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Shimotsuki Haruka - Secret Liqueur -Short ver-

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Fia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年3月29日 at 17:39:14

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Secret Liqueur -Short ver-
Source: 働くオトナの恋愛事情
Tags: imoutosan Eggache0 opening galgame eroge visual novel
BPM: 240
Filesize: 3669kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.36 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Extra (4.84 stars, 431 notes)
  3. Hard (3.04 stars, 298 notes)
  4. Insane (3.78 stars, 355 notes)
  5. Liqueur (5.67 stars, 493 notes)
  6. Normal (2.07 stars, 181 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Secret Liqueur -Short ver-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane and Extra by imoutosan

vote 1 if you can't pass it.
Misure
从精神上支持一下owo
DiscoTheBudgie
great map :D
Cherry Blossom
Love you and this map ♥
Frostmourne
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deadpon3
hey :)

Easy:

Sliders are too fast you know.
00:27:879 (3) - This looks strange for Easy diff.
00:39:379 (2,3,4) - You don't need to skip the beat between 3 and 4.
00:45:879 (1,2) - Copy/paste, looks bad :/
00:55:879 (3) - Another strange slider.
00:59:879 (3) - ^
01:03:879 (3) - ^
01:07:879 (3) - ^
01:23:879 (3,4,5) - Bad spacing, kinda spam in one place.
01:25:879 (1) - Strange slider.
01:27:379 (1) - That circle should not exist :3
01:50:629 (4) - Strange slider.
02:11:879 (1,1,2) - Delete these objects and make a spinner from 02:11:879 to 02:15:379

Hard:

Oh Jeez everything is so fast. Make the sliders waaaay slower.

00:15:629 (4,1) - Too close to each other.
00:36:629 (3,4) - Too far away.
00:51:129 (4) - Add some beauty to it, looks bad comparing to everything else.
00:58:879 (3) - This one isn't so pretty too :)
01:09:004 (5,6) - Start 6 from the end of 5.
01:17:254 (2,3,4) - I think repeater would be nicer.
01:17:629 (5,1) - Too far away.
01:21:879 (1,2) - Ugly shapes :/
01:25:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hard to read.
01:50:629 (3,4) - Why are they so spaced?

Liqueur:

00:15:379 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's spaced as the previous slider, but it's slower.
00:19:754 (1,2,3) - Hard to read.
00:25:879 (1) - Ugly slider.
00:53:379 (5,6,7,8) - Too spaced.
00:55:379 (5,1,2,1,2) - Way too spaced for 1/8.
00:59:879 (1,2,3,4) - Airman style, too stacked.
01:01:254 (3,4) - Too far away.
01:01:379 (4,5,6,7) - Should not be a jump, more like a stream.
01:17:379 (2,3,4,5) - Changing directions, spaced jumpstream. Nerf it a bit.
01:25:129 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whaaaaaa... That random difficulty change.
01:26:754 (1,1) - 2x NC
01:27:129 (1,2,3) - Too stacked.
01:31:629 (3,1) - Too far away.
01:43:129 (2,3) - Too spaced.

Well, the last diff is pretty hard, but looks cool.
Good luck with ranking it :D
Misure
imouto's Insane
00:51:129 (2) -

================================
粉心大爷你居然给我kd 怀疑要被denyQwQ
先edit一个摸出来@_@

[Liqueur]
  1. 00:15:379 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建议大点距离,不然和前面一样不开编辑器实在是读不出来
  2. 00:19:379 (3,4,5,1) - ^ 务必
  3. 01:22:879 - NC个?
  4. 01:43:379 - ^
[imouto's Insane]
  1. widescreen support
  2. 00:56:379 (9,1) - 感觉近了
  3. 01:16:879 (6,7) - 这个距离还是容易读错 要不就NC
  4. 01:27:129 (1) - 168|128怎么样
  5. 01:43:129 (1) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:629 (4,1) - 建议再远 视觉上像二分拍不像一分
  2. 00:17:379 (3,4,1) - 这个flow角度太小不舒服呀 建议滑条换位置
  3. 00:25:879 (1,2) - 这个也是太近。
  4. 01:16:879 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:56:629 (2,1) - ^
  6. 总之hard里放读图梗太不友好了 主要是AR不会很高就容易被坑到(什么你打EZ的 不是很懂你们EZ玩家QwQ
[Easy]
  1. 01:30:754 - 这里好像没鼓点 不如压vocal 现在这样也是挺奇怪的
  2. 02:12:879 - 不如就加个note
Easy是update后的

虽然挺水至少看着像个摸了,这歌节奏也是挺微妙,就这样
Good luck!
Mafumafu
As requested
[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
00:21:879 (1) - better to calibrate the spacing to 1.1x. There're many notes with spacings like 0.99x/1.00x/1.01x Better to check them again to prevent potential issues.

Use slider at 01:21:879 So that you wont have some weird empty here.

01:27:379 (1,2) - Really not recommend stacking these two because it's not 1/1. It's 3/4!!!

02:06:379 (3) - Not recommend adding Finish on the reverse point. it sounds a little off-place with original finish in the music.

02:08:129 怎么空了一段?感觉不太好

[Hard]
00:15:629 (4,1) - The current spacing is relatively low, thus it could be easily misread. Better to enlarge it.

00:56:879 (3,4) - Try this to follow the sound better? http://puu.sh/nclju/a937b5ace2.jpg

01:02:879 (4) - Same at above

[imouto's Insane]
00:47:754 Add a note here?

00:51:129 (2) - Seems unsnaped slider-end?

00:53:379 (3,4,5,6,1) - Still feels this flow is weird. (90% degree large spacing at 6 to 1)

01:00:254 Add a note?

01:30:879 (1,2,3) - 90 degree flow with 180 degree turn over on 3, really hard to catch.

01:53:004 (4,1,2,3) - Confusing pattern here. (spacing between 4 and 1 / 1 and 2 and 3)

=======================
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Fia

deadpon3 wrote:

hey :)
I fixed some yesterday but forgot to post them, sorry!

Misure wrote:

粉心大爷你居然给我kd 怀疑要被denyQwQ 其实不会
先edit一个摸出来@_@

[Liqueur]
  1. 00:15:379 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建议大点距离,不然和前面一样不开编辑器实在是读不出来
  2. 00:19:379 (3,4,5,1) - ^ 务必 可以
  3. 01:22:879 - NC个? 没必要
  4. 01:43:379 - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:629 (4,1) - 建议再远 视觉上像二分拍不像一分 改了
  2. 00:17:379 (3,4,1) - 这个flow角度太小不舒服呀 建议滑条换位置 移走了圈
  3. 00:25:879 (1,2) - 这个也是太近。 不知道怎么改
  4. 01:16:879 (1,2) - ^ 这里还好吧
  5. 01:56:629 (2,1) - ^ 2打完1才出来 应该不会读错的
  6. 总之hard里放读图梗太不友好了 主要是AR不会很高就容易被坑到(什么你打EZ的 不是很懂你们EZ玩家QwQ 我好像没rank过hard 不太懂怎么做
[Easy]
  1. 01:30:754 - 这里好像没鼓点 不如压vocal 现在这样也是挺奇怪的 压vocal也差不多
  2. 02:12:879 - 不如就加个note
Easy是update后的

虽然挺水至少看着像个摸了,这歌节奏也是挺微妙,就这样
Good luck!

Regraz wrote:

As requested

[Hard]

00:56:879 (3,4) - Try this to follow the sound better? http://puu.sh/nclju/a937b5ace2.jpg I didn't heard this rhythm here....?

01:02:879 (4) - Same at above

Good Luck!
Others were fixed. Thanks!
Warpyc

  • Liqueur
  1. 00:15:879 (7) - There is a guitar sound here not a jazzy sound or whatever which is confusing I suggest you remove it
  2. 00:38:879 (4) - Starts on piano sound and ends on drum end it here on piano (also fits with vocal better) instead 00:39:254 -
  3. 00:39:629 (5) - Not really any mucis here but if you're mapping the vocals make it a slider
  4. 00:39:879 (1,2,3) - I dont like the spacing of this I know its calm vocal but it's very akward to play just space it a bit more not by much but at least so people dont confuse it with 1/4
  5. 00:43:879 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 00:47:629 (6,7,1) - ^ I keep thinking it is 1/4 :?
  7. 00:49:629 (6,7,1) - ^
  8. 00:50:379 (2) - End here instead 00:50:754 - because right now it ends on no sound
  9. 00:51:379 (4,5,1) - Ok I will stop pointing it out now but I dont like it
  10. 01:45:754 (1) - Ctrl G
  11. 01:51:629 (4) - I know it's intense music but this is mega jump for 240bpm
  12. 02:05:879 (7) - This isnt a jazz sound so it feels kinda weird I'd remove it just because it follows the rhythm better
  13. 02:09:879 (7) - ^
  14. 02:13:879 (7) - ^

    Insane
  15. Same basic rhythm stuff as diff above (example: 00:15:879 (6) - shouldnt be mapped imo)
  16. Copy this 00:41:879 (2) - and paste here 00:42:379 (3) -
  17. 00:53:379 (3,4,5,6) - Overlap with 00:51:879 (4) - sliderend
  18. 02:14:629 (5) - uneven spacing
    ***
  19. Nice map, where is the normal though? Anyways gl with map!
UndeadCapulet
♥love♥love♥love♥this♥map♥
Fushimi Rio
接好
Aoba Misaki
can you change song title "Secret Liqueue -short ver.-" ?



i love this song. :3 rank this please~ ;w;
Fushimi Rio

Misure wrote:

[imouto's Insane]
  1. widescreen support
  2. 00:56:379 (9,1) - 感觉近了 有nc 应该没问题
  3. 01:16:879 (6,7) - 这个距离还是容易读错 要不就NC nc了
  4. 01:27:129 (1) - 168|128怎么样 好啊
  5. 01:43:129 (1) - ^

Regraz wrote:

[imouto's Insane]
00:47:754 Add a note here? k

00:51:129 (2) - Seems unsnaped slider-end? fixed

00:53:379 (3,4,5,6,1) - Still feels this flow is weird. (90% degree large spacing at 6 to 1) it feels not overdone to me, I'll see others' opinions

01:00:254 Add a note? k

01:30:879 (1,2,3) - 90 degree flow with 180 degree turn over on 3, really hard to catch.

01:53:004 (4,1,2,3) - Confusing pattern here. (spacing between 4 and 1 / 1 and 2 and 3)

=======================
Good Luck!

Warpyc wrote:

Insane

[*] Same basic rhythm stuff as diff above (example: 00:15:879 (6) - shouldnt be mapped imo)
[*] Copy this 00:41:879 (2) - and paste here 00:42:379 (3) - sorry, didn't get your point...
[*] 00:53:379 (3,4,5,6) - Overlap with 00:51:879 (4) - sliderend not so obvious in ar9, I think it's fine
[*] 02:14:629 (5) - uneven spacing feels fine to me
***

[*] Nice map, where is the normal though? Anyways gl with map![/list]
Thanks for modding.
OblivioN

  • [Liqueur]
  1. 01:59:129 - 01:59:379 -01:59:629-可以加点东西衬托一下vocal,折返也好,note也好
    [imouto's Insane]
  2. 00:22:379 (4) - 这里的ds是0.31 00:22:212 (2,3) - 这俩都是0.45和0.48 平均一下?
    [Hard]
  3. 01:09:379 (6) - 往返遮挡大丈夫?至少我看到的时候01:08:254 (2) - 还没有完全消失

没什么能说的,非常简洁的图【排列音效什么的】射个星吧,好运
Mei
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[Easy]
00:19:879 (2) - 不如删掉
00:35:379 (2) - 这个滑条结尾听起来好奇怪,不如删掉这个,然后前面那个滑条折返
01:21:129 (1) - 改成单点啊
01:21:129 (1,2,3,1) - 节奏改成这样
01:27:379 (1,2) - 对于ez来说太坑爹了,不过我感觉有点无解
01:34:879 (4) - 用长滑条啊,不要折返
01:41:879 (2) - 缩短1/1到 01:42:254结束
01:46:879 (4) - 放错位置了吧
02:11:879 (1,2) - 不要叠

最低难度少用白线到红线这种空拍


[Normal]
00:23:879 (1,2,3) - 有点难打,试试这样
00:35:379 (3,1) - 难度,建议3折返一下之后1ds一下
01:11:629 (3) - 这个要是跟鼓那后面的01:12:879 (4) - 最好也跟鼓(移到01:12:254
如果跟人声就统一一下

[Hard]
00:27:129 (3,2,3) - 叠啊
00:40:254 (2) - 别漏白线啊
01:13:879 (1) - 改成折返好读点
01:30:879 (3) - 音应该在前面的红线上
01:42:754 (5) - 改成1/1滑条我感觉有趣点
居然复制粘贴,节操呢




[一抹多大师's insane]
00:15:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里跟萨克斯还是吉他感觉听起来都不对劲啊
00:36:379 (3,4,5,6,7) - 有点难读,建议你这5个摆个几何图形,后面两个叠
01:01:629 (1) - 我感觉不用NC

[人玩?]
01:42:754 (1) - 这里用1/8折返跟那个钢琴啊

卧槽这个真的好听,你们不带我一份我生气了(`ε´ )
Mei
顺便你这BG我真是prpr到死了
Topic Starter
Fia
oops
Topic Starter
Fia
:cry:

Warpyc wrote:


  • Liqueur
  1. 00:15:879 (7) - There is a guitar sound here not a jazzy sound or whatever which is confusing I suggest you remove it Rearranged nc to fit it better
  2. 00:38:879 (4) - Starts on piano sound and ends on drum end it here on piano (also fits with vocal better) instead 00:39:254 - I'll consider
  3. 00:39:629 (5) - Not really any mucis here but if you're mapping the vocals make it a slider feels fine to me
  4. 00:39:879 (1,2,3) - I dont like the spacing of this I know its calm vocal but it's very akward to play just space it a bit more not by much but at least so people dont confuse it with 1/4 I didn't see misreading in testplays...
  5. 00:43:879 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 00:47:629 (6,7,1) - ^ I keep thinking it is 1/4 :?
  7. 00:49:629 (6,7,1) - ^
  8. 00:50:379 (2) - End here instead 00:50:754 - because right now it ends on no sound I don't need to follow every sound, right?
  9. 00:51:379 (4,5,1) - Ok I will stop pointing it out now but I dont like it
  10. 01:45:754 (1) - Ctrl G current flows better imo
  11. 01:51:629 (4) - I know it's intense music but this is mega jump for 240bpm not so mega for me ._.
  12. 02:05:879 (7) - This isnt a jazz sound so it feels kinda weird I'd remove it just because it follows the rhythm better rearranged nc
  13. 02:09:879 (7) - ^
  14. 02:13:879 (7) - ^

OblivioN wrote:


  • [Liqueur]
  1. 01:59:129 - 01:59:379 -01:59:629-可以加点东西衬托一下vocal,折返也好,note也好 比较想要一个骤然放空的感觉
    [Hard]
  2. 01:09:379 (6) - 往返遮挡大丈夫?至少我看到的时候01:08:254 (2) - 还没有完全消失 [/color]

没什么能说的,非常简洁的图【排列音效什么的】射个星吧,好运

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[Easy]
00:19:879 (2) - 不如删掉 我看挺多用这种节奏的 效果还行
00:35:379 (2) - 这个滑条结尾听起来好奇怪,不如删掉这个,然后前面那个滑条折返 不太好排版啊 考虑一下
01:21:129 (1) - 改成单点啊
01:21:129 (1,2,3,1) - 节奏改成这样 一部分改了
01:27:379 (1,2) - 对于ez来说太坑爹了,不过我感觉有点无解
01:34:879 (4) - 用长滑条啊,不要折返
01:41:879 (2) - 缩短1/1到 01:42:254结束 不好
01:46:879 (4) - 放错位置了吧 改了
02:11:879 (1,2) - 不要叠

最低难度少用白线到红线这种空拍 没辙啊


[Normal]
00:23:879 (1,2,3) - 有点难打,试试这样
00:35:379 (3,1) - 难度,建议3折返一下之后1ds一下
01:11:629 (3) - 这个要是跟鼓那后面的01:12:879 (4) - 最好也跟鼓(移到01:12:254
如果跟人声就统一一下

[Hard]
00:27:129 (3,2,3) - 叠啊 不要
00:40:254 (2) - 别漏白线啊
01:13:879 (1) - 改成折返好读点 不差这点
01:30:879 (3) - 音应该在前面的红线上 跟的人声 音效是自创节奏
01:42:754 (5) - 改成1/1滑条我感觉有趣点 得靠这个梗撑星
居然复制粘贴,节操呢 \:D/

[人玩?]
01:42:754 (1) - 这里用1/8折返跟那个钢琴啊 不如滑条爽

卧槽这个真的好听,你们不带我一份我生气了(`ε´ )
Thanks for modding!
SuperMIC
queue

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[Spread]

I'm a little concerned about the difficulty jump between Normal - Hard

[Easy]

00:35:379 (2,3) - really weird flow; (3) should be further left
00:55:879 (3) - aaa imo this slider is not very pretty ;w;
00:59:879 (3) - the end of this slider should be a normal hitnormal (snare), not a whistle
01:30:879 (5) - this slider should follow the same rhythmic pattern (because the lyric rhythm is the same). Extend it so it starts on the previous red tick
01:46:879 (4) - ^
02:05:379 (2) - ends on a really strong beat, use 2 2/1 hitcircles instead?

[Normal]

01:09:629 (1) - ends on a really strong beat, should be 2 hitcircles

[Hard]

00:21:504 (4,1) - ugly overlap; move (1) to the right?
00:26:379 (2) - spaced way too close to (1); try some ctrl+g strategy?
00:29:504 (6,1) - ugly overlap again
01:09:379 (6,7) - ^ and for better flow this stuff should be to the left of (5)
01:25:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i like this hahaha
01:27:379 (1) - i know it's a very nice blanket but I feel like this should be spaced further away for more emphasis. it could also be because 01:26:754 (7) - ends on a really strong beat that probably should be clicked on instead
01:36:879 (5,6) - ugly overlap, move (6) up
01:43:379 (2) - space further away
01:58:629 (3) - this needs some kind of emphasis, either a whistle or soft-hitfinish or something
02:00:379 (2) - really should be spaced further
02:04:379 (2) - again should be spaced further, try ctrl+g
02:15:129 (5) - make this a two-note stack?

[imouto's Insane]

00:16:379 (3) - whistle on the start of this?
00:17:379 (7) - ^
00:37:129 (1) - space this further for better pacing and readability
00:43:254 (5,7) - ugly overlap :/
01:09:879 (1,3) - (3) can blanket (1) better
01:22:379 (2,3) - ugly overlap, move (3) up and to the right?
02:02:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I strongly disagree with completely covering the slider heads with the slider tracks. It can be unreadable and it used to be unrankable.
02:10:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[Liqueur]

00:38:879 (4) - you missed the beat at 00:39:254 -
00:43:379 (5) - this should be further away from (4)
00:55:254 - add note, or acknowledge this beat in some way
00:56:254 (3) - remove new combo
00:59:254 (5) - really big jump given your 1/1 is spaced quite close together
01:08:254 - missing beat
01:17:879 (1,2) - ugly overlap. I like it better if (2) is placed so that (1) blankets the start of (2)
01:23:504 (8) - the vocal is not on the red tick; it's at 01:23:629 -
01:26:754 (1) - make this a little 1/8 repeat slider so you emphasize the little trill in the melody?
01:38:629 (3,4) - ctrl+g much better flow
01:51:754 (5) - woah! this jump is huge! if anything, the jump should be from (5) to (1), not from (4) to (5).

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very catchy, GL

-SMIC
Topic Starter
Fia

SuperMIC wrote:

queue

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[Spread]

I'm a little concerned about the difficulty jump between Normal - Hard I‘m not sure

[Easy]

00:35:379 (2,3) - really weird flow; (3) should be further left It's still fine
00:55:879 (3) - aaa imo this slider is not very pretty ;w; not so bad imo
00:59:879 (3) - the end of this slider should be a normal hitnormal (snare), not a whistle fixed
01:30:879 (5) - this slider should follow the same rhythmic pattern (because the lyric rhythm is the same). Extend it so it starts on the previous red tick it will be too hard
01:46:879 (4) - ^
02:05:379 (2) - ends on a really strong beat, use 2 2/1 hitcircles instead? for ez slider end is fine

[Normal]

01:09:629 (1) - ends on a really strong beat, should be 2 hitcircles i'll consider

[Hard]

00:21:504 (4,1) - ugly overlap; move (1) to the right? not ugly imo
00:26:379 (2) - spaced way too close to (1); try some ctrl+g strategy? I didn't see misreading in several testplays
00:29:504 (6,1) - ugly overlap again ^
01:09:379 (6,7) - ^ and for better flow this stuff should be to the left of (5) i'll how to fix
01:25:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i like this hahaha
01:27:379 (1) - i know it's a very nice blanket but I feel like this should be spaced further away for more emphasis. it could also be because 01:26:754 (7) - ends on a really strong beat that probably should be clicked on instead nice
01:36:879 (5,6) - ugly overlap, move (6) up
01:43:379 (2) - space further away it's fine
01:58:629 (3) - this needs some kind of emphasis, either a whistle or soft-hitfinish or something added
02:00:379 (2) - really should be spaced further
02:04:379 (2) - again should be spaced further, try ctrl+g
02:15:129 (5) - make this a two-note stack? current flows better

[Liqueur]

00:38:879 (4) - you missed the beat at 00:39:254 - I don't want to follow all beats
00:43:379 (5) - this should be further away from (4) changed rhythm
00:55:254 - add note, or acknowledge this beat in some way no
00:56:254 (3) - remove new combo fixed
00:59:254 (5) - really big jump given your 1/1 is spaced quite close together still readable
01:08:254 - missing beat
01:17:879 (1,2) - ugly overlap. I like it better if (2) is placed so that (1) blankets the start of (2)
01:23:504 (8) - the vocal is not on the red tick; it's at 01:23:629 - but i'm not following vocal
01:26:754 (1) - make this a little 1/8 repeat slider so you emphasize the little trill in the melody? feels not good to me
01:38:629 (3,4) - ctrl+g much better flow not good if you play this
01:51:754 (5) - woah! this jump is huge! if anything, the jump should be from (5) to (1), not from (4) to (5). it's fine

---

very catchy, GL

-SMIC
Thanks for modding!
Veshurik
Thank you for the map!

Does anybody have lyrics of this song? And will be the full version (can't find it, unfortunately).

Thank you for the answer!
Topic Starter
Fia

Veshurik wrote:

Thank you for the map!

Does anybody have lyrics of this song? And will be the full version (can't find it, unfortunately).

Thank you for the answer!
I didn't found full ver in the OST so I guess it isn't released now.


Edit: I don't know. I just have this image of lyric.
Veshurik
Hope it will release in the future.
So, do you know how can I get the lyrics of this song? I try to find it, but... eh, ineffectually.
X Light
[Liqueur]
  1. 00:29:129 (1,2,3) - 也可以这么下节奏http://puu.sh/nohnd/3e551f50b6.jpg 和前面一样音效跟鼓
    大概摆成这样http://puu.sh/nohnd/3e551f50b6.jpg
  2. 00:29:254 (2) - 还有个事就是前面1的镲声应该放这里
  3. 00:38:879 (4) - 我觉得这种滑条在结尾接一个短直滑条会感觉很好,虽然不知道你一开始是什么样
  4. 01:23:129 (7) - 这里的节奏的话 http://puu.sh/noijg/96ac63def5.jpg
  5. 01:34:629 (3,4) - 这里要我就干脆摆3个note 要不像01:50:629 (3,4) - 这样放也ok
  6. 01:45:754 (1) - 我不太喜欢这个形状说实话..柑橘可以直接摆圆弧啊
  7. 01:55:629 (2,3,4) - 把4弄成滑条怎么样 http://puu.sh/noj5D/62936fe4c3.jpg
  8. 01:57:254 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这几个也可以像02:09:379 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这几个这样排
很好听!图做的也不错,和歌的风格挺搭配的 :)
smallboat
[General]
  1. Nothing to say
[Easy]
  1. 00:41:879 (1) - 間距
  2. 00:55:879 (3) - 好像中間有一點減掉速度
  3. 00:59:879 (3) - 這個急彎滑條在ez還是少用點,一般在最低難度都會用得比較整潔
  4. 01:21:879 (1) - 感覺快擦邊了上面一點
  5. 01:36:379 (1) - 超出螢幕
[Normall]
  1. 01:35:004 (2) - 如果放在大白線跟vocal會比較好拿捏play,這個重音真的聽起來不太明顯,可以再考慮
  2. 01:51:004 (1) - 同上
[Hard] Normal到Hard 有滑條速度的差距,不能差太多 (SV gap),縮到差距0.40~0.50確保安全 (SV改到1.20)
  1. 00:16:629 (2) - 滑條尾沒壓到snap建議改成這樣 :
  2. 00:32:378 (3) - 同上
  3. 01:05:879 (1) - 擺的太上面了會被找碴
  4. 01:25:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在Hard別用這麼多note的排列,這變成ins擺法了
[Insane]
  1. 01:14:629 (2) - 可以加一個note會玩得比較好
  2. 01:19:879 (1) - 尾端忘了finish
  3. 01:21:629 (3,4,1) - 這疊得太粗糙了建議疊好
  4. 01:27:379 (2,3,1) - 這建議要改一下,擺放間距一樣,但上面節奏距離不一樣很容易被坑,3還是疊在滑條頭上吧
  5. 01:43:379 (2,3,1) - 同上
[Extra] 感覺後面有些nc不需那麼長,一些00:39:879 (6) - 00:47:879 (5) - 和像這種大白線的建議加個NC
  1. 00:20:004 (2,3) - 2到3中間的那節奏音很明顯怎麼不放節奏,另外00:19:879 (1,2) - 聽起來沒什麼感覺要跳這邊突然就大跳了玩的好莫名。
  2. 01:27:379 (2,3,1) - 這間距..
  3. 01:43:379 (2,3,1) - 同上
[Liqueur] 很有藝術的diff,OD調7.5有點太低,HP7.5吧,8有點高。
  1. 01:02:879 (4) - 折返好像卡了一下速度
  2. 01:27:629 (3,1) - 最好是疊起來,因為節奏間距有一段距離
  3. 02:08:379 (5,1) - 這間距沒處理好,要拉開一點,太近 (順便也檢查一下相同部分有沒有漏的)
Fushimi Rio

OblivioN wrote:


  • [imouto's Insane]
  1. 00:22:379 (4) - 这里的ds是0.31 00:22:212 (2,3) - 这俩都是0.45和0.48 平均一下? 是我放歪了

没什么能说的,非常简洁的图【排列音效什么的】射个星吧,好运

Mei wrote:

[一抹多大师's insane]
00:15:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里跟萨克斯还是吉他感觉听起来都不对劲啊 萨克斯在白线上都有音啊 我听着没问题
00:36:379 (3,4,5,6,7) - 有点难读,建议你这5个摆个几何图形,后面两个叠 我想保留这个排列 ar弄高了一点
01:01:629 (1) - 我感觉不用NC 是没必要 改掉了

卧槽这个真的好听,你们不带我一份我生气了(`ε´ ) 这人一天就把set搞定了 我也很无奈……

SuperMIC wrote:

[imouto's Insane]

00:16:379 (3) - whistle on the start of this? nice
00:17:379 (7) - ^ no
00:37:129 (1) - space this further for better pacing and readability raised ar and it seems fine now
00:43:254 (5,7) - ugly overlap :/ fine imo
01:09:879 (1,3) - (3) can blanket (1) better 1 will be already disappeared at that time
01:22:379 (2,3) - ugly overlap, move (3) up and to the right? I like current flow
02:02:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I strongly disagree with completely covering the slider heads with the slider tracks. It can be unreadable and it used to be unrankable. It is visible for new default skin now
02:10:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

very catchy, GL

-SMIC

smallboat wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 01:21:629 (3,4,1) - 這疊得太粗糙了建議疊好 叠好就变成现在这个样子了
[Extra] 感覺後面有些nc不需那麼長,一些00:39:879 (6) - 00:47:879 (5) - 和像這種大白線的建議加個NC
  1. 00:20:004 (2,3) - 2到3中間的那節奏音很明顯怎麼不放節奏,另外00:19:879 (1,2) - 聽起來沒什麼感覺要跳這邊突然就大跳了玩的好莫名。 但是这里鼓声也很明显 不知道怎么改先塞满了
  2. 01:27:379 (2,3,1) - 這間距.. 这里人声比较强 实际打的时候我看别人不会读错
  3. 01:43:379 (2,3,1) - 同上
Thanks for mod!
Topic Starter
Fia

X Light wrote:

[Liqueur]
  1. 00:29:129 (1,2,3) - 也可以这么下节奏http://puu.sh/nohnd/3e551f50b6.jpg 和前面一样音效跟鼓 可以跟 但是这里萨克斯太明显了 跟着不爽
    大概摆成这样http://puu.sh/nohnd/3e551f50b6.jpg
  2. 00:29:254 (2) - 还有个事就是前面1的镲声应该放这里那个背景有了 不放也不差很多
  3. 00:38:879 (4) - 我觉得这种滑条在结尾接一个短直滑条会感觉很好,虽然不知道你一开始是什么样 没这个节奏啊 我也觉得很好
  4. 01:23:129 (7) - 这里的节奏的话 http://puu.sh/noijg/96ac63def5.jpg 参照着改了改
  5. 01:34:629 (3,4) - 这里要我就干脆摆3个note 要不像01:50:629 (3,4) - 这样放也ok 嗯 改了
  6. 01:45:754 (1) - 我不太喜欢这个形状说实话..柑橘可以直接摆圆弧啊 我挺喜欢的
  7. 01:55:629 (2,3,4) - 把4弄成滑条怎么样 http://puu.sh/noj5D/62936fe4c3.jpg 不 这里放空和后面两个finish形成对比
  8. 01:57:254 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这几个也可以像02:09:379 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这几个这样排 原地连打更强一点
很好听!图做的也不错,和歌的风格挺搭配的 :)

smallboat wrote:

[General]
[Hard]Normal到Hard 有滑條速度的差距,不能差太多 (SV gap),縮到差距0.40~0.50確保安全 (SV改到1.20) 别的地方改了 kiai实在不好改就还用的1.4
  1. 00:32:378 (3) - 同上 这个就不用了吧 这段鼓点起来了白线节奏听着并不是很违和
  2. 01:25:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在Hard別用這麼多note的排列,這變成ins擺法了 最后两个note换了滑条
[Liqueur] 很有藝術的diff,OD調7.5有點太低,HP7.5吧,8有點高。od8了 HP8我觉得还可以
  1. 01:02:879 (4) - 折返好像卡了一下速度 是要卡一下
  2. 01:27:629 (3,1) - 最好是疊起來,因為節奏間距有一段距離 最高难度就算了 人声很强可以听出来
  3. 02:08:379 (5,1) - 這間距沒處理好,要拉開一點,太近 (順便也檢查一下相同部分有沒有漏的) 应该只有这里 改了
谢谢mod!
smallboat
Confirm some issue fixed, and nothing to say to this. Bubbled
Karen
[Liqueur]
  1. 开头到00:19:754 (6) - 这里都没有音效,空这么一大段显然是不行的,随便加点whistle比较好,其他有的diff也是这样
  2. 音效也太轻了吧
  3. 00:19:754 (6,1) - 换一下NC,三连第一个圈NC比较容易读
  4. 00:36:379 (3,4) - ctrl+g似乎更舒服
  5. 00:57:879 (1,2) - 太近了吧
  6. 01:51:629 (4,5,1) - 4和5距离也太远了,而且5和后面1滑条应该跳一下才比较好
  7. 02:15:253 (3) - 这个note偏了1ms导致结束时间不一样
[Extra]
  1. 00:19:754 (5) - 同最高难度
[Insane]
  1. 有些地方和extra的snap不一样,02:00:754 (4) - 00:14:754 (4) - 剩下的。。我懒癌发作,你自己找找然后统一一下,毕竟这俩diff是一个人做的
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:879 (1) - normal别拉这么弯的滑条了
  2. 00:33:879 (1) - ^
  3. 01:17:879 (1) - ^
  4. 01:59:879 (1) - ^
Fushimi Rio

Karen wrote:

[Extra]
  1. 00:19:754 (5) - 同最高难度 直接把1/4的圈去掉了
[Insane]
  1. 有些地方和extra的snap不一样,02:00:754 (4) - 00:14:754 (4) - 剩下的。。我懒癌发作,你自己找找然后统一一下,毕竟这俩diff是一个人做的
统一了 只有这种滑条有问题
Topic Starter
Fia

Karen wrote:

[Liqueur]
  1. 开头到00:19:754 (6) - 这里都没有音效,空这么一大段显然是不行的,随便加点whistle比较好,其他有的diff也是这样 塞了
  2. 音效也太轻了吧 soft的音效在kiai挺吵的 不能再大了
  3. 00:19:754 (6,1) - 换一下NC,三连第一个圈NC比较容易读
  4. 00:36:379 (3,4) - ctrl+g似乎更舒服 不太好
  5. 00:57:879 (1,2) - 太近了吧 排列有点麻烦啊 我给加了个note变成1/2了
  6. 01:51:629 (4,5,1) - 4和5距离也太远了,而且5和后面1滑条应该跳一下才比较好 打起来就感觉不是很远 5和1我是考虑过 最后觉得叠着强调vocal更好一点
  7. 02:15:253 (3) - 这个note偏了1ms导致结束时间不一样 改了
[Normal]
都改了
Topic Starter
Fia
Updated
KaedekaShizuru

Secret Liqueur -short ver.-
粉心爷爷上点心啊 前面都有人给你游戏界面截图了这还能错

RIP my 400th posts
Topic Starter
Fia

PinkHeart wrote:

Veshurik wrote:

Thank you for the map!

Does anybody have lyrics of this song? And will be the full version (can't find it, unfortunately).

Thank you for the answer!
I didn't found full ver in the OST so I guess it isn't released now.

current is right, xiexie
KaedekaShizuru

oops 装逼大失败233333
提前先grats啦
Karen
Qualified!
-Nanaka-
神曲
Topic Starter
Fia
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