Yura Hatsuki - Nanka Ii Koto · forum

Hanazawa Kana

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-05-22T04:26:42+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月5日 at 8:09:35

Artist: Yura Hatsuki
Title: Nanka Ii Koto
Source: がんばれ！メメ子ちゃん
Tags: La Pucelle opening Seifumeigetsu 清風明月 kamisamaaa
BPM: 156
Filesize: 3063kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.34 stars, 89 notes)
Insane (4.53 stars, 282 notes)
Kami's Hard (3.46 stars, 232 notes)
Normal (2.11 stars, 148 notes)

Download: Yura Hatsuki - Nanka Ii Koto
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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卧槽什么辣鸡图删了

Kami's Hard by kamisamaaa
osu need more Hatsuki Yura!

thank you very much

Momizi
Misure
-NanoRIPE-
Mei
Karia
Cellina
Pata-Mon
Narcissu
__Ag
_Stan
Frenkie09
[Charlie Lam]
Kyle Y
Streliteela
Flower
Wafu
Underforest
Minakami Yuki

Doyak

rebub
Minakami Yuki

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Minakami Yuki

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__Ag

611 posts

Joined July 2011

__Ag 2016-05-30T05:08:00+00:00

沙发

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-05-31T12:51:42+00:00

__Ag wrote:
沙发

wa 是琪老板

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-06-01T04:40:56+00:00

我不喜歡m4m……因為可能不得不摸我討厭的曲子。做完了可以隨便找我要摸，作為古代鹹魚我也就這麼點價值了

過意不去的話就這個好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/438512

Momizi

275 posts

Joined June 2013

Momizi 2016-06-02T11:15:06+00:00

回摸
[General]
开头部分的滑条不静音听着怪怪的。如果鼓点密集音乐多的话倒是听不出来这个，但是柔和段（开头）很容易就听出来，还是建议消音
静音文件http://puu.sh/pdQxk/34642c5f50.wav，名字改成soft-sliderslide，当然这个需要custom音效组。
colours 可以用自定义，不过不改也不是大事
[Insane]
00:08:683 (3,6) - 这种最好不碰到，虽然玩的时候可能看不到这种碰到的，但是editor整洁也不会有什么坏处
00:09:645 (1,3) - same
00:11:760 (3,5) - 尽量不擦边
00:17:145 (5,6,7,8) - 往下面移一点，现在这样子看着8有点突出，感觉顺着连打的弧度，那个滑条的弧度对不上比如246 198左右
00:10:414 (3,1) - 不擦边吧，上面也说了，想不到更加好的排列最好是不擦边或者stack
00:29:837 (5) - 好像是为了跟到vocal？实际上打图感受不到这里，但是建议还是跟着音乐走，比如红线或者蓝线
00:30:607 (3) - ctrl+G可能flow更加好
00:44:837 (7) - 这样子打着也没问题，不过我感觉还是和前面一样放到左上角可能会好点，一个完整的梗不会显得这里比较突出
01:06:953 (1) - 这里感觉不应该减速，相反的我还觉得应该速度快一点或者改成跳

nc part

NC最好不要用的过于频繁，按照辅导员的话说是最好不要乱用。一般是每个大白线或者两个大白线（有些歌曲可能重音在红线也可)也就是重音点加一次nc
00:15:222 (1,1) - remove nc and 00:15:991 (2) - nc here
00:21:183 (1,1,1) - remove and 00:22:145 (2) -
00:24:453 (1,1) -
00:25:222 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这种看起来有一个整体的在我看来nc不nc都可以。所以随你
00:27:722 (1) - remove

还不错，比我厉害
[Hard]
00:08:491 (2) - 没有stack好
00:17:145 (4,5,6,7,1) - hard一般最多是三连，不过看难度而言，这个BPM应该五连没事
00:48:107 (1) - remove nc 参照开头00:43:683 (1) - 两节一nc（或者你全改成1节1nc
00:51:183 (1) - ↑
01:06:953 (2,3) -additions用 drum clap当然音量要低一点，因为默认的音效组声音挺大的？
01:14:260 (6) - 删了改成大白线单独的一个note吧
因为我自己也不会做hard，所以也没什么好水的
[Normal]
2.02..其实稍微改改说不定就能二星下了，就不用easy了（误
00:00:991 (2) - 用这种排列怎么样，更加符合flow不会有点反着的感觉，因为normal是新手玩的，你现在的这个可能对新手有点难，因为要翻过来移动到下个note https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5295463
00:14:453 (5) - normal建议不要用四连以上，我可能不是唯一一个提出的，因为我也被众多的modder提到个这个（
00:17:530 (5) - 首尾都finish？还有00:18:299 (6) - 的开头
00:32:145 (3,5) - 碰到了
00:35:222 (3) - 四连
[Easy]
请滑条消音！！！

摸完了，感觉还不错

。而且还好歌曲我也还听的惯，要是不喜欢的歌曲就是折磨了，嘻嘻。我自己也是个新手，也没什么能多说的，总之GL吧

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-02T11:56:46+00:00

Momizi wrote:
回摸
[General]
开头部分的滑条不静音听着怪怪的。如果鼓点密集音乐多的话倒是听不出来这个，但是柔和段（开头）很容易就听出来，还是建议消音
静音文件http://puu.sh/pdQxk/34642c5f50.wav，名字改成soft-sliderslide，当然这个需要custom音效组。好
colours 可以用自定义，不过不改也不是大事
[Insane]
00:08:683 (3,6) - 这种最好不碰到，虽然玩的时候可能看不到这种碰到的，但是editor整洁也不会有什么坏处好
00:09:645 (1,3) - same 好
00:11:760 (3,5) - 尽量不擦边好
00:17:145 (5,6,7,8) - 往下面移一点，现在这样子看着8有点突出，感觉顺着连打的弧度，那个滑条的弧度对不上比如246 198左右好
00:10:414 (3,1) - 不擦边吧，上面也说了，想不到更加好的排列最好是不擦边或者stack 好
00:29:837 (5) - 好像是为了跟到vocal？实际上打图感受不到这里，但是建议还是跟着音乐走，比如红线或者蓝线噫这里是snap错位置了改了
00:30:607 (3) - ctrl+G可能flow更加好改了个角度
00:44:837 (7) - 这样子打着也没问题，不过我感觉还是和前面一样放到左上角可能会好点，一个完整的梗不会显得这里比较突出你说的对不过这里改的话工程量有点大我先记下来
01:06:953 (1) - 这里感觉不应该减速，相反的我还觉得应该速度快一点或者改成跳这里先不改了因为前面那个滑条我做的打起来就有点粘的感觉,我是想在这里缓冲一下和后面简单的部分连接可能会好一点
nc part
NC最好不要用的过于频繁，按照辅导员的话说是最好不要乱用。一般是每个大白线或者两个大白线（有些歌曲可能重音在红线也可)也就是重音点加一次nc
00:15:222 (1,1) - remove nc and 00:15:991 (2) - nc here
00:21:183 (1,1,1) - remove and 00:22:145 (2) -
00:24:453 (1,1) -
00:25:222 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这种看起来有一个整体的在我看来nc不nc都可以。所以随你嗯这里先不改了因为是左右左右的梗感觉拆着好看一点
00:27:722 (1) - remove All fixed
还不错，比我厉害噫别这样我这种辣鸡只会做这种节奏简单排列简单的图
[Normal]
2.02..其实稍微改改说不定就能二星下了，就不用easy了（误噫
00:00:991 (2) - 用这种排列怎么样，更加符合flow不会有点反着的感觉，因为normal是新手玩的，你现在的这个可能对新手有点难，因为要翻过来移动到下个note https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5295463 好
00:14:453 (5) - normal建议不要用四连以上，我可能不是唯一一个提出的，因为我也被众多的modder提到个这个（嗯我自己打的时候也感觉有点难受改成两个1/2了
00:17:530 (5) - 首尾都finish？还有00:18:299 (6) - 的开头好
00:32:145 (3,5) - 碰到了好
00:35:222 (3) - 四连改了
[Easy]
请滑条消音！！！哈哈改了这个normal不消音确实有点吵

摸完了，感觉还不错。而且还好歌曲我也还听的惯，要是不喜欢的歌曲就是折磨了，嘻嘻。我自己也是个新手，也没什么能多说的，总之GL吧

感谢给包爷爷~~

Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-06-02T12:07:59+00:00

kana god
[General]

这个combo color, 没看错的话是默认的吧... 自定义一个啊
全部默认音效么主要是滑条不消音的话Easy和Normal里面太明显了

[Insane]

00:01:376 (3,1,2,3) - 像这样的flow可能太平了尤其是前面空了一拍的情况下感觉可能不是太好而且00:01:760 (1,3) - 这个位置关系也不太美观试试类似这种的空拍之后拐个角可能好点？
00:05:030 (3,4,5) - 这个距离太近的话感觉stack效果就不好了 stack之后跳一下我觉得挺好的类似这样
00:11:760 (3,5) - 粘上了点 5放在200|384？顺便00:12:530 (1) - 也是感觉可以靠上一点点避免粘
00:11:953 (4,3) - 包这个感觉不如
00:14:453 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - 个人感觉这个摆的有点小气了就是太近了打的时候可能没有跳跃的感觉？可以摆开一点角度大一点
00:20:799 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 感觉这个分组还是00:20:799 (1,2,1) - //00:21:376 (2,1) - //00:21:760 (2,1) - 比较合理吧从vocal上来看后面那组就不错啊...
00:27:722 (1,2) - 这个距离还是太小了而且00:27:145 (3,4,1) - 这个flow和我第一条说的差不多一个意思感觉这里顺向跟过去的flow可能不太好移动感比较差然后00:28:298 (2,3,1) - 这三个单独拿出来看的话我觉得这样的flow可能相对好一些你这个可能有点太钝了这个角度
01:00:222 (7,8) - 角度可能太平不好打试试这个样子的？
01:06:953 (1,2,1) - 这个相对位置可能有一点微妙？主要是01:06:953 (1) - 这个突然减速离前面就最好不要离前面太近吧有些猝不及防太突然了的感觉干脆01:06:568 (9) - 放在18|252包一下和前面相接角度可能也会更顺；01:06:953 (1,2) - 可以stack？或者不stack就不要这么近了吧；01:07:337 (2,1) - 这两个距离感觉感觉太近了从移动感觉来说可能不太好的样子？所以我推荐后面东西再另起一个不那么近的点吧
NC的话不是很理解为什么00:06:568 (1) - 00:09:645 (1) - 00:12:530 (1) - 00:15:799 (1) - 之类的放NC而不是后面的长白线上放NC...
以及00:05:030 (3) - 00:32:914 (6) - 建议NC；00:41:953 - NC 00:42:337 - 不要NC 00:42:914 - NC；00:45:030 - 00:48:107 - 00:57:337 - 01:00:414 - 01:06:568 - NC都放在滑条上不要放后面

[Kami's Hard]

widescreen support取消吧
00:04:260 (1,1) - 太近了吧0.0 顺便后面放个NC？
00:07:145 (2,3,4) - 这flow感觉不太好不如3放在296|192附近
00:07:914 (5,2) - 没叠好？
00:09:068 (4,5) - 分别ctrl+G?主要是NC可以跳一下的感觉
00:14:068 (4) - 不如就ctrl+G
00:25:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉这里太开而00:26:376 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里又太密感觉可以调和一下
00:35:991 (1) - 感觉这个减速肯定会被别人吐槽不是很有意义的吧..
00:45:030 - NC？
01:11:376 - NC放这？加上01:12:722 - 也上个NC？

[Normal]

00:14:453 (5) - 二次折返初见可能会读错呃我也好久不打Normal了不清楚不过比较少见就是后面的也是同理不过大概问题不大？这个问问别人吧...
00:52:914 - 呃finish是不是应该在这里或者都finish
~~cs4是不是有点难了考虑3.5或更低~~ 好吧思考了一下感觉是为了控星那就从长计议吧OwO

[Easy]

00:46:376 (4,5) - 距离多了一点点
00:55:991 (1) - ...这滑条怎么这么多点三点式应该也能拉出这个形状的吧
slider tick rate用1不好么...太多白点感觉有点眼花
NC数量考虑加一倍...这两条是个人建议
E和N感觉挺不错的。

god luck啊

-NanoRIPE-

2,059 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-02T12:48:56+00:00

Hi ~ M4M request

[Easy]
where is the drum (snare) hitsound? i suggest you must add clap for drum (snare) hitsound
00:03:683 (4) - New combo
00:09:837 (5) - ^
00:15:991 (5) - ^
00:17:530 (7) - add finish for this slider
00:22:145 (5) - New combo
00:28:299 (5) - ^
00:29:837 (7) - finish
00:34:453 (5) - ^
00:39:068 (3) - ^
00:40:607 (4) - New combo
00:47:530 (6) - ^
00:52:914 (5) - ^
00:59:068 (5) - ^
01:05:222 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:29:837 (4) - add finish
00:41:953 (3) - ^
00:52:914 (7) - ^
01:03:683 - 01:04:068 - ^
01:06:568 (4,6) - ^

[Kami's Hard]
00:29:837 (4) - finish
00:43:683 - 01:08:299 - for this section reduce the finish hitsound because that's freaking annoying ~

[Insane]
Increase HP to 6
and lower OD to 7
00:43:683 - 01:06:953 - same as hard,pls reduce the finish hitsound in this section ~

GL ~

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2016-06-02T13:36:04+00:00

Momizi wrote:
[Hard]
00:08:491 (2) - 没有stack好好
01:06:953 (2,3) -additions用 drum clap当然音量要低一点，因为默认的音效组声音挺大的？我压根没用clap 不过这里确实漏了音效

Misure wrote:
[Kami's Hard]
widescreen support取消吧好
00:07:145 (2,3,4) - 这flow感觉不太好不如3放在296|192附近恩改了
00:07:914 (5,2) - 没叠好？改了
00:45:030 - NC？恩确实漏了NC

垃圾舔屎

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Nanka Ii Koto
TitleUnicode:なんかいいこと
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:葉月ゆら
Creator:Hanazawa Kana
Version:Kami's Hard
Source:Ganbare! Memekochan
Tags:La Pucelle がんばれ！メメ子ちゃん opening Seifu meigetsu 清風明月 kamisamaaa
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垃圾舔屎自己弄code吧不给你单独传文件了
ps 我用了静音滑条的音效了的你要是想吧滑条静音直接吧所有音效组改成SC1就行别的都不用动
你的insane 01:06:953 (1) - 绿线速度改成0.5 你之前改错了

Hanazawa Kana

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Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-02T14:36:51+00:00

Misure wrote:
kana god
[General]
这个combo color, 没看错的话是默认的吧... 自定义一个啊嘛嘛我好懒
全部默认音效么主要是滑条不消音的话Easy和Normal里面太明显了
好,这个改了
[Insane]
00:01:376 (3,1,2,3) - 像这样的flow可能太平了尤其是前面空了一拍的情况下感觉可能不是太好而且00:01:760 (1,3) - 这个位置关系也不太美观试试类似这种的空拍之后拐个角可能好点？换了一个摆法
00:05:030 (3,4,5) - 这个距离太近的话感觉stack效果就不好了 stack之后跳一下我觉得挺好的类似这样也是换了一个摆法
00:11:760 (3,5) - 粘上了点 5放在200|384？顺便00:12:530 (1) - 也是感觉可以靠上一点点避免粘好
00:11:953 (4,3) - 包这个感觉不如这个感觉还好吧离着其实挺远的先放置play
00:14:453 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - 个人感觉这个摆的有点小气了就是太近了打的时候可能没有跳跃的感觉？可以摆开一点角度大一点主要是考虑到前面跳太大了强调不了后面的kiai了不过还是加了点距离
00:20:799 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 感觉这个分组还是00:20:799 (1,2,1) - //00:21:376 (2,1) - //00:21:760 (2,1) - 比较合理吧从vocal上来看后面那组就不错啊... 这边我先马克一下因为之前给包说不能滥用所以我这边先都做成一组
00:27:722 (1,2) - 这个距离还是太小了改了而且00:27:145 (3,4,1) - 这个flow和我第一条说的差不多一个意思感觉这里顺向跟过去的flow可能不太好移动感比较差主要是前面一直是左右跳这里想放点小跳缓一下~~其实是懒得改~~ 然后00:28:298 (2,3,1) - 这三个单独拿出来看的话我觉得这样的flow可能相对好一些你这个可能有点太钝了这个角度呃呃呃我这里好想和你的时间轴不太一样呢...不过大概意思我懂了这里也是先放置吧前面那里改的话我这里也跟着改
01:00:222 (7,8) - 角度可能太平不好打试试这个样子的？改了以后感觉flow有点差先保留吧
01:06:953 (1,2,1) - 这个相对位置可能有一点微妙？主要是01:06:953 (1) - 这个突然减速离前面就最好不要离前面太近吧有些猝不及防太突然了的感觉干脆01:06:568 (9) - 放在18|252包一下和前面相接角度可能也会更顺这个不要了吧这个滑条本来就很黏感觉间距再那么大就不太好打了；01:06:953 (1,2) - 可以stack？或者不stack就不要这么近了吧感觉不用吧因为前面两个滑条打的话感觉一般要切纸所以距离改小点好打些这里因为前面都比较近所以就先这样放着吧再几个modder说我再改；01:07:337 (2,1) - 这两个距离感觉感觉太近了从移动感觉来说可能不太好的样子？所以我推荐后面东西再另起一个不那么近的点吧好的刚才有点看乱了
NC的话不是很理解为什么00:06:568 (1) - 00:09:645 (1) - 00:12:530 (1) - 00:15:799 (1) - 之类的放NC而不是后面的长白线上放NC... 这里主要是想跟人声的段落不过都改了
以及00:05:030 (3) - 00:32:914 (6) - 建议NC；00:41:953 - NC 00:42:337 - 不要NC 00:42:914 - NC；00:45:030 - 00:48:107 - 00:57:337 - 01:00:414 - 01:06:568 - NC都放在滑条上不要放后面改了
[Normal]
00:14:453 (5) - 二次折返初见可能会读错呃我也好久不打Normal了不清楚不过比较少见就是后面的也是同理不过大概问题不大？这个问问别人吧...改了
00:52:914 - 呃finish是不是应该在这里或者都finish 改了
~~cs4是不是有点难了考虑3.5或更低~~ 好吧思考了一下感觉是为了控星那就从长计议吧OwO 噫
[Easy]
00:46:376 (4,5) - 距离多了一点点好
00:55:991 (1) - ...这滑条怎么这么多点三点式应该也能拉出这个形状的吧三点式有点不圆啊..
slider tick rate用1不好么...太多白点感觉有点眼花送分啊
NC数量考虑加一倍...这两条是个人建议好的
E和N感觉挺不错的。
god luck啊

米苏神罩我~~差点就remap了~~

@-NanoRIPE- fixed all NC issue and some finish sound
currently HP and OD is OK

@kamisamaaa 都改了

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2016-06-03T01:07:05+00:00

[Easy]

00:34:453 (5) - 我感觉还是加个NC为好

[Normal]

00:14:837 (6) - 漏了clap
00:35:607 (4) - ^
00:39:645 (5,6) - 感觉有点怪，换成1/1滑条加1/2滑条试试
00:43:683 (1) - 屁股漏clap
检查下24clap

[Hard]

00:07:914 (5,2) - 没叠好？
00:09:068 (4,5) - 考虑改成长滑条加note？简单点
00:35:991 (1) - 这个减速也有点迷
00:52:914 (1) - ^ 你可以试试改成一个note叠在后面的滑条头上这样的排列

[Insane]

00:08:683 (3,1) - 这两试着包一下
00:15:799 (1) - 蜜汁nc
00:20:222 (5) - 红线的人声最好别漏
00:25:607 (1,1) - 这个NC虽然意思到了，但我感觉不用比较好些
00:28:299 (1) - 这里也是红线漏的不太好
00:30:991 (4,5) - 我感觉以你这图的风格来说，这个间距有点远了
00:43:587 漏鼓
01:06:953 (2) - 讲道理，这个减速有点迷

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-03T01:37:42+00:00

Mei wrote:
[Easy]
00:34:453 (5) - 我感觉还是加个NC为好好

[Normal]
00:14:837 (6) - 漏了clap 改了
00:35:607 (4) - ^ 改了
00:39:645 (5,6) - 感觉有点怪，换成1/1滑条加1/2滑条试试试了几个排列感觉都不太和曲这里先放置吧
00:43:683 (1) - 屁股漏clap 改了
检查下24clap 好

[Insane]
00:08:683 (3,1) - 这两试着包一下好
00:15:799 (1) - 蜜汁nc 改的时候忘了删了
00:20:222 (5) - 红线的人声最好别漏好
00:25:607 (1,1) - 这个NC虽然意思到了，但我感觉不用比较好些听你的
00:28:299 (1) - 这里也是红线漏的不太好好
00:30:991 (4,5) - 我感觉以你这图的风格来说，这个间距有点远了把那个note删了
00:43:587 漏鼓这里先不改主要是想强调后面的人声而且换成三连的话打起来也不太舒服所以这里我感觉还是先空着
01:06:953 (2) - 讲道理，这个减速有点迷_(:з」∠)_ 都这么说的话那我把减速去了吧

感谢妹大师~

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2016-06-03T11:12:05+00:00

Hi w/

General

No custom color?
fine

Easy

Slider Tick should be 1
00:08:299 (3,4) - Only this rhythm is not same as others. Swap rhythm for consistency?
00:29:837 (3) - Consider to change to 1/1 slider and 1/1 note for music.
00:40:607 (1,2) - Two 1/1 slider is best imo
00:57:145 (2) - Adjust DS a bit more. Current DS looks messy.
01:06:376 (2,3) - Stack?
01:11:376 (4) - NC

Normal

00:22:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks a bit hard in Normal diff.. Here's suggesion
- 00:22:914 (3,4) - change to 1/1 slider
- 00:23:683 (5) - change to note and 1/2 reverse slider
00:29:837 (4,5) - Hmm.... change to 1/1 slider and 00:30:607 (6) - change this to two 1/2 slider
00:36:568 - Try this rhythm for vocal
SPOILER
00:40:030 (6) - clap on reverse
00:42:914 (5) - clap
I didn't point out rhythms. But 1/2 spam rhythms are really hard compared with Easy diff imo..

Kamisamaaaaaa

00:04:260 - I can't catch why you reduced sv at here..
00:05:799 (4,1,2,3) - Hard to read rhythm imo. Try to change (4) to note.
00:17:530 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 space and 1/2 space are almost same. Please replacement that..
00:35:991 (1,1) - Unsuitable pattern in Hard diff.
00:52:914 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:55:607 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Flow is really hard. Stack (2) on (1) and (4) on (3) at least.
tbh, I don't think this is Hard diff.

Insane

00:18:299 (3) - 1/2 is better with vocal.
00:28:683 (2) - Isn't it too close?
00:36:760 (3) - 1/2
00:55:799 (1) - 01:05:030 (1) - Are you sure that strooooooong beats on tail?
01:05:607 (3) - (280, 192)
01:06:953 (2) - change to two jump notes
01:12:722 (3,4,5) - Try to avoid linear flow. You can make more funnier flow

That's all, gl :3

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-03T12:40:04+00:00

Karia wrote:
Hi w/

General
No custom color? _(:з」∠)_okay fixed
fine

Easy
Slider Tick should be 1 fixed
00:08:299 (3,4) - Only this rhythm is not same as others. Swap rhythm for consistency? fixed,ctrl+g these two
00:29:837 (3) - Consider to change to 1/1 slider and 1/1 note for music.fixed
00:40:607 (1,2) - Two 1/1 slider is best imo fixed
00:57:145 (2) - Adjust DS a bit more. Current DS looks messy. fixed
01:06:376 (2,3) - Stack? fixed
01:11:376 (4) - NC fixed

Normal
00:22:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks a bit hard in Normal diff.. Here's suggesion
- 00:22:914 (3,4) - change to 1/1 slider
- 00:23:683 (5) - change to note and 1/2 reverse slider fixed,that's better than my former one
00:29:837 (4,5) - Hmm.... change to 1/1 slider and 00:30:607 (6) - change this to two 1/2 slider fixed
00:36:568 - Try this rhythm for vocal
SPOILER
fixed
00:40:030 (6) - clap on reverse fixed
00:42:914 (5) - clap fixed
I didn't point out rhythms. But 1/2 spam rhythms are really hard compared with Easy diff imo..u r right,but i can't find a way to follow both rhythm and voice well.Just waiting for other modders' opinion._(:з」∠)_ Maybe remap this diff.

Insane
00:18:299 (3) - 1/2 is better with vocal. fixed
00:28:683 (2) - Isn't it too close? fixed
00:36:760 (3) - 1/2 fixed
00:55:799 (1) - 01:05:030 (1) - Are you sure that strooooooong beats on tail? orz,i dont want to ignore it but maybe hard to play if change it to notes.Just have a mark here.
01:05:607 (3) - (280, 192) okay
01:06:953 (2) - change to two jump notes because the following part is easier so i dont want to have jumps here
01:12:722 (3,4,5) - Try to avoid linear flow. You can make more funnier flow okay,remaped this part

That's all, gl :3

thank you Karia chan~
quite useful

Cellina

Beatmap Nominator

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Cellina 2016-06-03T13:34:18+00:00

Kami's Hard

00:04:260 - useless sv change imo. they don't have any change of sound and sv change in hard diff is not recommended.
00:05:799 (4,1) - large ds, too hard for lower diff
00:24:837 (4,3) - stack error
00:35:991 (1) - same, useless sv change
00:46:376 (4,1) - ds is way to large when you compare it with other parts
01:06:568 - sv plz

Insane

Uhm... maybe AR 8.7?
00:28:683 (2,3) - ds is too small imo
00:34:453 (3) - NC? or instead of this you can remove 00:33:876 (1) - NC here and put 00:34:453 (3) -
00:37:433 (7) - there is no any drum sound
00:43:587 - there should be a note according to drum's sound...
00:49:453 (5) - Finish?
01:09:837 (3,4) - um... making a blanket looks better..

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-03T14:03:52+00:00

Cellina wrote:
Insane
Uhm... maybe AR 8.7? dont want to change this,because it will cause AR>10 when DT mod on
00:28:683 (2,3) - ds is too small imo it is,but it will be hard to do with a higher ds,so just keep it for now
00:34:453 (3) - NC? fixed or instead of this you can remove 00:33:876 (1) - NC here and put 00:34:453 (3) -
00:37:433 (7) - there is no any drum sound a little overmaped,but i think it's easier to play than a triple and a single click
00:43:587 - there should be a note according to drum's sound... It is,but hard to find a good placement so i just ignore it and pay more attention to the following voice
00:49:453 (5) - Finish? fixed
01:09:837 (3,4) - um... making a blanket looks better..fixed

Thank you~~

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-06-04T19:34:50+00:00

M4M

我的map：https://osu.ppy.sh/s/403924

[General]

提醒一下这个BG有跟rank图撞车，虽然无所谓，但有些麻婆会不喜欢。https://osu.ppy.sh/s/333426（噫，为什么你俩的图一左一右）
n-h的gap可能会稍微大了一点点

[Easy]

个人觉得不超星的时候可以把距离拉开一点点，你现在的ds在blanket的时候有一点点挤
于是有不少blanket问题挺明显的，比如00:06:760 (1,2,3) - 00:11:376 (3,1) - 等，不说了
00:52:530 (4,1) - 这里不太好看，把1弯一点，或者是用红锚点
00:54:068 (2,3) - 01:06:376 (2,3) - ez里一般是不会叠的，还是摆开
00:54:260 (3,4) - 不好看，微调一下位置

[Normal]

00:13:683 (3,4,5,6) - 像这一类，想点排列的方法吧，这么摆会感觉太随便太无聊
00:37:530 (1,2,3) - 挤在一起不太好
00:43:683 (1,2,3) - ^
00:40:030 (6,1) - nm这么摆并不好。保持你现在的思路可以这样
SPOILER
00:55:414 (6,1) - ^
00:42:722 - 这个音不建议漏，有鼓也有比较重要的人声

en没啥大问题，感觉就是整体排列还可以提高一下吧

[Hard]

00:04:260 (1) - hard里突然的50%我觉得很难读。实际上我觉得这里不是很需要变sv，一定要变的话试试75-80
00:08:683 (3,4,5) - 00:10:222 (3,4,5,1,2) - 连着这段全是直滑条，有点多，适当给一部分加点弯曲，弄点blanket什么的
00:19:837 (6,7) - 这里也是，用6包一下7感觉会更好。后面还有我就不说了
00:27:722 (4,1) - 这overlap不太好看啊，感觉用1包一下4就正好
00:35:991 (1) - 这样搞实在读不出是3/4……Hard这么玩我觉得实在不合适
00:52:914 (1) - 00:53:683 (1) - 01:06:568 (1) - ^
00:42:530 (2,3) - 节奏ctrl+G，跟人声更搭
00:45:799 (3,1) - 有点近，把1移到296,132看看
00:58:107 (3,4) - 有点近，给3弄弯试试
01:11:953 (1) - 结尾也是，变速幅度最好别那么大
最后就是考虑和nm的gap可能需要这个难度降一下星数

[Insane]

00:35:991 (1,2) - 1/4的话你这样ds就有点大了，即使是滑条尾
00:45:030 (1,4) - 他俩的位置关系来说，4可以顺时针转一个小角度会更好看。而且现在他俩还overlap了
00:54:260 (1,2) - 这里也是ds，尽量控制一下不超过3吧
01:10:222 (4,1) - 可以的话再放远点
感觉很不错。那几个ds大概也不是很必须要改的，看你想法

GL~

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-05T08:52:15+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
M4M

我的map：https://osu.ppy.sh/s/403924

[General]
提醒一下这个BG有跟rank图撞车，虽然无所谓，但有些麻婆会不喜欢。https://osu.ppy.sh/s/333426（噫，为什么你俩的图一左一右） maya 随便找张图都能撞...
n-h的gap可能会稍微大了一点点
我回来再调调nm

[Easy]
个人觉得不超星的时候可以把距离拉开一点点，你现在的ds在blanket的时候有一点点挤
于是有不少blanket问题挺明显的，比如00:06:760 (1,2,3) - 00:11:376 (3,1) - 等，不说了我等下再查一查
00:52:530 (4,1) - 这里不太好看，把1弯一点，或者是用红锚点好
00:54:068 (2,3) - 01:06:376 (2,3) - ez里一般是不会叠的，还是摆开好
00:54:260 (3,4) - 不好看，微调一下位置好

[Normal]
00:13:683 (3,4,5,6) - 像这一类，想点排列的方法吧，这么摆会感觉太随便太无聊好,回来我再重新排一下
00:37:530 (1,2,3) - 挤在一起不太好好
00:43:683 (1,2,3) - ^ 好
00:40:030 (6,1) - nm这么摆并不好。保持你现在的思路可以这样好
SPOILER
00:55:414 (6,1) - ^ 好
00:42:722 - 这个音不建议漏，有鼓也有比较重要的人声这里不改了,主要是为了强调那三声滴滴滴
en没啥大问题，感觉就是整体排列还可以提高一下吧

[Insane]
00:35:991 (1,2) - 1/4的话你这样ds就有点大了，即使是滑条尾你说得对,不过我不是很想改,这里那种停顿正好加跳会爽一点?,而且滑条1/4应该切一下指就过去了吧
00:45:030 (1,4) - 他俩的位置关系来说，4可以顺时针转一个小角度会更好看。而且现在他俩还overlap了好
00:54:260 (1,2) - 这里也是ds，尽量控制一下不超过3吧先不改了,~~盖着有点麻烦~~
01:10:222 (4,1) - 可以的话再放远点 yi 先放着吧
感觉很不错。那几个ds大概也不是很必须要改的，看你想法
GL~

感谢pata神~

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-06-07T01:29:31+00:00

[Easy]

音效建議和Normal一樣，低難度比高難度還吵有點不靠譜
00:41:953 (3,4) - 擦到好搓
00:46:760 (5) - 兩節NC ？
01:06:376 (2,3) - 其他地方你都跳掉了這邊也建議不連1/2，或者類似00:40:607 (1,2,3) - ，另外疊起來會好讀點

[Normal]

你的Hard GD非常的難，所以Normal 建議也弄難比如像https://osu.ppy.sh/b/804962 直接把1/2分開，而且相對來說容易讀圖了會送pp 一點，如果Hard GD改簡單一點就不用動了

[Kami's Hard]

諸如拆分1/4，overmap，超大變速，空拍接跳等等對Hard 來說太難了，因為Normal 連1/2都沒有拆開建議remap 弄簡單，當然如果normal 改難了就不用動了
00:05:030 (2) - 可以和00:33:876 (3) - 00:03:107 (1) - 一樣疊好或者拉開
00:17:433 (7) - 不建議overmap
00:58:683 (4) - spacing 比DS 重要
變速太挫而且倍率比Insane多出一倍不止……加上拆分的3/4滑條給人的感覺就是“納尼剛剛的是什麼，我好像松早了”

[Insane]

建議ar9
00:15:222 (5,6) - 這里連續8個都是偶數分組所以要疊應該00:15:607 (7,8) - 一起疊，要拆應該一起拆
00:17:433 (7) - 不建議overmap，因為你本來就沒有把應該跟的都跟上比如00:31:280 - ，有音不跟沒音overmap 和音樂出入太大了，原曲應該是完全沒有超過三連的連打的

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-07T02:11:51+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[Easy]
音效建議和Normal一樣，低難度比高難度還吵有點不靠譜好的
00:41:953 (3,4) - 擦到好搓好改了
00:46:760 (5) - 兩節NC ？yi 点岔了
01:06:376 (2,3) - 其他地方你都跳掉了這邊也建議不連1/2，或者類似00:40:607 (1,2,3) - ，另外疊起來會好讀點好的删掉了
[Normal]
你的Hard GD非常的難，所以Normal 建議也弄難比如像https://osu.ppy.sh/b/804962 直接把1/2分開，而且相對來說容易讀圖了會送pp 一點，如果Hard GD改簡單一點就不用動了嗯我在改难些吧
[Insane]
建議ar9原来想做成低点ar容易dt点,不过AR9确实好打很多,听你的
00:15:222 (5,6) - 這里連續8個都是偶數分組所以要疊應該00:15:607 (7,8) - 一起疊，要拆應該一起拆好拆了
00:17:433 (7) - 不建議overmap，因為你本來就沒有把應該跟的都跟上比如00:31:280 - ，有音不跟沒音overmap 和音樂出入太大了，原曲應該是完全沒有超過三連的連打的 yi 这个先保留后面那个我加了个note 主要是全是三连节奏不够送pp啊

感谢水仙神(或者该叫辅导员?)

__Ag

611 posts

Joined July 2011

__Ag 2016-06-07T04:37:55+00:00

IRC

12:02 __Ag: 00:02:530 (4) -
12:02 __Ag: 这个换成circle
12:03 Hanazawa Kana: 你的意思是两个单点吗
12:03 __Ag: 第一个放在400 228，第二个和00:03:107 (1) - 重叠
12:03 __Ag: 对
12:04 Hanazawa Kana: 好
12:04 __Ag: 00:05:030 (3,5) - 这种排列已经很老了，看上去就是一股12年的味道23333
12:05 Hanazawa Kana: 是
12:05 Hanazawa Kana: _(:3」∠)_
12:05 __Ag: 我看看怎么摆
12:06 Hanazawa Kana: 想不出好摆法就转圈了
12:06 Hanazawa Kana: en
12:07 __Ag: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5333355
12:07 __Ag: 这样吧
12:08 __Ag: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5333356
12:08 __Ag: 后面的二连和8这样
12:08 Hanazawa Kana: hao
12:09 __Ag: 00:12:530 (6,7) -
12:10 __Ag: 6 368 228.7 196 256
12:10 Hanazawa Kana: 嗯
12:11 __Ag: 00:17:530 (1) - 这种到蓝线的滑条如果蓝线没有音最好来个尾巴消音
12:12 __Ag: 就是在尾巴上插个5%的绿线，然后后面再恢复
12:12 Hanazawa Kana: 好d
12:12 Hanazawa Kana: 不消音打气来回很明显吗
12:13 __Ag: 00:18:780 (5) - 这个没有音的，去掉吧，不然难免被吐槽
12:13 __Ag: 因为很多人都是带皮肤音效，不消音会很蛋疼
12:14 Hanazawa Kana: 嗯
12:15 Hanazawa Kana: 但是这五连改成单点加三连感觉不好打啊.
12:15 __Ag: 00:20:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串放得感觉有点随意了，我个人建议00:20:799 (2) - 这个用个滑条过渡一下排列
12:15 __Ag: 但是那里的确没音
12:15 Hanazawa Kana: 嗯
12:16 __Ag: 为什么不好打，因为你的00:17:914 (2) - 这个是跟的人声，这里跟bgm就可以过渡
12:17 Hanazawa Kana: _(:з」∠)_
12:17 Hanazawa Kana: 嗯
12:18 __Ag: 00:29:741 (4) - 严格来说这里也是没有音的，但是这里可以放，因为这个是在长白线重音前可以overmap
12:19 __Ag: 00:29:453 (1) - remove NC，00:29:837 (5) - NC，00:30:222 (1) - remove nc
12:19 __Ag: 00:31:376 (1) - 尾巴消音
12:20 __Ag: 00:34:453 (1) - 同
12:20 Hanazawa Kana: en
12:20 __Ag: 00:40:030 (1,2,3,4) - 这一串就是overmap了
12:21 __Ag: 00:40:126 (2,4) - 先把这两个去掉，00:39:645 (4) - 这用滑条拉到00:39:933 - 这里，然后尾巴消音
12:22 Hanazawa Kana: 好这里我等下也改回去ba
12:22 Hanazawa Kana: 嗯
12:23 __Ag: 00:40:607 (1,2,3) - 这三个不适合拉到蓝线，前面的拉到蓝线你可以解释为跟人声，但是这里怎么也说不通
12:24 __Ag: 00:55:510 (5) - 这个一定要去掉
12:25 __Ag: 等下
12:25 __Ag: 不用去了
12:25 Hanazawa Kana: 好
12:25 Hanazawa Kana: 嗯?
12:25 __Ag: 虽然是很轻的声音，但是有音，我再办公室耳机不好
12:26 __Ag: 01:01:857 (7) - 这药去掉
12:26 Hanazawa Kana: 噫
12:26 Hanazawa Kana: 好
12:27 __Ag: 01:06:568 (1) - 这个拉到01:06:953 - 这里然后跟个二连
12:29 __Ag: 01:14:260 - 可以加个note
12:29 __Ag: 美丽

_Stan

Beatmap Nominator

777 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2016-06-08T14:02:20+00:00

Hey from my modq

[Easy]
整体觉得挺不错了，blanket很好，全程按着flow
00:40:607 (1,2) - 全面都是很弧线的，包的很美，这里感觉两个直线很生硬，主要是组合起来不好看
01:00:607 (3) - 滑条末尾点移动到( x:18 y:258 )，主要是和后面01:00:222 (2,3,4,1) - 看起来和谐好看一点

[Normal]
00:19:068 (1,2) - 考虑把2和前面滑条放成一条直线，要不就偏移大一点，这样看起来有一点怪。要直不直的。

[Hard]
还没加滑条颜色么??
00:35:991 (1,1) - 虽然看得出你特意安排的，但是我觉得略奇怪，音乐和节奏都没有很特别的地方，但是我也没啥建议 - -，看你吧。
00:40:607 (1,2) - 包好一点??
00:50:799 (6,7,1) - 个人觉得跳的不错
00:51:183 (1,2) - 仔细看，没包好
00:53:683 (1) - 滑条末尾点移动到( x:396 y:203 ) 00:53:683 (1,1) - 在一条线上是不是要好看点？
00:58:107 (3) - 要不要往右加一点弧度什么的，感觉和00:58:107 (3,4) - 太近，虽然不影响读，但是看起来没有00:58:683 (4,5,1) - 这样的间隙美观。

我觉的整体看起来挺不错的啊，很棒啊，rank把 233333
GOOD LUCK

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-08T15:05:13+00:00

_Stan wrote:
Hey from my modq

[Easy]
整体觉得挺不错了，blanket很好，全程按着flow
00:40:607 (1,2) - 全面都是很弧线的，包的很美，这里感觉两个直线很生硬，主要是组合起来不好看我觉得还行
01:00:607 (3) - 滑条末尾点移动到( x:18 y:258 )，主要是和后面01:00:222 (2,3,4,1) - 看起来和谐好看一点还好吧

[Normal]
00:19:068 (1,2) - 考虑把2和前面滑条放成一条直线，要不就偏移大一点，这样看起来有一点怪。要直不直的。好

感谢摸图

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2016-06-09T08:57:09+00:00

Easy

00:39:645 - 这里加个finish
00:43:299 - ↑
00:51:183 - 我觉得这里节奏有点怪，
00:54:068 (2) - 我不知道Easy也能不能放1/2节拍，如果可以的话，这个建议stack，不可以的话跟00:51:376 - 就好了

Normal

00:44:453 (3,4) - 建议做成滑条回打
00:46:760 (1) - kiai部分我觉得都节奏和人声都跟打的舒服点，比如 00:48:491 - 这里你就跟节奏不跟人声，感觉好怪，你试试摆成这样的节奏，排列你再调整 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5347773
00:51:183 - 这里是红线分音，00:52:914 - 这里才变回白线，所以个范围内的点击都放红线，00:54:260 - 这里节奏就放对了！
01:05:030 - 补上1个
01:10:799 (6) - 建议删了圈圈，01:10:991 (7) - 这个做成回打
01:14:068 - 这里插个5%的音量

Kami's Hard

00:06:087 - 不要这么放，打起来很别扭，要么尾巴放红线
00:19:645 - 建议这里跟人声放红线，00:20:414 - 然后这里补上个圈
00:25:799 - ↑
00:52:914 (1,1,1) - 我喜欢这里这样放，滑条快慢参次不齐，而且打得不带感

Insane

00:36:376 (2) - 建议跟人声，前面都是跟人声这里突然不跟好怪
00:45:799 (4) - 弧度不整齐，不好看
00:49:068 (4) - 不要贴前面的滑条边，而且要包住中间
00:57:337 (1,4) - 不好看，建议骨架拉成差不多

GL~

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-09T09:43:32+00:00

Frenkie09 wrote:
Easy
00:39:645 - 这里加个finish 好的
00:43:299 - ↑ 好
00:51:183 - 我觉得这里节奏有点怪，是挺怪的但是我要是红线放滑条的话打起来更难受了
00:54:068 (2) - 我不知道Easy也能不能放1/2节拍，如果可以的话，这个建议stack，不可以的话跟00:51:376 - 就好了好的删掉了
Normal
00:44:453 (3,4) - 建议做成滑条回打好的
00:46:760 (1) - kiai部分我觉得都节奏和人声都跟打的舒服点，比如 00:48:491 - 这里你就跟节奏不跟人声，感觉好怪，你试试摆成这样的节奏，排列你再调整 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5347773 可以那就塞爆
00:51:183 - 这里是红线分音，00:52:914 - 这里才变回白线，所以个范围内的点击都放红线，00:54:260 - 这里节奏就放对了！好的
01:05:030 - 补上1个好
01:10:799 (6) - 建议删了圈圈，01:10:991 (7) - 这个做成回打先不改感觉这里还行
01:14:068 - 这里插个5%的音量这里有音啊感觉没什么必要静音

Insane
00:36:376 (2) - 建议跟人声，前面都是跟人声这里突然不跟好怪其实前面都是跟的鼓人声就是顺带跟这里这么明显锣声我感觉不能不跟而人声还和他冲突了所以我比较倾向于这里放弃人声
00:45:799 (4) - 弧度不整齐，不好看好改了
00:49:068 (4) - 不要贴前面的滑条边，而且要包住中间好
00:57:337 (1,4) - 不好看，建议骨架拉成差不多好
GL~

Fren神带我飞

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2016-06-09T11:08:52+00:00

Hanazawa Kana wrote:
Frenkie09 wrote:
Easy
00:39:645 - 这里加个finish 好的
00:43:299 - ↑ 好
00:51:183 - 我觉得这里节奏有点怪，是挺怪的但是我要是红线放滑条的话打起来更难受了
00:54:068 (2) - 我不知道Easy也能不能放1/2节拍，如果可以的话，这个建议stack，不可以的话跟00:51:376 - 就好了好的删掉了
Normal
00:44:453 (3,4) - 建议做成滑条回打好的
00:46:760 (1) - kiai部分我觉得都节奏和人声都跟打的舒服点，比如 00:48:491 - 这里你就跟节奏不跟人声，感觉好怪，你试试摆成这样的节奏，排列你再调整 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5347773 可以那就塞爆
00:51:183 - 这里是红线分音，00:52:914 - 这里才变回白线，所以个范围内的点击都放红线，00:54:260 - 这里节奏就放对了！好的
01:05:030 - 补上1个好
01:10:799 (6) - 建议删了圈圈，01:10:991 (7) - 这个做成回打先不改感觉这里还行
01:14:068 - 这里插个5%的音量这里有音啊感觉没什么必要静音

Insane
00:36:376 (2) - 建议跟人声，前面都是跟人声这里突然不跟好怪其实前面都是跟的鼓人声就是顺带跟这里这么明显锣声我感觉不能不跟而人声还和他冲突了所以我比较倾向于这里放弃人声
00:45:799 (4) - 弧度不整齐，不好看好改了
00:49:068 (4) - 不要贴前面的滑条边，而且要包住中间好
00:57:337 (1,4) - 不好看，建议骨架拉成差不多好
GL~
Fren神带我飞
我都还没飞起www，不过合作或者gd还是可以的

Kobayakawa Sae

131 posts

Joined December 2013

Kobayakawa Sae 2016-06-12T15:22:37+00:00

回(shui)摸
[Easy]
00:06:376 - 这里有个重音加上一个note会不会好一点?
01:00:222 (2,4) - 个人认为easy还是不要重叠比较好

[Normal]
00:28:299 (1) - 是这样的，我个人认为这个改成1/2滑条接圈节奏可能会好玩一点

[Kami's Hard]
00:09:453 (5) - 个人认为这个滑条ctrl+g一下打起来会顺手一点
01:06:953 (2) - 我感觉这个地方可以改成这样比较方便读图

以免当成1/2滑条接两个单点来打了

[Insane]
01:14:260 - 是这样的，我认为这个地方加上个三连，节奏上会连贯一点

~~水完跑~~

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-13T04:49:14+00:00

[Charlie Lam] wrote:
回(shui)摸
[Easy]
00:06:376 - 这里有个重音加上一个note会不会好一点? 好像确实是有不过这里前后节奏间距不一样放note可能不好打先放置
01:00:222 (2,4) - 个人认为easy还是不要重叠比较好先放置吧好像有点难改我等等看bn的意见

[Normal]
00:28:299 (1) - 是这样的，我个人认为这个改成1/2滑条接圈节奏可能会好玩一点折返滑条接1/2可能会有点难.

[Insane]
01:14:260 - 是这样的，我认为这个地方加上个三连，节奏上会连贯一点就不加了吧这边声音很小再加上后面是转盘感觉还是不要这么紧凑

~~水完跑~~

谢摸~~

Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-06-13T12:30:49+00:00

Insane
00:02:722 (5) - this is ending vocal, I think it is better to have a jump here, instead of same ds with 00:02:145 (3,4) -
00:03:876 - you map for loud vocal before, it is better to del this circle.
00:09:453 (6,7) - here do not have strong sound for circle (7), it gets a weird feel to have large ds here. I suggested you can lower the ds from 6 to 7, and making a jumping for 7 -> 1. it can emphasise sound at 00:09:837 - . Just like what you did at 00:15:607 (7,8,1) - (same modding applied for 00:12:530 (6,7,1) - )
00:17:530 (1,2,3) - it is quite misleading that visual spacing like 1/2 snapped, but actually it is 3/4 slider.... (same modding applied for 00:35:991 (1,2,3) - , 00:51:183 (1,2,3) - , 00:54:260 (1,2,3) - ). Playable not equal to good to use.
00:19:068 (1,2) - circle (2) is a little weird to place like this. I think it is better to keep the same like 00:22:145 (1,2) -
00:33:299 (3,4) - here suitable to have a jumping....
01:06:953 - this is a sound drum sound, I think better to have clickable object here.
01:09:837 (3,4) - I suggested to use this, as it suits flowing more, and making jump seems more suitable. As it is an Insane diff, I think you can change ds when it make sense.

SPOILER

Hard
00:04:260 - why there is a SV change here? it is quite un-predictable to have it. (same modding applied for 01:11:953 - )
00:17:530 (1,2,3) - same as Insane diff. it is quite misleading that visual spacing like 1/2 snapped, but actually it is 3/4 slider.... Of course you can make extented slider in Hard, but please make it like 3/4 snapped. (same modding applied for 00:51:183 (1,2,3) - , 00:54:260 (2,3,4) - )
00:25:607 (3) - 00:26:376 (6) - it is not well stacking 00:24:837 (4) -
00:25:607 (3,1) - it is a kind of poor overlapping, just affect the looking for the map. suggestion:

SPOILER

00:27:722 (4,1) - this overlapping also, not that good to read. I suggest you can change 00:28:299 (1) - to two circle, or draw it without overlapping
00:28:876 - and 00:29:260 - is vocal sound, I think it is better to have clickable object.
00:29:837 - there is a strong beat sound here, therefore suggested to use clickable object, and add finish sound here.
suggested rhythm here:

00:35:991 - why SV change? I think it should be prevent to have sudden change for SV in Hard diff, it is quite un-predictable (same modding applied for 00:52:914 (1) - , 00:53:683 (1) - 01:06:568 (1,4) - )

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-13T14:38:48+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:

Insane
00:17:530 (1,2,3) - it is quite misleading that visual spacing like 1/2 snapped, but actually it is 3/4 slider.... (same modding applied for 00:35:991 (1,2,3) - , 00:51:183 (1,2,3) - , 00:54:260 (1,2,3) - ). Playable not equal to good to use. I want to emphasis the rhythm here so I think a big ds is ok ~~hard to fix it so keep it for now _(:з」∠)_~~
01:06:953 - this is a sound drum sound, I think better to have clickable object here. It's true,but a 3/4slider and three single note maybe hard to play,so keep

No reply=fixed
thank you ky san~~
quite helpful

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2016-06-14T11:22:57+00:00

桃心的基本都改了别的零零散散改了一些梗变速暂时不想变因为觉得还挺好玩的

垃圾舔屎看这里

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Doyak

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Doyak 2016-06-30T04:21:08+00:00

~~Placeholder, I'll mod this today or tomorrow.~~ editing this post instead of posting new one for 2 kudosu!

[General]
* Kami's Hard doesn't have custom note color.

[Easy]
Notes are fine, but I think this diff needs some improvement on hitsounding. If you don't like custom hitsounds, you can try default drum samplesets to represent specific drum sounds better too.
* 00:03:299 - 01:10:991 - Add whistle, it's the only sound you didn't put a whistle, and I don't feel any difference than others.
* 00:39:068 - Add finish, there's a cymbal sound.
* 00:40:222 - Add something like clap here too. It's too empty when there's a lot of drums on the background.
* 00:41:376 - 00:41:953 - Add finish here too, it's super weird when you have finishes on 00:40:607 - 00:40:991 - but not on these.
* 00:43:299 - Remove finish from here. It's better to emphasize 00:43:683 - this when you don't have a same emphasis on the beat before.
* 00:54:260 - 00:55:030 - Add finishes. There are cymbal sounds, and the vocals are pretty much worth to be emphasized. Also consider adding something like claps on 00:54:645 - 00:55:414 - as well.
* 01:03:683 - 01:04:260 - Same, cymbals.
* 01:05:991 - 01:06:568 - 01:07:337 - They all need finishes too.

[Normal]
* There are too many 1/2s, and this made too large gap between Easy. You need to simply the rhythm more, and disconnect long 1/2 trains to compensate the gap. I'll give you some example to nerf them, but it's up to you how you'll actually reduce the overall number of beats.
In case you'll think "They're mostly sliders, it's not harder than clicking 1/1 circles", I'll say these target players actually care about every slider tails too, and gives no time to prepare for the next pattern.
* Also needs some more work on hitsounding.
* 00:02:145 - Add whistle
* 00:02:530 - Remove whistle if you don't like spamming.
* 00:06:376 - Add soft clap
* 00:08:107 (4) - 00:11:183 (4) - Remove these notes. The target players needs some rest.
* 00:10:414 (2) - This overlaps with the HP bar, try to pull it down a bit
* 00:14:068 (4) - Use one circle on the head.
* 00:17:337 (4,5) - Rather than this, I'll suggesst this for better emphasize on the finishes: http://puu.sh/pMFxg/c4ae22dcd4.jpg
* 00:20:799 (4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/pMFCk/dbf9f16c27.jpg
* 00:26:568 - Seems you don't want to miss this vocal, but for the sake of proper difficulty of this map, you can ignore this.
* 00:28:876 (2) - This completely overlaps with the HP bar.
* 00:30:607 (5,6) - These lacks hitsounds, considering how strong the drums are on these notes. For all difficulties, this kind of parts are where I want you to use some drum samplesets.
* 00:41:953 - Finish
* from 00:43:683 - to 00:52:914 - I made an example beat. Just take a look and reduce it by yourself. http://puu.sh/pMGKz/bcd6d84df4.jpg http://puu.sh/pMGLW/c7483f932c.jpg Same for the later kiai.
* 00:53:683 - It's weird not to have a finish while 00:52:914 - these all have finishes.
* 00:55:414 - Same, while 00:54:260 - 00:54:645 - 00:55:030 - these all have. An alternative way is to remove it from 00:54:645 - , as it doesn't have a cymbal sound.
* 01:05:991 - 01:06:568 - 01:07:337 - finish
* 01:08:299 - This part, same as the first part

[Kami's Hard]
Hi Kami, been a long while.
* I'm not fond of those sudden SV changes and amount of jumps, as they're just like an Insane. There's no stone bridge between the Normal diff and this diff. Especially, Insane diff doesn't do those sudden SV changes, so I'd suggest to remove them.
* 00:05:799 (4,1,2,3) - I'm against this pattern. The spacing between 4 and 1 is just same as the 1/2s before, and it's hard to tell that this is a 3/4 slider becuase the SV is too slow. Also this would be played more like an even-number stream because the player have to hold the slider with the primary finger, and start the stream with the secondary finger (in case of a singletap player). If you don't get what I mean, think why https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5514806 this kind of use is generalized.
* 00:35:991 (1) - Yeah what I mean is, please don't do this on a regular Hard diff.
* 00:52:914 (1,1) - No, I'm using a bold text here. There's no reason to put these hard-to-read sliders.
* 01:06:568 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand why these need 0.50x slowdown. It makes the jumps even weirder too.
* 01:07:914 - There's no sound here, reduce the volume please.
* 01:09:453 (4,6) - This is too far, consider how 01:09:068 (3,4) - this was a 1/1.
* 01:14:260 (6) - Use a 1/4 reverse slider?

[Insane]
* 00:01:953 (2,3,4,5) - No claps on any of these?
* 00:05:030 (4) - 01:12:722 (4) - NCing these makes more sense imo.
* 00:16:568 (2,3) - Kinda weird to have this small distance suddenly, when all these before were 1/2 jumpy.
* 00:39:068 - finish
* 00:41:376 (3,4) - Feels almost like a 1/4 because of some 1/4s like 00:35:991 (1,2,3) - , so use some bigger spacing.
* 00:41:953 - finish
* 00:29:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try to represent the drums better with the hitsounds too.
* 00:33:491 (4) - Change to a 1/2 slider, because it feels too sudden to have an empty spot while the whole map is full of 1/2s.
* 00:48:107 (7,1) - Swap NC, like 00:45:030 (1,2) - 00:46:568 (1,2) -
* 00:55:799 (1) - The slider tail feels too weird. As like you put the finish there, it is a good beat to emphasize, but your notes don't. Just split them into 2 circles.
* 01:06:953 - Add some hitsound here to represent the drum please.
* 01:14:260 - Put a triplet here? It feels too empty to ignore these 1/4s. At least put a note on 01:14:453 - , as a spinner start cannot emphasize anything.

Overall it's not bad. But I really think the Normal should be nerfed a lot and all the diffs still have to be improved with the hitsounds. Fix the Normal, get some more mods especially regarding the hitsounds, then you can call me back if you think the issues are solved.

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-07-02T03:59:15+00:00

Doyak wrote:
[Easy]
Notes are fine, but I think this diff needs some improvement on hitsounding. If you don't like custom hitsounds, you can try default drum samplesets to represent specific drum sounds better too.
* 00:40:222 - Add something like clap here too. It's too empty when there's a lot of drums on the background. ok,i'll use a normal sampleset here
* Also consider adding something like claps on 00:54:645 - 00:55:414 - as well.∧

[Normal]
* There are too many 1/2s, and this made too large gap between Easy. You need to simply the rhythm more, and disconnect long 1/2 trains to compensate the gap. I'll give you some example to nerf them, but it's up to you how you'll actually reduce the overall number of beats. ok,it's truly hard for normal to have too much 1/2s,i'll try to fix them
In case you'll think "They're mostly sliders, it's not harder than clicking 1/1 circles", I'll say these target players actually care about every slider tails too, and gives no time to prepare for the next pattern.
* Also needs some more work on hitsounding.
* 00:17:337 (4,5) - Rather than this, I'll suggesst this for better emphasize on the finishes: http://puu.sh/pMFxg/c4ae22dcd4.jpg feel a little empty at 00:17:337 - ,but fixed
* 00:30:607 (5,6) - These lacks hitsounds, considering how strong the drums are on these notes. For all difficulties, this kind of parts are where I want you to use some drum samplesets.k,gonna have a check of it.
* 00:55:414 - Same, while 00:54:260 - 00:54:645 - 00:55:030 - these all have. An alternative way is to remove it from 00:54:645 - , as it doesn't have a cymbal sound. added a finish on it

[Insane]
* 00:01:953 (2,3,4,5) - No claps on any of these?uh,i think that may be too noisy for the beginning,so i just using whistles
* 01:14:260 - Put a triplet here? It feels too empty to ignore these 1/4s. At least put a note on 01:14:453 - , as a spinner start cannot emphasize anything. placed a note here 01:14:453 -

Overall it's not bad. But I really think the Normal should be nerfed a lot and all the diffs still have to be improved with the hitsounds. Fix the Normal, get some more mods especially regarding the hitsounds, then you can call me back if you think the issues are solved.

No reply or green=fixed
blue=another solution
purple=some comment
yellow=don't want to change

Thank you doyak~
I'll find some more mods these days.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2016-07-02T05:20:19+00:00

Doyak wrote:
~~Placeholder, I'll mod this today or tomorrow.~~ editing this post instead of posting new one for 2 kudosu!

[General]
* Kami's Hard doesn't have custom note color. fixed
[Kami's Hard]
Hi Kami, been a long while.
* I'm not fond of those sudden SV changes and amount of jumps, as they're just like an Insane. There's no stone bridge between the Normal diff and this diff. Especially, Insane diff doesn't do those sudden SV changes, so I'd suggest to remove them.
* 00:05:799 (4,1,2,3) - I'm against this pattern. The spacing between 4 and 1 is just same as the 1/2s before, and it's hard to tell that this is a 3/4 slider becuase the SV is too slow. Also this would be played more like an even-number stream because the player have to hold the slider with the primary finger, and start the stream with the secondary finger (in case of a singletap player). If you don't get what I mean, think why https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5514806 this kind of use is generalized. okay fixed
* 00:35:991 (1) - Yeah what I mean is, please don't do this on a regular Hard diff. if you try to remove this you will feel really strange about this slider. I use 0.5x slider because the voice is suddenly stopped.I want to expressthis and I think its nice here.
* 00:52:914 (1,1) - No, I'm using a bold text here. There's no reason to put these hard-to-read sliders. same reason
* 01:06:568 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand why these need 0.50x slowdown. It makes the jumps even weirder too. because the music is become soft! and I feel some slow sliders is better than fast sliders here
* 01:07:914 - There's no sound here, reduce the volume please. sure~fixed
* 01:09:453 (4,6) - This is too far, consider how 01:09:068 (3,4) - this was a 1/1. here is a slider jump. its really easy to finish
* 01:14:260 (6) - Use a 1/4 reverse slider? okay

Overall it's not bad. But I really think the Normal should be nerfed a lot and all the diffs still have to be improved with the hitsounds. Fix the Normal, get some more mods especially regarding the hitsounds, then you can call me back if you think the issues are solved.

哈哈哈我变速还是不想改233

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-07-02T05:30:26+00:00

@kami: I know what you want to represent here, but what I mean is that it simply is too confusing for the target players. They're not yet prepared to read such sudden changes, especially that consecutive one. It might seem a bit weird not to use it, but it's just basically the same reason why we don't use jumps on Easy even when a sound is extremely stronger than others. I think just using regular speed of 3/4 sliders and using consistent sv is still fine representing the music.

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2016-07-14T06:19:39+00:00

ok lets see what now

[hitsounds]
看你大部分地方好像也没用soft whistle，试试看这个吧，跟音乐下就行了 http://puu.sh/q17AX/5b6b2c3cce.wav

[Insane]
00:05:030 (1) - 这里用一个比较活泼的形状？e.g.

SPOILER

00:09:837 (1) - 请好好地重新拉一下：贝塞尔曲线的算法使得若只取曲线的一部分，会导致其不对称。长懒看：请把最后一个锚点对准滑条的尾巴，以改善形状。还有其他一堆类似的就不说了
00:15:222 (5) - 稍微放远一点，如299:243

[Hard]
00:08:491 (2) - 好像没叠好
00:14:837 (2,3,4) - blanket，同时调整00:14:453 (1) -
00:17:530 (1,2,3) - 这个1/4跳比较突然，建议还是不要跳。后同
00:19:453 (4,5) - blanket
00:35:991 (1) - 这个变速明显无理啊，bn都说了，我就不说为啥了，包括00:52:914 (1,1,1) -
00:40:607 (1,2) - 包好，接下来还有的就自己看了不说了

次难度没发现什么音效不好，估计应该可以了吧，加油

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-07-14T08:39:55+00:00

感谢花花我的部分都改了

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2016-07-17T16:36:11+00:00

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Easy

00:24:837 (4,1,2) - 其实可以形成一个正三角形，然后让00:26:760 (3) - blanket 00:24:837 (4) -
00:41:376 (2,3) - 尽量避免easy出现1/2交接吧：

Normal

00:05:799 (6) - 00:18:299 (6) - 00:26:760 (4) - 差点出去，往上移点
00:25:222 (1) - 没必要finish

xiaohuanggua's Hard

od-0.5
00:24:837 (4,3) - stack
00:35:991 (1) - [b]看不懂这个减速的必要性……我觉得反而会confuse gameplay，正常摆一个不行吗
00:52:914 (1,1) - [b]同上，不太建议hard里面玩这种差不多滑条长度的变速梗
00:55:607 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - [b]这有点难了吧？感觉和Normal的gap一下子拉大不少

另外就是finish放得太多了，太吵，我摸得时候都要耳鸣了

Insane

hp+0.5 or 1；od没必要8吧？
看来小黄瓜的音效是从你这里复制的？finish太几把吵了。音效建议参考人格的同一张rank图。

hard稍微降低点难度，到3.3~3.4左右比较好，insane的话就不用了

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-07-18T01:22:01+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Easy
00:24:837 (4,1,2) - 其实可以形成一个正三角形，然后让00:26:760 (3) - blanket 00:24:837 (4) -
00:41:376 (2,3) - 尽量避免easy出现1/2交接吧：
Normal
00:05:799 (6) - 00:18:299 (6) - 00:26:760 (4) - 差点出去，往上移点
00:25:222 (1) - 没必要finish
Insane
hp+0.5 or 1；od没必要8吧？ od改到7.5了主要是感觉od太低的话就完全没pp了 _(:з」∠)_
看来小黄瓜的音效是从你这里复制的？finish太几把吵了。音效建议参考人格的同一张rank图。
hard稍微降低点难度，到3.3~3.4左右比较好，insane的话就不用了

可都改了
音效的话我把insane的kiai部分都换成大白线finish了(

Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-07-18T17:06:22+00:00

卡娜高德

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2016-07-18T17:29:16+00:00

@老M 除了finish都改了 finish我觉得听起来比较爽啊！

舔屎这里是代码

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 43683
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SampleSet: Soft
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[Metadata]
Title:Nanka Ii Koto
TitleUnicode:なんかいいこと
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:葉月ゆら
Creator:Hanazawa Kana
Version:Kami's Hard
Source:Ganbare! Memeko-chan
Tags:La Pucelle がんばれ！メメ子ちゃん opening Seifumeigetsu 清風明月 kamisamaaa
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Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-07-18T23:40:23+00:00

updated

Misure wrote:
卡娜高德

米苏高德什么时候带我飞

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2016-07-24T13:27:44+00:00

黄瓜's hard：
既然变速去掉了的话那么nc呢？nc也一起去了吧，如果你非要下nc梗不如下在00:54:260 (2,3,4) -

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2016-07-24T14:07:15+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
黄瓜's hard：
既然变速去掉了的话那么nc呢？nc也一起去了吧，如果你非要下nc梗不如下在00:54:260 (2,3,4) -

我只是单纯的忘了去掉NC 233
改了改了多余的绿线也去掉了！

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Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Hanazawa Kana 2016-07-24T14:12:50+00:00

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Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2016-07-25T02:01:00+00:00

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-07-25T08:47:21+00:00

[Normal]
* 00:17:914 - Normal sampleset
* 00:20:030 (3,4) - Flow could be improved. I'd use 00:20:030 (3) - with Ctrl+J.
* 00:25:222 - 00:31:376 - Finish
* 00:55:991 (1,2) - This too. I wouldn't really suggest that goes exactly backward after transition on a Normal diff. Something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5686766 will be a better choice.

[Kami's Hard]
* 00:40:222 (5,6,7,1) - Why is it a triplet + note? The drums are definitely in a note + triplet.

[Insane]
* 00:41:953 - Finish
* 00:52:722 - This Normal sampleset feels pretty random, why not just use auto?
* 01:01:376 - Clap like 00:49:068 -
* 01:14:453 - Whistle because it's the most important melody.
* I'm sorry telling this too late. But we have some overmapped objects that hurts the emphasis of the actual sounds. So the ones in problem are 00:17:433 (7) - 00:29:741 (7) - 00:37:433 (7) - 00:43:203 (7) - 00:55:510 (5) - 01:04:741 (6) -
So here's what Natsu (an experienced BN) suggested:

I still think the hitsounds are a bit inconsistent and can be improved. Please check these thoroughly by yourself before calling me back.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2016-07-25T13:53:19+00:00

Doyak wrote:
[Kami's Hard]
* 00:40:222 (5,6,7,1) - Why is it a triplet + note? The drums are definitely in a note + triplet. okay fix

code

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Title:Nanka Ii Koto
TitleUnicode:なんかいいこと
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:葉月ゆら
Creator:Hanazawa Kana
Version:Kami's Hard
Source:Ganbare! Memeko-chan
Tags:La Pucelle がんばれ！メメ子ちゃん opening Seifumeigetsu 清風明月 kamisamaaa
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Hanazawa Kana

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Hanazawa Kana 2016-07-25T14:07:21+00:00

@Doyak
All fixed
For hitsound,this time i try to use claps on every 2nd and 4th white line and use normal sampleset on drums which are not at 2,4 white line.
Also i add some whistles on kiai part to make it sounds more lively.

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-07-25T23:03:33+00:00

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