1. Easy (1.73 stars, 128 notes)
2. Extra (5.08 stars, 338 notes)
3. Hard (3.33 stars, 267 notes)
4. Insane (4.21 stars, 316 notes)
5. Normal (2.05 stars, 172 notes)
6. Sweet Neko (5.44 stars, 392 notes)

Dedicated to the sweetest person I know

Bulldog wrote:

here from #Mod Req
Mod Mod im not the best mapper but here are a few things.

Sweet caffe

00:00:881 (2,3,4) - the 2 and 4 could be stacked or separated but that is preference It looks fine to me :3

00:06:381 (2,3) - so these are stacked and the bottom one inst a new combo while the rest of the time if its stacked the bottom not is a new combo I'm placing NC every downbeat.

00:41:714 (4,5,1,2) - hiding the 2 makes hard to read but that is up to you I agree, but I think it is ok because it's most difficult diff.

Side note: I like the map its fun and mapped really well Thanks you > <;

Insane

00:42:881 (5,6,7) - these are a little of in terms of distance snapping fixed

00:54:714 (4,5,1) - the 4 covers up the 1 a little it i would start the 4 where the 1 ends just to make it flow a little easier and easier to read Moved 1 instead to keep the blanket

01:01:714 (4,1,2) - Move the 2 out of the way of the 4 I personally like this kind of overlap

side note: I also really like this map. some of the strait sliders seem out of place but they are fine where they are. Not much to say besides nice map I will look into them :3

Normal

00:46:548 (2) - make this going strait down. It is tillted slightly This is intentional

01:17:381 (5,6) - stack these bc u stack them most of the time :E I think you're mistaken... Maybe you were talking about other notes?

Side note: not really much to say maybe try adding some strait sliders instead of curvy ones but that is just preference

EZ PZ

00:10:548 (3,4) - these need to be distance snapped at 1 not .8 fixed

oh its not done pm me when you finish and ill finish this It might take a while... Thanks though xD

Nice maps lmk if you map more or you want a mod on another map. Great job on this map though well done. best wishes - Bulldog Y-You're a nice person >_<;; Thank you very much for your kind words!

1. 00:29:214 (4,5) - In easy, I would recommend to avoid stacks in easy maps, just for the sake of new players not to die
2. 00:41:714 (3,4) - Same
3. 00:45:214 (4,5) -
4. 00:53:214 (4,5) -
5. 01:13:714 (3,4) -
6. 01:17:381 (5,6,7) - Woah that's harsh for a "noob"

Byza wrote:

From my modqueue

Woah incredible map, really like it. It's sad the song is short
And the difficulty spread... Easy and Normal & Insane and Bitter Caffe are too close I'm planning to change Easy to be easier, and Bitter Caffe </3 to be most difficult diff xD
On the other hand, I use to mod timing and/or design/aesthetics, but your maps are pretty clean! so not much more to mod for me.

Easy
I think that this map is a bit difficult to consider it a Easy, isn't it? Difficult to read for them, even with low AR
Some mapping techniques you use in it are pretty common in normalsI will address this.

1. 00:29:214 (4,5) - In easy, I would recommend to avoid stacks in easy maps, just for the sake of new players not to die I was making normal when I mapped this, but this turned out as too easy lol. I will fix all the stacks. Thanks for pointing them out!
2. 00:41:714 (3,4) - Same ^
3. 00:45:214 (4,5) - ^
4. 00:53:214 (4,5) - ^
5. 01:13:714 (3,4) - ^
6. 01:17:381 (5,6,7) - Woah that's harsh for a "noob" Changed

Its a really good map! I like your sliders! Those were just recommendations to make the map easier, to make it an "Easy". If you like it as dificult as it is now, ignore me
BTW it is a quite long song! if you are going to map more, you'll have to "cut" it. Will do \:D/

Normal
Nice map!
As I said before, its really similar to the Easy one, as you've used almost the same patterns. I am considering remapping easy, and if I do, I will try to be bit different.
01:17:714 (6) - Isn't this one overmapped? I just don't hear music under it maybe its me Mapping to drum beat \:D/

Hard

01:17:548 (4,5,1) - Kinda the same overmapping than in the Normal Mapping to drum beat :3

Insane
Pretty nice, but you overuse the same pattern too much, making the map a bit boring... imo. I will keep that in mind
I would recommend you to rethink a bit of the design. Maybe some triplets? I put only 1 triple because I do not want to overmap. As far as I can tell, there's only 1 place that I can put tribbles without overmapping. But I'm open to suggestions!
Its a clean map, anyways.


Bitter Cafe
Woah, I suppose that you haven't finished this 20secs

Sweet Cafe
Woah those jumps!
Truly like the map, but, as in Insane, when you play it, you feel the map is repetitive and unoriginal. You maybe need some more patterns.
And its pretty damn fast! lol Thanks for your feedback! I guess this map can come across as being bit repetitive. I hope this will be solved with more experience on my part. For now, I am not planning to overhaul the map dramatically though.
01:17:714 (5,6,1) - Feels overmapped again Mapping to the drum beat :3

Well, I wasn't able to mod really much! Your mapping style is nice and clean, Y-you're a nicer person! Stop flattering me >_<;;
Remember to crop the audio! Will do!
GL on rank

PD: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/352704 this map is great #freepp :')

1. no tags at all? i think primary is yuikonnu's voice

1. 00:08:381 (1) - 00:13:714 (1) - bad idea to have slider end on downbeat
2. 00:58:714 (6) - this spacing

1. 00:11:381 (1) - better as circles
2. 00:16:714 (1,2) - wtf this rhythm...
3. 00:24:714 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:17:381 (3) - NC for reading purposes

1. 00:23:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this rhythm and spacing are quite confusing
2. 00:37:214 (3,4) - based on the shape and direction of the slider i'd be expecting the circle to be somewhere below it
3. 00:39:048 (4) - spacing shouldl be bigger after it
4. 01:17:381 (3) - NC for reading purposes

1. 00:01:381 (4,5) - should be smaller spacing than 00:01:214 (3,4) -
2. 00:07:714 (3) - same
3. 00:14:548 (3,4) - too big of a jump
4. 00:58:548 (3,4,5,6,7) - these jumps don't fit the music
5. 01:09:214 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
6. 01:17:381 (3) - NC for reading purposes

xxdeathx wrote:

rest of the m4m

[General]

1. no tags at all? i think primary is yuikonnu's voice added!

[Normal]

1. 00:08:381 (1) - 00:13:714 (1) - bad idea to have slider end on downbeat fixed
2. 00:58:714 (6) - this spacingfixed

[Hard]

1. 00:11:381 (1) - better as circles Not sure why circle would be better not anywhere with same beats but here...
2. 00:16:714 (1,2) - wtf this rhythm... ?!?
3. 00:24:714 (1,2) - ^ ^
4. 01:17:381 (3) - NC for reading purposesDone!

[extra]

1. 00:23:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this rhythm and spacing are quite confusing Not sure how you mean it's confusing, but changed the placement a bit and increased ds for 00:24:381 (7,1) - slightly
2. 00:37:214 (3,4) - based on the shape and direction of the slider i'd be expecting the circle to be somewhere below it moved 00:37:714 (4) - under 00:37:214 (3) -
3. 00:39:048 (4) - spacing shouldl be bigger after it Done!
4. 01:17:381 (3) - NC for reading purposes Done!

[sweet kuro]

1. 00:01:381 (4,5) - should be smaller spacing than 00:01:214 (3,4) -
2. 00:07:714 (3) - same
3. 00:14:548 (3,4) - too big of a jump Slighatly reduced distance
4. 00:58:548 (3,4,5,6,7) - these jumps don't fit the music Slightly reduced distance and rearranged
5. 01:09:214 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
6. 01:17:381 (3) - NC for reading purposesDone

higher diffs need more work Would appreciate if you could be more specific

Lumael wrote:

Hello owo, M4M here

General

1. Desable widescreen support in every difficulty. Fixed!

Normal

1. AR 3.6? Are you sure? 4 or 5 seens to fit better. Changed normal to 4, Advanced to 5.5
2. 00:19:048 - 00:24:381 - In my opinion those beats should be covered by adding a circle, it just feels too empty at the moment. added
3. 00:40:381 - 00:41:548 - ^ here we have another problem, having them empty will help for readability problems, so I strongly recommend you to add circles here I prefer to leave it out
4. 00:45:214 - This gap can be a bit confusing for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, so what about using a slider just like 00:46:048 (1) - . Example: http://puu.sh/lVEXp/b258702f89.jpg Hmm... I think I will follow your suggestion if I decide to feel it, but for now, I'd like to leave as is.
5. 00:53:714 (1,2) - Control G here will help following the rhythm better, making the downbeat clickable. I'd rather not do that for difficulty isuues.
6. 01:02:048 (1,2,3,4) - So many downbeats unclickable, I strongly advise you to revise this section making beats like 01:02:548 - 01:04:048 - clickable in order to improve the gamplay. I see. However, I want to keep this beat because I think it fits the music, and for consistency in hit sounding. But If I think of something better, I will try to change it in a way that makes downbeats clickable
7. 01:27:381 (1) - Spinner should finish here 01:32:631 - . Fixed for all diffs

Advanced

1. 00:34:548 (5) - Try this rhythm instead, works much better for this part of the song: http://puu.sh/lVFsl/0e9ac18ba5.jpg I want to keep my rhythm for consistency... and if I change all the similar rhythms, I am not sure how to make a good shape with that rhythm
2. 00:45:214 - Seeing how you build this kind of rhythm previously, I strongly advise you to add a circle here in order to keep up with the consistency. Added!
3. 00:48:714 (1,2,3) - This part seens to dense in my opinion, there's a spam of 1/2 rhythm and it may be hard to get since the pattern looks a bit messy considering astheticals (everything is overlapped), think of newbie players, they may find problems while playing this part of the song, get some people to test play it if you aren't sure yet. Changed! I not sure about playability, since this isn't the easiest diff, but I do agree it looked messy.
4. 00:56:714 - Looks like you ignored vocals at the kiai, but I don't think this is a good choise to make, if you listen carefully some beats go among with the vocals and following them would make the gameplay much better as both vocals and drums are being covered at the same time. Examples: 00:57:214 - http://puu.sh/lVFMX/130d1b1b2f.jpg I understand your point, but I will keep my rhythms. I am not ignoring vocals completely, and the palces I ignored, I did it because when I tired to follow every vocals, I had trouble with 1) consistent hitsounding, 2) keeping notes neat, and 3) keeping it playable. A better mapper than me (like you) may be able to do a better job while following all the vocals, but this is the best solution I've found after a few remapping. And I'm satisfied with it
5. 01:27:381 (1) - Same as Normal Same as normal!

Hard

1. 00:14:548 (3,4) - Control Ging this part will follow much better the rhythm you were previously following. I think this works pretty well too.
2. 00:55:048 (3,4) - This blanket is in need of some improviment Improved... I hope it's better now :3
3. 01:09:548 (4,5) - Following the sound on the red tick here seens to be the best option for a clear rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/lVG9J/0b550f4d39.jpg I will need to think more about this.
4. 01:16:548 (6,1,2,1,2) - I'm not sure if this is a good idea, because, by stacking like this players might assume it's a 1/2 gap and not a 1/1 gap, I think you better unstack and use your 1.1x DS for the 1/1 gaps in order to improve readability here. I agree reading is bit difficult here, but I hope this isn't too much for hard diff. Hopefully NC helps a bit...

Insane

1. 00:09:214 - Won't you give emphasis to this 00:09:214 (3) - ? I know that you're emphasizing the downbeats but I think that this beat also deserves some emphasis, a small jump perhaps? Slightly increased DS... I increased it very little, so I'm not sure if it changes a lot xDD but I want to keep 00:09:214 (3,4) - larger
2. 00:10:881 (4) - This part would play better if it was two circles because both slider's head and tail are strong enough for that, moreover you could remove this circle 00:11:214 (5) - because the song doesn't provide any sound here to justify this circle. I'm not saying it's a problem, but if you use two circles as I suggested, a small gap would be a good way of making player's hands relax a bit before the next step of the song. Changed it to circle -> slider to emphasize both of the beats.
3. 00:12:548 (1) - The way this slider is pointing to the right makes the pattern a bit awfull concerning astheticals, what about a blanket here? Sure. Changed!
4. 00:11:381 (1,2) - I assume that this was supposed to be a perfect stack. fixed!
5. 00:14:048 (1) - I wouldn't recommend keeping this reverse arrow, you're losing an important beat here 00:14:548 - that's definetly important for you since you covered this beat with the previous patterns. I like the reverse slider, but changed for consistency :'(
6. 00:16:214 (6) - Same two circles thing. Done!
7. 00:21:881 (6) - Stacking with 00:20:548 (1) - 's head will make the pattern look better + improve the flow that is currently weird here. 00:21:881 (6) - Move to 328|156. Done!
8. 00:39:881 (3) - I wouldn't recommend keeping this reverse arrow here as well, you did the downbeat unclickable here: 00:40:048 - . I think the reverse slider flows well, especially before a new sound in the song
   
   Other than that the mapset looks okay, but some polishing will help it to improve even more.

That's it from me,
Good Luck! ~

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! From my queue!

Sweet Nekos

[General]
Set the CS to 3.5 Why though? xDD ...I saw this at lumael's map...I hope that's not something you randomly throw out at mods q_q Please explain the reasoning xDD
That's all!
[Modding Itself]
00:12:048 (3,4,5) - This is kind of placed weirdly. Maybe you should place it more patternlyish. Looks fine to me, but I'll change if I think of something better
00:16:214 (4,5) - Add a circle in between. I don't want to overmap
00:39:881 (3,4) - Add a circle in between. ^
00:55:214 (1) - This slider is ugly. Consider changing it. I'm not good at making sliders orz. I think it's fine though
01:04:881 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps are unnessecary. This is probably the most intense part of the song. I think jumps are definitely justified. Maybe not necessary, but few things in life are necessary... we do it for the challenge and fun \:D/
01:14:714 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are unnessecary. ^

That's all. Good luck getting this ranked.

mr tribble wrote:

some irc

2015-12-14 18:50 mr tribble: 00:46:881 (2) -
2015-12-14 18:50 mr tribble: shouldnt this finish on the red tick?
2015-12-14 18:50 mr tribble: that way it can include that "gu" sound
2015-12-14 18:51 mr tribble: i mean, not really that necessary, just wondering
2015-12-14 18:51 CaffeAmericano: yeah, maybe
2015-12-14 18:51 CaffeAmericano: 00:47:048 - has the clap sound in song
2015-12-14 18:51 CaffeAmericano: butthe sound in 00:47:214 - is strong too
2015-12-14 18:51 mr tribble: 00:46:881 (2) -
2015-12-14 18:51 mr tribble: it could be a repeating slider
2015-12-14 18:52 CaffeAmericano: I will have to see how I did it in other similar places and do whatever is consistent
2015-12-14 18:52 mr tribble: in fact, i think repeating slider would fit nicely
2015-12-14 18:52 CaffeAmericano: yeah
2015-12-14 18:52 CaffeAmericano: that should work too
2015-12-14 18:53 CaffeAmericano: I am trying to avoid 1/2 notes for this diff though... but I will see how i did the rest of the map and final decision
2015-12-14 18:53 CaffeAmericano: I think repeating slider will fit very well in terms of music :3
2015-12-14 18:54 mr tribble: 00:53:381 - i dont like how there is nothing there, but i am not quite sure how i would change it to make it work
2015-12-14 18:54 mr tribble: this is why i hate easy diff
2015-12-14 18:55 CaffeAmericano: you're right
2015-12-14 18:56 CaffeAmericano: in that I dislike how there's nothing there
2015-12-14 18:56 CaffeAmericano: and that I don't know how to change it without keeping the difficulty lol
2015-12-14 18:56 mr tribble: xD
2015-12-14 18:56 CaffeAmericano: I will try to think of something :3
2015-12-14 18:56 mr tribble: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4134791
2015-12-14 18:56 mr tribble: i think this would fit better in terms of music
2015-12-14 18:56 mr tribble: 01:04:714 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-12-14 18:57 mr tribble: unless you dont like repeating sldiers
2015-12-14 18:58 CaffeAmericano: yeah, I think that should work
2015-12-14 18:58 CaffeAmericano: I I think the one I have currently works too xD
2015-12-14 18:58 mr tribble: i guess
2015-12-14 18:58 mr tribble: i just dont like the tiny sldier
2015-12-14 18:58 mr tribble: slider
2015-12-14 18:58 CaffeAmericano: I will try it later and see which one I like better
2015-12-14 18:59 CaffeAmericano: yeah, not the best idea for normal
2015-12-14 18:59 mr tribble: i just dont think it fits well
2015-12-14 18:59 mr tribble: and it is hard
2015-12-14 18:59 mr tribble: i think
2015-12-14 19:00 CaffeAmericano: Yeah, I like yours too, maybe I am just being lazy because I don't wanna change the section lol
2015-12-14 19:00 CaffeAmericano: but I will definitely try that
2015-12-14 19:01 mr tribble: your hard annoys me lol
2015-12-14 19:01 mr tribble: advanced*
2015-12-14 19:01 CaffeAmericano: lol
2015-12-14 19:01 CaffeAmericano: how so?
2015-12-14 19:01 mr tribble: like, it is right
2015-12-14 19:01 mr tribble: completely right
2015-12-14 19:01 mr tribble: i just would not of done it like you did
2015-12-14 19:01 CaffeAmericano: stop flattering me >_<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
2015-12-14 19:02 mr tribble: like, i probaply of put a slider here 00:12:881 (5) - instead of ending a slider on the note
2015-12-14 19:02 mr tribble: or something
2015-12-14 19:02 mr tribble: idk
2015-12-14 19:03 mr tribble: just different
2015-12-14 19:03 CaffeAmericano: ?
2015-12-14 19:03 CaffeAmericano: like, a whole beat long slider?
2015-12-14 19:03 mr tribble: nononono
2015-12-14 19:03 mr tribble: dont change what you did
2015-12-14 19:03 CaffeAmericano: oh
2015-12-14 19:03 CaffeAmericano: ooh
2015-12-14 19:03 CaffeAmericano: I'm baka
2015-12-14 19:03 CaffeAmericano: sorry
2015-12-14 19:03 CaffeAmericano: XP
2015-12-14 19:04 mr tribble: lol, no you are fine
2015-12-14 19:04 mr tribble: this is good for me too
2015-12-14 19:04 mr tribble: i need to learn how to map this kind of stuf
2015-12-14 19:04 CaffeAmericano: This map is very similar to einess' normal on my ranked map
2015-12-14 19:05 CaffeAmericano: copycat Caffe lel
2015-12-14 19:05 mr tribble: lol
2015-12-14 19:05 mr tribble: it is good
2015-12-14 19:06 CaffeAmericano: mmm
2015-12-14 19:06 CaffeAmericano: such compliment
2015-12-14 19:06 CaffeAmericano: I'm caffe the arrogant mapper now
2015-12-14 19:06 mr tribble: 00:16:881 (2) -
2015-12-14 19:06 mr tribble: no sound starts there?
2015-12-14 19:07 CaffeAmericano: hard?
2015-12-14 19:07 mr tribble: yeah
2015-12-14 19:07 mr tribble: i mean, it works, but why did you put a slider there
2015-12-14 19:08 CaffeAmericano: There is a sound
2015-12-14 19:08 CaffeAmericano: but maybe I should make a head because it's small compared to two next ticks
2015-12-14 19:08 CaffeAmericano: you you think it would be better if I control + g 00:16:714 (1,2) -
2015-12-14 19:08 CaffeAmericano: ?
2015-12-14 19:08 mr tribble: yeah, it is smal
2015-12-14 19:09 mr tribble: i like the ctrl g more
2015-12-14 19:09 CaffeAmericano: oke
2015-12-14 19:09 CaffeAmericano: will be done
2015-12-14 19:09 mr tribble: 00:24:714 (1,2) - same here i guess
2015-12-14 19:10 CaffeAmericano: oke
2015-12-14 19:13 mr tribble: i should of looked at this map set earlier
2015-12-14 19:13 mr tribble: i like it
2015-12-14 19:14 CaffeAmericano: <3
2015-12-14 19:15 mr tribble: 00:18:714 (4,5) - reminds me of my map, like it <3
2015-12-14 19:15 mr tribble: reminds me that my pattern is not stupid
2015-12-14 19:15 CaffeAmericano: it does? lol
2015-12-14 19:15 CaffeAmericano: nice xDD
2015-12-14 19:15 mr tribble: almost the same
2015-12-14 19:15 mr tribble: i guess
2015-12-14 19:16 CaffeAmericano: I like that pattern too~
2015-12-14 19:16 mr tribble: it is everywhere in my map
2015-12-14 19:18 mr tribble: hmmmm
2015-12-14 19:18 mr tribble: i could find more wrong with ez
2015-12-14 19:18 CaffeAmericano: <3
2015-12-14 19:18 mr tribble: 00:10:214 (2,3) -
2015-12-14 19:18 CaffeAmericano: Insane? lol
2015-12-14 19:19 mr tribble: could you move it down so that it is not overlapping like that
2015-12-14 19:19 CaffeAmericano: yeah, not the prettiest overlap
2015-12-14 19:19 mr tribble: is is fine, but you could just move it down a little
2015-12-14 19:19 CaffeAmericano: you mean slider?
2015-12-14 19:19 mr tribble: yes
2015-12-14 19:20 mr tribble: 2 and 3
2015-12-14 19:20 CaffeAmericano: yeah
2015-12-14 19:20 mr tribble: does not change difficulty or flow much either
2015-12-14 19:20 CaffeAmericano: it looks good after moving
2015-12-14 19:20 CaffeAmericano: ikr
2015-12-14 19:20 CaffeAmericano: I will move it down :3
2015-12-14 19:22 mr tribble: 01:20:381 (6,1) -
2015-12-14 19:22 mr tribble: is that necessary?
2015-12-14 19:23 CaffeAmericano: like what? xD
2015-12-14 19:23 CaffeAmericano: why not stack?
2015-12-14 19:23 mr tribble: yeah
2015-12-14 19:23 CaffeAmericano: hmm
2015-12-14 19:23 CaffeAmericano: idk lol
2015-12-14 19:23 CaffeAmericano: I just so that somewhere
2015-12-14 19:23 mr tribble: :/
2015-12-14 19:24 CaffeAmericano: ahahah xDD
2015-12-14 19:24 CaffeAmericano: I will change it if some moddder points it out
2015-12-14 19:24 mr tribble: 01:12:381 (6) -
2015-12-14 19:24 CaffeAmericano: It's sort of a experiment....
2015-12-14 19:24 mr tribble: i dont like the placement of this note
2015-12-14 19:24 CaffeAmericano: Can I rank this sh!t?! kind of experiment
2015-12-14 19:25 CaffeAmericano: how so?
2015-12-14 19:25 mr tribble: 01:12:381 (6,2) - it overlaps ( so you could stack) and you could place it for a blanket like position in relation to this slider 01:12:381 (6) -
2015-12-14 19:25 mr tribble: and i dont like the weird ds on those notes either
2015-12-14 19:26 CaffeAmericano: blanket for this slider: 01:11:714 (3) - ?
2015-12-14 19:26 mr tribble: yeah
2015-12-14 19:26 mr tribble: idk, just an idea
2015-12-14 19:26 CaffeAmericano: I think that would be too small of a distance
2015-12-14 19:27 CaffeAmericano: I'm trying to make 01:12:048 (4,5) - and 01:12:381 (6,7) - parallel
2015-12-14 19:27 CaffeAmericano: I mean, not geometrically parallel, but
2015-12-14 19:27 CaffeAmericano: make player feel they are.. two as one lol
2015-12-14 19:27 CaffeAmericano: idk
2015-12-14 19:27 CaffeAmericano: as for overlap, I think that kind of overlap is fine
2015-12-14 19:27 mr tribble: then could you make them the same ds then
2015-12-14 19:28 CaffeAmericano: no
2015-12-14 19:28 mr tribble: same ds between 01:12:048 (4,5) - and 01:12:381 (6,7) -
2015-12-14 19:28 CaffeAmericano: because sound is getting smaller xD
2015-12-14 19:28 mr tribble: hmmmm
2015-12-14 19:28 CaffeAmericano: ... actually idk if it is getting smaller
2015-12-14 19:28 CaffeAmericano: but I sure do feel like it is lol
2015-12-14 19:28 mr tribble: i is just a lower pitch, but it works how you did it now that i know why you did it
2015-12-14 19:29 CaffeAmericano: ok xD
2015-12-14 19:30 CaffeAmericano: I hope a BN won't point out the same thing you just did... and I change it like you suggested because it's BN who's suggesting it lol ;-;
2015-12-14 19:30 CaffeAmericano: But I think I will keep it for now :3
2015-12-14 19:30 mr tribble: idk, this is just a personal thing, you could overlap 00:55:048 (3) - with the end of 00:55:214 (1) -
2015-12-14 19:30 mr tribble: and i dont mind if you change it if a bn says so
2015-12-14 19:30 mr tribble: they know more than me
2015-12-14 19:31 CaffeAmericano: :')
2015-12-14 19:31 CaffeAmericano: it's not as if I like BN more than I like you lol
2015-12-14 19:31 CaffeAmericano: hmm
2015-12-14 19:32 CaffeAmericano: 00:55:048 (3) - I don't wanna overlap it, but I think it would flow better If i move 00:55:048 (3) - closer to slider tail
2015-12-14 19:32 mr tribble: okie
2015-12-14 19:32 CaffeAmericano: IDK if you'll like that better, but this doesn't flow too well as it is
2015-12-14 19:32 mr tribble: could you make the angle less sharp here 01:00:381 (5,1) -
2015-12-14 19:32 CaffeAmericano: http://puu.sh/lVQ3E/4b49fdd246.jpg
2015-12-14 19:32 CaffeAmericano: is what i've done
2015-12-14 19:32 mr tribble: that is fine
2015-12-14 19:33 CaffeAmericano: hmm
2015-12-14 19:33 mr tribble: it just feels weird, that angle
2015-12-14 19:33 mr tribble: since it feels like you are doing circular flow
2015-12-14 19:33 CaffeAmericano: 01:00:381 (5) - moving this to the left?
2015-12-14 19:33 mr tribble: and i think that he angle will be the same as the previous angle
2015-12-14 19:33 mr tribble: the angle*
2015-12-14 19:33 mr tribble: if you understand what i am trying to say
2015-12-14 19:34 mr tribble: more similar to this angle 00:59:714 (3,4) -
2015-12-14 19:34 mr tribble: like, not necessarily overlapping
2015-12-14 19:34 CaffeAmericano: so maybe at 268 128?
2015-12-14 19:34 mr tribble: just less harsh
2015-12-14 19:35 CaffeAmericano: hmm idk if I'm understand this correctly lel
2015-12-14 19:35 mr tribble: ok
2015-12-14 19:35 mr tribble: ill explain better
2015-12-14 19:36 CaffeAmericano: or a screen shot? xDD
2015-12-14 19:36 mr tribble: you are overlapping these notes 00:59:714 (3,5) -
2015-12-14 19:36 CaffeAmericano: yes
2015-12-14 19:36 mr tribble: so i would feel better, to me, if the angle was similar as well
2015-12-14 19:36 mr tribble: move 01:00:548 (1) - more to the left maybe?
2015-12-14 19:36 CaffeAmericano: angle between 00:59:881 (4,5,1) - ?
2015-12-14 19:36 mr tribble: yes
2015-12-14 19:37 CaffeAmericano: oh
2015-12-14 19:37 mr tribble: it is not necessary
2015-12-14 19:37 mr tribble: i was just wondering
2015-12-14 19:37 CaffeAmericano: ok
2015-12-14 19:37 CaffeAmericano: that might be better for flow, I'm sure if it will look better
2015-12-14 19:37 CaffeAmericano: but I will try
2015-12-14 19:37 CaffeAmericano: sin'ce I'm bad at telling what looks good q_q
2015-12-14 19:37 mr tribble: same lol
2015-12-14 19:38 mr tribble: dont take anything i say too seriously ok xD
2015-12-14 19:39 CaffeAmericano: no
2015-12-14 19:39 CaffeAmericano: I will
2015-12-14 19:39 CaffeAmericano: Take it seriously >:D
2015-12-14 19:40 mr tribble: :/
2015-12-14 20:04 mr tribble: honestly caffe
2015-12-14 20:04 mr tribble: i cant really concentrate right now
2015-12-14 20:05 mr tribble: can i look at it tomorrow?
2015-12-14 20:05 CaffeAmericano: yeah, of course
2015-12-14 20:05 mr tribble: sowwy
2015-12-14 20:06 mr tribble: im tired, and want to try editing the song
2015-12-14 20:06 CaffeAmericano: You can post whatyouve got... and add more later
2015-12-14 20:06 CaffeAmericano: no worries xDD
2015-12-14 20:06 CaffeAmericano: thanks for the mod :3

• 00:06:048 (5) - NC
  01:07:298 - Add note/circle because sound like triple whatever bla bla bla
  01:22:214 (2) - Ctrl + G if u want but ur mapping style haha xD

• 00:14:048 (1) - Better change striaght slider
  00:15:214 (6) - NC
  00:58:881 (5) - Better change Blanket/Straight

• 00:01:381 (1) - Why new combo
  00:18:048 - Add circle/note
  00:53:881 - ^
  01:05:881 (1) - The overlap doesn't look nice
  01:32:631 - Add Inherited point and volume 20%

• 00:36:881 (2) - Blanket
  01:02:881 (5) - Bad stack
  01:07:048 (5) - NC

Chibi Maruko wrote:

Hai! M4M
Mod my map Yes sir /w\

[Hard]

• 00:06:048 (5) - NCadded
  01:07:298 - Add note/circle because sound like triple whatever bla bla bla Won't fit very well imo
  01:22:214 (2) - Ctrl + G if u want but ur mapping style haha xD Won't fit very well & will be inconsistent with what I've done previously

[Insane]

• 00:14:048 (1) - Better change striaght slider Nothing wrong with slightly curved slider :3
  00:15:214 (6) - NC added
  00:58:881 (5) - Better change Blanket/Straight will be considered

[Extra]

• 00:01:381 (1) - Why new combo Just the way I've mapped it, four notes -> change -> four notes. fits music too imo.
  00:18:048 - Add circle/note no need
  00:53:881 - ^ no need
  01:05:881 (1) - The overlap doesn't look nice ??? There is no overlap though~ :3
  01:32:631 - Add Inherited point and volume 20% I did 30% on every diff, why is Extra special q_q

[Sweet Nekos 3]

• 00:36:881 (2) - Blanket That looks good too. Will be considered edit: added
  01:02:881 (5) - Bad stack Intentional overlap to avoid ugly stack
  01:07:048 (5) - NC NC at beginning of measure

Ok, bai and make sure mod my map Of course I will mod your map. What have I done to earn your distrust lol

Wishmaker980 wrote:

Hello! M4M Request~

General

00:56:381 - If you want to,you can put a circle here Yes, but I don't really want to ><;

Insane

00:28:381 (4) - You can put the note at X 90:Y 235 instead, since 00:27:381 (1,2) - it goes downwards, might as well follow the flow and make it go downwards from 00:28:048 (3) - I feel like that will not be ideal for 00:28:381 (4,1) - . It won't play as well and DS will be massed up.
01:12:714 (1) - Move this circle up abit so it looks like it has equal spacing with 01:12:881 (2,3) - Done!
01:21:214 (3) - Maybe blanket with 01:21:381 (1) - if you want to Not sure what you mean ;-;
01:26:381 (2) - Slider tail stack with 01:26:881 (4) - Intentional overlap

Extra

00:07:214 (1,2,3) - Make this sliders more interesting please lol. Maybe some curve sliders or sliders like what you did here 00:21:547 (4) - I feel like 00:21:547 (4) - works well for reverse, but not for this one.
00:57:381 (3) - Place it at X 119:Y 44 so it looks like it has the same spacing as 00:57:548 (4,5) - No intention to make them same spacing Dx
01:19:048 (3) - Maybe blanket it with 01:19:214 (1) - I prefer to keep it this was for better flow.


Sweet Nekos <3

00:20:548 (1) - Ctrl + G for better flow Flow can be improved here. Cntrl+G is not a good idea though imo.
00:20:881 (2,3) - The spacing between this notes is far wider than what you did at 00:20:548 (1,2) - maybe keep it equal spacing Distance is about the same actually. And I think uneven spacing isn't bad beccause higher pitch at 00:21:214 (3) -
00:57:714 (6) - Move this note to X 356:Y 200 for better flow It looks fine to me
01:14:714 (4,5) - You can replace this two notes with a single slider,try it and see if you prefer it or you can just stick to the two notes I prefer to keep it this way.

That's all from me,Rhythm is generally there,just gotta work on the flow and note patterns.Good luck with your map! [color=#0000FF]\:D/[/color]

1. How about making all BGs having the same size?
2. Change combo colours?

1. I think slidertick and clap sounds for custom3 are very confusing. Because they're the same yet the clap can be clickable but slidertick can't.
2. 00:56:714 (1,2) - I think the flow here should be improved. I mean you could move 00:56:714 (1) down a little bit but it might have DS problem so yeah.

1. 00:29:720 (6,1) - The flow here feels a bit weird though.
2. 00:58:720 (6) - This slider touches the life bar. > http://puu.sh/lY7L0/b35f22b202.jpg

1. 00:19:720 (2,3) - Kinda confusing imo, because you're using stacked object like this twice with 1/2 beat spacing 00:09:054 (2,3) - 00:14:387 (2,3) . And now you just changed to 1/1 this time, and most players won't notice that. Well, players might be able to handle the changes of beat spacing 00:22:387 (2,3) but not here definitely.
2. 00:25:887 - Why don't put sth here and move the spinner back a bit?
3. 01:05:887 (1,2) - Finish doesn't sound fit imo, I mean you just changed the sampleset and it feels pretty inconsistent.

Electoz wrote:

Hi Caffe, I felt bad from M4M last time because you modded my Easy and I scrap it up with out answering your mods properly, I'll do sth to make up for that later <3

[General]

1. How about making all BGs having the same size? Is that necessary? I guess it can't hurt to do that. I will get around to it eventually.
2. Change combo colours? Yes... maybe. It would be GREAT if someone suggests one xDD

[Normal]

1. I think slidertick and clap sounds for custom3 are very confusing. Because they're the same yet the clap can be clickable but slidertick can't. I feel like changing hitsound just for that will make hitsounding inconsistent.
2. 00:56:714 (1,2) - I think the flow here should be improved. I mean you could move 00:56:714 (1) down a little bit but it might have DS problem so yeah.I don't think flow will be improved by moving 00:56:720 (1) - down.

[Advanced]

1. 00:29:720 (6,1) - The flow here feels a bit weird though. Tiny flow break at NC/change of song
2. 00:58:720 (6) - This slider touches the life bar. > http://puu.sh/lY7L0/b35f22b202.jpg Good catch. Fixed :3

[Hard]

1. 00:19:720 (2,3) - Kinda confusing imo, because you're using stacked object like this twice with 1/2 beat spacing 00:09:054 (2,3) - 00:14:387 (2,3) . And now you just changed to 1/1 this time, and most players won't notice that. Well, players might be able to handle the changes of beat spacing 00:22:387 (2,3) but not here definitely. That is a good point. My idea is that the player should be able to learn the gap at 00:17:054 (2,3) - , and play accordingly for 00:19:720 (2,3) -, since they have nearly identical sound. But I will try to address this to be more readable.
2. 00:25:887 - Why don't put sth here and move the spinner back a bit? Done
3. 01:05:887 (1,2) - Finish doesn't sound fit imo, I mean you just changed the sampleset and it feels pretty inconsistent. I am open to using other hitsound than the one I used, but I want a new hitsound there to emphasize the new sound :3

Hope my mod helped somehow caffe~ It definitely did~
Good luck~

1. the way Normal and Advanced are mapped they feel more like Easy and Normal to me, even if the osu-Icon doesn't match with that.. consider renaming them?
2. where are the combo colours? '-' I'd suggest using different ones for different backgrounds btw, looks better~
   suggestion Nomal/Advanced

   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 189,249,237
   Combo2 : 250,201,86
   Combo3 : 68,121,247
   Combo4 : 220,75,75

   suggestion Hard/Insane

   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 254,211,84
   Combo2 : 216,65,65
   Combo3 : 163,78,214
   Combo4 : 254,146,235

   suggestion Extra/Nekos

   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 240,38,124
   Combo2 : 255,228,168
   Combo3 : 213,108,213
   Combo4 : 245,175,71

1. 00:06:720 (2,3,4) - (3) feels a little off, cause the sound of (2)'s ongoing and there's nothing significant on the sliderend. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/lYPQi.jpg
   Or alternatively this: http://puu.sh/lYPR9.jpg
2. 00:07:554 (5) - here the reverse feels off, because it ends on a rather strong beat which should be clickable, imo. consider removing the reverse and adding a circle there?
3. 00:17:387 (2,3) - sliderend should be clickable too, I think, because it's a whole different sound than the sliderstart. maybe like this: http://puu.sh/lYQ3I.jpg
4. 00:41:720 (3,4) - the vocals go on so there shouldn't be any break, imo. move (4) to the downbeat and add a reverse? Works well
5. 00:56:387 - cause you're following the vocals so nicely, I think this should be mapped. maybe add a circle or 1/2 slider

1. 00:10:554 (3) - how about moving this to 61|273? so it has similar distance to (2) as (4)
2. 00:12:554 (4,5,6) - looks really cluttered, consider moving them a little further apart
3. 00:17:387 (3,4) - Ctrl+G on the timeline? The strong beats are on the white ticks so they should be clickable, imo
4. 00:47:387 (1,2,3) - flow is kinda uncomfortable, how about changing it to something like this? http://puu.sh/lYQtp.jpg
5. 00:51:054 (5,1) - did you try blanketing (5)? Looks better imo >o<
6. 00:56:387 - same here as in Advanced
7. 01:16:554 (6,1,2,1) - somehow I feel like anti-jumps would fit the "slowdown" a little better than stacks. You could just move (1,2) 10px to the left and the pattern gets much more impact
   But maybe you consider this too hard for Hard diff. .o. I think it's fine, but I'm not sure

1. 00:10:220 (2) - the pattern's pretty nice, but cause of the drum(?) on the sliderend I'd prefer two circles here instead of a slider
   same for 00:12:887 (2) - and some similar rhythms
2. 00:13:720 (5) - can you move this to 4|155 so it doesn't overlap with (3)? it doesn't change anythign gameplay-wise, but looks more clean
3. 00:15:220 (1) - similar here with 00:14:720 (4) - . how about stacking (1) below (4)? plays nice and makes this part easier to read
4. 00:21:554 (4,5,6) - the sudden decrease in DS feels weird and the overlap isn't ideal either. Try placing them like this? http://puu.sh/lYQUv.jpg
5. 00:29:720 (6) - Crtl+G for better flow?
6. 00:56:387 - same as in previous diffs
7. 01:25:387 (4,5) - consider increasing DS here to keep the pace? maybe http://puu.sh/lYR2l.jpg

1. 00:10:554 (3) - the reverse doesn't work well, imo cause there's another sound added on the white tick. so 1/1 slider + 1/2 slider would match the beat better, I think
   same for 00:12:554 (1) -
2. 00:22:054 (1,2,3,4,1) - for better flow switch positions of (1,2) then Ctrl+G (3) and then (4)
3. 00:55:220 (1) - why is this still mapped as a single slider while the previous 00:25:887 (6,1,2,3,4) - got changed so nicely in this diff? :c I'd prefer if this was mapped differently, too
4. 00:56:387 - as in prev diffs

1. 00:10:220 (2) - similar to Hard (iirc xD), should be two circles
2. 00:49:387 (5,6,7) - since the pace of the song doesn't change the low DS feels weird while playing. Cna you move (6) elsewhere to increase DS?
3. 00:55:220 (1) - as in Extra. ;w;
4. 00:56:387 - and here like in all prev diffs again xD (You probably have your reasons to keep the little break but it's just a personal preferance of mine to keep the pace steady, so I keep mentioning it.. xD)

Squirrel wrote:

hey there! :3
here's my m4m part -
Just making suggestons, feel free to disagree~~ >w<

General

1. the way Normal and Advanced are mapped they feel more like Easy and Normal to me, even if the osu-Icon doesn't match with that.. consider renaming them? I will get more opinions on this. The easiest diff is named normal because rhythm is little bit difficult, and there are several 1/2 clicks. I felt like it was little to difficult to be named "easy".
2. where are the combo colours? '-' I'd suggest using different ones for different backgrounds btw, looks better~
   suggestion Nomal/Advanced

   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 189,249,237
   Combo2 : 250,201,86
   Combo3 : 68,121,247
   Combo4 : 220,75,75

   suggestion Hard/Insane

   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 254,211,84
   Combo2 : 216,65,65
   Combo3 : 163,78,214
   Combo4 : 254,146,235

   suggestion Extra/Nekos

   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 240,38,124
   Combo2 : 255,228,168
   Combo3 : 213,108,213
   Combo4 : 245,175,71

Combo colors applied as suggested. Thanks for the combos

I guess I'm skipping Normal, cause it's stated in creator words? ö.ö Oh, I thought I removed that when I finished Normal. Thanks for bringing that to my attention

Advanced

1. 00:06:720 (2,3,4) - (3) feels a little off, cause the sound of (2)'s ongoing and there's nothing significant on the sliderend. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/lYPQi.jpg
   Or alternatively this: http://puu.sh/lYPR9.jpg I prefer to keep my rhythm to try not ignoring snare drum, and for hitsound consistency.
2. 00:07:554 (5) - here the reverse feels off, because it ends on a rather strong beat which should be clickable, imo. consider removing the reverse and adding a circle there? Done
3. 00:17:387 (2,3) - sliderend should be clickable too, I think, because it's a whole different sound than the sliderstart. maybe like this: http://puu.sh/lYQ3I.jpg I feel like it is better to keep 00:17:887 - clickable
4. 00:41:720 (3,4) - the vocals go on so there shouldn't be any break, imo. move (4) to the downbeat and add a reverse? Works well I feel like beackground music is better emphasized the way i've done.
5. 00:56:387 - cause you're following the vocals so nicely, I think this should be mapped. maybe add a circle or 1/2 slider I prefer not to :3 I personally like this kind of a short break xD

Hard
Fun diff, just making minor suggestions cause aesthetics-

1. 00:10:554 (3) - how about moving this to 61|273? so it has similar distance to (2) as (4) Done!
2. 00:12:554 (4,5,6) - looks really cluttered, consider moving them a little further apart Slightly less clustered now :3
3. 00:17:387 (3,4) - Ctrl+G on the timeline? The strong beats are on the white ticks so they should be clickable, imo done
4. 00:47:387 (1,2,3) - flow is kinda uncomfortable, how about changing it to something like this? http://puu.sh/lYQtp.jpg The distance slightly worries me, but the same looks so nice I gotta try it xD
5. 00:51:054 (5,1) - did you try blanketing (5)? Looks better imo >o< I agree >D< (and my mouth is bigger)
6. 00:56:387 - same here as in Advanced ^
7. 01:16:554 (6,1,2,1) - somehow I feel like anti-jumps would fit the "slowdown" a little better than stacks. You could just move (1,2) 10px to the left and the pattern gets much more impact
   But maybe you consider this too hard for Hard diff. .o. I think it's fine, but I'm not sure Looks really nice. I will try this :3

Insane

1. 00:10:220 (2) - the pattern's pretty nice, but cause of the drum(?) on the sliderend I'd prefer two circles here instead of a slider
   same for 00:12:887 (2) - and some similar rhythms I feel like slider captures the most prominent sound of the music better.
2. 00:13:720 (5) - can you move this to 4|155 so it doesn't overlap with (3)? it doesn't change anythign gameplay-wise, but looks more clean I feel this like this kind of overlap is fine, but looks like many ppl dislikes it... changed
3. 00:15:220 (1) - similar here with 00:14:720 (4) - . how about stacking (1) below (4)? plays nice and makes this part easier to read I feel like that would reduce distance too much... moved 4 farther from 1 instead :3
4. 00:21:554 (4,5,6) - the sudden decrease in DS feels weird and the overlap isn't ideal either. Try placing them like this? http://puu.sh/lYQUv.jpg I feel like small distance fits because music is transitioning into next repeat (?) thingy. DS
5. 00:29:720 (6) - Crtl+G for better flow? Done
6. 00:56:387 - same as in previous diffs ^
7. 01:25:387 (4,5) - consider increasing DS here to keep the pace? maybe http://puu.sh/lYR2l.jpg I will consider this

Exrtra

1. 00:10:554 (3) - the reverse doesn't work well, imo cause there's another sound added on the white tick. so 1/1 slider + 1/2 slider would match the beat better, I think
   same for 00:12:554 (1) - Will be considered... after sleeping. I have been up for 24 hours now xD edit: after much thought, I've decided to keep the reverse slider because I think it emphasizes the most prominent sound of the song excellently. I might change my mind later, but they will stay for now :3
2. 00:22:054 (1,2,3,4,1) - for better flow switch positions of (1,2) then Ctrl+G (3) and then (4) woah that does look good.
3. 00:55:220 (1) - why is this still mapped as a single slider while the previous 00:25:887 (6,1,2,3,4) - got changed so nicely in this diff? :c I'd prefer if this was mapped differently, too Good catch. I didn't even notice lol. I think I was too obsessed with having a short break at 00:56:054 - . I will think about it. Edit: I feel like your suggestion makes more sense than how I've done it, but I still really want to keep it. I think this is because the change of pace at 00:56:720 - is greater than that of 00:27:387 -. Gosh, your mod makes me think too much about my map lol
4. 00:56:387 - as in prev diffssame same xD

Sweet Kitties

1. 00:10:220 (2) - similar to Hard (iirc xD), should be two circles Same answer as hard xDD
2. 00:49:387 (5,6,7) - since the pace of the song doesn't change the low DS feels weird while playing. Cna you move (6) elsewhere to increase DS? I feel like vocal is significantly weak compared to previous 4. However, maybe DS decrease is too sudden. slightly increased ds.!
3. 00:55:220 (1) - as in Extra. ;w; Goooooooooooood point. I will try to think of something xD
4. 00:56:387 - and here like in all prev diffs again xD (You probably have your reasons to keep the little break but it's just a personal preferance of mine to keep the pace steady, so I keep mentioning it.. xD) Personal preference vs. personal preference i guess xDD

Welp, that's all I can say. It's a pretty nice mapset overall, imo
Good luck and have fun getting it ranked and thanks again for your mod! :3
//squee nyan nyan

Modding Assistant wrote:

• Inconsistency in [ComboColours]
{ Advanced} :
Combo1 : [189,249,237] Combo2 : [250,201,86] Combo3 : [68,121,247] Combo4 : [220,75,75]
{ Extra} :
Combo1 : [240,38,124] Combo2 : [255,228,168] Combo3 : [213,108,213] Combo4 : [245,175,71]
{ Hard} :
Combo1 : [254,211,84] Combo2 : [216,65,65] Combo3 : [163,78,214] Combo4 : [254,146,235]
{ Insane} :
Combo1 : [254,211,84] Combo2 : [216,65,65] Combo3 : [163,78,214] Combo4 : [254,146,235]
{ Normal} :
Combo1 : [189,249,237] Combo2 : [250,201,86] Combo3 : [68,121,247] Combo4 : [220,75,75]
{ Sweet Nekos <3} :
Combo1 : [240,38,124] Combo2 : [255,228,168] Combo3 : [213,108,213] Combo4 : [245,175,71]

• Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitfinish2.wav

1. 00:00:721 - Useless green line (no SV change) apply to all diffs
   
   
   [Normal]
2. 00:14:054 (1) - maybe curve a little bit right?
3. 00:06:054 - unsnapped green line
4. 00:45:220 (5) - x:260 y:292
5. 00:55:220 - high beat it plays better if it's clickable
6. 00:53:720 (1,2) - switch NC
   
   [Advanced]
7. 00:06:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part and this part 00:08:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - the same rhythm why they are mapped in a different way?
   
   [Hard]
8. 00:08:387 - ignored beat >w<
9. 00:11:054 - ^
10. 00:13:720 - ^
11. Clean!
    
    [Insane]
12. 00:12:887 (2) - breaks the flow x:308 y:112 better flow
13. 00:14:387 (2,3,4) - any reason for the sudden jumps?
14. 00:27:387 (1,3) - overlap?
15. 00:33:054 (2,3,4,5,6) - star pattern makes it beautiful
16. 00:53:720 (5,6) - ctrl+g
17. There's more some flow breaks which makes the diff feels awkward

KASUM1 wrote:

#modreqs

[General]

Modding Assistant wrote:

• Inconsistency in [ComboColours] Because they have different BG... is it a problem if combo colors are not consistent?
{ Advanced} :
Combo1 : [189,249,237] Combo2 : [250,201,86] Combo3 : [68,121,247] Combo4 : [220,75,75]
{ Extra} :
Combo1 : [240,38,124] Combo2 : [255,228,168] Combo3 : [213,108,213] Combo4 : [245,175,71]
{ Hard} :
Combo1 : [254,211,84] Combo2 : [216,65,65] Combo3 : [163,78,214] Combo4 : [254,146,235]
{ Insane} :
Combo1 : [254,211,84] Combo2 : [216,65,65] Combo3 : [163,78,214] Combo4 : [254,146,235]
{ Normal} :
Combo1 : [189,249,237] Combo2 : [250,201,86] Combo3 : [68,121,247] Combo4 : [220,75,75]
{ Sweet Nekos <3} :
Combo1 : [240,38,124] Combo2 : [255,228,168] Combo3 : [213,108,213] Combo4 : [245,175,71]

• Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitfinish2.wav Deleted

1. 00:00:721 - Useless green line (no SV change) apply to all diffs Deleted for normal, advanced, and hard.
   
   
   [Normal]
2. 00:14:054 (1) - maybe curve a little bit right? Looks fine to me :3
3. 00:06:054 - unsnapped green line Fixed
4. 00:45:220 (5) - x:260 y:292 Looks fine to me ><;
5. 00:55:220 - high beat it plays better if it's clickable Changed!
6. 00:53:720 (1,2) - switch NC For consistency, I prefer to keep it
   
   [Advanced]
7. 00:06:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part and this part 00:08:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - the same rhythm why they are mapped in a different way? I don't think it's a problem since I'm still following the same beats.
   
   [Hard]
8. 00:08:387 - ignored beat >w< This is a dillema for me... I don't want to ignore beats, but I think it plays much better if I use a full beat long slider ther >_<;; I prefer to keep it
9. 00:11:054 - ^ ^
10. 00:13:720 - ^ ^
11. Clean! Hooray \:D/
    
    [Insane]
12. 00:12:887 (2) - breaks the flow x:308 y:112 better flow I do not think this is a bad flow. Little break from the circular flow I used most of my map, but I prefer not to change it because I've used too many circles already
13. 00:14:387 (2,3,4) - any reason for the sudden jumps? er... no. Changed xD
14. 00:27:387 (1,3) - overlap? Yes, intentional
15. 00:33:054 (2,3,4,5,6) - star pattern makes it beautiful Not intended to be a star
16. 00:53:720 (5,6) - ctrl+g I prefer to keep it
17. There's more some flow breaks which makes the diff feels awkward Dx

I'm not so good in extra diffs sorry >//< Your mod has already been very helpful xD
gl~!

SkinnyJommy wrote:

hi! umm maybe... m4m from modreqs? i message but you are afk gg Thanks for the mod! Unfortunately, I'm bit busy with other requests right now, that why I requested normal mod at modreq. I will try to mod your map, but it may take a while

[Sweet Nekos <3]

1. 00:01:554 (2,1) - This overlap is ugly! you could move it somewhere else so its not so ugly Fixed
   
2. 00:05:220 (4,3,4,5) - ^ ^
   
3. 00:13:554 (5,1) - here too This looks fine to me
   
4. 00:17:887 (1,3,4) - A bit too close, looks messy ^
   
5. 00:18:720 (4,1) - stack!! Done
   
6. 00:20:387 (4,3) - you could stack these as well, would look nice Looks fine to me
   
7. 00:22:054 (1,4) - fix blanket I think blanket looks good q_q
   
8. 00:27:387 (1) - If you are going to have this really insane overlap, at least make the upcoming slider more visible!Slightly changed. But With this slow slider, I do not think visibility will effect playability
   
   [box=like this[img:1337:1337]http://puu.sh/m2ere.jpg[/img:1337]]

top kek m8 wrote:

hey man, here from #modreqs


Offset 691 Hmm, I think 721 sounds better

Normal

00:21:690 could be a bit of a throwoff, not sure if you should change but just a thought I think it should be fine
00:53:690 shouldn't be a new combo I think I should for consistency
00:58:357 sounds better as 3 circles per beat starting at 00:58:357 imo Ehh... I'm not really sure what you mean. Your timing is not snapped
01:23:024 see 00:21:690 ^
01:25:524 don't know if this ending prematurely is correct here, maybe half a beat longer Changed!
01:28:690 why does the volume change happen here? looks much better closer to the end, like 01:32:565 Fixed

that's really all i can suggest. good luck with the map.

Kaype wrote:

From a ticket, requested in game.

General

It seems in the audio file that there is about 10 seconds of silence after the song ends. Yes. I don't think it's a problem, but will be fixed if it turns out to be.

Apparently AI mod says that Kiai mode can't be less than 15 seconds! Not sure if that's an issue or not, considering how short of a map it is.
(from Normal to Insane) A-AI mod senpai is baka >_<;;
01:27:387 (1) - Snap spinner's end to the red tick before it (I think it's snapped on a blue tick in 1/4 here) I know the music sounds like it ends there, but I think it would be better ending at 01:32:637 snapping to blue tick was a suggestion from another modder, but I agree with you more Changed.

Side Notes

this mod was enjoyable because of the song ikr, song so good
sorry about my skin in the images, it makes it easier for me to look at things
Links to images will be included in a hyperlink of a word from the sentence.
look at me being all fancy with the notice boxes xDD

Insane, Extra, and Sweet Nekos <3
that was actually really fun to play <3
Since mappers have a lot more freedom on these difficulties, I can't really find anything wrong with these maps. Great job!

Normal

00:16:720 (1) - This slider would curve better if you changed that red fixed point to a normal curve point. I'd like to have it blanket the previous note

00:23:220 (2) - This slider looks a little awkward coming from the previous one. (i.e. since the length of the two are the same, make it symmetrical?) Done!

01:16:054 (2,3) - You had a good line of flow going, it seems interrupted here. I think it looks fine

01:24:554 (2) - Red point to normal point Trying to emphasize the most prominent sound in the music. I have been consistent doing so :3

01:23:387 (1) - because of that ^ this slider's end would look nicer if it went to Next: 1.04x ^

Advanced

00:21:554 (5,1,2) - The use of NC here sounds awkward since the downbeat starts on where you put the 1's end (because of how it is before (e.g. 00:16:720 (1) and 00:19:387 (1) ), I'd suggest moving around the notes I think NC at the slider with tail ending at downbeat is standard. And I'd rather not move notes around just to have NC start at downbeat.

Hard

00:23:220 (1,2) - You could make these sliders parallel I prefer not to

01:08:387 (4) - Since the 01:08:554 (1) blankets, I think it would flow better if you move the 4 under the 2, since the reverse slider leads the flow directly
above it rather than to the side. I agree. And it emphasizes the slider so much better. And nice gif xDD fixed!

01:15:387 (1,2,3) - The DS has been pretty consistent so far, up until these notes. Change the spacing? Oops... fixed xD

01:09:220 (3,4,5) - tiny lil' adjustment to the 5 so it looks better I'm not sure if this is what you meant, but I think it's fixed now xD

It's a really good and fun map, hope to see this ranked in the future! Good luck

pishifat wrote:

whats with the 10 seconds of silence at the end of the mp3 lol

bg 2 such low res

I think - Kafuuchii - just helped fix both of the issues above owo

normal
instead of forcing the "every gap must be 1/1" thing with your 1/2 sliders like 00:08:220 (6) - , using circles followed by 3/2 gaps would honestly be better. sliders that short with super low sv are a pain to actually follow since there's like no visible sliderbody
so yea i'm saying convert all those to circles g Thanks for your suggestions on this. When I was mapping easy (or normal without an easy diff in the mapset), I got complaints about using 3/2 so many times that I decided to avoid using it completely. Now I guess it's more like an opinion. I will be more open to using 3/2 gaps where I think is fitting, but I prefer not to change all 1/2 sliders to circles because: 1) hitsound/rhythm consistency 2) that will introduce around a dozen 3/2 gaps, which I think is too many 3) I don't think short slider is big enough of a problem to risk introducing other problems

isnane
00:36:220 (5) - 01:07:387 (1) - tailsnapping is screwed fixed
this diff is pretty cool fixed

neko
00:26:720 (4) - same fixed

really not liking how you handle intensity between different parts of the song in the top 2 diffs
like the intro and outro are super calm yet density is the same as the rest of the map with constant 1/2 circles + decently large spacing. if anything, lowering the spacing a lot (so they're not treated as jumps) or converting a lot of circles to sliders would be more fitting I will reduce DS for that part in general a bit

yea thats allxxxx

- Kafuuchii - wrote:

Requested via 「Kafuuchii's Reservation Queue. Poi~」

- General

1. That 10 secs outro is killing me so badly: Use this instead
2. Your (2) BGs are at lower reso and high reso: BG Fix (neko bg2) and BG Fix (sweets)
   - I resized them and fixed the image to make it not so blurry when expanded.
   - The first bg seems ok so no change on that...
   Thank you so much for taking time to fix these! All applied
3. Lastly, your preview time isn't snapped - move to 00:56:387 -fixed

I don't see any problem at Normal =w=

- Advanced

1. 01:11:054 (3,4) - how about not stacking them?I prefer stacking, feels like that emphasize 01:11:244 - better

- Hard

1. 00:12:054 (2) - i think this should be closer to 3 I'm not sure what you mean... DS is consistent though..
2. 00:15:554 (2) - ctrl+g? I prefer to keep it
3. 00:18:554 (3) - x: 212 y: 328 I've made 00:18:744 - consistently a small jump
4. 00:39:720 (3) - change to circle(s)? Not sure why that'd be better q_q
5. 01:03:720 (2) - why not just put a circle at 01:03:720 - emphasis on the bass stop? I prefer to keep slider
6. 01:17:720 (3) - to circles at 01:17:720 - and 01:17:887 - somewhat mirroring 01:17:387 (1,2) - < this I think that will follow music pretty well, but I am bit reluctant to put too many circles next to each other for a hard diff on a song with fairly high bpm. I will put more thoughts into it.

MOD END. That's all I can do... Hoping to see this getting ranked soon =w=

Deppyforce wrote:

good morning

General
aimod says this map needs 1 easy/normal diff LOL maybe you really should map a easy diff aimod senpai is a baka. I need no easy diff!

Normal
00:09:244 - start slider here I'd rather not. I cannot capture every sound in the music anyways, and I'd like to keep 1/2 clicking to minimum. And I thionk 00:09:411 - has more prominent sound.
00:14:578 - ^ ^
00:16:744 (1) - looks pretty weird pls make it symmetric For the blanket xD

Advanced
00:14:078 (1,2) - maybe blanket I don't want to make the angle too shart by making it a blanket
00:55:244 (3) - put red anchor on slidertick makes more sense imo Done
01:00:578 (4,6) - fix blanket Fixed

Hard
00:07:244 (1,2,3) - idk if this pattern is ok in hard diff but imo you shouldnt overlap it cuz the ''hard player'' may cant read Hard players should be able to hand this, i think
00:54:078 (1) - blanket not intended to be one
00:56:411 - i think vocal here should be mapped cuz its preview point I feel like 00:56:744 - where the music kicks off, so I want this short break to be there. but it's easy to fix if I decide to follow your suggestion, so I'm leaving as is.
01:16:578 (6,1,2,1,2) - hard to read for this diff just stack them instead of overlap Suggested by another modder, I really like it. I prefer to keep it. Very simple to fix if BN thinks it's unrankable

thats it good luck

1. 00:17:411 - somehow I feeling like this beat has got a bit feel of emphasized thing , so maybe I guess it would be better to map this beat here , try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:19:411 (1) - , 00:22:078 (1,1) - , and also some sliders like this at the last part :: similiar ^^
3. 00:21:244 - would be pretty much better to map this too , it would make rhythm sound nice , try this ?
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:53:578 (5) - would make rhythm sound better if you place this here 00:53:411 - instead
5. 01:21:911 (2) - similiar to 00:21:244 -

1. 01:22:411 (5,6) - try this rhythm instead ? I think it sound better
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1. 00:50:578 (3,4) - mm I think it would be better if you use the same spacing you use for previous note since I think that the jumps here play kinda weird and might not really need to emphasized (4) much imo lol
2. 01:03:078 (4,1) - consistent spacing would work better , the jumps feel a bit weird to do here o.o
3. 01:19:911 (3,4) - same
   
   somehow feel you can make jumps thing a bit more consistent , I guess lol cus sometimes jumps just happen to be on thing that I think most people would expect them to appear but it's not , instead it appear another place that jumps don't really fit much there imo lol

1. 01:06:744 (3) - sound overmapped at blue tick , should end at red tick instead
2. 01:11:078 (4,1) - can have more spacing so it will emphasize (1) better which make the pattern here play better imo , try move (1) to around x184 y72 ?

1. 00:25:744 (5,6) - I think if you make spacing here a bit higher it will give nice impact on (6) which will make the flow feel good here , try move (6) to around x204 y336 ?
2. 00:02:078 (1,2) - try swap places of these two notes ? it might make flow here 00:01:744 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - better imo
3. 00:48:078 (3,4) - mm (4) doesn't sound emphasized that much so it kinda weird to have jumps so big like this , maybe try to lower spacing here a bit ?
4. 00:58:744 (5,6) - similiar ^^
   

1. 00:05:244 (4,1) - kinda weird to have low spacing for emphasized beat there , maybe try to move (1) to around x276 y128 ?
2. 00:15:078 (6,1) - should have higher spacing than 00:14:911 (5,6) - since (1) sound really emphasized there , try move (6) to around x196 y120 ?
3. 00:37:578 (4,5) - can have more spacing so it emphasis (5) beat better , try move (5) to around x192 y206 ?
4. 00:59:744 (3,4) - should have higher spacing than 00:59:578 (2,3) - since (4) sound really emphasized . try move (3) to around x184 y344 ?
5. 01:01:744 (6,7) - feel weird to have high spacing here , I think (7) doesn't sound emphasized that much so maybe lower spacing would be good here

CelsiusLK wrote:

as requested

[normal]

1. 00:17:411 - somehow I feeling like this beat has got a bit feel of emphasized thing , so maybe I guess it would be better to map this beat here , try this rhythm ? I want to avoid using 3/2 beats for the easiest difficulty of the map set. I agree your solution seem to follow the music better, but for difficulty issues, I am already ignoring a lot of beats in the music anyways. I prefer to keep it as I've done it.
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2. 00:19:411 (1) - , 00:22:078 (1,1) - , and also some sliders like this at the last part :: similiar ^^ ^^
3. 00:21:244 - would be pretty much better to map this too , it would make rhythm sound nice , try this ? Changed
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:53:578 (5) - would make rhythm sound better if you place this here 00:53:411 - instead Changed
5. 01:21:911 (2) - similiar to 00:21:244 - Changed

[advance]

1. 01:22:411 (5,6) - try this rhythm instead ? I think it sound better
   SPOILER

   
   Changed!

[hard]

1. 00:50:578 (3,4) - mm I think it would be better if you use the same spacing you use for previous note since I think that the jumps here play kinda weird and might not really need to emphasized (4) much imo lol Changed
2. 01:03:078 (4,1) - consistent spacing would work better , the jumps feel a bit weird to do here o.o Changed
3. 01:19:911 (3,4) - same Changed
   
   somehow feel you can make jumps thing a bit more consistent , I guess lol cus sometimes jumps just happen to be on thing that I think most people would expect them to appear but it's not , instead it appear another place that jumps don't really fit much there imo lol I think I've used jumps pretty consistently, in terms of both DS and locations. However, I may have been consistent in placing jumps where it's not very fitting lol. Probably will need more mods to help me decide.

[insane]

1. 01:06:744 (3) - sound overmapped at blue tick , should end at red tick instead I guess you are referring to the drum beat at red tick, but I prefer to keep it since I think the sound that started 01:06:744 - don't stop at red tick
2. 01:11:078 (4,1) - can have more spacing so it will emphasize (1) better which make the pattern here play better imo , try move (1) to around x184 y72 ? Changed

[extra]

1. 00:25:744 (5,6) - I think if you make spacing here a bit higher it will give nice impact on (6) which will make the flow feel good here , try move (6) to around x204 y336 ? Changed
2. 00:02:078 (1,2) - try swap places of these two notes ? it might make flow here 00:01:744 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - better imo Changed, and 00:00:745 (1,2) - swapped for consistency.
3. 00:48:078 (3,4) - mm (4) doesn't sound emphasized that much so it kinda weird to have jumps so big like this , maybe try to lower spacing here a bit ? Done
4. 00:58:744 (5,6) - similiar ^^ Done
   

[sweet neko]

1. 00:05:244 (4,1) - kinda weird to have low spacing for emphasized beat there , maybe try to move (1) to around x276 y128 ? Changed
2. 00:15:078 (6,1) - should have higher spacing than 00:14:911 (5,6) - since (1) sound really emphasized there , try move (6) to around x196 y120 ? Changed
3. 00:37:578 (4,5) - can have more spacing so it emphasis (5) beat better , try move (5) to around x192 y206 ? Moved
4. 00:59:744 (3,4) - should have higher spacing than 00:59:578 (2,3) - since (4) sound really emphasized . try move (3) to around x184 y344 ? Moved
5. 01:01:744 (6,7) - feel weird to have high spacing here , I think (7) doesn't sound emphasized that much so maybe lower spacing would be good here Changed!... I guess I will try to improve spacing in this diff in general

good luck

Ni-ma wrote:

from my queue

Sweet Nekos <3:
00:00:745 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - All notes are in anti-clockwise trend. They can be more changeful. 00:03:411 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - in clockwise trend seems to be better. I don't really think i need to change too much because it's only 3 seconds long and has similar sounds xD and 00:03:411 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) isn't rotating much, more of a back and forth.
00:41:744 (3) - NC here but not 00:42:078 (1) - seems to fit the lyrics more. I don't really understand the lyrics, but music seem to change at the down beat.
01:05:244 (4) - There is no drum sound here. It may be a kind of overmap. Maybe no drum, or maybe drum, hard to tell because the sound there is very loud. definitely not a overmap
01:15:911 (4) - This note can be move down a little. Changed

Extra:
The same as "Sweet Nekos <3", there are too many patterns in same trend. I think it will be better with a combination of clockwise&anti-clockwise. (Also for other diffs.
01:14:744 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here too many notes in the lower left, a little unbalanced. That's less than 3 seconds... I think it's fine xD

GD for rank~

S A V E R Y wrote:

윙? 이지 난이도 안받나요?

Taeyang wrote:

늦은 M4M 죄송합니다
Sry late M4M req


Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

• General

1. 스프레드적으로 advanced와 hard난이도와 약간 갭이 있다고 생각합니다.
   hard의 연속 서클들을 1/2슬라로 3.1정도까지 낮추거나 혹은
   advanced의 맵에 1/2슬라,연속 서클을 좀더 추가하여 스프레드를 맞추는게 좋다고 생각합니다.요즘 랭크돼는 맵들 봤을때 스타레이팅 갭은 문제가 될지 모르겠네요. 실직적인 난이도는 advanced가 1/2 클릭이 부분부분 많이 섞여있고, hard 가 대부분 1/2 클릭 + 트리플 한개 이기 때문에 스프레드는 적절한 것 같아요.

• Normal

1. 00:16:744 (1,2) - 담요를 이요한 모딩제한입니다만 아래 사진과 같은건 어떤가요? 모양은 좋은데 제가 좋아하는 흐름이 아니라... 좀 더 생각해 보겠습니다.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
2. 00:21:578 (3,1) - 이걸 좀더 00:20:578 (2) - 여기에 깔끔하게 씌우면 더 좋을것같아요 이미지 링크가... ㅜㅜ
   
   SPOILER

   [img]00:20:578%20(2)%20-[/img]
3. 00:23:244 (2) - 긴슬라는 그냥 슬라보단 형태 잡아주면 퀼적으로 좋게보여요(콧수염모양) 수정 완료
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:244 (5,1) - 너무 비운것 같은데 백그라운드를 따라갔더라도 00:45:744 - 여기 서클 넣어주는게 좋을것같습니다. 제가 짧은 브레이크를 좋아해서요 :3
5. 01:04:411 - 노트 넣는게 플레이적으로 더 안정적이여보여요 여기는 추가했습니다.

• Advanced

1. 00:24:078 (6,1,2) - 패턴 제안 수정했습니다
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:30:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 흐름,패턴제안;개인적으론 00:30:744 (2) - 이게 1/2슬라-서클-1/1 보단,
   리버스를사용하는게 더 안정적이여 보입니다. 리버스를 이미 많이 사용하고 있기 때문에, 조금 강조해도 되겠다 싶은 구간에는 저렇게 놨두고 싶어요
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:49:078 (2,4) - 2서클을 4에 담요 수정 완료
   
   SPOILER

   

• Hard

1. 00:05:744 (2,3,4) - 시작부분이니 좀쉽게 3연타보단 리버스가 나아보이네요 3연타 사용한 부분은 여기가 유일한 것 같은데 ;-; 생각해 보겠습니다
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:10:244 (2,4) - s자보단 4슬라를 2슬라에 담요 씌우는게 간격적으로 더 나아보입니다 00:10:911 (4,1) - 여기 흐름도 있고 해서 그냥 놨두고 싶네요 :3
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:28:578 (1) - 리듬 제안;00:28:744 - 이곳에 백그라운드 노이즈이외 아무소리도 없으니 슬라사이로 비우는게 좋습니다. 00:28:578 - 가 슬라 꼬리에 두기엔 좀 더 강조해주고 싶은 소리라 놨두고 싶습니다. 00:27:411 (1,1) 여기는 보컬이 있어서 조금 보컬 위주로 따라해 본건데... 그리고 다른 난이도도 비슷하게 최소한 일관성은 있어요 ㅋㅋ
   (00:27:411 (1,1) - 여기처럼)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:33:911 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:44:578 (1) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:55:244 (4) - 뉴콤하고 00:56:411 - 여기에 노트 추가하셔서 00:56:744 (1) - 안티점프,스택하면 더좋을것 같습니다. 그렇게 해도 좋을것 같은데 다른 난이도와 일관성 때문에 비워두겠습니다.
   
   SPOILER

   

• Insane

1. 00:05:411 (1,2) - 스택(서클-서클) 3연타보단 00:05:411 (1,2) - 이부분을 슬라 만들어주는게 유저들에게 좋은 스타트라인이 될수있다고 생각합니다. 수정했습니다
2. 00:08:744 (1,3) - 담요가 덜씌웠네요 어프로치에 맞춰 확실하게 수정했습니다
   
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3. 00:16:244 (4) - 이서클을 00:15:911 (3) - 여기 꼬리에 스택시켜 00:16:244 (4,5) - 이부분을 점프만들어주는게 흐름상 더 좋아보입니다. 조금 다르게 바꿔봤습니다
4. 00:55:244 (1,4) - 담요? 00:56:411 (2) - 그후 서클추가 잘 이해가 안돼요 ㅇㅅㅇ;; 00:57:411 (4) - 는 너무 멀리 있는 노트라 담요 할 필요는 없을것 같아요
   
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급똥이 마려워서 나머지 엑라두개는 별2개로 때우겠습니다. 뷁ㅇㅅㅇ 별 감사합니다 \ㅇ/

Write wrote:

Mod(highest diff)

00:08:578 (7) - This isn't mapped to anything I removed it and it sounded pretty good.
00:13:911 (6) - This doesn't sound like its mapped to anything as well or doesn't stay on the same rhythm that you've been keeping so far.
00:17:244 (2) - Theres nothing here and sounds better without imo
00:32:578 (6) -
00:34:744 (4,5) - imo it sounds better with these removed your call.
00:37:911 (6) - remove this its not mapped to anything imo.
00:38:578 (2) - sounds better without this here
00:40:578 (6) -
00:43:244 (6) -
00:43:744 (2,3,4,5,6) - the third note isnt mapped to anything adn removing it makes it sound weird so im not sure about this.
00:48:578 (5) -
00:57:244 (3) - not mapped to anything and sounds ok without.
01:04:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Imo the way the jumps are placed to emphasize the music doesn't fit
01:12:078 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this looks really uncomfortable to hit imo.
The intro and outro need to be calmer imo the ending jumps dont make much sense and I dont like how you mapped those mini jumps at the start try for more of what you did at the ending? that was a bit better and fit better..