This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 February 2011 at 09:48:00 PM

Artist: Tune Up
Title: Feel Fine (Nightcore Mix)
Source: Eurodance Group
Tags: Trance Techno Starrodkirby86
BPM: 170.4
Filesize: 6498kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.74 stars, 376 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 577 notes)
3. Kirby's Easy (2.84 stars, 200 notes)
4. Normal (4.17 stars, 265 notes)

Download: Tune Up - Feel Fine (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Giving beatmapping a try.

Insane = Finished.
Hard = Finished.
Normal = Finished.
Starrodkirby86 made a easy for me. Thanks dude!

Insane;

00:11:600 (3) - Spacing.
00:17:587 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
01:33:660 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing.
01:53:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is goddamn sexy.

Hi! i love songs with a little bit of pitchin' up! xDDDD

Well, let's see...

Overall:
Please set up this new timing (it's more precise and MAT/BATs will not annoy you):
BPM:170,4 and offset: 3505ms and resnap all notes according to new timing (use Timing>Resnap all notes)

[Normal]

[Insane]

Suggestion: use more hitsounds combinations...not only are whistles and finishes
Mod finished...Star!

Thanks both of you, did all suggestions sofar

Don't forget to remove the .osb and Full submit ~ =P

Anyway, here you go. I hope you like it.

Download: Nightcore - Feel Fine (Xeno32) [Kirby's Easy].osu

Hmm... I stumbled upon this map, so don't mind my random presence!

Overall, the maps (difficulties) looks good!

I can only point out one qualm, with insane - some of the pink circles hiding behind combo bursts might be difficult to comprehend for people who can actually pass insane songs (I just watched it on autoplay ), especially with the background, the hitcircles blend a little. It's probably fine, but it did catch my attention, so I thought I would mention it.

Star! Great song! =D

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"
  • Add Starrodkirby86 into tags

[Kirby's] (this is a normal imo)

• • Remove H1ko from tags

Thanks

All done

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~Kirby's Easy~
00:28:853 (1) - Hmmm... Having the next circle that far away from the center of the spinner makes it a bit harsh for newbies imo, maybe shorten it 1/1?
01:17:448 (2,3) - I know this can be intentional but... fix spacing? =x
01:18:152 (3,1) - ^
01:23:082 (2,3) - ^
01:23:786 (3,1) - ^

~Normal~
01:54:596 (4) - Fix Spacing.
01:57:413 (4) - ^
02:16:251 (1) - ^ (Suggestion of what you can do: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8150)

~Hard~
00:06:321 (1,2,3) - Nice pattern but the hitbursts of the previous circles makes this 3 circles a bit hard to see. Maybe make something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151 (As in, just move the first pattern line up and the second pattern line down)
00:48:927 (3,4,5,6) - This was sooo confusing >_< Move /5,6) away so it will be better to read it.
00:50:335 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:04:596 (4) - Copy-paste (2) here and do a horizontal flip.
01:05:476 (1) - I think it will be better if you move this away. Up to you though, this is just a small suggestion, it's nice as it is now
01:44:913 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - How about playing a little bit with symmetry and the previous pattern? Just copy-paste it and make a Vertical and Horizontal flip :3
02:07:272 (1) - Extend it until white tick.
02:21:885 (3,4,5,6) - Same as before, move (5,6) away to make them more readable.
02:23:293 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:38:434 (1) - Same as before too, just a little suggestion that you're totally free to ignore xP.

Not bad for a first beatmap, I'm impressed xP. Good luck with it!! *star*

Thanks, Did all of those suggestions, some of them are quite good!

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, but you dont have to
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Offset on Kirby's Easy is 5 ms earlier than the other difficulties
I'm not sure if that stack leniency is rankable, i suggest you change it to be safe

[Kirby's Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
00:32:818 (1,2,3) - Move them back 1 tick (that is to the blue tick) as it stands right now they seem to be ahead of the part of the music that you seem to be following.

[Hard]
Fine

Hi (I don't know to say Hi in African ;_;)

[File]
Your bg (sample-19f57280db4730b4b86875c06fb64e6e) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 850x680)

[Kirbynyan's Easy]
00:04:913 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:07:730 (1) - ^
00:10:547 (1) - ^
00:21:814 (1) - ^
00:24:631 (1) - ^
00:42:413 (x) - Add note?
00:52:800 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1 grid down to make pattern preetier?
01:04:068 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:30:828 (1,2) - Flip these?
02:04:631 ~ 02:15:899 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit

[Normal]
00:46:814 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:45:758 (3)?
00:55:969 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:57:026 (3)?
02:22:589 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:21:885 (6)?
02:33:857 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:33:152 (5)?

[Hard]
Fine~

Nice song
STAR

Revived

can i make hard gust diff

miss_dior wrote:

can i make hard gust diff

Sure.

Nightcore isn't a allowed as a artist now. Pls change to Tune Up - Feel Fine (Nightcore Mix)

but it really well

Star~

irc modded.

done

Download: Nightcore - Feel Fine (Xeno32) [miss_dior's hard].osu

miss_dior wrote:

done

I'm sorry, I cant use this.

You can always try and make it better.

Mod4Mod

General
you could add to source "Eurodance Group"

Hard

00:15:476 (3) 1 grid left
00:18:293 (2) 1 grid left
00:22:166 (2,3,1,1) 1 grid right all
00:23:575 (2) 1 grid left
00:24:279 (4) 1 grid left
01:11:814 (3) 1 grid left
01:12:519 (1) 1 grid left
01:12:695 (2) 2 grid left and down
01:13:751 (2) 2 grid left and up
01:13:223 (4) 1 grid right
01:13:927 (3) 1 grid left
01:17:096 (2) 1 grid down
01:34:702 (4) 1 grid down
01:35:054~01:36:462 (1,2,3) 1 grid down those
01:53:716 (2) 1 grid left

Nice map
Star

mod4mod

Kirby's Easy
00:49:983 (2) - add finish at the end of slider?

Normal
00:29:913 (4) - flip horizontally ?
moar finish hitsounds!

Hard
00:27:448 (5) - snapped with (1)
01:35:054 (1,3) - 1 grid up
02:10:793 (3) - 4 grid up, 1 grid left

Insane
01:24:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,1) - OMG x__X
02:35:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Hooooot, my fingers D:
^-- but it's TRUE insane. not hardly hard. It's very dinamic and rhythmic.Cool. Star, great job.

I'm not good at modding, but i'll give my best.
(First Modding!)

(Grid Level 3 every grid)
[General]
A storyboard was awesome.
00:42:413 - Preview point exactly at this point.
Adjust the inheriting timing lines please.

[Easy]
HP Down 1
AR Down 2
OD Down 2
Beginners aren't very good. Espacially on Easy Maps with 3 Stars (which means actually 'normal' in osu!)

00:20:406 (1,2) - Try to make them standing vertically parallel.
00:23:223 (1,2) - ^
00:24:631 (1) - More symmetric please.
( 00:14:772 (1) - Excellent! )
00:32:026 (2,2,2,...) - Need 1/4 tick more. Beginners could be confused about that in Taiko.

00:37:659 (2) - Wrong Distance Snap.
00:39:068 (2) - ^
Only Suggestion:
00:37:307 (1,2,3) - 1-2 grids left
00:38:716 (1,2,3) - 1-2 grids right
00:52:096 (3) - This into each other is kinda ugly. :<
01:03:364 (3) - ^

01:16:744 (1) - 2 grid left
01:19:913 (2) - 2 grid right
01:22:378 (1) - 2 grid right
01:25:547 (2) - 2 grid left

01:53:364 (1-3,1-3) - Make it smiliar to 01:43:504 (1-3,1-3).
02:04:631 (2,2,2,...) - Like [00:32:026 (2,2,2,...)] before.
02:10:617 (2,3) - 1 grid down
02:12:026 (2,3) - 1 grid down

02:17:307 (1) - 02:21:181 - Distance Spacing wrong multiple times.


[Normal]
For my opinion, it's boring to play mainly around the middle of the map:
More circles around the whole map next time please.
I'd say it's a Normal+

00:47:871 (4,5) - 1 grid left + down
00:42:413 (1) - A bit hard for normal...
00:57:026 (1) - Needs the same place like 00:54:913 (2)
00:59:138 (1) - ^
01:01:603 (4) - 1 grid right
01:37:166 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 1 grid left.
02:33:857 (1) - from here on everything 1 grid down.

[Hard]
00:29:209 (2) - Other circles before had a distance spacing lof 1,2. These circles have about 1,0.
01:27:659 (4) - 1 grid right + up
02:20:301 (2) - 1 grid right

Suggestion: How about making the circles one line bigger?

[Insane]
Some streams I would replace with fast sliders.
I'd give the AR one tick more, because this map is insane enough for something like this speed. If you do this put the HP one tick lower.

00:32:026 (2) - 1 grid right + up
00:39:244 (5) - 1 grid left + up
00:54:209 (17) - How about a finishsound? :3
01:26:603 (17) - New Combo - The maximum in the region of 23 is exceeded. If not, make more sliders.
02:07:800 (4) - Just a bit weird, but it's okay I think.
02:13:434 (5) - It kind of doesn't fit here with the music... i dunno... make a slider, maybe?
02:37:025 (1) - New Combo please. If not, make more sliders.

That's it. Star~!
Feed! xD

Thanks for all the mods.

I've applied the majority of them.

Mainly opinions, feel free to ignore them ^_^

General:

-- Maybe use some more normal hitsounds? =P

Kirby's Easy:

Looks good to me ^_^

Normal:

-- Overall Difficulty -1?

00:42:413 (1) - I think this looks messy so close to 00:41:885 (2) - maybe move it away a bit more?
01:37:871 (1,2,3,4) - Imo this looks better to directly to the left of 01:37:519 (3) -
02:07:800 (2) - This sounds weird, maybe remove the return and end it at 02:08:064?
02:13:434 (2) - ^ end at 02:13:698?
02:37:026 (7) - Add 2 more returns and delete 02:38:434 (8) - ?

Hard:

01:16:744 (1) - Add finish?
01:28:012 (1) - ^
01:35:758 (2) - Clap?
02:04:983 (2) - Remove a return since there's no beat at 02:05:159?
02:38:258 (x) - Add a beat?

Insane:

-- Slider tick rate 0.5?
-- Lots of stacking =P

00:50:335 (3,4) - Doesn't stack with 00:49:983 (1) - properly in game.
00:54:649 (x) - Add beat?
00:56:586 (7,8) - Doesn't stack with 00:56:234 (5) - properly in game.
01:28:011 (1) - Imo it's better to keep the same spacing as the stream instead of a mini jump ^^
02:04:631 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - The rhythm is a little strange here, try to keep to the drum beats or the synth? =S

Star!!!

Thanks, applied most

Time to get off my lazy add >.<

General
- IMO Would sound better without the countdown

Insane
keep the beat divisor 1/4. Everything is being placed on 1/4 beats
00:13:364 (7) Feels weird with a repeat slider here. Adding a timing section to make just the repeat audio lower would help. Example like you did at 00:28:681
01:51:955 (7)^same

Everything else is fine
Star Power

Weezy wrote:

Time to get off my lazy add >.<

General
- IMO Would sound better without the countdown

Insane
keep the beat divisor 1/4. Everything is being placed on 1/4 beats

Hii

Really don't like some of the long combos. Throughout the map u have around max 7 beats per combo but at times it just gets too long. Example at 00:52:800

00:13:364 (7) Feels weird with a repeat slider here. Adding a timing section to make just the repeat audio lower would help. Example like you did at 00:28:681
01:51:955 (7)^same

Everything else is fine
Star Power

Thanks, I'll do the changes later =p Didn't get to it today. Going to use most of your suggestions.

[Kirby's Easy]

HP -1
AR -1
OD -1

00:42:941 - Start the 1st kiai here (After the 'Let's Go' looks more cool xP)
00:45:054 (5) - Change for 2 beats stacked here ( 00:45:054 ) and here ( 00:45:406 ) ?
00:47:871 (5) - Change for 2 beats stacked here ( 00:47:871 ) and here ( 00:48:223 ) ?
01:05:124 - End the 1st kiai here
02:04:631 - Kiai? Remove?
02:15:899 - Start the 2nd kiai here
02:38:434 - End the 2nd kiai here

[Normal]

AR -1

Easy to read, a little plain, but the notes are in the right timing spot. God job.

[Hard]

HP -1
AR -1
OD -1

00:03:505 (1,2,3) - Stack them?
00:06:321 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]

Doesn't fit very well with the song, like the [Normal] and [Hard]. It's not crappy, but a little bit overmapped.If this is what you imagined, ok.

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Weird, it's not so annoying like others Nightcores. xP

Good job and Good luck.

Thanks, done most of the suggestions.