Tune Up - Feel Fine (Nightcore Mix) · forum

Xeno_old

Joined June 2009

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Xeno_old 2010-03-30T18:54:35+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 February 2011 at 09:48:00 PM

Artist: Tune Up
Title: Feel Fine (Nightcore Mix)
Source: Eurodance Group
Tags: Trance Techno Starrodkirby86
BPM: 170.4
Filesize: 6498kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.74 stars, 376 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 577 notes)
Kirby's Easy (2.84 stars, 200 notes)
Normal (4.17 stars, 265 notes)

Download: Tune Up - Feel Fine (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Giving beatmapping a try.

Insane = Finished.
Hard = Finished.
Normal = Finished.
Starrodkirby86 made a easy for me. Thanks dude!

Last edited by Xeno_old 2011-02-16T19:48:20+00:00, edited 54 times in total.

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-03-30T19:03:15+00:00

Insane;

00:11:600 (3) - Spacing.
00:17:587 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
01:33:660 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing.
01:53:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is goddamn sexy.

Jesss

814 posts

Joined November 2008

Jesss 2010-04-02T23:21:32+00:00

Hi! i love songs with a little bit of pitchin' up! xDDDD

Well, let's see...

Overall:
Please set up this new timing (it's more precise and MAT/BATs will not annoy you):
BPM:170,4 and offset: 3505ms and resnap all notes according to new timing (use Timing>Resnap all notes)

[Normal]

SPOILER

Not bad uh? AImod has not detected errors but i see little aesthetic errors:
-01:57:413 (4) - Align (i know i know, its perpendicular) with previous circle 3
-02:33:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i suggest put that combos in the center of the screen
None at the moment

Hitsounds advices (you have to follow a pattern, please pay attention to this detail):
00:03:857 (2) - Clap (?)
00:05:265 (2) - ^
00:06:674 (2) - ^
00:08:082 (2) - ^
00:12:659 (3) - ^
00:13:364 (5) - Finish (?)
00:15:476 (3) - Whistle (?)
00:16:004 (4) - Whistle @ end of slider 0:16:885 (?)
00:18:293 (3) - Whistle (?)
00:18:821 (4) - Whistle @ end of slider 0:19:702 (?)
00:21:110 (3) - Clap
00:22:519 (6) - Finish
00:24:631 (5) - instead of Clap, put Finish
00:26:392 (2) - Clap
00:26:744 (3) - Finish
00:27:096 (4) - Clap
00:28:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - Follow the same pattern sounds from previous combo but Volume down to half level.
00:31:674 (1) - instead of clap, use whistle
00:38:364 (1) - Finish (?)
well...that were just suggestions, apply 'em or forget it ^^"

[Insane]

SPOILER

-00:14:768 (1) - Too close from previous slider
-00:35:191 (6) - Move it 1/4 beat left
-00:36:600 (2) - ^
-00:38:009 (1) - ^
-00:40:650 (3) - ^
-00:40:826 (4) - ^
-01:39:280 (1) - Cut this slider from it original ending position to 01:41:921 and remove finish hitsound
-Put circle here 01:42:097
-01:53:366 (1,2,3) - Align with endpoint of 01:51:957 (1) -
-Put circle here 02:10:091
-02:10:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Very confusing to read...insane songs means "Hard to play", not "Hard to read note patterns"
-Put Circle here 02:12:820

Suggestion: use more hitsounds combinations...not only are whistles and finishes
Mod finished...Star!

Last edited by Jesss 2010-04-03T00:25:05+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Xeno_old

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Topic Starter

Xeno_old 2010-04-02T23:59:13+00:00

Thanks both of you, did all suggestions sofar

Fuuko

486 posts

Joined June 2009

Fuuko 2010-04-03T00:17:32+00:00

Pointed out some minor things, though I didn't mod it to the fullest.

Star.

Starrodkirby86

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Here since the beginning

Starrodkirby86 2010-04-03T04:10:45+00:00

Don't forget to remove the .osb and Full submit ~ =P

Anyway, here you go. I hope you like it.

Download: Nightcore - Feel Fine (Xeno32) [Kirby's Easy].osu

JeY k

66 posts

Joined July 2009

JeY k 2010-04-05T03:23:57+00:00

Hmm... I stumbled upon this map, so don't mind my random presence!

Overall, the maps (difficulties) looks good!

I can only point out one qualm, with insane - some of the pink circles hiding behind combo bursts might be difficult to comprehend for people who can actually pass insane songs (I just watched it on autoplay

), especially with the background, the hitcircles blend a little. It's probably fine, but it did catch my attention, so I thought I would mention it.

Star! Great song! =D

Diasios

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Joined August 2008

Diasios 2010-04-07T19:20:59+00:00

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"
• Add Starrodkirby86 into tags

[Kirby's] (this is a normal imo)

• Remove H1ko from tags

Xeno_old

120 posts

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Topic Starter

Xeno_old 2010-04-07T21:14:13+00:00

Thanks

All done

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-04-26T19:32:39+00:00

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me

Let's go!!

~Kirby's Easy~
00:28:853 (1) - Hmmm... Having the next circle that far away from the center of the spinner makes it a bit harsh for newbies imo, maybe shorten it 1/1?
01:17:448 (2,3) - I know this can be intentional but... fix spacing? =x
01:18:152 (3,1) - ^
01:23:082 (2,3) - ^
01:23:786 (3,1) - ^

~Normal~
01:54:596 (4) - Fix Spacing.
01:57:413 (4) - ^
02:16:251 (1) - ^ (Suggestion of what you can do: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8150)

~Hard~
00:06:321 (1,2,3) - Nice pattern but the hitbursts of the previous circles makes this 3 circles a bit hard to see. Maybe make something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151 (As in, just move the first pattern line up and the second pattern line down)
00:48:927 (3,4,5,6) - This was sooo confusing >_< Move /5,6) away so it will be better to read it.
00:50:335 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:04:596 (4) - Copy-paste (2) here and do a horizontal flip.
01:05:476 (1) - I think it will be better if you move this away. Up to you though, this is just a small suggestion, it's nice as it is now

01:44:913 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - How about playing a little bit with symmetry and the previous pattern? Just copy-paste it and make a Vertical and Horizontal flip :3
02:07:272 (1) - Extend it until white tick.
02:21:885 (3,4,5,6) - Same as before, move (5,6) away to make them more readable.
02:23:293 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:38:434 (1) - Same as before too, just a little suggestion that you're totally free to ignore xP.

Not bad for a first beatmap, I'm impressed xP. Good luck with it!! *star*

Xeno_old

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Topic Starter

Xeno_old 2010-04-26T19:58:20+00:00

Thanks, Did all of those suggestions, some of them are quite good!

Sakura

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Sakura 2010-04-26T22:46:43+00:00

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, but you dont have to
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Offset on Kirby's Easy is 5 ms earlier than the other difficulties
I'm not sure if that stack leniency is rankable, i suggest you change it to be safe

[Kirby's Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
00:32:818 (1,2,3) - Move them back 1 tick (that is to the blue tick) as it stands right now they seem to be ahead of the part of the music that you seem to be following.

[Hard]
Fine

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-05-01T11:17:24+00:00

Hi (I don't know to say Hi in African ;_;)

[File]
Your bg (sample-19f57280db4730b4b86875c06fb64e6e) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 850x680)

[Kirbynyan's Easy]
00:04:913 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:07:730 (1) - ^
00:10:547 (1) - ^
00:21:814 (1) - ^
00:24:631 (1) - ^
00:42:413 (x) - Add note?
00:52:800 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1 grid down to make pattern preetier?
01:04:068 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:30:828 (1,2) - Flip these?
02:04:631 ~ 02:15:899 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit

[Normal]
00:46:814 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:45:758 (3)?
00:55:969 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:57:026 (3)?
02:22:589 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:21:885 (6)?
02:33:857 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:33:152 (5)?

[Hard]
Fine~

Nice song
STAR

Larto

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Larto 2011-01-14T16:43:04+00:00

Revived

miss_dior

miss_dior 2011-01-14T20:29:46+00:00

can i make hard gust diff