star but it is hard as 7 star... im sure that im not able to mod this, so ill just shoot a star.
ncuh
Hi from my queue

00:17:627 (4) - omg. That's looks rly bad
00:17:858 (5,1) - not sure about that. Smth like this is more playable http://i.imgur.com/jv3ULsw.png
00:21:204 (3,4) - blanket
00:22:704 (1,4) - blanket
00:30:089 (1,3) - ^
00:34:820 (6,7,8,9) - rethink this moment. I guess there's should be singltap with space changes, but 100% not sliders, cuz their ends on powerful tics and that's not following music changes
00:36:550 (1,2,1) - blanket boyzz
00:38:396 (1) - I rly don't like that when objects are outside the border
00:40:012 (5,3) - blanket
00:04:127 (5) - move it to slider start, cuz your square is no more square with that)
00:44:858 (1,3) - blanket?
00:50:396 (6) - space it to the down-left
00:07:127 (2,8,1) - blanket
00:13:012 (4,1) - blanket
00:45:666 (1,2) - ^

Sorry, can't say anything more. Never modded songs/maps like this and I'm newbie-_-
MrKosiej
Ok m8, here i come from my queue and here's my mod

If you don't agree with sth, feel free to ignore it :D

00:04:127 (5) - i feel like you should move that circle lower to have equal spacing between 00:04:012 (4) and 00:04:243 (1)
00:06:435 (2) - same as above, make euqal spacing between 00:06:089 (1) and 00:06:550 (3)

00:17:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern looks ugly imo, i would suggest remapping this pattern
00:18:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same, looks very unclear

00:20:627 (1,2,3,4) - maybe do sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5416501 to make 00:20:627 (1,2,4) more curved and pleasant

00:23:166 (4) - move a bit further from 00:23:050 (3,5) maybe sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5416513

00:48:896 (4) - blanket with 00:48:320 (4)
00:04:819 (3,4,5) - you gotta work on spacing, maybe do sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5416536 to make it more structured

00:07:012 (1) - this is very hard to read cuz of that slider, i suggest moving it. maybe do sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5416547 and you'll get a nice blanket with 00:07:243 (3)

00:08:627 (5) - move closer to 00:08:281 (2) maybe make it cover half a circle

00:09:089 (2,3) - make it more sctructured

00:10:704 (1,2,3) - big NOPE, very unreadable

00:11:050 (5) - move it to x:280 y:260

00:42:089 (1,2,3) - better than previous one, but m8, do better XD

00:50:396 (6) - move further? it's the end of the song, gotta make the whole edningd pattern more epic
the second half of the song is better than previous :)
First thing, why is the circle size smaller with me getting to easier diffs D:
I hate those small circles, 5 is a limit for me, so i would suggest making it 5, or less.

00:08:281 (2,3,4) - redo this pattern, it's a bit unpleasant to play.

00:08:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those are a bit unclear to read

00:49:473 (1,5) - i don't like this overlapse
Yes, i hate that CS 7

00:42:896 (12) - equal the spacing
00:25:473 (5) - move to the start of 00:26:050 (7)

Ok that's it, i hope i helped at least a bit XD, GL with that mapset
C00L
IRC mod

2016-06-18 13:42 C00L: o/
2016-06-18 13:42 smallbeans: Yes I saw your post there
2016-06-18 13:42 smallbeans: Hi
2016-06-18 13:42 C00L: so you rdy ?
2016-06-18 13:42 C00L: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/992229 coldrain - Vena]
2016-06-18 13:43 smallbeans: Which do you start?
2016-06-18 13:43 C00L: em
2016-06-18 13:43 C00L: one diff of your choice
2016-06-18 13:44 smallbeans: only one?
2016-06-18 13:44 C00L: yea thats the rules for the light mod
2016-06-18 13:44 C00L: but since its that short
2016-06-18 13:44 C00L: i can do 2
2016-06-18 13:45 smallbeans: Oh great I need Furious and Involved thanks
2016-06-18 13:45 C00L: cool
2016-06-18 13:45 C00L: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/992229 coldrain - Vena [Involved]]
2016-06-18 13:46 smallbeans: how to spam that message?
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: slash (/) np
2016-06-18 13:46 smallbeans: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/992229 coldrain - Vena [Involved]]
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: there :D
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2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: since
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: it doesnt allow you to spam more
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: xd
2016-06-18 13:46 smallbeans: oh I didn't know that can be use on editing :D
2016-06-18 13:47 smallbeans: Oh reallyXD
2016-06-18 13:47 C00L: peppy blocks the spam abuse x-x
2016-06-18 13:49 smallbeans: :(
2016-06-18 13:49 C00L: 00:04:012 (4,5) -
2016-06-18 13:49 C00L: you could do something like this
2016-06-18 13:49 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5417014
2016-06-18 13:49 C00L: you could stack 5 to get into the harder flow rather than a really long jump
2016-06-18 13:50 C00L: 00:07:358 (4,5,6) -
2016-06-18 13:50 C00L: the angle these are at right now is really awkward
2016-06-18 13:51 C00L: stacking this into triplets would be much better
2016-06-18 13:51 smallbeans: Can't really get why so close since it has a drum sound
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: 00:03:320 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: since
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: these first 4
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: would be less intenser
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: and the 5 would lead onto the slider
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: which would lead into the harder parts of the song
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: and the jump between 4 and 5
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: would emphasise the 5 more
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: since the previous one emphasised the slider more
2016-06-18 13:53 C00L: which doesnt have a sound as such
2016-06-18 13:53 C00L: oh nvm
2016-06-18 13:53 C00L: it does
2016-06-18 13:53 smallbeans: I need to learn how to have speed engkish typing
2016-06-18 13:53 smallbeans: lol
2016-06-18 13:53 C00L: xD
2016-06-18 13:54 smallbeans: I made it closer to 00:04:243 and keep the distance 1.0x does this okay?
2016-06-18 13:54 smallbeans: forget a -
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: 00:04:243
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: cant click it
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: and yea
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: thats fine
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: 00:07:358 (4,5,6) -
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: then
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: stack this
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: since the angle is pretty awkward to hit
2016-06-18 13:56 C00L: 00:18:666 (6) -
2016-06-18 13:56 C00L: x:284
2016-06-18 13:57 C00L: y:172
2016-06-18 13:57 C00L: this will put the note at an angle to the slider
2016-06-18 13:57 C00L: which will create better flow
2016-06-18 13:57 C00L: since the slider is curved
2016-06-18 13:58 C00L: 00:20:743 (2) -
2016-06-18 13:58 C00L: you could delete this
2016-06-18 13:58 C00L: since there is no sound on it
2016-06-18 14:01 smallbeans: 1/4 changed to straight / changed the position and curve about slider / changed to slider to cover the vocal sound
2016-06-18 14:02 C00L: 00:35:858 (2,3) -
2016-06-18 14:02 C00L: dont stack this
2016-06-18 14:02 C00L: try this
2016-06-18 14:02 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5417081
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: 00:57:089 (1,2) -
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: and i really dont think this is neccessary
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: and
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: em
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: the song ends
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: suddenly
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: if you want i can edit the mp3
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: to make it fade out
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: let me know when you finish
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: brb
2016-06-18 14:07 smallbeans: it's really a full song lol
2016-06-18 14:08 smallbeans: finish
2016-06-18 14:08 C00L: really thats the ful song?
2016-06-18 14:08 smallbeans: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vena_&#40;album&#41;
2016-06-18 14:08 smallbeans: first song
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: )_)
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: i see
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: em
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: and
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: sec
2016-06-18 14:10 smallbeans: many people mod I should make this for ending but I have nothing to do lol
2016-06-18 14:10 smallbeans: shouldn't
2016-06-18 14:10 C00L: em
2016-06-18 14:10 C00L: you should consider changing the AR to 9,8
2016-06-18 14:10 C00L: 00:57:089 (1,2) -
2016-06-18 14:10 C00L: this
2016-06-18 14:11 C00L: you could delte this
2016-06-18 14:11 C00L: since its only the word fuck your mapping to
2016-06-18 14:11 C00L: :;
2016-06-18 14:12 C00L: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/986288 coldrain - Vena [Furious]]
2016-06-18 14:12 C00L: change the AR on this to 9,5
2016-06-18 14:14 smallbeans: the same as Involved?
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: no change the AR of involved
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: to
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: 9,8
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: and furios
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: to 9,5
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: since involved is really really harder
2016-06-18 14:15 C00L: and faster ar is like
2016-06-18 14:15 C00L: so so good
2016-06-18 14:16 smallbeans: okay
2016-06-18 14:16 C00L: tell me when your ready to move onto the next diff :D
2016-06-18 14:17 C00L: this song is catchy btw
2016-06-18 14:18 smallbeans: sorry, now really finish xd
2016-06-18 14:19 C00L: no worries
2016-06-18 14:19 C00L: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/986288 coldrain - Vena [Furious]]
2016-06-18 14:20 C00L: tbh with you
2016-06-18 14:20 C00L: furious
2016-06-18 14:20 C00L: is really good
2016-06-18 14:21 C00L: plays fantastic
2016-06-18 14:21 smallbeans: what
2016-06-18 14:21 C00L: its good
2016-06-18 14:21 C00L: i cant find anything
2016-06-18 14:22 smallbeans: In fact I expect you would say it looks like a s... xdddd
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: nah nah
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: furious looks great
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: ill check the diff below if you want
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: since i cant find anything here
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/986291 coldrain - Vena [Rigorous]]
2016-06-18 14:23 smallbeans: great :)
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: 00:11:166 (6,7,8,9) -
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: you could decrease the DS between them
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: by 0,1 each note
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: since it gets less intense
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5417218
2016-06-18 14:26 C00L: again its pretty good
2016-06-18 14:27 smallbeans: lol
2016-06-18 14:27 smallbeans: do I need to change 00:42:319 there?
2016-06-18 14:27 smallbeans: sorry 00:42:319(4)-
2016-06-18 14:28 C00L: 00:42:320 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2016-06-18 14:28 smallbeans: lol
2016-06-18 14:28 C00L: nah you can leave this
2016-06-18 14:28 smallbeans: 00:42:319 (4) -
2016-06-18 14:28 smallbeans: OK
2016-06-18 14:28 C00L: :D
2016-06-18 14:28 C00L: great map man
Topic Starter
smallbeans
Let's start!

_Stan wrote:

Hey from my modq 非常感謝大大願意mod

[General]
source??? 沒有source耶,這不是anime song

[Briefness]

00:03:320 (1,1,2) - 虽然节奏和note上没有么什么问题 但是这样摆的貌似不太好看(个人意见 最簡單的難度沒什麼可以動的阿...先這樣吧
00:09:781 (2) - ds控制在1.18-1.22比较好 從後面複製過來了 不知道為什麼跟後面不一樣
00:28:243 (1) - 有点奇怪的shape but nevermind 我也是覺得奇怪但不知道怎麼擺 先隨意弄了其他樣子

[Moderate]
00:04:935 (2) - ds
00:11:627 (1) - ds
00:11:627 (1) - 0.5的前后ds差距 控制在0.3之间 建议
00:17:166 (4) - ^
00:31:704 (5) - ds 這邊都改好了

[Uneath]
00:20:858 (1,2,3) - 和00:21:781 (4,5,6) - 的打击节奏是一样的,00:22:127 (5) - 换成note把 和00:20:858 (1,2) - 保持一致比较好 這一段的節奏都一樣阿 我比較傾向幾種組合換來換去這樣 就不改了
00:36:550 (5,2) - 00:37:012 (6,1) - 让他们对其在一条直线上? 改了

[Arduous]
00:05:050 (5) - ds
00:12:435 (4,5) - 的距离 会让刚刚打过00:11:973 (2,3) - 之后的 感到疑惑? 改成一样的DS把 忘記已經改掉連續圓圈了 已改
00:25:473 (5,7) - 没有必要一定要叠 擺到另外一邊了
00:45:320 (3) - ds 沒回的都改了

后面的不会mod 能力不够呀(原谅我 :(:(:(
其实后面几个难度我觉得挺不错的~ GL~
還是謝謝大大願意幫忙摸,非常感謝!!

iamVill wrote:

Hi from meh queue


Involved

Consider changing the AR to 10 since the bpm is so high. Changed to AR 9.8 because there will have another AR10 diff. xd
00:05:166 (1,2,3,4) - Make the gap between 1 and 2 bigger and the same with 3 and 4. So it will be more like a up and down jump^^ Changed.
00:09:550 (5,6) - Start a slider from circle 5 and end it at circle 6, I think it would fit better Prefer now and it fits with (1,2,3).
00:10:704 (1,2,3) - Maybe change this into a reverse arrow slider :PNope, since it is already a 6.64 stars map. :3
00:18:666 (6) - Make this a jump too In my opinion the sound goes down, so I made it not so jump to fit the sound.
00:36:723 - I hear a triple. 00:36:897 (4,5) - Make this part a triple Can't heard about 00:36:723 but 00:36:897 added.
00:42:320 (4,5) - Change it into a slider Since all of them are heavy sound, still think that they should be a hit circle.
00:49:012 (5,6) - Make this jump smaller so that 00:49:243 (7,8) - they aren't stacked. But these sound goes the same, I want to keep these the same.

You need some Kiai time :P I would place it here 00:35:627 - and end it here 00:43:012 - In fact I prefer to add kiai in 00:57:089 I think the song is short and kiai is not essential so I don't want to add.

00:57:089 (1,2) - I don't think you need this I think I really want to have this.

Thanks for your mod for Involved!

Cellina wrote:

uhm this is not 7 star but it is hard as 7 star... im sure that im not able to mod this, so ill just shoot a star.

In fact you don't really need to mod only the highest diff, you can mod others. :( But still thanks for your star.

M1k0 wrote:

Hi from my queue

00:17:627 (4) - omg. That's looks rly bad :( I also think that's bad but I don't know where I can put it and still follow the distance...still changed a bit.
00:17:858 (5,1) - not sure about that. Smth like this is more playable http://i.imgur.com/jv3ULsw.png Have no much thinking about this, so I changed.
00:21:204 (3,4) - blanket Nope.
00:22:704 (1,4) - blanket I don't know, didn't I blanket this?
00:30:089 (1,3) - ^ Fixed.
00:34:820 (6,7,8,9) - rethink this moment. I guess there's should be single tap with space changes, but 100% not sliders, cuz their ends on powerful tics and that's not following music changes I don't want to make it too hard for seven circles, it's just 5.5 SR, but I changed (6)'s position for I don't know the reason.
00:36:550 (1,2,1) - blanket boyzz Hate to fixed something like this but anyway fix.
00:38:396 (1) - I rly don't like that when objects are outside the border Don't worry you won't see the border when you play it.
00:40:012 (5,3) - blanket I don't have motivation to do this, but since it's east to change, I Changed.
00:04:127 (5) - move it to slider start, cuz your square is no more square with that) Nope, (1,2,3,4) are already a full square and (5) have the different distance than others, I don't need to keep it on the square.
00:44:858 (1,3) - blanket? To much things to change so I don't want to blanket.
00:50:396 (6) - space it to the down-left Moved to other position.
00:07:127 (2,8,1) - blanket Fixed.
00:13:012 (4,1) - blanket Fixed.
00:45:666 (1,2) - ^ Fixed.

Sorry, can't say anything more. Never modded songs/maps like this and I'm newbie-_-
I don't want to map blanket anymore...
Thanks for your mod!

MrKOSIEJ wrote:

Ok m8, here i come from my queue and here's my mod

If you don't agree with sth, feel free to ignore it :D

00:04:127 (5) - i feel like you should move that circle lower to have equal spacing between 00:04:012 (4) and 00:04:243 (1)
00:06:435 (2) - same as above, make euqal spacing between 00:06:089 (1) and 00:06:550 (3) I seen 00:06:435 (1,2) is a pattern since red line has a small hitsound. But move 00:04:127 (5) to close to 00:04:243 (1).

00:17:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern looks ugly imo, i would suggest remapping this pattern Already have no thinking about how to map spacing well on this part, but AR moved to 9.8 hope it can read clearer.
00:18:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same, looks very unclear The same as above.

00:20:627 (1,2,3,4) - maybe do sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5416501 to make 00:20:627 (1,2,4) more curved and pleasant Changed to a slider and also changed the distance.

00:23:166 (4) - move a bit further from 00:23:050 (3,5) maybe sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5416513 Have no suppose to do that since there is really no sound in 00:23:166 (4).

00:48:896 (4) - blanket with 00:48:320 (4) Don't think it really need.
00:04:819 (3,4,5) - you gotta work on spacing, maybe do sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5416536 to make it more structured Changed.

00:07:012 (1) - this is very hard to read cuz of that slider, i suggest moving it. maybe do sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5416547 and you'll get a nice blanket with 00:07:243 (3) Almost like what you say but swapped the position about (1) and (2).

00:08:627 (5) - move closer to 00:08:281 (2) maybe make it cover half a circle Changed.

00:09:089 (2,3) - make it more sctructured Changed (5,6) to old style lol.

00:10:704 (1,2,3) - big NOPE, very unreadable Already use a back direction slider to hint the stream... Fine, changed back to a circle.

00:11:050 (5) - move it to x:280 y:260 Hate that overlap, changed to x:304 y:156.

00:42:089 (1,2,3) - better than previous one, but m8, do better XD Please help me about how to save this. ;_ ;

00:50:396 (6) - move further? it's the end of the song, gotta make the whole edningd pattern more epic Changed.
the second half of the song is better than previous :)Changed too many times and I don't know what I am mapping now...
First thing, why is the circle size smaller with me getting to easier diffs D:
I hate those small circles, 5 is a limit for me, so i would suggest making it 5, or less. Will not do anything on this except changed AR for reading, sorry.

00:08:281 (2,3,4) - redo this pattern, it's a bit unpleasant to play. Please give me a example, I don't know how to change this to best.

00:08:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those are a bit unclear to read I don't know what I am changing for.

00:49:473 (1,5) - i don't like this overlapse I do this so many times in order to make it have the same stack with (2)... let me keep this for now.
Yes, i hate that CS 7 Yes, i hate that CS 7.

00:42:896 (12) - equal the spacing Okay, finally changed this.
00:25:473 (5) - move to the start of 00:26:050 (7) move (7) to other space.

Ok that's it, i hope i helped at least a bit XD, GL with that mapset
Thank for your mod! And I add a pink color for s.o.s. 8-)

C00L wrote:

IRC mod

2016-06-18 13:42 C00L: o/
2016-06-18 13:42 smallbeans: Yes I saw your post there
2016-06-18 13:42 smallbeans: Hi
2016-06-18 13:42 C00L: so you rdy ?
2016-06-18 13:42 C00L: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/992229 coldrain - Vena]
2016-06-18 13:43 smallbeans: Which do you start?
2016-06-18 13:43 C00L: em
2016-06-18 13:43 C00L: one diff of your choice
2016-06-18 13:44 smallbeans: only one?
2016-06-18 13:44 C00L: yea thats the rules for the light mod
2016-06-18 13:44 C00L: but since its that short
2016-06-18 13:44 C00L: i can do 2
2016-06-18 13:45 smallbeans: Oh great I need Furious and Involved thanks
2016-06-18 13:45 C00L: cool
2016-06-18 13:45 C00L: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/992229 coldrain - Vena [Involved]]
2016-06-18 13:46 smallbeans: how to spam that message?
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: slash (/) np
2016-06-18 13:46 smallbeans: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/992229 coldrain - Vena [Involved]]
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: there :D
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: you cant spam it doe
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: you can only type it in once
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: since
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: it doesnt allow you to spam more
2016-06-18 13:46 C00L: xd
2016-06-18 13:46 smallbeans: oh I didn't know that can be use on editing :D
2016-06-18 13:47 smallbeans: Oh reallyXD
2016-06-18 13:47 C00L: peppy blocks the spam abuse x-x
2016-06-18 13:49 smallbeans: :(
2016-06-18 13:49 C00L: 00:04:012 (4,5) -
2016-06-18 13:49 C00L: you could do something like this
2016-06-18 13:49 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5417014
2016-06-18 13:49 C00L: you could stack 5 to get into the harder flow rather than a really long jump
2016-06-18 13:50 C00L: 00:07:358 (4,5,6) -
2016-06-18 13:50 C00L: the angle these are at right now is really awkward
2016-06-18 13:51 C00L: stacking this into triplets would be much better
2016-06-18 13:51 smallbeans: Can't really get why so close since it has a drum sound
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: 00:03:320 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: since
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: these first 4
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: would be less intenser
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: and the 5 would lead onto the slider
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: which would lead into the harder parts of the song
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: and the jump between 4 and 5
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: would emphasise the 5 more
2016-06-18 13:52 C00L: since the previous one emphasised the slider more
2016-06-18 13:53 C00L: which doesnt have a sound as such
2016-06-18 13:53 C00L: oh nvm
2016-06-18 13:53 C00L: it does
2016-06-18 13:53 smallbeans: I need to learn how to have speed engkish typing
2016-06-18 13:53 smallbeans: lol
2016-06-18 13:53 C00L: xD
2016-06-18 13:54 smallbeans: I made it closer to 00:04:243 and keep the distance 1.0x does this okay?
2016-06-18 13:54 smallbeans: forget a -
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: 00:04:243
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: cant click it
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: and yea
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: thats fine
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: 00:07:358 (4,5,6) -
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: then
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: stack this
2016-06-18 13:55 C00L: since the angle is pretty awkward to hit
2016-06-18 13:56 C00L: 00:18:666 (6) -
2016-06-18 13:56 C00L: x:284
2016-06-18 13:57 C00L: y:172
2016-06-18 13:57 C00L: this will put the note at an angle to the slider
2016-06-18 13:57 C00L: which will create better flow
2016-06-18 13:57 C00L: since the slider is curved
2016-06-18 13:58 C00L: 00:20:743 (2) -
2016-06-18 13:58 C00L: you could delete this
2016-06-18 13:58 C00L: since there is no sound on it
2016-06-18 14:01 smallbeans: 1/4 changed to straight / changed the position and curve about slider / changed to slider to cover the vocal sound
2016-06-18 14:02 C00L: 00:35:858 (2,3) -
2016-06-18 14:02 C00L: dont stack this
2016-06-18 14:02 C00L: try this
2016-06-18 14:02 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5417081
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: 00:57:089 (1,2) -
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: and i really dont think this is neccessary
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: and
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: em
2016-06-18 14:03 C00L: the song ends
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: suddenly
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: if you want i can edit the mp3
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: to make it fade out
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: let me know when you finish
2016-06-18 14:04 C00L: brb
2016-06-18 14:07 smallbeans: it's really a full song lol
2016-06-18 14:08 smallbeans: finish
2016-06-18 14:08 C00L: really thats the ful song?
2016-06-18 14:08 smallbeans: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vena_&#40;album&#41;
2016-06-18 14:08 smallbeans: first song
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: )_)
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: i see
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: em
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: and
2016-06-18 14:09 C00L: sec
2016-06-18 14:10 smallbeans: many people mod I should make this for ending but I have nothing to do lol
2016-06-18 14:10 smallbeans: shouldn't
2016-06-18 14:10 C00L: em
2016-06-18 14:10 C00L: you should consider changing the AR to 9,8
2016-06-18 14:10 C00L: 00:57:089 (1,2) -
2016-06-18 14:10 C00L: this
2016-06-18 14:11 C00L: you could delte this
2016-06-18 14:11 C00L: since its only the word fuck your mapping to
2016-06-18 14:11 C00L: :;
2016-06-18 14:12 C00L: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/986288 coldrain - Vena [Furious]]
2016-06-18 14:12 C00L: change the AR on this to 9,5
2016-06-18 14:14 smallbeans: the same as Involved?
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: no change the AR of involved
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: to
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: 9,8
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: and furios
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: to 9,5
2016-06-18 14:14 C00L: since involved is really really harder
2016-06-18 14:15 C00L: and faster ar is like
2016-06-18 14:15 C00L: so so good
2016-06-18 14:16 smallbeans: okay
2016-06-18 14:16 C00L: tell me when your ready to move onto the next diff :D
2016-06-18 14:17 C00L: this song is catchy btw
2016-06-18 14:18 smallbeans: sorry, now really finish xd
2016-06-18 14:19 C00L: no worries
2016-06-18 14:19 C00L: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/986288 coldrain - Vena [Furious]]
2016-06-18 14:20 C00L: tbh with you
2016-06-18 14:20 C00L: furious
2016-06-18 14:20 C00L: is really good
2016-06-18 14:21 C00L: plays fantastic
2016-06-18 14:21 smallbeans: what
2016-06-18 14:21 C00L: its good
2016-06-18 14:21 C00L: i cant find anything
2016-06-18 14:22 smallbeans: In fact I expect you would say it looks like a s... xdddd
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: nah nah
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: furious looks great
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: ill check the diff below if you want
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: since i cant find anything here
2016-06-18 14:22 C00L: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/986291 coldrain - Vena [Rigorous]]
2016-06-18 14:23 smallbeans: great :)
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: 00:11:166 (6,7,8,9) -
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: you could decrease the DS between them
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: by 0,1 each note
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: since it gets less intense
2016-06-18 14:25 C00L: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5417218
2016-06-18 14:26 C00L: again its pretty good
2016-06-18 14:27 smallbeans: lol
2016-06-18 14:27 smallbeans: do I need to change 00:42:319 there?
2016-06-18 14:27 smallbeans: sorry 00:42:319(4)-
2016-06-18 14:28 C00L: 00:42:320 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2016-06-18 14:28 smallbeans: lol
2016-06-18 14:28 C00L: nah you can leave this
2016-06-18 14:28 smallbeans: 00:42:319 (4) -
2016-06-18 14:28 smallbeans: OK
2016-06-18 14:28 C00L: :D
2016-06-18 14:28 C00L: great map man
Thank you for your IRC mod! But sorry I really really want to keep the last slider. :P


And thanks to all again. :)
LeQuack
NM from my Queue

General
  1. Add in a kiai tme to the song (Maybe from 00:35:627 to 00:50:396 )
00:32:858 (2) - I think this is missing a bass drum hitsound
00:44:858 (4) - I would have this more to the left so the previous slider flows into it nicely
00:50:396 (1) - Extend to red tick
00:12:550 (4) - Try having this start on the next red tick instead
00:22:127 (5,6) - This isn't the only pace you have done this, but i feel this and the other places should follow the same rhythm as the other places (00:21:435 (3) for example)
00:29:627 (7) - Here's another instance i was talking about
00:50:396 (1) - Same suggestion as other diff

Only a short mod because map is short but it is looking good
GL with the map :D
Electoz
Hi, from my modding queue~
And I rarely skip maps in my queue lol

[General]

  1. There's an unsnapped green line at 00:57:084 on all difficulties.
  2. Difficulty names are a bit random here, try to name something simpler so at least people can tell which diffs is easier/harder than other ones.
  3. Just my preference but 00:57:089 (1) isn't really needed, the song itself already ended at 00:50:396 (1) .


[Briefness]

  1. 00:04:243 (1,2) - Doesn't really sound fit when you have the beat spacing in the middle of stanza, better end that slider on 00:05:627 and add sth on 00:06:089 .
  2. 00:48:550 (3) - I'm pretty sure it's supposed to end on 00:49:935 .


[Moderate]

  1. 00:20:858 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - As for this part, I think this is Normal right? (Correct me if I'm wrong) but this chain seems pretty long and could be tiring for players considering bpm of this song is pretty high, in my opinion some objects are unnecessary as they land on nothing like 00:24:089 which could have simply been shorten to 00:23:858 . This way will leave 00:24:089 empty which is good because that will give a bit of a rest in gameplay. Same applies to 00:27:781 - 00:31:473 .


Totally not a fan of this kind of song so I only modded 2 diffs here, sry and good luck~
Aihuro
Hey smallbeans! NM from my queue

Briefness:
  1. 00:03:320 (1) - I personally don't really like this slider's shape. It looks kinda messy, why not turn it into a normal slider? Or if you want to keep the shape, just do something like this instead: http://puu.sh/pybTj/49ced7e50e.jpg. I'm not really good at these kind of sliders
  2. 00:04:243 (1,2) - I suggest you make them look similar. Just to make the mapset look more neater, especially when it's an easy diff. (Just select the copy and paste at section "edit")
  3. 00:12:550 (2,1) - Please stack these two notes.
  4. 00:37:935 (2) - It's just my opinion though, but I think this slider's shape looks a little bit nazi. Try to check other ranked mapsets with these kind of slider shapes. It will really help with the form. Also, you can check out this forum: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Slider_Techniques
  5. 00:43:935 (2,1) - Stack them please.
  6. 00:48:550 (3) - I'm not sure if this slider's tail is ending on the correct beat. . it also can just be me though but I think that you should end the slider here: 00:49:935 - . Makes more sense to me.
  7. I guess that is it. Very decent diff, but it definitely needs more work of course. Any tip that I can give you is that forum. Your slider shapes are a little bit messy but other than that, good job!
Moderate:
  1. 00:19:012 (1,1) - This stack is just a little bit off. Move 00:20:858 (1) - to X: 200 Y: 163.
  2. 00:23:627 (4) - If you do a 1/1 slider. . you miss a very important beat. . (It's only imo though, not sure if this is a problem) So maybe do something like this instead: http://puu.sh/pycES/a559e793f2.jpg It's also more fun to play!
  3. 00:25:473 (2) - Just like I mentioned in Briefness. . please try to improve you slider's shape.
  4. 00:43:704 (3,4) - Maybe try to make them look alike? Just copy and paste again.
  5. 00:46:704 (1,4) - Don't really like this overlap here, looks messy. Please try to avoid the overlap please.
  6. This was a very good diff! Good job~
Uneath:
  1. Nice diff.


I'm not really good at modding Insanes.
Anyway, very nice map, just the easy diff needs more work, other than that it looks fine~
Good luck! :)
ncuh
I don't want to map blanket anymore...

Sorry :(
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