Kawawa wrote:

Helowalo SeiSei

[General]
※ Metadata
Artist :: 五条下位 & 仲村芽衣子
Romanised Artist :: Gojou Kai & Nakamura Meiko
SYNC.ART'S is not Romanised Name. You can put this in Tags.

Tags :: Remove this in tags "五条下位" "仲村芽衣子" It does not need to overlap with Artist.

Difficulties Name :: Standard → Normal.
mostly It kept the BMS difficulites name. Except "Standard"

※ Hitsounds / Background Image
Some Hitsouds are delayed. Change with this http://puu.sh/s9tvR/164a95216d.zip
Background Image 1366 x 768 here. Change with this http://puu.sh/s9tLj/36a19e10d6.jpg

Lack of Hitsound Quality.
I could see many mistake for hitsounds.(Surely, I felt as mistake than intention)
Some difficulties are missed about some hitsounds. Also lack of consistency with each other.
I think you can improved about it. Please check them once again.
When you do that. If you want to fix something(like Pattern), You can. All Up to you.

[Beginner]
00:23:181 (23181|0,23352|3) - This rhythm is kinda weird to Beginner. You can make better it.
00:23:095 - 00:23:438 - Follow the This rhythm. There is a vocal Sample with synth. It can feel easily than before. [I actually don't understand but even after reading the mod in Standard difficulty, I'll just chart it the same way as Standard]

00:34:238 - Remove a note here. Instead of that, Add here 00:34:924 - What do you think about? [Hmm, I'm fine with it i guess.]

01:00:467 (60467|0) - It's weird to me. even If there is a intention, I don't think this is necessary for the structure.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/s9qSV/282e3ee501.jpg [Followed your idea of how it should be.]

[Standard]
00:10:238 - 00:12:981 - This part too empty than Hyper. You can add some notes in this part.
Because note density really same with Beginner. [Charted it to drum crashes now.]

00:23:095 (23095|0,23352|3) - Same reason with Beginner. It kinda weird. You can make better it. Consider once again.[^}

01:11:781 (71781|3) - This vocal sample is ended here 01:12:981 - And It can feel surely.
What do you think about? I think It does not need to extend. All difficulties did like that.[Oops, didn't see that one, good catch!]

[Hyper]
00:39:895 (39895|3,39895|2,40067|3,40067|2) -
When I compared with "Standard", It needs to be re-arranged. Please consider thoes two.
Add note on Hyper or Nerf the Standard, You can anything. [Nerfed Standard.]

01:09:981 - Add a note for bass drum. This is a option. Your decision anyway
01:23:181 - Same with above. [Added both.]

[Another]
00:12:810 - 00:12:981 - Add a note. will be emphasized. You can compare with "Hyper"
or liek this http://puu.sh/s9siS/49cff1f649.jpg [Hmmm, added note.]

00:25:324 - 00:26:695 - 00:28:067 - 00:29:438 - 00:30:810 -
Here does not need to use as 3chords. Remove a note.
For example :: You can compare with crash line. like 00:23:952 - 00:32:181 -
or Can compare with them 00:36:295 - 00:37:667 - They are added any instrument. And I can feel about it.[Alright, removed.]

00:39:895 - ~ 00:40:410 - Feedback :: http://puu.sh/s9suO/f4a438e7ca.jpg [I want to keep it as it is, feels more relevant to music imo.]

01:10:752 (70752|1) - Remove this one. It will be helped for pattern sturucture.
And 01:10:924 - 01:11:438 - Add a note here. It will be make highlight than before. [Alright.]

01:22:238 - Remove a note. When I saw the around of pattern, It was not emphasized at all.
If you wanted to highlight as vocal sample, you can keep then [Ye it's vocal thing lmao.]

01:34:410 - ~ 01:35:267 - You can add some notes in this part. This is a suggestion. [Not adding any notes, sorry :c.]

02:00:038 - ~ 02:02:867 - Remove them.p esonally, I think it is not good.
If consider the structure, Ending is better to here 01:59:952 - Since highlight of the song, It will be end up with a better feeling.
If you applied this, should not use the LN on Beginner, Standard, Hyper.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/s9t3v/31541e18e7.jpg [Removed LN on all difficulties at the end.]

When Fixed them, Tell me

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Hey long time no see! And long time no see post mod lol
Sorry but I have to pop this first because I've found a unrankable issue and low quality of hitsounds. Don't worry I will re-bubble this after your fixing. Then you are able to take qualify icon by Kawawa. You smoothly can go qualify XD

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I think hitsound is on too lacking. You can add some W on kick sections. I'm highly recommend it. I will see how you have done after this mod. Please check once again your HS.
Also you can do with this one for consistency, File -> Open Difficulty -> For Reference -> Choose other difficulties that you want to refer.
but, Another is soso, how about just make same in all difficulty? [Copied all hitsounds from Another]

Looks like 000012345 hitsound is never used. Please delete this. Or if it's using, please tell me where you've used it. [Deleted it]
[Beginner]

00:16:924 - You can't use 1/4 pattern with 175 BPM in Easy difficulty. I'm sure it will be 100% get disqualify. Better to 00:17:010 (17010|2) - remove this note, could notice your intention but it's a one of disqualify issue. [Zenny said it was okay so yE]

00:49:838 - Also same reason, please fix this one [^]

00:50:010 - I think it will be better to be double, for emphasis the kick and finish of first part. [Added]

01:01:324 (61324|2,61667|2) - Just thinking it will be more better balance, Ctrl + H will be better [Ctrl + H'd the jumps]

01:19:838 (79838|1) - Move to 3, 01:18:810 (78810|0,79838|1) - they are on one hand, if you didn't intend about this pattern, better to use 2 hands. [Moved to 3]

01:35:267 (95267|3) - It must finished on 01:35:781 - here. Also as I said, 01:35:781 (95781|2,95867|1) - you can't use it.[Extended the LN, but kept the 1/4s due to same reasoning]

[Normal]

01:10:581 - Add one more note for consistency with 01:11:095 - 01:11:781 - these sections.[Removed one note instead so that it's easier than Hyper]

[Hyper]

00:23:095 - In here, Another difficulty doesn't have a note, I think you used it for a piano sound but I suggest to remove it. for consistency also this section is based on snares. [Removed]

Another is fine. Call me after updating!

• :ok hand:

Blocko wrote:

Confirming the issue here. 1/4th snaps should not be used in Easy difficulties at all cases.

Please address the issue along with the other suggestions accordingly!

Feerum wrote:

Hello Seiryuu!

Grats for qualify this beatmap but before this get's moved into the Ranked section i would like to discuss about some pattern.
It's something what Fresh Chicken did mention in his bubble pop post.

I would like to talk about the Beginner difficulty.

[Beginner]
The difficult is overall pretty solid. Nice beginner pattern but then i saw following:

00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2,17095|3) -
00:49:838 (49838|0,49924|1,50010|2,50010|3) -
01:35:781 (95781|2,95867|1,95952|0) -

These 3 1/4 Pattern.

I can't agree with them. Beginner/Easy difficulty's are for player which are not familiar with osu!mania or general VSRG games. They should stick with really beginner friendly pattern like 1/1 or rare 1/2 pattern with several breaks. I asked several friends which never/rarely touched osu!mania and 4 of 5 missed exactly these 1/4 pattern.

I know they may fit to the music but it doesn't fit to the difficulty overall.
The remaining Beatmap looks totally fine for me, it's just these 1/4 pattern.
Fresh Chicken's suggestion to remove the middle note of the 1/4 pattern is actually a good way to fix it

Okay and one more thing while i am here. I think your BG Quality is a bit.. poor. After 30 sec in google i found one which looks way more clear and in 1920x1080 (The new rankable size), you can find it here
And here you can see the difference: Left yours/ right the new one

Screen

Okay that's all from my side! Let me know what you think about it!

Maxus wrote:

I believe it's alright if it's a low bpm song.. It would be awkward to really ignore all 1/4 on song that have like 70 bpm or something like that..

juankristal wrote:

There are a lot of charts that have harder easy diffs than this (and by a lot actually, still getting qualified just because they dont have 3 notes 1/4s).

Draftnell wrote:

wew 1/4 pattern problem reason, comee on seiryuu i luv this map ><

SOMEONE GO ICON SECTION QUALIFY PLEASE !