1. Don't rely on metadata from older beatmaps or check the proof in cases someone provides you one. The reference listed is website of her album, which is correct when it comes to title. However, you must use prefered romanization if the artist has one, in this case, she's using Yura Hatsuki, it's even on the same website. You might argue that the link actually shows the previous order, but that's not an official reference. Domain name means nothing to us, as it could've been picked by someone else or her preferred domain could had been taken before she bought it, you might even notice that it says "hatuki", so it's not really a reference for romanization, please use what's on her website.
2. Hitsounds bother me here a lot. While the arrangement of claps seems to be good, I quite don't get the custom hitsound you're using. The song is having some pop-rock type of snare, but you're using typical snare for electronical music, which doesn't sound that good here, you could find a better replacement for it. If you decide to change this, you can PM me for some recommendation.
3. As I said, claps are fine, whistles seem to be fine too, but the cymbals are really out of place. The usage in some places is following music properly - when there's a cymbal in the music, you use a finish. That's fine, but some places use it to emphasize vocals, which makes it sound really loud and it feels unnatural for listener, somehow the player knows the cymbal is not going to be here. I'd like you to go through all difficulties and check all the finishes, especially during the kiai. The best example is Kami's Hard (and the biggest concern is his difficulty regarding this, but be sure to check it on all diffs) from 00:43:683 - to 00:55:991 - , there are 6 cymbals (in the end of this part, one looks echoed, so let's assume there are 7) but hitsounds have 20 finishes of cymbal type. What's however interesting is that through 00:52:914 - 00:55:991 - you follow the cymbals quite well, apart from 00:53:683 - 00:54:645 - 00:55:414 - but they don't sound that terrible. The thing is that emphasizing vocals as you did can be simply done using whistle - for example 01:03:876 (2,3) - sounds absolutely great with whistles only, because it somehow emphasizes the vocals by the whistle, but highlights the cymbal much better. Less can sometimes be more and having contrast between cymbal-following finishes and vocal-following whistles is musically more intelligent and as a listener, much more pleasant to hear. If you want, I can point out every single place with present issue, but I guess going through it once by yourself is enough.
4. Another thing about how the map sounds and last, but things like 00:54:549 - should not be audible if you decide to do such thing. The ends end on nothing, so hearing any feedback here is annoying and doesn't make much sense. This applies to Kami's hard again. The way Insane used this is fine.

1. When discussing this map, there was a concern from other BN about overlapping objects. It's not a big thing, but I agreed that it looks unpolished when some parts overlap objects, some parts have visible gaps, not sure if it was your intention.
2. 00:20:030 (3,4) - This might look a bit confusing to a Normal player. We know that newbies often miss a repeat with the slider start. That's because the repeat is simply closer to the previous object and generally, they like playing what's closer first. I'd really recommend a different angle of this slider, it can be solved for example this way, it's better to avoid potential confusion on lewer diffs.
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3. 00:51:183 (4,5,6,7) - and 00:54:260 (3,4,5) - Judging from personal knowledge (what I remember was struggle for me when I was beginner and what my friends mostly complained about when I introduced them to the game) and replays of new players on this map, I must say these are the places where the newbies really get off the track. They usually start to spam 50s or 100s here, which is understandable because the transition from the white ticks to the red ticks is making a tricky rhythm. The players get the most of the rhythmical feedback from drums, so playing vocals while hearing the drums between them is what makes them confused. However, that's different for sliders, because they're easier to hit and don't require so gimmicky clicking as circles in such a pattern. I highly recommend you to replace these patterns with some sliders, eventually with a repeat, so the rhythm is easily understandable for the newbies. I could even say that the way Hard is mapped would feel less tricky for newbies that how the Normal is currently mapped.

1. I really like this difficulty, quite a lot, but there's one thing that doesn't seem to fit. 00:42:337 (3) - Is the only 1/2 slider in the whole map and the problem is that it's probably too short, which might for sure surprise the player a lot, because it's unusually rhythm and pattern and in comparison with the rest of the map, it's not corresponding the difficulty of other patterns.

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

If you have searched it and you can see that every ranked song of this artist use "Hatsuki Yura" rather than "Yura Hatsuki" such as the Eclipse Parade ranked last month,so i think there's no need to change it any more.btw,i've asked it to kwan and she said she will have a check of it.

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

You can hear the claps sounds clearly and that shows the rhythm of the music,i think this is enough.From my point of view,i think currently using clap is good.

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

That doestn't matters a lot cause players don't click the end of a slider and will not affect the feeling of play.

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

I use finish in every big white lines in kiai part and also use it to emphasis some important sound.you can hear there have the same sound in these places.00:52:914 - 00:55:991 - 00:53:683 - 00:54:645 - 00:55:414 -why not using the same hitsound? by the way,I use claps in every 2nd and 4th white lines and whistles in mostly red lines in kiai part to keep a rhythm and lively feeling.Besides kiai part,i use whistles to emphasis the highest tune of voice.

IamKwaN wrote:

As per your request.

kamisamaaa wrote:

I use those finish at kiai part just because I want to emphasize the voice here, not follow the cymbals only. tbh, the hitsounds here is a little bit loud. but I feel its really sounds fine to me. at last I deleted the finish at 01:03:876 (2,3) - and add a normal-finish at 00:38:876 (4) - . decrease the volume to 70%

kamisamaaa wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

As per your request.

艹死骏骏！给我来当翻译啊！不是我不想回！大段论文我TM的看不懂啊！

Wafu wrote:

I already talked about this. We're all aware that you wanted to emphasize the voice, but you have a wide opportunity of using other hitsounds, be it custom or default, which would in any case sound better. Usage of the same hitsound make everything sound the same and destroy the point of emphasis. Using different sound puts some emphasis on voice for example and another type of hitsound can put emphasis on the cymbal. Different instruments being emphasized by different hitsounds provide better and more logical highlighting. Especially if we consider how strictly cymbals work.

Underforest wrote:

Quick mod here for Kami's Hard

00:05:799 (4,1,2) - this pattern is too hard and overmapped, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5735730
00:46:376 (4,1) - avoid large jumps please
01:09:837 (5,6) - same

good luck

IamKwaN wrote:

艹死黃瓜，死都不翻譯！

Wafu on discord wrote:

3/2 rhythms are a disaster for newbies.

Wafu wrote:

When discussing this map, there was a concern from other BN about overlapping objects. It's not a big thing, but I agreed that it looks unpolished when some parts overlap objects, some parts have visible gaps, not sure if it was your intention.

Doyak wrote:

Why did you delete so many finishes? Wafu's concern was mostly about Hard diff, but you deleted necessary finishes on your diff as well...
00:41:953 - 00:43:299 - 00:43:683 - 00:49:837 - 01:02:145 - 01:05:222 - 01:05:607 - 01:05:991 - They all have actual cymbal sounds and there's no reason to not use finishes on these. Just add them and use the hitsound copier again, then fix each diff if necessary. Your hitsounds has gone inconsistent throughout the diffs again, like only on Normal 00:41:376 - has a finish sound and 00:41:953 - doesn't, which should be swapped like Easy/Insane. Make sure you change every diff when applying hitsound changes. The best way to do it is using hitsound copier._(:з」∠)_.... fixed

[Easy]
* 00:40:607 (1,2,3,4) - This has created even worse problem, which is a 3/2 gap that makes polarity issue. Use http://puu.sh/qo4lx/cab3686cf8.jpg this option.3/2 is quite hard to play,i know the feeling.fixed that but using another placement

Wafu on discord wrote:

3/2 rhythms are a disaster for newbies.

[Normal]

Wafu wrote:

When discussing this map, there was a concern from other BN about overlapping objects. It's not a big thing, but I agreed that it looks unpolished when some parts overlap objects, some parts have visible gaps, not sure if it was your intention.

This hasn't fixed. It surely looks a bit unpolished. Though I don't care about that much, this can be improved. On a side note, that "other BN" is Sonnyc._(:з」∠)_I tried to fix the overlap problem,but it seems that i was misunderstand it.did you means the overlap between the object next to each other in timeline?I changed the ds snap to 1.23,maybe that looks better

[Kami's Hard]
* I guess you need to move your hitsound sampleset to S:C2 because the hitsounds are changed. After you do this, ask Hanazawa Kana to delete soft-sliderslide.wav.He would like to use the default clap sounds and slience the sliderside so just use the custom1

Doyak wrote:

[Kami's Hard]
* I guess you need to move your hitsound sampleset to S:C2 because the hitsounds are changed. After you do this, ask Hanazawa Kana to delete soft-sliderslide.wav.
* 00:49:068 - Whistle
* 01:05:607 - 01:05:991 - They actually have cymbal sounds, so maybe you can use finishes by that logic.

Underforest wrote:

gratz

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

SteveRowland wrote:

Triggered by the wrong name order, now it doesn't even find it under the artist when sorting by artist ingame... 葉月ゆら hatsuki (preferred) yu ra - there is only one way to order that and that is family name then first name. The ingame sorting uses romanized version to order even when using japanese metadata and language - suddenly 葉月ゆら is sorted after 雪 and in the Y section?
http://i.imgur.com/c0XGUt2.png - wrong order
http://i.imgur.com/xL5Fmyr.png - correct order of ALL other Hatsuki Yura maps

And relying on japanese to romanize for you is not a good idea, they will put stuff like tinami for chinami for 千 character (because that's how you type it on jp keyboard, you use it to save you a keyboard stroke) and other horrible romanizations like that... not to mention her website says haTUki (cause thats how you type つ)
Remember that romanization is not a japanese system, it is made by westerners to make understanding japanese easier, it isnt about preference as mentioned in ranking rules, it is about being wrong. The prefered romanization is the haTSUki over hadzuki/hazuki since thats the reading is つ and not づ.

Not sure if this is possible to fix without unranking first, if not then whatever but for future please nominators for the sake of us weebs don't put Japanese names in wrong order especially when there are already maps in the correct order and it screws ingame search and sorting.

ありがとう

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BN for help.

SPOILER

SteveRowland wrote:

And relying on japanese to romanize for you is not a good idea, they will put stuff like tinami for chinami for 千 character (because that's how you type it on jp keyboard, you use it to save you a keyboard stroke) and other horrible romanizations like that... not to mention her website says haTUki (cause thats how you type つ)

SteveRowland wrote:

I understand where you are coming from but literally the only thing it does right now is making it harder to have beatmaps grouped by artist (in both English and Japanese language of the game which is making it even worse as suddenly 葉月 is sorted next to ゆ) with the already quite limited sorting methods available in the osu client.
I know that BN is not an easy task but it really feels like this was going against years old tradition of 100 other maps before for no apparent reason just to have something to point out about metadata :/ Sure you can lawyer it from that sentence in ranking rules and all but it was completely unnecessary and all it does is it confuses players and makes the map less likely to be played together with the old maps, which is a shame because its a great map.

This isn't the first instance of this which is why I'm actually posting about it, I've been burned by this several times in the past and its just annoying for players.
Maybe with osu!next we will be able to sort by Japanese metadata or something but until then please keep consistency with traditions, there is so many players with OCD and this kind of thing really hurts

SteveRowland wrote:

I understand where you are coming from but literally the only thing it does right now is making it harder to have beatmaps grouped by artist (in both English and Japanese language of the game which is making it even worse as suddenly 葉月 is sorted next to ゆ) with the already quite limited sorting methods available in the osu client.
I know that BN is not an easy task but it really feels like this was going against years old tradition of 100 other maps before for no apparent reason just to have something to point out about metadata :/ Sure you can lawyer it from that sentence in ranking rules and all but it was completely unnecessary and all it does is it confuses players and makes the map less likely to be played together with the old maps, which is a shame because its a great map.

This isn't the first instance of this which is why I'm actually posting about it, I've been burned by this several times in the past and its just annoying for players.
Maybe with osu!next we will be able to sort by Japanese metadata or something but until then please keep consistency with traditions, there is so many players with OCD and this kind of thing really hurts