This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年3月29日 at 17:39:14

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Secret Liqueur -Short ver-
Source: 働くオトナの恋愛事情
Tags: imoutosan Eggache0 opening galgame eroge visual novel
BPM: 240
Filesize: 3669kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.36 stars, 104 notes)
2. Extra (4.84 stars, 431 notes)
3. Hard (3.04 stars, 298 notes)
4. Insane (3.78 stars, 355 notes)
5. Liqueur (5.67 stars, 493 notes)
6. Normal (2.07 stars, 181 notes)

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Secret Liqueur -Short ver-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane and Extra by imoutosan

vote 1 if you can't pass it.

从精神上支持一下owo

great map

Love you and this map ♥

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hey

Easy:

Sliders are too fast you know.
00:27:879 (3) - This looks strange for Easy diff.
00:39:379 (2,3,4) - You don't need to skip the beat between 3 and 4.
00:45:879 (1,2) - Copy/paste, looks bad :/
00:55:879 (3) - Another strange slider.
00:59:879 (3) - ^
01:03:879 (3) - ^
01:07:879 (3) - ^
01:23:879 (3,4,5) - Bad spacing, kinda spam in one place.
01:25:879 (1) - Strange slider.
01:27:379 (1) - That circle should not exist :3
01:50:629 (4) - Strange slider.
02:11:879 (1,1,2) - Delete these objects and make a spinner from 02:11:879 to 02:15:379

Hard:

Oh Jeez everything is so fast. Make the sliders waaaay slower.

00:15:629 (4,1) - Too close to each other.
00:36:629 (3,4) - Too far away.
00:51:129 (4) - Add some beauty to it, looks bad comparing to everything else.
00:58:879 (3) - This one isn't so pretty too
01:09:004 (5,6) - Start 6 from the end of 5.
01:17:254 (2,3,4) - I think repeater would be nicer.
01:17:629 (5,1) - Too far away.
01:21:879 (1,2) - Ugly shapes :/
01:25:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hard to read.
01:50:629 (3,4) - Why are they so spaced?

Liqueur:

00:15:379 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's spaced as the previous slider, but it's slower.
00:19:754 (1,2,3) - Hard to read.
00:25:879 (1) - Ugly slider.
00:53:379 (5,6,7,8) - Too spaced.
00:55:379 (5,1,2,1,2) - Way too spaced for 1/8.
00:59:879 (1,2,3,4) - Airman style, too stacked.
01:01:254 (3,4) - Too far away.
01:01:379 (4,5,6,7) - Should not be a jump, more like a stream.
01:17:379 (2,3,4,5) - Changing directions, spaced jumpstream. Nerf it a bit.
01:25:129 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whaaaaaa... That random difficulty change.
01:26:754 (1,1) - 2x NC
01:27:129 (1,2,3) - Too stacked.
01:31:629 (3,1) - Too far away.
01:43:129 (2,3) - Too spaced.

Well, the last diff is pretty hard, but looks cool.
Good luck with ranking it

imouto's Insane
00:51:129 (2) -

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粉心大爷你居然给我kd 怀疑要被denyQwQ
先edit一个摸出来@_@

[Liqueur]

1. 00:15:379 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建议大点距离，不然和前面一样不开编辑器实在是读不出来
2. 00:19:379 (3,4,5,1) - ^ 务必
3. 01:22:879 - NC个？
4. 01:43:379 - ^

[imouto's Insane]

1. widescreen support
2. 00:56:379 (9,1) - 感觉近了
3. 01:16:879 (6,7) - 这个距离还是容易读错 要不就NC
4. 01:27:129 (1) - 168|128怎么样
5. 01:43:129 (1) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:15:629 (4,1) - 建议再远 视觉上像二分拍不像一分
2. 00:17:379 (3,4,1) - 这个flow角度太小不舒服呀 建议滑条换位置
3. 00:25:879 (1,2) - 这个也是太近。
4. 01:16:879 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:56:629 (2,1) - ^
6. 总之hard里放读图梗太不友好了 主要是AR不会很高就容易被坑到（什么你打EZ的 不是很懂你们EZ玩家QwQ

[Easy]

1. 01:30:754 - 这里好像没鼓点 不如压vocal 现在这样也是挺奇怪的
2. 02:12:879 - 不如就加个note

Easy是update后的

虽然挺水至少看着像个摸了，这歌节奏也是挺微妙，就这样
Good luck!

As requested
[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
00:21:879 (1) - better to calibrate the spacing to 1.1x. There're many notes with spacings like 0.99x/1.00x/1.01x Better to check them again to prevent potential issues.

Use slider at 01:21:879 So that you wont have some weird empty here.

01:27:379 (1,2) - Really not recommend stacking these two because it's not 1/1. It's 3/4!!!

02:06:379 (3) - Not recommend adding Finish on the reverse point. it sounds a little off-place with original finish in the music.

02:08:129 怎么空了一段？感觉不太好

[Hard]
00:15:629 (4,1) - The current spacing is relatively low, thus it could be easily misread. Better to enlarge it.

00:56:879 (3,4) - Try this to follow the sound better? http://puu.sh/nclju/a937b5ace2.jpg

01:02:879 (4) - Same at above

[imouto's Insane]
00:47:754 Add a note here?

00:51:129 (2) - Seems unsnaped slider-end?

00:53:379 (3,4,5,6,1) - Still feels this flow is weird. (90% degree large spacing at 6 to 1)

01:00:254 Add a note?

01:30:879 (1,2,3) - 90 degree flow with 180 degree turn over on 3, really hard to catch.

01:53:004 (4,1,2,3) - Confusing pattern here. (spacing between 4 and 1 / 1 and 2 and 3)

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Good Luck!

deadpon3 wrote:

hey

I fixed some yesterday but forgot to post them, sorry!

Misure wrote:

粉心大爷你居然给我kd 怀疑要被denyQwQ 其实不会
先edit一个摸出来@_@

[Liqueur]

1. 00:15:379 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建议大点距离，不然和前面一样不开编辑器实在是读不出来 行
2. 00:19:379 (3,4,5,1) - ^ 务必 可以
3. 01:22:879 - NC个？ 没必要
4. 01:43:379 - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:15:629 (4,1) - 建议再远 视觉上像二分拍不像一分 改了
2. 00:17:379 (3,4,1) - 这个flow角度太小不舒服呀 建议滑条换位置 移走了圈
3. 00:25:879 (1,2) - 这个也是太近。 不知道怎么改
4. 01:16:879 (1,2) - ^ 这里还好吧
5. 01:56:629 (2,1) - ^ 2打完1才出来 应该不会读错的
6. 总之hard里放读图梗太不友好了 主要是AR不会很高就容易被坑到（什么你打EZ的 不是很懂你们EZ玩家QwQ 我好像没rank过hard 不太懂怎么做

[Easy]

1. 01:30:754 - 这里好像没鼓点 不如压vocal 现在这样也是挺奇怪的 压vocal也差不多
2. 02:12:879 - 不如就加个note 好

Easy是update后的

虽然挺水至少看着像个摸了，这歌节奏也是挺微妙，就这样
Good luck!

Regraz wrote:

As requested

[Hard]

00:56:879 (3,4) - Try this to follow the sound better? http://puu.sh/nclju/a937b5ace2.jpg I didn't heard this rhythm here....?

01:02:879 (4) - Same at above

Good Luck!

Others were fixed. Thanks!

♥love♥love♥love♥this♥map♥

接好

can you change song title "Secret Liqueue -short ver.-" ?



i love this song. :3 rank this please~ ;w;

Misure wrote:

[imouto's Insane]

1. widescreen support
2. 00:56:379 (9,1) - 感觉近了 有nc 应该没问题
3. 01:16:879 (6,7) - 这个距离还是容易读错 要不就NC nc了
4. 01:27:129 (1) - 168|128怎么样 好啊
5. 01:43:129 (1) - ^

Regraz wrote:

[imouto's Insane]
00:47:754 Add a note here? k

00:51:129 (2) - Seems unsnaped slider-end? fixed

00:53:379 (3,4,5,6,1) - Still feels this flow is weird. (90% degree large spacing at 6 to 1) it feels not overdone to me, I'll see others' opinions

01:00:254 Add a note? k

01:30:879 (1,2,3) - 90 degree flow with 180 degree turn over on 3, really hard to catch.

01:53:004 (4,1,2,3) - Confusing pattern here. (spacing between 4 and 1 / 1 and 2 and 3)

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Good Luck!

Warpyc wrote:

Insane
[*] Same basic rhythm stuff as diff above (example: 00:15:879 (6) - shouldnt be mapped imo)
[*] Copy this 00:41:879 (2) - and paste here 00:42:379 (3) - sorry, didn't get your point...
[*] 00:53:379 (3,4,5,6) - Overlap with 00:51:879 (4) - sliderend not so obvious in ar9, I think it's fine
[*] 02:14:629 (5) - uneven spacing feels fine to me
***
[*] Nice map, where is the normal though? Anyways gl with map![/list]

Thanks for modding.

没什么能说的，非常简洁的图【排列音效什么的】射个星吧，好运

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[Easy]
00:19:879 (2) - 不如删掉
00:35:379 (2) - 这个滑条结尾听起来好奇怪，不如删掉这个，然后前面那个滑条折返
01:21:129 (1) - 改成单点啊
01:21:129 (1,2,3,1) - 节奏改成这样
01:27:379 (1,2) - 对于ez来说太坑爹了，不过我感觉有点无解
01:34:879 (4) - 用长滑条啊，不要折返
01:41:879 (2) - 缩短1/1到 01:42:254结束
01:46:879 (4) - 放错位置了吧
02:11:879 (1,2) - 不要叠

最低难度少用白线到红线这种空拍


[Normal]
00:23:879 (1,2,3) - 有点难打，试试这样
00:35:379 (3,1) - 难度，建议3折返一下之后1ds一下
01:11:629 (3) - 这个要是跟鼓那后面的01:12:879 (4) - 最好也跟鼓（移到01:12:254
如果跟人声就统一一下

[Hard]
00:27:129 (3,2,3) - 叠啊
00:40:254 (2) - 别漏白线啊
01:13:879 (1) - 改成折返好读点
01:30:879 (3) - 音应该在前面的红线上
01:42:754 (5) - 改成1/1滑条我感觉有趣点
居然复制粘贴，节操呢




[一抹多大师's insane]
00:15:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里跟萨克斯还是吉他感觉听起来都不对劲啊
00:36:379 (3,4,5,6,7) - 有点难读，建议你这5个摆个几何图形，后面两个叠
01:01:629 (1) - 我感觉不用NC

[人玩？]
01:42:754 (1) - 这里用1/8折返跟那个钢琴啊

卧槽这个真的好听，你们不带我一份我生气了(`ε´ )

顺便你这BG我真是prpr到死了

oops

Warpyc wrote:

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  Liqueur

1. 00:15:879 (7) - There is a guitar sound here not a jazzy sound or whatever which is confusing I suggest you remove it Rearranged nc to fit it better
2. 00:38:879 (4) - Starts on piano sound and ends on drum end it here on piano (also fits with vocal better) instead 00:39:254 - I'll consider
3. 00:39:629 (5) - Not really any mucis here but if you're mapping the vocals make it a slider feels fine to me
4. 00:39:879 (1,2,3) - I dont like the spacing of this I know its calm vocal but it's very akward to play just space it a bit more not by much but at least so people dont confuse it with 1/4 I didn't see misreading in testplays...
5. 00:43:879 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 00:47:629 (6,7,1) - ^ I keep thinking it is 1/4
7. 00:49:629 (6,7,1) - ^
8. 00:50:379 (2) - End here instead 00:50:754 - because right now it ends on no sound I don't need to follow every sound, right?
9. 00:51:379 (4,5,1) - Ok I will stop pointing it out now but I dont like it
10. 01:45:754 (1) - Ctrl G current flows better imo
11. 01:51:629 (4) - I know it's intense music but this is mega jump for 240bpm not so mega for me ._.
12. 02:05:879 (7) - This isnt a jazz sound so it feels kinda weird I'd remove it just because it follows the rhythm better rearranged nc
13. 02:09:879 (7) - ^
14. 02:13:879 (7) - ^

OblivioN wrote:

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  [Liqueur]

1. 01:59:129 - 01:59:379 -01:59:629-可以加点东西衬托一下vocal，折返也好，note也好 比较想要一个骤然放空的感觉
   [Hard]
2. 01:09:379 (6) - 往返遮挡大丈夫？至少我看到的时候01:08:254 (2) - 还没有完全消失 [/color]

没什么能说的，非常简洁的图【排列音效什么的】射个星吧，好运

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[Easy]
00:19:879 (2) - 不如删掉 我看挺多用这种节奏的 效果还行
00:35:379 (2) - 这个滑条结尾听起来好奇怪，不如删掉这个，然后前面那个滑条折返 不太好排版啊 考虑一下
01:21:129 (1) - 改成单点啊
01:21:129 (1,2,3,1) - 节奏改成这样 一部分改了

jpg

01:27:379 (1,2) - 对于ez来说太坑爹了，不过我感觉有点无解
01:34:879 (4) - 用长滑条啊，不要折返 行
01:41:879 (2) - 缩短1/1到 01:42:254结束 不好
01:46:879 (4) - 放错位置了吧 改了
02:11:879 (1,2) - 不要叠 行

最低难度少用白线到红线这种空拍 没辙啊


[Normal]
00:23:879 (1,2,3) - 有点难打，试试这样 好

jpg

00:35:379 (3,1) - 难度，建议3折返一下之后1ds一下 行
01:11:629 (3) - 这个要是跟鼓那后面的01:12:879 (4) - 最好也跟鼓（移到01:12:254 行
如果跟人声就统一一下

[Hard]
00:27:129 (3,2,3) - 叠啊 不要
00:40:254 (2) - 别漏白线啊 行
01:13:879 (1) - 改成折返好读点 不差这点
01:30:879 (3) - 音应该在前面的红线上 跟的人声 音效是自创节奏
01:42:754 (5) - 改成1/1滑条我感觉有趣点 得靠这个梗撑星
居然复制粘贴，节操呢 \:D/

[人玩？]
01:42:754 (1) - 这里用1/8折返跟那个钢琴啊 不如滑条爽

卧槽这个真的好听，你们不带我一份我生气了(`ε´ )

Thanks for modding!

queue

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[Spread]

I'm a little concerned about the difficulty jump between Normal - Hard

[Easy]

00:35:379 (2,3) - really weird flow; (3) should be further left
00:55:879 (3) - aaa imo this slider is not very pretty ;w;
00:59:879 (3) - the end of this slider should be a normal hitnormal (snare), not a whistle
01:30:879 (5) - this slider should follow the same rhythmic pattern (because the lyric rhythm is the same). Extend it so it starts on the previous red tick
01:46:879 (4) - ^
02:05:379 (2) - ends on a really strong beat, use 2 2/1 hitcircles instead?

[Normal]

01:09:629 (1) - ends on a really strong beat, should be 2 hitcircles

[Hard]

00:21:504 (4,1) - ugly overlap; move (1) to the right?
00:26:379 (2) - spaced way too close to (1); try some ctrl+g strategy?
00:29:504 (6,1) - ugly overlap again
01:09:379 (6,7) - ^ and for better flow this stuff should be to the left of (5)
01:25:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i like this hahaha
01:27:379 (1) - i know it's a very nice blanket but I feel like this should be spaced further away for more emphasis. it could also be because 01:26:754 (7) - ends on a really strong beat that probably should be clicked on instead
01:36:879 (5,6) - ugly overlap, move (6) up
01:43:379 (2) - space further away
01:58:629 (3) - this needs some kind of emphasis, either a whistle or soft-hitfinish or something
02:00:379 (2) - really should be spaced further
02:04:379 (2) - again should be spaced further, try ctrl+g
02:15:129 (5) - make this a two-note stack?

[imouto's Insane]

00:16:379 (3) - whistle on the start of this?
00:17:379 (7) - ^
00:37:129 (1) - space this further for better pacing and readability
00:43:254 (5,7) - ugly overlap :/
01:09:879 (1,3) - (3) can blanket (1) better
01:22:379 (2,3) - ugly overlap, move (3) up and to the right?
02:02:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I strongly disagree with completely covering the slider heads with the slider tracks. It can be unreadable and it used to be unrankable.
02:10:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[Liqueur]

00:38:879 (4) - you missed the beat at 00:39:254 -
00:43:379 (5) - this should be further away from (4)
00:55:254 - add note, or acknowledge this beat in some way
00:56:254 (3) - remove new combo
00:59:254 (5) - really big jump given your 1/1 is spaced quite close together
01:08:254 - missing beat
01:17:879 (1,2) - ugly overlap. I like it better if (2) is placed so that (1) blankets the start of (2)
01:23:504 (8) - the vocal is not on the red tick; it's at 01:23:629 -
01:26:754 (1) - make this a little 1/8 repeat slider so you emphasize the little trill in the melody?
01:38:629 (3,4) - ctrl+g much better flow
01:51:754 (5) - woah! this jump is huge! if anything, the jump should be from (5) to (1), not from (4) to (5).

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very catchy, GL

-SMIC