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Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl

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Glass
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July-05-12 at 1:16:05 AM

Artist: Kurenainagi Tabibito
Title: Beloved Tomboyish Girl
Source: Touhou
Tags: Cirno Liverne impossiblexu Numbers 596108 0989596108 Roddie pokedigi
BPM: 140
Filesize: 10407kb
Play Time: 03:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. 596108 & pokedigi's Taiko (4.89 stars, 1000 notes)
  2. Extended (4.96 stars, 998 notes)
  3. Impossiblexu's Hard (4.63 stars, 374 notes)
  4. Insane (4.87 stars, 426 notes)
  5. Roddie's Normal (2.39 stars, 224 notes)
  6. Taiko (4.99 stars, 848 notes)
Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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h-hello...
Natteke
9 ♥
Garven
osu! needs about 5 more mapsets of this song.
Numbers 596108
Topic Starter
Glass

Natteke wrote:

9 ♥
Cirno is not a ⑨ =(

Garven wrote:

osu! needs about 5 more mapsets of this song.
Thanks for the stars :) and yes this song is so awesome it deserves to have more mapsets than bad apple 8-)
Decay
stor
dNextGen
8-)
Faust
Yo Dawg.
Topic Starter
Glass
ohai guise :3
Dotsu
Finished:

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Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Impossiblexu's Hard].osu

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Roddie
Done~

Enjoy ;)

Oh you have a osb. file that isn't being used. Delete it.

And add me in the tags, please. 8-)

Star!


Edit: Improvement.

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Roddie's Normal].osu
Faust

Roddie wrote:

Done~

Enjoy ;)

Oh you have a osb. file that isn't being used. Delete it.

And add me in the tags, please. 8-)

Star!


Edit: Improvement.

[attachment=0:d6918]Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Roddie's Normal].osu[/attachment:d6918]
Actually Roddie. There really isn't a need to delete the osb. file.
peppy said so himself, serious.
Roddie

Faust wrote:

Actually Roddie. There really isn't a need to delete the osb. file.
peppy said so himself, serious.
Oh. Okay then.
Topic Starter
Glass
I deleted it anyway :P
Dotsu
Topic Starter
Glass
Updated, bump!
Lemon Water_old
I love this song! I wish I could map it ;~;
Topic Starter
Glass
:3
Sandpig
hi , here is my mod :)

Hard:

HP Drain -1?
Kiai time?

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 whistles make this part a little loud, try to reduce these hitsounds or volume down.
00:27:708 - 00:55:137 you don't realy need so many claps in this part, they overwhelm the music.

I suggest you remove these claps: 00:28:137/00:28:994/00:31:565/00:32:422/00:34:137/00:34:994/00:38:422/00:41:851/00:45:280/00:46:994/00:50:422/00:51:280/00:52:137

and add these: 00:47:422/00:53:851

00:39:065(2) move to 00:39:172
00:39:387(3) move to 00:39:494 and resnap them(1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:04:994(2) remove clap and add whistle
01:10:565(7,8,9) these three slider are little annoying. I suggest you use a cirele at 01:11:851, a slider from 01:12:065 to 01:12:494, a slider from 01:12:708 to 01:12:922, no note at 01:13:137, and a circle at 01:13:351
01:19:994(1,2,3,4) put them apart each other
01:48:601 remove whistle
03:01:030(6,7) make them closer to each other
03:07:780 add a note?
03:13:565 ^


Impossiblexu's Hard

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 use custom override to clear up the noise from sliders.
00:27:708 - too many claps ><

remove these: 00:28:137/00:33:280/00:36:708/00:39:280/00:41:851/00:46:137/00:54:172/00:54:708

00:40:565(2,3) these two repeat slider make no sence. you can change the slider 2 into a single circle
02:22:565(1,2,3,4) spacing
03:04:565(4) shorten this slider to 03:04:994 and add a circle at 03:05:208


Roddie's Normal

Kiai time?

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 volume down
00:32:422 remove clap
00:32:851 add clap
00:33:280 remove clap
00:37:780 remove whistle
00:45:065(1,2,3,4,5,6) I suggest you remap this part, I think these silders are not friendly to beginners
00:50:208(1,2,3) ^
00:54:708 remove clap
00:55:137 too loud
00:58:351(4) & 00:58:565(1) you'd better not stack them
01:06:280 add whistle
01:07:994 ^
02:04:137 - 02:20:851 add some hitsounds?
02:49:994 add whistle
03:10:994 add a note with clap?


nice map, I enjoy it 8-)
Roddie

shabao_pig wrote:

Roddie's Normal

Kiai time? Nope. :)

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 volume down Sure.
00:32:422 remove clapNo. ._.
00:32:851 add clap ^
00:33:280 remove clap ^
00:37:780 remove whistle No. xD
00:45:065(1,2,3,4,5,6) I suggest you remap this part, I think these silders are not friendly to beginners Fixed. -_-
00:50:208(1,2,3) ^ ^
00:54:708 remove clap No. ._.
00:55:137 too loud Okay, I'll fix that.
00:58:351(4) & 00:58:565(1) you'd better not stack them It's fine.
01:06:280 add whistle No.
01:07:994 ^ ^
02:04:137 - 02:20:851 add some hitsounds? Sure. I forgot to do that,
02:49:994 add whistle Done.
03:10:994 add a note with clap? Done.
Thanks.

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Roddie's Normal].osu
Gabi
*Passes by*

Love this song

You should put Liverne as artist and Kurenainagi Tabibito in Tags. (Keeping it consistant to the other maps.)

Star
Topic Starter
Glass

shabao_pig wrote:

hi , here is my mod :) Hi.

Hard:

HP Drain -1? Nope
Kiai time? I hate having Kiai on bright backgrounds.

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 whistles make this part a little loud, try to reduce these hitsounds or volume down. Done.
00:27:708 - 00:55:137 you don't realy need so many claps in this part, they overwhelm the music. Toned down the volume.

and add these: 00:47:422 Sounds bad.
00:53:851 Okay

00:39:065(2) move to 00:39:172 No, this doesn't sound right to me
00:39:387(3) move to 00:39:494 and resnap them(1,2,3,4,5,6) Neither does this.
01:04:994(2) remove clap and add whistle Done.
01:10:565(7,8,9) these three slider are little annoying. I suggest you use a cirele at 01:11:851, a slider from 01:12:065 to 01:12:494, a slider from 01:12:708 to 01:12:922, no note at 01:13:137, and a circle at 01:13:351 Re-arranged the sliders instead.
01:19:994(1,2,3,4) put them apart each other No.
01:48:601 remove whistle Done.
03:01:030(6,7) make them closer to each other Done.
03:07:780 add a note? No.
03:13:565 ^Done.
Thanks for the mod

Gabi wrote:

*Passes by*

Love this song

You should put Liverne as artist and Kurenainagi Tabibito in Tags. (Keeping it consistant to the other maps.)

Star
Liverne is the publisher, not the artist :/

Thanks for the star
Dotsu

shabao_pig wrote:

Impossiblexu's Hard

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 use custom override to clear up the noise from sliders. Fixed
00:27:708 - too many claps ><

remove these: 00:28:137/00:33:280/00:36:708/00:39:280/00:41:851/00:46:137/00:54:172/00:54:708

00:40:565(2,3) these two repeat slider make no sence. you can change the slider 2 into a single circle
02:22:565(1,2,3,4) spacing
03:04:565(4) shorten this slider to 03:04:994 and add a circle at 03:05:208 Fixed
Thank you very much~

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Impossiblexu's Hard].osu
aabc271
Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Overall]

I prefer offset 275 more, don't change this if you think 280 is OK because i'm not really good at timing~

[596108's Taiko]

00:55:137 (229~245) This stream is quite more difficult compared to other parts of the song. Maybe simplify it a bit ?

02:57:065 (786~800) ^

02:24:280 (595) Add a finish ?

03:22:565 (3) Maybe change the ending point of this slider to 03:24:280 ? I think it is strange to hit the slider without much music ~



No errors found, nice job~ :)

Star and good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
Glass
Thanks for the checking (: I think 280ms is fine though

I'll let 0989596108 decide what to do with the taiko diff

Updated!
narakucrimson
Hi there :D Not much to say, just that maybe the offset would be better at 260 ms.

Really nice map, at least I saw no issues at all. Congratulations for the well done work !

Star!
James2250
If you don't want to do entire kiai sections why not put a fountain at places like 00:27:708 and 02:24:280?
Try and make the stats make more sense (Look at AR/OD/HP on Hard and look at it on Normal, try and fix that)
I get around 270 for offset (don't forget to resnap all notes)

Roddie's Normal:
00:50:422 (1) - sounds odd..add a clap?

Impossiblexu's Hard:
It is advised you don't use more than 3 unique slider speeds
Looks good

Hard:
00:11:851 (5) - new combo to match part before this?
00:38:841 (1) - not sure I like note here
Slowed down part isn't good for hp
Don't like some of the anti jumps like 01:31:137 (5,1)
01:52:565 (3,4,1) - odd spacing

Not bad~
*star*
Topic Starter
Glass

James2250 wrote:

If you don't want to do entire kiai sections why not put a fountain at places like 00:27:708 and 02:24:280? Sure.
Try and make the stats make more sense (Look at AR/OD/HP on Hard and look at it on Normal, try and fix that) Normal's 4/3/4/4, Hard's 7/4/7/7. I don't see what's the problem here.
I get around 270 for offset (don't forget to resnap all notes) Fixed.

Roddie's Normal:
00:50:422 (1) - sounds odd..add a clap?

Impossiblexu's Hard:
It is advised you don't use more than 3 unique slider speeds
Looks good

Hard:
00:11:851 (5) - new combo to match part before this? Done
00:38:841 (1) - not sure I like note here It fits the clap.
Slowed down part isn't good for hp Added more new combos
Don't like some of the anti jumps like 01:31:137 (5,1) How is that an anti-jump? (1) shows up half a measure after (5), there's no way anyone would be confused by that.
01:52:565 (3,4,1) - odd spacing Decelerated spacing. It builds up for the next section.

Not bad~
*star*
Thanks for checking (:
Roddie

James2250 wrote:

Roddie's Normal:
00:50:422 (1) - sounds odd..add a clap? Fixed.
Thanks, James. :D

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Roddie's Normal].osu
narakucrimson
I posted this by error when I was editing my previous post, I missed and pressed the quote button xD

Sorry u.u
pokedigi
にゃー

I'm going to collab map with 596108 >.<
Topic Starter
Glass
ok
Numbers 596108
Topic Starter
Glass
Updated~
Jinxy
Yea. Starred.
Numbers 596108
Topic Starter
Glass

0989596108 wrote:

lol...Seems to be removed a note...[attachment=0]Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass)
There were 2 notes happening at the same time which is impossible to hit.

@JInxyjem : Thank you.
theMikeAG
This beatmap is excellent. My only issue is that the Hard difficulty is kind of decieving. I say it's closer to an Insane due to it's wild jumps and high hp drain. Otherwise, I really love the piano remix you used for this. Great job! ^_^
Topic Starter
Glass

theMikeAG wrote:

This beatmap is excellent. My only issue is that the Hard difficulty is kind of decieving. I say it's closer to an Insane due to it's wild jumps and high hp drain. Otherwise, I really love the piano remix you used for this. Great job! ^_^
I'll rename it to Insane then.

Thanks for checking ;)
ignorethis
cheers
ignorethis
cheers
Topic Starter
Glass
I'm gonna wait a bit to get this bubbled because I might want to change some stuffs around~
Numbers 596108

aabc271 wrote:

Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Overall]

I prefer offset 275 more, don't change this if you think 280 is OK because i'm not really good at timing~

[596108's Taiko]

00:55:137 (229~245) This stream is quite more difficult compared to other parts of the song. Maybe simplify it a bit ?

02:57:065 (786~800) ^

02:24:280 (595) Add a finish ?

03:22:565 (3) Maybe change the ending point of this slider to 03:24:280 ? I think it is strange to hit the slider without much music ~



No errors found, nice job~ :)

Star and good luck~ ;)
lol change to "596108 & pokedigi's Taiko"
mod again(?)
Rukario
General:
- Why did you SB the Taiko BG in the Taiko diff and not set it as background? This confused me a bunch. It's basically just making the SB Load higher for players because it's showing both backgrounds.
- Is this the real artist? I think I heard this song already with the artist Liverne. I mean you put Liverne in the tags but I'd like an explanation. Otherwise it would be cool to be consistent with artist^^.

Roddie's Normal:
00:25:780 (2) - stack this with (1)?
01:46:994 - add a note here?
02:18:280 - add a note here to be consistent with the next combo?

Impssiblexu's Hard:
More than three unique slider speeds. Just saying.
Otherwise everything fine.
Except, Maybe frremove that big kiai section, which is inconsistent with the other diffs? I think the fountains alone make a good effect for this song.

Insane:
01:36:065 (1) - stack this with (2)?
02:18:280 - add a note here and stack it with (2)?

596108 & pokedigi's Taiko:
Okay the kiai here makes sense, because you get extra points in Taiko with kiai time.
Everything fine.

Great mapset.~

Cirno is not a ⑨~
Topic Starter
Glass
Yes this is the real artist, Liverne is the publisher so I threw that into the Tags instead.

Fixed those 2 spacing changes. Gonna let my guests decide what to change on their respective diffs.

Thanks for the mod ;)
Dotsu

Rukarioman wrote:

Impssiblexu's Hard:
More than three unique slider speeds. Just saying.
Otherwise everything fine.
Except, Maybe frremove that big kiai section, which is inconsistent with the other diffs? I think the fountains alone make a good effect for this song.
All fixed~ Thanks a lot~ :D

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Impossiblexu's Hard].osu
Mok
[Roddie]
00:05:422 - Useless Break, remove it.
00:12:280 - ^.
00:19:137 - ^.
00:20:851 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/40526

Good job, everyone :3
Topic Starter
Glass
Ok except for those breaks, I'm leaving them in.
Mismagius
Normal
Nothing much to comment here, but I don't like overlaps :(

Hard
AR +1? Looks a bit slow :<

Reminds me of my Style D:

Insane
01:25:994 (4) - I think a Whistle can work here too, not sure though



Man STOP MAKING AWESOME MAPS ;_____; I'm so jealous
Topic Starter
Glass

Blue Dragon wrote:

Insane
01:25:994 (4) - I think a Whistle can work here too, not sure though
Yup.


Blue Dragon wrote:

Man STOP MAKING AWESOME MAPS ;_____; I'm so jealous
<3

Thanks for checking this :D
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