423,234,41074,6,0,B|378:201|392:144|392:144|338:169|289:136,1,200

360,192,106232,2,0,B|316:192|272:200|260:240|256:300|256:300|252:240|240:200|196:192|147:192,1,350
222,73,107952,2,0,B|190:113,2,50
290,73,108525,2,0,B|318:113,2,50
256,208,109289,5,0
256,48,109863,1,2
212,252,110436,2,0,B|260:288|304:248,1,100

226,284,145977,2,4,B|172:266|160:214|160:214|110:171|44:202|13:271|59:305,1,300,4|0
180,355,146933,2,0,B|231:394|284:345,2,100
226,302,147506,1,0
296,284,147697,2,0,B|325:233|377:233|377:233|429:233|461:179,1,200

449,256,218969,6,0,B|396:220|414:166,1,100,0|8
368,112,219351,2,0,B|312:80|264:112|256:168|256:168|248:112|200:80|144:112,1,300
183,193,220498,2,0,B|205:261|256:249|305:265|330:192,1,200
384,264,221453,2,0,B|328:352|184:352|128:264,1,300
256,208,222409,6,0,B|247:153|189:139,1,100
76,220,222982,1,8
216,220,223364,1,8
348,174,223746,2,8,B|382:217|348:266,2,100
296,220,224320,1,0
296,220,224511,1,0
296,220,224702,2,8,B|240:220,4,50

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Fight69's Easy]
Do not use slider speed changes on the easiest diff of the mapset please. Is that really a problem ? D:
02:48:906 (1,3) - Overlapping with the HP bar.
03:24:065 (1,3) - ^ Fixed both.

IceBeam wrote:

[Fight69's Easy]
Fighteh <3 Icebeamuuuu <3

00:38:973 (1) - Add a finish? Okay
01:12:602 (1) - I know you made this shape in purpose,but it'd be better to make it symmetrical. It should be good now
01:14:895 (3,4) - Same,maybe mirrored ones would be a bit better? Done
01:46:232 (1) - Finish? Okay
01:52:347 (2) - Here too,maybe? Hmm...yeah

Leorda wrote:

Shikieiki is gay

Leorda wrote:

Hiiiii

General
* For Fight69's and OnosakiHito's diff, please change the Audio Lead-In to 993. To make the Audio Lead-In is consistent for all diff. Fix this using a notepad or wordpad -fix'd

00:45:851 (2) - Extend it to 00:46:234. If you keep this, beginner/average player would click 00:46:425 (3) earlier (not sure D:)
- That sounds too weird.

04:06:294 (2) - Add 1 repeating slider? - Yesh

Leorda wrote:

Hiiiii Heya o/
Fight69's Easy
* Try AR +1 or +2 to makes approach circles and slider velocity is same, and makes readable (?) to read Done.
* About the slider speed changes..... 0,50x it's a problem, 0,50x is slow (since you have a low SV) and makes some beginner player were confusing. I think using 0,75x is probably fine for easy diff (I hope someone not to blame at me because of this) Well, I've finally deleted it.

01:21:774 (1) - The tail slider is almost offscreen Fixed.
01:27:507 (2) - ^ Fixed.
03:25:593 (3) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar, it could be greatly impair of visibility of approach circles and notes (?) Fixed.

MoodyRPG wrote:

Fight69's Easy
00:29:036 (4) - Move to center Nope, it's fine like that
04:06:867 (3) - ^ ^

1. Made a full submit to fix a bug causing only Fight69's diff to be downloaded.
2. You should update your main post and write "Ono's Taiko Oni" instead of "Ono's Taiko Judgement" =P
3. Might want to add PoF as a tag ?
4. Timing feels off to me. I'll work on a new timing tomorrow after class (it's a bit late now = = ). Feel free to remind me to do so, I might forget. ><

• Mod in french for the frenchie.
  AR4 OD2
  Tout d'abord, pour une Easy, je recommande (mais c'est plus une préférence personnelle =p) de suivre davantage la musique (si elle a des rythmes simples). Ce sera plus simple à jouer, parce que les nouveaux joueurs téléchargent en priorité des maps de chansons qu'ils connaissent, donc retrouver les rythmes de la chanson dans la map sera plus simple pour eux. Par exemple:

1. 03:34:383 (2,4) - Ce passage (et tous les passages ultérieurs similaires) peut être assez déroutant. La musique ici fait du 1/1 3/4, mais tu fais du full 1/1, ce qui rend le placement assez bizarre (du regard de la musique) et les joueurs risquent de se faire avoir.
   Ensuite, LES COMBOS. Ta façon de mettre des NC est inconsistente, et c'est vraiment assez mauvais pour le rendu final de la map.
2. 00:22:157 (3) - new combo pour respecter le comboing d'avant (un NC tous les gros traits blancs)
3. 00:29:036 (4) - Pareil.
4. 00:51:202 (1) - Depuis le break jusqu'à cette note (non incluse) le comboing est tout foireux. Il a pas l'air de suivre quoi que ce soit de logique (?)
5. 01:34:004 (1,2,3) - Regarde bien le premier pattern après le spinner avant (01:00:374 (1) - ce spinner). Pour respecter ce comboing, enlève le NC sur (1) et mets-le sur 01:35:532 (3) -
6. 01:49:289 (5) - NC pour représenter le changement (assez radical) de rythme ?
7. 01:58:461 (3,3) - NC pour respecter le comboing après (02:10:691 (1) - par exemple)
   Quelques autres remarques aussi:
8. 02:30:563 (3) - Essaie de courber ce slider (joliment) de façon à éviter l'overlap avec (1) après.
9. 03:48:523 (3) - NC here (toujours les mêmes raisons)
10. 03:59:224 (1) - Enlève le NC... (voir patterns d'avant)

1. AR is high for a Normal. The song doesn't feel really fast or anything, and having it so much different from OD feels weird. Reduce it to 5 ?
2. You wanted help for that Normal, so here it is. First of all, the patterns are rather difficult. Patterns like 00:05:915 (3,1,2) - including fast and sharp direction changes are difficult to get for a new player. There are lots of 1/2 beats (with 1/2 or 1/1 rhythms), and even some non-slider 3/4 rhythms, which is (to me) way too hard for a Normal. All these contribute to making your Normal too hard (and giving it a high star rating). I also don't agree with big slow downs for a Normal, as they are confusing. With that in mind try reworking your Normal (it might imply a remap though :/). Also 01:33:813 (2) - this slider's body is entirely hidden by the previous one.

• I think this is too hard for a Hard, mainly because of all the added 1/4 and the rhythms used (that are not in the song). Also, the score gap with Normal is really big... Try going for rhythms a bit more complex than rough 1/2 all along, without adding all of that unnecessary 1/4. :/ Other than that:

1. 01:45:468 (1,2,3,4) - This really is a bad idea to me. Big (and surprising due to the rhythm) jumps followed by a very sharp slowdown... It plays quite bad (the jumps create some speed that the slowdown instantly kills).
2. 02:15:277 (5,6) - That jump is unexpected, and doesn't really make sense, as you never used such jump any time in the song after and before this.

Odaril wrote:

General
[*]You should update your main post and write "Ono's Taiko Oni" instead of "Ono's Taiko Judgement" =P - alright
[*]Might want to add PoF as a tag ? - done
[*]Timing feels off to me. I'll work on a new timing tomorrow after class (it's a bit late now = = ). Feel free to remind me to do so, I might forget. >< - I do believe timing fits very well :/[/list]

Normal

1. AR is high for a Normal. The song doesn't feel really fast or anything, and having it so much different from OD feels weird. Reduce it to 5 ? - Sakura Hana meant a higher AP would fit better, but that was before i remapped Normal so yeah done too.
   
   Hard
2. 01:45:468 (1,2,3,4) - This really is a bad idea to me. Big (and surprising due to the rhythm) jumps followed by a very sharp slowdown... It plays quite bad (the jumps create some speed that the slowdown instantly kills). - Changed spacing.
3. 02:15:277 (5,6) - That jump is unexpected, and doesn't really make sense, as you never used such jump any time in the song after and before this. - If you all really insist on changing this one I'll finally do that.

1. Timing: Offset felt kinda early. Due to low OD people won't notice that much, but I was getting lots of "late" mistimed. Increasing the offset to 1530 (+9ms on every timing section, don't forget!) felt much better to me, and finished the map with much much less mistimed.

1. Your hard is on the harder side, considering you are using this circle size combined with AR8. I guess that's okay but some patterns could use some simplification then, I will note which ones.
2. 00:09:928 (9,10) - Just as described above, this would be much better if you just had a repeating slider which repeats once more and remove the note 10.
3. 00:38:591 (4) - New combo here and remove it from 00:39:164 (1). Follows the music much much better.
4. 00:42:603 (1,1,2,1) - These new combos aren't really necessary. You should remove them all and put a new combo on 00:44:705 (2) to follow the music better. This will be very tricky to pull off because of many inconsistencies with the combos. Unless you use them for certain patterns, try to match the melody of the music, so each section has a new combo. I won't write it down here because it will take alot of space, but if you can't figure them out on your own, catch me ingame and we can discuss this further.
5. 02:33:239 (5) - I would say this note should come 1/4 earlier if it's trying to follow the melody.
6. 02:34:767 (3) - Same thing as the above. 1/1 and 1/2 bashing throughout the whole mapset is not fun.
7. 02:35:914 (2) - End it 1/4 earlier.
8. 03:16:518 (1) - Remove this finish, could probably use a soft hitsound set for the spinner as well. Reason is below.
9. 03:21:008 - I strongly suggest to add a note here. Without it the rhythm could be unpredictable. Since you mapped almost every big white tick in similar sections, you should do it here as well. Don't forget to put a finish on it as well.
10. 03:34:383 (4) - Move it 1/4 earlier to follow the music better.
11. 03:35:912 (3) - Same as the above.
12. 03:58:842 (4) - Start it 1/4 earlier but make it end the same.
13. 04:00:371 (1) - ^

1. This is kinda hard for a normal. If you increased AR to 7 and OD to 5 and remapped a few parts which have long sliders, you would get a solid Hard diff. Well, what's done is done I guess, I would lower OD to 3 in any case, due to the number of 1/2 circles, so the newer people hit them more easily.
2. 01:35:915 (1) - Sound like you're missing a finish. (you used it in hard)
3. 02:33:239 (1) - Just like in hard, this note should be coming 1/4 earlier. It's easier this way, but it sounds wrong. I guess the same stuff apply for: 02:34:767 (1), 02:36:296 (4), 03:34:383 (1), 03:35:912 (1), 03:58:842 (1), 04:00:371 (1) (although this one can be hard because it shouldn't repeat then), 04:01:899 (1) (same as last),
4. 03:09:161 (5) - This note is not properly stacked with the note 3. Although I have to add that you should probably reposition it somewhere else, overlaps can be a bad idea in such a harder normal diff.
5. 03:21:008 (1) - This note is coming too soon after a spinner for a normal diff. To make things worse it's kinda far from the middle of the screen. You should position it closer to the middle and shorten the spinner if possible. Personally I think the spinner could pass, but in that case you really have to reposition the slider. (although you might change it to like it is in easy atm)
6. 03:26:549 (2) - Since you used claps on all red ticks on the map, you should probably add one here as well.

1. 01:49:289 (5,6) - Hmm, add whistles like you did in the next section? (a whistle on slider ends)
2. 03:34:383 (2) - Maybe add a whistle? Just a suggestion. Might also take a look at 03:35:912 (4), 03:37:441 (4) for the same suggestion.
3. 03:42:218 (1) - Maybe start the spinner at the big white tick? Not a huge difference but it does follow the music a little better.
4. 03:48:523 (3) - Place a finish maybe?

1. 03:00:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - instead of a repeated ddd ddd ddd k k k, maybe make ddk ddk ddk k k k? Just a suggestion, to add some variety and it sounds nice.

lolcubes wrote:

Hey there, answering your request!

[General]:

1. Timing: Offset felt kinda early. Due to low OD people won't notice that much, but I was getting lots of "late" mistimed. Increasing the offset to 1530 (+9ms on every timing section, don't forget!) felt much better to me, and finished the map with much much less mistimed.

- Changed

[Hard]:

1. Your hard is on the harder side, considering you are using this circle size combined with AR8. I guess that's okay but some patterns could use some simplification then, I will note which ones.
2. 00:09:928 (9,10) - Just as described above, this would be much better if you just had a repeating slider which repeats once more and remove the note 10. - done
3. 00:38:591 (4) - New combo here and remove it from 00:39:164 (1). Follows the music much much better. - done
4. 00:42:603 (1,1,2,1) - These new combos aren't really necessary. You should remove them all and put a new combo on 00:44:705 (2) to follow the music better. This will be very tricky to pull off because of many inconsistencies with the combos. Unless you use them for certain patterns, try to match the melody of the music, so each section has a new combo. I won't write it down here because it will take alot of space, but if you can't figure them out on your own, catch me ingame and we can discuss this further. - WiP
5. 02:33:239 (5) - I would say this note should come 1/4 earlier if it's trying to follow the melody. - done
6. 02:34:767 (3) - Same thing as the above. 1/1 and 1/2 bashing throughout the whole mapset is not fun. - done
7. 02:35:914 (2) - End it 1/4 earlier. - done
8. 03:16:518 (1) - Remove this finish, could probably use a soft hitsound set for the spinner as well. Reason is below. - done
9. 03:21:008 - I strongly suggest to add a note here. Without it the rhythm could be unpredictable. Since you mapped almost every big white tick in similar sections, you should do it here as well. Don't forget to put a finish on it as well. - done
10. 03:34:383 (4) - Move it 1/4 earlier to follow the music better. - yep
11. 03:35:912 (3) - Same as the above. - yep
12. 03:58:842 (4) - Start it 1/4 earlier but make it end the same. - done
13. 04:00:371 (1) - ^

- done

[Normal]:

1. This is kinda hard for a normal. If you increased AR to 7 and OD to 5 and remapped a few parts which have long sliders, you would get a solid Hard diff. Well, what's done is done I guess, I would lower OD to 3 in any case, due to the number of 1/2 circles, so the newer people hit them more easily. - lowered OD to 3
2. 01:35:915 (1) - Sound like you're missing a finish. (you used it in hard) - correct
3. 02:33:239 (1) - Just like in hard, this note should be coming 1/4 earlier. It's easier this way, but it sounds wrong. I guess the same stuff apply for: 02:34:767 (1), 02:36:296 (4), 03:34:383 (1), 03:35:912 (1), 03:58:842 (1), 04:00:371 (1) (although this one can be hard because it shouldn't repeat then), 04:01:899 (1) (same as last), - WiP
4. 03:09:161 (5) - This note is not properly stacked with the note 3. Although I have to add that you should probably reposition it somewhere else, overlaps can be a bad idea in such a harder normal diff. reposited note
5. 03:21:008 (1) - This note is coming too soon after a spinner for a normal diff. To make things worse it's kinda far from the middle of the screen. You should position it closer to the middle and shorten the spinner if possible. Personally I think the spinner could pass, but in that case you really have to reposition the slider. (although you might change it to like it is in easy atm) - shortened the spinner
6. 03:26:549 (2) - Since you used claps on all red ticks on the map, you should probably add one here as well.

- right

theMikeAG wrote:

~Fight69's Easy~
01:21:019 (2,3) - Whoa, this is kind of weird. Maybe make these straighter? - Made them "straighter"

~Normal~
00:08:982 (2,3,4) - Center this? - Centered
03:53:118 (1) - The way this overlaps is kind of ugly, maybe you should horizontally flip this slider (keep its position though) so that it doesn't overlap. - good idea, flipped

IceBeam wrote:

the only thing I could suggest here is to set 1000 for Audio Lead-In in all difficulties via notepad. - fixed


[Fight69's Easy]
02:34:776 - is this finish was in purpose? or it's missplaced? :/ cause it makes too much noise,whistle works much better here imo
- fixed

[Normal]
03:51:208 (1,2) - distance between them is a bit unusual,though I had no problems with reading it
but if possible,fix it,at least like this:

SPOILER

- done
03:58:755 (6) - but this one is major and really neccessary to fix,though music helps to read this blue tick,distance still looks like 1/1
so..fixing spacing here will be appreciated - fixed

[Hard]
00:55:988 (1) - too close to previous object,fix spacing please - fixed
01:46:241 (4) - new combo here,otherwise spacing between 01:46:050 (3) and 01:46:241 (4) should be less,then 01:45:477 (1,2,3)
- fixed
02:02:101 (2,3) - there's a new discovered bug in osu! when 2 or more sliders stacked in the same point - stacking doesn't occur
and as zero stacking leniency is unrankable,we were asked to force mappers to fix such moments
you may fix it by moving 02:02:674 (3) 1 grid down and right (lvl4)
or change these sliders in different way - fixed in another way


02:13:757 (1) - a bit close to previous object,increase distance a bit? -yep

03:40:507 (3) - reverse selection here? it'd solve distance issue between 03:39:360 (2,3,4) - done

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Dunskin's 1st bubble o/

1. Suggestion: Rename this diff to Insane. Keep all the settings though.
2. 01:51:400 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it to 01:52:356 (3). Follows the music better.
3. 02:27:706 (4) - I would say you are missing a clap on the slider start.
4. 02:35:158 (4) - Make this a new combo instead of the next one, follows the music better.
5. 03:02:673 (1) - Finish at the start?
6. 03:30:188 (1) - You can make this slider more pretty, just move your upper middlepoint a bit higher.
7. 03:36:303 (9) - New combo and remove it from 03:37:641 (1). Follows the music better.
8. 03:51:590 (2) - I find it weird to not have a finish here, and have it at 03:53:118 (1). Should remove it from that (1) and add it to the start of this slider imo.
9. 03:59:233 (5) - Add a finish maybe?
10. 04:03:819 (2) - ^ at the start.
11. 03:56:176 (8,9,10,11,12) - I think this is too hard for a Hard. If you chose to rename to insane, I am okay with those though.

1. Suggestion: Rename this diff to Hard. Put AR to 7, OD to 5 and HPDrain to 5.
2. 03:52:545 (3) - Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/195711? Fixes the possibly awkward spacing.
3. 01:00:383 (1) - You are missing a finish at the end.
4. 01:14:904 (1) - Finish at the start?
5. 01:21:783 (1) - ^
6. 02:22:547 (1) - Finish at the end?
7. 02:29:044 (1) - Finish at the start?
8. 02:37:834 (1) - Finish at the end?
9. 02:41:273 (1) - Finish at the start?
10. 03:02:673 (1) - ^
11. 04:03:819 (2) - ^

1. Suggestion: Rename this diff to Normal. Keep the settings as they are now.
2. 00:23:695 (3,4) - Oh god, let me nazi this please! Move 3 by 1 grid up, and move 4 by 1 grid left. This evens out the spacing and the pattern looks better! Oh dear I'm so gonna get hated for this. xD