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Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl

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dNextGen
8-)
Faust
Yo Dawg.
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Glass
ohai guise :3
Dotsu
Finished:

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Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Impossiblexu's Hard].osu

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Roddie
Done~

Enjoy ;)

Oh you have a osb. file that isn't being used. Delete it.

And add me in the tags, please. 8-)

Star!


Edit: Improvement.

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Roddie's Normal].osu
Faust

Roddie wrote:

Done~

Enjoy ;)

Oh you have a osb. file that isn't being used. Delete it.

And add me in the tags, please. 8-)

Star!


Edit: Improvement.

[attachment=0:d6918]Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Roddie's Normal].osu[/attachment:d6918]
Actually Roddie. There really isn't a need to delete the osb. file.
peppy said so himself, serious.
Roddie

Faust wrote:

Actually Roddie. There really isn't a need to delete the osb. file.
peppy said so himself, serious.
Oh. Okay then.
Topic Starter
Glass
I deleted it anyway :P
Dotsu
Topic Starter
Glass
Updated, bump!
Lemon Water_old
I love this song! I wish I could map it ;~;
Topic Starter
Glass
:3
Sandpig
hi , here is my mod :)

Hard:

HP Drain -1?
Kiai time?

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 whistles make this part a little loud, try to reduce these hitsounds or volume down.
00:27:708 - 00:55:137 you don't realy need so many claps in this part, they overwhelm the music.

I suggest you remove these claps: 00:28:137/00:28:994/00:31:565/00:32:422/00:34:137/00:34:994/00:38:422/00:41:851/00:45:280/00:46:994/00:50:422/00:51:280/00:52:137

and add these: 00:47:422/00:53:851

00:39:065(2) move to 00:39:172
00:39:387(3) move to 00:39:494 and resnap them(1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:04:994(2) remove clap and add whistle
01:10:565(7,8,9) these three slider are little annoying. I suggest you use a cirele at 01:11:851, a slider from 01:12:065 to 01:12:494, a slider from 01:12:708 to 01:12:922, no note at 01:13:137, and a circle at 01:13:351
01:19:994(1,2,3,4) put them apart each other
01:48:601 remove whistle
03:01:030(6,7) make them closer to each other
03:07:780 add a note?
03:13:565 ^


Impossiblexu's Hard

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 use custom override to clear up the noise from sliders.
00:27:708 - too many claps ><

remove these: 00:28:137/00:33:280/00:36:708/00:39:280/00:41:851/00:46:137/00:54:172/00:54:708

00:40:565(2,3) these two repeat slider make no sence. you can change the slider 2 into a single circle
02:22:565(1,2,3,4) spacing
03:04:565(4) shorten this slider to 03:04:994 and add a circle at 03:05:208


Roddie's Normal

Kiai time?

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 volume down
00:32:422 remove clap
00:32:851 add clap
00:33:280 remove clap
00:37:780 remove whistle
00:45:065(1,2,3,4,5,6) I suggest you remap this part, I think these silders are not friendly to beginners
00:50:208(1,2,3) ^
00:54:708 remove clap
00:55:137 too loud
00:58:351(4) & 00:58:565(1) you'd better not stack them
01:06:280 add whistle
01:07:994 ^
02:04:137 - 02:20:851 add some hitsounds?
02:49:994 add whistle
03:10:994 add a note with clap?


nice map, I enjoy it 8-)
Roddie

shabao_pig wrote:

Roddie's Normal

Kiai time? Nope. :)

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 volume down Sure.
00:32:422 remove clapNo. ._.
00:32:851 add clap ^
00:33:280 remove clap ^
00:37:780 remove whistle No. xD
00:45:065(1,2,3,4,5,6) I suggest you remap this part, I think these silders are not friendly to beginners Fixed. -_-
00:50:208(1,2,3) ^ ^
00:54:708 remove clap No. ._.
00:55:137 too loud Okay, I'll fix that.
00:58:351(4) & 00:58:565(1) you'd better not stack them It's fine.
01:06:280 add whistle No.
01:07:994 ^ ^
02:04:137 - 02:20:851 add some hitsounds? Sure. I forgot to do that,
02:49:994 add whistle Done.
03:10:994 add a note with clap? Done.
Thanks.

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Roddie's Normal].osu
Gabi
*Passes by*

Love this song

You should put Liverne as artist and Kurenainagi Tabibito in Tags. (Keeping it consistant to the other maps.)

Star
Topic Starter
Glass

shabao_pig wrote:

hi , here is my mod :) Hi.

Hard:

HP Drain -1? Nope
Kiai time? I hate having Kiai on bright backgrounds.

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 whistles make this part a little loud, try to reduce these hitsounds or volume down. Done.
00:27:708 - 00:55:137 you don't realy need so many claps in this part, they overwhelm the music. Toned down the volume.

and add these: 00:47:422 Sounds bad.
00:53:851 Okay

00:39:065(2) move to 00:39:172 No, this doesn't sound right to me
00:39:387(3) move to 00:39:494 and resnap them(1,2,3,4,5,6) Neither does this.
01:04:994(2) remove clap and add whistle Done.
01:10:565(7,8,9) these three slider are little annoying. I suggest you use a cirele at 01:11:851, a slider from 01:12:065 to 01:12:494, a slider from 01:12:708 to 01:12:922, no note at 01:13:137, and a circle at 01:13:351 Re-arranged the sliders instead.
01:19:994(1,2,3,4) put them apart each other No.
01:48:601 remove whistle Done.
03:01:030(6,7) make them closer to each other Done.
03:07:780 add a note? No.
03:13:565 ^Done.
Thanks for the mod

Gabi wrote:

*Passes by*

Love this song

You should put Liverne as artist and Kurenainagi Tabibito in Tags. (Keeping it consistant to the other maps.)

Star
Liverne is the publisher, not the artist :/

Thanks for the star
Dotsu

shabao_pig wrote:

Impossiblexu's Hard

00:00:280 - 00:26:851 use custom override to clear up the noise from sliders. Fixed
00:27:708 - too many claps ><

remove these: 00:28:137/00:33:280/00:36:708/00:39:280/00:41:851/00:46:137/00:54:172/00:54:708

00:40:565(2,3) these two repeat slider make no sence. you can change the slider 2 into a single circle
02:22:565(1,2,3,4) spacing
03:04:565(4) shorten this slider to 03:04:994 and add a circle at 03:05:208 Fixed
Thank you very much~

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Impossiblexu's Hard].osu
aabc271
Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Overall]

I prefer offset 275 more, don't change this if you think 280 is OK because i'm not really good at timing~

[596108's Taiko]

00:55:137 (229~245) This stream is quite more difficult compared to other parts of the song. Maybe simplify it a bit ?

02:57:065 (786~800) ^

02:24:280 (595) Add a finish ?

03:22:565 (3) Maybe change the ending point of this slider to 03:24:280 ? I think it is strange to hit the slider without much music ~



No errors found, nice job~ :)

Star and good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
Glass
Thanks for the checking (: I think 280ms is fine though

I'll let 0989596108 decide what to do with the taiko diff

Updated!
narakucrimson
Hi there :D Not much to say, just that maybe the offset would be better at 260 ms.

Really nice map, at least I saw no issues at all. Congratulations for the well done work !

Star!
James2250
If you don't want to do entire kiai sections why not put a fountain at places like 00:27:708 and 02:24:280?
Try and make the stats make more sense (Look at AR/OD/HP on Hard and look at it on Normal, try and fix that)
I get around 270 for offset (don't forget to resnap all notes)

Roddie's Normal:
00:50:422 (1) - sounds odd..add a clap?

Impossiblexu's Hard:
It is advised you don't use more than 3 unique slider speeds
Looks good

Hard:
00:11:851 (5) - new combo to match part before this?
00:38:841 (1) - not sure I like note here
Slowed down part isn't good for hp
Don't like some of the anti jumps like 01:31:137 (5,1)
01:52:565 (3,4,1) - odd spacing

Not bad~
*star*
Topic Starter
Glass

James2250 wrote:

If you don't want to do entire kiai sections why not put a fountain at places like 00:27:708 and 02:24:280? Sure.
Try and make the stats make more sense (Look at AR/OD/HP on Hard and look at it on Normal, try and fix that) Normal's 4/3/4/4, Hard's 7/4/7/7. I don't see what's the problem here.
I get around 270 for offset (don't forget to resnap all notes) Fixed.

Roddie's Normal:
00:50:422 (1) - sounds odd..add a clap?

Impossiblexu's Hard:
It is advised you don't use more than 3 unique slider speeds
Looks good

Hard:
00:11:851 (5) - new combo to match part before this? Done
00:38:841 (1) - not sure I like note here It fits the clap.
Slowed down part isn't good for hp Added more new combos
Don't like some of the anti jumps like 01:31:137 (5,1) How is that an anti-jump? (1) shows up half a measure after (5), there's no way anyone would be confused by that.
01:52:565 (3,4,1) - odd spacing Decelerated spacing. It builds up for the next section.

Not bad~
*star*
Thanks for checking (:
Roddie

James2250 wrote:

Roddie's Normal:
00:50:422 (1) - sounds odd..add a clap? Fixed.
Thanks, James. :D

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass) [Roddie's Normal].osu
narakucrimson
I posted this by error when I was editing my previous post, I missed and pressed the quote button xD

Sorry u.u
pokedigi
にゃー

I'm going to collab map with 596108 >.<
Topic Starter
Glass
ok
Numbers 596108
Topic Starter
Glass
Updated~
Jinxy
Yea. Starred.
Numbers 596108
Topic Starter
Glass

0989596108 wrote:

lol...Seems to be removed a note...[attachment=0]Kurenainagi Tabibito - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (Glass)
There were 2 notes happening at the same time which is impossible to hit.

@JInxyjem : Thank you.
theMikeAG
This beatmap is excellent. My only issue is that the Hard difficulty is kind of decieving. I say it's closer to an Insane due to it's wild jumps and high hp drain. Otherwise, I really love the piano remix you used for this. Great job! ^_^
Topic Starter
Glass

theMikeAG wrote:

This beatmap is excellent. My only issue is that the Hard difficulty is kind of decieving. I say it's closer to an Insane due to it's wild jumps and high hp drain. Otherwise, I really love the piano remix you used for this. Great job! ^_^
I'll rename it to Insane then.

Thanks for checking ;)
ignorethis
cheers
ignorethis
cheers
Topic Starter
Glass
I'm gonna wait a bit to get this bubbled because I might want to change some stuffs around~
Numbers 596108

aabc271 wrote:

Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Overall]

I prefer offset 275 more, don't change this if you think 280 is OK because i'm not really good at timing~

[596108's Taiko]

00:55:137 (229~245) This stream is quite more difficult compared to other parts of the song. Maybe simplify it a bit ?

02:57:065 (786~800) ^

02:24:280 (595) Add a finish ?

03:22:565 (3) Maybe change the ending point of this slider to 03:24:280 ? I think it is strange to hit the slider without much music ~



No errors found, nice job~ :)

Star and good luck~ ;)
lol change to "596108 & pokedigi's Taiko"
mod again(?)
Rukario
General:
- Why did you SB the Taiko BG in the Taiko diff and not set it as background? This confused me a bunch. It's basically just making the SB Load higher for players because it's showing both backgrounds.
- Is this the real artist? I think I heard this song already with the artist Liverne. I mean you put Liverne in the tags but I'd like an explanation. Otherwise it would be cool to be consistent with artist^^.

Roddie's Normal:
00:25:780 (2) - stack this with (1)?
01:46:994 - add a note here?
02:18:280 - add a note here to be consistent with the next combo?

Impssiblexu's Hard:
More than three unique slider speeds. Just saying.
Otherwise everything fine.
Except, Maybe frremove that big kiai section, which is inconsistent with the other diffs? I think the fountains alone make a good effect for this song.

Insane:
01:36:065 (1) - stack this with (2)?
02:18:280 - add a note here and stack it with (2)?

596108 & pokedigi's Taiko:
Okay the kiai here makes sense, because you get extra points in Taiko with kiai time.
Everything fine.

Great mapset.~

Cirno is not a ⑨~
Topic Starter
Glass
Yes this is the real artist, Liverne is the publisher so I threw that into the Tags instead.

Fixed those 2 spacing changes. Gonna let my guests decide what to change on their respective diffs.

Thanks for the mod ;)
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